Krisom wrote:

Hi there~

General
·Be careful, the gray combocolor is kinda (very) hrd to see at the top-right part of the screen, of the same color. Make the gray a tad darker or add a hue to the grayscale. Thankfully for you, the approach rate is quite forgiving so I wont force you to do so (not like I can wihout a red name anyways, haha!)
Fixed :v
·As for the SB, I was expecting the colors to be there for as long as the chorus lasted. Or al least a veeeery subtle color strobe at the parts with sound emphasis. I'm not sure... I want to kepe it gray in order to add the "I Miss you" later.

Hard
· 00:46:119 (1) - Wanna add a normal hitnormal at the end? It gives a nice rhythm too. Also I'd remove the new combo considering the nature of the pattern and the fact that the next slider pattern does not have (2,3,1,2), but is instead a (1,2,3,4) and they both follow the same thing (and are both part of a symmetrical pattern) Sure :v
· 00:49:500 (3) - Wanna add a normal hitnormal at the end? :v
· 00:57:528 (3) - This feels very out of place, the rhythm is awkward, the fact that you lower the sound so much is also a proof that this doesnt sounds good (play it with more than 50% volume, I dare you, I double dare you mothafucka). I'd suggest removing the slider completely and adding two stacked notes at 00:57:528 - and 00:57:739 - with a normal hitnormal sound to give some drum emphasis before the chorus. Hm, I do not agree, I'll keep it for now but I'll consider the suggestion if somebody else mentions it
· 02:58:373 (5,1) - Timing was quite odd to get right, even at my 3rd try. I dunno, try to play with it a bit more, but I think it's because of the spacing, the (2,3,4) before that had the same distance (1/4) but the (5,1) here is a 1/4 in distance but the space is bigger. That made me think (1) was 1/2 apart instead of 1/4. Alright, I think it's much better now
· To add some effect to the ending, I'dd add notes at 03:35:133 - , 03:35:556 - , 03:35:979 - , 03:36:401 - and 03:36:824 - (this one with a normal finish, to give the player a big "Boom" before the last spinner) Awesome suggestion, done!
· The parts between 02:59:746 - and 03:09:676 - felt odd. Not because they played badly, they played quite good, it's the fact that it's the part of the song with the most intensity and the map followed that intensity, but the hitsounding sounds too subtle for this part. I was expecting some loud drums beating on every 1/1. Consider this. Alright, done!


I just played this diff. You never asked me for a mod anyways, I just saw this and I thought "Oh why not", and found this stuff.
You didn't star this

EDIT: Oh, and I just tought I'd mention you get my first mod in months, and maybe the first one of the year, I don't really know anymore.
EDIT 2: And don't miss me, you know we always talk in facebook you dirty racoon :v

Zazalng wrote:

Hi Gonzvlo I'm Newbie to Mod but i will try it

My Idea is wrong so Sorry i'm newbie to mod map

Color Rule
Pink : It's ok do or not to do it's fine
Black : Please Fix it (by My idea other i don't know)
Blue : Recommend

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00:17:159 Delete Inherited point, not useful

Cristian wrote:

Hi
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00:31:753 (4,1) - I don't like too this... i dunno why... :v
02:38:091 (5,1) - I think this maby should be overlap with the end of that slider... Done
02:59:852 ~ 03:02:176 - Really hard to play with DT but i can do it :v
03:22:880 (2) - CTRL + G (Looks good) Sure. Applied to previous patterns too!

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CS +1 :v

:I

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Recheck Time because I'm bored! xD

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• 01:10:626 (1,2,3): A combo with 10 notes doesn't look coherent now since you reduce the lenght of Notes in your combos. Remove the NC in (1) and add it one in (3). I wanted to keep this part of the song with a single combo, I believe it should be alright
• 01:44:007 (2): Add a Clap at the Slider end to follow properly your Hitsounding, and because there are a Clap sound in the music too.
• 01:47:809 (2): *Simple Suggestion* for a better transition (looking your previous patterns) I think that it is better if you make this Slider with a red Slider Waypoint at the middle
• 02:11:894 (1,2): Oh.. you reduce the combo lenght after my mod, so this Combo with 9 Notes doesn't look that coherent. Maybe you can swap the Combo placement in these Notes
• 02:27:105 (1): You should add a Clap at the Slider end
• 03:25:838 (1,2,3): Again, a combo with 10 notes doesn't look coherent now. Remove the NC in (1) and add it one in (3).

[Hard:]

• 00:24:993 (6): Emm.. Knowing you, I'm sure that you want to place this Note at the middle (x:256 y:160), correct me if I'm wrong, if not just move it
• 02:18:655 (x): What about adding a Note here? Because follow the drums properly, I feel it kinda empty without it.
• 02:46:119 (10): I don't know, but I feel coherent the usage of a New Combo here
• 02:58:584 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15): I'm still thinking the same as before. It is a Slow song, in this place is the quickiest part of the song I know, but I'm sure that the 1/8 Sliders are more than enough. In general the map is slow, I can let pass the jumps because they play fun but this Streams should be changed in my opinion for Sliders I still think they are alright, since the BPM is quite slow, these are like 1/4 streams

Full of Symetry and Copy/Paste, anyways you did a Good Job! :3
Call me back then!

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

2 Little things in Normal, and we should be good to go. (No Kds for this post)

• 02:14:852 (x): In this place plays better the Note, and make the Spacing consistent too. So, add it the Note that you had before
• 03:17:387 (6): Psst.. Symetric mapper, move this Note to x:256 y:232, you will notice why then haha

I'll come back after these points get fixed :3

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

hey
hmm for this section 01:23:302 (1) - , idk why you make it like this, to me the both the break and the spinner is weird in normal.
i think you may add a slider and a circle in the first break section like this . so as Hard.
01:23:302 (1) - also for the beginning point of the spinner, why not start at the red tick after?
just suggestions more Avril's song! good luck to you~!