Hi, random modder here.
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>General
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>General
- The BG is 746 KB... I think you can reduce the size a lot without dramatically decreasing the quality. I've made it five times smaller, and I'm sure enough I didn't see any noticeable decrease of quality.
- I personally think using Normal sampleset on the kiai time is a good idea, but it's up to you.
- 00:01:410 (1) - Why don't you add a whistle at the beginning of this slider? I personally think it fits with the song... (When I suggest stuff about hitsounds, assume that this is also the reason.)
- 00:07:643 (3) - Add whistle at the beginning and the repeat?
- 00:27:903 (1) - Whistle on the repeat to emphasize the vocal?
- 00:52:448 (2) - ^
- 00:59:851 (1) - Whistle?
- 01:02:189 - ^
- 01:05:306 - ^
- 01:22:448 (1) - ^ (Repeat.)
- 01:28:682 - Instead of a circle, make a spinner that goes to 01:30:241?
- 00:02:189 (3,4) - Move (4)'s whistle to (3)?
- 00:05:695 (1) - Add whistle at the beginning?
- 00:07:448 - Considering this song is REALLY slow, I think making a 1/4 stream by adding a circle here is fine, although then you'll have to tweak 00:07:643 (1,2,3) to keep the spacing... But rotating them clockwise by 60 degrees should do.
- 00:22:254 (3) - Whistle at the beginning to emphasize the vocal?
- 00:27:903 (2) - Whistle on the repeat?
- 00:32:870 - ^
- 00:41:929 (1) - ^ (Beginning.)
- 00:37:254 (5) - ^
- 00:41:929 (1) - ^ (Beginning.)
- 00:46:994 (2) - ^
- 00:49:332 (2) - ^ (Beginning.)
- 00:51:280 (6) - ^ (Beginning.) Also NC this?
- 00:54:397 (1) - ^ (Beginning.)
- 00:55:565 (2) - ^ (Beginning.)
- 00:57:124 (4,1) - I think making an anti-jump here is... weird. Place (1) at 00:57:903 (2)'s place and (2) to (180,204)?
- 00:58:293 (3) - Use whistle from Normal sampleset instead?
- 00:59:072 (7) - ^
- 01:01:799 (4,5) - Make this a 1/4 slider, remove (5), and make a slider from 01:02:188 to 01:02:578? This goes along with the song (vocal) really well, in my opinion. The current one feels weird, anyway... Oh, and add whistle on the beginning and the end of the new slider.
- 01:06:085 (2) - Remove clap?
- 01:06:474 (3) - Whistle?
- 01:07:254 (5) - Add clap? (Yes, whistle and clap at once.)
- 01:07:643 (1) - Replace clap with whistle?
- 01:08:422 (5) - Add whistle AND clap at the beginning AND the end?
- 01:09:202 (1) - Add whistle at the beginning?
- 01:09:981 (1) - Add clap?
- 01:10:176 (2) - Remove whistle?
- 01:10:760 (5,6) - Same as 01:01:799 (4,5), except without the whistles on the new slider, just on the end.
- 01:11:929 (1) - Remove whistle?
- 01:14:461 (6) - Add whistle?
- 01:14:656 (7) - Remove whistle at the beginning?
- 01:16:215 (1) - Add whistle?
- 01:16:604 (2,3,4) - Use Drum sampleset and add finishes here?
- 01:17:578 (5) - Use Normal sampleset?
- 01:17:773 (6) - Same as 01:16:215 (1,2,3,4).
- 01:25:380 - Same as 00:07:448.
- 01:28:682 (4) - Same as Normal.
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