Hello.
[Level1]
[Level1]
- 02:12:372 (1,2,3) - Make spacing consistent.
Increase HP and OD by 1? It fits the map better.
- 00:39:158 (x) - Add a note as well as 00:25:444 (4).
- 00:42:586 (x) - ^
- 01:47:622 (x) - here and 01:47:729, why don't you add notes?
- 02:51:801 (1) - A whistle sounds a bit noisy at the top of slider. Just remove?
- 03:11:944 (1) - Remove a new combo.
- 00:28:872 (x) - Let's add a note here too! I guess you followed the vocal but the guitar fits more.
- 00:42:586 (x) - ^
- 01:23:944 (5) - Move futher a bit from (4), so gameplay will get better.
- 01:30:586 (x) - Same as 00:28:872.
- 01:34:015 (x) - ^
- 01:47:408 (7,8) - Hum...this seems kinda confusing. Use normal shape for (7) please.
- 02:16:229 (3,4,5,6) - It's better not to stack a quad.
- 02:39:854 (x) - Remove an unnecessary break.
- 03:23:729 (5) - Spacing is a bit too close. You don't need to use the same spacing as you used on stream here. It also looks something weird when playing. Oh, I found a good one at 00:22:015 (3)!
- 03:38:836 (3) - ^
To be honest, the note placement looks kinda random if compared with your other maps. Anyway still good though
- 00:14:944 (5,6) - I know you put (5) at the center of (3,4), but the spaces between (4,5), and (6,1) are a bit too close so gameplay isn't that good here imo(other spacings you use around here are further as compared this). How about moving them above by some grids?
- 00:35:729 (6,7) - As the similar reason as above, move them futher a bit or change them into a slider? I think a slider should be prefered to circles because there is a BPM280 stream next
- 02:51:372 (1,2) - Good balanced noteplacement with 02:50:086 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2). However I recommend you to reduce spacing between them, so it makes easier to read the next SV change.
- 03:04:551 (3) - I feel this note doesn't fit the music seriously. Just remove?
- 03:39:586 (1,2,3,4) - Oh looks inconsistent :/
Oh...very difficult map although there is an enough difficult map(Saten) already...
Frankly, I don't see the difference between Saten and Nyaten(difficulty of pattern and note placement, and something look similar). Just they seem to have different AR for me...
A map is really good and creative. But...uum,,,