Hello merchat7~
M4M here. <3
[Pao's Easy]
Map Design/Rhythm
Map Design/Rhythm
Map Design/Rhythm
[Insane]
Map Design/Rhythm
I love jumps, so I really enjoy your mapping. :> I'll star.
Ok I hope it helps.
Oh and please reply.
M4M here. <3
[Pao's Easy]
Map Design/Rhythm
- 00:11:561 (1,1) - Honestly, too much NC spam here. There isn't much of a reason for it imo. Removing these two makes it look much nicer.
- 00:22:053 (1,2) - The 2 being on the offbeat feels pretty strange to me and over complicates this section imo. I think if you delete the 2 and add a circle at 00:24:020 we could have a much nicer rhythm to fit with the song and transition better into the next vocal sentence. I think it's easier to play after the 00:22:053 (1) because all the points on that slider hit on the onbeats.
- 00:25:987 (3,1) - It's a really minor thing, but it's a bit strange to me to mix this straight slider 1 with the curve of 3. Maybe add a curve to the 1 to avoid its overlap with the 4 and to make a nice pattern with the 3.
- 00:35:168 (1) - Hmm, I think it would be much better if this slider extended to 00:35:823 because the vocals hold to that point. It feels really strange that this slider ends so early.
- 00:36:479 (1,2,3) - This rhythm isn't fitting the vocals imo. It would be much nicer if the 3 were at 00:37:790 and we had another 1/1 slider at 00:37:135.
- 00:16:807 (1) - This spinner is really loud when the music cuts out here. Maybe lower the volume a lot more and a lot faster.
- 00:57:135 (2) - Some missing claps on this slider imo. Maybe add one to the head, repeat, and tail to hit with the offbeat clapping that started up here.
- 01:00:086 (2) - This whistle on the end is pretty loud to me, it's just not matching that drum transition very well. Maybe replace it with a clap.
- 01:19:757 (4) - Maybe add a finish to the head here to hit with the one in the music. Sounds nice to me. Other diffs have this too.
Map Design/Rhythm
- 00:26:643 (1) - NC here is a bit strange. I think it would be better at 00:27:299 (2) on the downbeat when the vocals start a new sentence.
- 00:28:938 (5,6,1,2) - Honestly, this plays pretty strangely because the 6 is not following any sound in the music, it's overmapped. I recommend deleting the 6 and making the 5 a slider leading into the 1,2. Also I think it would be better to remove the NC from 00:29:430 (1) and add it to 00:29:922 (3) because the new verse starts on the 3 there so a NC makes more sense.
- 00:39:266 (1,2,3,1) - Too hard for normal imo. I think it might better if you remove the repeat from the 00:37:790 (5) and add a circle at 00:38:774 and make the 1 a 1/2 slider. Then delete the 3 and make the 2 a slider. Also remove NC from 00:40:086 (1) and add it to 00:40:413 (2) because the new phrase starts on the 2 there.
That would just be nicer to read than having the beginning of this transition at 00:39:102 be on the end of the repeating slider 5. Instead we could have a nice slider with NC to hit there. - 01:05:331 (1) - Maybe remove the NC here and add to 01:05:987 (2) to follow the vocals better just like you do with 01:09:266 (1).
- 01:19:758 (4) - Maybe NC here instead of 01:20:086 (1) to be consistent with 01:09:266 (1,2).
- 01:27:627 (3) - It would be much better to delete the 3 and make the spinner start at 01:27:627 like the other diffs. The music stops there at the 3 so it's overmapped and would be better as the start of the spinner.
- 00:07:409 (1) - Try to reduce the volume of this spinner, it's pretty loud. Check what the other diffs are doing here.
- 00:11:889 (1) - Missing clap on the end here according to you pattern of claps.
- 00:14:840 (2) - Clap on the end is much better than a finish imo. Having only a clap here will add more emphasis to the actual important finish at 00:15:495.
- 00:17:954 (1) - Again, try to reduce the volume of this spinner like the other diffs do.
- 00:20:086 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This section has no whistles other than the one on the very first circle. Consider adding some here in a similar pattern that merchat7 uses in his diffs, they sound really nice.
- 00:50:413 (3) - Maybe add a finish to the end here to hit with the one in the music.
- 01:03:364 (4) - Missing clap on the end imo.
- 01:04:020 (1) - Same, missing clap on the end to follow offbeat clapping as you're doing in this section.
- 01:11:233 (1) - Remove the clap from the slider body and from the head. Just have one on the tail is better imo.
- 01:14:512 (2,3) - I think it would follow the music better if you removed the claps from the heads of these sliders and instead added them to the tails.
- 01:16:807 - I think you should make this timing section SC:1 because you have the wrong claps sounding atm. They are inaudible.
- 01:18:774 (2) - Clap would be better on the head to hit with the music.
- 01:23:692 (3,4) - It would fit the music better to have the claps on the tails and not the heads.
Map Design/Rhythm
- 00:06:274 (2,3) - I think the jump might be a bit large for this soft part. It feels overmapped to me. Maybe delete the 2 and just have this nice 2 slider pattern with larger spacing than you did at 00:02:677 (1,2).
- 00:09:595 (1) - I think it might feel better in play if this was two repeating sliders instead and lead into the 3 a bit better.
- 00:35:168 (1,2,3) - Since you're following the vocals here, maybe delete the 00:36:315 (4) and move the 00:36:479 (1) to 00:36:315 and extend its length to 00:36:807 to play along with the vocals better.
- 00:18:118 (1) - The music cuts out here so the spinner is really loud and obnoxious imo. Maybe reduce volume a lot more.
[Insane]
Map Design/Rhythm
- 00:42:381 (9,10) - A bit odd to me that the 10 doesn't continue in the pattern with the 9 and 8 just like what happens at 00:47:299 (9,10,11). Maybe place the 10 rotated 60 degrees from the 9.
- 01:05:331 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you're trying to blanket the 01:05:004 (3) with this stream, having the 5 off to the left like it is sort of ruins the effect. Maybe move the 5 over to have it included in this nice curved stream.
- 01:06:151 - I think you could afford to make the kiai time a bit more exciting. Maybe add a circle here and make the 01:06:315 (2) a 1/2 slider to hit with the drums. You could do the same that at similar sections. That, or maybe increase the spacing of these circles a bit.
- 01:10:577 (1,2,3,4,5) - I really don't like the flow on this stream. I think it would be much better as a nice curve and would match the 01:03:364 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and fit the song better imo.
- 01:15:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again I really don't think having the stream be so messy is fitting with all of the nice curved sliders very well. Maybe level it out in a smooth curve.
- 01:16:479 (1,2) - Spacing is a bit closed imo. I think you should make the spacing of these more similar to the 01:11:233 (1,2). Maybe even larger since we're later in the map.
- 01:25:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pretty minor and nazi, but this placement is just really messy... Can you clean it up a bit? Maybe have the sliders in a curve together.
- 00:18:118 (1) - Same, maybe reduce volume of spinner much more.
I love jumps, so I really enjoy your mapping. :> I'll star.
Ok I hope it helps.
Oh and please reply.