Hi there, sorry for being late.
Let's see.[General]
[Easy]
*Okay this will be pretty much of a nazi mod since there are many minor spacing problems, maybe due to using a large grid, will point them out
Use grid lvl4 so you can fix them properly00:06:949 (3) - move 3 grid up, lvl 4 grid of course
00:07:441 (4) - And then move this one to x268 y64
00:08:917 (1,2) - Then adjust the spacing of these 2 as well
From now on, I guess you get the idea. Just use grid lvl 4 and fix all the spacing inconcistent, check everything by yourself, trust me the map will look more professional.00:17:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern's shape looks really bad imo, you could do something symmetrycal and polite like this:
Then, rearrange the next slider and everything so it fits with this pattern
00:25:146 (1) - Ugh, so many repeats. This will be confusing and boring for beginners because it has a different number of repeats that 00:13:343 (2) - and 00:01:540 (3) - . I suggest deleting some, so it has the same amount of repeats as these sliders, and adding notes instead.
00:29:080 (1,2) - Improve this blanket:
*BTW, see how you only added 2 repeats like the other sliders? That's why the suggestion at 00:25:146 (1) must be done
00:40:392 (4) - Move it a bit up, so it flows with the curve of the previous slider:
01:12:359 (1,2,3) - Looks and flows bad :/ what about making both sliders mirrored? Like, the same but mirrored so it looks and play better. Mirror any of the 2 sliders.
01:19:736 (2,1,2) - Ugh, fix the unconsistent spacing here
01:24:162 (1,2) - Really bad blanket! Improve it:
01:31:540 (1,2) - Really unconsistent spacing, fix it using grid lvl4
01:33:999 (4,1,2) -
Lol this overlap is really bad. Why did you do this o.o? It doesn't look any good. Do this so they don't touch each other:
01:35:966 (2,1,2) -
O.O and what is this jump on an easy? Fix this spacing using grid lvl4 and distance snap lol o.o it should be like this:01:53:671 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make the curve more polite:
01:57:605 (1,2) - Uhh.. looks really bad. I get the idea but they don't make a nice blanket and also they touch awkwardly. See how they touch there?
http://puu.sh/1DabI . Think of another pattern
02:05:474 (1,3) - Make these sliders mirrored?
02:40:392 (1) -
This note sounds totally out of place. The voice starts at 02:40:146 (red tick), not the white tick. You can either add a note there (and delete the one in the white tick of course), or simply delete the white tick note and leave only the slider. If you ask me, i would just delete this note.
02:42:359 (2,3) - Move 2 and 3 a bit down so it flows better:
02:46:294 (2) - Move to x476 y300
03:29:572 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Improve this curve:
And then rearrange the next stuff
03:33:999 (1,2) - Improve this blanket:
03:41:867 (1,2) - ^
03:45:802 (1,2,3,4,1) - Improve curve, you know how
03:55:638 (2) - This shape plays bad with the previous slider :/ maybe
http://puu.sh/1Dan2 ?
[Normal]
*Same as Easy, lots of inconsistent spacings, use grid lvl4 and check everything. I'll give you and example:
00:17:276 (1,2,3) - (2) is not in the exact middle
Please check these.
00:39:654 (6) - Move up and left so it flows with the curve of the sliders..
00:48:753 (3) - I would silence the end
01:13:343 (2,3) - Doesn't flow with the previous slider's curve, i'd move it a bit up, and then rearrange some stuff
01:21:458 (4,5,6) - Use grid lvl4, and move them 1 grid left
01:59:572 (4) - Not perfectly symmetrycal
02:03:015 (3,4,5) - Stack with (1)
02:03:998 (1) - Remove NC
02:07:441 (1) - ^
02:09:408 (3) - Add NC
02:11:376 (1) - Remove NC
02:13:343 (5) - Add NC
02:15:310 (1) - Remove NC
Much better now~~
02:48:015 (1) - This slider is not intuitive because it suddenly starts on a red tick, which is later, so i suggest you to add a note on the previous white tick too, so it's more readable.
03:10:392 (3) - I think this shape doesn't fit! try to do this instead:
03:27:851 (5) - Same thing, this isn't readable because you have to stop suddenly and wait for the red tick. I suggest making a slider and ending it there or... idk.. 2 notes or something
04:05:474 (5) - New combo
04:06:458 (1) - Remove new combo
[Hard]
00:01:540 (3) - New combo?
00:10:392 (3) - Whistle at the start
00:45:556 (2) - I think this jump from slider to slider is kinda umpredictable, decrease the spacing between the sliders?
00:48:753 (1) - Silence the end
01:28:097 (6) - I would add a repeat at the end, sounds nice and doesn't leave any weird empty space
01:51:703 (5) - Move 2 grid up
01:58:589 (3) - I get the idea of the weird sliders but this one just doesn't fit. Its to... worm-shaped, try to make it less wormy, like:
^That isn't really great but just an idea of how it could look like
Overall the diff is okay but i would add some variation, like, some SV changes for example at 03:14:326 (2) - you could use a lower sv for that part.
Nothing else,
Good luck!Oh and btw reply my mod please, if you decide to not change something... read my sig hehe
fuck grid-snap xD
