thanks ReySHel.
updated
updated
No. I don't get it.Gezo wrote:
00:11:217 (8) - This slider is copypaste this 00:09:844 (5) - you could do the same pattern as they return to the same place is not played very well
your combocolor (3) and (4) are same..maybe dele one or change one?I'm not using custom combocolor so it's probably from your skin.
Let's go!Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better!
* → Just comments, not mods.
Naked Lines → Mods.
I know you answered to this before, but could you really consider adding an "Insane" diff again? If you don't want to make itNo.
yourself, can I make a GD instead?PLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLS
Ok :cnanda2009 wrote:
_(:з」∠)_ NO.
Looks fine, but maybe a 3/2 beat slider that begins in 00:55:530?imo the slider makes the map too hard for beginners.
Other than that are fixed. ThanksSetsurei wrote:
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some suggestions
[Easy]
00:05:530 (1) - easy slow response to spinner.. move slider here, 00:05:727 - and shorten to 00:08:472 -
01:25:922 (1) - ^ 01:26:118 (1) - and shorten to 01:27:687 -
[Normal]
00:11:609 (1) - slider tick hit sound seems legit, remove I don't think it's that confusing. But anyway, fixed.
[Hard]
CS 4 < I prefer this size better imo CS 5 is sexier and plays better imo. CS 5 is just too big. No.
seems I found only that
good luck for ranked! thanks.
240,320,16315,2,0,B|296:327|346:257|332:200|332:200|319:143|368:73|442:88,1,360,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:00:32:785 - add note
208,352,629,2,0,P|64:288|144:64,1,440,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,2981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,64,3766,2,0,P|448:288|304:352,1,440,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,112,24158,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,24942,2,0,B|307:192|307:192|320:224|360:248|408:240,2,165
80,216,26903,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,88,3374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,152,3766,6,0,B|384:176|424:152|424:152|464:128|512:152,2,180,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,88,5334,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,240,30040,6,0,B|464:272|456:304,2,60,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,208,30825,2,0,B|360:176|368:144,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,272,31609,2,0,B|304:304|296:336,1,60,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,304,32197,2,0,B|201:277|209:245,1,60,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,33178,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,144,84942,2,0,P|312:184|296:224,1,60
205,203,85530,2,0,P|200:184|200:144,1,60
256,192,85922,12,0,87687,0:0:0:0:
376,360,58667,1,2,0:2:0:0:
424,296,58864,1,2,0:2:0:0:
376,232,59060,1,8,0:0:0:0:
-kevincela- wrote:
Hey! It's been a long time since I have checked this mapset, and I guess it's time to recheck it!
[Easy][Normal]
- 00:00:629 (1,2,3) - This is actually a really little thing, nothing mayor: What about rearraging 00:03:766 (3) - to make it symmetrical with 00:00:629 (1) - ? It's a really little thing, though I think it flows really smoothly, as it totally continues 00:00:629 (1) - 's circular flow there! Here's what I have done here, see if you like it! Nice one. But, I guess it'll be better if I put (2) above 80,y. Better flow, imho. done.
SPOILER208,352,629,2,0,P|64:288|144:64,1,440,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,2981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,64,3766,2,0,P|448:288|304:352,1,440,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 00:24:158 (1,2,3) - Hmm... Why didn't you follow the vocals there? You had a pretty good chance of using a 3/2 repeated slider to follow them, making the whole rhythm there different, as you have done later. It isn't difficult at all to play and it follows quite better the song. To avoid ruining your pattern here, you could use a half-wave slider, like in this example I'm showing you now: It felt really weird when played.
SPOILER416,112,24158,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,24942,2,0,B|307:192|307:192|320:224|360:248|408:240,2,165
80,216,26903,1,0,0:0:0:0:- 00:30:432 (4) - I guess you have forgot a New Combo there? You have previously used it on 00:24:158 (1) - , and considering that there is a new vocal phrase starting here, adding a New Combo here would make totally sense Argh What an embarassing mistake.
- 00:54:942 (3) - I have a little idea there... Why don't you use a 1/2 slider, instead of just a note after a 3/2 space? It would make much more sense, considering that it follows exactly all the vocals there, plus it will finish nicely the whole pattern and it will make it easier to read as from 00:53:766 (2) to 00:54:942 (3) - there is just a 1/1 space. You could just use a linear 1/2 slider placed at x:480 y:152 to make it work correctly I thought it's too hard for beginners. And It's ugly when I put it as a slider, Just look at this sldier. Ugh that overlapping.
[Hard]
- 00:03:766 (4) - Not a big deal, though I'd see this slider better moved down and modified as a wave slider: it would follow quite nicely the descendent flow which starts at 00:03:374 (3) - , and it's quite good to play as well! Plus, it would be good to have a New Combo there as well, as there is a new vocal phrase which ends at 00:05:334 (2) - . Here's what I've done here in the end: see if you like it! Really neat imo. But I'll keep the symetry, on a different way :>
SPOILER264,88,3374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,152,3766,6,0,B|384:176|424:152|424:152|464:128|512:152,2,180,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,88,5334,1,2,0:0:0:0:- 00:09:256 - I cannot really see the reason why you are starting this part from a weak beat instead of a strong one, right after the spinner which ends on a strong beat as well. I would actually add a note here to compensate this, starting the whole pattern 1/1 before is a better option than the actual pattern imho! You could add the note at x:336 y:272 to fix that! I thought the strong beat is at 00:09:648. And It felt weird when I put the start at 00:09:256
- 00:26:903 (4) - I guess you forgot a clap here? You have put them in almost all the "strong" parts apart from here, so I guess you should add one here as well to keep the consistency! :p Ugh another embarassing mistake orz
- 00:30:040 (1,2,3,4) - I guess I understand what you are trying to do that, though it seems rather forced and it doesen't really flow that smooth... You should instead try to tweak this pattern using a different one, maybe for example you could make various opposite sliders to continue the flow here, as they really go smooth here! Here's what I have done, again: see if you like it! Hmm. Sexy and neat. Done with a bit of tweak.
SPOILER456,240,30040,6,0,B|464:272|456:304,2,60,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,208,30825,2,0,B|360:176|368:144,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,272,31609,2,0,B|304:304|296:336,1,60,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,304,32197,2,0,B|201:277|209:245,1,60,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,33178,1,2,0:0:0:0:- 01:24:942 (2,3) - One last thing here: seeing how 01:22:981 (1) - goes, wouldn't it be better if you structued the patterns vertically instead of horizontally? It could be a little thing, though it follows 01:22:981 (1) - 's oval flow really better, giving a nice finish to the pattern and the song. Here's an example I've made for you: The current one plays better imo.
SPOILER312,144,84942,2,0,P|312:184|296:224,1,60
205,203,85530,2,0,P|200:184|200:144,1,60
256,192,85922,12,0,87687,0:0:0:0:And that's all! I hope I have been helpful, and call me back once you have finished modding! ok
- Huh... HP Drain Rate 10? o.O It is really too much for an Hard diff, even for an Insane one! Please, consider lowering it by at least 2~3 ticks, it really makes no sense having such an high HDR as now. Yet another embarassing mistake orz
- 00:58:667 (5,6,7) - Just a liiiiiiitle thing here: What about rearraging the pattern to make it a triangular one, instead of a linear one? By placing it correctly, you could have a really nice pattern, avoiding the overlap with 00:57:491 (4) - 's end and following really good 00:57:491 (4) - 's oval flow to 00:59:452 (1) - , so I definitely think it's worth a try. Here's what I have done here: see if you like it! Sexy <3 I love it. instantly fixed
SPOILER376,360,58667,1,2,0:2:0:0:
424,296,58864,1,2,0:2:0:0:
376,232,59060,1,8,0:0:0:0:- 01:11:216 (4,5,6) - Remember that the same applies for this pattern! Of course.
As before, this is a really awesome and clean diff, nice work there once again! Thanks :3