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nimi

Joined April 2010

nimi 2012-12-17T22:01:16+00:00

Hey~

[Normal]
00:27:113 (4,5,6) - this pattern looks kinda ugly imo.. I'd change (6) to make it look better. but that's up to you

00:48:753 (3) - I don't mean to be rude but the end of this slider sounds awful D: I'd remove the whistle and lower the sound
01:41:866 (7) - add finish in the beginning to keep the hitsounding pattern?
04:33:014 (1) - remove the finish? it sounds odd

[Hard]
01:07:441 (6) - the end of the slider is unsnapped
01:28:835 (7) - I'd add a 1/2 slider there. it feels odd not to have something there
01:35:597 (2) - I suggest removing this note. making this a triplet sound off and unecessary imo
01:47:276 (6) - the end of the slider is unsnapped and I think this pattern would look/play better if it was like the one you made for 01:45:802 (3,4). but it's fine if you wanna keep it
01:47:769 (1) - ^ (the unsnapped part only)
01:51:703 (5) - ctrl +g ?
01:55:146 (5) - unsnapped slider end
01:55:638 (6) - ^
02:51:950 (7) - ^
03:18:261 (3) - fix spacing?
03:21:949 (5) - I predict a no but add a note here?
03:58:343 (2) - I'd replace this slider for this http://puu.sh/1C5LR (removing the note at 03:59:080 obviously). sounds better imo :>
04:06:949 (5) - ctrl + g to keep the flow?
04:28:097 (7) - this might be a little tricky with hidden :c move the slider at least a tick up/down to make this a little easier to read?

Also, I found the things written in the bottom a little meh. if you want a version of the image without it, here it is:

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good luck with this

Dark_Ai

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Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2012-12-18T03:53:58+00:00

Changed almost everything~
Thank you for your mod :>

nimi

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nimi 2012-12-18T10:25:00+00:00

no problem c:

vipto

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vipto 2012-12-18T20:44:59+00:00

Ohhhh, jingle bells, jingle bells
Jingle all the way ~

SilverJetter

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SilverJetter 2012-12-18T21:22:00+00:00

So..mal sehen wie es mit deinem plan wegen ranked vorran geht ;D

grüsse SilverJetter C:

Last edited by SilverJetter 2012-12-19T14:32:07+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Chyo-Kun

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Joined May 2012

Chyo-Kun 2012-12-18T21:22:40+00:00

Star

This situation hurt me too..

Dark_Ai

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Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2012-12-18T21:43:36+00:00

Thank you moe chyoo >w</

-Baby Strawberry-

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-Baby Strawberry- 2012-12-19T15:56:50+00:00

hello

[General]

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diff spread:
diff jump between normal and hard, normal is more mapped a bit like an easy diff and hard is like an insane. You can also see the inconsistency from the star rating.
kiai time section is too long, so i would suggest you to remove the first kiai time section.
though you said easy is finished, i would highly recommend you to map the whole song in easy, since new players are also deserved to play the whole song

for the break section:
pull the break to 00:50:720
pull the break to 02:34:982
that will give you a better effect imo

[Hard]

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both AR and OD -1. If its insane i would say yes to the settings, but its hard.
00:18:261 (3) - i would do it this way

00:21:212 (1) - hmm too weird for me...so change if you can
00:28:097 (5,6) - imo the stack breaks the flow, so i recommend you to do this

00:44:572 (6) - change this into a circle would be better
00:46:294 (3) - place it here

00:48:630 (1) - starts at 00:48:753
01:17:769 (6) - stack properly
01:50:720 (3) - ctrl+g gives a better flow
01:58:589 (3) - too weird for me
02:19:244 (4) - adjust the slider to round the previous circle properly

[Normal]

SPOILER

tick rate 1 is absolutely fine
03:14:326 pull the break here
04:24:653 (7) - not looking good

[Easy]

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setting is too high, this is the setting for Normal diff. this is what i suggest

tick rate 1, 2 works, but not necessary.
01:33:999 (4,6) - the blocking looks bad, if you wanna keep the shape of 01:35:966 (6) - , i would recommend you do this

and adjust the following parts due to the spacing. Or you can remap the section before the break, its really short.
02:22:195 (5,6,7,8) - im not saying this is bad, but it lacks of fun.
imo this diff needs to be mapped till the end of the song.

Good luck and Merry Christmas

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2012-12-19T16:12:28+00:00

hi hi Fang

General
fine !

Easy
AR-1 , this AR is still pretty too fast for the easiest diff with this kind of bpm though
00:48:753 (3) - don't end this slider with whistle please, it sounds quite loudly here
01:33:999 (4,6) - this overlapping is not looking good as it is , try to avoid please and also I don't understand about your NC much so I won't focus on it
02:11:376 (2) - remove NC , don't understand why you left the previous one as that
some sliders, you can copy past them to make it look consistently. some sliders' shape look pretty good , some of them look bad compared to the next or previous sliders that they exist : ) !!

Normal
00:56:621 (1) - start this slider with finish here plzz.. really empty here
01:04:490 (2) - ^
for consistency with 01:12:359 (1) -
01:39:899 (5) - NC ? quite too long imo
02:50:720 (4) - it's supposed to be finish for consistency with 02:48:753 (2) -

Hard
AR&OD -1 , they are too fast as they are now compared with Normal diff , I actually wanted you to decrease 2 AR but Slider velocity doesn't support it much
02:56:376 (2) - add note here
03:05:720 (4) - ^ because it hits on the bass sound

other than that I think they are fine

Good luck for Christmas ~~~

Dark_Ai

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Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2012-12-19T17:43:36+00:00

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:
hello

[General]
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diff spread:
diff jump between normal and hard, normal is more mapped a bit like an easy diff and hard is like an insane. You can also see the inconsistency from the star rating.
kiai time section is too long, so i would suggest you to remove the first kiai time section.
though you said easy is finished, i would highly recommend you to map the whole song in easy, since new players are also deserved to play the whole song
for the break section:
pull the break to 00:50:720
pull the break to 02:34:982
that will give you a better effect imo

Changed. I don't if I did all but change something ^^

[Hard]
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both AR and OD -1. If its insane i would say yes to the settings, but its hard. Okay
00:18:261 (3) - i would do it this way Okay
00:21:212 (1) - hmm too weird for me...so change if you can No thanks. I like this slider
00:28:097 (5,6) - imo the stack breaks the flow, so i recommend you to do this Okay. I tried that
00:44:572 (6) - change this into a circle would be better Okay
00:46:294 (3) - place it here Okay
00:48:630 (1) - starts at 00:48:753 Okay
01:17:769 (6) - stack properly Okay. I've tried
01:50:720 (3) - ctrl+g gives a better flow Okay
01:58:589 (3) - too weird for me for me not and I also like that too ^^
02:19:244 (4) - adjust the slider to round the previous circle properly Okay

[Normal]
SPOILER
tick rate 1 is absolutely fine Okay
03:14:326 pull the break here Okay
04:24:653 (7) - not looking good Changed

[Easy]
SPOILER
setting is too high, this is the setting for Normal diff. this is what i suggest
tick rate 1, 2 works, but not necessary. Okay
01:33:999 (4,6) - the blocking looks bad, if you wanna keep the shape of 01:35:966 (6) - , i would recommend you do this and adjust the following parts due to the spacing. Or you can remap the section before the break, its really short. Okay
02:22:195 (5,6,7,8) - im not saying this is bad, but it lacks of fun. Changed
imo this diff needs to be mapped till the end of the song.

Good luck and Merry Christmas

Frostmourne wrote:
hi hi Fang hi hi Jeep >w<

General
fine ! Thank you

Easy
AR-1 , this AR is still pretty too fast for the easiest diff with this kind of bpm though Already change
00:48:753 (3) - don't end this slider with whistle please, it sounds quite loudly here Okay
01:33:999 (4,6) - this overlapping is not looking good as it is , try to avoid please and also I don't understand about your NC much so I won't focus on it Okay
02:11:376 (2) - remove NC , don't understand why you left the previous one as that Okay
some sliders, you can copy past them to make it look consistently. some sliders' shape look pretty good , some of them look bad compared to the next or previous sliders that they exist : ) !! What? o.O

Normal
00:56:621 (1) - start this slider with finish here plzz.. really empty here
01:04:490 (2) - ^
for consistency with 01:12:359 (1) -
01:39:899 (5) - NC ? quite too long imo
02:50:720 (4) - it's supposed to be finish for consistency with 02:48:753 (2)
Changed everything ^^

Hard
AR&OD -1 , they are too fast as they are now compared with Normal diff , I actually wanted you to decrease 2 AR but Slider velocity doesn't support it much
02:56:376 (2) - add note here
03:05:720 (4) - ^ because it hits on the bass sound
Changed everything ^^

other than that I think they are fine

Good luck for Christmas ~~~

Thank you both for modding ~ >w</

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2012-12-19T17:48:25+00:00

Hello Dark_Ai! Mod request from In-Game! Here's a somewhat quick mod!

[General]

I recommend increasing the Audio-Lead in to 1500ms since there is only 1571 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms. Make sure to change it for every difficulty.
For this map, I recommend adding the soft-whistles to emphasize all the melodies and the piano chords.

[Normal]

00:19:244 (3) - Hmmm.. I would remove this finish at this sliderhead since there is nothing to emphasize the finish.
00:33:015 (1) - To be consistent with 00:17:276 (1), I think you should add a finish here as well.
00:48:753 (3) - (suggestion) A whistle sounds like at the head of this slider. o.o
00:56:621 (1) - I can hear a finish at this slider head. How about adding a soft-finish here? :3
01:04:490 (2) - Same as above: "I can hear a finish at this slider head. How about adding a soft-finish here? :3"
01:35:966 (1) - At thhe slider end, replace this soft-finish with a soft-whistle to be consistient with 01:37:933 (3).
01:53:671 (1,2) - Not perfectly stacked! ><

Hitsounds needs more tweaking! For each kiai section (chorus), the hitsound patterns should be consistent as in Kiai 1, Kiai 2, and Kiai 3.

[Hard]

Why use AR8 on a 122 BPM Hard Difficulty? I recommmend AR7 for this map.
00:48:630 (1) - This Spinner is offbeat. it should start at the next white tick!
02:15:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Remove every finish you see on this combo. Neither of them emphasizes anything!
03:28:220 (1,1) - Remove finish at the endof spinnr and the next slider.

Lots of soft-finish inconsistencies on this difficulty!

I didn't mod a lot because I'm too lazy right now XD. Basically, your hitsounds needs the most work. Good ruck for rank!

Diasios

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Diasios 2012-12-19T17:52:14+00:00

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
• You must fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• Add a silenced "soft-sliderslide2.wav"

SilverJetters Easy

• Rename this diff "SilverJetter's Easy"
• Spacing isn't always consistent: keep "Distance Snap" active and recheck it.
• You should map the entire song.
• 00:11:376 (5) - Add a repetition.
• 02:21:212 (4) - Add "New Combo".
• 02:25:146 (8) - ^
• 02:26:130 (1) - Remove "New Combo".

Normal

• Why the difficulty settings are the same as Easy? Increase them a bit.
• 01:01:540 (x) - Add a circle.
• 01:09:408 (x) - ^
• 01:13:343 (x) - ^
• 01:53:671 (1,2) - Stack the end of these two sliders. (move 2 at x:235 y:158)
• 03:15:303 (break) - Is this break really necessary? Remove it and map this part.
• 04:33:014 (1) - End this spinner at 04:34:490.

Hard

• 04:33:014 (1) - End this spinner at 04:34:490.

Just some thoughts, I'm not in the mood of doing a full mod.
Good luck.

Dark_Ai

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Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2012-12-19T18:44:17+00:00

SPOILER

BeatofIke wrote:
Hello Dark_Ai! Mod request from In-Game! Here's a somewhat quick mod!

[General]
I recommend increasing the Audio-Lead in to 1500ms since there is only 1571 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms. Make sure to change it for every difficulty.
For this map, I recommend adding the soft-whistles to emphasize all the melodies and the piano chords.
[Normal]
00:19:244 (3) - Hmmm.. I would remove this finish at this sliderhead since there is nothing to emphasize the finish.
00:33:015 (1) - To be consistent with 00:17:276 (1), I think you should add a finish here as well.
00:48:753 (3) - (suggestion) A whistle sounds like at the head of this slider. o.o
00:56:621 (1) - I can hear a finish at this slider head. How about adding a soft-finish here? :3
01:04:490 (2) - Same as above: "I can hear a finish at this slider head. How about adding a soft-finish here? :3"
01:35:966 (1) - At thhe slider end, replace this soft-finish with a soft-whistle to be consistient with 01:37:933 (3).
01:53:671 (1,2) - Not perfectly stacked! ><
Hitsounds needs more tweaking! For each kiai section (chorus), the hitsound patterns should be consistent as in Kiai 1, Kiai 2, and Kiai 3.

[Hard]
Why use AR8 on a 122 BPM Hard Difficulty? I recommmend AR7 for this map.
00:48:630 (1) - This Spinner is offbeat. it should start at the next white tick!
02:15:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Remove every finish you see on this combo. Neither of them emphasizes anything!
03:28:220 (1,1) - Remove finish at the endof spinnr and the next slider.
Lots of soft-finish inconsistencies on this difficulty!

I didn't mod a lot because I'm too lazy right now XD. Basically, your hitsounds needs the most work. Good ruck for rank!

Changed everything~

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xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
• You must fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• Add a silenced "soft-sliderslide2.wav"

SilverJetters Easy

• Rename this diff "SilverJetter's Easy"
• Spacing isn't always consistent: keep "Distance Snap" active and recheck it.
• You should map the entire song.
• 00:11:376 (5) - Add a repetition.
• 02:21:212 (4) - Add "New Combo".
• 02:25:146 (8) - ^
• 02:26:130 (1) - Remove "New Combo".

Normal

• Why the difficulty settings are the same as Easy? Increase them a bit.
• 01:01:540 (x) - Add a circle.
• 01:09:408 (x) - ^
• 01:13:343 (x) - ^
• 01:53:671 (1,2) - Stack the end of these two sliders. (move 2 at x:235 y:158)
• 03:15:303 (break) - Is this break really necessary? Remove it and map this part.
• 04:33:014 (1) - End this spinner at 04:34:490.

Hard

• 04:33:014 (1) - End this spinner at 04:34:490.
Changed everything~

Just some thoughts, I'm not in the mood of doing a full mod.
Good luck.

Thank you both for modding~ :3

Come[Back]Home

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Come[Back]Home 2012-12-19T20:02:52+00:00

Nomnomnomnomnomnom :3

SilverJetters Easy

00:10:392 Warum ist das Spacing hier anders als bei 00:08:917 (1,2) ?
00:20:720 (7,1) Spacing wieder
00:33:507 (2,3,4,5,6) Spacing
00:59:572 Ich weiß nicht was der Mapper mit dem Spacing bezwecken will.... Aber ich glaube ich lasse das Spacing jetzt mal außen vor xD

Auser dem Spacing alles gut

Normal
00:27:851 (5,6) Spacing
00:57:113 Wieso ist da denn kein Clap?
01:02:031 Clap
01:04:982 ^
02:28:097 (1) Whistle

Nice mapped

Hard
Langsam denke ich das dass spacing so komisch ist wegen der Grid Size.
Ok das ist gut.

Dark_Ai

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Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2012-12-19T20:26:24+00:00

Changed and updated~

Pereira006

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Pereira006 2012-12-19T21:21:08+00:00

Hi!!

imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if without " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission

[General]

I can see the kiai time is inconsistency for all diff's pleasse fix that should be same all diff's
The audio lead-in increassing to 1500 for all diff's like BeatofIke did write because i agree with him is better lot than 1015 IMO

[SilverJetters Easy]

Hitsound:

00:11:376 (5) - add whistle in start and end slider because here piano that fit lot
00:31:048 (5) - better remove finish in end slider because is don't sense but clap stay and add finish at 00:33:015 (1) and remove whistle is better lot
00:44:818 - in start and end slider remove clap and whistle stay is better lot
01:59:572 (3) - remove whistle in body slider
02:25:146 (1) - IMO is weird when i listen better lot if remove whistle and clap IMO
02:26:130 (2) - Missing add whistle in start slider if you keep it consistency
03:37:933 (1) - remove whistle and add finish better lot IMO
03:41:867 (1) - missing add clap in end slider if you keep it consistency

stuff cool

Gameplay:

00:29:080 (4) - New combo because the lyrics is change is sense lot
00:58:589 (3) - i wanna clean little overlaps in end slider with 00:56:621 (1) i mean this http://puu.sh/1CPGK you just move at 00:58:097 (2,3)
01:33:999 (4,5,6) - Again i don't like this overlaps try move down more like this http://puu.sh/1CPJ8
01:49:736 (3) - New combo i feel this lyrics is change
01:57:113 (1) - remove new combo and at 01:57:605 (2) - put new combo is better lot
02:04:982 (1,2) - ^ same
02:11:376 (1) - remove new combo and at 02:13:343 (2) - put new combo is better lot
02:52:687 (6) - new combo as lyrics is change imo
03:53:671 (3) - ^ same

[Normal]

Hitsound:

00:29:080 (1) - missing add whistle in end slider if you keep it consistency
00:33:999 (3) - missing add whsitle in start slider if you keep it consistency
00:56:621 (1) - missing add clap in repeat slider if you keep it consistency
01:01:785 (3) - missing add clap in end slider if you keep it consistency
01:04:490 (2) - missing add clap in repeat slider if you keep it consistency
01:16:294 (1) - missing add whistle in end slider
01:18:261 (3) - ^ same
01:28:097 (2) - add whistle in start slider
01:30:064 (4) - add whistle in end slider
01:49:736 (1) - missing add whistle in end slider
02:42:851 (2) - missing add whsitle in start slide
03:04:490 (1) - why finish end slider ? don't sense remove and add whistle in end slider is fit IMO

lot missing because is missing follow piano and drum and you consistency hitsound better recheck you hitsound this diff

Gameplay:

00:11:376 (3) - grid 1 left to align with 00:09:408 (1) or is intentional?
02:48:753 (2) - this slider is ugly try more symentric
02:50:720 (4) - ^ same

good

[Hard]

Hitsound:

00:18:261 (3) - add whistle in start slider if keep it consistency
00:39:900 (3) - ^ same
00:44:818 (1) - don't sense clap remove and add whistle in start slider is better IMO
01:26:130 (9) - add whistle in start slider if keep it consistency
01:35:474 (1) - add clap because you missing add here
01:51:703 (5) - add whistle in start slider if keep it consistency
01:57:605 (1) - ^ same
02:18:261 (2) - missing add clap in end slider
02:43:835 (8) - missing add whistle in start slider
02:47:277 (6) - missing add whistle in end slider
03:26:130 (3) - ^ same
03:53:671 (2) - missing add whistle in start slider
03:55:638 (1) - ^ same

Lot missing is same happened in diff hard

Gameplay:

very good

[]
Good gameplay but the problem normal and hard lot missing consistency hitsound better recheck hitsound
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck so pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
Good luck ! and bye bye!

Saten

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Saten 2012-12-20T00:09:38+00:00

Will check this when the mod has been appied~

dkun

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dkun 2012-12-20T04:58:20+00:00

i'm also with saten, impending mod here

Dark_Ai

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Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2012-12-20T07:23:34+00:00

Changed and updated~

Saten

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Saten 2012-12-20T18:17:35+00:00

Hi~
Sorry for the delay

[Insane]
00:48:753 (1) - I find this spinner quite short. It could be extended to 00:50:720 -
01:27:113 (1) - whistle fits best here imo
01:27:482 (3) - whistle
01:27:605 (4) - clap only
01:27:851 (5) - whistle
01:42:851 (1) - ^ this beat isn't that strong
02:12:113 (2) - why do you have a Finish here? o.o
02:16:661 (5) - whistle here to match with previous similar part (01:27:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
02:16:784 (6) - whistle on end
02:17:277 (1) - Finish. A new stanza and the beat here is stronger
02:18:261 (2) - clap on end. Did you miss it?
02:32:400 (4) - whistle
03:06:458 (6,7) - Can you stack this more properly? (7) is less visible atm
03:30:064 (1) - Finish? Beginning on chorus
03:39:900 (1,2,3,4) - is the spacing weird here on purpose? Take a look at (3)
04:15:802 (2,3,4) - abit odd spacing as well. I find it better to use Grid level 4 to distinguish any major spacing issues
04:24:162 (1,2,3,4) - Can you make those custom stacks more consistent with spacing? First has 0,13x, second has 0,09x

[Normal]
00:17:276 (1,2,3) - make the spacing more equal here.it's hard to do that with your current chosen grid level
00:21:212 (1) - finish on start
01:05:719 (3) - remove whistle on end. fits better imo
01:08:425 (2) - finish on start
01:13:343 (2) - remove whistle
01:13:588 (3) - remove whistle on end
01:17:523 (2) - ^
01:21:212 (3) - remove whistle
01:21:458 (4) - whistle on start
01:28:097 (2) - finish on start
02:13:343 (3) - Rotate this -45°. It would flow better imo
02:17:277 (1) - finish on start, just like I mentioned on Hard
03:40:392 (4,5,1) - Spacing difference on purpose?
03:45:802 (1) - finish on start
04:09:408 (1) - ^
04:18:260 (2,3,4) - spacing issue?

[SJ]
00:01:540 (3) - whistle on start. Feels empty without it
00:25:146 (1) - can you make this less curvy?

SPOILER

00:31:048 (2) - finish doesn't really fit here imo. Add finish on 00:33:015 (1) - instead
00:40:392 (4,1) - Move 4 a bit up and reduce the curve on (1)

SPOILER

01:08:425 (1) - Clap & Finish doesn't really belong here
01:16:294 (1) - finish on start
01:20:228 (1) - finish
01:24:162 (1) - finish on start
01:39:900 (2,1) - avoid having them so tight. 1/2 is more ideal
01:53:671 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - this chain isn't really that smooth imo. Try something like this

SPOILER

I used Grid Level 4 as you can see

02:40:392 (1) - This note is just misleading. It plays better if you start on a downbeat instead
02:48:753 (1) - make it less curvy as well?
03:08:425 (2) - curving it downwards feels better imo

SPOILER

03:10:392 (1) - whistle fits better here imo
03:29:572 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same issue as 01:53:671 -

SPOILER

or

04:29:080 (2,3,4,5) - odd spacing

Nice mapset. You should get a MAT/BAT here after dkun, it's almost Christmas~
Good luck!

Snepif

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Joined July 2010

Snepif 2012-12-20T18:20:04+00:00

Hi there, sorry for being late.
Let's see.

[General]

[Easy]

*Okay this will be pretty much of a nazi mod since there are many minor spacing problems, maybe due to using a large grid, will point them out
Use grid lvl4 so you can fix them properly

00:06:949 (3) - move 3 grid up, lvl 4 grid of course
00:07:441 (4) - And then move this one to x268 y64
00:08:917 (1,2) - Then adjust the spacing of these 2 as well

From now on, I guess you get the idea. Just use grid lvl 4 and fix all the spacing inconcistent, check everything by yourself, trust me the map will look more professional.

00:17:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern's shape looks really bad imo, you could do something symmetrycal and polite like this:

SPOILER

Then, rearrange the next slider and everything so it fits with this pattern
00:25:146 (1) - Ugh, so many repeats. This will be confusing and boring for beginners because it has a different number of repeats that 00:13:343 (2) - and 00:01:540 (3) - . I suggest deleting some, so it has the same amount of repeats as these sliders, and adding notes instead.
00:29:080 (1,2) - Improve this blanket:

SPOILER

*BTW, see how you only added 2 repeats like the other sliders? That's why the suggestion at 00:25:146 (1) must be done

00:40:392 (4) - Move it a bit up, so it flows with the curve of the previous slider:

SPOILER

01:12:359 (1,2,3) - Looks and flows bad :/ what about making both sliders mirrored? Like, the same but mirrored so it looks and play better. Mirror any of the 2 sliders.
01:19:736 (2,1,2) - Ugh, fix the unconsistent spacing here
01:24:162 (1,2) - Really bad blanket! Improve it:

SPOILER

01:31:540 (1,2) - Really unconsistent spacing, fix it using grid lvl4
01:33:999 (4,1,2) - Lol this overlap is really bad. Why did you do this o.o? It doesn't look any good. Do this so they don't touch each other:

SPOILER

01:35:966 (2,1,2) - O.O and what is this jump on an easy? Fix this spacing using grid lvl4 and distance snap lol o.o it should be like this:

SPOILER

01:53:671 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make the curve more polite:

SPOILER

01:57:605 (1,2) - Uhh.. looks really bad. I get the idea but they don't make a nice blanket and also they touch awkwardly. See how they touch there? http://puu.sh/1DabI . Think of another pattern
02:05:474 (1,3) - Make these sliders mirrored?

SPOILER

02:40:392 (1) - This note sounds totally out of place. The voice starts at 02:40:146 (red tick), not the white tick. You can either add a note there (and delete the one in the white tick of course), or simply delete the white tick note and leave only the slider. If you ask me, i would just delete this note.
02:42:359 (2,3) - Move 2 and 3 a bit down so it flows better:

SPOILER

02:46:294 (2) - Move to x476 y300
03:29:572 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Improve this curve:

SPOILER

And then rearrange the next stuff
03:33:999 (1,2) - Improve this blanket:

SPOILER

03:41:867 (1,2) - ^
03:45:802 (1,2,3,4,1) - Improve curve, you know how
03:55:638 (2) - This shape plays bad with the previous slider :/ maybe http://puu.sh/1Dan2 ?

[Normal]

*Same as Easy, lots of inconsistent spacings, use grid lvl4 and check everything. I'll give you and example:

00:17:276 (1,2,3) - (2) is not in the exact middle
Please check these.

00:39:654 (6) - Move up and left so it flows with the curve of the sliders..
00:48:753 (3) - I would silence the end
01:13:343 (2,3) - Doesn't flow with the previous slider's curve, i'd move it a bit up, and then rearrange some stuff
01:21:458 (4,5,6) - Use grid lvl4, and move them 1 grid left

SPOILER

01:59:572 (4) - Not perfectly symmetrycal
02:03:015 (3,4,5) - Stack with (1)
02:03:998 (1) - Remove NC
02:07:441 (1) - ^
02:09:408 (3) - Add NC
02:11:376 (1) - Remove NC
02:13:343 (5) - Add NC
02:15:310 (1) - Remove NC
Much better now~~
02:48:015 (1) - This slider is not intuitive because it suddenly starts on a red tick, which is later, so i suggest you to add a note on the previous white tick too, so it's more readable.
03:10:392 (3) - I think this shape doesn't fit! try to do this instead:

SPOILER

03:27:851 (5) - Same thing, this isn't readable because you have to stop suddenly and wait for the red tick. I suggest making a slider and ending it there or... idk.. 2 notes or something
04:05:474 (5) - New combo
04:06:458 (1) - Remove new combo

[Hard]

00:01:540 (3) - New combo?
00:10:392 (3) - Whistle at the start
00:45:556 (2) - I think this jump from slider to slider is kinda umpredictable, decrease the spacing between the sliders?
00:48:753 (1) - Silence the end
01:28:097 (6) - I would add a repeat at the end, sounds nice and doesn't leave any weird empty space
01:51:703 (5) - Move 2 grid up
01:58:589 (3) - I get the idea of the weird sliders but this one just doesn't fit. Its to... worm-shaped, try to make it less wormy, like:

SPOILER

^That isn't really great but just an idea of how it could look like

Overall the diff is okay but i would add some variation, like, some SV changes for example at 03:14:326 (2) - you could use a lower sv for that part.

Nothing else,
Good luck!

Oh and btw reply my mod please, if you decide to not change something... read my sig hehe

Dark_Ai

1,832 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2012-12-20T19:43:06+00:00

Saten wrote:
Hi~
Sorry for the delay Don't worry ^^

[Insane]
00:48:753 (1) - I find this spinner quite short. It could be extended to 00:50:720 -
01:27:113 (1) - whistle fits best here imo
01:27:482 (3) - whistle
01:27:605 (4) - clap only
01:27:851 (5) - whistle
01:42:851 (1) - ^ this beat isn't that strong
02:12:113 (2) - why do you have a Finish here? o.o
02:16:661 (5) - whistle here to match with previous similar part (01:27:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
02:16:784 (6) - whistle on end
02:17:277 (1) - Finish. A new stanza and the beat here is stronger
02:18:261 (2) - clap on end. Did you miss it?
02:32:400 (4) - whistle
03:06:458 (6,7) - Can you stack this more properly? (7) is less visible atm
03:30:064 (1) - Finish? Beginning on chorus
03:39:900 (1,2,3,4) - is the spacing weird here on purpose? Take a look at (3)
04:15:802 (2,3,4) - abit odd spacing as well. I find it better to use Grid level 4 to distinguish any major spacing issues
04:24:162 (1,2,3,4) - Can you make those custom stacks more consistent with spacing? First has 0,13x, second has 0,09x I like this ^^

[Normal]
00:17:276 (1,2,3) - make the spacing more equal here.it's hard to do that with your current chosen grid level
00:21:212 (1) - finish on start
01:05:719 (3) - remove whistle on end. fits better imo
01:08:425 (2) - finish on start
01:13:343 (2) - remove whistle
01:13:588 (3) - remove whistle on end
01:17:523 (2) - ^
01:21:212 (3) - remove whistle
01:21:458 (4) - whistle on start
01:28:097 (2) - finish on start
02:13:343 (3) - Rotate this -45°. It would flow better imo no :/
02:17:277 (1) - finish on start, just like I mentioned on Hard
03:40:392 (4,5,1) - Spacing difference on purpose?
03:45:802 (1) - finish on start
04:09:408 (1) - ^
04:18:260 (2,3,4) - spacing issue?

changed almost everything ^^

[SJ]
00:01:540 (3) - whistle on start. Feels empty without it
00:25:146 (1) - can you make this less curvy?
SPOILER
00:31:048 (2) - finish doesn't really fit here imo. Add finish on 00:33:015 (1) - instead
00:40:392 (4,1) - Move 4 a bit up and reduce the curve on (1)
SPOILER
01:08:425 (1) - Clap & Finish doesn't really belong here
01:16:294 (1) - finish on start
01:20:228 (1) - finish
01:24:162 (1) - finish on start
01:39:900 (2,1) - avoid having them so tight. 1/2 is more ideal
01:53:671 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - this chain isn't really that smooth imo. Try something like this
SPOILER

I used Grid Level 4 as you can see
02:40:392 (1) - This note is just misleading. It plays better if you start on a downbeat instead
02:48:753 (1) - make it less curvy as well?
03:08:425 (2) - curving it downwards feels better imo
SPOILER
03:10:392 (1) - whistle fits better here imo
03:29:572 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same issue as 01:53:671 -
SPOILER

or

04:29:080 (2,3,4,5) - odd spacing

I don't know what he changed sorry ><

Nice mapset. You should get a MAT/BAT here after dkun, it's almost Christmas~ I know
Good luck!

Snepif wrote:
Hi there, sorry for being late.
Let's see.

[General]

[Easy]

*Okay this will be pretty much of a nazi mod since there are many minor spacing problems, maybe due to using a large grid, will point them out
Use grid lvl4 so you can fix them properly

00:06:949 (3) - move 3 grid up, lvl 4 grid of course
00:07:441 (4) - And then move this one to x268 y64
00:08:917 (1,2) - Then adjust the spacing of these 2 as well

From now on, I guess you get the idea. Just use grid lvl 4 and fix all the spacing inconcistent, check everything by yourself, trust me the map will look more professional.

00:17:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern's shape looks really bad imo, you could do something symmetrycal and polite like this:
SPOILER
Then, rearrange the next slider and everything so it fits with this pattern
00:25:146 (1) - Ugh, so many repeats. This will be confusing and boring for beginners because it has a different number of repeats that 00:13:343 (2) - and 00:01:540 (3) - . I suggest deleting some, so it has the same amount of repeats as these sliders, and adding notes instead.
00:29:080 (1,2) - Improve this blanket:
SPOILER
*BTW, see how you only added 2 repeats like the other sliders? That's why the suggestion at 00:25:146 (1) must be done
00:40:392 (4) - Move it a bit up, so it flows with the curve of the previous slider:
SPOILER
01:12:359 (1,2,3) - Looks and flows bad :/ what about making both sliders mirrored? Like, the same but mirrored so it looks and play better. Mirror any of the 2 sliders.
01:19:736 (2,1,2) - Ugh, fix the unconsistent spacing here
01:24:162 (1,2) - Really bad blanket! Improve it:
SPOILER
01:31:540 (1,2) - Really unconsistent spacing, fix it using grid lvl4
01:33:999 (4,1,2) - Lol this overlap is really bad. Why did you do this o.o? It doesn't look any good. Do this so they don't touch each other:
SPOILER
01:35:966 (2,1,2) - O.O and what is this jump on an easy? Fix this spacing using grid lvl4 and distance snap lol o.o it should be like this:
SPOILER
01:53:671 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make the curve more polite:
SPOILER
01:57:605 (1,2) - Uhh.. looks really bad. I get the idea but they don't make a nice blanket and also they touch awkwardly. See how they touch there? http://puu.sh/1DabI . Think of another pattern
02:05:474 (1,3) - Make these sliders mirrored?
SPOILER
02:40:392 (1) - This note sounds totally out of place. The voice starts at 02:40:146 (red tick), not the white tick. You can either add a note there (and delete the one in the white tick of course), or simply delete the white tick note and leave only the slider. If you ask me, i would just delete this note.
02:42:359 (2,3) - Move 2 and 3 a bit down so it flows better:
SPOILER
02:46:294 (2) - Move to x476 y300
03:29:572 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Improve this curve:
SPOILER
And then rearrange the next stuff
03:33:999 (1,2) - Improve this blanket:
SPOILER
03:41:867 (1,2) - ^
03:45:802 (1,2,3,4,1) - Improve curve, you know how
03:55:638 (2) - This shape plays bad with the previous slider :/ maybe http://puu.sh/1Dan2 ?

I don't know what he changed ><

[Normal]

*Same as Easy, lots of inconsistent spacings, use grid lvl4 and check everything. I'll give you and example:

00:17:276 (1,2,3) - (2) is not in the exact middle
Please check these. I tried

00:39:654 (6) - Move up and left so it flows with the curve of the sliders.. Okay
00:48:753 (3) - I would silence the end hmm :/
01:13:343 (2,3) - Doesn't flow with the previous slider's curve, i'd move it a bit up, and then rearrange some stuff
01:21:458 (4,5,6) - Use grid lvl4, and move them 1 grid left Okay
SPOILER
01:59:572 (4) - Not perfectly symmetrycal I tried to change
02:03:015 (3,4,5) - Stack with (1) Okay
02:03:998 (1) - Remove NC Okay
02:07:441 (1) - ^ Okay
02:09:408 (3) - Add NC Okay
02:11:376 (1) - Remove NC Okay
02:13:343 (5) - Add NC Okay
02:15:310 (1) - Remove NC Okay
Much better now~~
02:48:015 (1) - This slider is not intuitive because it suddenly starts on a red tick, which is later, so i suggest you to add a note on the previous white tick too, so it's more readable. Okay
03:10:392 (3) - I think this shape doesn't fit! try to do this instead: Okay
SPOILER
03:27:851 (5) - Same thing, this isn't readable because you have to stop suddenly and wait for the red tick. I suggest making a slider and ending it there or... idk.. 2 notes or something Okay
04:05:474 (5) - New combo Okay
04:06:458 (1) - Remove new combo Okay

[Hard]

00:01:540 (3) - New combo?
00:10:392 (3) - Whistle at the start
00:45:556 (2) - I think this jump from slider to slider is kinda umpredictable, decrease the spacing between the sliders?
00:48:753 (1) - Silence the end
01:28:097 (6) - I would add a repeat at the end, sounds nice and doesn't leave any weird empty space I don't like that
01:51:703 (5) - Move 2 grid up
01:58:589 (3) - I get the idea of the weird sliders but this one just doesn't fit. Its to... worm-shaped, try to make it less wormy, like:
SPOILER
^That isn't really great but just an idea of how it could look like

Overall the diff is okay but i would add some variation, like, some SV changes for example at 03:14:326 (2) - you could use a lower sv for that part.

[b]Changed almost everything

Nothing else,
Good luck![/b]

Oh and btw reply my mod please, if you decide to not change something... read my sig hehe

Thank you both for modding ~

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2012-12-22T06:35:48+00:00

Hi ~ Dark_Ai ~

As per your request ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Add 'merry,white,snow' in tags.
Change AudioLeadIn to 2500 please,1500 a bit short.

[Hard]

00:50:720 - Kiai time should end to here.
00:29:080 (7,9) - I guess you missing make symmetry to here.
01:10:392 (7,1) - ^
02:09:408 (1,3) - ^
00:41:376 - Remove whistle and Add clap.
01:18:999 - Why not add circle to here? it's really fits,follow with piano.
01:22:933 - ^
01:28:835 - Add a circle to here,sound much better.
01:56:499 - ^
03:40:761 - ^
01:35:474 - Missing Add clap to here.
01:48:384 (3) - Move to 01:48:630,sound much better.
01:50:720 - Remove finish and Add whistle.
02:10:392 - ^
02:11:376 (1) - Try ctrl+g,flow much better.
02:49:736 - Remove finish.
04:09:408 (1) - The slider isn't symmetry.
04:32:769 (6) - Remove this circle,sound better to me.

[Normal]

01:13:589 (3,4) - These overlap looks really bad,it's make beginner confused.
01:36:949 - Remove finish.
02:49:736 - ^
03:05:474 - ^
01:46:785 (3,5) - I guess you missing make symmetry to here.
03:15:310 (1,3) - ^
03:30:063 (1,3) - ^
04:18:260 (2,4) - ^
02:33:015 (3) - Pls don't stack this,also move to X:192 Y:160,looks much better.
03:52:195 - Missing Add clap to here.

[SilverJetter's Easy]

00:25:146 (1,2) - Missing Add hitsound to here.
00:40:884 (1,2) - Try make a blanket.
02:09:408 (1,2) - ^
02:03:999 (2) - Missing slider to 1/2 rhythm.
02:07:441 (3,4) - These overlap looks really bad,it's make beginner confused.
02:18:261 (2,4) - I guess you missing make symmetry to here.
02:49:736 - Remove finish.
03:05:474 - ^
03:35:966 (2,1) - Spacing error.

OK ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck,Also Merry Christmas ~ :3

Dark_Ai

1,832 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2012-12-22T10:26:24+00:00

SPOILER

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ Dark_Ai ~

As per your request ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Add 'merry,white,snow' in tags.
Change AudioLeadIn to 2500 please,1500 a bit short.

[Hard]

00:50:720 - Kiai time should end to here. Okay
00:29:080 (7,9) - I guess you missing make symmetry to here. Okay
01:10:392 (7,1) - ^ Okay
02:09:408 (1,3) - ^ Okay
00:41:376 - Remove whistle and Add clap. Okay
01:18:999 - Why not add circle to here? it's really fits,follow with piano. Okay
01:22:933 - ^ Okay
01:28:835 - Add a circle to here,sound much better. Okay
01:56:499 - ^ Okay
03:40:761 - ^ Okay
01:35:474 - Missing Add clap to here. Okay
01:48:384 (3) - Move to 01:48:630,sound much better. Not really.. I deleted this note
01:50:720 - Remove finish and Add whistle. Okay
02:10:392 - ^ Okay
02:11:376 (1) - Try ctrl+g,flow much better. Okay
02:49:736 - Remove finish. Nope, since you can hear a finish sound in the song too
04:09:408 (1) - The slider isn't symmetry. Changed
04:32:769 (6) - Remove this circle,sound better to me. Okay

[Normal]

01:13:589 (3,4) - These overlap looks really bad,it's make beginner confused. Changed
01:36:949 - Remove finish. Nope, since you can hear a finish sound in the song too
02:49:736 - ^ Nope, since you can hear a finish sound in the song too
03:05:474 - ^ Nope, since you can hear a finish sound in the song too
01:46:785 (3,5) - I guess you missing make symmetry to here. Changed
03:15:310 (1,3) - ^ Changed
03:30:063 (1,3) - ^ Changed
04:18:260 (2,4) - ^ Changed
02:33:015 (3) - Pls don't stack this,also move to X:192 Y:160,looks much better. Changed
03:52:195 - Missing Add clap to here.Changed

[SilverJetter's Easy]

00:25:146 (1,2) - Missing Add hitsound to here. Okay
00:40:884 (1,2) - Try make a blanket. Okay
02:09:408 (1,2) - ^ Okay
02:03:999 (2) - Missing slider to 1/2 rhythm. Changed
02:07:441 (3,4) - These overlap looks really bad,it's make beginner confused. Changed
02:18:261 (2,4) - I guess you missing make symmetry to here. Okay
02:49:736 - Remove finish. Nope, since you can hear a finish sound in the song too
03:05:474 - ^ ^
03:35:966 (2,1) - Spacing error. Changed

OK ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck,Also Merry Christmas ~ :3

Thank you for your mod :33 ~

ztrot

osu! Alumni

4,378 posts

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ztrot 2012-12-22T17:08:09+00:00

LOOKIN GOOD if rika bubbles it I guess i can get this ranked for the holidays~

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2012-12-22T19:38:57+00:00

just give a look because it's christmas time <.<

[General]

add more tags
in all diff #1 kiai time finish 00:50:720 but you map only to 00:49:736 fix kiai time u.u

[Easy]

i think multiple reversearrow slider for beginner are to difficult :V

00:00:556 (1,2) - remove they
00:04:982 (2) - inconsistence in spacing move it 1 gring left
00:12:851 (1,2) - try to get a better blanket like :

00:17:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think this are to much circles for a easy try to replace some with sliders
00:23:179 (3,1) - so ugly to see it ;_; try something like:

this:

00:33:015 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how i said before are to much circles for beginners
00:42:851 (2,1) - why are they so close to eachother? fix spacing here
01:03:015 (3) - i think here is not necessary to stop the rythm i know because of vocal but i thik a slider here is the best :V

01:56:130 (2,3,1) - please relook spacing here
02:07:318 (3,4) - i think a stacking in a easy diff is to much for beginners :V try to move this circle or if you wanna hold it how it is pleas stack better the circle with the slider end
02:11:376 (2,1) - please relook spacing here
02:16:294 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - to much circles :V
02:46:785 (3,1) - this is like a jump i didn't see in other parts of diff so big distance please fix it
03:29:572 83,1,2,3,4,5,6) - to much circles here too
03:40:392 (6) - why did you use this slider only here? i think in other parts of song will sound good too :U
04:10:392 (3,4) - why don't you try to do a blanket here?
04:28:589 (1) - relook spacing here

[Normal]

00:00:556 (1,2) - same as i said in easy remove they it will be bettew with AL1540
00:11:376 (3,4,1) - try something like this:

00:20:720 (4) - stack it with 00:18:753 (2)
01:11:376 (6) - little spacing issue please relook it
01:29:572 (3) - move this circle you did a blanket with 01:30:064 (4) - why don't you use it?
01:41:867 (3) - move it to x: 236 y: 124 so you have a blanket for 01:41:376 (2)
04:13:343 (1) - just 1 gring right

[Hard]

nice diff

00:00:556 (1,2) - how i said before is better to remove they
01:25:146 (7) - personally i don't like this slider thy to do only 3 point slider
02:10:392 (3,1) - stack they a little bit better
02:14:818 (7,1) - stack
02:42:113 (4) - stack this circle with the next slider

good luck hope it can help :3

ztrot wrote:
LOOKIN GOOD if rika bubbles it I guess i can get this ranked for the holidays~

Kawayi Rika wrote:
OK ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck,Also Merry Christmas ~ :3

sadly she didn't said anything about her comming back ;w;

Dark_Ai

1,832 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2012-12-22T20:12:16+00:00

thank you for modding. I will change when I'm back home

EDIT:

SPOILER

[quote="Lally"]just give a look because it's christmas time <.<

[General]

add more tags Okay
in all diff #1 kiai time finish 00:50:720 but you map only to 00:49:736 fix kiai time u.u Nope.. I like to end the kiai time there :/

[Normal]

00:00:556 (1,2) - same as i said in easy remove they it will be bettew with AL1540 No, since the music begins there
00:11:376 (3,4,1) - try something like this: Okay

00:20:720 (4) - stack it with 00:18:753 (2) Okay
01:11:376 (6) - little spacing issue please relook it Okay
01:29:572 (3) - move this circle you did a blanket with 01:30:064 (4) - why don't you use it? Okay, I tried
01:41:867 (3) - move it to x: 236 y: 124 so you have a blanket for 01:41:376 (2) Okay
04:13:343 (1) - just 1 gring right Changed the slider

[Hard]

nice diff

00:00:556 (1,2) - how i said before is better to remove they nope, like I said on normal
01:25:146 (7) - personally i don't like this slider thy to do only 3 point slider Changed
02:10:392 (3,1) - stack they a little bit better Okay
02:14:818 (7,1) - stack Okay
02:42:113 (4) - stack this circle with the next slider Okay

good luck hope it can help :3

Last edited by Dark_Ai 2012-12-23T00:44:48+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

SilverJetter

77 posts

Joined November 2011

SilverJetter 2012-12-23T00:38:55+00:00

osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Nishino Kana - Christmas Love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 16785
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Christmas Love
TitleUnicode:Christmas Love
Artist:Nishino Kana
ArtistUnicode:Nishino Kana
Creator:Dark_Ai
Version:SilverJetter's Easy
Source:
Tags:Christmas Winter Xmas SilverJetter
BeatmapID:201141
BeatmapSetID:68849

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Konachan.jpg"
//Break Periods
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2,154982,159444
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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80,228,228261,2,0,P|72:292|120:332,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,344,229244,1,8,0:0:0
276,344,229736,6,0,P|364:336|412:104,1,360,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,72,231703,2,0,P|256:80|208:312,1,360,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
136,360,233671,6,0,P|72:360|16:344,3,120,2|8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
32,260,235638,2,0,P|101:254|163:272,3,120,2|8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,237605,12,4,241540,0:0:0
253,188,242523,5,2,0:0:0
180,145,243015,1,8,0:0:0
96,141,243507,1,2,0:0:0
48,216,243999,1,8,0:0:0
48,296,244490,1,2,0:0:0
112,344,244982,6,0,P|168:368|232:360,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,352,245966,1,8,0:0:0
384,304,246458,1,2,0:0:0
424,233,246949,1,8,0:0:0
418,149,247441,2,0,P|384:100|321:76,3,120,2|8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
249,52,249408,5,4,0:0:0
165,60,249900,1,8,0:0:0
96,109,250392,1,2,0:0:0
63,186,250884,2,0,P|128:184|176:136,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
73,269,252359,5,2,0:0:0
149,304,252851,1,8,0:0:0
232,304,253343,2,0,P|339:260|185:44,1,480,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
119,78,255802,2,0,P|69:157|177:231,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
250,236,257277,5,2,0:0:0
333,230,257769,2,0,P|377:226|421:162,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
424,88,258753,2,0,P|380:42|306:36,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,32,259736,6,0,P|112:32,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
78,108,260720,2,0,P|48:160|64:216,1,120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
120,272,261703,2,0,P|152:320|216:336,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
205,244,263179,6,0,P|275:256|440:197,2,240,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
239,167,265638,1,8,0:0:0
239,82,266130,2,0,P|272:32|328:16,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
400,64,267113,1,2,0:0:0
456,128,267605,2,0,P|480:184|456:240,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,260,268589,5,8,0:0:0
296,248,269080,2,0,P|181:202|223:130,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
244,48,270556,1,8,0:0:0
160,64,271048,1,2,0:0:0
96,120,271540,2,0,P|64:168|158:292,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,273015,12,0,274490,0:0:0

Lally wrote:
[Easy]
i think multiple reversearrow slider for beginner are to difficult :V
00:00:556 (1,2) - remove they No, we wont do that
00:04:982 (2) - inconsistence in spacing move it 1 gring left done
00:12:851 (1,2) - try to get a better blanket like :
00:17:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think this are to much circles for a easy try to replace some with sliders done
00:23:179 (3,1) - so ugly to see it ;_; try something like: changed

this:
00:33:015 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how i said before are to much circles for beginners how i said on the other one
00:42:851 (2,1) - why are they so close to eachother? fix spacing here changed
01:03:015 (3) - i think here is not necessary to stop the rythm i know because of vocal but i thik a slider here is the best :V slider included

01:56:130 (2,3,1) - please relook spacing here
02:07:318 (3,4) - i think a stacking in a easy diff is to much for beginners :V try to move this circle or if you wanna hold it how it is pleas stack better the circle with the slider end i dont know why there was a spacing ^^" so changed
02:11:376 (2,1) - please relook spacing here
02:16:294 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - to much circles :V included sliders
02:46:785 (3,1) - this is like a jump i didn't see in other parts of diff so big distance please fix it
03:29:572 83,1,2,3,4,5,6) - to much circles here too
03:40:392 (6) - why did you use this slider only here? i think in other parts of song will sound good too :U added one of this kind
04:10:392 (3,4) - why don't you try to do a blanket here? i tried...but it failed..now changed^^
04:28:589 (1) - relook spacing here

Dark_Ai

1,832 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2012-12-23T00:48:33+00:00

Updated~

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2012-12-23T15:25:21+00:00

Some IRC Modding.

SPOILER

16:11 Andrea: change lead-in to 2000 on all the difficulties
16:11 Andrea: fix tag to white on all the difficulties
16:11 Andrea: it's whit right now
16:12 Andrea: on easy
16:12 Andrea: 00:25:146 (1)- missing clap on repeat
16:12 Andrea: 00:42:851 (2,1)- wrong spacing
16:18 Andrea: on hard
16:18 Andrea: 00:09:408 (1)- this finish doesn't follow anything
16:18 Andrea: 00:21:212 (1)- whistle on begin finish on end
16:19 Andrea: 00:44:080 (5,6,1)- inconsistent spacing
16:20 Andrea: 01:08:425 (3)- clap on repeat
16:21 Dark_Ai: 00:21:212 (1)- I'm not agree with finish on the end
16:21 Andrea: 02:12:112 (2)- remove whistle
16:21 Andrea: I meant clap sorry
16:21 Andrea: not finish
16:24 Andrea: that's it ^^
16:25 Dark_Ai: okay
16:26 Dark_Ai: updated
16:27 Andrea: posted
16:28 Andrea: you didn't fixed Normal
16:28 Andrea: 2000 lead-in e white tag
16:28 Andrea: also it's Merry not Marry
16:28 Andrea: fix that too
16:30 Dark_Ai: fixed
16:34 Andrea: easy
16:34 Andrea: 02:46:785 (3,4,1)- spacing
16:38 Dark_Ai: the sound is weird with dt
16:40 Andrea: ^^
16:40 Andrea: normal
16:40 Andrea: 00:09:408 (1)- remove finish
16:40 Andrea: 02:48:753 (3)- clap on repeat
16:40 Andrea: and finish on begin
16:46 Andrea: on hard
16:47 Andrea: 01:28:097 (6)- finish and clap
16:47 Andrea: 01:29:572 (2)- clap
16:48 Andrea: 03:53:671 (2)- whistle at begin
16:49 Andrea: 04:24:162 (1,2,3,4)- I think it's better if you normally stack these
16:49 Andrea: now after fixing everything you can update