General
One of your combo colors is different. Normal Color 255, 250, 253 Hard Color 249, 250, 253
Normal
Might be too technical to count as the easiest difficulty. There's so many stacks and 1/2th notes, and repeat sliders.
00:10:222 (3) - 1 unit right. you may also want to adjust the curve so that it doesn't interfere with the spacing after, but also to add a little more curve to the transition after, which would be better IMO. Here's a reference http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/562852
Second point x 79 y 297
Last point x 231 y 327
Repeat slider is moved to x 339 y 296.
If you don't like, feel free to change to your liking. I really recommend you improve that transition, because nearly straight but not straight transitions just are inferior compared to transitions with a proper curve.
00:13:529 (4,5,6) - Personally it bothers me when transitions try to be straight but aren't straight, but if you want to keep, it's a small issue.
00:14:001 (5,6,7) - I suggest making this into a triangular pattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/562856 This looks a lot cleaner than having a slider lean upward at a random angle. Just an example as how it should look. don't take my spacings as law, there are multiple ways to implement this pattern here. Do what feels right.
00:32:899 (3,4) - Unstacking would lessen the cluttered feeling here. If i were to unstack, I would create a blanket above the slider. It would require some minor restructuring afterwards, but nothing too serious. Just a suggestion.
00:37:151 (4,5) - In case you didn't move the slider in the previous suggest and this is no long an issue, but these can be improved. First, a good transition has the object appear where the slider is pointing. In your unaltered design, it would have the slider here http://puu.sh/1LHiw That would allow the next slider to be placed on the horizontal line like so http://puu.sh/1LHkg If that slider is altered, just make sure the alignments all fit snugly into place.
00:39:986 (3,4,5,1) - Too many claps in this one area. Consider removing some of them.
00:43:765 (3,4) - I think it would look better if 4 started underneath the end of 3 rather than to the left of it.
00:49:907 (5,1,2,3,4) - I feel this pattern could be better if you remapped it. Instead of crossing at a diagonal, 00:48:490 (4,5,1,2) - could form a square. Then you could use more simple curves for the next 2 sliders, to finish the design. That's just my thoughts though.
Hard
00:18:253 (5,6,7) - Instead of going directly into 1.24, how about bridging the spacing gap with an in-between snap like 1.22.
00:24:395 (2,3,4) - Spacing changes unnecessarily here. 1.16 > 1.21 In addition the slider is lower than 2. It should be at the same level.
00:24:868 (4,5,6) - Spacing could be more equal as well.
00:48:962 (6,7,8) - I think a more rounded approach looks nicer. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/562912
00:57:938 (1,2) - The inaccuracy of this blanket bothers me. Use a slider that can form a better blanket?
Conclusion
It's in good shape. I will star it. Good luck with this.
One of your combo colors is different. Normal Color 255, 250, 253 Hard Color 249, 250, 253
Normal
Might be too technical to count as the easiest difficulty. There's so many stacks and 1/2th notes, and repeat sliders.
00:10:222 (3) - 1 unit right. you may also want to adjust the curve so that it doesn't interfere with the spacing after, but also to add a little more curve to the transition after, which would be better IMO. Here's a reference http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/562852
Second point x 79 y 297
Last point x 231 y 327
Repeat slider is moved to x 339 y 296.
If you don't like, feel free to change to your liking. I really recommend you improve that transition, because nearly straight but not straight transitions just are inferior compared to transitions with a proper curve.
00:13:529 (4,5,6) - Personally it bothers me when transitions try to be straight but aren't straight, but if you want to keep, it's a small issue.
00:14:001 (5,6,7) - I suggest making this into a triangular pattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/562856 This looks a lot cleaner than having a slider lean upward at a random angle. Just an example as how it should look. don't take my spacings as law, there are multiple ways to implement this pattern here. Do what feels right.
00:32:899 (3,4) - Unstacking would lessen the cluttered feeling here. If i were to unstack, I would create a blanket above the slider. It would require some minor restructuring afterwards, but nothing too serious. Just a suggestion.
00:37:151 (4,5) - In case you didn't move the slider in the previous suggest and this is no long an issue, but these can be improved. First, a good transition has the object appear where the slider is pointing. In your unaltered design, it would have the slider here http://puu.sh/1LHiw That would allow the next slider to be placed on the horizontal line like so http://puu.sh/1LHkg If that slider is altered, just make sure the alignments all fit snugly into place.
00:39:986 (3,4,5,1) - Too many claps in this one area. Consider removing some of them.
00:43:765 (3,4) - I think it would look better if 4 started underneath the end of 3 rather than to the left of it.
00:49:907 (5,1,2,3,4) - I feel this pattern could be better if you remapped it. Instead of crossing at a diagonal, 00:48:490 (4,5,1,2) - could form a square. Then you could use more simple curves for the next 2 sliders, to finish the design. That's just my thoughts though.
Hard
00:18:253 (5,6,7) - Instead of going directly into 1.24, how about bridging the spacing gap with an in-between snap like 1.22.
00:24:395 (2,3,4) - Spacing changes unnecessarily here. 1.16 > 1.21 In addition the slider is lower than 2. It should be at the same level.
00:24:868 (4,5,6) - Spacing could be more equal as well.
00:48:962 (6,7,8) - I think a more rounded approach looks nicer. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/562912
00:57:938 (1,2) - The inaccuracy of this blanket bothers me. Use a slider that can form a better blanket?
Conclusion
It's in good shape. I will star it. Good luck with this.
