1. Insane (4.9 stars, 735 notes)
2. Normal (2.81 stars, 203 notes)
3. Tshemmp's Hard (5 stars, 541 notes)

1. Add "Tshemmp" to the tags of all diffs.

1. 00:22:185 (5,6,7) - I find the spacing change between them very confusing.
2. 00:31:035 (4,5) - I don't like that th slider starts on a red tick, this feels awkward, maybe swap (4) and (5) in the time line so that (5) starts on a white tick and (4) on a red one?
3. 00:53:385 (4) - the rhythm of this one feels strange. You did it better here 01:02:835.
4. 01:07:935 - how about a stream from here to 01:08:460?
5. 01:08:535 (1) - finish on the start
6. 01:55:935 - stream here?
7. 01:56:535 (1) - finish on start
8. 01:59:685 (4) - stack under (2) maybe?
9. 02:33:585 (8,9) - this jump is so huge. Maybe do it like this (unstack (9,10,11)):
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   412,44,153585,1,0,0:0:0
   312,96,153735,1,0,0:0:0
   256,192,153885,1,0,0:0:0
   256,316,154035,2,0,P|312:312|356:292,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

10. 02:38:985 (4) - again the rhythm of this slider feels strange. Better do it like here 02:48:435.
11. 03:01:335 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - no. :< I know why you did this but cone on, it is just awkward to play this streams with these mini breaks. Because of the special accentuation I suggest something like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
    
    

    184,48,181335,5,0,0:0:0
    208,60,181410,1,0,0:0:0
    232,72,181485,1,0,0:0:0
    256,84,181560,1,0,0:0:0
    280,96,181635,1,8,0:0:0
    304,108,181710,1,0,0:0:0
    328,120,181785,5,0,0:0:0
    304,132,181860,1,0,0:0:0
    280,144,181935,1,0,0:0:0
    256,156,182010,1,0,0:0:0
    232,168,182085,1,0,0:0:0
    208,180,182160,1,0,0:0:0
    184,192,182235,5,8,0:0:0
    208,204,182310,1,0,0:0:0
    232,216,182385,1,0,0:0:0
    256,228,182460,1,0,0:0:0
    280,240,182535,1,0,0:0:0
    304,252,182610,1,0,0:0:0
    328,264,182685,5,0,0:0:0
    304,276,182760,1,0,0:0:0
    280,288,182835,1,8,0:0:0
    256,300,182910,1,0,0:0:0
    232,312,182985,1,0,0:0:0
    208,324,183060,1,0,0:0:0
    184,336,183135,5,4,0:0:0
    184,336,183285,1,0,0:0:0

12. 03:07:185 - add a circle. There are so many mini breaks arond here, it feels a bit empty and also kills the flow.
13. 03:10:935 (1,2,3,4) - :O not sure if XATs will allow this. Maybe add a NC on 03:11:535 (3).
14. 03:33:435 - mini breaks like this one and also 03:34:035, 03:37:635 and 03:38:235 and so on... I don't like them. Some are okay but please not so many in a row.
15. 03:42:210 - maybe add a spinner here? :3 Otherwise you'd have no spinners in your map at all

Tshemmp wrote:

Hard diff finished: https://www.dropbox.com/s/n11e02x87ftb1 ... ard%5D.zip :DD

[General]

1. Add "Tshemmp" to the tags of all diffs. ok

[Insane]

1. 00:22:185 (5,6,7) - I find the spacing change between them very confusing. fixed
2. 00:31:035 (4,5) - I don't like that th slider starts on a red tick, this feels awkward, maybe swap (4) and (5) in the time line so that (5) starts on a white tick and (4) on a red one? changed. I may feel spacing to be wide, but think that it is smooth and is easy to do it in a play now.
3. 00:53:385 (4) - the rhythm of this one feels strange. You did it better here 01:02:835. fixed.However, the placement will come to need a correction in future because it is not stable.
4. 01:07:935 - how about a stream from here to 01:08:460? i think keep better.sorry
5. 01:08:535 (1) - finish on the start　Add!
6. 01:55:935 - stream here? The sound of the stream is not found. I take the natural sound in the same state.
7. 01:56:535 (1) - finish on start fixed
8. 01:59:685 (4) - stack under (2) maybe? ok
9. 02:33:585 (8,9) - this jump is so huge. Maybe do it like this (unstack (9,10,11)): It is difficult, and the jump is surely big, too. However, by the jump with the regularity, AIM is made sensuously. The people take it as a place hard to please, but will not be hard to do it. I will examine it in future.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   412,44,153585,1,0,0:0:0
   312,96,153735,1,0,0:0:0
   256,192,153885,1,0,0:0:0
   256,316,154035,2,0,P|312:312|356:292,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

10. 02:38:985 (4) - again the rhythm of this slider feels strange. Better do it like here 02:48:435. fixed.However, the placement will come to need a correction in future because it is not stable.
    
11. 03:01:335 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - no. :< I know why you did this but cone on, it is just awkward to play this streams with these mini breaks. Because of the special accentuation I suggest something like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
    
    

    184,48,181335,5,0,0:0:0
    208,60,181410,1,0,0:0:0
    232,72,181485,1,0,0:0:0
    256,84,181560,1,0,0:0:0
    280,96,181635,1,8,0:0:0
    304,108,181710,1,0,0:0:0
    328,120,181785,5,0,0:0:0
    304,132,181860,1,0,0:0:0
    280,144,181935,1,0,0:0:0
    256,156,182010,1,0,0:0:0
    232,168,182085,1,0,0:0:0
    208,180,182160,1,0,0:0:0
    184,192,182235,5,8,0:0:0
    208,204,182310,1,0,0:0:0
    232,216,182385,1,0,0:0:0
    256,228,182460,1,0,0:0:0
    280,240,182535,1,0,0:0:0
    304,252,182610,1,0,0:0:0
    328,264,182685,5,0,0:0:0
    304,276,182760,1,0,0:0:0
    280,288,182835,1,8,0:0:0
    256,300,182910,1,0,0:0:0
    232,312,182985,1,0,0:0:0
    208,324,183060,1,0,0:0:0
    184,336,183135,5,4,0:0:0
    184,336,183285,1,0,0:0:0

    I postpone by IRC so retention.
12. 03:07:185 - add a circle. There are so many mini breaks arond here, it feels a bit empty and also kills the flow. nice
13. 03:10:935 (1,2,3,4) - :O not sure if XATs will allow this. Maybe add a NC on 03:11:535 (3). fixed
14. 03:33:435 - mini breaks like this one and also 03:34:035, 03:37:635 and 03:38:235 and so on... I don't like them. Some are okay but please not so many in a row. fmm Rhythmical tuning to a drum. I understand your opinion, too, but reservation is in a state once.
15. 03:42:210 - maybe add a spinner here? :3 Otherwise you'd have no spinners in your map at all O: good idea. Hard same end spinner and volume and Normal diff Add.

Go rank!

1. offsetが若干速いです。＋10？（modは修正前のoffsetで行います）
2. ガイドラインでは全ての難易度でtick lateを統一することを推奨しています。
   特に強いこだわりがない場合はNormalも2に設定しましょう。
3. Preview pointが01:09:285の方がいいかなと思いました。一度試してみてください。

1. 00:49:335 (1) - ここから01:07:335 (2) - ここまで、曲のスネアが2,4拍目でなく3拍目に入るようになります。
   曲を良く聴いて、曲に合わせたclapを入れるとより良くなります。01:46:935 (1) ～や02:36:135 (1) ～も同様に。
2. 02:20:535 (1,2) - この配置は初心者が困惑すると思います。ここも1.1xで置きましょう。
   配置に大きな問題は無いので、指摘したパートの音付けを再考してみてください

1. 他diffとのバランスを考慮してOD-1
2. 提案を受けてCtrl＋Gを使用した箇所は音付けの再確認をお願いします。
3. 00:38:685 (5,6) - もう少し距離を広く。00:38:835ここにclapの音があるので間違えて叩きやすいです。
4. 00:51:135 (6) - Ctrl＋Gした方が叩きやすいし流れも面白くなると思います。
5. 00:56:835 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - (2,3)と(6,7)が近くて叩きづらく感じたので提案。
   (7)の形はそのままで、(2)の向きと(3,4,5,6)の位置を入れ替えてます。
   この方がジャンプも気持ちよく叩けると思います。
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:58:335 (9,10,11,12) - ここも(12)と次の(1)が近いので全部まとめてCtrl＋Gした配置にした方がベター
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:58:935 (1) - Normalと同じで、Clapの位置を変えたほうが曲にあっています。Normalで指摘した他のパートも変更を提案します。
8. 01:09:435 (3,4) - このスタックが読みづらいので(4)をCtrl＋Jするとカッコいいです。その後の配置も少しずつ修正。（一応画像つけておきます。）
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:11:385 (3) - Ctrl＋Gで叩きやすく
10. 01:27:135 (11) - (15)は長くて見栄えが悪いのでここでNew combo
11. 01:37:410 (1) - ここの青線に音は無いので、ここは青線に置かない音取りの方が曲にあっています。
12. 01:40:335 (3,4) - 曲げている意図があまり伝わって来ませんでした。直線にした方がすっきりすると思います。
13. 02:11:835 (4) - Ctrl＋J、ここはその後の配置はそのままで大丈夫だと思います。
14. 02:21:735 (1) - ここもCtrl＋Gして下向きのスライダーにした方が曲のデデンって感じにあってると思います。もちろんこのままでも構いません。
15. 02:23:835 (4,5,6,7,8) - それぞれCtrl＋Gした方が流れもジャンプも面白いと思います。（全部まとめてCtrl＋Gしないように注意）
16. 02:45:135 (3,4) - スライダーの中点を一つ減らしても問題ないかなと思いました。（(1)が直線なので、2つ減らしてここも直線でもいいかも）
17. 02:51:735 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ここも(1,2)(3,4)(1,2)(3,4)それぞれCtrl＋Gをして00:56:835のように変更
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 02:52:935 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 最後の(5)が中心にドンと置いてあるので、2つの四角形が譜面の中心からずれているのが目立ちました。
    2つ目の02:53:535 (1,2,3,4) - だけでも譜面の中心と図形の中心を揃えるとすっきりして見えます。
19. 03:01:335 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 個人的にカッコいいかなと思う提案です。小さい小さい五角形を正四角形で配置してます。
    現状維持でも問題ありません。
    
    SPOILER

    
20. 03:04:935 (4,5) - 二つまとめてCtrl＋Hで叩きやすく、ジャンプも楽しくなると思います。
21. 03:10:935 (1,2,3,4) - これまでに無いスタックなので多分ミスします。長い曲の終盤で突然のこの配置はちょっとキツいかなと感じました。
    曲調に変化があるわけでもないので別の配置にしてみては？03:11:535 (3,4) -を変えた提案画像もつけておきます。
    
    SPOILER

    
22. 03:12:735 (10,11,12,13) - Ctrl＋Gして上下逆の方が叩きやすいのと、次の(1)へのつながりもいいと思います。

jamxx wrote:

リクエストありがとう

General

1. offsetが若干速いです。＋10？（modは修正前のoffsetで行います） +5でfixed
2. ガイドラインでは全ての難易度でtick lateを統一することを推奨しています。 fixed
   特に強いこだわりがない場合はNormalも2に設定しましょう。
3. Preview pointが01:09:285の方がいいかなと思いました。一度試してみてください。fixed

Normal

1. 00:49:335 (1) - ここから01:07:335 (2) - ここまで、曲のスネアが2,4拍目でなく3拍目に入るようになります。 fixed
   曲を良く聴いて、曲に合わせたclapを入れるとより良くなります。01:46:935 (1) ～や02:36:135 (1) ～も同様に。
2. 02:20:535 (1,2) - この配置は初心者が困惑すると思います。ここも1.1xで置きましょう。 ここ1.1で置くと凄い角に飛ぶので簡易化ということで逆においてます。確かにここだけDSが違いますが、プレイに支障が出るとは思わないです。
   配置に大きな問題は無いので、指摘したパートの音付けを再考してみてください

Insane

1. 他diffとのバランスを考慮してOD-1 Insaneの譜面の設定を強調したいのでこの譜面に合ったOD8で。
2. 提案を受けてCtrl＋Gを使用した箇所は音付けの再確認をお願いします。
3. 00:38:685 (5,6) - もう少し距離を広く。00:38:835ここにclapの音があるので間違えて叩きやすいです。 fixed
4. 00:51:135 (6) - Ctrl＋Gした方が叩きやすいし流れも面白くなると思います。 個人的に今のままの流れが好みなのと(6)から(1)の流れが少ししっくり来なかったので、no changeでいきます。
   
5. 00:56:835 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - (2,3)と(6,7)が近くて叩きづらく感じたので提案。
   (7)の形はそのままで、(2)の向きと(3,4,5,6)の位置を入れ替えてます。
   この方がジャンプも気持ちよく叩けると思います。
   
   SPOILER

   
   　fixed
6. 00:58:335 (9,10,11,12) - ここも(12)と次の(1)が近いので全部まとめてCtrl＋Gした配置にした方がベター
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed
7. 00:58:935 (1) - Normalと同じで、Clapの位置を変えたほうが曲にあっています。Normalで指摘した他のパートも変更を提案します。fixed
8. 01:09:435 (3,4) - このスタックが読みづらいので(4)をCtrl＋Jするとカッコいいです。その後の配置も少しずつ修正。（一応画像つけておきます。）
   
   SPOILER

   
   いろんな人にテスターとしてこの場所等を見ても特にミスや驚くことは無いように感じてました。むしろこのような空きの後のスタック配置は個人的に好きで且つ楽しめる一環なのでここはno changeです。
9. 01:11:385 (3) - Ctrl＋Gで叩きやすく fixed
10. 01:27:135 (11) - (15)は長くて見栄えが悪いのでここでNew combo fixed
11. 01:37:410 (1) - ここの青線に音は無いので、ここは青線に置かない音取りの方が曲にあっています。 fixed
12. 01:40:335 (3,4) - 曲げている意図があまり伝わって来ませんでした。直線にした方がすっきりすると思います。 そういわれると分かる気がしてきましたfixed!
13. 02:11:835 (4) - Ctrl＋J、ここはその後の配置はそのままで大丈夫だと思います。新しい配置感ってのがして面白かったのでfixed.
14. 02:21:735 (1) - ここもCtrl＋Gして下向きのスライダーにした方が曲のデデンって感じにあってると思います。もちろんこのままでも構いません。 ここは下から行かせる流れで行きたいのでno change
15. 02:23:835 (4,5,6,7,8) - それぞれCtrl＋Gした方が流れもジャンプも面白いと思います。（全部まとめてCtrl＋Gしないように注意） fixed
16. 02:45:135 (3,4) - スライダーの中点を一つ減らしても問題ないかなと思いました。（(1)が直線なので、2つ減らしてここも直線でもいいかも）　消しましたfixed
17. 02:51:735 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ここも(1,2)(3,4)(1,2)(3,4)それぞれCtrl＋Gをして00:56:835のように変更　(4)から四角の間隔が大幅になってしまうのと、この状態でもやりにくいとは感じていないのでno change.
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 02:52:935 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 最後の(5)が中心にドンと置いてあるので、2つの四角形が譜面の中心からずれているのが目立ちました。解決！
    2つ目の02:53:535 (1,2,3,4) - だけでも譜面の中心と図形の中心を揃えるとすっきりして見えます。解決！
19. 03:01:335 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 個人的にカッコいいかなと思う提案です。小さい小さい五角形を正四角形で配置してます。今は変更しません。（音取りを変更しようか迷っているため。）しかし、いい案なので画像をPCに保存しました。今後変更の余地があれば変更します。
    現状維持でも問題ありません。
    
    SPOILER

    
20. 03:04:935 (4,5) - 二つまとめてCtrl＋Hで叩きやすく、ジャンプも楽しくなると思います。fixed
21. 03:10:935 (1,2,3,4) - これまでに無いスタックなので多分ミスします。長い曲の終盤で突然のこの配置はちょっとキツいかなと感じました。あー。(1,2),(1,2)でNC区切りました。前者のmodderにも同じこと言われて、NC付け忘れました。NC入れることによって分かりやすいのとこの配置が好きなのでkeepでいきたいと思います。
    曲調に変化があるわけでもないので別の配置にしてみては？03:11:535 (3,4) -を変えた提案画像もつけておきます。
    
    SPOILER

    
22. 03:12:735 (10,11,12,13) - Ctrl＋Gして上下逆の方が叩きやすいのと、次の(1)へのつながりもいいと思います。これはやりずらいと判断した為no change

頑張ってください

rickyboi wrote:

Suggested to change combo color1 to a brighter red from his previous dark red for better reading.

Nice map ! good luck with this! /o/

cirno- wrote:

Normal
Slider Tick 1
It's mapped good. I had my sister test it, she usually plays normal. She found it good, but a bit challenging towards the end. It got a little faster. It's okay though

Your hard diff is pretty challenging for a hard, but your settings are good for it.


Insane
01:06:740 (3,4,5,6) - These jumps are confusing Specifically where 3 is. Maybe move 3 closer to 1? fmm,sure, but,Reservation. I examine it

Overall
Hitsounds sound good to me. Might want to lower the volume during the beginning a bit. From 20-49 seconds make it 60%? oh good suggestion!! fixed!
NC's are good. Combo colors are good. I'm not fond of the magenta, but it seems to play well with it.
Very good maps.
I'm so used to modding new people's maps that it was hard to find much

dosyeru wrote:

hi, 何かの役に立てれば幸いです

Insane
03:11:596 - 初見さんにはつらいスタックだと思います。二回目以降は大丈夫だと思いますが。ここは特に問題ないと感じてるのでno change!NCでカバーしてあるという点でも楽にさせています。

その他All fixedです
とてもやり応えのある譜面でプレイしていてなかなか楽しいです。
ランクト待ってます

hibarirailwayz wrote:

moddingしておきます。
These are my opinion. So you shouldn't follow me.

[Normal]
Slider Tick1のほうが、音がしまると思います。ちっちっちっち、うるさいイメージがあります。 保留!!
00:39:740 (1) - 3grid下、1grid右に移動。前のスライダーからの繋がりがそのほうが綺麗です。尚、修正した場合は、その後のdistance調節もお忘れなく。
01:46:940 (1) - 2grid下。上記と同様の理由です。確かに、カーブを意識したように見えますが、中途半端にずれているように見えました。
02:48:740 (2,2) - 細かいですが、せっかくなんで、位置をぴったり合わせてみては？
その他All fixed!!

[Insane]
こちらも、slider tickは１のほうがいいですね03:28:940あたりからの、スライダーのティックの音が浮いて聞こえます。 hit soundとして重宝してるのでno changeかな！
01:22:640 (12) - (480,112)辺りに移動させると、１０番のスライダーからの流れから綺麗に見えると思います。確かに良いですねfixed !
01:59:240 (2,4) - 個人的には重ねてしまってもいい気がします。こだわりがあるのでしたら、スルーでｗ ずらしてあげるとやりやすくなるのでそうしています！ちなみに１grid downさせておきましたｗ
03:42:215 (1) - 最後のフィニッシュは、全難易度統一したほうがいいかと思います。 fixed!

自分には、当分クリアできそうにない譜面に認定します。 wwww


では、がんばってください～

BeatofIke wrote:

[Hard]
-> Looks like an Insane difficulty to me. Low the AR to 7? nope, not on 200 BPM

BeatofIke wrote:

Hello! Mod request via Forum PM! Here's a quick mod!
[Normal]
02:37:340 (1) - Remove Combo.
03:04:940 (1) - Remove Combo.
03:25:940 (1) - Remove Combo.
03:26:540 (2) - New Combo.
03:28:340 (1) - Remove Combo.
03:28:940 (1) - Add Combo.
03:30:140 (1) - Remove Combo.
03:39:740 (1) - Remove Combo.
03:42:140 (1) - Remove Combo
All fixed!

Very good patern usage and rhythm choice!

EDIT: No kudosu for this mod!

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hello~
Modding via M4M <3

[General]

The bit rate of your mp3 is 230kbps. The minimum for being rankable is 192kbps. changed

The bg is very ugly and not fun to look at. Can you consider something else? not need

In general, I think your normal difficulty is pretty good, but it's more like an Easy. You should rename the normal difficulty to Easy and you should try to make a normal difficulty that is around 4 stars. Right now there is too much of a difficulty jump between your normal diff and the hard diff imo.
I wouldn’t bet on it.　because, I achieve work of Normal enough. HARD diff is a little difficult, but is not serious so as to affect Rank. There is such a sheet of music elsewhere. so keep mapset
[Normal]

01:08:540 (1) - This slider is unrankable because it is completely overlapped with 01:06:140 (1) the previous slider. No

01:16:940 (3) - Just replace this with another 1/1 slider as this is the easiest difficulty. Also maybe avoid the stack on the slider like that. but,Normal no change.
01:49:340 (1) - Why not stack on the head of the 01:46:940 (1)? oh thanks!

01:51:740 (1,1) - Can you avoid this ugly overlap here? slider tick is not recommended. I decline.

Consider adding a slidertick clap for spots like 02:10:640 or 02:23:240 or 02:24:440 etc., so you could keep consistency with the upbeat claps. You can just make a copy of your clap in the song folder and rename it "normal-slidertick" sorry

02:26:240 (2) - I would avoid hiding this under the slider track of 02:24:140 (2). changed

03:04:940 (2) - This slider is starting late if you want to follow the vocals, which you should considering you have throughout the entire map. Add a circle at 03:04:640 to properly follow the vocals. ok fixed
03:23:840 - Again add a circle here to follow vocals. ok fixed

03:24:140 (1) - Finish on slider end.
03:26:540 (1) - ^
03:30:140 (2) - Finish on head
03:39:740 (2) - ^ sure. good sound. all fixed hit sound
Just examples. Listen for finishes in the music and add finishes at those places. It will make the map sound better.

Awesome normal. :3 thx!

[Insane]

I can't really mod this map very well as it's just too hard and awkward to play it.

In general about this map, the slider velocity is far too large for that circle size. It's making the map really uncomfortable to play as it's way overmapped imo.
I think you should increase circle size by 1. Then all of the huge jump patterns and large sliders would feel much better and more intuitive to follow at this high BPM. Maybe consider a smaller SV if you do. No change. It is a diff for seniors. Even if you cannot do it, other people may play happily.

00:58:490 (4) - Move to 296,296. good sugestion changed!

03:11:540 (1,2) - Unrankable sliders, completely overlapped with previous. Where? Such a form is seen in other map a lot.

Anyways, sorry mod not so great. Not exactly my favorite song.
I hope it helps. Good luck. <3

SilverJetter wrote:

Greetings from my queue ^^

Normal

01:34:940 (1) - i dont like the circle at this point maybe there is a slider from 01:34:640 - 01:35:240 better, but its also okay if not ^^ fmm, keeo :p03:23:840 (1) - i think this cirlce destorys the flow bit, but is not too bad bit up note.

Insane

Looks great for an Insane Diff ^^

PS: Sorry if I made mistakes I`m a beginner in modding

1. 01:36:140 (3) - missing add clap in end slider
2. 01:57:740 (3) - ^ same
3. 02:00:740 (3) - ^ same
4. 02:27:740 (1) - ^ same
5. 02:50:840 (2) - missing add clap in repeat slider
6. 03:03:740 (1) - ^ same
7. 03:04:640 (2) - missing add clap
8. 03:37:940 (1) - missing add clap in start slider

1. 01:17:240 (2,3,4) - why didn't same consistency like you did at 02:05:240 (2,3,4)? will be fit because this song is repetive
2. 01:26:540 (1,2,3,4) - again missing consistency with 02:14:540 (1,2,3,4)

1. 01:28:940 (1) - stack with 01:27:440 (4) in start slider if you fix this you need fix spacing at 01:27:740 (1,2) also if you stack try change shape because is ugly this http://puu.sh/1Bznd try nice like this http://puu.sh/1BznC imo
2. 02:15:140 (3,4) - grid 1 left and up will be align with 02:14:540 (1) and if fix this carefully spacing at 02:15:740 (1)

1. 00:30:140 (1) - Should be add Finish in start slider is sense lot because the drums and vocals is so raised
2. 01:18:140 (1) - add finish is sense lot imo because the vocals and drums is raise here
3. 02:06:140 (1) - ^ same
4. 03:13:340 (1) - ^ same

1. 01:10:940 (1,2,3) - this weird blanket http://puu.sh/1BymO try be nice blanket like this http://puu.sh/1Bynk this look good for gameplay if you fix this u need fix spacing at 01:11:840 (4,5)
2. 01:24:140 (5,6,7) - this is same weird blanket like i did explain before 01:10:940 (1,2,3)
3. 01:24:590 (7) -I don't like because is bad flow try CTRL+G to make jump here look funny and really good flow and is fit more for me imo
4. 02:39:440 (6,1) - is not same shape sliders

Pereira006 wrote:

Hello!! here go

imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if without " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission

[Normal]

Hitsound:

1. 01:36:140 (3) - missing add clap in end slider
2. 01:57:740 (3) - ^ same
3. 02:00:740 (3) - ^ same
4. 02:27:740 (1) - ^ same
5. 02:50:840 (2) - missing add clap in repeat slider
6. 03:03:740 (1) - ^ same
7. 03:04:640 (2) - missing add clap
8. 03:37:940 (1) - missing add clap in start slider

all fixed
lot missing hitsound to be consistency

Gameplay:

the flow and gameplay is simple great diff

[Insane]

Hitsound:

1. 00:30:140 (1) - Should be add Finish in start slider is sense lot because the drums and vocals is so raised
2. 01:18:140 (1) - add finish is sense lot imo because the vocals and drums is raise here
3. 02:06:140 (1) - ^ same
4. 03:13:340 (1) - ^ same

all fixed
good

Gameplay:

1. 01:10:940 (1,2,3) - this weird blanket http://puu.sh/1BymO try be nice blanket like this http://puu.sh/1Bynk this look good for gameplay if you fix this u need fix spacing at 01:11:840 (4,5)
2. 01:24:140 (5,6,7) - this is same weird blanket like i did explain before 01:10:940 (1,2,3)
3. 01:24:590 (7) -I don't like because is bad flow try CTRL+G to make jump here look funny and really good flow and is fit more for me imo
4. 02:39:440 (6,1) - is not same shape sliders

the play is funny but i can see here you need more work combo color example 01:07:340 (7) - this need new comb because the vocals and lyrics is change that sense lot, 01:14:540 (6) and many more you should look remap only combo color if you do that will be good sorry, NC is no change, or keep now.

EDIT: talk irc
other all fixed
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the Insane need more work about combo color and flow and another diff's is good, I will back to recheck, maybe orz
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
Good luck ! and bye bye!

Saten wrote:

[General]
You changed mp3 but forget to correct the offset. It should be 20573 (+33ms) All diff fixed

[Insane]
You should avoid placing 1/2 sliders on offbeats, because it kinda messes with the flow. More info about it t/58959
I don't like how you use lower spacing than 1,0x when you have a relative fast Slider Velocity. Low spacing and high AR doesn't go well imo, well low spacing doesn't fit on insane maps imo. thanks
00:31:673 (6,7) - this doesn't really flow well imo. Most patterns like this looks like 1/2 jumps

01:17:873 (12,13,1) - this spacing difference plays kinda weird imo i think fine. I think that a trouble does not go for a play.
02:52:973 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Rotate this 45°. The movements will feel more natural imo sorry, But it was hard to play, and natural aiming was not made. I think that the one that I do not change is easy to be open.
03:42:248 (1) - remove finish it serve no purpose imo
03:44:573 - mute this, because it sounds somewhat better.
other fixed.
[Normal]
Try to upper the star rating to 2,80 or above which will make it become a 3 star diff in map selection, and in the beatmap listing
AR 5 fits better. And it goes well with the difficult rating because you have only 3 difficulties.
Slidertick 2 sounds really noisy imo. If you really wanna keep it, I suggest you use a custom slider-tick from the soft sample-set
00:34:973 (1) - finish on start
03:03:773 (1) - flip this horizontal and move the second slider point more diagonally. I think the placement look better this way

SPOILER

03:42:173 (4,1) - I prefer having 1/2 space. Because you'll be able to see the spinner before you even hit the circle which can be kinda distracting
03:42:323 (1) - remove the finish lol
03:44:573 - change it to 5% instead because you're basically muted it anyway
all fixed

Insane got issues with the low spacing and flow (I liked your other map better)
Hard and Normal are much better when it comes to that

Hope you find this mod helpful~
Goodluck!

HelloSCV wrote:

M4M request!

[spoilerbox]Normal
02:50:873 (2) - delete clap on start and end , add clap on repeat fixed
03:24:173 (1) - delete NC fixed

Insane
00:57:173 (3,5) - how about make like 00:57:323 (4,6) - these? fixed maybe
00:58:073 (2,3,4,5,6) - make perfect pentagon? i can't perfect haha...
02:02:723 (2,4) - you may know this fixed maybe
02:52:523 (2,4) - ^ fixed maybe
03:03:173 (1) - add finish? fmm, keep sorry!
03:11:573 (1) - delete NC and not stack with 03:10:973 (1) - this ah, my favorite place... no change ;x;
03:12:548 (5) - move this note 03:12:398 (3) - here When I made much of unity and heard a sound well, I felt that I did not have any problem in keep!
03:36:998 (12) - add note here and 03:37:223 (14) - here feels better i guess maybe fixed!


exciting song good luck for rank!!