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Niko-nyan
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Konei
Hello, Sekai :3

From my Queue, you know lol. omg, flyable heart bg <333


[General]

  1. In fact, I'd prefer Slidertickrate 1 since the song is pretty quiet and that ticking sound doesn't fit into a mayor part of the song.

  2. I got +2 on the offset, lol. See how that works for you.

  3. Just a suggestion, but wouldn't it be cooler with Alone was harder than With you? :>

[Alone]

  1. Volume is a bit too loud to fit the song for my taste. Maybe try to reduce it like ~10 % everywhere?
  2. 00:09:789 (2) - You may want to make this look more straight by moving the end point some grids up, that would work visually better in my opinion.
  3. 00:15:911 (3) - This kinda shouts for a NC in my opinion lol. Piano plays heavy note.
  4. 00:19:279 (3) - If you followed above, add one here to be consistent.
  5. 00:24:789 (2) - Hm, add a whistle to follow the piano? Sounds empty.
  6. 00:37:340 (1,2) - Since it sounds empty here, add a whistle on 1 or 2, that would be cool.
  7. 00:38:871 (4) - Whistle on Slider's start sounds great in my opinion. Also would be consistent with 00:43:769 (2) -
  8. 00:47:136 (3) - Hm, there is no clap sound in the music, according to this and you dont have a pattern for your clap which you are following you should remove this.
  9. 00:49:585 (1) - As this is noticeable in the game, please correct the stack with 3.
  10. 00:58:462 (3) - Add a whistle to emphasize the piano?
  11. 01:09:789 (3) - If you added a finish to this, this would have a very cool emphasize! Try it :>
  12. 01:16:524 (5) - Change Slider's end to Normal sampleset to keep hitsounds consistent.

[With you]

  1. 00:17:748 (5) - Add a whistle to the repeat to keep hitsound consistency between difficultys.
  2. 00:31:983 (4) - Hm, this note sounds badly overmaped and a bit meeh, how about removing it?
  3. 00:46:218 (4) - Really nazi, but you can improve this blanket by rotating 4 by -4 degrees.
  4. 01:09:483 (2) - Add a finish to the Sliderend for the same reason as in Alone?
  5. 01:56:320 (1,2) - I highly recommend you to add claps to the end of these Sliders since they are in the music.
  6. 02:03:207 (2) - Sounds really akward in my opinion, just move it to the red tick and shorten it to the white sounds much better in my opinion.


Pretty nice mapset, Sekai :3

Beautiful song, lol, remembers me of a lot of things.
Good luck :>
Topic Starter
Suimya
Fixed everything Thanks for modding Konei :3
Low
hey. taken from #modreqs

[General]
- the offset is late. after trying with a few different offsets, i found that 8555 (-10) was accurate.
- here's a tip for furture mapsets: place NCs on large white ticks for the most part. your NC pattern seems to be inconsistent in a lot of spots, and it seems generally better to add the NCs at the long white ticks since it emphasizes the beginning of a stanza.
- it would be a better idea to end the kiai time at 01:48:963 since the chorus is still going on when you end it.
- in both difficulties, i think it would be a really cool effect if you slowly increased the volume of the last spinner and suddenly silenced it at the end to match the vocals (example). you didn't do anything with the spinner in the Alone difficulty, but in the With You! difficulty you made the volume slowly fall, which I think is inaccurate because the vocals are actually getting louder at that point.

[Alone]
00:14:065 (1) - a whistle at the end of this slider rather than on the repeat of it sounds better and also follows the hitsound pattern you established in the past few objects (a whistle every other white tick).
00:39:779 (5) - place a circle here. the gap of time between 00:38:861 (4) and 00:40:391 (1) seems a bit too long and slightly out of place.
01:05:799 (1) - this spinner here doesn't fit very well. normally, i would suggest to move it forward by two ticks and shorten it, but then the spinner would be too short for a difficulty like this. the best solution would be to map this part out instead
01:22:636 (6) - bring the end of this slider up slightly so it looks like it curves into the next slider more smoothly, like this.
01:46:514 (4,1) - the gap of time between this slider and circle and feels really awkward. adding a circle at 01:47:738 (5) fits well and should easily solve the problem~

[With You!]
00:23:248 (4) - shouldn't there be a whistle at the end of this? it sounds better.
00:37:330 (5) - the hitsounds on this slider feel bland. i think it would be better to stick to what you were doing previously and at a clap to the beginning of it and a normal sampleset to the end of it.
00:52:636 (6) - normal sampleset would sound better here. i don't know why you did something else.
01:04:881 (2) - ^
01:26:616 (3,1) - the gap between these two objects is really long and feels awkward. i'm sure you were trying to create a cool effect, but it doesn't feel like that to me.
02:00:901 (1,2) - this doesn't follow the vocals or the background music very well. i suggest following the vocals in this case closely by using a semi-stream like this.
02:02:738 (1,2) - same as above.

in this difficulty, i feel that the hitsound pattern, especially in the beginning, was inconsistent. for example, there were whistles in place of normal hits and vice versa. also, i think that the random stream triplets are very weird and unnecessary to the map as they don't follow anything in the music. i would advise deleting them (except where it's actually in the music very rarely). that's all for now; good luck.
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks Jacob for your mod :3

Fixed everything~
DingGGu
Hello~ From DingGGu's Modding Queue!

[General]
You have many unsnapped problem. this is unrankable to your map. you should fix it!

+ I think you change offest last mod.
you should move notes when you change offset.

Ctrl + A and handling timeline.

[Alone]
Snapping
00:08:565 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:08:565 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:09:789 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:09:789 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:09:789 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:11:626 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:12:238 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:12:238 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:13:156 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:13:462 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:14:075 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:14:075 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:14:075 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:15:299 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:15:911 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:15:911 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:15:911 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:17:442 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:17:748 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:17:748 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:19:279 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:19:279 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:19:891 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:19:891 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:19:891 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:20:809 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:20:809 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:22:034 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:22:034 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:22:952 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:23:258 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:23:258 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:24:483 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:24:789 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:25:095 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:25:095 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:26:320 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:26:320 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:26:932 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:26:932 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:27:544 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:27:544 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:28:769 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:29:075 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:29:381 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:29:993 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:30:605 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:31:218 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:31:524 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:31:830 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:31:830 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:33:054 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:33:054 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:33:054 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:34:891 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:35:197 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:35:503 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:35:503 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:36:728 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:37:340 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:37:646 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:37:952 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:37:952 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:38:871 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:38:871 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:38:871 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:40:401 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:41:013 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:41:626 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:41:932 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:42:238 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:42:238 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:43:462 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:43:769 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:43:769 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:43:769 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:44:687 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:44:687 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:44:687 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:45:911 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:46:524 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:47:136 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:47:748 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:47:748 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:47:748 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:49:585 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:50:197 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:50:809 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:51:422 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:52:034 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:52:340 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:52:646 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:52:646 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:53:565 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:53:871 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:54:483 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:54:483 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:55:707 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:55:707 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:56:932 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:57:544 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:57:544 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:58:156 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:58:462 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:58:769 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:58:769 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:59:993 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:00:605 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:00:605 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:01:830 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:02:442 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:03:054 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:03:360 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:03:667 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:03:667 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:04:585 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:04:585 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:05:503 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:08:565 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:09:177 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:09:483 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:09:789 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:10:401 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:10:401 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:11:320 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:11:626 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:11:626 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:12:850 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:13:462 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:14:075 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:14:381 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:14:687 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:14:687 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:15:911 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:16:524 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:16:524 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:17:748 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:054 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:360 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:973 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:18:973 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:19:585 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:19:585 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:20:809 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:21:116 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:21:422 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:21:422 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:22:646 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:22:646 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:23:258 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:23:258 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:24:483 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:25:095 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:25:707 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:26:320 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:26:320 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:26:932 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:26:932 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:28:156 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:28:769 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:381 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:993 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:29:993 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:29:993 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:31:830 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:32:136 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:32:442 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:32:442 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:33:667 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:34:279 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:34:891 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:35:503 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:36:116 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:36:422 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:36:728 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:36:728 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:37:952 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:38:565 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:39:177 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:39:789 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:40:401 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:40:401 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:41:013 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:41:013 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:41:932 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:42:238 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:42:238 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:43:462 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:44:075 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:44:687 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:44:687 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:46:218 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:48:360 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:48:973 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:49:279 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:49:279 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:50:197 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:50:809 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:51:422 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:034 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:340 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:646 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:53:258 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:53:258 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:53:871 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:53:871 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:54:789 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:55:095 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:55:095 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:55:095 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:56:932 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:57:544 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:58:156 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:58:769 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:59:075 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:59:381 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:59:993 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:59:993 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:01:218 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:01:218 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
02:01:218 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:02:748 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
02:03:054 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:03:054 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:03:667 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:03:667 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:04:891 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
02:05:503 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
02:06:116 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
02:06:728 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
02:07:034 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
02:07:034 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).


[With You!]
Snapping
00:08:565 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:08:565 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:09:483 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:09:789 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:10:095 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:10:095 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:11:013 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:11:626 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:11:626 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:11:626 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:13:156 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:13:462 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:13:462 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:14:381 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:14:687 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:14:993 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:14:993 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:15:911 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:16:830 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:17:136 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:17:136 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:17:748 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:17:748 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:17:748 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:19:279 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:19:585 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:19:891 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:20:197 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:20:197 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:20:809 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:20:809 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:21:728 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:22:034 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:22:034 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:22:952 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:23:258 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:23:258 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:23:258 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:24:789 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:25:095 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:25:401 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:25:707 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:25:707 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:26:626 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:26:626 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:27:238 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:27:238 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:27:850 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:27:850 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:29:075 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:29:228 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:29:381 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:29:687 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:29:687 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:30:911 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:31:218 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:31:218 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:31:830 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:32:136 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:32:136 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:32:748 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:33:054 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:33:054 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:33:973 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:34:279 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:34:279 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:35:197 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:35:197 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:35:809 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:35:809 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:36:422 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:36:422 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:37:034 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:37:187 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:37:340 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:37:340 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:38:564 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:38:871 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:39:024 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:39:177 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:39:177 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:40:095 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:40:401 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:40:401 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:41:320 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:41:320 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:41:932 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:42:238 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:42:238 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:42:850 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:42:850 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:43:769 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:44:075 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:44:075 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:44:993 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:45:146 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:45:299 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:45:299 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:46:218 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:46:218 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:46:218 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:47:136 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:47:136 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:48:054 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:48:207 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:48:360 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:48:360 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:49:279 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:49:585 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:49:585 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:50:503 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:50:503 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:51:116 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:51:269 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:51:422 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:51:422 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:52:340 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:52:646 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:52:952 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
00:53:258 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
00:53:565 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:53:718 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:53:871 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:53:871 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:54:483 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:54:483 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:55:095 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:55:095 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:55:095 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:56:626 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:56:779 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
00:56:932 (8) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:56:932 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:57:850 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:57:850 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:58:462 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:58:769 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:58:769 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:59:687 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:59:993 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:59:993 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:59:993 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:01:524 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:01:524 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:02:136 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:02:442 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:02:442 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:02:442 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:03:360 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:03:513 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:03:667 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:03:667 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:04:585 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:04:891 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:04:891 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:05:503 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:05:503 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:06:728 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:07:034 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:07:034 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:07:646 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:07:952 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:08:258 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:08:411 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:08:564 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:08:871 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:08:871 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:09:483 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:09:483 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:10:095 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:10:401 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:10:707 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:10:860 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:11:013 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:11:013 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:11:932 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:12:238 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:12:238 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:12:850 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:12:850 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:13:769 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:13:922 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:14:075 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:14:075 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:14:993 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:14:993 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:14:993 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:15:911 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:15:911 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:16:830 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:17:136 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:17:442 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:17:748 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:054 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:207 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:360 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:18:360 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:19:279 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
01:19:585 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:19:585 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:20:503 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:20:503 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:20:503 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:21:422 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:21:728 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:21:881 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:22:034 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:22:034 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:22:952 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:23:258 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:23:258 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:23:871 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:24:177 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:24:330 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:24:483 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:24:483 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:25:707 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:26:013 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:26:013 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:26:626 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:26:626 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:28:156 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:28:462 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:28:769 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:075 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:381 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:687 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:993 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:29:993 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:30:605 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:30:911 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:30:911 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:31:524 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:31:677 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:31:830 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:31:830 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:32:748 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:32:748 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:33:360 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
01:33:667 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:33:667 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:34:279 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:34:585 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:34:585 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:34:585 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:35:503 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:35:656 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:35:809 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:36:116 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:36:116 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:37:034 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:37:340 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:37:340 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:38:258 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:38:564 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:38:564 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:39:330 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:39:483 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
01:39:789 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:39:789 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:39:789 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:41:320 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:41:473 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:41:626 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:41:626 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:42:544 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:42:850 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:42:850 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:42:850 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:43:769 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:44:075 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:44:381 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:44:687 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:44:687 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:45:299 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:45:299 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:45:911 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:46:218 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:46:524 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:46:524 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:47:136 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:47:136 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:47:748 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:48:054 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:48:054 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:48:667 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:48:973 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:48:973 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:49:585 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:49:585 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:50:503 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:50:809 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:51:116 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:51:116 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:51:728 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:51:728 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:52:340 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:493 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:646 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:52:646 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:53:564 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:53:871 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:54:177 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:54:330 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:54:483 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:54:483 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:55:095 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:55:095 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:56:013 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
01:56:320 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:56:320 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:56:932 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:56:932 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:57:544 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:57:544 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:58:156 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:58:462 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:58:769 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:58:922 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:59:075 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:59:381 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:59:381 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:00:299 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
02:00:605 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
02:00:911 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:00:911 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:02:442 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
02:02:748 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:02:748 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:03:973 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
02:04:279 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:04:279 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:05:197 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
02:05:503 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
02:05:809 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:05:809 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:06:422 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
02:06:728 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
02:07:034 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
02:07:034 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
DingGGu
no kds. this is real mod

[Alone]
  1. Cool diffs! no more mod.
[With You!]
01:32:738 (7) - move x:196 y:340
then, 01:33:350 (8) - this is your mind.

01:36:106 (1) - move up one grid.
01:37:330 (3) - more wave on slider. like this

01:45:901 (3) - move x:16 y:216
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for modding :3

Fixed those problems ~
[Luxord]
Hey there!

From my queue :3

[General]
Nothing to see.

[Alone]
00:08:554 (1) - Move the middle point one grid up to fix the curve.
00:58:146 (2,3) - You could put those in a way they to connect the sliders with a curve like that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692807
(Not the best try ever, you got my point I guess)
01:14:677 (3,4,5) - Fix the slider curves and make them more symmetrical ._.

[With you]
00:13:146 (3) - The distance is not the same between the two sliders and they look like they are not symmetrical .-.
00:33:044 (6) - Fix the curve - Use the approach circle of the next circle for help :P
01:16:820 (5,1,2,3,4) - Those could look much better, no?
Like this for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692822
01:28:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The sixth note is not placed correct and the shape looks wrong ;3;
01:29:983 (1,2,3) - The distance is not the same between the two sliders and they look like they are not symmetrical .-.
01:30:901 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692825 ? o=

Nothing else


The song is very nice, good work and I wish you good luck :) I'll shoot a Star :3
Lapis-
Mod queue request!


Alone

01:08:555 (4) - Snap this to 0.7X to keep consistency?

With You!

00:29:218 (2) I don't think you need this 1/4 here, I suggest deleting it.
01:03:350 (4) Not needed circle here, I think you should delete this. There is no audible noise in the song for this circle to be here.
01:07:942 (3) Move this circle to the blue tick before it?
01:10:850 (2) Not needed
01:39:320 (6) ^
01:58:759 (4) I think a silder for 4,5,6 works better than circles.





Sorry for short mod. GL!
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks For modding you two :3

Fixed everything~
Foxxer_old
Very good beatmap. Small mod.

With you!

02:03:963 (4,5) - You can change those notes to some like this:



Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Suimya
ok :3

Thanks for modding~
neonat
Would there be more difficulties?
Topic Starter
Suimya

neonat wrote:

Would there be more difficulties?
No, I don't think so o.o
Weez
mod time!!

[Alone]
00:30:595 - From here to almost the kiai time, please follow the same clap pattern you have going on the other diff. So on every second white tick should be a clap, not on every 4th tick.
01:49:269 (3) - This slider could be placed a bit better. Try this so it flows to the next circle: http://puu.sh/2vH4u

[With You!]
00:10:085 (4) - It would fit much more better if it were a hit circle then a 1/2 slider. So like so: http://puu.sh/2vHZD
00:38:861 (2,3,4) - Would be a better transition if the stream part was at an angel just like at this part 00:48:044 (1,2,3) -
01:18:044 (4,5,6) - Oddly positioned. Try to match it to this: http://puu.sh/2vIlh
01:27:840 (5,6,1) - Not good to have a new combo at the end of a stream like here. Place the new combo at (2) instead so you go along with the vocals.
01:52:330 (5,6,7) - Again like before try to have the stream part angled.
01:58:759 (3,4,5) - Same as above

[Final Comments]
Go for rank!!! Seems all good to be really.
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks For modding Weez :3

Fixed everything~
Nemis
[Alone]
00:49:575 (1) - Move this beat one square up in the tiny grid to stack it on 00:47:126 (3) -
00:54:473 (1,2) - Fix this blanket
01:07:942 (3) - There isn't a clap, remove it
01:29:983 (4) - I suggest to fix this form
02:07:024 (1) - This spinner should start at 02:07:177 (1) - since the voce starts here

[With You]
00:22:024 (2,4) - I suggest to fix this blanket a bit
00:29:065 (1,2,3) - Fix this blanket
00:56:922 (7,1) - Fix this blanket
01:02:432 (3,4,5,6) - You should fix this blanket too
01:26:003 (2,3) - Another blanket to fix
02:07:024 (1) - This spinner should start at 02:07:177 (1) - since the voce starts 00:19:269 (1) - here
00:19:269 (1) - Remove this new combo ad move 00:21:718 (1) - this one 00:23:248 (4) - here
Nice map but I suggest to review the new combos in the hard difficulty, a lot of them start on random elements
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks Nemis for your mod :3

Fixed everything~
Kitsuneko
Hi Sekai-nyan
from \( 'ω')/Kitsuneko's Modding Queue\('ω' )/

General



  1. "Conan" to tag behind "Meitantei" for Japanese search "Meitantei Conan".

ALONE


  • Setting

  1. Clear
Hitsounding

  1. 01:46:514 (4) - Normal-hit is better. Probably just are forgot it.
Mapping

  1. 00:38:861 (4) - Inside of the slider to top

With You!


  • Setting

  1. Clear
Hitsounding

  1. Fine
Mapping

  1. 01:49:575 (4) - Slider end at 01:49:881, then replace a note to 01:50:187?

There is no need to say more, Go rank~
btw BG and Diff name are nice idea good job.


Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for modding Kitsuneko >w< Fixed everything~
Aurele
MAT request on #modreqs.

General
Both backgrounds are alright;The timing is perfect;The metadatas (Artist, Title, Source, Tags) are consistent in every difficulties.

Perfect!

Alone

Flows/Emplacements of the objects
To make sure there's no random jumps, has great flows, do not have random objects placed on the timeline that doesn't fit with the song;
  1. 00:26:922 - I don't feel like this slider is following something on the song. I meant that, there's basically nothing on 00:27:228 - that you can emphasize. I suggest you to replace this slider by a simple circle placed where the slider was before.
  2. 00:40:391 (1,2) - Between these circles we can easily hear the singer's voice here. I personally think it would sound better if you were replacing both of these circles by a slider, which you could emphasize the vocal.
  3. 00:56:922 (3) - With the flow of the previous two sliders, I thought this circle would have followed it if it was at the left of the slider (2)'s end. That would make a better flow in here with those two sliders.
  4. 01:46:208 - This circle is not needed here, as far as I know. It should be there because it isn't emphasizing anything, there's no obvious sound here. But actually, if you delete this circle you could also add one to 01:48:044 - . This place is better to have an extra circle, so it will helps the next circle to emphasize the vocals.
  5. 01:49:269 (3) - This slider is not sounding pretty well, to be honest, it feels like it's either too short or even, sounding rude. I suggest you to, move this slider to 01:48:963 - and add another slider that will starts on 01:49:575 - and will finish on 01:50:187 - .
Hitsounds
In case there's inconsistencies with your hitsounds, useless hitsounds. I may also suggest you some things to make your hitsounds better;
  1. 00:24:779 (2) - Just because of that whistle, it is breaking the whole whistle consistency and it sounds.. very bad. I suggest you to delete it and add a whistle on the previous circle to keep the consistency!
  2. 00:26:310 (4,5) - Same with theses, delete the whistle at the end of the slider 4 and add one at the beginning of the slider 1. By doing this, the consistency will be kept.
  3. 00:50:799 (3) - This circle has no hitsounds, which sounds odd but also, this circle is placed on an upbeat, which is more odd since you should have added a clap to keep the consistency.
  4. 00:58:146 - Add a clap, to keep the consistency with your previous objects.
New combos
New combos are one of the things I think it's important for a beatmap. Combos shouldn't be overused, have too much objects in a combo and should fit with the song;
  1. 00:11:616 (3) - Since she starts to sing on 00:10:391 - and we can't add new combos to this reverse, I think you should be adding a new combo here to follow the vocals.
  2. 00:20:799 (3) - You should be mostly doing the same thing here with your previous combos, it would mostly isolate the two previous objects together to create the same thing as 00:14:065 (1,2) - .
  3. 00:26:310 (4) - I suggest you to add a new combo here, you can do what ever you want, that's only a suggestion. I personally would add one since there's a space right before it, and it would do like previously.
  4. 00:38:861 (4) - You could also make like I suggested you on 00:20:799 (3) - , but since it's really close to the previous notes, you have the final choose.
  5. 01:02:432 - This circle is placed on a big downbeat, which you normally add new combos. Don't you think it would be better if you added a new combo here to match with the next objects?
  6. 01:28:146 (1) - Delete that new combo and add a new combo on 01:29:371 (3) - , it would be following the vocals and the song here.. Also, with that suggestion, I highly suggest you to delete the new combo on 01:31:820 (1) - , readd a new combo on 01:34:269 (5) - and delete the NC on 01:35:493 (1) -
  7. 01:38:554 (1,2) - Basically, if you followed the song+vocal, you wouldn't have added a new combo on 01:38:555 - . So actually, I would like you to delete the new combo and after that, add a NC to the next circle.
  8. 01:41:922 (1) - Aahh, delete that new combo, it's following the previous objects
  9. 01:44:065 (8,1) - Do like what I said two points above.

With You!

Flows/Emplacements of the objects
To make sure there's no random jumps, has great flows, do not have random objects placed on the timeline that doesn't fit with the song;
  1. 00:13:146 (3) - The spacing is not the same as the previous notes, which breaks the spacing consistency. I would like you to simply replace the next slider to make it the same spacing as the previous objects. Also, it would make a blanket with the circle in the middle D':
  2. 00:22:942 (8) - This circle could be following the previous slider's flow by moving it forward instead of placing it below the slider. Also, with the next slider, you could keep the blanket. So it would do that: (Make sure to move the next objects if you don't want to create overlaps and spacing inconsistencies.)
  3. 00:29:677 (3) - I suggest you to make a better blanket here, you have moved this slider somewhere else to make a blanket with the two previous circles, but the slider is not formed to make a nice and neat blanket. So, I suggest you to reform it, a bit.
  4. 00:39:014 (3) - I am wondering about the spacing of these objects.. they seems to be.. inconsistent?
  5. 01:28:452 (1,2,3,4,5) - With those five circles, would you mind on making a cute star form or something similar? It would be very awesome!
  6. 02:06:412 (2,3) - I don't like how the second circle is placed above the previous slider, it would be looking and playing better if this circle and the next one was following the flow of the previous slider.
Hitsounds
In case there's inconsistencies with your hitsounds, useless hitsounds. I may also suggest you some things to make your hitsounds better;
  1. 00:37:330 - Was it a mistake or it was intended? There's missing a clap here, which breaks the clap consistency and can be sounding weird if someone is focusing on the hitsounds. (There's also a clap on "Alone"!) Keep the same consistency by also adding a clap on 00:39:779 - .
  2. 00:42:228 - Your clap consistency is breaking on every second upbeats! That's very weird. On "Alone", everything's alright. You should keep the same consistency. You should review that. It's doing this until 00:56:922 - , but after that, it keeps on not having claps on the upbeats.
  3. 01:58:146 - It should also have a clap here.
New combos
New combos are one of the things I think it's important for a beatmap. Combos shouldn't be overused, have too much objects in a combo and should fit with the song;
  1. 00:55:085 (5) - A new combo would be good here, it would perfectly fit with the vocals and the combo is currently a bit long, so why not adding a new combo?
  2. 00:59:983 (5) - New combo, delete the combo on the next object. It's just to follow the vocals, in general.
  3. 01:59:371 (1) - Since both previous and this combos are quite short, delete the new combo.

(ノ^_^)ノ
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks For modding Gabe :3

Fixed mostly everything in your mod <3
wcx19911123
I'm from my queue
checked and nothing wrong, a nice soft song. bubbled
but I personally don't think this song is finished, it sounds like there'll be a refrain after the end
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for the bubble wcx <3
Aurele
LOOOL, WCX
Darksonic
Maybe it's a bit late, but I just realized you did this, and felt really surprised. This is the best thing someone did for me in this game <3

Everything is okay, don't be sad please, you already know you're one of my best friends here and I love you <3.

I love this song, thanks for making this for me, really.
Topic Starter
Suimya

Darksonic wrote:

Maybe it's a bit late, but I just realized you did this, and felt really surprised. This is the best thing someone did for me in this game <3

Everything is okay, don't be sad please, you already know you're one of my best friends here and I love you <3.

I love this song, thanks for making this for me, really.
Thanks for the nice words Bruno <3

I'm glad you like this song and map ><
Aurele
You guys are so cute >v<!!

/runs.
Topic Starter
Suimya

Gabe wrote:

You guys are so cute >v<!!

/runs.
Gabe, bakaaaa!!

/me slaps baka gabe QAQ
Andrea
I smell love around here, can I join? :3
Topic Starter
Suimya

Andrea wrote:

I smell love around here, can I join? :3
Andrea so baka ;w;

No you can't Join because it's not for hentai's !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


/me runs
Dark_Ai
he can feel love?
huehuehuehue
Topic Starter
Suimya
okok enough off topic ;w; ~
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Sekai-nyan ~ :)



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. 02:07:024 (1) - Snap on 02:07:253 - 1/8,sound much better.

[With You!]


  1. 00:16:973 - Add a note,follow with lyrics.

[Alone]


  1. 01:34:269 (1,2) - Spacing wrong.
  2. 00:39:779 (1,2) - Switch new combo,follow with lyrics.
  3. 01:48:350 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:52:636 (4) - Move to 01:52:942 - sound much better.

OK ~ Relax song/map ~

Call me back ~
;)
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for modding Rika-chan :3

Fixed everything <3
Kawayi Rika
OK ~ Looks much better ~

Here you go <3


Aurele
YAY RIKAAAAAAAAAAAAA♥
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks Rika >w</
Lally
*w* gratz moekai <3
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