1. GG's Easy (2.25 stars, 206 notes)
2. Hard (4.72 stars, 382 notes)
3. Insane Collab (4.83 stars, 420 notes)
4. Normal (2.8 stars, 239 notes)

by Gloria Guard
by me
by me
Collab by me and Serphin

re-download if you download this map before 9th January 2014 (00:45 +10 GMT)

Changelog:
24/04/2013 - change the mp3 bit rate
15/05/2013 - re-snap grid lv 4 (normal & hard)
25/05/2013 - change BPM from 123.78 to 123.75, offset from 2986 to 1046, SB, snap timing kiai
02/06/2013 - re-map Normal diff
04/06/2013 - remove TAG2 from mapset, inherits all hitsounds from Easy to Hard diff
14/06/2013 - SB modified
20/06/2013 - change the mp3 bit rate (again)
24/06/2013 - add collab diff + collab names .png
25/06/2013 - SB modified, add GG's Easy
03/07/2013 - SB modified
06/01/2014 - Collab name change to Insane Collab
09/01/2014 - mp3 bitrate change from 179 to 192

XeVary wrote:

hi
Play report
on hard
00:49:519 (6) - 02:53:368 (9) - It is hard to take the rhythm distance is far XD
02:34:221 (4) - 02:35:191 (6) - I feel that rhythm is not correct to
Break midpoint long XD
Slider speed of the beginning is hard to play at the earliest.Down the slider speed or Try to AR8
You may want to fine adjustment and the offset
Please do your best

00:49:519 (6) - 02:53:368 (9) - near distance
02:34:221 (4) - 02:35:191 (6) - fixed
prefer AR8 - changed
about the offset / bpm stuff, I'm not good at it so I need other people to mod it "'º|¯|_

thanks for mod

• - 00:25:041 (2,3) - put the end of slider at x=192 y=144, better blanket
  - Cirlce like this 00:29:403 (4) - or 00:31:100 (1) - try Try don't put them on slider that will be better
  - 00:48:065 (3,4) - little distance snap
  - 01:01:638 (4,5,6,7) - same here
  - 01:33:145 (3,4) - try to make same shape
  - 01:40:416 (1) - start the spinner 1/2 later, and add a circle at the precedent beginning of spinner
  - 02:09:985 (7,8) - align them
  - 02:32:282 (5) - rework your blanket
  - 02:34:221 (7) - ^
  - 03:08:880 (4,5,6,7) - distance snap
  - 03:19:301 (2,4) - don't stack them
  - 03:31:177 (1) - start the spinner 1/2 later, and add a circle at the precedent beginning of spinner

• - 00:26:495 (5) - delete this one and add a circle at 00:26:010 - it follow the voice
  - 00:32:069 (5) - center him
  - 00:44:672 (4,5,6) - or 00:53:397 (1,2,3) - or 00:58:729 (3,4,5) - (and lot of others) why not the same spacing ?
  - 01:34:115 (4,5,6,7,8) - follow the voice
  - 01:39:932 (5) - center
  - 01:42:598 - you can add a circle
  - 02:17:499 (3) - replace
  - 02:23:315 (2) - ^
  - 02:29:859 (2,4) - make the same shame, it will be better
  - 02:34:464 (5) - remake your blanket

-Umi- wrote:

hi hi o/

somes suggestions
Try to use a highter distance spacing and use gride size: tiny, if you don't already use it and verify your offset, i think he is wrong

[Normal]

• - 00:25:041 (2,3) - put the end of slider at x=192 y=144, better blanket
  - Cirlce like this 00:29:403 (4) - or 00:31:100 (1) - try Try don't put them on slider that will be better
  - 00:48:065 (3,4) - little distance snap
  - 01:01:638 (4,5,6,7) - same here
  - 01:33:145 (3,4) - try to make same shape
  - 01:40:416 (1) - start the spinner 1/2 later, and add a circle at the precedent beginning of spinner
  - 02:09:985 (7,8) - align them
  - 02:32:282 (5) - rework your blanket
  - 02:34:221 (7) - ^
  - 03:08:880 (4,5,6,7) - distance snap
  - 03:19:301 (2,4) - don't stack them
  - 03:31:177 (1) - start the spinner 1/2 later, and add a circle at the precedent beginning of spinner

[Hard]

• - 00:26:495 (5) - delete this one and add a circle at 00:26:010 - it follow the voice
  - 00:32:069 (5) - center him
  - 00:44:672 (4,5,6) - or 00:53:397 (1,2,3) - or 00:58:729 (3,4,5) - (and lot of others) why not the same spacing ?
  - 01:34:115 (4,5,6,7,8) - follow the voice
  - 01:39:932 (5) - center
  - 01:42:598 - you can add a circle
  - 02:17:499 (3) - replace
  - 02:23:315 (2) - ^
  - 02:29:859 (2,4) - make the same shame, it will be better
  - 02:34:464 (5) - remake your blanket

well that's all, sorry about the TAG2 i don't realy know how it works and good luck for the continuation o/

Normal

Hard

Thanks for mod

P A N wrote:

hi from #modreqs

[General]

I Like your storyboard. good job :3

[Normal]

use the same speed slide of 00:35:947 on the beginning(start) please. that kind of speed is hard for beginner
00:18:012 - I recommend to use this rhymth. http://puu.sh/2QoPW.jpg and u can add finish at (4's) tail too. and u can change tripple note to just 1 slider repeat too
00:29:646 (5) - don't make it lap with (4). its not beautiful imo. :/
00:32:554 (1) - delete the note at 00:34:008 (1) and make this spinner end at 00:34:008 and add finish because the beginner can't stop spin well. they may miss the note after spinner that fast

I think your normal is very hard for beginner. try change 3 note to 1 long slide of repeat slide. example, 00:56:548 too hard :/
01:03:092 (2) - fix this spacing
01:06:970 (3,4,5) - try this pattern http://puu.sh/2QoZB.jpg it can make your map more interesting

128,256,51458,2,0,P|208:304|320:256,1,210.000008010865
368,224,52913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,53397,2,4,P|350:58|248:46,1,210.000008010865

01:14:726 (2,3,4) - fix it same as 01:06:970
01:20:300 (8,1,2,3) - so hard :/ maybe fix it same as 00:56:548
01:39:689 (7,8,9,10) - I not recommend to stack this.

well.. im tired to point it out. if you find a mistake u can fix like above mod.

[TAG2]

00:57:275 (1) - Ctrl+G this would be nice
01:20:542 (1,1,1) - add finish? for enjoy to play (add both head and tail for slider)
01:22:966 (1) - put tripple note or repeat slider instead and add finish to all of them.
01:24:420 (1) - add finish on head
01:25:874 (1) - add finish on tail
and u has so many note that have to add finish but u not 0.0 try find and fix them.
good diff

[Hard]

maybe use grid lv3?
fix distance some note
well.. im tired. sry

Good Luck. I like this song too

[General]

"I Like your storyboard. good job :3" - Thank you

[Hard]

Grid Lv 3
fixed distance note
re-arrange, tidier notes
"well.. im tired. sry " - lol I can understand that

P A N wrote:

oops, other thing

change preview point to 01:23:693 please

no kudosu please thanks

fixed, thanks

Keiko Minamoto wrote:

Hey Setsu...nice map

Normal's perfect (in my opinion...)

Hard difficulty has too many gaps in some places:-
00:19:916 -
00:23:561 -
01:31:601 -
01:45:019 - ---> that's one huge break after the spinner! o.o

03:02:909 - ---> you've put a circle here which fills the gap...better if u do it in the first 3 gaps mentioned above...

Thnx for giving me a chance to mod ^_^
Hope I helped somehow...

P.S - This is my first mod...I'm a newbie ._.

yay, imouto first mod! \owo/
in the future you should mod my other maps lol jk

[Hard]
00:19:955 - unchanged
00:23:591 (8,9,10) - changed to triple 1/2 circles
01:31:470 (8,9,10) - ^ (actually I want to put streams 1/4 here but it will look ugly)
01:45:019 - no change, let the player take a break

thanks for mod

1. 00:26:742 (6,7,8) how about change the colour of the beat?
2. 02:40:076 how about make it like this?
   example

   

   340,144,160076,2,8,L|448:72,2,100
   340,144,160803,1,0,0:0:0:0:

1. CS & AC +1
2. 01:38:500 (1,2) - 01:38:985 (1,2) - 02:36:682 (1,2,3) - 02:37:409 (1,2,3) - 03:05:530 - until 03:06:258 how about make it a jump?

-Bakari- wrote:

IRC

17:11 Setsurei: done
17:11 -Bakari-: nice :3
17:12 -Bakari-: how about an IRC mod? :3
17:12 Setsurei: ok
17:13 -Bakari-: Ok, let's start with [general]
17:14 -Bakari-: You may need some more tags
17:14 -Bakari-: for example: Case Closed
17:15 -Bakari-: ost (short from Original SoundTrack) and probably TMS (studio name)
17:16 Setsurei: done
17:17 -Bakari-: Oh, and try to use Slider Tick Rate 2 
17:17 -Bakari-: sounds like it fits with music better
17:21 -Bakari-: now [Normal]
17:23 -Bakari-: You don't need to change Slider Velocity Multiplier ;_;
17:23 Setsurei: oh ok
17:23 Setsurei: so just change from F3?
17:23 -Bakari-: Just change Slider Velocity [http://puu.sh/385QC.jpg here] to 1.05
17:24 -Bakari-: and set multiplier to x1,00
17:24 -Bakari-: it'll be more.. more rankable, i guess :D
17:28 Setsurei: is slider velocity of 1.05 rankable?
17:28 -Bakari-: Why not? 
17:28 Setsurei: ok
17:29 -Bakari-: note: hold control to reduce/increase velocity by 0.01 instead of 0.1
17:30 Setsurei: I'm done doing that, that's why I ask is it rankable or not XD
17:30 -Bakari-: then, let's go check combos and rhythm :3
17:32 -Bakari-: 00:42:743 (1,1,1) - three NC in a row may confuse beginners. How about removing second new combo?
17:36 -Bakari-:  00:46:379 - and maybe you should place a circle here? But that will make thythm here too hard.
17:37 -Bakari-: Maybe, if you'll use more sliders here - this part will be more beginner-friendly? [http://puu.sh/3868P.jpg like this]
17:43 -Bakari-: 00:45:894 (4) - have you missed a circle here? Feels like it is missed here
17:43 -Bakari-: let me know if i'm too slow or too fast. 
17:43 Setsurei: yes
17:44 -Bakari-: when there're no vocals you're following background music (axample 01:04:076 (3) -)
17:44 Setsurei: if I'm confused I'll directly ask you, if no it means I understood
17:45 -Bakari-: ok. just write something from time to time, so i won't get auto-silince for spamming :)
17:45 Setsurei: lol ok
17:45 -Bakari-: 00:19:955 - just to keep consistent rhythm, place a circle here. There're no vocals, but it'll fit with background music
17:46 -Bakari-: mixing vocals and music a bit will make map even more enjoyable
17:48 Setsurei: put hitsound too?
17:48 -Bakari-: i guess clap hitsound will fit 
17:48 -Bakari-: 00:27:712 - same as above :)
17:52 Setsurei: with clap too?
17:52 -Bakari-: yes
17:53 -Bakari-: 00:37:410 (3) - sounds kinda loud. In fact, you don't need to hitsound WHOLE slider. You can hitsound just a part of it 
17:53 -Bakari-: head/tail..
17:53 Setsurei: ok
17:54 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/386wr.jpg - only reverse of that slider needs finish
17:54 -Bakari-: + head and tail need clap 
17:54 Setsurei: done
17:55 -Bakari-: 00:58:258 - note for vocals? 
17:57 Setsurei: NC there or just let it be (5)?
17:58 -Bakari-: 01:01:652 (4,1) - here vocals go kinda tricky. to follow them, you can try to curve your slider a bit and put note at 01:02:864 - 
17:58 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/386Cj.jpg 
18:00 Setsurei: I'll variate the slider
18:01 -Bakari-: 01:05:530 - i guess you already know what to do here. Circle + Clap
18:04 -Bakari-: 01:12:804 (5) - same as already mentioned. 
18:04 Setsurei: ok
18:08 -Bakari-: 01:19:107 (3) -  :)
18:08 Setsurei: done
18:08 -Bakari-: 01:23:470 (4) - 
18:08 Setsurei: ^ ?
18:09 -Bakari-: no need to keep that finish sound on its head
18:09 Setsurei: oh ok
18:10 -Bakari-: 01:29:531 (4) - i'd place a single circle with clap hitsound at 01:29:773 - instead
18:10 -Bakari-: 01:31:712 - same. single circle, clap hitsound 
18:11 Setsurei: done
18:12 -Bakari-: 01:35:591 - circle, clap. 
18:12 -Bakari-: 01:34:137 (4) - only reverse here needs clap 
18:14 -Bakari-: 01:40:682 (1) - you can put finish on that spinner
18:14 Setsurei: done
18:14 -Bakari-: 01:40:682 (1) - same. Circle, clap. 
18:15 Setsurei: slider move backwards?
18:15 -Bakari-: oh wait ;_;
18:15 Setsurei: hahaha
18:15 -Bakari-: 02:13:409 - circle, clap*
18:17 Setsurei: done
18:17 -Bakari-: 02:14:864 (3,4,5) - (3) is a bit overlapped with (2) and the whole pattern doesn't look so good. How about replacing (4) with a circle 
18:18 -Bakari-: [http://puu.sh/3873y.jpg example + visual improvements]
18:18 Setsurei: circle in the white tick?
18:18 Setsurei: ok
18:18 Setsurei: clap?
18:18 -Bakari-: yes 
18:19 -Bakari-: exactly. Circle, clap. 
18:20 -Bakari-: 02:21:167 - circle, clap. 
18:20 -Bakari-: I bet you'll hate me for that "circle, clap" modding ._.
18:20 Setsurei: lol
18:20 Setsurei: no problem with me, I'm not good in hitsounds
18:22 -Bakari-: 02:35:712 - 1/1 slider with repeat maybe? http://puu.sh/3879v.jpg
18:23 -Bakari-: It'd be weird to have that empty space here. A specially now, when we've fixed half of the diff :D
18:24 Setsurei: 02:35:712 (5) - after this beat I should stack everything right?
18:24 -Bakari-: you don't have to do it, but you can try
18:25 Setsurei: done
18:25 -Bakari-: 02:43:955 (3) - head - finish / tail - clap 
18:26 Setsurei: done
18:26 -Bakari-: well.. there were a java script, to do this kind of hitsounding faster. unfortunately, it doesn't work anymore :<
18:26 Setsurei: haha
18:26 -Bakari-: 02:47:834 (5) - head - finish / reverse - clap / tail - nothing 
18:27 -Bakari-: it's better to use something simple, if you're not pro. Later you'll get some more experience and you will understand hitsounding better :)
18:28 Setsurei: haha yeah
18:32 -Bakari-: 03:11:591 (1) - how about finish here?
18:33 -Bakari-: 03:16:925 (3) - head/tail don't need clap. What's more you'd better reshape this slider to keep shape more understandable, I think. [http://puu.sh/387tD.jpg example]
18:34 Setsurei: [puu.sh/387vR.jpg is this ok?]
18:34 Setsurei: oops
18:34 Setsurei: [http://puu.sh/387vR.jpg is this ok?]
18:35 -Bakari-: yes :)
18:36 -Bakari-: 03:23:470 (2,3) - this is still the easiest diff, you shouldn't place (3) too close because beginners might mistakenly click it
18:36 -Bakari-: try to keep it [http://puu.sh/387yq.jpg straight?]
18:37 Setsurei: http://puu.sh/387yT.jpg
18:39 -Bakari-: That puush could not be found.
18:39 Setsurei: o3o http://puu.sh/387Di.jpg
18:40 Setsurei: I thought you've seen it so I deleted it
18:40 -Bakari-: yea, looks good
18:40 -Bakari-: I'm a bit slow ~.~
18:40 Setsurei: it's ok 
18:41 -Bakari-: 03:30:258 (2,3,4,5,1) - overlappy and messy. It'd be ok in 2010, but nowadays modders are kinda too picky about overlaps ~.~/
18:42 Setsurei: http://puu.sh/387GX.jpg
18:43 -Bakari-: looks cute
18:44 -Bakari-: Now we'd have to do the same for [Hard]
18:44 -Bakari-: but 
18:44 -Bakari-: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/131540
18:44 -Bakari-: save changes in normal. Remove all hitsounds from hard. Open that thing. ??? enjoy
18:44 Setsurei: ok
18:47 -Bakari-: done? :)
18:49 Setsurei: done
18:49 -Bakari-: nice
18:49 -Bakari-: let me check that..WHOA
18:50 -Bakari-: Don't you think that sliders are too fast? o3o feels more like [Insane] with low AR
18:50 Setsurei: hmm
18:50 Setsurei: multiplier reduce?
18:50 Setsurei: it's 1.5x
18:51 -Bakari-: Well.
18:51 -Bakari-: Yea
18:51 -Bakari-: 1.00 and 0.75 will work better, I think
18:51 Setsurei: ok
18:51 -Bakari-: but it'll require A LOT of work
18:52 -Bakari-: making sliders shorter and fixing spacing ._.
18:52 -Bakari-: sorry about that :<
18:52 Setsurei: i know
18:52 Setsurei: hahaha
18:52 Setsurei: nevermind
18:53 -Bakari-: oh, and maybe AR8 
18:53 -Bakari-: you know, AR should fit with velocity
18:53 Setsurei: done
18:54 -Bakari-: and if you've followed music and vocals in [Normal] diff, do the same here? 
18:54 -Bakari-: 00:19:955 - you know. circles, a lot of cicles and sliders should be placed :D
18:55 Setsurei: yes
18:56 -Bakari-:  00:26:743 (6) - and please, I'm begging you, avoid awkward spacing changes like this one
18:56 Setsurei: btw I'll fix the spacing and position on the sliders and circles, so will you mod after I updated this?
18:57 -Bakari-: Sure
18:57 Setsurei: ok, I'll tell you when I'm done :3
18:57 -Bakari-: I'll just recheck placement and flow. We've done hitsounding already :3
18:58 -Bakari-: If I'll be asleep - send me a forum PM!
19:27 -Bakari-: [hard]
19:27 -Bakari-: 00:19:227 - note for vocals? feels empty here
19:28 Setsurei: done
19:28 Setsurei: 00:19:955 (11) - added too < from your mod before I update
19:29 -Bakari-: and since numbers on circles are >11 try to place NCs more often? 
19:29 Setsurei: ok
19:29 -Bakari-: every big white line, i guess
19:30 Setsurei: 00:15:833 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ?
19:30 Setsurei: if I put on 3, it's weird
19:31 -Bakari-: on (8)?
19:31 Setsurei: ok
19:31 Setsurei: 00:15:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 
19:32 -Bakari-: 00:20:197 - note for vocals? :V
19:33 Setsurei: done
19:34 -Bakari-: Maybe we should try Circle Size 4
19:34 -Bakari-: looks more suitable for [Hard]
19:34 Setsurei: done
19:36 -Bakari-: 00:26:258 (5) - 3/4 slider here? [http://puu.sh/38943.jpg example]
19:37 Setsurei: done
19:37 -Bakari-: 00:30:864 - more, More, MORE circles! 
19:37 -Bakari-: 00:32:318 - ._. ^
19:38 Setsurei: NC on 00:30:864 (4) - ?
19:38 -Bakari-: yea
19:39 -Bakari-:   00:34:136 - now think about HP Drain here and try to play it o3o/
19:42 Setsurei: a break?
19:42 -Bakari-: a break or some objects. Something that won't let us die there :D
19:44 -Bakari-: well.. It'd be great if you'll fill breaks like this 00:42:258 
19:45 Setsurei: done
19:45 Setsurei: clap?
19:46 -Bakari-:  i guess so
19:47 -Bakari-: 01:10:136 (1) - secod reverse-arrow appears too soon and players have no time to read it
19:47 -Bakari-: what's more, it is very uncommon to have this kind of sliders 
19:48 Setsurei: so remove 1 reverse?
19:49 -Bakari-: yea, and replace it with circle. If you see similar sliders - do the same!
19:49 Setsurei: ok
19:49 -Bakari-: 01:12:076 - circle maybe? ~.~ it'll fit with vocals pretty good
19:51 -Bakari-: 01:15:955 (4) - please, start this slider at White tick. [http://puu.sh/389vz.jpg example]
19:52 -Bakari-: it will fit with vocals much better, i think
19:52 Setsurei: ok
19:53 -Bakari-: 01:24:197 - have you missed something? maybe a circle?
19:53 -Bakari-: you know why? vocals go faster here. 
19:56 Setsurei: done
19:56 -Bakari-: 01:35:591 - circle, clap. (OH NO THAT CIRCLECLAP MODDING AGAIN)
19:57 Setsurei: lol
19:58 -Bakari-: 02:08:803 - 02:10:742 - 02:12:682 -  and so on. place some circles? 
19:58 -Bakari-: earlier you had almost non-stop 1/2 rhythm. And here, suddenly rhythm becomes much easier for no actual reason
19:58 -Bakari-: let's keep it consistent!
19:59 Setsurei: 02:12:682 (5) - it's there already
20:00 -Bakari-: but there're two red empty ticks around :)
20:00 Setsurei: oh
20:01 Setsurei: 02:10:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - new combo?
20:02 -Bakari-: 02:12:924 - NC here? 
20:02 Setsurei: done
20:04 -Bakari-: 02:13:652 - have you placed some circles there and on following red ticks?
20:05 Setsurei: yes
20:05 Setsurei: http://puu.sh/389Rz.jpg
20:05 -Bakari-: sweet :3
20:07 -Bakari-: 02:38:136 (1) - just fix that rhythm here and we're done!
20:08 Setsurei: I forgot that part after changing the multiplier
20:09 -Bakari-: uh..
20:09 Setsurei: this too ? 02:40:076 (5) - 
20:09 -Bakari-: yea 

Mostly hitsounding suggestions. But we've also checked flow/rhythm and general rankability.

Kasuga wrote:

nice map
here's my suggestion
[Hard]

1. 00:26:742 (6,7,8) how about change the colour of the beat?
2. 02:40:076 how about make it like this?
   example

   

   340,144,160076,2,8,L|448:72,2,100
   340,144,160803,1,0,0:0:0:0:

[TAG2]

1. CS & AC +1
2. 01:38:500 (1,2) - 01:38:985 (1,2) - 02:36:682 (1,2,3) - 02:37:409 (1,2,3) - 03:05:530 - until 03:06:258 how about make it a jump?

sorry for my poor mod

Oyatsu wrote:

hi, from my modding queue,
But IRC mod

SPOILER

16:28 Oyatsu: hi
16:29 Setsurei: hello
16:29 Oyatsu: sorry I'm busy with my GD
16:29 Oyatsu: now IRC ok?
16:29 Setsurei: not forum?
16:29 Oyatsu: i'm lazy
16:29 Oyatsu: @@
16:29 Setsurei: lol
16:29 Setsurei: ok
16:29 Oyatsu: ok
16:30 Oyatsu: easy plz
16:30 *Oyatsu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/227361 Kajiura Yuki - The relief [Easy]]
16:30 Setsurei: eh, what I request is different
16:30 Oyatsu: ??
16:30 Oyatsu: what?
16:30 Oyatsu: so
16:30 Oyatsu: let /np me
16:31 Oyatsu: let give me map you need mod
16:31 Setsurei: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2326946/
16:32 Oyatsu: wait
16:32 Oyatsu: i'm dowing
16:33 Oyatsu: ok
16:33 Oyatsu: easy
16:33 Oyatsu: normal*
16:34 Oyatsu: ??
16:34 *Oyatsu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/243320 Miho Komatsu - Koori no Ue ni Tatsu You ni [Normal]]
16:35 *Setsurei is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/243320 Miho Komatsu - Koori no Ue ni Tatsu You ni [Normal]]
16:35 Oyatsu: ok
16:35 Oyatsu: 00:18:016 (4) - ugly pattem
16:36 Oyatsu: 00:22:379 (2) - too curved
16:37 Oyatsu: 00:29:409 - should delete circle because vocal
16:37 Oyatsu: ok?
16:37 Setsurei: yes, go on
16:38 Oyatsu: please say slowly if i mod too fast
16:38 Setsurei: ok
16:38 Oyatsu: 00:41:531 (2,3) - let move them into other place because so that is difiicult for normal
16:39 Oyatsu: 00:50:500 (1) - Curved into right will better
16:40 Setsurei: ^ left
16:41 Oyatsu: ??
16:41 Setsurei: flip?
16:41 Setsurei: i mean horizontal flip
16:41 Oyatsu: yes
16:41 Oyatsu: 01:22:500 (2) - grid right and down alittle will better
16:42 Oyatsu: 01:30:258 (1) - NC
16:42 Oyatsu: 01:40:197 (4,5) - slider better
16:42 Setsurei: 01:22:500 (2) - 228 244?
16:43 Oyatsu: 01:22:500 (2) - 212/256
16:44 Oyatsu: 02:18:258 (1) - other place
16:44 Setsurei: done
16:44 Oyatsu: 02:26:500 (3) - grid alitlle down
16:46 Oyatsu: 03:30:743 (4,5) - slider
16:48 Oyatsu: ok?
16:48 Setsurei: done
16:48 Setsurei: go on, if i stop you means I'm not finish
16:49 Oyatsu: ok
16:49 Oyatsu: hard,plz
16:49 *Oyatsu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/243320 Miho Komatsu - Koori no Ue ni Tatsu You ni]
16:49 *Setsurei is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/243319 Miho Komatsu - Koori no Ue ni Tatsu You ni [Hard]]
16:49 Oyatsu: 00:22:379 (7) - NC
16:50 Oyatsu: 00:51:470 (2) - ^
16:51 Oyatsu: 00:55:349 (5) - ^
16:51 Oyatsu: 01:30:258 (7) - ^
16:52 Oyatsu: 02:14:864 (6) - NC here and remove NC at 02:16:803 (1) - 
16:53 Oyatsu: 02:52:682 (8) - NC
16:54 Oyatsu: ok
16:54 Oyatsu: only so, 
16:54 Oyatsu: Good luck!
16:54 Setsurei: ok, post on thread I'll give kudos

change everything except:
[Normal]
03:30:743 (4,5) -


thanks for mod

1. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps

1. 00:15:833(x)add a note here？
2. 00:19:227(2)i think remove this circle may better to me,since there are no vocal
3. 00:23:349(2)remove clap
4. 00:48:076(2)x:234 y:132
5. 01:01:652(4)this slider can start at 01:01:894
6. 02:16:803(5)stack it under the 02:14:864(3)'s head and fix the distance of the follow note
7. 02:45:894(3)finish
8. 02:46:864(3)remove finish

1. 00:18:015(1)remove finish
2. 00:32:318(1)remove this circle and let the spin start at this point
3. 00:53:409(1)clap
4. 01:15:712(3,4)if you really wanna use this ds,add a nc at 4
5. 02:30:621(3,5)x:291 y:179
6. 03:11:591(1)spin start at 03:11:349
7. 03:16:439(8,9)try this rhythm?
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8. 03:30:985(1)same as above
9. 03:32:439(1)finish

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Setsurei wrote:

03:31:228 (1) - wait, this timing isn't right, to which part?

Setsurei wrote:

00:34:136 - I'm afraid of the draining here