Thank you! Sorry for the non-detailed response, I accidentally closed the browser and got my post lost.Kei wrote:
Random modding go!! Uhmmm I'll mod in english so everyone can understand
[Normal]Fixed most of the stuff regarding New Combos and applied other suggestions!
- 00:38:514 (6,7,8) - Since these notes are part of another different verse of the vocals I suggest you to add a nc here and then remove the nc at 00:40:626 (1). I think this will end up more consistent with the rest of your combos (even more because it ends up being a combo number of 7, like most of your previous combos).
- 00:44:429 - Maybe it's just me.. but I hear the claps too loud. Perhaps consider reducing the volume of every clap by ~15%?
- 00:55:415 (3) - Here I think it would fit much more with the melody if you remove the whistle and add a soft clap of the custom sampleset.
- 01:01:331 (6) - I think that this combo is way too long for a Normal difficulty. I would rather add a nc to 01:01:331 (6) to reduce that number. Obviously, if you agree with this you also should add nc to 01:08:091 (6) to keep consistency.
- 01:04:711 (3) - Perhaps add a hitfinish here to emphasize the guitar sound and the voice? I'm not really sure about this, but I thought it might be a good idea to mention it.
- 01:13:162 (7) - Another long combo :< Uhmm consider adding a nc here to shorten it a bit and to follow more the vocals.
- 01:37:669 (1,2) - I think that these two notes are part of the same.. eh "melody" (I don't know how to call it, exactly) of the slider 01:35:133 (1) so I suggest you to remove this nc and add it to 01:38:514 (4).
- 01:44:007 (2) - Uhmm.. I don't think that adding an extra repeat to this slider all of a sudden like this is a good idea. Please consider removing 1 repeat of it and then add a note at 01:45:274 to fill up that space. I'm saying this because this is your easiest difficulty of your mapset, and beginners might get confused with this. They'll probably think this slider has the same ammounts of repeats than the previous ones. In this case, 1, so due to this they might combobreak and/or feel confused here. Keeping the ammount of repeats of sliders in easier diffs is important imo.
- 01:46:964 (6) - Another unnecessarily long combo in my opinion. To shorten it, try adding a nc here since the vocals change.
- 01:52:035 (5) - In this case, I highly recommend you to add a nc here and remove the one at the next slider 01:52:457 (1). I think that in this way it follows much more the music in general, including the vocals.
- 01:57:950 (3) - Same thing mentioned about 01:44:007 (2).
- 02:16:542 (3) - Same suggestion mentioned before about 00:55:415 (3).
- 02:18:232 (1) - I personally dislike how the Kiai starts at the repeat of this slider. It makes the Kiai loss uhm.. I don't know how to explain it in english. Let's try in spanish: es como que hace que el kiai pierda importancia y como que se sienta con menos fuerza. Si haces que el kiai empiece con una nota simple, o sea un circle, se sentiria mas enfatizado el Kiai y daría como.. una mejor sensación. :>
- 02:20:345 (2,3,4,5) - I thought something very similar to what Mancuso said to you "Hmm.. no entiendo este aumento de Spacing solo para hacer un pattern 'vistoso' :/" In this case, you changed the spacing a lil bit but still :<
- 02:22:880 (1) - This nc isn't consistent with your previous kiai. You should remove it and if you agreed about what I've suggested you about the st kiai ncs don't forget to apply them in this kiai too~
- 02:25:838 (3) - Same suggestion mentioned about 01:04:711 (3).
- 02:56:260 (1) - I think that a hitfinish here fits more with the instrumental than a whistle.
- 03:19:922 (3) - Same suggestion mentioned early about 01:04:711 (3) (again).
- 03:23:302 (6) - Nc here to keep following the vocals and also shorten the long combo. I mentioned a similar suggestion for your 1st kiai so if you changed that in the 1st kiai you should do so here too :>
- 03:28:373 (7) - Same suggestion mentioned early about 01:13:162 (7).
Cool. I just don't agree with most of your combos since they're too long for a Normal diff. other than that, good work.
[Hard]Fixed some slider suggestions and combos
- 00:05:556 (7) - Ugh, long combos in this difficulty too. How about adding a nc here to shorten it a bit?
- 00:09:148 (6) - ^
- 00:11:894 (5) - ^
- 00:23:302 (3) - Uhmm just a simple suggestion: I personally don't like how a stright slider and a curved one look together. I suggest you to make a blanket with the stright one, making it curved like this:
- 00:24:148 (5) - I personally think that this pattern flows even better if you ctrl+G this slider. :>
- 00:25:415 (7) - Due to the change of vocals, I find it more appropiate to add a nc here and then remove the nc at 00:27:105 (1) since all those notes are part of the same verse "need you there when I cry".
- 00:26:260 (9) - Same suggestion mentioned about 00:23:302 (3).
- 00:40:626 (5) - Interesting small change of spacing o.o not sure if intentional though.
- 00:55:415 (3,4) - This pattern feels more fun to play if you ctrl+G those notes. It feels like if you are drawing a star with a pencil :3 (in my case since I play with a tablet).
- 01:37:880 (3,4) - Hmmmm! how about changing the sampleset to drums here and keeping the claps? Sounds interesting imo. It fits with the music perfectly to me. I didn't notice this while checking your easy so if you mapped this part like this you can apply it to your normal too if you like it. :>
- 02:04:922 (1,2) - ^
- 03:12:739 - Perhaps consider adding a note here since this is your hardest difficulty of your mapset? Just to fill up that mappable empty space.
Awesome, cool hitsounding and such~
That's all. Good luck ranking this!
Thanks again!