Hello, random mod,
I like this group[
General]
- Countdown doesn't display anyways so might as well just remove from Hard.
- I don't understand why you made combo color 4 & 5 almost the same. Please try to distinguish between them more or just remove combo color 5. While I am not sure, I believe doing new combos like this is unrankable. If you want to use two orange for whatever reason, just make sure that there is another color in between so that it's not two orange new combos in a row.
- Consider adding a silent slider-slide hitsound, sound too loud for me for 00:18:603 (3,1) - in Normal for example.
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Normal]
- Consider -1 hp, seem better to me looking at Hard hp drain.
- You would benefit from mapping in grid size 4 here.
00:01:450 (1) - If you're going to follow the piano, you need whistle at end
00:05:833 (1) - ^ Whistle at begin
00:06:904 (2) - Not too fond of this hit circle due to the piano rhythm here, perhaps do a slider ending on 00:07:294? (sliders have less strict timing window than hit circle so good for rhythms like these)
00:07:683 (3) - **Whistle on repeat, same reasoning as before. Also, I'm not too fond of this slider shape, it feel off to the song to me, but it's your choice.
00:10:800 (1) - Put the 30% timing point on 00:13:917 and add whistle to this spinner, it sound a bit empty right now so this should help.
00:25:616 (4) - Copy 00:23:279 (1) - and ctrl+J and ctrl+H put in same spot?
00:32:629 (1) - I really think this need whistle, do a lower/higher volume (depending on interpretation) for this if you want to differentiate it from the whistle on 00:34:090 (1) -
00:34:187 - What is this timing for?
00:43:538 (4) - Seems like you forgot whistle at begin
00:46:655 (3) - ^, remove from repeat
00:59:461 - Useless timing point
01:00:291 (2) - Prefer if you add a whistle
01:05:746 (1,2,3) - Do the same hitsound pattern as 00:59:902 (1,2,3) - [add the appropriate timing points as well]
01:15:876 - Don't see why not add a note here, it's a Normal after all.
01:19:383 (2) - Whistle at begin & end
01:22:499 (1) - Whistle at end
01:24:837 (3) - Same as 00:06:904
01:26:785 (2) - Prefer if you add a whistle at end
Whistle pattern seems a bit off and inconsistent for me. Keep in mind when I say prefer, it's just suggestion, the rest are highly recommended.
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Hard]
00:01:450 (1,2,3,4) - Personally, I would do whistle on all the notes, but I don't agree with current whistle pattern. If you listen to the accent on the music here, it's on (1) & (4) so whistle should be on those notes assuming you don't want to spam whistle, if not, please add whistle to all the hit circles here.
00:03:787 (2) - (1,2,3,5) are all the same sound, so if you do whistle on (1,3,5), you should do it on (2) too.
*00:07:683 (1,2) - Whistle on the ends if you put whistle on all the notes in my first suggestion.
00:10:995 (1) - Same suggestion as Normal for this part
00:15:281 (2) - Prefer if you add whistle here
00:30:292 (2,3,4) - I think whistle > notihng > whistle would be a better hitsound pattern here. Prefer if you do whistle on all notes through.
00:32:629 (1) - Whistle at begin.Lower/higher volume if you want ,see Normal.
00:41:200 - Lower the volume of this timing point by 10-20%, clap sound a bit too loud for me.
00:52:889 (3,4) - Whistle on (3) and begin of (4) to emphasize vocal?
00:57:564 (1) - 1 grid down, make it look like the spacing that you used for 1/4s.
01:01:850 (4) - Consider a whistle on repeat
01:06:525 (3) - This hit circle is not really on anything prominent compare to the other hit circles so I prefer if you remove the whistle
01:16:266 (1,2,3) - Lower the volume by another 10% and add finish or better, 20 % > 25% > 30% and if you want me to be a bit balanced, add 40% timing point to 01:17:434. I think this is the effect you want to achieve.
01:21:720 (4) - Same as 00:03:787.
*01:25:616 (1,2) - Same as 00:07:683
I think this would been better if you map with a higher slider velocity, but this is my personal opinion. Overall, I don't see anything wrong.
I'm not too fond of this style so no star from me sorry, but I hope this help you. Definitely think about adding silent slider-slide.
Good luck!
Normal - Done (by. me)
Hard - Done (by. me)
