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indyinyou

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indyinyou 2013-05-05T05:17:57+00:00

xD

[Easy]
ช่วงเริ่มเพลงตั้งแต่ 00:00:824 - 00:04:824 รู้สึกว่าเสียงสไลติกมันเบากว่าเสียงตบมือที่ใส่แยกตั้งห่าง (ลองเพิ่มเสียงที่ใส่สไลติกสัก 5-8 %)

[Normal]
เรื่องเสียงสไลติกเหมือนของดิฟeasy
00:58:424 : try add spin to 01:00:024 (ถ้าไม่ใช้สปินก้ลบเสียงตบมือในสไลติกออก ตรงนี้ไม่ต้องใช้ ใส่เสียงแค่ 15 %)

[Insane]

00:29:624 : สไลเดอร์ลงเส้นแดงดีกว่าไหม (อันนี้แล้วแต่นะ)
00:30:024 : ^
00:30:424 : ^
00:30:824 : ^

ม๊อดแค่นี้แหละ

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-05T07:26:45+00:00

thanks indyinyou for modding ><

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2013-05-05T14:20:20+00:00

[Generel]
- Please change background of [SSS's Hard+] and [Easy]. (They're NFSW)
- Make sure all tag are same, maybe you don't need to add 'opening', but if you do, please do it on [SSS's Hard+] too.
- จริงๆ silence "normal-sliderslide" มันไม่ได้อ่ะ แต่เห็นมีคนได้แมพแรงค์ไปเร็วๆนี้ก็มี ไม่รู้ยังใส่ใจกันอยู่เปล่า
- Maybe use 824 as offset, so first note on [AsprikaQ's Hard] won't place before timing.
- New soft-slidertick2.wav
• Tips: Try to make slidetick volume when you hear it as same level as normal one,ปรับเสียงให้มันฟังดูแล้วความดังเท่าๆกับโน๊ตปกติด้วยนะ
- In fact, you don't have to use another green line 'on' red line, you can change volume and custom sound on red line too.

[Easy]
Neat ~

[Normal]
00:09:224 (4) - Missing clap at the start of slider?
00:11:624 (3) - Try finish instead of clap? It's like clap out of nowhere when there was kinda silence.
00:12:824 (1) - Add finish at the end of slider? (The start of Kiai).

[AsprikaQ's Hard]
- Resnap all notes.
00:00:224 (1) - This, a little bit off. Maybe start at 00:00:324 instead?

[SSS's Hard+]
Not bad.

[Insane]
00:11:924 (6) - Anti-jump?
00:20:824 (5) - Add new combo? Make it easier to tell spacing changed.
00:44:824 (5) - ^
01:04:424 (3) - Suggestion, remove new combo and add new combo here 01:04:824 (1)? It's like wrong spacing to me, plus it looks better with song too.
01:22:824 (1) - Add clap at the start of slider? Like missing sound here.

Overall looks good, good luck!

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-05T15:12:34+00:00

thank orioncomet so muchhh for modding ><

fix 99.9% of your mod

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-05-05T18:55:14+00:00

P A N wrote:
thank orioncomet so muchhh for modding ><

fix 99.9% of your mod

แล้ว 0.1 คือตรงไหน - -*

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-06T01:27:36+00:00

anti-jump งับไม่รู้เปลี่ยนดีไหมเพราะ mod ที่ผ่านมาเขาก็บอกให้วาง 6 ไว้ตรงกลางดาว

Niko-nyan

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Niko-nyan 2013-05-09T07:57:36+00:00

m4m

Insane
OD8 ;omg; -1 please ;w;
02:22:224 - looks bad maybe try with the 00:21:024 -
01:25:624 - clap maybe
01:26:824 - ^
01:28:024 - ^

SSS's Hard+
i suggest to change the SSS's to SSS' or Meen's
01:25:624(1,2) - clap maybe (end of slider) and the (2) delete finish and clap
01:26:824 - clap (end of slider) and delete clap at (2)

you just ask me to mod 2 diffs so there is it

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-09T08:34:32+00:00

sorry not fix ><

thanks for checking !

OEvil

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OEvil 2013-05-09T18:07:25+00:00

[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]

[General]

No Errors IMO
P.S: No Kudosu Plz

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-10T02:19:21+00:00

LOLLLLL

thanks for checking

Umi

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Umi 2013-05-10T16:55:17+00:00

hi hi from #Friends :3

Easy

- Well, really good diff, just 2-3 suggestion
- 00:54:024 (3,4) - align
- 00:55:224 (1) - remove NC
- 01:02:824 (4,2) - align
nothing else

Normal

- 00:05:624 (3) - move to 408,88
- 00:26:824 (1) - ^ 108,76
- 00:28:824 (4) - ^ 400,192
- 00:36:424 (2,3) - align
- 00:56:824 (1,2) - what about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/748304
- 01:08:024 (3) - move to 176,180

Hard

- 00:07:824 (3,4) - little slider ?
- 01:14:024 (3) - move to 320,120 and so adjust 01:15:224 (3) - for stack

Insane

Fiuu - my favorite diff, just nothing to say >.< good job :3

That's all, really love this map take this (>'-')>

go go ranked

Kanari

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Kanari 2013-05-10T23:18:25+00:00

Haii ~
You requested via queue ~

[Normal]
- This difficulty should at least have one spinner to have some differences in score.
00:24:024 (2) - Line with (5) (x:68) 2nd point on x:372 y:148 and 3rd point on x:300 y:240
00:28:024 (3) - Make it the same as (1)

[Hard]
00:24:824 (1) - Remove new combo to keep the same pattern as the previous one.
00:25:224 (5) - New combo.

[Insane]
00:10:024 (5) - Place at the same place 00:11:624 (5) is? owo
00:24:024 (3) - New combo to follow your pattern.
00:27:024 (5) - ^
00:31:924 (5) - Place where 00:30:424 (3) was and move the last point up one grid.
00:35:024 (3) - Make this a staight slider and mvoe two grids to the right.
00:35:424 (4) - Move to x:312 y:204
00:35:624 (5) - One grid down.
01:05:824 (5) - New combo? owo

Nicely mapped!
Good luck and star! >w<

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-10T23:46:54+00:00

thanks -Umi- and xXCrystalMoonAnimXx for modding ><

-Umi- fix some
xXCrystalMoonAnimXx fix about 70%

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

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BeatofIke 2013-05-11T02:21:08+00:00

Caught this map at #modreqs! I only test played the map! Some unique patterns you got there!
NO kudosu please!

/me runs

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-11T03:21:22+00:00

thanks for play BeatofIke ><

[LikeSmile]

[LikeSmile] 2013-05-11T11:27:22+00:00

Good map :3
Give star ~

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-11T12:15:01+00:00

thanks for starrrrrr ><

kajiyatta

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kajiyatta 2013-05-12T08:59:46+00:00

M4M from PM
[General]
almost suggestions
[Easy]
Placement
00:36:424(2) y:240 better same as previous (3)'s height

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:29:624 unnecessary green line
00:14:024 add a note here since the music enough hears.
[Normal]
Placement
01:16:824(2,4) stack better and move notes like this

SPOILER

[Hard]
Placement
01:03:024(4) stacked on slider's end may stop the flow of map, maybe move away better. e.g.)

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:13:024 add notes here to follow the music.

SPOILER

[Insane]

Placement
00:01:424(2) Ctrl+G, the tiny jump makes the flow more nicely
01:05:424(2,3)^
01:17:224(3,4) stack notes seems a bit weird, so replace slider and jumping. like this?

SPOILER

already so many mods... so I son't have to say much more. good luck & star

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-12T10:28:30+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M from PM
[General]
almost suggestions
[Easy]
Placement
00:36:424(2) y:240 better same as previous (3)'s height fixed
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:29:624 unnecessary green line fixed
00:14:024 add a note here since the music enough hears. no, it will break the pattern after this
[Normal]
Placement
01:16:824(2,4) stack better and move notes like this no, the current one maybe easier for FL player
SPOILER
[Hard]
Placement
01:03:024(4) stacked on slider's end may stop the flow of map, maybe move away better. e.g.) fixed
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:13:024 add notes here to follow the music. no, I want to have break after spinner
SPOILER
[Insane]

Placement
00:01:424(2) Ctrl+G, the tiny jump makes the flow more nicely no, I don't want it more hard D:
01:05:424(2,3)^ ^
01:17:224(3,4) stack notes seems a bit weird, so replace slider and jumping. like this? sure
SPOILER

already so many mods... so I son't have to say much more. good luck & star

thanks for modding

and star!!

Kodora

Kodora 2013-05-13T00:49:50+00:00

[General]

How nice bg! ~~/me saves~~

*Anyway, i strongly recommend ask some BATs how much NSFW is it (and video too, it might be a problem).
*Audio Lead-In in all diffs - 2000, fix it manually using notepad
*Add to tags: noto arisa ogura yui ishihara kaori matsunaga maho
*adding to tags meensss just because he found offset for you is not nesessary, remove it
*also offset is slighty late for me, i'd use 822. if you will use id dont forget resnap all notes, green lines etc.

[Easy]

*HP Drain +1 for better ballance between diffs

00:12:824 (2) - NC since new part of song
00:14:024 - add a note, you missing strong beat here, sounds empty for me
00:14:424 (1) - if you will add note remove nc here then
01:26:824 (2) - remove clap

[Normal]

00:12:824 (1) - remove clap from reverse
00:20:024 (1,2) - spacing not perfect (1.15 between notes)
00:24:024 (2) - default slidertick sounds here better for me
00:25:224 (3,4) - ~~really dont like how claps sounds here~~ nvm i cant imagine better way
00:28:824 (4,1) - spacing not perfect (1.15 between notes)
00:30:024 (2,3) - spacing issue, close to 1.20
00:31:424 (2,3) - ^
00:32:624 (5,1) - spacing not perfect
00:39:624 (1,2) - ^
00:48:424 (4) - missed clap
00:48:424 (4,1) - stacked notes is always bad thing in relax diffs, try to avoid it
00:54:624 (1,2) - spacing issue, 1.20
00:58:424 (2,1) - spacing issue, 1.06
01:19:624 (2) - same about stacked note
01:21:624 (5,1) - spacing not perfect
01:25:024 (4) - nc should begins here, not at 01:25:624 (1) -
01:26:824 (2,3) - remove all claps from those sliders, thaey sounds just weird

[AsprikaQ's Hard]

00:00:224 (1) - slider should begins at 00:00:224 -
00:03:024 (3) - remove clap. really bad idea to create two rhytms with one clap, it sounds just bad.
00:03:124 (4) - ^
00:06:224 (4,1) - ^
00:08:224 (5) - ^,also nc should begins here, not at 00:08:624 (1) - follow your pattern and new part in music
00:09:424 (4,7) - ^
00:10:224 (7) - ^

imho it will be much better if you will replace all claps what i mentiored with default normal whistle

00:10:424 (1,2,3) - i'd add default whistles at the beginning of those sliders too
00:12:024 (1) - too suddenly spinner what really not fit here as well. just remove it and add short break
00:17:224 - add note here + clap for better rhytm
00:17:624 (4) - clap to the end of slider
00:20:224 - add note. vocals on this part is much stronger, so i suggest you focused on it
00:21:824 - ^
00:23:424 - ^
00:27:624 - add note + clap for better rhytm
00:37:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this part is just called for normal default whistles, why you dont use it here? :\
00:45:024 - note for better rhytm
00:50:624 (3) - nc since you ended slowdown part here
00:53:624 - rhytm suggestion:

SPOILER

00:56:424 (4) - strongly recommend delete repeat and add note at 00:56:824 - for better rhytm
01:06:324 - delete note here, it unneeded
01:12:224 (5) - nc since new part of music and for better readability
01:16:024 (1,3) - with such low ar it looks like pretty bad overlap, try to avoid it
01:25:624 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - delete all claps from here. also whistles fits more instead as for me

placement is pretty nice, i like it. just need some hitsounds & rhytm work :p

[Insane]

*Decrease AR and OD by 1 tick for better balance between diffs and for better playability
*Tickrate 1 sounds much better for me

00:45:024 (2) - rhytm suggestion:

SPOILER

00:48:024 (2) - forgot clap at the end?
00:51:424 (4) - remove clap
00:57:224 (2,3,4,5) - just suggestion:

SPOILER

01:19:824 (6,2) - bad overlap, please try to avoid it
01:21:224 (5,2) - ^
01:26:024 (3) - remove clap
01:26:824 (1) - remove clap
01:26:824 (1) - ^
01:28:424 (3) - ^

probably all. pretty solid mapset, good luck with rank

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-13T04:27:36+00:00

thanks for modding Kodora ><

nsfw - nah, maybe not

audio leadin - fixed
tags - will fix
offset - fix

Easy - 100% fixed
Normal - 50% fixed (don't fix spacing, I think its ok)
Hard - 90% fixed
Insane 85% fixed

Xinely

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Xinely 2013-05-13T10:18:22+00:00

second mod and irc ~

15:56 Xinely: btw irc mod?
15:56 P A N: ok
15:56 Xinely: easy 
15:56 Xinely: 00:46:822 (2) - x:152 y:320 better imo
15:56 Xinely: sorry
15:56 Xinely: i mean x:156 y:316
15:57 P A N: ok fix
15:57 Xinely: btw you need softsliderslide for avoid aa sound like "sreeeeet" in 00:47:622 - 00:48:022 - 
15:57 Xinely: to make it clear
15:58 Xinely: yap need softsliderslide2
15:59 Xinely: you can take in my map about sliderslide and rename soft-sliderslide2
15:59 P A N: ok
16:02 Xinely: 01:18:822 (4) - move it 88,212
16:02 Xinely: it's hard to catch for newbie, straight better
16:02 Xinely: fix spacing after this :P
16:03 P A N: oh god D:
16:03 Xinely: ;3;
16:03 Xinely: easy done
16:05 Xinely: still in easy? i will wait ~
16:06 P A N: ok
16:06 P A N: spacing fix
16:06 Xinely: go to normal~
16:06 Xinely: 00:11:622 - remove finish ><
16:07 P A N: ok
16:07 Xinely: 00:20:822 (2) - 252, 236? spacing 1,05x is it okay but if i were you i will avoid that :P
16:08 P A N: hm.. I think i not fix about spacing in normal
16:08 Xinely: ok
16:08 P A N: because i have easy already? D: is it okay
16:08 Xinely: ok ok
16:10 Xinely: 00:26:822 (1,3) - make this same shape slider 
16:10 Xinely: it's better xD
16:10 Xinely: you can remove (3) and copy paste from (1)
16:10 P A N: omg
16:10 P A N: how can i miss this
16:11 Xinely: ctrl+H and ctrl+G XD
16:13 Xinely: 00:52:822 (2) - 208,260
16:14 P A N: fix
16:14 Xinely: 00:54:822 (2) - spacing 1,20?
16:15 Xinely: 1,21 i mean
16:16 Xinely: and 00:58:422 (2) - spacing 1,16 <-- fix this~
16:17 P A N: ok
16:19 Xinely: 01:17:222 (3) - 164,176 for branket :3
16:20 Xinely: 01:22:822 (1) - ctrl+H this for better flow?
16:20 Xinely: wait, ctrl+J i mean X_X
16:20 P A N: lol
16:21 Xinely: bakanely -w-
16:21 P A N: ahh no ><
16:21 Xinely: normal done
16:22 P A N: ok
16:23 Xinely: hard, irc with you or with Guest diff mapper?
16:23 P A N: me
16:23 Xinely: ok
16:24 P A N: the own mapper nearly to quit osu >_>
16:24 Xinely: 00:00:822 (2) - NC this for consistency
16:24 Xinely: Q_Q
16:24 P A N: k nc
16:25 Xinely: 00:06:322 - remove finish?
16:25 P A N: ok
16:27 Xinely: 00:12:822 - i really suggest for add slider from here until 00:13:022 - 
16:27 Xinely: feels empty 
16:28 P A N: and swap nc with 00:13:222 - ? 0.0
16:29 Xinely: yap
16:33 Xinely: 00:20:222 (1) - ctrl+h and put in 248,112
16:33 Xinely: so far after spin suddenly in that
16:33 Xinely: make insta miss ~
16:34 Xinely: 00:25:022 (5) - add note in 116,184.. feel empty
16:36 Xinely: 00:53:222 (4) - ctrl+H
16:37 P A N: 00:25:022 - nah is this ok http://puu.sh/2SxDw.jpg
16:37 Xinely: 00:56:822 (1) - finish
16:37 Xinely: okay ~
16:40 Xinely: 01:04:422 (3) - personally, i want to add jump in here with ctrl+G 
16:40 P A N: ok ctrl g done
16:41 Xinely: 01:09:222 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - btw why spacing suddenly different (1,00x) in here?
16:41 Xinely: i don't think it's fit 
16:41 Xinely: i prefer still with normal spacing 1,1x
16:42 P A N: oh... god
16:42 Xinely: 01:17:622 - finish ~
16:42 Xinely: fix that spacing ~ it's awkward 
16:43 Xinely: and last 01:27:222 (4) - NC for consistency
16:43 P A N: ok, maybe when u mod Insane
16:43 P A N: I will fix hard's spacing? D:
16:44 Xinely: fix that first
16:44 Xinely: i will wait (:
16:44 P A N: oh thank you
16:44 Xinely: yw (:
16:46 Xinely: tell me when done in hard ~
16:46 P A N: ok ><
16:48 P A N: meh what do think about this jump http://puu.sh/2SxOE.jpg
16:48 P A N: is it to hard for hard?
16:48 Xinely: it's okay imo
16:48 P A N: ok then
16:49 Xinely: eh submit?
16:50 P A N: submit hard D:
16:50 P A N: or no
16:50 P A N: I cancle it now
16:50 Xinely: omg lol
16:50 Xinely: i didn't finish mod
16:50 Xinely: insane now?
16:50 P A N: ok I cancle it
16:50 P A N: lol
16:50 P A N: sure
16:50 Xinely: insane 
16:50 Xinely: 00:01:422 (2) - ctrl+G this, deathly 1/4 jump Q_Q
16:51 P A N: haha
16:51 P A N: ok done
16:52 Xinely: 00:14:622 (4) - deathly 1/4 jump too Q_Q
16:52 P A N: A_A
16:53 Xinely: 00:26:222 (1,3) - swap NC please
16:53 Xinely: ~
16:54 Xinely: 00:28:822 (1) - remove NC
16:55 Xinely: 00:32:222 - maybe add note here
16:56 Xinely: 00:36:022 (1) - ctrl+G better flow imo
16:56 Xinely: 00:42:422 (1) - ctrl+H~
16:57 Xinely: 00:58:422 (5) - NC for consistency ~
16:58 Xinely: 01:14:422 (5) - same as above
16:58 Xinely: 01:17:222 (3) - i think prefer ctrl+G 
16:59 Xinely: 01:27:422 (4) - oh lol 1 grid left
16:59 Xinely: eh? i mean right Q_Q
17:00 P A N: lol
17:00 Xinely: 01:28:622 (4) - 1 grid left
17:00 Xinely: done it

Good Luck again ~

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-13T10:19:41+00:00

ahh thanks ><
fixed 94%

regenz

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regenz 2013-05-13T16:53:45+00:00

[เจเนหรา]

ไม่มีอะ

[Insane]

ดิฟนี้ มีการ NC ทุกๆ 4 beat ไม่แนะนำ เพราะว่า เวลาโดนโน๊ตที่ นิวคอมโบตัวใหม่มันจะได้เลือด ถ้ามันได้เลือดบ่อยๆแล้วมันจะง่ายเกิน
แนะนำให้ไล่ nc ที่ 8 beats จะดีกว่านี้
แนะนำว่าเพิ่ม AR อีกหนึ่งจะมันกว่าเยอะเล่นง่ายกว่าด้วย
00:11:922 (6) - นิวคอมโบตัวนี้ เพราะ โดน trap หลายรอบมาก ระยะ 4>5 5>6 มันไม่เท่ากัน

[หอยกาบดิฟ]

ถ้าอินเซนเป็น ar 9 ดิฟนี้ ar 8 ไปก็ดี เพราะโน๊ตแน่นเหมือนกัน (ไม่เปลี่ยนก็ดี คนม๊อดจะได้เล่น HR HD เก็บ PP ได้ <<

00:16:722 (7,1) - ลดสเปชระหว่างรัวให้เหลือ 0.6 เท่าโน๊ตก่อนๆซะ
00:45:622 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - ไอ้ช่วงนี้อะ ถ้าจะเสมือนว่า โน๊ตตรงนี้เป็น bpm หารสองแบบไอ้ที่ทำอยู่เนี่ย
เขาใส่แคลปกันเส้นตรงกลาง คือ บีทที่สาม ของห้องเพลง
00:45:622 (1) - ขยับไปอีกบีท ไปทำเสียงแคลปตรงนี้แทน 00:46:422 (3) - ส่วนไอ้ที่เหลืออีกสองอันก็เหมือนๆกัน
ขยับไปอีก หนึ่งช่วง

[normal]

00:54:622 (1,2) - เรียงตรงนี้ให้ตรงๆหน่อยสไลเดอร์เฉไปทางขวาอีกนิด
01:25:622 (2,3,4) - แตกเป็น สไลเดอร์ 1/2 สองอันบ้างก็ได้

[Easy]

00:31:222 (3) - สไลเดอร์ตัวนี้ 00:31:922 จบตรงนี้ดีกว่า ตรงเสียงด้วย ไม่ต้องกลัวว่าลง 1/4 แล้ว player จะกดไม่ได้โน๊ตต่อไปสไลเดอร์ ระยะห่างก็เหลือเฟือ
00:37:622 (3) - เปลี่ยนเป็นแบบ นี้ http://puu.sh/2SHqZ.jpg
01:25:622 (1,2,3) - ตรงนี้ ใช้ เสียงนกหวีดแบบ default normal ใส่ตรงหางของสไลเดอร์ทั้งสามอัน ถ้าคิดว่าเจ๋งก็ใส่ดิฟอื่นๆด้วย

แมพดีไม่ค่อยมีที่ให้ติ ให้ดาว

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-14T00:38:51+00:00

thanks regenz
almost all fixed

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-05-14T02:52:11+00:00

Hello P A N !

General
so clean o_O !

Easy
00:31:222 (3) - end this slider at 00:32:422 , the current slider doesn't sound good enough. Do not forget adjust spacing + clap on the tail of this slider too

SPOILER

Normal
00:18:422 (6) - finish only the first of this slider (00:18:422) because it sounds exactly the same with 00:20:022 (1) -
00:31:622 (3) - heh, almost same problem with the Easy, I would suggest you in this way to be the most suitable for this diff.
something like this ! , don't forget to add clap on the head of this slider too 00:32:422 (4) -

SPOILER

00:50:622 (x) - add a note here , it's so much important because the music is obviously emphasized at this point !

AsprikaQ's Hard
00:00:422 (1) - I highly suggest you delete this one because it is not recommended to place a note before the first offset. Also I think you can remove it without any problem since other diffs didn't use it as well. The sound on this slider is quite vague too :\
00:37:422 (1) - whistle should be on the last point (00:37:622) so that this sound would fit with these 00:37:822 (2,3,4,5) - better

00:50:622 (1,2,3) - the "drum" sampleset sounds :\\\ odd ._. , I would change to this screenshot, It would make much more sense when you use this at some points of the map such as 00:03:022 (3,4) - , 00:06:222 (4,1) -

SPOILER

Insane
Some slider jumps are hard to be noticed, I will point out those sliders in question.
00:02:222 (5) - You can move it closer like this to make it proper and possible to hit the next slider more comfortably like this.

SPOILER

00:06:022 (1,3,5) - I really don't like repeat sliders like this because they play bad. It's hard to notice for the first time and people usually get x100 easily from the last repeat. I would change to something like this

SPOILER

but what I think it can play best is normal stream , just that

00:35:422 (4) - ctrl+g makes this slider read easier and doesn't ruin the way people play at all also move to x:268 y:188 to make the blanket look proper
00:58:422 (1) - remove NC here please, it's formed as a square and you ruined it

01:19:222 (4) - finish head would be nice to fit with the music

great map you have there

call me back in-game or forum or whatever you are comfortable

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-14T03:28:38+00:00

All fixed, thanks so much frostmourne ><

Updated!!

regenz

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regenz 2013-05-14T04:00:04+00:00

P A N wrote:
All fixed, thanks so much frostmourne ><

Updated!!

จิ๊บไปหลับเดี๋ยวมาคงดูให้แหละ lol ดิฟหอยกาบ Clam ASP's HARD

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-05-14T12:02:09+00:00

Recheck

Easy
00:32:822 (4) - finish

guess that I can bubble after this

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-14T13:18:40+00:00

yes fixed!

updated

CrystilonZ

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CrystilonZ 2013-05-14T13:40:13+00:00

จะได้ฟองแล้ว O_O ดีใจด้วยล่วงหน้า

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-05-14T15:34:26+00:00

CrystilonZ wrote:
จะได้ฟองแล้ว O_O ดีใจด้วยล่วงหน้า

อื้อ

I wish you best of luck for the first rank !

EDIT: rebubble due to accident updating

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-14T15:37:09+00:00

อร๊างงงงงงงง

thanks for bubble frostmourne ><

Natsuki Nanaka

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Natsuki Nanaka 2013-05-14T19:17:51+00:00

gratz on first bubble

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2013-05-15T13:45:28+00:00

Video have a NSFW ponit ~ please use this map video ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/75687

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-15T15:17:49+00:00

video fixed ! ><

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2013-05-15T15:46:53+00:00

OK, i'll finish full mod later , please wait me :3

Kodora

Kodora 2013-05-15T20:28:38+00:00

P A N wrote:
video fixed ! ><

I said you ask about it for potential NSFW content :\
heh...

well hope all will be fine now

~~also this is eroge, yes?~~

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2013-05-16T00:40:57+00:00

Finished mod ~!

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[AsprikaQ's Hard]

00:39:022 (6) - The spacing a bit suddenly,move to X:392 Y:384,it's followed 1.5 distance.

00:56:822 (1,2,3,4) - Missing symmetrical,please use this code.

256,324,56822,5,4,0:0:0:0:
380,192,57222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,60,57622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,192,58022,1,0,0:0:0:0:

01:26:822 (3) - Add new combo and Remove new combo 01:27:222 (1).

[Normal]

00:08:422 (3) - Move 1 gird right,symmetrical 00:07:222 (1) - .
00:47:622 - You are forgot add clap to here.
01:08:022 (3) - How about move to X:24 Y:192,flow much better.
01:25:622 (2) - Add new combo and Remove new combo 01:25:022 (1).

[Easy]

01:09:222 (4,2) - Move 1 gird left,symmetrical 01:07:622 (2) - .

Call me back ~

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-16T04:51:24+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Finished mod ~!

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
00:39:022 (6) - The spacing a bit suddenly,move to X:392 Y:384,it's followed 1.5 distance. fixed
00:56:822 (1,2,3,4) - Missing symmetrical,please use this code. fixed
256,324,56822,5,4,0:0:0:0:
380,192,57222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,60,57622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,192,58022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
01:26:822 (3) - Add new combo and Remove new combo 01:27:222 (1).
fixed
[Normal]

00:08:422 (3) - Move 1 gird right,symmetrical 00:07:222 (1) - . fixed
00:47:622 - You are forgot add clap to here. fixed
01:08:022 (3) - How about move to X:24 Y:192,flow much better. fixed
01:25:622 (2) - Add new combo and Remove new combo 01:25:022 (1).
fixed

[Easy]

01:09:222 (4,2) - Move 1 gird left,symmetrical 01:07:622 (2) - .
fixed

Call me back ~