1. For rank you need difficult less then 3.24 star rating, you have only 3.46, please reduce the diffcult somehow...
2. Please add some tags, it's important...

• Good diff....

1. 00:18:726 (5) - http://puu.sh/1Jnuj i think now better, but you choice...
2. 00:20:143 (1) - put on x68 y205.

• 
  same here
  
  00:04:553 (4) - x381 y281.
  00:05:970 (3) - http://puu.sh/1JnD0 maybe something like this will be better? so...
  00:07:387 (5) - x304 y148.
  00:15:419 (1) - NC and this moment a bit confusing for 1st play.

• 
  In the tags, what is pmv? Its OK if it its related to the song, I'm just curious.

• 
  3 is kind of a low AR for a Normal. Maybe raise it to 5?
  00:17:781 (4) It might go better with the rhythm if you shorten the slider by half and add a repeat (it would keep the same amount of distance on the timeline, if done right).
  00:20:852 Maybe add a circle here? (Or change 2 into a 1/2 beat slider)
  00:54:159 (1) Just a thought, but maybe it would be better if you moved this to the right and kind of down. It would go with the pattern at 00:53:214 (5,6)
  00:55:104 (3) Try to do something else here if you can. Having more than one repeat on a slider in a Normal is not too good of an idea, since beginner players might not catch that.
  00:59:828 (4) I think a spinner here (that covers the same distance as the slider timeline-wise) might fit better. Its always nice to have a spinner if you can fit one in. If you are going to keep the slider though, I think it would sound better without the finish.

• 
  00:21:088 (2) Just a thought, but maybe reverse this?
  00:39:986 (3) ^
  00:42:348 (7) I think it might look better if this was placed below 5 and 6 so that the three form a triangle.
  00:59:828 (1) It would sound better if you removed the finish.

CrestRising wrote:

[General:]

• In the tags, what is pmv? Its OK if it its related to the song, I'm just curious.

it is 'Pony Music Video...maybe?'


Catchy song. Do you not respond to the mods or something? It would be helpful if you did, unless you already respond by other means.
i`m sorry.because my computer is not normal,so it`s diffcult white quote of modding
but i hear your words,i think white a thank-you message for modders.thx,CrestRising

Yeah anyway you need Easy diff~ People already said you about it~

• General
  The map is pretty easy for new players, but maybe you should consider doing an Easy with less than 3 Star rating, it's your call, tho.

• Normal
  
  Just being nazi here, but i think that the sliders at 00:51:324 could be smoother than they are right now (like this, maybe http://puu.sh/1LztY) I don't know, I prefer them that way, but it's just a personal call, they're fine as they are.

• Insane
  
  00:24:868 (4) - Like the ones in normal, it's fine as it is, but could be made smoother.

1. No breaks = Disable letterbox during breaks! (Settings > Storyboarding). Also: countdown sounds unfitting here, imo. So, you can disable it, too!
2. That clap hitsound is too loud. I'd use custom clap. example
3. PMV in tags? OH GOD NO :V WE're not tagging videos! We use tags to help people FIND OUR MAP easier. So, remove PMV and add tags trance house because this song sounds like that.. :/
4. It seems like quality of your BG is kinda low. Can you find better one, please?
5. Remove audio from your video. It will help us to save some space and download map faster.

1. 00:03:608 (2,4) - and I'm starting my mod with nazi stuff - you CAN make curve here better! example also: i've expected to see this pattern in the center of playfielld to fit with background video.
2. 00:24:395 (2,3,4) - here, you have a cute pattern! try to do the same with 00:26:285 (7,8,9) - because it looks a bit boring. example
3. 00:40:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - well.. yea.. It's a cute pattern, but I think you can make it better with star-shaped pattern. http://puu.sh/1MN5T

1. You have quite a fast slider velocity and EXTREEEMLY SLOW Approach Rate. Use approach rate 5. it will fit here! If you do it also increase OD/HP Drain to keep diff settings balanced
2. 00:55:104 (3) - this slider is short and third reverse is quite hard to notice. And many-normal players won't notice it. It's also quite confusing because there's only ONE slider with 2 repeats, so.. it's inconsistent and confusing. I'd recommend you to remove it.
   
   Sometimes it looks like you put stacks just because you have no idea what to do with your flow. But rhythm and hitsounding are pretty good.

1. 00:18:726 - forr example here, you missed a clap! Use custom slider tick (custom slider tiick = clap hitsound) to avoid missing claps. example

[Ranger] wrote:

Almost fixed
thx -Bakari- mod and star~

Sonnyc wrote:

[Ranger] wrote:

Almost fixed
thx -Bakari- mod and star~

바카리가 모딩에 코멘트 해달래요.

1. Disable the countdown and the letterbox during breaks please
2. Adjust the Audio Lead-In to 1500

• -- Pretty good.

• - 00:44:474 (x) - Add a note here, sounds nice to me

• - 00:24:868 (4) - Remove the whistle from the body and add a whistle in the end
  - 00:42:348 (7) - Add a whistle in the body to keep the rhythm

1. Since the spot you've chosen for the kiai time is pretty much identical musically to the section before it and after it, I suggest using short bursts of kiai instead of a kiai section. For example, start a kiai time at 00:16:364 and end it at 00:16:836. Also start one at 00:31:482 and end it at 00:31:954. Also start one at 00:46:600 and end it at 00:47:072. This would be nicer than just having one of these 3 identical sections be kiai time imo.

1. 00:20:143 (1,2) - The 2 is so close to the 1's track and looks bad and is a bit hard to read for beginners imo. Maybe move the notes like this:
   
   

1. 00:01:246 (1,3,3) - Maybe silence the slidertick for these sliders just like in the other diffs. It's weird that this diff is the only one without that.
   
   
2. 00:16:364 - Consider increasing volume here for all diffs instead of at 00:31:482 since the music starts to really pick up at this point and more volume would accent that.

1. 00:52:269 (4) - Make this slider a normal curve. Having it the same shape as the 00:51:324 (3) takes away from what the 3 is accenting by being that shape, which is that piano stream in the music.
   
   
2. 00:56:285 (5) - A bit overmapped imo. Just delete the 5. It will play a little more smooth and be a consistent stack with the 00:57:938 (1,2).

1. 00:10:222 (3) - Maybe switch over to S:C2 set for this slider so that we could have that drumming slider tick to accent the crescendo in the music. Switch back at 00:11:167.

1. 00:17:781 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - These seem a bit weirdly placed. Maybe make them form a nice hexagon.
   
   
   
   
2. 00:42:348 (7) - Maybe move this down a bit so it doesn't overlap with the 5 and gives us more of a jump which might be nice.

1. 00:10:222 (5) - Again maybe switch to S:C2 for this slider.
   
   
2. 00:25:812 (6) - Too many whistles imo. Remove the one from the repeat, it sounds much better to me.

Wolf wrote:

Yay ponies!

1. 00:05:970 (2) - add a custom clap here ~
2. 00:35:261 (1) - this slider will look better if you make it like this http://puu.sh/1S4fg
3. 00:40:931 (3) - I think this slider dont fit without a revers so make it like this http://puu.sh/1S4hm (it sounded much better to me~
4. 00:49:434 (4) - move this 2 grids up and 1 right so it'll be on the line~
5. 00:55:104 (2) - this will play better if you make it like this http://puu.sh/1S4li

1. 00:09:277 (2) - I dont think this slider look so good so i suggest you to do it like this http://puu.sh/1S4o8
2. 00:16:364 (1) - this finish sounds too loud maybe lower it down to 50%?
3. 00:21:088 (3) - this slider is not half bad but i think if you do slider like this http://puu.sh/1S4r7 it might look better imo~
4. 00:28:175 (2) - same thing i said here 00:09:277
5. 00:45:655 (5) - ^
6. 00:52:269 (4) - NC fits here because the music has changed~

1. 00:25:812 (6) - Add NC here because of music change~
2. 00:29:828 (5) - ^
3. 00:33:371 (6) - ^
4. 00:56:285 (6) - ^

Sonnyc wrote:

General:

-- 모든 난이도에서 "Letterbox during breaks" 체크 해제해주세요.
-- soft-sliderslide2.wav도 무음 파일로 넣어주세요.
-- 콤보 컬러 3의 하얀색은 지금의 기조로 볼때 위험한 색입니다. 회색 계열로 바꾸셔야 합니다.

Easy:

00:12:584 (1) - 시작이 아니라 끝에 클랩 소리가 있어야 하지 않나 싶네요.

Hard:

00:03:608 (2) - 슬라이더 내 휘슬 소리를 제거하셔야 (4)에서의 소리가 더 두드러집니다.
00:06:679 (4) - 여기도 슬라이더 내 휘슬 제거해 주세요. 조금 소음성 느낌입니다.
00:25:812 (1) - ^
00:58:647 (2,3) - 여기서는 이 박자가 더 자연스럽습니다. http://puu.sh/euL9H/1c5527db0f.jpg