Hi~
Sorry for the delay
[Insane]
00:48:753 (1) - I find this spinner quite short. It could be extended to 00:50:720 -
01:27:113 (1) - whistle fits best here imo
01:27:482 (3) - whistle
01:27:605 (4) - clap only
01:27:851 (5) - whistle
01:42:851 (1) - ^ this beat isn't that strong
02:12:113 (2) - why do you have a Finish here? o.o
02:16:661 (5) - whistle here to match with previous similar part (01:27:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
02:16:784 (6) - whistle on end
02:17:277 (1) - Finish. A new stanza and the beat here is stronger
02:18:261 (2) - clap on end. Did you miss it?
02:32:400 (4) - whistle
03:06:458 (6,7) - Can you stack this more properly? (7) is less visible atm
03:30:064 (1) - Finish? Beginning on chorus
03:39:900 (1,2,3,4) - is the spacing weird here on purpose? Take a look at (3)
04:15:802 (2,3,4) - abit odd spacing as well. I find it better to use Grid level 4 to distinguish any major spacing issues
04:24:162 (1,2,3,4) - Can you make those custom stacks more consistent with spacing? First has
0,13x, second has
0,09x[Normal]
00:17:276 (1,2,3) - make the spacing more equal here.it's hard to do that with your current chosen grid level
00:21:212 (1) - finish on start
01:05:719 (3) - remove whistle on end. fits better imo
01:08:425 (2) - finish on start
01:13:343 (2) - remove whistle
01:13:588 (3) - remove whistle on end
01:17:523 (2) - ^
01:21:212 (3) - remove whistle
01:21:458 (4) - whistle on start
01:28:097 (2) - finish on start
02:13:343 (3) - Rotate this -45°. It would flow better imo
02:17:277 (1) - finish on start, just like I mentioned on
Hard03:40:392 (4,5,1) - Spacing difference on purpose?
03:45:802 (1) - finish on start
04:09:408 (1) - ^
04:18:260 (2,3,4) - spacing issue?
[SJ]
00:01:540 (3) - whistle on start. Feels empty without it
00:25:146 (1) - can you make this less curvy?
00:31:048 (2) - finish doesn't really fit here imo. Add finish on 00:33:015 (1) - instead
00:40:392 (4,1) - Move 4 a bit up and reduce the curve on (1)
01:08:425 (1) - Clap & Finish doesn't really belong here
01:16:294 (1) - finish on start
01:20:228 (1) - finish
01:24:162 (1) - finish on start
01:39:900 (2,1) - avoid having them so tight. 1/2 is more ideal
01:53:671 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - this chain isn't really that smooth imo. Try something like this
SPOILERI used Grid Level 4 as you can see
02:40:392 (1) - This note is just misleading. It plays better if you start on a downbeat instead
02:48:753 (1) - make it less curvy as well?
03:08:425 (2) - curving it downwards feels better imo
03:10:392 (1) - whistle fits better here imo
03:29:572 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same issue as 01:53:671 -
04:29:080 (2,3,4,5) - odd spacing
Nice mapset. You should get a MAT/BAT here after dkun, it's almost Christmas~
Good luck!