Yume wrote:

You should remove the Short Ver >.< because of the new rule~

no kd

Katty Pie wrote:

hi from my mod Q ^.^

Insane

00:11:367(8) - i think better remove this note, it will be better folow the vokal.
00:14:114(4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - better use normal sound 40% without hitsounds, it's sond better
00:25:792(1) make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/M8tV
00:31:516(6,7) - stack better
01:20:972(8,1) - It's unrank repeat is hides/ correct it.
01:30:130(1,2) - make more symmetric
01:46:616(3) - here NC bcz you change speed.
02:01:842(6,7) - delete this notes and put spinner start - 02:01:498 , finish - 02:03:330

Hard

00:15:488(1) - better replace on note in white tick.
00:44:567(2,3) - stack better
00:51:664(8) - make more symmetric http://puu.sh/M8y6 looks better
01:09:066(6,7) stack better
01:13:645 - add note here
01:19:369(4,5) - correct spacing
01:24:864(5) - http://puu.sh/M8Ai
01:36:541(7,1) - correct spacing
01:54:630(1,2,3,1) - make identical distance between this notes.
01:55:545 - remove NC
01:58:293 - NC

Mitsuneko's Hard

00:07:245 -add note here, will be sound better
00:37:698 -^
01:09:982(8,1) - make so http://puu.sh/M8DN sounds better
01:12:729(7) - make this slider shorter on red ticks and add slider 1\2 after
01:19:140(5,6) - make so http://puu.sh/M8IF sounds better

Diff should be finished on the same time as other diffs 02:03:330 <--- here

Normal

00:04:040(1,2) - stack better
00:12:054(1,2) - correct spacing
00:31:516(3,4) - stack better
00:38:614(1,2) - make this sliders double and put note 3 00:40:445
00:53:496(3,4) - stack better

Open AI MOD you have 24 problems with spacing.. correct it all

Easy

00:34:034(2,3) - make this lsiders identical http://puu.sh/M8PV
00:57:389 - make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/M8QH

All difs should come to an end on same time. Plz correct it

Good luck~

hi from my mod Q ^.^

Insane

00:11:367(8) - i think better remove this note, it will be better folow the vokal. - I don't think it fits
00:14:114(4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - better use normal sound 40% without hitsounds, it's sond better - changed
00:25:792(1) make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/M8tV - done
00:31:516(6,7) - stack better - done
01:20:972(8,1) - It's unrank repeat is hides/ correct it. - changed
01:30:130(1,2) - make more symmetric - changed
01:46:616(3) - here NC bcz you change speed. - done
02:01:842(6,7) - delete this notes and put spinner start - 02:01:498 , finish - 02:03:330 - Done

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Starry's Easy]
* AR +1? Done

01:10:668 (1) - Spacing error, and please no jump in this easy diff please I don't see a jump or a spacing error


[Normal]
00:05:643 (2) - The sliderpath is overlapped by hitbursts. So beginners are unable to see the path (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read) Fixed
01:24:635 (2) - Make a slider like this to make a blanket combo? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/385078
Fixed


[Mitsuneko's Hard]
02:03:330 - Remove this useless timing section Done


[ktgster's Insane]
01:50:508 (1) - Make this slider curve? To make pattern prettier? Done
01:58:293 (1) - New combo, since this note after spinner. You seems forgot it? Fixed


Good luck~

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Sofian_1

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Kiai time of ktgster's Insane is different from other diff. Please fix it.
2. Disable Letterbox during break in Song setup > Storyboarding.

Starry's Easy

1. 00:45:025 - 01:46:387 You should add clap more than this.
2. 01:26:696 (4) - Move to left 2 grids and up 1 grid, and add NC.
3. 01:29:444 (1,2) - Remove NC in (1), but add it in (2) instead.
4. 01:46:845 (1) - Use finish instead of using clap.

Normal

1. 00:54:412 (4) - Stack it (x:314 y:254)
2. 01:01:281 (3,4) - Spacing is too far
3. 01:27:154 (2,3) - ^
4. 01:28:757 (6,7) - Spacing is too close
5. 01:35:168 (4,5,6) - Spacing is too far

Mitsuneko's Hard

1. 00:44:567 (1) - Add finish in slider begin
2. 00:57:160 (1) - ^
3. 01:13:874 (1) - Add finish here

Hard

1. 00:27:967 - Add spinner here, then end at 00:29:913 instead of using the circle.
2. 01:06:318 (1) - Move to down 1 grid
3. 01:36:999 (1) - Move to right 4 grids

ktgster's Insane

1. 00:14:000 - Hitsound's too loudly. I suggest reducing volume.
2. 01:58:293 (1) - Adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Sofian_1

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

[notice]

General

1. Kiai time of ktgster's Insane is different from other diff. Please fix it. - it does not have to be consistant if it fits and is made by a guest.
   
   [notice]

   ktgster's Insane

   1. 00:14:000 - Hitsound's too loudly. I suggest reducing volume. - changed it to 35%
   2. 01:58:293 (1) - Adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

- done

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~

1. 00:11:367 - 00:12:512 - Ahm..., soft hitsound finish fits very well with the music here, so change please? http://puu.sh/SWsn
2. 00:12:970 (1) - Finish sounds good here
3. 00:40:903 (1) - End this slider 1/1 earlier? (00:42:735)

1. 00:01:979 (1,2) - Try this rhythm? Sounds much better: http://puu.sh/TAYO
2. 00:04:269 (2) - Make this slider like this: http://puu.sh/TEok
3. 00:06:788 (3) - Remove this and add a note in 00:07:016
4. 00:30:371 (1) - Try this? http://puu.sh/TT3c
5. 00:33:576 - Add a note?
6. 00:39:300 (1,2,3) - Make spacing like this? http://puu.sh/UUccso
   Also, remove whistle from these two repeats.
7. 01:06:318 (1) - Move repeat to white tick
8. 01:08:379 - Add a note?
9. 01:10:440 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/UUpV
10. 01:13:645 (1) - Star this spinner in 01:13:874 - End in 01:15:706. Add Finish here too.
11. 01:38:373 (5) - Same as 01:06:318

Spread Wings wrote:

Hi! Sorry for delay, sister wouldn't let me use the notebook...

Red: Unrankable stuff
Black: Suggestions only
Blue: Recommend fix this, There is up to you to fix or not.

[General]

Hm...okay...but no sure about the kiai in Insane...it's different from other diff. But the guest will not change this so...clear.

[Starry's Easy]

1. 00:11:367 - 00:12:512 - Ahm..., soft hitsound finish fits very well with the music here, so change please? http://puu.sh/SWsn
2. 00:12:970 (1) - Finish sounds good here
3. 00:40:903 (1) - End this slider 1/1 earlier? (00:42:735)

Recommend adding more claps here, you missed a lot of them.

[Normal]

1. 00:01:979 (1,2) - Try this rhythm? Sounds much better: http://puu.sh/TAYO
2. 00:04:269 (2) - Make this slider like this: http://puu.sh/TEok
3. 00:06:788 (3) - Remove this and add a note in 00:07:016
4. 00:30:371 (1) - Try this? http://puu.sh/TT3c
5. 00:33:576 - Add a note?
6. 00:39:300 (1,2,3) - Make spacing like this? http://puu.sh/UUccso
   Also, remove whistle from these two repeats.
7. 01:06:318 (1) - Move repeat to white tick
8. 01:08:379 - Add a note?
9. 01:10:440 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/UUpV
10. 01:13:645 (1) - Star this spinner in 01:13:874 - End in 01:15:706. Add Finish here too.
11. 01:38:373 (5) - Same as 01:06:318

Needs a lot of work in this diff.

[Mitsuneko's Hard]

HP-1, AR+1 & OD+1.

That's all
Lose interest to mod this when i saw Normal Diff...this map really needs more work.

Thanks for requesting my queue! Good Luck

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Sorry I am late
[Easy]
00:44:109 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Why don't have Hitsound ;_;
01:17:995 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - You can use 2 4 clap

[Normal]
DS.

[Hard]
Fine

[Insane]
Kiai Time must same as another diff

Can I make Taiko Diff?/.\

Sun Rainbow wrote:

DS:Distance snap

pyransc wrote:

[htgster's Insane]
00:02:437 (3) - remove whistle on third circle, add clap - i don't like how the clap sounds
00:03:811 (5) - remove whistle, add clap- ^

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Sorry I am late

[Insane]
Kiai Time must same as another diff- changed

Sun Rainbow wrote:

the taiko diff is done。
http://puu.sh/Y1Ju

jogfi2002 wrote:

I'm just a new mapper, may not help much. ^^
But I'll try my best.

Starry's Easy

01:29:444 (1) - This short slider is a bit awful, cause it doesn't fit to the song, I think. Change it to a circle may be better.

Normal

00:38:614 (1,2,3) - Note 1 ends earlier than the long tone. Then this tone is splitted into two parts. Maybe repeating slider 1 until the long tone ends and put 3 circles is better.
01:00:365 (1) - This circle is too near to the last slider, I was confused at the first time play.
01:09:066 (4) - Could be considered to put one 1/4 slider at this point, with one circle after the slider.
01:17:537 (1) - A bit more delay after the spinner may be better for a NORMAL.
01:28:299 (4,5) - These two circles are too close, confusing.

Mitsuneko's Hard

00:40:674 (5) - Remove this circle, let spinner starts here.
00:57:160 (6) - Could try to slow down sliders when Rita sings a long tone.

Hard

00:50:520 (6) - Rotate this slider, align to 5 in one line may be more pretty.
01:38:831 (3) - This slider just not fits to music, but I have no other ideas.

ktgster's Insane

00:25:792 (1,2) - Set the NC at circle 2 may be better.
00:52:580 (5,7,8,1) - Could be change to follow the lyric "na", it seems not fit to using 3-combo here.
01:15:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too close to the last stream, not pretty and funny, could be moved to a little farther.

That's all.

I am also mapping a Rita's song, you can see it at t/97081 if you are interested in it.

jogfi2002 wrote:

I'm just a new mapper, may not help much. ^^
But I'll try my best.

ktgster's Insane

00:25:792 (1,2) - Set the NC at circle 2 may be better. - changed
00:52:580 (5,7,8,1) - Could be change to follow the lyric "na", it seems not fit to using 3-combo here. - I prefer to keep it
01:15:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too close to the last stream, not pretty and funny, could be moved to a little farther. - changed

That's all.

I am also mapping a Rita's song, you can see it at t/97081 if you are interested in it.

1. 01:12:271 - Would feel much more complete if you had a note here. For 01:11:355 (267,268,269,270,271,272) - , try kkdkddk.
2. 01:27:383 (332,333,334) - You're following vocals too closely here. There's an interesting rhythm in the background you're neglecting. You should map to that instead.
3. 01:33:107 (351) - Great place for those leading 1/4s here since it's actually audible. Try a k at 01:32:992 - .
4. 01:36:770 (365) - Same as the immediate above.
5. 01:55:774 (1,1) - These two objects should be swapped. Spinner should last until 02:05:162 - or other appropriate time.

1. Consider a custom sliderpoint10.png and sliderpoint30.png
2. Consider mapping each difficulty to the same length.

1. 00:10:909 (6,7,8) - Space to 1.00x, or an even amount on both sides.
2. 00:50:749 (2) - 1/4 too long. Should end at 00:50:978 - white.
3. 00:51:893 (3) - Same with this, and 00:53:496 (2) - this, and 01:37:686 (1,5) - these. There's nothing in the music that hints that there is something to be followed at the 1/4 you end on.
4. 01:22:575 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Not particularly liking the angles formed by these objects, mainly (5,6,1). Also try keeping smaller spacing with (5,6,1), and don't increase it until (1,2). That is, the first jump should be between (1,2) and not (6,1).
5. 01:59:896 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't turn a good diff into a "watch the approach circle" game. You're better off just starting the spinner earlier.

1. 00:32:203 (4) - A rounder, more symmetric slider would be more pleasant.
2. 00:37:240 (3) - I don't feel it's an appropriate place to just copy 00:35:866 (1) - .
3. 00:47:772 (7) - Space.
4. 00:57:160 (5) - Slider is an inappropriate length, since kickback is at 00:57:732 - blue.
5. 01:10:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Lacking hitsounds here. Be creative with the soft-hitwhistle.
6. 01:33:107 - A sort of emptiness here that can be filled in.

1. 01:04:715 (5) - Wave can be made without the anchor in the centre, and it will appear more smoothly; there is an evident turning point here and it doesn't fit with the rest of your sliders.
2. 01:18:682 (4,5,6) - Rhythm pattern not so good. You can argue for (4) that there's the bass to be followed, but there should be a slider starting on 01:19:369 - , or a circle if you're going to follow with circles.
3. 01:22:804 (6,7) - Rhythm pattern not so good. You should swap (5,6) or (5,6,7) for a better rhythm pattern.

1. 00:51:664 (2,3) - Overlap not so good.
2. Overall the map makes too much use of straight lines. This is because you have chosen to map with a high note density and small spacing. For example, stuff like 00:48:688 (1,2,3,4,5) - shouldn't even appear. You should be making use of longer sliders and, well, breaks (which you do have because of vocals and not for difficulty reasons).

1. 00:37:240 (2) - You can make this have a longer arc length and start more toward the top right to get a rounder slider. Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/436509
2. Try to do the above to your sliders which seem a little too curved or too flat.

those wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:10:909 (6,7,8) - Space to 1.00x, or an even amount on both sides.
2. 00:50:749 (2) - 1/4 too long. Should end at 00:50:978 - white.
3. 00:51:893 (3) - Same with this, and 00:53:496 (2) - this, and 01:37:686 (1,5) - these. There's nothing in the music that hints that there is something to be followed at the 1/4 you end on.
4. 01:22:575 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Not particularly liking the angles formed by these objects, mainly (5,6,1). Also try keeping smaller spacing with (5,6,1), and don't increase it until (1,2). That is, the first jump should be between (1,2) and not (6,1).
5. 01:59:896 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't turn a good diff into a "watch the approach circle" game. You're better off just starting the spinner earlier.

BeatofIke wrote:

Miracle Lotus is banned!

352,184,57389,2,0,B|416:184|428:248|416:312|348:312,1,200,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

1. Easy, Normal, and Hard have lots of places were spacing is very, very broken. Run through the diffs and select an ideal spacing(s) for each, and reposition the objects please.
2. T_BG.jpg is now unnecessary, please remove it. Also up to you if you want to remove video from Taiko, but I recommend it.

1. Great to see you're using 3/4 sliders correctly. However, 01:41:808 (2,3) - breaks consistency with the rest of the map, the rhythm should be like the rest.

those wrote:

[General]

1. Easy, Normal, and Hard have lots of places were spacing is very, very broken. Run through the diffs and select an ideal spacing(s) for each, and reposition the objects please.
2. T_BG.jpg is now unnecessary, please remove it. Also up to you if you want to remove video from Taiko, but I recommend it.

[RLC]

1. Great to see you're using 3/4 sliders correctly. However, 01:41:808 (2,3) - breaks consistency with the rest of the map, the rhythm should be like the rest.

Faust wrote:

Easy & Normal are fine.

Mitsuneko's Hard:

- 00:06:788 (4,5,6) - Looks awkward at a glance, since you're conforming to distance snapping which unfortunately happens to put some obscuring over (5).

Try this:

SPOILER

- 00:11:138 (6) - Remake this slider, perhaps ? Here are the points:

SPOILER

- 00:33:462 - From here onwards, I have a remapping suggestion you could consider keeping.

SPOILER

- 00:35:294 - As for this:

SPOILER

Timeline:

SPOILER

- 00:37:927 (5) - Seems weird to me why you'd just choose to use a rather linear slider all of a sudden.

- 00:53:725 (5) - x:276 y:296, don't mind the minor spacing increase after that, since it's not an issue.

Overall, I can see the effort put into the presentation in map structure. Not everything goes in a plain single direction like it's spoon-feeding the player.

Anyway, from here on it's just looking and touching up on parts that don't seem to convey a clear alignment to the song, such as at:

- 01:21:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - Advised to remake the slider and tweak the positioning.

Here's what I have in mind:

SPOILER

Hope I'm not putting any unwanted pressure on you here, but mapping is a progressive thing and sometimes things are not apparent now, but will be in the future when you've gained more experience.

Hard:

Don't have any problem with this.
I think even if you're relatively new to mapping and there isn't so much of 'unique' mapping elements/techniques in this, the current flow reflects quite well on the light-heartedness of the song.

It's rather basic, but has the right components and the rhythm is on good foundation.
I think plenty of people will enjoy it as it is.

- 01:38:831 (3) - Here's a suggestion:

SPOILER

On the playfield, it looks something like this:

SPOILER

Sounds pretty good if you ask me, since it 'bumps' nicely to the song.

RLC:

Has the mark of an experienced mapper all over it.
Can very well read your intention.

Get back to me and we can discuss further on anything else that any one of you might have to add.

Strawberry wrote:

-Title should be 道の先、空の向こう wiki



-After discussing with other staffs and as those said, the taiko background is unnecessary and unrankable now. plz fix it to normal BG.

------------------------------------------------------
once these changed, call me back. :3

NoHitter wrote:

[Starry's Easy] Mapper inactive, modding for him.
- 00:25:933 () - IMO the break here is unneeded. It's a Short Ver. anyway. Map this part? Unneeded.
- 00:45:025 -> 00:59:220 - Add claps on the second and fourth white ticks here. (The first bar line being the downbeat - long white line) The lack of claps make it sound empty. Don't know what you meant.
- 01:17:537 -> 01:50:508 - Same as above. Don't know what you meant.
-01:21:659 (2,3,4) - I recommend you avoid using "straight" patterns like this next time you map. They don't look as good as if you make them curve a bit like this. Done
- 01:55:647 () - Why don't you map to the end of the mp3 as well like [Hard] and [RLC]? Doesn't have to end in the same point, don't need more mapping beyond this point.

[Normal]
- 00:25:933 () - Same comment as in Easy. IMO the break here is unneeded. It's a Short Ver. anyway. Map this part? Unneeded.
- 00:47:543 (1) - I recommend you placing this somewhere else where it doesn't overlap with the previous combo. It looks messy atm. Fixed.
- 00:51:664 (2,3) - The blanketing here could have been done better. Try redoing it with the new slider algorithm. Fixed.
- 00:54:412 (4) - Not properly stacked. Fixed.
- 00:56:244 (4) - Same as above. Fixed.
- 01:23:261 (3,4,5,6) - The pattern here looks really messy in play. I suggest changing it to something like this.You may have to rework your next combos to fix the spacing. Code: http://puu.sh/2wb3m Fixed.
- 00:45:025 -> 00:59:220 - Add claps on the second and fourth white ticks here. (The first bar line being the downbeat - long white line) The lack of claps make it sound empty. Don't know what you meant.
- 01:17:537 -> 01:50:508 - Same as above. Don't know what you meant.
- 01:55:647 () - Why don't you map to the end of the mp3 as well like [Hard] and [RLC]? Doesn't have to end in the same point, don't need more mapping beyond this point.

[Mitsuneko's Hard] Mapper inactive, modding for him.
- 00:25:933 () - Same comment as Normal. IMO the break here is unneeded. It's a Short Ver. anyway. Map this part? Unneeded.
- 01:18:911 (5) - Add clap at the start of slider for hitsound consistency. Done.
- 01:33:107 (4) - Add clap. ^ Done.
- 01:55:647 () - Why don't you map to the end of the mp3 as well like [Hard] and [RLC]? Unneeded.

[Hard]
- The difficulty seems to be lacking hitsounds. I recommend adding more. A crude way of hitsounding is adding claps every second and fourth white bar line (The first bar line being the downbeat - long white line) and whistles every third. Or you can copy how RLC hitsounded his difficulty. Don't know what you meant.
- 00:03:124 (5) - This could be blanketed to look better aesthetically like this. You have to adjust the next combos though. Code: http://puu.sh/2wawz Unchanged. Gives a better feel.
- 00:20:983 (4) - Spacing here is a bit too wide from the rest of the combo. Unchanged.
- 00:22:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing in this combo suddenly went narrower. Make it the same as the previous combos? Unchanged.
- 00:27:623 (3) - Looks unbalanced. I suggest your delete and remake it. The new slider algorithm will make it look balanced. Fixed.
- 00:30:371 (1,2,3,4) - (4) looks odd IMO. (1) and (2) aren't centered as well. May I suggest using this pattern? Code: http://puu.sh/2waBV Fixed.
- 00:37:240 (8) - New combo here to be consistent with your combo patterning. Fixed.
- 00:38:614 (1) - Remove combo here. ^ Fixed.
- 01:11:813 (4) - The spacing sudden lowers here. I suggest you space it out similarly with the rest of the notes in this combo. Unchanged.
- 01:22:346 (1,2) - The overlap between these two don't look that good. I suggest moving them farther apart likethis. Fixed.
- 01:38:831 (3,1) - The anti-jump here is confusing IMO. Please move (1) further from (3). Changed.