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V.K. - Darkness

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Niva
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Niva
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, May 17, 2013 at 11:49:00 AM

Artist: V.K.
Title: Darkness
Source: Cytus
Tags: nivalis katty pie chapter 4 ch4 v.k kloudhsu
BPM: 95.6
Filesize: 2279kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.67 stars, 100 notes)
  2. Hard (4.96 stars, 247 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 372 notes)
  4. Pie's Normal (3.6 stars, 133 notes)
Download: V.K. - Darkness
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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@Acyl please stop reminding me of this map's existence aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

old map description (including attributions and extras)
...experimental mapping orz (trying a bit different mapping style) - mapped for fun :3

A song from Cytus' chapter IV, Normal done by Katty Pie

BG source : tinyurl.com/a8qsdhl | Cytus' official site
V.K.'s streetvoice | Download urs4chan's bonus CtB diff (hitsounded by me and was used for CatchTheBeat Indonesia Cup 2013 Quarter Finals) here

Contains melody from another V.K.'s track 'Intro ~未来へ~'
Last edited by Niva , edited 35 times in total.
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
Can't believe you make this one too... I made a Darkness on 10 Feb (when the track has not been fixed) but don't know how to add hitsounds :o
Awesome map
Niva
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Flower wrote:

Can't believe you make this one too... I made a Darkness on 10 Feb (when the track has not been fixed) but don't know how to add hitsounds :o
Awesome map
Thank you Flower, I'll do my best on this map~

I have the correct track long ago before it was fixed on Cytus orz (it's available under 未分類歌曲 section on his streetvoice website, result of my stalking orz :3)

I also have the full ver. of Dragon Warrior, Evil Force, Land Scape, etc. from my stalking result actually if you need it >_<
P o M u T a
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P o M u T a
o.o/
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
My normal finished :P :P :P :oops: :oops: :oops:

^^
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: V.K. - Darkness.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 287
PreviewTime: 75249
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 45202,60265,105453
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Darkness
TitleUnicode:Darkness
Artist:V.K.
ArtistUnicode:V.K.
Creator:Niva
Version:Pie's Normal
Source:Cytus
Tags:nivalis chapter 4 ch4 v.k streetvoice
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
2,30339,32699
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,255,255,255

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Gloria Guard
2,273 posts
Joined May 2011
Gloria Guard
Hi Niva (:3 」 _) =3

From #modreqs :)

[Easy]

00:27:629 (1) Slider is unbalanced. change -> http://puu.sh/2aC5j A beautiful shape that is recommended.

00:35:159 (1) add finish?

00:42:690 (1) This is slider shape change this? -> http://puu.sh/2aC7M

01:14:071 (1,2,3,4,1) This is pattern shape - > http://puu.sh/2aCfz <- change?

01:45:451 (2) add finish?


[Pie's Normal]


AR -1 ?

01:09:677 (5) slider end add clap

00:36:100 (2) remove slider and add note ? 00:37:669 (1,2,3,4,5) This is the same as

00:42:690 (1,2,3,4,5) The same as the previous pattern? -> 00:40:179 (1,2,3,4,5)

00:46:456 (3,4) remove note and add 1/2 slider?

00:50:849 (2,3) remove note and add 1/2 slider?

01:36:037 (2) 1 grid down


[Hard]

AR - 1?

00:16:175 (4) remove note and 5 slider 00:16:175 and 00:16:645 add note

01:45:451 add finish?


[Insane]

00:27:629 (1,2,3,4,5) This is patter shape, can be further improved.
-> http://puu.sh/2aCZd

01:45:451 (3) add finish?


Nice map ! Star !
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Topic Starter
Niva

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi Niva (:3 」 _) =3

From #modreqs :)

[Easy]

00:27:629 (1) Slider is unbalanced. change -> http://puu.sh/2aC5j A beautiful shape that is recommended. Oh it's not intentional, fixed

00:35:159 (1) add finish? Other diffs doesn't use finish o.o

00:42:690 (1) This is slider shape change this? -> http://puu.sh/2aC7M Umm, don't really like that shape personally ._.

01:14:071 (1,2,3,4,1) This is pattern shape - > http://puu.sh/2aCfz <- change? Made it more balanced (hopefully~)

01:45:451 (2) add finish? Done

[Hard]

AR - 1? With the jumps AR8 is better I believe xD

00:16:175 (4) remove note and 5 slider 00:16:175 and 00:16:645 add note Oh, it's following vocals

01:45:451 add finish? Done


[Insane]

00:27:629 (1,2,3,4,5) This is patter shape, can be further improved.
-> http://puu.sh/2aCZd o.o? My current pentagon is good already I think >_<

01:45:451 (3) add finish? Done


Nice map ! Star !
Thank you Gloria Guard (:
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo

Gloria Guard wrote:

[Pie's Normal]

AR -1 ?

01:09:677 (5) slider end add clap <-- here alredy clap~

00:36:100 (2) remove slider and add note ? 00:37:669 (1,2,3,4,5) This is the same as <--- No, slider sounds better here

00:42:690 (1,2,3,4,5) The same as the previous pattern? -> 00:40:179 (1,2,3,4,5) <--- hm don't see reason change it

00:46:456 (3,4) remove note and add 1/2 slider? <--- No, I prefer notes here

00:50:849 (2,3) remove note and add 1/2 slider? <--- ^

01:36:037 (2) 1 grid down <--- fixed
Thank you for mod~ http://puu.sh/2aJjp
Kyouren
5,584 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
niva,can iam taiko guest diff
Niva
Global Moderator
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Joined November 2009
Topic Starter
Niva
Ah, I'm not planning to add any other difficulties to this mapset (including Taiko), sorry for that~

Updated Gloria Guard's mod! xD
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,799 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
Hi there; mod~

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General
  1. Is there a need for the BG's size to be over half a megabyte, actually...? It only bloats the package's size unnecessarily. Reduce to ~200 KB?
>Easy
  1. 00:37:669 - Switch back the Addition to Auto and add finish here? It actually fits better with the sound here, IMO.
  2. 00:42:690 - ^
  3. 00:57:753 (1) - Sampleset Auto + Addition Normal + Finish? Well, I don't think I need to say the reason again, but same as the suggestion above.
  4. 01:00:263 - 01:14:698 - Sampleset Drum + Addition Normal every second and fourth white tick?
  5. 01:25:368 - Sampleset/Addition Auto and then whistle? Considering how quiet this spot is, there's definitely no need for the hitsound there to be THAT loud. A soft whistle should do.
  6. 01:25:368 - 01:42:941 - Same as 01:00:263 - 01:14:698 (instead of whistle & clap).
  7. 01:30:389 - Sampleset/Addition Auto + Whistle? The current one just feels too loud...
  8. 01:37:606 - Whistle? (If you applied the hitsound suggestions, apply them to the other diffs too.)
>Pie's Normal
  1. 00:34:526 (2) - Sampleset Drum + Addition Normal?
  2. 00:51:163 (3,4) - Why does this stacking feels so random... Unstack them?
  3. 01:22:857 (1) - Sampleset Drum + whistle?
'

>Hard
  1. 00:36:728 (7) - Sampleset/Addition Auto? There's no reason to make the hitsound louder here, from what I can hear.
  2. 00:39:238 - ^
  3. 00:41:748 - ^
  4. 00:59:322 (5) - NC considering the change of spacing that continues slightly longer than usual (the spacing changes usually happen only between two objects, but we have three here)?
  5. 01:26:623 (1) - ...The second repeat is kinda unexpected, IMO. Maybe make it repeat once and add a circle then stack it below the slider's head, 1/2 beats after that slider? (This applies to other sliders like this at 01:26:623 - 01:32:742.)
>Insane
  1. ...Reduce the HP, AR, and OD by 1? HP8, AR9, and OD8 is... still kinda extreme for an Insane, even if it's 95.6 BPM @ 3.4 SV. I'd rather use that kind of setting for an Extra diff. This map plays far better with AR8 anyways.
  2. 01:34:468 (4) - NC to denote the sudden spacing change on 01:34:468 (4,5,6) so it will be more readable?
  3. 01:44:824 (2) - Add whistle to follow the music?
Uhm, that's it I guess?

Good luck on the way 8-)
Niva
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Niva

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there; mod~

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General
  1. Is there a need for the BG's size to be over half a megabyte, actually...? It only bloats the package's size unnecessarily. Reduce to ~200 KB? Umm... Will do later~
>Easy
  1. 00:37:669 - Switch back the Addition to Auto and add finish here? It actually fits better with the sound here, IMO.
  2. 00:42:690 - ^
  3. 00:57:753 (1) - Sampleset Auto + Addition Normal + Finish? Well, I don't think I need to say the reason again, but same as the suggestion above. Done except the second one (want to keep the whistle there), this only works on Easy unfortunately ._.
  4. 01:00:263 - 01:14:698 - Sampleset Drum + Addition Normal every second and fourth white tick? Umm, too loud imo...
  5. 01:25:368 - Sampleset/Addition Auto and then whistle? Considering how quiet this spot is, there's definitely no need for the hitsound there to be THAT loud. A soft whistle should do.
  6. 01:25:368 - 01:42:941 - Same as 01:00:263 - 01:14:698 (instead of whistle & clap).
  7. 01:30:389 - Sampleset/Addition Auto + Whistle? The current one just feels too loud... I want to keep consistency with my higher diffs here...
  8. 01:37:606 - Whistle? (If you applied the hitsound suggestions, apply them to the other diffs too.) Oh this is good suggestion, fixed :3
>Hard
  1. 00:36:728 (7) - Sampleset/Addition Auto? There's no reason to make the hitsound louder here, from what I can hear.
  2. 00:39:238 - ^
  3. 00:41:748 - ^ There is (bass drop) if you listen to the song carefully actually xD
  4. 00:59:322 (5) - NC considering the change of spacing that continues slightly longer than usual (the spacing changes usually happen only between two objects, but we have three here)? Done
  5. 01:26:623 (1) - ...The second repeat is kinda unexpected, IMO. Maybe make it repeat once and add a circle then stack it below the slider's head, 1/2 beats after that slider? (This applies to other sliders like this at 01:26:623 - 01:32:742.) I got this idea from Alace's maps orz, circle doesn't really give a correct feeling from the song imo...
>Insane
  1. ...Reduce the HP, AR, and OD by 1? HP8, AR9, and OD8 is... still kinda extreme for an Insane, even if it's 95.6 BPM @ 3.4 SV. I'd rather use that kind of setting for an Extra diff. This map plays far better with AR8 anyways. [/color]
  2. 01:34:468 (4) - NC to denote the sudden spacing change on 01:34:468 (4,5,6) so it will be more readable? Actually if I added a NC here it should be on (3) not (4), but the new comboing here will be (1-2-3)(1-2)(1-2-3-4) which will make the (1-2) doesn't look good at all imo ._.
  3. 01:44:824 (2) - Add whistle to follow the music? Ah, I want to make it same with other diffs (clap)
Uhm, that's it I guess?

Good luck on the way 8-)
Thanks Hinsvar, will upload soon (:
10nya
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(:3)rz
Hi there both pro mapper
99% of them are suggestion lalalalla =w=

General

  1. v.k do this tag really needed? Since it the same as song artist
  2. Add muted slider slide? current one is noisy imo (Specially at Normal and Easy diff)
  3. Normal star rate 3.60, Hard star rate 4.96 while Insane is 4.98? I think the diff spread is broken, prefer to add more easier hard? >w>a

Easy

  1. 00:57:753 (1)- : add finish here? higher pitch I suppose
  2. 01:27:878 (1)- : same suggestion as above

Pie's Normal

  1. 00:17:587 (1)- : add whistle to slider head?
  2. 01:19:092 (3)- : remove whistle at slider head?

Hard

  1. AR-1 ?
  2. 00:16:332 (5)- : add whistle on slider tail?
  3. 00:24:648 (3)- : make this slider place to x176 y38 to make symmetry with slider 1 =w=a
  4. 00:37:669 (1)- : add finish on slider head?
  5. To see rhythm pattern at 00:49:751 (3,1) err how about add clap at 00:52:575 (3)- here?
  6. 00:59:479 (6)- : add whistle at slider head? if you do so then add clap at 00:59:949 (7)- here? owo
  7. 01:45:451 (1)- : remove nc here? since you didn't use new combo at easy diff?

Insane

  1. 00:31:221 (3,4,5)- : why circle 4 at there.... (:3)rz fix 4 the distance into 1.40 is very recommended (:3)rz
perfect as always lalala (:'''3)rzrzrzrzrzrzrz

good luck bn___n)b
Niva
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- t e n n y a - wrote:


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(:3)rz
Hi there both pro mapper
99% of them are suggestion lalalalla =w=

General

  1. v.k do this tag really needed? Since it the same as song artist Oh, about this, some sources are saying the artist is V.K while in the Cytus game it's listed as V.K. - I'll leaving it there, just in case (:
  2. Add muted slider slide? current one is noisy imo (Specially at Normal and Easy diff) Umm, again, leaving for now personally ._.
  3. Normal star rate 3.60, Hard star rate 4.96 while Insane is 4.98? I think the diff spread is broken, prefer to add more easier hard? >w>a

Easy

  1. 00:57:753 (1)- : add finish here? higher pitch I suppose
  2. 01:27:878 (1)- : same suggestion as above

    Done both

Hard

  1. AR-1 ? AR8 is better when I played it imo (especially with the jumps and DT :3)
  2. 00:16:332 (5)- : add whistle on slider tail? Done
  3. 00:24:648 (3)- : make this slider place to x176 y38 to make symmetry with slider 1 =w=a Oh, it's intentional >_<
  4. 00:37:669 (1)- : add finish on slider head? Yep
  5. To see rhythm pattern at 00:49:751 (3,1) err how about add clap at 00:52:575 (3)- here? Oh, no clap from the song here ._.
  6. 00:59:479 (6)- : add whistle at slider head? if you do so then add clap at 00:59:949 (7)- here? owo Umm, again I'm following the song here, clap should be on 00:59:635 actually~
  7. 01:45:451 (1)- : remove nc here? since you didn't use new combo at easy diff? Oh, I'll NC that one on Easy instead

Insane

  1. 00:31:221 (3,4,5)- : why circle 4 at there.... (:3)rz fix 4 the distance into 1.40 is very recommended (:3)rz Fixed this one, should be good now xD
perfect as always lalala (:'''3)rzrzrzrzrzrzrz

good luck bn___n)b
Thanks, uploaded my diffs for now (still waiting for Katty Pie's response (: )
primrose
primrose
Hi Niva~ Mod :D

Pie's Normal
00:10:997 (2) - Move this a bit down? Like this :
SPOILER
00:19:156 (2) - Move up a bit? :
SPOILER
00:22:294 (5) - Whistle? =)

Hard diff
00:22:451 (3) - Ini naikin ke atas dikit? =)
00:28:570 (4) - Ini naikin juga ke atas, lebih bagus imo, spt ini:
SPOILER
00:31:066 (2) - Clap?
00:32:303 (1) - Clap lagi? xD

That's all :) Hope this map ranked as soon as possible ;)
Niva
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Awoken- wrote:

Hi Niva~ Mod :D

Hard diff
00:22:451 (3) - Ini naikin ke atas dikit? =) Done
00:28:570 (4) - Ini naikin juga ke atas, lebih bagus imo, spt ini: Oh, itu endpoint slider jump, memang sengaja dibuatnya begitu supaya nggak overlap~
SPOILER
00:31:066 (2) - Clap?
00:32:303 (1) - Clap lagi? xD Umm, ini sengaja kok (di Insane nggak ada clap soalnya :3)

That's all :) Hope this map ranked as soon as possible ;)
Thanks Awoken~

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EDIT : Thanks also ThoomyyxD, updated Katty Pie's fixes below (:
Loooctav
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Loooctav
Good Map :3
Poggo
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Poggo
Thanks for mod all :3 fixed hitsounds from Hinsvar and moe moe tennya :3 http://puu.sh/2fTnP
Andrea
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Andrea
~General~

I don't think the Audio Lead-In you're using is necessary, remove it.

~Easy~

00:19:784 (4,1) - I'd try to avoid such overlaps on the easiest difficulty, they might confuse beginners imo.
00:24:491 (2) - This circle is almost off-screen, what do you think about moving it up a bit? It would be better, I think.
00:29:825 (3,1) - Like I said before, try to not overlap them in this way.
00:56:497 (2,1) - Again, these circles are almost off-screen, move them up a bit, please.
01:23:485 (2) - ^ Same goes for this circle.
01:27:251 (2) - ^ And this, as well.
01:32:899 (1) - ^ This is a slider, though.
01:41:686 (3) - I'd prefer if you place this slider above the previous one, to avoid confusion.
01:45:451 (1) - I don't think this new combo here is necessary, just remove it.

~Pie's Normal~

00:16:645 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing, fix it manually.
00:51:163 (3,4) - I'd prefer if you try to avoid such stacks, they might confuse players.
01:30:075 (6,1) - ^ Same goes with this one.

~Hard~

00:37:355 (9,1) - I can see what's your intention here, but I don't like how does it sound.
00:55:870 (3) - This slider is almost off-screen, move it up a bit.
00:57:125 (5) - ^ Since it's a copy of the previous one.
01:03:872 (2) - Again, this slider is almost off-screen.
01:22:857 (1,2) - This pattern might be confusing since you made the same with the other sliders that ended on blue tick instead.
01:25:995 (5) - New combo due to the spacing change.
01:26:623 (1) - Then I'd remove this one.
01:28:506 (5) - Same as 01:25:995.
01:29:133 (1) - Same as 01:28:506.
01:31:016 (5) - Same as 01:25:995.
01:31:644 (1) - Same as 01:28:506.
01:45:451 (1) - Remove this new combo, you don't need it.

~Insane~

00:11:311 (9) - New combo due to the new stanza.
00:13:821 (5) - This slider is almost off-screen, try to move it up a bit.
00:16:332 (9) - New combo due to the new stanza, again.
00:21:353 (9) - ^ Same here.
00:46:456 (9) - ^ And here.
00:48:966 (9) - ^ And here, again.
00:51:476 (9) - ^ I'm sure if you follow this, new combos would be much better and less longer.
01:34:154 (3) - New combo due to the spacing change.

I hope this can help you. Awesome map like always, Niva! :3
Poggo
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Poggo

Andrea wrote:

~Pie's Normal~
00:16:645 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing, fix it manually. <--- Fixed
00:51:163 (3,4) - I'd prefer if you try to avoid such stacks, they might confuse players.
01:30:075 (6,1) - ^ Same goes with this one.
<--- I think map without stack notes boooring~ And for normal doff it's ok~
Thank you for mod~

http://puu.sh/2gZNq
Niva
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Andrea wrote:

~General~

I don't think the Audio Lead-In you're using is necessary, remove it. Umm, I give that slight lead-in because I don't want sudden violin sound on 00:00:000... Set all diffs' lead in to 250 though~

~Easy~

00:19:784 (4,1) - I'd try to avoid such overlaps on the easiest difficulty, they might confuse beginners imo. Ah, I liked the flow though >_<
00:24:491 (2) - This circle is almost off-screen, what do you think about moving it up a bit? It would be better, I think. Yep, better now (:
00:29:825 (3,1) - Like I said before, try to not overlap them in this way. Same as above
00:56:497 (2,1) - Again, these circles are almost off-screen, move them up a bit, please.
01:23:485 (2) - ^ Same goes for this circle.
01:27:251 (2) - ^ And this, as well.
01:32:899 (1) - ^ This is a slider, though. Done all, should be better xD
01:41:686 (3) - I'd prefer if you place this slider above the previous one, to avoid confusion. Tested this in play mode, it shouldn't cause confusion I think (by the time this slider appears, (1) should disappear already)
01:45:451 (1) - I don't think this new combo here is necessary, just remove it. It's to beautify the end xD

~Hard~

00:37:355 (9,1) - I can see what's your intention here, but I don't like how does it sound. Umm, I don't change this personally because I've used the same rhythm in 00:40:179 (1) and 00:42:690 (1) o.o
00:55:870 (3) - This slider is almost off-screen, move it up a bit.
00:57:125 (5) - ^ Since it's a copy of the previous one. Done both
01:03:872 (2) - Again, this slider is almost off-screen. Done, also improved the wave's look (:
01:22:857 (1,2) - This pattern might be confusing since you made the same with the other sliders that ended on blue tick instead. Umm, the slow spacing should help already imo :3
01:25:995 (5) - New combo due to the spacing change.
01:26:623 (1) - Then I'd remove this one.
01:28:506 (5) - Same as 01:25:995.
01:29:133 (1) - Same as 01:28:506.
01:31:016 (5) - Same as 01:25:995.
01:31:644 (1) - Same as 01:28:506. Umm, not really sure but I changed this for now, I might revert it later though (personally the previous combo'ing is also beautiful I think ._.)
01:45:451 (1) - Remove this new combo, you don't need it. Umm, I added it just to beautify this part~

~Insane~

00:11:311 (9) - New combo due to the new stanza. Done
00:13:821 (5) - This slider is almost off-screen, try to move it up a bit. Moved the slider's waypoint (not the slider's position) instead xD
00:16:332 (9) - New combo due to the new stanza, again.
00:21:353 (9) - ^ Same here.
00:46:456 (9) - ^ And here.
00:48:966 (9) - ^ And here, again.
00:51:476 (9) - ^ I'm sure if you follow this, new combos would be much better and less longer. All fixed :3
01:34:154 (3) - New combo due to the spacing change. Ah, not changing this (same reason as Hinsvar's mod post previously)

I hope this can help you. Awesome map like always, Niva! :3
Sorry for late reply >_<
Thanks Andrea, updated :3
regenz
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regenz
yo M4m
Niva

Cytus V.K. – Darkness
General
Why didn’t use slider slience ? I think it’s better .
( yes I can here it clearly in easy diff 00:30:139 (1) - )

Combo color is too blend together
If you can chage the purple one to another which make it better for player
I suggest red one. ( 255,0,0)
It help player can see note more clearly example the stack one in hard diff like 01:41:372 (4,1) –
And in insane diff here 01:33:841 (1,2,3,4) – the sudden slowdown here is impact for me .
3 to 4

Easy
00:31:685 add note + whistle
00:39:238 add note
00:56:811 add note + whistle
01:13:757 add note + whistle

Pie’s Normal
00:17:273 (5) –whislte
00:27:629 (1) – man flexing the arms lol
01:07:794 (1,2,3,4,5) – forgot put clap in these section?
01:12:815 (1) –clap
01:20:033 (5) – whistle

Hard
00:32:303 (1) – whistle
00:56:811 (4) – whistle
01:02:146 (1) – forgot sample set normal ?
01:17:209 (3) – whistle
01:17:209 (3,4) – use same hit sound ? 01:21:759 (3,4) - ?

Insane
00:16:959 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) – well this is good case that the NC make me play this better
But the blend of combo color is problem (for me )
There are some partern 00:20:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – like this
it’s better if you can NC at 5 also it make it more easier to read note
( but with out it I can still play but it miss a lot at first and second time playing.
00:45:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – yes I suggest same as above.
01:34:468 (4,5,6) – NC at 4 ?this is sudden slowdown.
Nothing in this diff bug me except sudden slowdown and combo color blend.
01:45:451 (3) – why this not NC same as easy?


map for m4m
Various Artists - SUPER SHOT Compilation
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/51037

no need to rush mod i check next weekend
thanks
Poggo
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Poggo

regenz wrote:

Pie’s Normal
00:17:273 (5) –whislte <--- no need here
00:27:629 (1) – man flexing the arms lol <--- here all ok
01:07:794 (1,2,3,4,5) – forgot put clap in these section? <-- no, here whistles instead claps
01:12:815 (1) –clap <--- added
01:20:033 (5) – whistle <--- no need here
Thank you for mod ~~

SPOILER
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 250
PreviewTime: 75249
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Darkness
TitleUnicode:Darkness
Artist:V.K.
ArtistUnicode:V.K.
Creator:Niva
Version:Pie's Normal
Source:Cytus
Tags:nivalis katty pie chapter 4 ch4 v.k streetvoice
BeatmapID:225515
BeatmapSetID:79838

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
2,30339,32699
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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80,200,79719,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,256,80033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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32,276,90075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Niva
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Niva

regenz wrote:

yo M4m
Niva

Cytus V.K. – Darkness
General
Why didn’t use slider slience ? I think it’s better .
( yes I can here it clearly in easy diff 00:30:139 (1) - )

Combo color is too blend together
If you can chage the purple one to another which make it better for player
I suggest red one. ( 255,0,0)
It help player can see note more clearly example the stack one in hard diff like 01:41:372 (4,1) –
And in insane diff here 01:33:841 (1,2,3,4) – the sudden slowdown here is impact for me .
3 to 4

Made the purple a bit darker, red doesn't really fit the bg imo >_< (172,155,255 -> 158,138,255)

Easy
00:31:685 add note + whistle Umm, do you mean 1/2 after 00:31:994 (3)? Added anyway (:
00:39:238 add note Nice one, added
00:56:811 add note + whistle
01:13:757 add note + whistle Hmm, I want to keep my current pattern on these two personally + I don't think the instrument are that significant there o.o

Hard
00:32:303 (1) – whistle
00:56:811 (4) – whistle I didn't add on these two to emphasize the whistle 1/2 after~
01:02:146 (1) – forgot sample set normal ? Umm nope? N sampleset should be on 01:02:774 not here actually o.o
01:17:209 (3) – whistle
01:17:209 (3,4) – use same hit sound ? 01:21:759 (3,4) - ? Around this I added whistle on 01:20:033 (4) instead, if you listen to the piano sound I choose not to include whistle on (3) to emphasize the piano on (4)~

Insane
00:16:959 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) – well this is good case that the NC make me play this better
But the blend of combo color is problem (for me )
There are some partern 00:20:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – like this
it’s better if you can NC at 5 also it make it more easier to read note
( but with out it I can still play but it miss a lot at first and second time playing.
00:45:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – yes I suggest same as above. I don't think the NC is necessary orz, it's still in one union imo but on these two I scaled them more :3)
01:34:468 (4,5,6) – NC at 4 ?this is sudden slowdown. Umm, I've explained this in previous (Hinsvar)'s post orz
Nothing in this diff bug me except sudden slowdown and combo color blend.
01:45:451 (3) – why this not NC same as easy? This is an exception here, the folowpoint plays cute here (really xD)
Thanks regenz~
(about your map, I'd like to contact you in-game when I meet you... There's something I'd like to talk about >_<)
Niko-nyan
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another Cytus song ♥ star

edit :
kemarin
Niva : mau mod
Me : nu (but now here is the mod)

General
ada sesuatu yang lupa tuh (Letterbox during breaks)

Easy~
00:42:690 - kok rasanya gk enak ya :( finish mengganggu :(
01:07:794 - delete finish
01:12:815 - ^
01:44:824 - add finish please
01:45:451 - jangan di NC :(

Pie's Moe diff
PERFECTO ♥

Hard~
00:32:303 - jangan di NC :(
01:10:462 - uh hampir gk dapet nada :(
01:44:824 - + 01:45:451 - sama seperti easy

Insane~
so berjin /me runs
Niva
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Frans Niko wrote:

another Cytus song ♥ star

edit :
kemarin
Niva : mau mod
Me : nu (but now here is the mod)

General
ada sesuatu yang lupa tuh (Letterbox during breaks) Mestinya gpp sih, toh nggak nge-affect permainan juga :3 (di rule juga 'yang penting consistent in all diffs')

Easy~
00:42:690 - kok rasanya gk enak ya :( finish mengganggu :(
01:07:794 - delete finish
01:12:815 - ^ Done all
01:44:824 - add finish please Umm, whistle di sini supaya konsisten dengan diff lain kok (Hard/Insane)
01:45:451 - jangan di NC :( It's there for the aesthetics (:

Pie's Moe diff
PERFECTO ♥

Hard~
00:32:303 - jangan di NC :( NC ini karena ada spacing changenya xD
01:10:462 - uh hampir gk dapet nada :( Umm?
01:44:824 - + 01:45:451 - sama seperti easy Sama (ini cuma supaya kelihatan lebih bagus aja), cuma bagian sini gw buat lebih gampang sekarang (:

Insane~
so berjin /me runs Yap~
Thanks Frans :3
ursa
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ursa
Cytus <3

(*ctb diff) :)

http://puu.sh/2lQak
Niva
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urs4chan wrote:

Cytus <3

(*ctb diff) :)

http://puu.sh/2lQak
I'll add your stress bonus overdose CtB diff tomorrow on the map's description though, can't access client tonight :3

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EDIT : Added~
Cyclohexane
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Hey, your map came up with !request, so have a random mod!

You should use Tick Rate 4, I reckon, since the BPM is pretty low and the song is quite heavy on the drums.

[Easy] Mainly esthaetics here - This is an Easy after all.
First off I'm not a huge fan of these straight-then-curved sliders you used. Not a huge deal but I think regular s-shaped slider would look slightly better.
00:30:139 (1) - How about ctrl-h ctrl-j ctrl-g on this slider (of course leave it at the same spot though) so that the previous circle doesn't overlap it as much?
00:31:994 (3) - Might as well be 2 circles. New players don't really like short sliders, they release too soon and get a 100 or 50.
01:24:112 (3) - I know you're following the piano here and it makes sense but I can't help thinking a 1/2 reverse slider would fit better here, especially with the hitsounding, it'd be great. You choose.

[Pie's Normal]
Alright. I'd say as a first thing: higher spacing on the entire diff so that objects don't touch each other. That really looks bad.
00:33:899 (1,2,3) - Transition really awkward with the timing change, I see you tried to lead into it with a slider which is a good idea but in my opinion it still feels awkward. I'd say remove, this is a perfect spot in the music for the player to tell themselves "oh, time to get back in the game"
00:51:476 (4) - Stacks in this difficulty are really scarce. I counted 4 max. Just remove them all, they're so rare they feel out of place. Yay consistency!
01:17:523 (4) - ^
01:30:389 (1) - ^
01:33:213 (2,3) - Not sure if this is allowed. Even though the bpm is quite low and these are repeat sliders, I still feel quite incomfortable with 1/4s on a Normal.

[Hard]
Daaamn. What a difficulty gap between this and the Normal. I see this a lot, so I can't blame you for doing it, but hey.
Okay. First off: Great job. This is really fun and flows very well. I could even take two or three mapping tips from this.
00:36:100 (3,4,5,6,7) - I say put at least a slider in there cause this is a tad tricky to hit.
00:37:355 (9) - This goes for all of the sliders like these you used here -- don't. I don't think they work with the music and playing them was awkward.
00:44:102 (6) - Add a repeat so it doesn't feel empty and it'll help you leading into the jump at 00:46:299 (4) - which I missed since I thought it was 1/2.
01:25:368 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This works but I feel like could be improved. You're having a lot of speed built up with the 4 notes and then it comes to a brutal stop, which is okay, but I'd say increase the spacing and stack the next notes, probably would feel better.
01:26:623 (3,4) - These tricked me at first because they had 2 repeats. My advice on this (at least for the first one) would be to reduce spacing so it's more obvious that there is more than one repeat here. You can also delete the repeats and go full 1/4 sliders if you don't wanna be bothered.
01:27:878 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Same as above, but not as much emphasis on it. The player's expecting things like that at this point.
01:38:548 (3) - Yo this slider end's not snapped to anything dawg

[Insane]
God this is fun. Really hard though, and I'd say the HP Drain is really tough here. It's really hard to recover and there are drain sections in there. -1 plz
00:10:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This. Is. FUN. Good job coming up with this.
01:11:874 (6) - Why is this slider shaped like a nipp-yeah. That kinda looks weird.
01:19:248 (4) - More 1/4 sliders in this part please! They work great here since as a "slower" section of the map you don't want to bother the players too much with circles, but 1/4 sliders would be really fun here rather than gaps that feel kinda empty.
01:23:328 (2) - Heh
01:33:841 (1,2,3) - Ctrl-h on this one for a nice jump! Keep the pattern going in the same direction though.
01:37:371 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - gaaah the spacing on this please. I'm not a huge fan of spacing increases in streams but I'm usually tolerant with them. The spacing increase in here is really harsh though.
01:37:920 (1,2) - Players just got out of a demanding stream that needed focus, so I think it's better to only use 1/4 here as to not confuse anyone. Your choice.
01:39:881 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ;_;
01:42:392 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - more ;_;
Excellent work otherwise, really fun mapset. Have a star!
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