HellDawn wrote:

Normal

00:29:461- Unnecesarry new combo here so RNC Done~
00:07:254- Delete this note because didnt follow the music Done~
01:05:695- New combo Done~
01:19:332- Finish gonna fit

Hard

00:05:695- CTRL + H Because I couldnt see 3. combo or change pattern to combos Done~
00:41:150- Why normal clap ? slip
01:17:773- finish Done~

Thank you for Modding~

From request


노래가 잔잔하고 좋네요 랭크 기대할꼐요!

HelloSCV wrote:

From request

SPOILER

Normal
00:10:760 (1) - 슬라이더 길이 00:13:877 - 여기 까지 늘리는게 어떨까요? 스피너 아닌가요 ㅋㅋ?Done
01:23:617 (2) - 슬라앞에 휘슬 Done
01:25:565 (1) - ^ Done

Hard
HP,OD -1? HP 만 다운
휘슬 힛사 넣으실때 1박을 4개로 쪼개면 1,3번에는 휘슬넣고 2,4번에는 클랩넣으셧는데
이패턴을 쭉지켜주시면 듣기 좋을거 같아요

00:58:293 (3) - 볼륨좀 낮춰서 피니시 일단 수정
00:59:072 (7) - 그냥 피니시 ^
01:10:760 (5) - 휘슬삭제 클랩추가 Done

노래가 잔잔하고 좋네요 랭크 기대할꼐요!

모딩감사합니당.

Just getting back into the modding game, sorry if some of my suggestions are faulty or this mod isn't of the highest quality.

ANYWAYS.

Overall:
The mp3 needs to fade out. You can go into Audacity or another sound editing software and add a little fade. Right now the mp3 ends abruptly, which is not good.
Combo Color 4 and 5 are really similar, making things really confusing. Try changing them (or at least change the order of them) so they're not so confusing.
Sometimes the blue combocolor gets hidden when the video gets really dark (especially in the end of the map.)

Hard:
00:09:981 (3) - Add whistle or soft finish (soft as in lowering the volume of the note).
00:10:955 (1) - End this on the previous white tick. It just sounds awkward where its ends atm
00:15:046 (1,2,3) - Personally, I'd just remove these and have the section as a little break.
00:17:772 (2) - Add whistle
00:19:137 (6) - Add whistle on beginning of slider
00:25:371 (4) - ^
00:26:345 (1) - Add whistle on end of slider
00:27:903 (1,2,3) - Remove NC and just make this a slider? At this slow tempo, a lot of people will end up fumbling on this.
00:31:409 - For this section up to 00:35:695 (1), I don't like the little piano notes that are in there, mostly because it's not based on any given rhythm. However, a break feels weird here too. Maybe put a spinner? I'm not sure, but the piano things are just weird atm.
00:54:397 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
01:06:864 (4) - This looks confusing. Maybe make the pattern into a square shape? (Or alternatively, something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/529453 )
01:13:098 (1) - ^
01:18:163 (7) - This just feels awkward because it's so close and there's no NC or anything

Normal:
00:06:864 (2) - Add whistle
00:32:578 (1,1) - Same suggestion as hard

Pretty ok map. Yay.

CDFA wrote:

Just getting back into the modding game, sorry if some of my suggestions are faulty or this mod isn't of the highest quality.

ANYWAYS.

Overall:
The mp3 needs to fade out. You can go into Audacity or another sound editing software and add a little fade. Right now the mp3 ends abruptly, which is not good.
Combo Color 4 and 5 are really similar, making things really confusing. Try changing them (or at least change the order of them) so they're not so confusing.
Sometimes the blue combocolor gets hidden when the video gets really dark (especially in the end of the map.)
okay, mp3 file was changed.

Hard:
00:09:981 (3) - Add whistle or soft finish (soft as in lowering the volume of the note). whistle add
00:10:955 (1) - End this on the previous white tick. It just sounds awkward where its ends atm white lines on the alignment
00:15:046 (1,2,3) - Personally, I'd just remove these and have the section as a little break. np
00:17:772 (2) - Add whistle Done
00:19:137 (6) - Add whistle on beginning of slider Done
00:25:371 (4) - ^ ^
00:26:345 (1) - Add whistle on end of slider Done
00:27:903 (1,2,3) - Remove NC and just make this a slider? At this slow tempo, a lot of people will end up fumbling on this. changed with a slider.
00:31:409 - For this section up to 00:35:695 (1), I don't like the little piano notes that are in there, mostly because it's not based on any given rhythm. However, a break feels weird here too. Maybe put a spinner? I'm not sure, but the piano things are just weird atm. np
00:54:397 (1) - Add clap on end of slider Done
01:06:864 (4) - This looks confusing. Maybe make the pattern into a square shape? (Or alternatively, something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/529453 ) Done
01:13:098 (1) - ^ ^
01:18:163 (7) - This just feels awkward because it's so close and there's no NC or anything Done

Normal:
00:06:864 (2) - Add whistle Done
00:32:578 (1,1) - Same suggestion as hard np

Pretty ok map. Yay.

modding thx~

[Normal:]

• 
  00:07:643 (3) The endpoint is kind of off the grid at the top. Not sure if it'll make too much of a difference, but you can make it going downwards instead.
  00:40:371 (1,2) It might be better if 1 was a slider and the endpoint of 2 was a circle. It just feels odd that 1 is a circle and to me it would make more sense as a slider.
  00:44:656 I'm not sure it why there isn't a circle here. It would improve the flow of the rhythm and there already is a lot of objects that are spaced a 1/2 beat from each other so it shouldn't make it harder.
  00:47:773 ^
  01:22:448 (1,2,3) Hmm... Nothing wrong with it, but you may just want to replicate that long 2 beat slider a while back here to have symmetrical rhythms.
  01:28:682 If the music didn't fade out so quickly I would have suggested a spinner here. Was the mp3 already like that?

[Hard:]

• 
  Why is the AR rate 6? A Hard difficulty should have an approach rate of 7 or 8 but never 6.
  I think your 1/4 streams have a very close distance snap that looks kind of odd. To make things worse, it isn't even consistent in places like 00:21:669 (2,3)
  00:32:578 (1,1) I'm not quite sure why these are both new combos...
  00:57:124 (4,1) This isn't perfectly stacked together.
  00:59:455 (1,2,3,1) This is arranged in a weird way. You should make it look like a distinctive shape, such as a + sign. Also, the last 1 shouldn't be a new combo. The two following this should.
  01:20:111 (2) This doesn't look good when overlapping 3. You should probably move it to the right and up.

That's pretty much all the notable things I could find. Good luck.

Star~

*Akashi_S runs

Came back after running away for mod..

[Normal]

01:00:241 - Unnecessary inherited point

[Hard]

스냅되지 않은 노트가 꽤 있네요~
00:01:412
00:01:801
00:02:191
00:02:580
00:03:360
00:04:139
00:04:528
00:04:918
00:15:095
00:15:289
00:15:484
00:59:455
00:59:845
01:00:234

00:25:371 (4) - 이 슬라이더를 00:25:955 까지 연장해보는건 어떨까용? 파란색 틱->흰색 틱의 전환이 좀 힘들기도 하고 보컬이 애매하네용..

원래는 하드 난이도에서는 안티점프를 쓰는게 좀 안 맞는 것 같지만 난이도가 2개이니 상관없다고 생각합니다. 하지만 간격을 되도록이면 모두 일정하게 해주시면 덜 혼동이 올 것 같네요.
00:50:890 (4,5,6) - 이곳은 0.32x인데 비해 00:43:877 (4,5,6) - 이곳은 0.41x이고 여러군데도 다 불규칙적입니다.

00:57:124 (4,1) - 일부러 스택하시지 않으신 거라면 상관없지만..

일단 간단한 모딩완료 'ㄴ' 나중에 더 모딩 필요하시면 PM 주세요 ㅋㅅㅋ

Akashi_S wrote:

Came back after running away for mod..

[Normal]

01:00:241 - Unnecessary inherited point All Fix

[Hard]

스냅되지 않은 노트가 꽤 있네요~
00:01:412
00:01:801
00:02:191
00:02:580
00:03:360
00:04:139
00:04:528
00:04:918
00:15:095
00:15:289
00:15:484
00:59:455
00:59:845
01:00:234
All Fix

00:25:371 (4) - 이 슬라이더를 00:25:955 까지 연장해보는건 어떨까용? 파란색 틱->흰색 틱의 전환이 좀 힘들기도 하고 보컬이 애매하네용..

원래는 하드 난이도에서는 안티점프를 쓰는게 좀 안 맞는 것 같지만 난이도가 2개이니 상관없다고 생각합니다. 하지만 간격을 되도록이면 모두 일정하게 해주시면 덜 혼동이 올 것 같네요.
00:50:890 (4,5,6) - 이곳은 0.32x인데 비해 00:43:877 (4,5,6) - 이곳은 0.41x이고 여러군데도 다 불규칙적입니다.

00:57:124 (4,1) - 일부러 스택하시지 않으신 거라면 상관없지만..

일단 간단한 모딩완료 'ㄴ' 나중에 더 모딩 필요하시면 PM 주세요 ㅋㅅㅋ

대충 수정 완료! 모딩감사합니다
Thank you Modding and Star*!!~

Hi, random modder here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General

1. The BG is 746 KB... I think you can reduce the size a lot without dramatically decreasing the quality. I've made it five times smaller, and I'm sure enough I didn't see any noticeable decrease of quality.
2. I personally think using Normal sampleset on the kiai time is a good idea, but it's up to you.

>Normal

1. 00:01:410 (1) - Why don't you add a whistle at the beginning of this slider? I personally think it fits with the song... (When I suggest stuff about hitsounds, assume that this is also the reason.)
2. 00:07:643 (3) - Add whistle at the beginning and the repeat?
3. 00:27:903 (1) - Whistle on the repeat to emphasize the vocal?
4. 00:52:448 (2) - ^
5. 00:59:851 (1) - Whistle?
6. 01:02:189 - ^
7. 01:05:306 - ^
8. 01:22:448 (1) - ^ (Repeat.)
9. 01:28:682 - Instead of a circle, make a spinner that goes to 01:30:241?

>Hard

1. 00:02:189 (3,4) - Move (4)'s whistle to (3)?
2. 00:05:695 (1) - Add whistle at the beginning?
3. 00:07:448 - Considering this song is REALLY slow, I think making a 1/4 stream by adding a circle here is fine, although then you'll have to tweak 00:07:643 (1,2,3) to keep the spacing... But rotating them clockwise by 60 degrees should do.
4. 00:22:254 (3) - Whistle at the beginning to emphasize the vocal?
5. 00:27:903 (2) - Whistle on the repeat?
6. 00:32:870 - ^
7. 00:41:929 (1) - ^ (Beginning.)
8. 00:37:254 (5) - ^
9. 00:41:929 (1) - ^ (Beginning.)
10. 00:46:994 (2) - ^
11. 00:49:332 (2) - ^ (Beginning.)
12. 00:51:280 (6) - ^ (Beginning.) Also NC this?
13. 00:54:397 (1) - ^ (Beginning.)
14. 00:55:565 (2) - ^ (Beginning.)
15. 00:57:124 (4,1) - I think making an anti-jump here is... weird. Place (1) at 00:57:903 (2)'s place and (2) to (180,204)?
16. 00:58:293 (3) - Use whistle from Normal sampleset instead?
17. 00:59:072 (7) - ^
18. 01:01:799 (4,5) - Make this a 1/4 slider, remove (5), and make a slider from 01:02:188 to 01:02:578? This goes along with the song (vocal) really well, in my opinion. The current one feels weird, anyway... Oh, and add whistle on the beginning and the end of the new slider.
19. 01:06:085 (2) - Remove clap?
20. 01:06:474 (3) - Whistle?
21. 01:07:254 (5) - Add clap? (Yes, whistle and clap at once.)
22. 01:07:643 (1) - Replace clap with whistle?
23. 01:08:422 (5) - Add whistle AND clap at the beginning AND the end?
24. 01:09:202 (1) - Add whistle at the beginning?
25. 01:09:981 (1) - Add clap?
26. 01:10:176 (2) - Remove whistle?
27. 01:10:760 (5,6) - Same as 01:01:799 (4,5), except without the whistles on the new slider, just on the end.
28. 01:11:929 (1) - Remove whistle?
29. 01:14:461 (6) - Add whistle?
30. 01:14:656 (7) - Remove whistle at the beginning?
31. 01:16:215 (1) - Add whistle?
32. 01:16:604 (2,3,4) - Use Drum sampleset and add finishes here?
33. 01:17:578 (5) - Use Normal sampleset?
34. 01:17:773 (6) - Same as 01:16:215 (1,2,3,4).
35. 01:25:380 - Same as 00:07:448.
36. 01:28:682 (4) - Same as Normal.

...I got too much hitsound suggestions today, I guess

Good luck on the way

i love this song!!!~
good luck with rank!!!~

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi, random modder here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General

1. The BG is 746 KB... I think you can reduce the size a lot without dramatically decreasing the quality. I've made it five times smaller, and I'm sure enough I didn't see any noticeable decrease of quality.
2. I personally think using Normal sampleset on the kiai time is a good idea, but it's up to you.

>Normal

1. 00:01:410 (1) - Why don't you add a whistle at the beginning of this slider? I personally think it fits with the song... (When I suggest stuff about hitsounds, assume that this is also the reason.) Done~
2. 00:07:643 (3) - Add whistle at the beginning and the repeat? Done~
3. 00:27:903 (1) - Whistle on the repeat to emphasize the vocal? The flow of the vocals
4. 00:52:448 (2) - ^ Done~
5. 00:59:851 (1) - Whistle? Done~
6. 01:02:189 - ^ ^
7. 01:05:306 - ^ ^
8. 01:22:448 (1) - ^ (Repeat.) ^
9. 01:28:682 - Instead of a circle, make a spinner that goes to 01:30:241? hmm..now add

>Hard

1. 00:02:189 (3,4) - Move (4)'s whistle to (3)?
2. 00:05:695 (1) - Add whistle at the beginning?
3. 00:07:448 - Considering this song is REALLY slow, I think making a 1/4 stream by adding a circle here is fine, although then you'll have to tweak 00:07:643 (1,2,3) to keep the spacing... But rotating them clockwise by 60 degrees should do.
4. 00:22:254 (3) - Whistle at the beginning to emphasize the vocal? vocal~
5. 00:27:903 (2) - Whistle on the repeat? Done~
6. 00:32:870 - ^ np
7. 00:41:929 (1) - ^ (Beginning.) Done~
8. 00:37:254 (5) - ^ ^
9. 00:41:929 (1) - ^ (Beginning.) ^
10. 00:46:994 (2) - ^ ^
11. 00:49:332 (2) - ^ (Beginning.) ^
12. 00:51:280 (6) - ^ (Beginning.) Also NC this? ^
13. 00:54:397 (1) - ^ (Beginning.) ^
14. 00:55:565 (2) - ^ (Beginning.) ^
15. 00:57:124 (4,1) - I think making an anti-jump here is... weird. Place (1) at 00:57:903 (2)'s place and (2) to (180,204)? Done~
16. 00:58:293 (3) - Use whistle from Normal sampleset instead? do not use the whistle.
17. 00:59:072 (7) - ^ np
18. 01:01:799 (4,5) - Make this a 1/4 slider, remove (5), and make a slider from 01:02:188 to 01:02:578? This goes along with the song (vocal) really well, in my opinion. The current one feels weird, anyway... Oh, and add whistle on the beginning and the end of the new slider. okay, will merge.
19. 01:06:085 (2) - Remove clap? np
20. 01:06:474 (3) - Whistle? Done~
21. 01:07:254 (5) - Add clap? (Yes, whistle and clap at once.) np
22. 01:07:643 (1) - Replace clap with whistle? ^
23. 01:08:422 (5) - Add whistle AND clap at the beginning AND the end? Will add the whistle. but do not add to the applause.
24. 01:09:202 (1) - Add whistle at the beginning? Done~
25. 01:09:981 (1) - Add clap? np
26. 01:10:176 (2) - Remove whistle? ^
27. 01:10:760 (5,6) - Same as 01:01:799 (4,5), except without the whistles on the new slider, just on the end.
28. 01:11:929 (1) - Remove whistle? Done~
29. 01:14:461 (6) - Add whistle? np
30. 01:14:656 (7) - Remove whistle at the beginning?[/color] ^
31. 01:16:215 (1) - Add whistle?[/color] ^
32. 01:16:604 (2,3,4) - Use Drum sampleset and add finishes here? Does not use
33. 01:17:578 (5) - Use Normal sampleset? ^
34. 01:17:773 (6) - Same as 01:16:215 (1,2,3,4). np
35. 01:25:380 - Same as 00:07:448. ^
36. 01:28:682 (4) - Same as Normal. ^

...I got too much hitsound suggestions today, I guess

Good luck on the way

thank you for modding~

Athena Tennos wrote:

i love this song!!!~
good luck with rank!!!~

Thx~

간다잉

[General]

Combo colours 통일해주세요
offset 통일 해주세요
First offset + 40 (1450) , Last offset +51 (17045)

[Normal]

unused inherited point

1. 00:32:578 -

00:15:095 (1) - 언스냅이긴 하다만, offset 통일해주면 문제 없을것 같습니다.
01:24:786 (3) - 거리조절 해주세요

[Hard]

00:32:627 (1) - 1 hit 더 반복해주세요
00:34:039 (1) - 이 노트를 00:34:088 - 에 둬 주세요
EDIT : 하드에도 불필요한 타이밍 포인트 있습니다. 00:32:578 -


맵이 애매해서 더이상 잡을게 없네요
제 개인적인 의견이지만 콤보컬러 두개가 유사해서 구분이 안되는 경우가 있으니 조금 수정해보시는것도 추천합니다.

Dark Fang wrote:

간다잉

[General]

Combo colours 통일해주세요
offset 통일 해주세요
First offset + 40 (1450) , Last offset +51 (17045)

[Normal]

unused inherited point

1. 00:32:578 -

00:15:095 (1) - 언스냅이긴 하다만, offset 통일해주면 문제 없을것 같습니다.
01:24:786 (3) - 거리조절 해주세요

[Hard]

00:32:627 (1) - 1 hit 더 반복해주세요
00:34:039 (1) - 이 노트를 00:34:088 - 에 둬 주세요
EDIT : 하드에도 불필요한 타이밍 포인트 있습니다. 00:32:578 -


맵이 애매해서 더이상 잡을게 없네요
제 개인적인 의견이지만 콤보컬러 두개가 유사해서 구분이 안되는 경우가 있으니 조금 수정해보시는것도 추천합니다.

All Fix~
타이밍에서 계속 애가 탔었는데 닭빵님이 뙇! 설정을 뙇!
모딩감사합니다~
Thank you for modding~

Random mod, omg this song...*-----*

such a beautiful song




Good map, good luck.

KuronumaSawako wrote:

Random mod, omg this song...*-----*

such a beautiful song

[General]

1. In hard diff, combo color 2 is different from combo 2 from normal, why?
2. Also, combo 4 color is very equal to combo 5 color.
3. Disable enable countdown and letterbox during breaks
4. Well, Lia and karuta are part of group veil but only Tada Aoi and Togashi Mizusu are singing this song, so if you want to keep Lia and karuta in tags you can keep.

[Normal]

1. Maybe AR -1 because BPM is low and song itself is calm?
2. I think you should use a higher DS...I don't know if it's because I don't usually use DS 1.0 x in normal diffs when the BPM is low, but I feel that the notes are very closed to other notes...

1. 00:53:668 (2,3): Wanted to see a pattern more like...this:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:06:915 (4): I think will look better moving to x:400 y:208.

[Hard]

1. 00:15:475 (1): Is a good idea adding whistle in this note. Also i really enjoyed the pattern here *--*
2. 00:17:045 - I think you should lower the volume here to 30% and increasing volume in 00:35:745
3. 00:50:551 (3,4,5,1): You can make a good jump pattern here, like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:50:941 (4): Whistle in this note?
5. 00:59:902 (2): Finish can be good here.
6. 01:27:954 (3): Whistle?

Good map, good luck.

ALL FIX! Make the same changes on the difficulty of the combo color.
thank you for modding!

Hello, random mod, I like this group

[General]

- Countdown doesn't display anyways so might as well just remove from Hard.
- I don't understand why you made combo color 4 & 5 almost the same. Please try to distinguish between them more or just remove combo color 5. While I am not sure, I believe doing new combos like this is unrankable. If you want to use two orange for whatever reason, just make sure that there is another color in between so that it's not two orange new combos in a row.
- Consider adding a silent slider-slide hitsound, sound too loud for me for 00:18:603 (3,1) - in Normal for example.

[Normal]

- Consider -1 hp, seem better to me looking at Hard hp drain.
- You would benefit from mapping in grid size 4 here.

00:01:450 (1) - If you're going to follow the piano, you need whistle at end
00:05:833 (1) - ^ Whistle at begin
00:06:904 (2) - Not too fond of this hit circle due to the piano rhythm here, perhaps do a slider ending on 00:07:294? (sliders have less strict timing window than hit circle so good for rhythms like these)
00:07:683 (3) - **Whistle on repeat, same reasoning as before. Also, I'm not too fond of this slider shape, it feel off to the song to me, but it's your choice.
00:10:800 (1) - Put the 30% timing point on 00:13:917 and add whistle to this spinner, it sound a bit empty right now so this should help.
00:25:616 (4) - Copy 00:23:279 (1) - and ctrl+J and ctrl+H put in same spot?
00:32:629 (1) - I really think this need whistle, do a lower/higher volume (depending on interpretation) for this if you want to differentiate it from the whistle on 00:34:090 (1) -
00:34:187 - What is this timing for?
00:43:538 (4) - Seems like you forgot whistle at begin
00:46:655 (3) - ^, remove from repeat
00:59:461 - Useless timing point
01:00:291 (2) - Prefer if you add a whistle
01:05:746 (1,2,3) - Do the same hitsound pattern as 00:59:902 (1,2,3) - [add the appropriate timing points as well]
01:15:876 - Don't see why not add a note here, it's a Normal after all.
01:19:383 (2) - Whistle at begin & end
01:22:499 (1) - Whistle at end
01:24:837 (3) - Same as 00:06:904
01:26:785 (2) - Prefer if you add a whistle at end

Whistle pattern seems a bit off and inconsistent for me. Keep in mind when I say prefer, it's just suggestion, the rest are highly recommended.

[Hard]

00:01:450 (1,2,3,4) - Personally, I would do whistle on all the notes, but I don't agree with current whistle pattern. If you listen to the accent on the music here, it's on (1) & (4) so whistle should be on those notes assuming you don't want to spam whistle, if not, please add whistle to all the hit circles here.
00:03:787 (2) - (1,2,3,5) are all the same sound, so if you do whistle on (1,3,5), you should do it on (2) too.
*00:07:683 (1,2) - Whistle on the ends if you put whistle on all the notes in my first suggestion.
00:10:995 (1) - Same suggestion as Normal for this part
00:15:281 (2) - Prefer if you add whistle here
00:30:292 (2,3,4) - I think whistle > notihng > whistle would be a better hitsound pattern here. Prefer if you do whistle on all notes through.
00:32:629 (1) - Whistle at begin.Lower/higher volume if you want ,see Normal.
00:41:200 - Lower the volume of this timing point by 10-20%, clap sound a bit too loud for me.
00:52:889 (3,4) - Whistle on (3) and begin of (4) to emphasize vocal?
00:57:564 (1) - 1 grid down, make it look like the spacing that you used for 1/4s.
01:01:850 (4) - Consider a whistle on repeat
01:06:525 (3) - This hit circle is not really on anything prominent compare to the other hit circles so I prefer if you remove the whistle
01:16:266 (1,2,3) - Lower the volume by another 10% and add finish or better, 20 % > 25% > 30% and if you want me to be a bit balanced, add 40% timing point to 01:17:434. I think this is the effect you want to achieve.
01:21:720 (4) - Same as 00:03:787.
*01:25:616 (1,2) - Same as 00:07:683

I think this would been better if you map with a higher slider velocity, but this is my personal opinion. Overall, I don't see anything wrong.

I'm not too fond of this style so no star from me sorry, but I hope this help you. Definitely think about adding silent slider-slide.

Good luck!

merchat7 wrote:

Hello, random mod, I like this group

[General]

- Countdown doesn't display anyways so might as well just remove from Hard.
- I don't understand why you made combo color 4 & 5 almost the same. Please try to distinguish between them more or just remove combo color 5. While I am not sure, I believe doing new combos like this is unrankable. If you want to use two orange for whatever reason, just make sure that there is another color in between so that it's not two orange new combos in a row.
- Consider adding a silent slider-slide hitsound, sound too loud for me for 00:18:603 (3,1) - in Normal for example.

[Normal]

- Consider -1 hp, seem better to me looking at Hard hp drain.
- You would benefit from mapping in grid size 4 here.

00:01:450 (1) - If you're going to follow the piano, you need whistle at end
00:05:833 (1) - ^ Whistle at begin
00:06:904 (2) - Not too fond of this hit circle due to the piano rhythm here, perhaps do a slider ending on 00:07:294? (sliders have less strict timing window than hit circle so good for rhythms like these)
00:07:683 (3) - **Whistle on repeat, same reasoning as before. Also, I'm not too fond of this slider shape, it feel off to the song to me, but it's your choice.
00:10:800 (1) - Put the 30% timing point on 00:13:917 and add whistle to this spinner, it sound a bit empty right now so this should help.
00:25:616 (4) - Copy 00:23:279 (1) - and ctrl+J and ctrl+H put in same spot?
00:32:629 (1) - I really think this need whistle, do a lower/higher volume (depending on interpretation) for this if you want to differentiate it from the whistle on 00:34:090 (1) -
00:34:187 - What is this timing for?
00:43:538 (4) - Seems like you forgot whistle at begin
00:46:655 (3) - ^, remove from repeat
00:59:461 - Useless timing point
01:00:291 (2) - Prefer if you add a whistle
01:05:746 (1,2,3) - Do the same hitsound pattern as 00:59:902 (1,2,3) - [add the appropriate timing points as well]
01:15:876 - Don't see why not add a note here, it's a Normal after all.
01:19:383 (2) - Whistle at begin & end
01:22:499 (1) - Whistle at end
01:24:837 (3) - Same as 00:06:904
01:26:785 (2) - Prefer if you add a whistle at end

Whistle pattern seems a bit off and inconsistent for me. Keep in mind when I say prefer, it's just suggestion, the rest are highly recommended.

[Hard]

00:01:450 (1,2,3,4) - Personally, I would do whistle on all the notes, but I don't agree with current whistle pattern. If you listen to the accent on the music here, it's on (1) & (4) so whistle should be on those notes assuming you don't want to spam whistle, if not, please add whistle to all the hit circles here.
00:03:787 (2) - (1,2,3,5) are all the same sound, so if you do whistle on (1,3,5), you should do it on (2) too.
*00:07:683 (1,2) - Whistle on the ends if you put whistle on all the notes in my first suggestion.
00:10:995 (1) - Same suggestion as Normal for this part
00:15:281 (2) - Prefer if you add whistle here
00:30:292 (2,3,4) - I think whistle > notihng > whistle would be a better hitsound pattern here. Prefer if you do whistle on all notes through.
00:32:629 (1) - Whistle at begin.Lower/higher volume if you want ,see Normal.
00:41:200 - Lower the volume of this timing point by 10-20%, clap sound a bit too loud for me.
00:52:889 (3,4) - Whistle on (3) and begin of (4) to emphasize vocal?
00:57:564 (1) - 1 grid down, make it look like the spacing that you used for 1/4s.
01:01:850 (4) - Consider a whistle on repeat
01:06:525 (3) - This hit circle is not really on anything prominent compare to the other hit circles so I prefer if you remove the whistle
01:16:266 (1,2,3) - Lower the volume by another 10% and add finish or better, 20 % > 25% > 30% and if you want me to be a bit balanced, add 40% timing point to 01:17:434. I think this is the effect you want to achieve.
01:21:720 (4) - Same as 00:03:787.
*01:25:616 (1,2) - Same as 00:07:683

I think this would been better if you map with a higher slider velocity, but this is my personal opinion. Overall, I don't see anything wrong.

I'm not too fond of this style so no star from me sorry, but I hope this help you. Definitely think about adding silent slider-slide.

Good luck!

modding for thx~

Hello!
Childbirth asking apology for the delay, I was not alone in my house and had no way to make your mod ..
beforehand hope I apologize, and here your mod order through me tail mods .. Mod Request!
Your song Meets my rules for a mod mine, and here so your mod .. : D

[Normal]

[Hard]

Great song! What if I would need an easy level, or taiko, if you want I can make an Easy, but I have to say
I find that doing well knew the rhythms with only 2 levels ..
Kudosu I have not, but if I'd give you a star!

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hello!
Childbirth asking apology for the delay, I was not alone in my house and had no way to make your mod ..
beforehand hope I apologize, and here your mod order through me tail mods .. Mod Request!
Your song Meets my rules for a mod mine, and here so your mod .. : D

[Normal]

00:05:735 (1,2,3) It's confusing to a normal level does not believe? piano sound
00:19:772 Delete :3 okay
00:50:551 (3) Delete.. ^
00:49:382 (2) Move up 00:49:772 ^

[Hard]

01:17:434 (4,5,6) Gather Notes ... hmm?

Great song! What if I would need an easy level, or taiko, if you want I can make an Easy, but I have to say
I find that doing well knew the rhythms with only 2 levels ..
Kudosu I have not, but if I'd give you a star!

thank you for mod~

hmm im not sure if this is a joke with your "three"(1x), "normal"(2x) and "insane"(3x) or if you just wanted to say "your third beatmap". if so change it plz.maybe use another bg too, because there is alrdy another map which uses the bg (actually its also an "i miss you"-map )
[Normal]

00:04:566 (2) - since the beginning plays like a 3/2 mesure it plays like it would start on a read tick. just make a circle on 256;200 (start on the end of the slider)
00:34:090 (1) - you cant hit him in right time. because you have no idea how the music goes along. just make a spinner (starts at 00:32:629)
01:18:993 - add a circle if you want have 77objects, lol
[Insane]

00:34:090 (1) - same as in normal

dats all
next time give me link to your beatmap >.<

phaZ wrote:

hmm im not sure if this is a joke with your "three"(1x), "normal"(2x) and "insane"(3x) or if you just wanted to say "your third beatmap". if so change it plz.maybe use another bg too, because there is alrdy another map which uses the bg (actually its also an "i miss you"-map )
[Normal]

00:04:566 (2) - since the beginning plays like a 3/2 mesure it plays like it would start on a read tick. just make a circle on 256;200 (start on the end of the slider)
00:34:090 (1) - you cant hit him in right time. because you have no idea how the music goes along. just make a spinner (starts at 00:32:629)
01:18:993 - add a circle if you want have 77objects, lol
[Insane]

00:34:090 (1) - same as in normal

dats all
next time give me link to your beatmap >.<

modding Thanks to

Hi~

A quick check

[Hard]
I suggest to silence slider body, will make the map sound really soft a nice, like the song <3
00:32:629 (1) - this sound better snapped to 1/6
00:41:201 (5) - why the sudden volume slow down on the head of the slider? maybe if you do the change more subtle will sound better
01:00:681 (1) - make it part of the previous combo and add new combo to the next note like you did here 01:05:746 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:11:980 (1,2,3,1,2) - make these in the same combo, like the ones above, new combo at 01:13:928 (3) -

[Normal]
same suggestion about silencing slider body
00:20:161 (1) - remove new combo and add new combo to the next note, fits better, imo
00:23:279 (1) - remove new combo
00:24:837 (2) - add new combo
00:29:512 (1) - remove new combo, to make the 3 slider in one combo
00:43:538 (4) - new combo
00:45:097 (1) - remove new combo
00:46:655 (5) - you could make this one part of the next combo too, I think fits too, or just leave it like that

Cute map and song <3

Lissette wrote:

Hi~ hi~

A quick check thx~!

[Hard]
I suggest to silence slider body, will make the map sound really soft a nice, like the song <3
00:32:629 (1) - this sound better snapped to 1/6 replace the slide 1/6? chenge.
00:41:201 (5) - why the sudden volume slow down on the head of the slider? maybe if you do the change more subtle will sound better My mistake..
01:00:681 (1) - make it part of the previous combo and add new combo to the next note like you did here 01:05:746 (1,2,3,4,5) - Delete the combo of the front, and then put on a new combo.
01:11:980 (1,2,3,1,2) - make these in the same combo, like the ones above, new combo at 01:13:928 (3) - okay~

[Normal]
same suggestion about silencing slider body
00:20:161 (1) - remove new combo and add new combo to the next note, fits better, imo I am confused by the front and rear of the slide.
00:23:279 (1) - remove new combo Done!
00:24:837 (2) - add new combo ^
00:29:512 (1) - remove new combo, to make the 3 slider in one combo ^
00:43:538 (4) - new combo ^
00:45:097 (1) - remove new combo ^
00:46:655 (5) - you could make this one part of the next combo too, I think fits too, or just leave it like that I thought that for this

Cute map and song <3

Thank you very much

Hi~
- General:
+) Inconsistency in Countdown: - [Hard] : 1 - [Normal] : 0
+) In spinner you use timing point to reduce volume. But in my idea, why don't you use a blank file for spinner bonus ?
http://puu.sh/1Qagd
If you use that, please remove all timing point in spinner.

- My mod:
> Hard:
00:15:086 (1) - Unessesary timing point
00:41:201 (5) - ^ (At tail of slider)
00:45:097 (1) - Remove NC
00:45:486 (2) - NC here.
01:03:019 (4) - NC here.
01:03:798 (1) - Remove NC.
01:10:032 (1) - Remove NC.
01:13:149 (1) - Remove NC.

> Nomal:
00:15:086 (1) - Unessesary timing point
00:32:629 (1) - ^
00:59:902 (1) - ^
00:27:175 (4) - Remove whistle here?
00:50:941 (3) - May be use distance snap here is better.

That's all i can find.
Nice map and nice song.
Good Luck~

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~
- General:
+) Inconsistency in Countdown: - [Hard] : 1 - [Normal] : 0
+) In spinner you use timing point to reduce volume. But in my idea, why don't you use a blank file for spinner bonus ?
http://puu.sh/1Qagd oh, great. thank you so much.
If you use that, please remove all timing point in spinner.

- My mod:
> Hard:
00:15:086 (1) - Unessesary timing point
00:41:201 (5) - ^ (At tail of slider)
00:45:097 (1) - Remove NC
00:45:486 (2) - NC here.
01:03:019 (4) - NC here.
01:03:798 (1) - Remove NC.
01:10:032 (1) - Remove NC.
01:13:149 (1) - Remove NC.

> Nomal:
00:15:086 (1) - Unessesary timing point
00:32:629 (1) - ^
00:59:902 (1) - ^
00:27:175 (4) - Remove whistle here?
00:50:941 (3) - May be use distance snap here is better.

That's all i can find.
Nice map and nice song.
Good Luck~

Thank you for modding~

+더 완벽한 힛사를 위해 휘슬 사운드를 슬라이더 틱 3로 추가해보시는건 어떤가요? (예 : 노멀의 00:27:954 (1) - 부분 등을 위해서)
+키아이 타임 부분은 클랩 사운드를 드럼 스네어 사운드나 normal-hitnormal 사운드로 바꿔보시는건 어떤가요?

[normla]
00:04:566 (2) - 가운데 컨트롤 포인트를 1그리드 위로 당겨보세요~
00:07:683 (3) - 두 번째 컨트롤 포인트와 세 번째 컨트롤 포인트를 3그리드 오른쪽으로 당겨보세요 / 마지막 컨트롤 포인트를 2그리드 오른쪽으로 당겨보세요~
00:35:746 (1) - 피니시 사운드는 소리를 조금 더 감소시키는게 좋을 것 같아요
00:45:097 (3) - 시작 부분에 휘슬
00:50:941 (3) - 이런 형태의 점프라면 00:51:331 (1) - 슬라이더의 시작 부분에 이 노트를 겹치는것도 괜찮을 것 같아요
01:18:603 (1) - 음.. 딱 중간에 둬도 좋아보여요 ㅋㅋ

[hrad]
00:07:294 (5) - 1그리드 위로 올려보세요~
00:35:746 (1) - 피니시 사운드는 소리를 조금 더 감소시키는게 좋을 것 같아요
01:20:162 (2) - 디스턴스를 조금만 더 벌려보세요~ (01:22:110 (5) - 정도로)

nice map

K i A i wrote:

+더 완벽한 힛사를 위해 휘슬 사운드를 슬라이더 틱 3로 추가해보시는건 어떤가요? (예 : 노멀의 00:27:954 (1) - 부분 등을 위해서)
+키아이 타임 부분은 클랩 사운드를 드럼 스네어 사운드나 normal-hitnormal 사운드로 바꿔보시는건 어떤가요?
조금 부적절해서 추가 안하겠습니다

[normla]
00:04:566 (2) - 가운데 컨트롤 포인트를 1그리드 위로 당겨보세요~ Fix
00:07:683 (3) - 두 번째 컨트롤 포인트와 세 번째 컨트롤 포인트를 3그리드 오른쪽으로 당겨보세요 / 마지막 컨트롤 포인트를 2그리드 오른쪽으로 당겨보세요~ Fix
00:35:746 (1) - 피니시 사운드는 소리를 조금 더 감소시키는게 좋을 것 같아요 Fix
00:45:097 (3) - 시작 부분에 휘슬 Fix
00:50:941 (3) - 이런 형태의 점프라면 00:51:331 (1) - 슬라이더의 시작 부분에 이 노트를 겹치는것도 괜찮을 것 같아요 여기 점프 아닙니다..잘 못 수정해뒀네요;
01:18:603 (1) - 음.. 딱 중간에 둬도 좋아보여요 ㅋㅋ 일단 믿고 Fix

[hrad]
00:07:294 (5) - 1그리드 위로 올려보세요~ Fix
00:35:746 (1) - 피니시 사운드는 소리를 조금 더 감소시키는게 좋을 것 같아요 Fix
01:20:162 (2) - 디스턴스를 조금만 더 벌려보세요~ (01:22:110 (5) - 정도로) Fix

nice map

Thank you KiAi san

[General]

1. Both quality of audio and video are horrible. Please change them.
2. Default soft-sliderslide doesn't fit this calm song imo, please use muted one.
3. 01:05:746 - 딱히 키아이타임 폭죽을 반복해서 터뜨릴 이유는 없어보입니다. 물론 세번째, 네번째에 나오는 "I miss you"가 요 앞의 두개보다 음정이 낮은건 사실이지만 휴지가 있는 부분이 아니거든요. 그래도 키아이타임 넣고 싶다면 끄는 부분을 01:05:356 여기로 하세요.

[Hard]

1. Disable countdown

01:01:070 - Add a circle on the position of 00:59:123 (7) please. Since you've made 5 circles at every part of lyrics "I miss you", but only this part has 4 circles.
01:11:980 (1,2,3,4,5) - Circle 5 feels out of it. Because they don't form a pentagon.
01:25:616 (1,2,3) - Seems sliders curved too much imo, maybe change them to like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/595741


[Normal]
Fine to me

Squeezing in a mod.

[General]
Instead of tick rate 2, I think tick rate 1 would go better with the music.
On both difficulties, make it so that the first spinner ends at 00:14:047 (1/6 tick). Sounds more accurate to the piano sound.

[Normal]
00:46:655 (5) - Remove the whistle on the repeat of this slider. It doesn't fit the music in my opinion.

[Hard]
00:20:162 (1) - A slider like this with red nodes doesn't fit the map or the music in my opinion. I would do something like this instead.
00:51:331 (1) - ^

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]

1. Both quality of audio and video are horrible. Please change them.
2. Default soft-sliderslide doesn't fit this calm song imo, please use muted one.
3. 01:05:746 - 딱히 키아이타임 폭죽을 반복해서 터뜨릴 이유는 없어보입니다. 물론 세번째, 네번째에 나오는 "I miss you"가 요 앞의 두개보다 음정이 낮은건 사실이지만 휴지가 있는 부분이 아니거든요. 그래도 키아이타임 넣고 싶다면 끄는 부분을 01:05:356 여기로 하세요.

[Hard]

1. Disable countdown

01:01:070 - Add a circle on the position of 00:59:123 (7) please. Since you've made 5 circles at every part of lyrics "I miss you", but only this part has 4 circles.
01:11:980 (1,2,3,4,5) - Circle 5 feels out of it. Because they don't form a pentagon.
01:25:616 (1,2,3) - Seems sliders curved too much imo, maybe change them to like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/595741


[Normal]
Fine to me

all fix

Jacob wrote:

Squeezing in a mod.

[General]
Instead of tick rate 2, I think tick rate 1 would go better with the music. 2 sticks of the late
On both difficulties, make it so that the first spinner ends at 00:14:047 (1/6 tick). Sounds more accurate to the piano sound.

[Normal]
00:46:655 (5) - Remove the whistle on the repeat of this slider. It doesn't fit the music in my opinion.

[Hard]
00:20:162 (1) - A slider like this with red nodes doesn't fit the map or the music in my opinion. I would do something like this instead.
00:51:331 (1) - ^

all fix

헉헉.. 수정하느라 바쁘네요..;ㅅ;
Thank you for modding~

Should be fine now ( ╹ ◡ ╹ )

ykcarrot wrote:

Should be fine now ( ╹ ◡ ╹ )

thank you ykcarrot sama (＞Д＜)

two diff sets don't see them very often good job ranked

thank you ztrot~

anytime o/

축하추카피카추

ykcarrot wrote:

축하추카피카추

감사합니다...으음...악?

../) /)
( ' v ' )
(> <)

B2IN wrote:

../) /)
( ' v ' )
(> <)

kawai usagi ㅋㅋ