1. Easy (2,53 stars, 89 notes)
2. Insane (4,96 stars, 221 notes)
3. Sekai's Hard (4,75 stars, 207 notes)
4. Sekai's Normal (4,34 stars, 147 notes)

yanlu wrote:

[Insane]

00:19:244 (1)- this spin so short maybe... It's an Insane diff, so it's not a problem at all.
00:51:922 (2)- this sooo hide with Hidden mod! And what o.o
00:55:565 (1,2,3,4,5)- make them more like a star (ctrl+shift+D) Actually seems pretty good for me.
00:57:279 (2)- very hide with 00:56:208 (4)- It's fine.
00:58:779 (3)- maybe change to x256 y68? Moved around there.
make 01:01:994 (1)- stack with 01:00:065 (2)- head and 01:02:422 (2)- stack with 01:00:494 (3)- head That would ruin the pattern in some way.
I prefer 01:02:851 (3)- not stack 01:03:494 (4)- 's head Why not? It's following spacing consistency, so it's ok.
01:13:565 (6,7)- this too Why o.o
01:14:637 (2)- cuz there are same color... o.o?
01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5)- make star too ;3 It is a star already xD.

[Easy]
00:39:708 (3,4)- make(4) parallel (3) Fixed.
01:01:351 (1)- dele nc Music stopped here, so I think NC fits nice.
01:00:279 (4)- nc here? Nah.
01:39:494 (1)- chage to a slider from 01:39:279- to 01:39:494- Ok.

1. 00:13:993 (1) - consider adding a finish at the beginning
2. 00:41:851 (1) - (a little nazi) don't make it touch the edge of 00:40:994 (4) - ?
3. 00:46:136 (2) - move middle point to x:180 y:68
4. 01:02:851 (2) - add whistle at the beginning (to match 01:06:279 (2) - )
5. 01:09:708 (2) - if you followed above suggestion, add whistle to the beginning here too

1. 00:16:993 (1) - move to x:180 y:184 so that the previous note curves around it more neatly
2. 00:41:851 (3) - make more symmetrical so that it will curve perfectly over 4:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   308,76,41851,2,0,P|256:56|188:80,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 01:11:208 (3) - instead of one slider, try single note..followed by a 1/1 slider
   
4. 01:16:351 (4) - same with here. (I also like the pattern here 01:19:994 (2,3) - and if you don't like what I suggested, you could follow this part instead)
5. 01:28:136 (2) - move to x:404 y:208
6. 01:37:994 (1) - why not make a vertical flip from 01:36:279 (3) - instead?
   
   I have a lot more to say about the combos, so here's a separate section of combo modding. It's all up to you really, but this is what I feel is most appropriate & consistent with the tune:
   
   SPOILER

   00:16:993 (1) - remove NC
   00:17:422 (2) - NC
   00:19:136 (1) - remove NC
   00:19:994 (1) - NC
   00:20:851 (3) - NC
   00:22:136 (1) - remove NC
   00:24:279 (5) - NC
   00:24:922 (2) - remove NC
   00:29:422 (1) - remove NC
   00:31:136 (4) - NC
   00:31:779 (1) - remove NC
   00:34:994 (3) - NC
   00:35:851 (1) - remove NC
   00:40:994 (1) - remove NC
   00:41:422 (6) - NC
   00:43:565 (1) - remove NC
   00:44:851 (7) - NC
   00:45:494 (1) - remove NC
   00:47:851 (1) - remove NC
   00:48:708 (2) - NC
   01:01:994 (2) - NC?
   01:08:208 (1) - remove NC
   01:09:279 (1) - NC
   01:10:136 (1) - remove NC
   01:12:279 (6) - NC
   01:12:708 (1) - remove NC
   01:13:994 (4) - NC
   01:14:422 (1) - remove NC
   01:15:708 (6) - NC
   01:17:422 (1) - remove NC
   01:22:136 (1) - remove NC
   01:22:565 (2) - NC
   01:24:279 (1) - remove NC
   01:25:136 (1) - NC
   01:26:851 (1) - remove NC
   01:31:565 (1) - remove NC
   01:32:851 (3) - NC
   01:34:565 (1) - remove NC
   01:36:279 (1) - NC
   01:37:994 (1) - remove NC
   01:39:279 (5) - NC
   
   i'm really sorry if you had a certain combo pattern going alreadydon't kill me (/o\)

1. 00:32:208 (5,6) - one grid down for perfect blanket
2. 00:50:208 (1,1,1) - make these a better, equal triangle shape
3. 01:06:922 (1,2) - move both one grid to the left, it will correct spacing

1. 00:13:993 (1) - finish at beginning?
2. 00:15:493 (1) - you should just add a whistle here too
3. 00:26:851 (1) - add a whistle at the end..i hear a little something in the background but i can't explain lol
4. 00:55:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - make neater star . and somehow, consider getting 00:56:208 (4) - to stack on 00:57:279 (2) - . it will look rly nice (:
   If you're too lazy to try it out , you can use the random star I made:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   200,324,55565,5,8,0:0:0
   142,196,55779,1,0,0:0:0
   112,336,55993,1,0,0:0:0
   220,244,56208,1,8,3:0:0
   76,256,56422,1,8,3:0:0

5. 01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - you could probably make a more equal star here too, like that above star. but i guess it doesn't matter haha

meiikyuu wrote:

Easy

1. 00:13:993 (1) - consider adding a finish at the beginning Sure.
2. 00:41:851 (1) - (a little nazi) don't make it touch the edge of 00:40:994 (4) - ? Moved it a bit.
3. 00:46:136 (2) - move middle point to x:180 y:68 Ok.
4. 01:02:851 (2) - add whistle at the beginning (to match 01:06:279 (2) - ) No because that whistle on 1:06 it's following the piano sound, and there is no piano sound here.
5. 01:09:708 (2) - if you followed above suggestion, add whistle to the beginning here too ^

Insane

1. 00:13:993 (1) - finish at beginning? Sure.
2. 00:15:493 (1) - you should just add a whistle here too Same here, I'm following piano sound with whistles.
3. 00:26:851 (1) - add a whistle at the end..i hear a little something in the background but i can't explain lol Yeah I can hear it xD, added.
4. 00:55:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - make neater star . and somehow, consider getting 00:56:208 (4) - to stack on 00:57:279 (2) - . it will look rly nice (: Seems great indeed, I will use yours, thanks ^^
   If you're too lazy to try it out , you can use the random star I made:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   200,324,55565,5,8,0:0:0
   142,196,55779,1,0,0:0:0
   112,336,55993,1,0,0:0:0
   220,244,56208,1,8,3:0:0
   76,256,56422,1,8,3:0:0

5. 01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - you could probably make a more equal star here too, like that above star. but i guess it doesn't matter haha Improved it.

1. Solo tus dificultades tienen video, deberias añadirle tambien el video a las dificultades de Sekai

• -- Muy bien hecho

• - 00:22:136 (1) - Why the new combo here? Remove it to keep your combo pattern
  - 00:24:922 (1) - Same ^

• - 00:18:494 (1) - Why you don't start this spinner here 00:19:136 and finish here 00:20:422 if you follow the instrument
  - 01:07:994 (4) - I really prefer to see this slider like this, also I like these type of patterns
  - 01:10:351 (4,5) - Spacing here? The note (5) looks a little far from (4)
  - 01:36:279 (3) - A new combo here feels really good

• - 01:30:279 (3) - nazi* Podrias mover un poco este slider para que no haga un overlap con el slider (1)

MoodyRPG wrote:

General

1. Solo tus dificultades tienen video, deberias añadirle tambien el video a las dificultades de Sekai Uy, ni idea como se me paso esto, hecho.

Easy

• -- Muy bien hecho

Insane

• - 01:30:279 (3) - nazi* Podrias mover un poco este slider para que no haga un overlap con el slider (1) Si te fijas bien no llegan a tocarse, lo que se toca es el circulo que se va cerrando y después queda ahí antes que el slider desaparezca :p

Sonnyc wrote:

Easy:

00:52:779 (2) - Try this for more blanket? Sure.

SPOILER

296,252,52779,2,0,P|256:277|216:252,1,100,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:09:708 (2) - Add Whistle at the start? No, I'm following Piano sound with Whistles.
01:16:565 (2) - ^? ^
01:25:136 (4) - Delete Whistle like 01:23:422 (2) feels better here ^

Insane:

00:25:994 (6) - Can't you make more flatter? Why? o.o, it's ok like this.
00:37:350 (3,5) - Delete Whistle, since all is too loud I like how it sounds since I'm following voice here.
00:40:565 (3,4) - Do something similar with above ^
00:47:636 (1) - I don't think this note is the one to be emphasized with Finish Music sounds like a cymbal here, so it fits.
01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - It would be better if you made a perfect pentagon I have no idea how to do it even better, but I think this is not a problem after all xD.

[Yue] wrote:

ToraDoraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!! *--------------*
Exelente mapa Bruno! te dejo una estrella >w<

BounceBabe wrote:

General
You have too much Kiai parts! Reduce them, overall its 49 seconds, and the song has 1 mintues 45 seconds time. You also start at 00:13:993 - Delete the first section maybe? I'll try to keep them for now since fits good with the song.

Easy

Nothing here

Insane

00:15:493 (1) - Spacing, jump is too sudden and doesnt fit at this part at all Ok, changed it.
00:20:851 (1) - Remove NC Nah, fits good imo because first Kiai starts here.
00:36:494 (1) - ^ Add on next element Why? o.o
00:44:851 (4) - You cant see this circle good, move it a little I like patterns with stacked notes, and this is one of them, so I'll keep this.
01:05:208 (8) - NC, delete new combo at 01:05:422 (1) - Following vocal here, and vocal starts at 01:05:422.
01:12:065 (1,2) - These doesnt fit at all, remove the 2nd one These fit, listen the song at 25% rate and you will see.
01:18:922 (7) - Remove NC, delete next Following vocal.
01:22:351 (5) - ^ ^
00:17:208 (3) - ^ ^
01:15:494 (4) - ^ ^
01:18:922 (7) - ^ ^
01:22:351 (5) - ^ ^
01:05:208 (8) - ^ (01:12:065 (1) - Here you did that)[/color] ^, and changed combos on that 01:12 pattern.
01:24:065 (1,1,1) - Remove NC This is ok for me.
01:25:565 (1) - I suggest a half beat reserve slider, fits the vocal better than this huge slider In this case I'm following music instead vocal.
01:37:136 (4,5) - This plays odd, try to move them a little different Flows nicely imo.
01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a symmetric star Improved it.

Wolf wrote:

General
About the kiais, starting at 01:01:994 - you've pretty much used one after one after 2 seconds of the previous kiai. For example, you've ended one kiai at 01:13:994 - and started one at 01:15:708 - Have you tried "flashy" kiais here? I think they would fit well, but this is just me of course. Doesn't fit for me.

Easy
Nothing much I can add here. Looking solid to me.
01:00:279 (4) - Hmm not quite sure, you could've made this one to be a bit more aligned with 00:58:994 (2) - Something like this for a better looking. Improved this.
01:01:351 (1) - Don't quite like the position of this slider here due to the fact that 00:58:994 (2) - can still be seen fading. In other words, overlap doesn't look good imo. The slider that is overlapping this one is more than two seconds before, so I guess it's not a problem at all.

Insane
00:52:565 - Could've added a note here o3o Nah, no music here.
Couldn't find much stuff here as you can see. It looks pretty good to me.