Hey there!
From my queue :3
[General]
Nothing to see.
[Alone]
00:08:554 (1) - Move the middle point one grid up to fix the curve.
00:58:146 (2,3) - You could put those in a way they to connect the sliders with a curve like that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692807
(Not the best try ever, you got my point I guess)
01:14:677 (3,4,5) - Fix the slider curves and make them more symmetrical ._.
[With you]
00:13:146 (3) - The distance is not the same between the two sliders and they look like they are not symmetrical .-.
00:33:044 (6) - Fix the curve - Use the approach circle of the next circle for help
01:16:820 (5,1,2,3,4) - Those could look much better, no?
Like this for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692822
01:28:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The sixth note is not placed correct and the shape looks wrong ;3;
01:29:983 (1,2,3) - The distance is not the same between the two sliders and they look like they are not symmetrical .-.
01:30:901 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692825 ? o=
Nothing else
The song is very nice, good work and I wish you good luck I'll shoot a Star :3
From my queue :3
[General]
Nothing to see.
[Alone]
00:08:554 (1) - Move the middle point one grid up to fix the curve.
00:58:146 (2,3) - You could put those in a way they to connect the sliders with a curve like that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692807
(Not the best try ever, you got my point I guess)
01:14:677 (3,4,5) - Fix the slider curves and make them more symmetrical ._.
[With you]
00:13:146 (3) - The distance is not the same between the two sliders and they look like they are not symmetrical .-.
00:33:044 (6) - Fix the curve - Use the approach circle of the next circle for help
01:16:820 (5,1,2,3,4) - Those could look much better, no?
Like this for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692822
01:28:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The sixth note is not placed correct and the shape looks wrong ;3;
01:29:983 (1,2,3) - The distance is not the same between the two sliders and they look like they are not symmetrical .-.
01:30:901 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692825 ? o=
Nothing else
The song is very nice, good work and I wish you good luck I'll shoot a Star :3