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Enna Alouette
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Enna Alouette
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, April 15, 2013 at 12:14:33 AM

Artist: Kuraki Mai
Title: Your Best Friend
Source: Detective Conan
Tags: ending Sekai Case Closed Meitantei Conan 名探偵コナン 倉木麻衣
BPM: 98
Filesize: 2389kb
Play Time: 02:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alone (2.89 stars, 166 notes)
  2. With You! (4.5 stars, 232 notes)
Download: Kuraki Mai - Your Best Friend
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I want to dedicate this map for one of my best friend here Darksonic .....
I just hope you like this song and map ><


And yeah i hope you guys enjoy this as well :3
Last edited by Enna Alouette , edited 28 times in total.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
~General~
  1. You have too many kiai fountains used in less than a minute, this is not suggested, please change that.
~Alone!~
  1. All your kiai lines are unsnapped, please make sure to resnap them correctly.
  2. Reduce circle size by 1 tick please, it's too small for the easiest difficulty of the mapset.
  1. 00:24:483 (1,2,3) - I'd try to avoid stacking circles like that on the easiest difficulty of the mapset, space them normally like you did on the other patterns of this difficulty.
  2. 00:28:769 (1,2,3) - Same here for these circles, change them please.
  3. 00:52:034 (1,2,3) - Well, same goes here once again for the same reason.
  4. 00:57:544 (4) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
  5. 01:28:156 - You should add a note here to emphasize it with the kiai fountain.
  6. 01:29:381 (4) - New combo should go here due to the new stanza and music change.
  7. 01:33:667 - You should add a note here to emphasize it with the kiai fountain.
  8. 01:48:973 (2,3) - Yeah, another stack that you should try to avoid, it's too hard to read for beginners, since this is the easiest difficulty of the mapset.
  9. 02:03:667 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
  10. 02:04:891 (1) - Remove this new combo afterwards, since you won't need it.
  11. 02:06:718 (1) - Unsnapped spinner, please make sure to resnap it correctly.
~With you!~
  1. Rename it to "With You!", it looks much better if everything is capitalized properly.
  2. 175 Unsnapped notes in this difficulty, please make sure to resnap all notes from the timing panel.
  1. 00:24:789 (1) - I'd remove this new combo from her and add it on (4) instead, it follows with the music much more.
  2. 00:33:973 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing, please make the spacing consistent, look at my suggestion.
    SPOILER
  3. 01:07:034 (5,1) - New combo should go on (5) and not on (1) since the new section actually starts there.
  4. 01:36:105 (7,1) - Same as above, new combos should be swapped to follow your pattern.
  5. 01:42:840 (6) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
Good luck o3o
Enna Alouette
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Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Thanks Andrea for modding :3

Fixed everything you said~
Jaaaom
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Joined February 2011
Jaaaom
Very good 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-)
BeatofIke
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Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Support Sekai! :3
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Yuki-kun
Hi~
From my queue.~ :D

General

--- Good BG choice. It's totally fit with music and diff name. xD

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Alone!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:08:565, ends on 01:08:871
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:28:156, ends on 01:28:462
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:44:687, ends on 01:47:748

- [With You!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:08:568, ends on 01:08:871
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:18:963, ends on 01:19:269
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:28:146, ends on 01:28:452
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:33:656, ends on 01:33:963
Kiai #5: Starts on 01:44:677, ends on 01:47:738

My Mod

[With You!]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:08:568 - snap to 01:08:565
01:18:963 - snap to 01:18:973
01:19:269 - snap to 01:19:279
01:28:146 - snap to 01:28:156
01:28:452 - snap to 01:28:462
01:33:656 - snap to 01:33:667
01:33:963 - snap to 01:33:973
01:44:677 - snap to 01:44:687
01:47:738 - snap to 01:47:748
02:07:024 - snap to 02:07:034
02:07:177 - snap to 02:07:187
02:07:330 - snap to 02:07:340
02:07:483 - snap to 02:07:493
02:07:636 - snap to 02:07:646
02:07:789 - snap to 02:07:799
02:07:942 - snap to 02:07:952
02:08:095 - snap to 02:08:105
02:08:248 - snap to 02:08:258

-- Your kiai time in this diff seem so random :o

01:19:585 (1) - You forgot normal sample here :p
01:28:156 (1,2) - Kiai fountain here seem to be not fit with music.
02:01:371 (2) - Somehow i fee this part is out of beat. But next part 02:03:207 (2) - is really fit. So ignore this if you want.

[Alone!]
00:28:156 (7) - NC here.
00:28:769 (1) - Remove NC
00:41:013 (2) - One grid up

Nice song xD. Nothing to do with style, It's good enough :p
Oh anyway, star for a good song :p
Good luck~ <3
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Thanks For modding & star Yuki :3

Fixed everything~
Banana
794 posts
Joined October 2010
Banana
sorry for delay

[With You!]
01:09:789 - 60% is a bit loud before here (the normal sample set and the soft whistle
00:20:197 (4) - tail is on 1/3 if you follow vocal, here is a piano so it is ok now, but strange to the frist time player
00:33:973 (1,2) - (1) follow the piano, and (2) follow the drum, this change is abrupt so consider to follow one of them, (00:37:034 (3,4) - (4) seems following nothing and it plays ok to me, 00:38:871 (2,3) - ok to me, for piano here is strong enough
00:46:218 (4) - vocal here should be 1/3. btw, i don't like it for it is near (3), and to get this slider you may move a angle from (3)'s tail, which is not suit the continuous vocal here imo
00:53:258 - not quite understand the break here, for the red tick break have a piano, and the breaks like 00:37:340 (5) - are all at downbeats
01:20:503 (2) - curve right side for left is a bit crowd
01:34:585 (3) - same reason as above, (and i usually prefer fan pattern) rotate 01:32:748 (7) 180°
01:54:483 (5) - 3/4 slider here is strang, for vocal is at red tick, consider 1/2 slider and a blue tick circle?

[Alone!]
01:29:993 (2) - rotate? it overlap with the (3) in the following combo
01:35:503 (7) - nc here?
01:38:565 (4) - nc here?
01:49:891 (4) - touching the top is avoidable, consider it

good luck~
Enna Alouette
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Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Thanks For your mod :3
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,464 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
o3o/

Also why you add "!" after Alone, seems really excited for being alone >:
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
Yo.

[General]
  1. Your kiais are inconsistent.Make sure to fix it, to keep consistency!
  2. I'd start mapping from the same point in all diffs. Not a big problem, but why can't you start mapping from 00:08:565 - ([With You!] diff)
  3. Two minutes long map, two diffs. Looks like you're too lazy.
[Alone]
  1. 01:28:156 (3) - usually kiai fountain should have a New Combo on it. Because it even feels like something epic starts here.
    Don't say "go away, i can't ruin my comboig here"! I've got an idea how to fix comboing here.
    NC-nazi goes here \:D/

    01:22:646 (1,3) - swap new combos.
    01:26:320 (1,3) - swap new combos
    01:29:381 (1) - remove this one
    You will keep consistent comboing, but in a bit different way. It doesn't hurts your pattern at all.
  2. 01:33:667 (4,6) - nazi - might be overlapped with hitburst. Not a big problem with new skin, but still looks kinda messy.in case if you don't know where to move
  3. 01:44:687 (3) - same as 01:28:156 (3)
    Note: it's quite important to xif both of them or not to fix them at all! Keep consistency here!
  4. 01:44:687 (3) - since this is the end of kiai, so it's reasonable to place an object here. It's even feels like smething's missed here!
  5. 01:49:891 (4) - you have a beat at 01:49:891 - similar beat appears at 01:50:503 - so, add a reverse to 01:49:891 (4) - or remove it an place single circle at 01:50:197 - for better rhythm
[With You!]
  1. 00:11:626 (3,4,5) - ULTRA-nazi - you don't normally use symmetrical patterns, so this one looks weird here. /me runs
  2. 00:17:748 (5) - since vocals are kinda fading till 00:18:973 - I want you to add reverse to (5). It will fit here better. (probably you'll need to reduce volume a bit) it will make rhythm a bit more consistent, too
    Note: don't forget to fix spacing!
  3. 01:17:442 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - nazi - since you have two triplets here, can't you make them a bit easier to read? example

    Everything else seems cute and well-designed.
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Pretty nice map. Good luck.
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined April 2010
HeatKai
Why you so mad,Darksonic. :3 turururu
as requested in game

[General]
  1. Offset: 8563 sounds better to me.
  2. make the volume louder starting from 01:10:399 it's the chorus and I wonder why you didn't put kiai there and this 01:28:154 (3) - kiai here is pointless,just remove it.
  3. the combo colour i don't think it really fits ._. why don't you pick a 'sad' colour,like grey or just based on the background.
  4. I think the last spinner at both diffs,would be better if it starts from the "laaaaaaaaaa" 02:07:034 and add a circle or whatsoever at the "kaa"
[ForeverAlone!]
OD+1
why don't you put finish at every first guitar pluck.so you can add varieties of hitsounds.the finish really fits because the guitar is the loudest in the song.so it fits for a finish.
add finish at 00:09:787 (2) - end of the slider, 00:15:909 (3) - at starting, 00:20:807 (3) - at starting, 00:25:093 (3) - at the end. this 5 place only.
  1. 00:09:787 (2) - why don't you ctrl+j so it would look better rather then both of the slider curver downward.make more pattern would be better here.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:18:971 (1) - this slider should start at 00:19:277 there's no beat from the song at all. o_o
  3. 00:19:889 (2) - curve this slider a little bit,so it flows good with the next slider.
    SPOILER
  4. 00:24:787 (2,3) - why you put whistle here,it doesn't sound right to me.it would be better you add whistle at 00:24:481 (1) - just leave it empty at the circle (2) because she just started singing again
  5. 00:34:889 (1) - this not really a problem but for me,I think it would be better if you set it as normal hitsound because from the beat from the song is similar to it and following the vocal.
  6. 00:38:869 (4) - i think this would be better without repeat because the strong end beat is at the repeat of this,so just remove one repeat.
  7. 00:44:685 (3) - just remove the whistle at the starting,it's not consistent with the hitsounds pattern.
  8. 00:47:134 (3) - add clap here,because this circle special for the vocal so why don't you put hitsound that fits with it?
  9. 00:47:746 (4) - make a better blanket,it looks kinda ugly if you make the starting and ending point near with the circle.
    SPOILER
  10. 00:50:807 (3) - move it here,so it looks like a reflect of next slider pattern.
    SPOILER
  11. 00:54:481 (1) - it's kinda pointless to put whistle at starting here,because before this you just put whistle based on piano and here vocal is louder then piano.it would be better to remove it.
  12. 00:55:705 (2) - missing whistle at the end?
  13. 01:03:052 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it like this would be better,because the old pattern flow doesn't good and here i put blanket rather then just leave the slider like that.
    SPOILER
  14. 01:09:175 (2) - add a new combo here,the circle before is kinda special because it got kiai but this one is based from the song.
  15. 01:09:787 (3) - add finish here because the chorus start from here.
  16. 01:17:746 (6) - add new combo here,because this part doesn't have vocal and map it based on instrument.
  17. 01:40:399 (4) - make it curve,so it flows good with the next slider.
    SPOILER
  18. 01:42:236 (7) - make a better blanket.don't be lazy,it would make the gameplay good and pretty =w=''
    SPOILER
  19. 01:44:685 (3) - add a new combo here because this part is special for "you'RE my best friend"
[With You!]
  1. 00:13:462 (5) - this slider don't make the end hit the other slider.move the 3rd grid to other place or remake the slider so it doesn't hit.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:16:524 (3) - why the slider starts here? it doesn't even have beat there.just add circle 00:16:830 because the music starts there again.
  3. 00:24:789 (5) - add new combo here because the vocal starts here and 00:25:707 (4) - remove this new combo.
  4. 00:26:626 (5) - add another new combo at here because of the vocal.
  5. 00:30:911 (1) - why don't you move this circle to 00:31:065 - it would sounds better with a new beat.if you fix this,you probably need to do more for the next part.
  6. 00:53:565 (9) - add a circle here because there's a piano beat here.it sounds empty if you leave it like that.
  7. 00:59:993 (5) - move the 3rd grid more to left and down. so it would make a better blanket.
    SPOILER
  8. 01:09:483 (2) - add finish at the end because it's the beginning of chorus.
  9. 01:12:850 (6) - move the 3rd grid more to left and up to make it a better blanket.
    SPOILER
  10. 02:00:911 (1,2) - not really fit if you map it like that,the beat is just normal 1/2
  11. 02:02:748 (1,2) - same here ^
Enna Alouette
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Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Thanks Heat and Bakari for your mods :3

And Flask for your star >w<
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Dark_Ai
Random mod because I like this song



General

  1. the way how you add the kiai times it weird tbh I dont know why you did it but I would change it and add there where is fit better and not like now. it is unnecessary. may add one kiai time from 01:09:789 - 01:47:748 ? would be better imo

[Alone]

  1. 00:22:034 (4) - move this note to x: 344 y: 196 to blanket Note 3 & 4 better together
  2. 00:49:585 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern look horrible. may can you change it
  3. 00:55:707 (2) - 1 grid down to fix spacing
  4. 01:16:524 (5) - copy 01:14:687 (3) and paste the slider there to make these two sliders same look better imo
  5. 01:42:238 (2,3) - blanket these notes better together
  6. 02:01:218 (2) - move this note to x: 112 y: 336 to make a better blanket
  7. 02:06:728 (1) - move this spinner to 02:07:034 and add a note there. sounds is better imo

[With You!]

  1. 00:13:462 (4) - copy Note 3 and paste the slider here to make the sliders same and move 00:13:156 (3) to x: 324 y: 228 to make a better blanket
  2. 00:19:585 (2) - stack it better with 00:17:748 (5) this slider end
  3. 00:29:687 (4) - try to make this more systematic
  4. 00:56:932 (8,1) - blanket these notes better together
  5. 02:06:728 (1) - same as Alone

That's all. Nice map ~
Good luck with everything C:
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
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Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Thanks Ai for your mod :3
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,464 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
Hi Bakai o3o/ Mod request from my Mod Queue :3

[General]
  1. 倉木 麻衣 (x) 倉木麻衣 (o). Remove the blank between them.
    Others are fine.
[With you!]
  1. 00:09:483 (2) - I can hear a strong piano sound in the music, so add a whistle to emphasize it would be great :3
  2. 00:11:013 (1) - Okay so here the whistle too.
  3. 00:20:809 - ^
  4. 00:16:830 (3,4) - The whistle at (3) sounds really horrible and inconsistent, it should be at (4)'s begin. Consider to remove whistle from (3), and then add a whistle at (4).
  5. 00:26:626 (1) - I know there's a strong piano sound at (1)'s begin, but the consistency is more important imo, also there's a piano sound at (1)'s sliderend. Remove the whistle from the sliderbegin, and then add a whistle at the end may solve the problem.
  6. 00:41:320 (2,4) - Why you don't make them parallel o3q? Try to move (4) to x:468, y:124, it would be more beautiful!
  7. 00:53:565 (1,2,3) - I'm not really into how this stream works, seems inconsistent with 00:56:626 (6,7,8) - and some other same parts. Try to use 0.5x spacing to replace this stream.
  8. 01:17:136 (1,2,3,4,5) - I dislike the flow here, so how about place some jumps? Like the example would be more flow I think (and enjoyable :3)
[Alone]
  1. 00:19:585 - Seems you forget to add a whistle here to follow the piano in the music o3o (You did this in another diffs, you should make them consistent!)
  2. 00:27:544 (6,1) - Combine these notes to a slider? Sounds that vocal starts at (6), end at (1). Combine them to a slider can connect the patterns here as same as vocal!
  3. 01:04:585 - Add something here to follow the vocals? You can remove (4), and then add a 1/2 slider here! (End at downbeat)
  4. 01:15:911 (4) - no u, that spacing x_x
  5. 02:02:748 (3) - what ^
    This diff needs some nazi mod, but it's okay since it's the easier diff :33
Good luck bakai ~
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Thanks For mod Flask :3

Fixed everything~
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally
Hi owo/

Random here just because i love this song *-* <3

[General]
  1. Folder is fine o3o
  2. what do you think about to doing a kiai fontain ? like to sto kiai 01:26:932 - here and beginn again on 01:29:381 - i think it will be cute o3o
[Alone]
Spacing:
  1. 00:19:279 (1) - is close to the next object
  2. 01:14:687 (3) - a little bit close to the next object
  3. 01:40:401 (4) - a little bit far to ne next slider
  4. 02:01:218 (2) - is far to the next object
Placement:
  1. 00:30:605 (1) - do a better blanket with 00:31:830 (4) -
  2. 00:35:503 (3) - what about to move some grind down the last white point to have a better line for the next circle
    SPOILER
  3. 00:40:401 (1) - somehow you ruin a bit the flow placing this sincle there,try to place it like x: 320 y: 224
  4. 00:47:136 (3,4) - what about a better blanket here?
    SPOILER
  5. 00:52:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - what about to doing this a bit better like :
    SPOILER
  6. 00:54:483 (1,2) - you can do a better bllanket for this 2 sliders
  7. 01:05:503 (5) - pace it more like this, to have a better flow
    SPOILER
  8. 01:05:809 (1) - finish the spinner here 01:08:565 - is much better and add a finish on it
  9. 01:37:952 (x) - add a circle here o3o
  10. 01:55:095 (4) - you can do a better blanket for the next circle it will look better imo
Hitsounds:
  1. 01:09:177 (1,2) - what about a whistle for this 2 circle? i think it sound good with the next pattern 01:17:748 (6,7,8) -
[With You!]
Placement:
  1. 00:38:565 (1,2,3) - try to do something like this, because atm this pattern don't flow good imo
    SPOILER
  2. 00:56:626 (6,7) - the same problem is here but dunno what to suggest to make it a bit better because to have a straight line and after it a curved slider somehow the flow get ruined from this and feels unconfortable during playing
  3. 01:17:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i really don't like how it flow because it feels unatural the movement between 01:17:442 (2,3,4,5,6) - and this ruin all the rest of this pattern,i tryed to suggest something how to get it a bit better:
    ~ 01:17:442 (2,3,4,5,6) - i tryed to fix the unnatural flow between they like:
    SPOILER
    ~01:18:360 (7,8) - and after it doing a new slider and placed 01:19:279 (8) - to fix the spacing between 01:18:360 (7,1) - in this kind of way:
    SPOILER
  4. 01:22:034 (6) - ctrl + H , and fix the spacing after it, it will flow a bit better for the prev 2 circles
    SPOILER
  5. 01:27:085 - i think you should add a spinner here that end like here 01:28:156 - during playing it feels like it should be one here
good luck moe o3o/
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Thanks Lally for your mod :3
Itachi_Uchiha
188 posts
Joined December 2011
Itachi_Uchiha
From my queue~

[Alone]
00:11:626 (3,4) - Align these 2 vertically
00:15:911 (3) - NC on this one since it´s new part
00:46:524 (2,4) - Align these 2 horizontally
00:50:809 (3) - Make this one 2 grids more right and then fiy the alingment with the following 4 :)
01:39:789 (3) - 2 grids up for better alignment
01:51:422 (1) - Much out of grid

[With You!]
00:24:789 (1) - One grid down for better alignment :)
Thas all on this diff... wow xD

Good job!
Enna Alouette
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Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Thanks For modding :3
Niko-nyan
1,990 posts
Joined June 2011
Niko-nyan
o3o star
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
Hello, Sekai :3

From my Queue, you know lol. omg, flyable heart bg <333


[General]

  1. In fact, I'd prefer Slidertickrate 1 since the song is pretty quiet and that ticking sound doesn't fit into a mayor part of the song.

  2. I got +2 on the offset, lol. See how that works for you.

  3. Just a suggestion, but wouldn't it be cooler with Alone was harder than With you? :>

[Alone]

  1. Volume is a bit too loud to fit the song for my taste. Maybe try to reduce it like ~10 % everywhere?
  2. 00:09:789 (2) - You may want to make this look more straight by moving the end point some grids up, that would work visually better in my opinion.
  3. 00:15:911 (3) - This kinda shouts for a NC in my opinion lol. Piano plays heavy note.
  4. 00:19:279 (3) - If you followed above, add one here to be consistent.
  5. 00:24:789 (2) - Hm, add a whistle to follow the piano? Sounds empty.
  6. 00:37:340 (1,2) - Since it sounds empty here, add a whistle on 1 or 2, that would be cool.
  7. 00:38:871 (4) - Whistle on Slider's start sounds great in my opinion. Also would be consistent with 00:43:769 (2) -
  8. 00:47:136 (3) - Hm, there is no clap sound in the music, according to this and you dont have a pattern for your clap which you are following you should remove this.
  9. 00:49:585 (1) - As this is noticeable in the game, please correct the stack with 3.
  10. 00:58:462 (3) - Add a whistle to emphasize the piano?
  11. 01:09:789 (3) - If you added a finish to this, this would have a very cool emphasize! Try it :>
  12. 01:16:524 (5) - Change Slider's end to Normal sampleset to keep hitsounds consistent.

[With you]

  1. 00:17:748 (5) - Add a whistle to the repeat to keep hitsound consistency between difficultys.
  2. 00:31:983 (4) - Hm, this note sounds badly overmaped and a bit meeh, how about removing it?
  3. 00:46:218 (4) - Really nazi, but you can improve this blanket by rotating 4 by -4 degrees.
  4. 01:09:483 (2) - Add a finish to the Sliderend for the same reason as in Alone?
  5. 01:56:320 (1,2) - I highly recommend you to add claps to the end of these Sliders since they are in the music.
  6. 02:03:207 (2) - Sounds really akward in my opinion, just move it to the red tick and shorten it to the white sounds much better in my opinion.


Pretty nice mapset, Sekai :3

Beautiful song, lol, remembers me of a lot of things.
Good luck :>
Enna Alouette
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Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Fixed everything Thanks for modding Konei :3
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
hey. taken from #modreqs

[General]
- the offset is late. after trying with a few different offsets, i found that 8555 (-10) was accurate.
- here's a tip for furture mapsets: place NCs on large white ticks for the most part. your NC pattern seems to be inconsistent in a lot of spots, and it seems generally better to add the NCs at the long white ticks since it emphasizes the beginning of a stanza.
- it would be a better idea to end the kiai time at 01:48:963 since the chorus is still going on when you end it.
- in both difficulties, i think it would be a really cool effect if you slowly increased the volume of the last spinner and suddenly silenced it at the end to match the vocals (example). you didn't do anything with the spinner in the Alone difficulty, but in the With You! difficulty you made the volume slowly fall, which I think is inaccurate because the vocals are actually getting louder at that point.

[Alone]
00:14:065 (1) - a whistle at the end of this slider rather than on the repeat of it sounds better and also follows the hitsound pattern you established in the past few objects (a whistle every other white tick).
00:39:779 (5) - place a circle here. the gap of time between 00:38:861 (4) and 00:40:391 (1) seems a bit too long and slightly out of place.
01:05:799 (1) - this spinner here doesn't fit very well. normally, i would suggest to move it forward by two ticks and shorten it, but then the spinner would be too short for a difficulty like this. the best solution would be to map this part out instead
01:22:636 (6) - bring the end of this slider up slightly so it looks like it curves into the next slider more smoothly, like this.
01:46:514 (4,1) - the gap of time between this slider and circle and feels really awkward. adding a circle at 01:47:738 (5) fits well and should easily solve the problem~

[With You!]
00:23:248 (4) - shouldn't there be a whistle at the end of this? it sounds better.
00:37:330 (5) - the hitsounds on this slider feel bland. i think it would be better to stick to what you were doing previously and at a clap to the beginning of it and a normal sampleset to the end of it.
00:52:636 (6) - normal sampleset would sound better here. i don't know why you did something else.
01:04:881 (2) - ^
01:26:616 (3,1) - the gap between these two objects is really long and feels awkward. i'm sure you were trying to create a cool effect, but it doesn't feel like that to me.
02:00:901 (1,2) - this doesn't follow the vocals or the background music very well. i suggest following the vocals in this case closely by using a semi-stream like this.
02:02:738 (1,2) - same as above.

in this difficulty, i feel that the hitsound pattern, especially in the beginning, was inconsistent. for example, there were whistles in place of normal hits and vice versa. also, i think that the random stream triplets are very weird and unnecessary to the map as they don't follow anything in the music. i would advise deleting them (except where it's actually in the music very rarely). that's all for now; good luck.
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Thanks Jacob for your mod :3

Fixed everything~
DingGGu
305 posts
Joined January 2011
DingGGu
Hello~ From DingGGu's Modding Queue!

[General]
You have many unsnapped problem. this is unrankable to your map. you should fix it!

+ I think you change offest last mod.
you should move notes when you change offset.

Ctrl + A and handling timeline.

[Alone]
Snapping
00:08:565 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:08:565 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:09:789 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:09:789 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:09:789 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:11:626 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:12:238 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:12:238 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:13:156 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:13:462 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:14:075 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:14:075 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:14:075 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:15:299 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:15:911 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:15:911 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:15:911 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:17:442 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:17:748 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:17:748 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:19:279 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:19:279 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:19:891 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:19:891 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:19:891 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:20:809 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:20:809 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:22:034 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:22:034 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:22:952 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:23:258 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:23:258 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:24:483 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:24:789 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:25:095 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:25:095 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:26:320 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:26:320 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:26:932 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:26:932 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:27:544 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:27:544 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:28:769 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:29:075 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:29:381 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:29:993 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:30:605 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:31:218 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:31:524 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:31:830 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:31:830 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:33:054 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:33:054 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:33:054 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:34:891 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:35:197 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:35:503 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:35:503 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:36:728 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:37:340 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:37:646 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:37:952 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:37:952 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:38:871 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:38:871 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:38:871 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:40:401 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:41:013 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:41:626 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:41:932 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:42:238 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:42:238 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:43:462 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:43:769 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:43:769 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:43:769 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:44:687 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:44:687 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:44:687 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:45:911 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:46:524 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:47:136 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:47:748 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:47:748 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:47:748 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:49:585 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:50:197 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:50:809 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:51:422 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:52:034 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:52:340 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:52:646 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:52:646 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:53:565 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:53:871 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:54:483 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:54:483 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:55:707 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:55:707 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:56:932 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:57:544 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:57:544 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:58:156 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:58:462 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:58:769 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:58:769 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:59:993 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:00:605 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:00:605 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:01:830 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:02:442 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:03:054 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:03:360 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:03:667 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:03:667 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:04:585 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:04:585 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:05:503 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:08:565 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:09:177 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:09:483 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:09:789 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:10:401 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:10:401 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:11:320 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:11:626 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:11:626 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:12:850 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:13:462 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:14:075 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:14:381 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:14:687 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:14:687 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:15:911 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:16:524 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:16:524 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:17:748 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:054 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:360 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:973 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:18:973 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:19:585 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:19:585 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:20:809 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:21:116 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:21:422 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:21:422 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:22:646 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:22:646 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:23:258 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:23:258 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:24:483 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:25:095 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:25:707 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:26:320 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:26:320 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:26:932 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:26:932 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:28:156 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:28:769 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:381 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:993 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:29:993 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:29:993 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:31:830 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:32:136 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:32:442 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:32:442 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:33:667 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:34:279 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:34:891 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:35:503 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:36:116 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:36:422 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:36:728 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:36:728 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:37:952 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:38:565 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:39:177 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:39:789 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:40:401 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:40:401 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:41:013 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:41:013 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:41:932 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:42:238 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:42:238 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:43:462 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:44:075 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:44:687 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:44:687 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:46:218 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:48:360 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:48:973 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:49:279 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:49:279 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:50:197 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:50:809 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:51:422 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:034 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:340 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:646 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:53:258 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:53:258 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:53:871 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:53:871 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:54:789 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:55:095 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:55:095 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:55:095 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:56:932 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:57:544 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:58:156 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:58:769 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:59:075 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:59:381 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:59:993 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:59:993 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:01:218 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:01:218 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
02:01:218 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:02:748 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
02:03:054 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:03:054 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:03:667 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:03:667 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:04:891 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
02:05:503 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
02:06:116 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
02:06:728 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
02:07:034 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
02:07:034 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).


[With You!]
Snapping
00:08:565 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:08:565 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:09:483 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:09:789 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:10:095 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:10:095 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:11:013 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:11:626 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:11:626 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:11:626 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:13:156 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:13:462 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:13:462 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:14:381 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:14:687 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:14:993 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:14:993 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:15:911 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:16:830 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:17:136 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:17:136 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:17:748 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:17:748 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:17:748 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:19:279 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:19:585 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:19:891 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:20:197 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:20:197 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:20:809 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:20:809 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:21:728 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:22:034 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:22:034 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:22:952 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:23:258 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:23:258 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:23:258 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:24:789 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:25:095 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:25:401 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:25:707 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:25:707 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:26:626 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:26:626 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:27:238 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:27:238 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:27:850 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:27:850 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:29:075 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:29:228 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:29:381 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:29:687 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:29:687 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:30:911 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:31:218 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:31:218 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:31:830 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:32:136 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:32:136 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:32:748 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:33:054 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:33:054 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:33:973 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:34:279 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:34:279 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:35:197 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:35:197 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:35:809 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:35:809 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:36:422 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:36:422 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:37:034 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:37:187 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:37:340 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:37:340 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:38:564 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:38:871 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:39:024 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:39:177 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:39:177 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:40:095 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:40:401 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:40:401 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:41:320 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:41:320 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:41:932 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:42:238 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:42:238 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:42:850 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:42:850 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:43:769 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:44:075 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:44:075 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:44:993 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:45:146 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:45:299 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:45:299 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:46:218 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:46:218 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:46:218 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:47:136 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:47:136 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:48:054 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:48:207 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:48:360 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:48:360 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:49:279 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:49:585 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:49:585 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:50:503 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:50:503 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:51:116 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:51:269 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:51:422 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:51:422 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:52:340 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:52:646 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:52:952 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
00:53:258 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
00:53:565 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:53:718 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:53:871 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:53:871 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:54:483 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:54:483 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:55:095 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:55:095 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:55:095 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:56:626 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:56:779 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
00:56:932 (8) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:56:932 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:57:850 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:57:850 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:58:462 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:58:769 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:58:769 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:59:687 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:59:993 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:59:993 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:59:993 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:01:524 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:01:524 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:02:136 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:02:442 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:02:442 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:02:442 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:03:360 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:03:513 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:03:667 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:03:667 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:04:585 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:04:891 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:04:891 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:05:503 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:05:503 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:06:728 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:07:034 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:07:034 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:07:646 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:07:952 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:08:258 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:08:411 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:08:564 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:08:871 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:08:871 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:09:483 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:09:483 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:10:095 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:10:401 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:10:707 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:10:860 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:11:013 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:11:013 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:11:932 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:12:238 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:12:238 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:12:850 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:12:850 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:13:769 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:13:922 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:14:075 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:14:075 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:14:993 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:14:993 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:14:993 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:15:911 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:15:911 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:16:830 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:17:136 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:17:442 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:17:748 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:054 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:207 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:360 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:18:360 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:19:279 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
01:19:585 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:19:585 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:20:503 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:20:503 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:20:503 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:21:422 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:21:728 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:21:881 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:22:034 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:22:034 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:22:952 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:23:258 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:23:258 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:23:871 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:24:177 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:24:330 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:24:483 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:24:483 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:25:707 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:26:013 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:26:013 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:26:626 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:26:626 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:28:156 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:28:462 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:28:769 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:075 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:381 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:687 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:993 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:29:993 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:30:605 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:30:911 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:30:911 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:31:524 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:31:677 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:31:830 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:31:830 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:32:748 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:32:748 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:33:360 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
01:33:667 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:33:667 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:34:279 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:34:585 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:34:585 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:34:585 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:35:503 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:35:656 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:35:809 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:36:116 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:36:116 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:37:034 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:37:340 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:37:340 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:38:258 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:38:564 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:38:564 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:39:330 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:39:483 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
01:39:789 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:39:789 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:39:789 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:41:320 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:41:473 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:41:626 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:41:626 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:42:544 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:42:850 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:42:850 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:42:850 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:43:769 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:44:075 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:44:381 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:44:687 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:44:687 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:45:299 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:45:299 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:45:911 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:46:218 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:46:524 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:46:524 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:47:136 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:47:136 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:47:748 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:48:054 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:48:054 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:48:667 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:48:973 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:48:973 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:49:585 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:49:585 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:50:503 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:50:809 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:51:116 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:51:116 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:51:728 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:51:728 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:52:340 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:493 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:646 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:52:646 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:53:564 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:53:871 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:54:177 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:54:330 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:54:483 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:54:483 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:55:095 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:55:095 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:56:013 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
01:56:320 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:56:320 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:56:932 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:56:932 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:57:544 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:57:544 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:58:156 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:58:462 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:58:769 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:58:922 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:59:075 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:59:381 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:59:381 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:00:299 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
02:00:605 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
02:00:911 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:00:911 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:02:442 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
02:02:748 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:02:748 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:03:973 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
02:04:279 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:04:279 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:05:197 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
02:05:503 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
02:05:809 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:05:809 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:06:422 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
02:06:728 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
02:07:034 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
02:07:034 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
Last edited by DingGGu , edited 1 time in total.
DingGGu
305 posts
Joined January 2011
DingGGu
no kds. this is real mod

[Alone]
  1. Cool diffs! no more mod.
[With You!]
01:32:738 (7) - move x:196 y:340
then, 01:33:350 (8) - this is your mind.

01:36:106 (1) - move up one grid.
01:37:330 (3) - more wave on slider. like this

01:45:901 (3) - move x:16 y:216
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Thanks for modding :3

Fixed those problems ~
[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
[Luxord]
Hey there!

From my queue :3

[General]
Nothing to see.

[Alone]
00:08:554 (1) - Move the middle point one grid up to fix the curve.
00:58:146 (2,3) - You could put those in a way they to connect the sliders with a curve like that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692807
(Not the best try ever, you got my point I guess)
01:14:677 (3,4,5) - Fix the slider curves and make them more symmetrical ._.

[With you]
00:13:146 (3) - The distance is not the same between the two sliders and they look like they are not symmetrical .-.
00:33:044 (6) - Fix the curve - Use the approach circle of the next circle for help :P
01:16:820 (5,1,2,3,4) - Those could look much better, no?
Like this for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692822
01:28:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The sixth note is not placed correct and the shape looks wrong ;3;
01:29:983 (1,2,3) - The distance is not the same between the two sliders and they look like they are not symmetrical .-.
01:30:901 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692825 ? o=

Nothing else


The song is very nice, good work and I wish you good luck :) I'll shoot a Star :3
Lapis-
407 posts
Joined June 2011
Lapis-
Mod queue request!


Alone

01:08:555 (4) - Snap this to 0.7X to keep consistency?

With You!

00:29:218 (2) I don't think you need this 1/4 here, I suggest deleting it.
01:03:350 (4) Not needed circle here, I think you should delete this. There is no audible noise in the song for this circle to be here.
01:07:942 (3) Move this circle to the blue tick before it?
01:10:850 (2) Not needed
01:39:320 (6) ^
01:58:759 (4) I think a silder for 4,5,6 works better than circles.





Sorry for short mod. GL!
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Thanks For modding you two :3

Fixed everything~
Foxxer_old
Foxxer_old
Very good beatmap. Small mod.

With you!

02:03:963 (4,5) - You can change those notes to some like this:



Good Luck~
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
ok :3

Thanks for modding~
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,530 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
Would there be more difficulties?
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette

neonat wrote:

Would there be more difficulties?
No, I don't think so o.o
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
mod time!!

[Alone]
00:30:595 - From here to almost the kiai time, please follow the same clap pattern you have going on the other diff. So on every second white tick should be a clap, not on every 4th tick.
01:49:269 (3) - This slider could be placed a bit better. Try this so it flows to the next circle: http://puu.sh/2vH4u

[With You!]
00:10:085 (4) - It would fit much more better if it were a hit circle then a 1/2 slider. So like so: http://puu.sh/2vHZD
00:38:861 (2,3,4) - Would be a better transition if the stream part was at an angel just like at this part 00:48:044 (1,2,3) -
01:18:044 (4,5,6) - Oddly positioned. Try to match it to this: http://puu.sh/2vIlh
01:27:840 (5,6,1) - Not good to have a new combo at the end of a stream like here. Place the new combo at (2) instead so you go along with the vocals.
01:52:330 (5,6,7) - Again like before try to have the stream part angled.
01:58:759 (3,4,5) - Same as above

[Final Comments]
Go for rank!!! Seems all good to be really.
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Thanks For modding Weez :3

Fixed everything~
Nemis
847 posts
Joined May 2012
Nemis
[Alone]
00:49:575 (1) - Move this beat one square up in the tiny grid to stack it on 00:47:126 (3) -
00:54:473 (1,2) - Fix this blanket
01:07:942 (3) - There isn't a clap, remove it
01:29:983 (4) - I suggest to fix this form
SPOILER
02:07:024 (1) - This spinner should start at 02:07:177 (1) - since the voce starts here

[With You]
00:22:024 (2,4) - I suggest to fix this blanket a bit
00:29:065 (1,2,3) - Fix this blanket
00:56:922 (7,1) - Fix this blanket
01:02:432 (3,4,5,6) - You should fix this blanket too
01:26:003 (2,3) - Another blanket to fix
02:07:024 (1) - This spinner should start at 02:07:177 (1) - since the voce starts 00:19:269 (1) - here
00:19:269 (1) - Remove this new combo ad move 00:21:718 (1) - this one 00:23:248 (4) - here
Nice map but I suggest to review the new combos in the hard difficulty, a lot of them start on random elements
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
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Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Thanks Nemis for your mod :3

Fixed everything~
Kitsuneko
709 posts
Joined June 2010
Kitsuneko
Hi Sekai-nyan
from ＼( 'ω')／Kitsuneko's Modding Queue＼('ω' )／

General



  1. "Conan" to tag behind "Meitantei" for Japanese search "Meitantei Conan".

ALONE


  • Setting

  1. Clear
Hitsounding

  1. 01:46:514 (4) - Normal-hit is better. Probably just are forgot it.
Mapping

  1. 00:38:861 (4) - Inside of the slider to top

With You!


  • Setting

  1. Clear
Hitsounding

  1. Fine
Mapping

  1. 01:49:575 (4) - Slider end at 01:49:881, then replace a note to 01:50:187?

There is no need to say more, Go rank~
btw BG and Diff name are nice idea good job.


Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Thanks for modding Kitsuneko >w< Fixed everything~
Aurele
osu! Alumni
7,410 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
MAT request on #modreqs.

General
Both backgrounds are alright;The timing is perfect;The metadatas (Artist, Title, Source, Tags) are consistent in every difficulties.

Perfect!

Alone

Flows/Emplacements of the objects
To make sure there's no random jumps, has great flows, do not have random objects placed on the timeline that doesn't fit with the song;
  1. 00:26:922 - I don't feel like this slider is following something on the song. I meant that, there's basically nothing on 00:27:228 - that you can emphasize. I suggest you to replace this slider by a simple circle placed where the slider was before.
  2. 00:40:391 (1,2) - Between these circles we can easily hear the singer's voice here. I personally think it would sound better if you were replacing both of these circles by a slider, which you could emphasize the vocal.
  3. 00:56:922 (3) - With the flow of the previous two sliders, I thought this circle would have followed it if it was at the left of the slider (2)'s end. That would make a better flow in here with those two sliders.
    Example
  4. 01:46:208 - This circle is not needed here, as far as I know. It should be there because it isn't emphasizing anything, there's no obvious sound here. But actually, if you delete this circle you could also add one to 01:48:044 - . This place is better to have an extra circle, so it will helps the next circle to emphasize the vocals.
  5. 01:49:269 (3) - This slider is not sounding pretty well, to be honest, it feels like it's either too short or even, sounding rude. I suggest you to, move this slider to 01:48:963 - and add another slider that will starts on 01:49:575 - and will finish on 01:50:187 - .
Hitsounds
In case there's inconsistencies with your hitsounds, useless hitsounds. I may also suggest you some things to make your hitsounds better;
  1. 00:24:779 (2) - Just because of that whistle, it is breaking the whole whistle consistency and it sounds.. very bad. I suggest you to delete it and add a whistle on the previous circle to keep the consistency!
  2. 00:26:310 (4,5) - Same with theses, delete the whistle at the end of the slider 4 and add one at the beginning of the slider 1. By doing this, the consistency will be kept.
  3. 00:50:799 (3) - This circle has no hitsounds, which sounds odd but also, this circle is placed on an upbeat, which is more odd since you should have added a clap to keep the consistency.
  4. 00:58:146 - Add a clap, to keep the consistency with your previous objects.
New combos
New combos are one of the things I think it's important for a beatmap. Combos shouldn't be overused, have too much objects in a combo and should fit with the song;
  1. 00:11:616 (3) - Since she starts to sing on 00:10:391 - and we can't add new combos to this reverse, I think you should be adding a new combo here to follow the vocals.
  2. 00:20:799 (3) - You should be mostly doing the same thing here with your previous combos, it would mostly isolate the two previous objects together to create the same thing as 00:14:065 (1,2) - .
  3. 00:26:310 (4) - I suggest you to add a new combo here, you can do what ever you want, that's only a suggestion. I personally would add one since there's a space right before it, and it would do like previously.
  4. 00:38:861 (4) - You could also make like I suggested you on 00:20:799 (3) - , but since it's really close to the previous notes, you have the final choose.
  5. 01:02:432 - This circle is placed on a big downbeat, which you normally add new combos. Don't you think it would be better if you added a new combo here to match with the next objects?
  6. 01:28:146 (1) - Delete that new combo and add a new combo on 01:29:371 (3) - , it would be following the vocals and the song here.. Also, with that suggestion, I highly suggest you to delete the new combo on 01:31:820 (1) - , readd a new combo on 01:34:269 (5) - and delete the NC on 01:35:493 (1) -
  7. 01:38:554 (1,2) - Basically, if you followed the song+vocal, you wouldn't have added a new combo on 01:38:555 - . So actually, I would like you to delete the new combo and after that, add a NC to the next circle.
  8. 01:41:922 (1) - Aahh, delete that new combo, it's following the previous objects
  9. 01:44:065 (8,1) - Do like what I said two points above.

With You!

Flows/Emplacements of the objects
To make sure there's no random jumps, has great flows, do not have random objects placed on the timeline that doesn't fit with the song;
  1. 00:13:146 (3) - The spacing is not the same as the previous notes, which breaks the spacing consistency. I would like you to simply replace the next slider to make it the same spacing as the previous objects. Also, it would make a blanket with the circle in the middle D':
  2. 00:22:942 (8) - This circle could be following the previous slider's flow by moving it forward instead of placing it below the slider. Also, with the next slider, you could keep the blanket. So it would do that: (Make sure to move the next objects if you don't want to create overlaps and spacing inconsistencies.)
    Example
  3. 00:29:677 (3) - I suggest you to make a better blanket here, you have moved this slider somewhere else to make a blanket with the two previous circles, but the slider is not formed to make a nice and neat blanket. So, I suggest you to reform it, a bit.
  4. 00:39:014 (3) - I am wondering about the spacing of these objects.. they seems to be.. inconsistent?
  5. 01:28:452 (1,2,3,4,5) - With those five circles, would you mind on making a cute star form or something similar? It would be very awesome!
  6. 02:06:412 (2,3) - I don't like how the second circle is placed above the previous slider, it would be looking and playing better if this circle and the next one was following the flow of the previous slider.
    Example
Hitsounds
In case there's inconsistencies with your hitsounds, useless hitsounds. I may also suggest you some things to make your hitsounds better;
  1. 00:37:330 - Was it a mistake or it was intended? There's missing a clap here, which breaks the clap consistency and can be sounding weird if someone is focusing on the hitsounds. (There's also a clap on "Alone"!) Keep the same consistency by also adding a clap on 00:39:779 - .
  2. 00:42:228 - Your clap consistency is breaking on every second upbeats! That's very weird. On "Alone", everything's alright. You should keep the same consistency. You should review that. It's doing this until 00:56:922 - , but after that, it keeps on not having claps on the upbeats.
  3. 01:58:146 - It should also have a clap here.
New combos
New combos are one of the things I think it's important for a beatmap. Combos shouldn't be overused, have too much objects in a combo and should fit with the song;
  1. 00:55:085 (5) - A new combo would be good here, it would perfectly fit with the vocals and the combo is currently a bit long, so why not adding a new combo?
  2. 00:59:983 (5) - New combo, delete the combo on the next object. It's just to follow the vocals, in general.
  3. 01:59:371 (1) - Since both previous and this combos are quite short, delete the new combo.

(ノ^_^)ノ
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Thanks For modding Gabe :3

Fixed mostly everything in your mod <3
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
I'm from my queue
checked and nothing wrong, a nice soft song. bubbled
but I personally don't think this song is finished, it sounds like there'll be a refrain after the end
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Thanks for the bubble wcx <3
Aurele
osu! Alumni
7,410 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
LOOOL, WCX
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Maybe it's a bit late, but I just realized you did this, and felt really surprised. This is the best thing someone did for me in this game <3

Everything is okay, don't be sad please, you already know you're one of my best friends here and I love you <3.

I love this song, thanks for making this for me, really.
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette

Darksonic wrote:

Maybe it's a bit late, but I just realized you did this, and felt really surprised. This is the best thing someone did for me in this game <3

Everything is okay, don't be sad please, you already know you're one of my best friends here and I love you <3.

I love this song, thanks for making this for me, really.
Thanks for the nice words Bruno <3

I'm glad you like this song and map ><
Aurele
osu! Alumni
7,410 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
You guys are so cute >v<!!

/runs.
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette

Gabe wrote:

You guys are so cute >v<!!

/runs.
Gabe, bakaaaa!!

/me slaps baka gabe QAQ
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
I smell love around here, can I join? :3
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette

Andrea wrote:

I smell love around here, can I join? :3
Andrea so baka ;w;

No you can't Join because it's not for hentai's !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


/me runs
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Dark_Ai
he can feel love?
huehuehuehue
Enna Alouette
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Enna Alouette
okok enough off topic ;w; ~
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
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Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Sekai-nyan ~ :)



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. 02:07:024 (1) - Snap on 02:07:253 - 1/8,sound much better.

[With You!]


  1. 00:16:973 - Add a note,follow with lyrics.

[Alone]


  1. 01:34:269 (1,2) - Spacing wrong.
  2. 00:39:779 (1,2) - Switch new combo,follow with lyrics.
  3. 01:48:350 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:52:636 (4) - Move to 01:52:942 - sound much better.

OK ~ Relax song/map ~

Call me back ~ ;)
Enna Alouette
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Enna Alouette
Thanks for modding Rika-chan :3

Fixed everything <3
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
OK ~ Looks much better ~

Here you go <3

Aurele
osu! Alumni
7,410 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
YAY RIKAAAAAAAAAAAAA♥
Enna Alouette
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Enna Alouette
Thanks Rika >w</
Lally
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Lally
*w* gratz moekai <3
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke

Lally wrote:

*w* gratz moekai <3
BrokenArrow
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BrokenArrow
Congratulations.
[Epicz]
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[Epicz]
gratz
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
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Irreversible
haha gz! :D just saw your gz on my thread :P
Enna Alouette
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Enna Alouette
Thanks everyone ></ <3
Dark_Ai
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Joined July 2010
Dark_Ai

BrokenArrow wrote:

Congratulations.
Kyouren
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Kyouren
gratz!!!! :) :) :) :) :)
HeatKai
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Joined April 2010
HeatKai

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Darksonic wrote:

Maybe it's a bit late, but I just realized you did this, and felt really surprised. This is the best thing someone did for me in this game <3

Everything is okay, don't be sad please, you already know you're one of my best friends here and I love you <3.

I love this song, thanks for making this for me, really.
Thanks for the nice words Bruno <3

I'm glad you like this song and map ><

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grats
NoJoke_old_1
NoJoke_old_1
I'm defiantly going to try this out! It looks great! :D
Rare
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Joined August 2010
Rare
gratz~!
10nya
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10nya
grats sekai-san :3
Lapis-
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Lapis-
Congrats <3!
Enna Alouette
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Enna Alouette
omg o.o

Thanks everyone for your gratz <3
-Neipezi
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-Neipezi
w0w congrats :D
hoLysoup
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Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
oh~! nice song :D
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