Hi~
M4M >_< sor for being late
good luck~'w'/
M4M >_< sor for being late
[overall]
your combocolor (3) and (4) are same..maybe dele one or change one?
[Hard]
00:11:217 (8,1) - change nc..cuz 00:09:844 (5) - and 00:11:217 (8) - are stack ><
00:19:060 - maybe add note here cuz feel little empty here..
^if you do and don't forget fix 00:19:256 (1) - snap~
00:45:530 - same as above, add a note?
00:42:981 (1) - snap too far
00:45:727 (7,1) - 0.8x>1.0x ?
00:52:001 (6) - and 00:48:864 (8) - make them same?(note or slider~
00:56:511 - you can add a note here (empty in kiai time~)
01:01:216 - ^
01:03:962 - ^ (has vocal here o_o x184/y152
01:04:746 (6) - dele this if you do as i say above~
01:09:256 (1) - vocal start in 01:09:452 - ..maybe chage other way~
01:11:020 - empty ..note here?
01:13:765 - ^
01:16:511 - ^
01:17:295 (6) - dele
01:20:628 (1) - dele nc
01:23:177 - note here~
01:24:354 - empty here imo..
[Normal]
00:02:197 (2) - more curve with 00:00:628 (1) -
00:05:727 (1) - spin end in 00:08:079 - and rhythm start in 00:08:472 - ? cuz really strange you do now imo..
00:18:864 - miss a note ><
00:19:256 (1,2) - dele (2).. and slider end 00:20:040 - ?
00:23:766 (5) - x416/224 and 00:24:550 (1) - x320/248
00:33:570 (1) - change to http://puu.sh/21PmF ?
00:34:746 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/21PnP
00:39:844 (1) - end in white line plz http://puu.sh/21PpG
01:03:177 (1) - D: note in 01:02:981 - slider start in 01:03:373 - ?
01:24:942 (2,3) - change to just one slider
some rhythm you put...(slider end in red line)isn't very good cuz normal diff ><
it will a little hard for newbie :V
[Easy]
00:31:217 (5) - put this start back to 00:32:001 - ,and add a note 00:31:217 - (Consistent with you do in 00:24:158 (1,2,3,4) - )
00:45:727 - note here or 00:45:334 (3) - change to slider
00:52:393 (1) - more curve with 00:50:825 (3) - 's head
00:54:942 (4,5) - umm...don't do this it's hard for easy...or, change to slider maybe?
01:06:903 - miss a note
sorry about my poor english orzyour combocolor (3) and (4) are same..maybe dele one or change one?
[Hard]
00:11:217 (8,1) - change nc..cuz 00:09:844 (5) - and 00:11:217 (8) - are stack ><
00:19:060 - maybe add note here cuz feel little empty here..
^if you do and don't forget fix 00:19:256 (1) - snap~
00:45:530 - same as above, add a note?
00:42:981 (1) - snap too far
00:45:727 (7,1) - 0.8x>1.0x ?
00:52:001 (6) - and 00:48:864 (8) - make them same?(note or slider~
00:56:511 - you can add a note here (empty in kiai time~)
01:01:216 - ^
01:03:962 - ^ (has vocal here o_o x184/y152
01:04:746 (6) - dele this if you do as i say above~
01:09:256 (1) - vocal start in 01:09:452 - ..maybe chage other way~
01:11:020 - empty ..note here?
01:13:765 - ^
01:16:511 - ^
01:17:295 (6) - dele
01:20:628 (1) - dele nc
01:23:177 - note here~
01:24:354 - empty here imo..
[Normal]
00:02:197 (2) - more curve with 00:00:628 (1) -
00:05:727 (1) - spin end in 00:08:079 - and rhythm start in 00:08:472 - ? cuz really strange you do now imo..
00:18:864 - miss a note ><
00:19:256 (1,2) - dele (2).. and slider end 00:20:040 - ?
00:23:766 (5) - x416/224 and 00:24:550 (1) - x320/248
00:33:570 (1) - change to http://puu.sh/21PmF ?
00:34:746 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/21PnP
00:39:844 (1) - end in white line plz http://puu.sh/21PpG
01:03:177 (1) - D: note in 01:02:981 - slider start in 01:03:373 - ?
01:24:942 (2,3) - change to just one slider
some rhythm you put...(slider end in red line)isn't very good cuz normal diff ><
it will a little hard for newbie :V
[Easy]
00:31:217 (5) - put this start back to 00:32:001 - ,and add a note 00:31:217 - (Consistent with you do in 00:24:158 (1,2,3,4) - )
00:45:727 - note here or 00:45:334 (3) - change to slider
00:52:393 (1) - more curve with 00:50:825 (3) - 's head
00:54:942 (4,5) - umm...don't do this it's hard for easy...or, change to slider maybe?
01:06:903 - miss a note
good luck~'w'/