1. Hard (4,67 stars, 174 notes)
2. Normal (4,04 stars, 111 notes)
3. ShiroiYume's Easy (1,75 stars, 70 notes)

kirinoimouto22 wrote:

Gostei da map e da música, boa sorte ^^

zweiii wrote:

[Normal]
00:55:032 Add a note here would be better Huh... I think this would make it become a little harder, since it's Normal, I'll leave it like that. ^^
00:56:820 (1,2) - I think this two note sounds strange Indeed! I changed it to a small slider.
I think add four note on 00:56:407 00:56:545 00:56:820 and 00:57:095 would be better I added it on 00:56:545 only because I think the beatmap, as I said on the previous item, would become a little harder.
01:12:637 Add a note here would be better Same as the first item!

[Hard]
I think its not hard enough Yeah, I changed the setup a little.
You'd better place notes with more distance(use some small jumps) ,not just put them Ok, I'll increase the distance and try to add some notes here and there!
nearly and you'd better put more note and sliders or it may be just look the same as Normal
sometimes the singing isn't singing but you should add some note and sliders to fill the
blank. for example 00:59:571 you can add something here

00:23:535 (3) - you can let this slider go from down to up right to left and put it lower Ah, but I like it this way! I'm going leave it like this. Sorry!
00:35:914 (1,2) - change it to a slider from 00:35:914 to 00:36:189 I'm following the vocal here. It's easier to play too.
00:38:114 (4) - move it to another place Since it's Hard, leaving it here looks good, I think.


I think your hitsound was great
I like this song
I hope I may help you

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi o/

Mod time /o/ (Thanks for modding :3)

A very nice mapset, song, skin, I want to see this ranked <3 Ha, ha! Thank you! ^^

Just suggestions~

[Normal]
00:29:037 (5) - Unstack this, it's a bit hard to read this Yep! It's kinda tricky! Ok, done!
00:44:166 - Maybe a circle here~ Done! I also changed 00:42:791 (4) a little and added a note here 00:43:616
00:50:768 (1,2,3,4) - This is a quite jumpy, consider reducing the spacing or making it 1.0x, matching with all the diff. I reduced it to 1.1x!
01:23:778 (1,3) - Maybe a soft finish here Added it only on 01:24:878 (3)! I think it sounds better
[Hard]
Increase HP Drain and Overall Difficulty by 1, let's make this more hard~ Done!

Let's add some notes that fits with the music~
00:30:962 - Here a circle~ Done!
00:56:545 - ^ I liked this one, done!
00:59:571 - You can make something like this Wow, this one is pretty good too! Done!

01:03:147 - Add a circle Done!
01:03:422 - ^ Done!
01:14:150 - ^ Done!
01:21:577 - ^ Done!
01:22:127 - ^ Done!
01:23:778 (1,2,3) - You can increase the spacing between these notes, maybe 1.5x Done!
01:23:778 (1,3) - Maybe a soft finish here I added it on 01:24:878 (3) only, I think it sounds better!

That's al from my part, good luck /o/

HelloSCV wrote:

M4M request

SPOILER

AIBat
Missing Skin Files Added them all!
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png
spinner-approachcircle.png
spinner-spin.png
Inconsistency in Kiai Times on Hard and Normal Fixed!

ShorpoYume's Easy
00:55:169 (1) - this note after spinner is so close and add NC Fixed the Spinner issue, but I didn't make it a new combo because I added a new note. (Don't worry if I'm the one fixing it, ShiroiYume is my friend ^^)

Normal
00:19:684 (3) - move 1 gird left (1.0x DS) Done!
00:44:166 (1) - add finish Done!
01:10:574 (1) - ^ Done!

Hard
00:30:962 (5) - add normal finish? Done!
00:31:788 (3,5) - ^ Done!
00:44:166 (6) - ^ Done!
01:10:574 (1) - add finish on start Done!

Beautiful song good luck for rank!!

Nemis wrote:

[General]
Hard and Normal are mapped only with linear sliders D: And Normal seems a Hard diff... but the mapset still good. Ha, ha xD! I tried making "Normal" a little bit easier. I left Normal and Hard with linear sliders because they're usually small sliders.

[Hard]
00:30:962 (5,1) - Create a slider here Done!
00:31:788 (3,4) - Create a slider here too Done!
00:37:289 (1,2,3,4,5) - Trust in me, this pattern isn't fun xD Aww, I like it, though. If someone else says the same thing, I'll change ^^
00:41:415 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same^ ^
00:46:917 (1,2) - Change this with a pattern like 00:49:118 (1,2,3) - Done!
00:50:768 (1,2,3,4) - A square or something else should be better Done! (I made a triangle)
01:08:098 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Change this with Aw, I like to leave it without sliders! Sorry

01:15:525 (4,5,6,1) - this square isn't perfect Done!

[Normal]
This is Hard too...
00:25:323 (2) - Remove Done!
00:27:386 (2) - Remove Done!
00:27:524 (3) - Move this beat's position if you remove ^ Done!
00:47:467 (2,3,4,5) - Distance Huh? I left it the way it was ^^'
00:54:619 (1,2) - Create a slider and remove notes Done!
00:58:333 (5) - Remove Done!
01:04:935 (4) - Remove Done!
01:13:737 (4) - Remove Done!
01:19:376 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - Move all 1 square to left in the grid Done!

[Easy]
00:24:360 (2) - 1 square to left Done!
00:41:965 (4,1,2,3) - Too many beat for [Easy] Huh? I don't think so. The speed of the notes are slow.
01:08:373 (4,5,6,7) - Same ^ ^
01:12:774 (1,2,3) - This in the center should be betterDone!

Good luck

• 
  00:26:561 (2) I think it would sound better if you made this a 1 beat slider with a repeat instead.
  00:43:616 (3) Looks a bit odd. You should make it so that this and 1,2,4 make a circle. I think it would look much nicer that way.
  00:48:567 (4) It may sound better if there was a 1 beat slider and then a circle just ahead.
  01:21:027 (1) This slider seems exaggerated. You should probably cut it down to a beat long.

• 
  00:29:037 (5) This looks weird when stacked over 1.
  00:57:095 You could add a circle here.
  01:11:949 (1) If you shorten this to a 1/4 beat slider, make it start at the white tick just ahead, and add a circle to where 1 usually began, it would sound nice.
  01:25:428 (1) Start this spinner at the next white tick and add a circle right here. It would make more sense.

• 
  00:51:593 (4) An odd suggestion, but I think it might look better if you placed 4 down from 3 with the same distance spacing.
  01:25:428 (1) See Normal.

SpinsAlot wrote:

[Normal:]

• 
  00:29:037 (5) This looks weird when stacked over 1. Yeah, I was thinking that for a while. Done!
  00:57:095 You could add a circle here.Yes, it was my original idea, but I didn't know wheter to put it or not... Since you said it, I added it ^^
  01:11:949 (1) If you shorten this to a 1/4 beat slider, make it start at the white tick just ahead, and add a circle to where 1 usually began, it would sound nice. Woah, indeed! I would never think of doing this ^^ Done!
  01:25:428 (1) Start this spinner at the next white tick and add a circle right here. It would make more sense. Yes, it would. But somehow I think that this 4th note here looks weird... And I don't want this spinners to be so short.

[Hard:]

• 
  00:51:593 (4) An odd suggestion, but I think it might look better if you placed 4 down from 3 with the same distance spacing. Hmm, I like having this "triangle", I'll leave it like that ^^
  01:25:428 (1) See Normal. Same as Normal

Sorry for the small mod. Good luck with mapping. It was useful, thank you!

CrestRising wrote:

[ShiroiYume's Easy:]

• 
  00:26:561 (2) I think it would sound better if you made this a 1 beat slider with a repeat instead. Done!
  00:43:616 (3) Looks a bit odd. You should make it so that this and 1,2,4 make a circle. I think it would look much nicer that way. Done!
  00:48:567 (4) It may sound better if there was a 1 beat slider and then a circle just ahead. Done!
  01:21:027 (1) This slider seems exaggerated. You should probably cut it down to a beat long. Done!

TheVileOne wrote:

Mod

Easy
Really nothing to say, nothing wrong with it, but slight spacing errors. Since they aren't "big changes", I'll fix them myself ^^

00:54:619 (1) - New combo here. (It's a bug) Done!
00:55:169 (2,3) - I would try to fix this small spacing difference. Done!

Normal

00:47:467 (2,3,4,5) - Looks like it could be better. The shape doesn't look that solid to me. Like it tries to do one thing and ends up doing another. If you want to do a curve, here's a curve. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/543735 Well, I think I know understand what the other mod wanted to say about this part. I think these notes were too close. Since you said about it too, I changed it to something else.
00:57:920 (2,3) - Spacing bothers me (too close). Done!
01:00:946 (1,2) - Exactly 1.0 (Currently 0.97) Done!
01:02:321 (5,6) - ^ Done!
01:04:247 (2,3) - ^ Done!
01:05:072 (4,1) - ^ Done!
01:05:072 (4,1) - Might flow better if 4 was the slider instead. Done!
01:16:625 (2,3,1) - Spacing. Done!

Hard

00:55:450 Unsnapped green line Done!
01:08:373 (3,4) - 1.3 is more comfortable to me. Done!
01:09:473 (2,3,4) - If you took that, then this should be 1.3 as well. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/543749 I tested it a few times and it seems to fit. Done!


Conclusion

I would bubble it. Good job. Yay! Thank you! Feeling confident now

384,128,37289,1,0,0:0:0
438,182,37564,5,0,0:0:0
383,236,37839,1,0,0:0:0
324,188,38114,1,0,0:0:0
384,236,38389,2,0,P|378:304|318:358,1,140
329,352,39215,1,4,0:0:0

TheVileOne wrote:

I would bubble it. Good job.

azu-nyan14 wrote:

Mapper Brasileiro *-------------* (ou Brasileira? não conheço muitos players Brazucas por aquí ainda ><) Ha, ha! Sou Brasileira ^^

Vou dar uma checada na sua map, se quiser uma re-check sinta-se livre em pedir. Yay! Muito obrigada


[General]

Abrindo song setup, coloque isso (Não acho muito necessário, mas seria bom fixar...): É, eu estava pensando em colocar o nome em japonês, mas fiquei meio incerta. Mas já coloquei.
Artist: 黒崎 真音
Romanized Artist: Kurosaki Maon
Title: 光 -I promise you- (TV Size)
Romanized Title: Hikari ~I Promise You~ (TV Size)

Desative letterbox during breaks Feito!

Para todas as diffs: Que tal adicionar uma nota com finish em 00:17:579? Parece meio vazio sem alguma coisa aquí. Entendo o que quis dizer, já que tem até o som do baixo pra seguir. Mas antes de entrar no Kiai Time, estou seguindo mais o vocal porque a música começa bem calminha e, se colocar uma nota com Finish aqui, vai ficar muito forte para esse começo da música.

[Easy]

00:39:215 (1): Lado esquerdo da tela, Sampleset: Normal e Additions: Auto? E também, acho que o NC (New Combo) deveria começar em 00:39:795. Arrumei o NC, mas deixei o Sampleset como está porque estou seguindo o Hitsound das outras dificuldades aqui.

O Easy ficou bem legal Shiroi vai ficar feliz em saber disso

[Normal]

00:19:959 - Adicione uma nota aquí? Sinto meio que um vazio depois da nota anterior (00:19:684). Aqui estou seguindo mais o vocal, como eu disse antes.
00:22:160 - ^ ^
00:27:396 (4,5): Esse rítimo ficaria bem melhor imo: http://puu.sh/1G3HZ Ficou bom mesmo! Feito!
00:30:962 - Mesma coisa que 00:19:959. Vocal
00:32:613 (3,1): Que tal deletar o 3 e mover o spinner no lugar dele? Eu acho que esse spinner já é longo o bastante, se deletar o 3 ele vai ficar mais comprido ainda ! Vou deixar assim =)
00:39:795 - Mesma coisa do 00:19:959. Feito!
00:46:367 - Que tal tentar isso? http://puu.sh/1G3UC Hmm, estou seguindo o vocal aqui. É só depois que começa o Kiai Time que começo a preencher mais os espaços, se não o beatmap fica cansativo por ficar sem nenhuma pausa (tipo, ter que ficar jogando direto)

Normal ficou bem legal também, só achei que algumas partes ficaram meio vazias...fora isso a diff tá ok.

[Hard]

00:37:289 (1,2,3,4,5): Que tal arrumar as notas assim: http://puu.sh/1G4bc (Ou do jeito que voce achar melhor) Acho que já é a 3 pessoa falando dessa parte. Então OK, mudei aqui para uma espécie de triângulo

Se quiser um código...está bem aquí

384,128,37289,1,0,0:0:0
438,182,37564,5,0,0:0:0
383,236,37839,1,0,0:0:0
324,188,38114,1,0,0:0:0
384,236,38389,2,0,P|378:304|318:358,1,140
329,352,39215,1,4,0:0:0

00:51:868 (1): Tive uma boa idéia para esse spinner, que tal terminar ele em 00:52:969 e adicionar duas notas em 00:53:281 e em 00:53:794 É, soou muito bem, mas no Gameplay o Spinner ficou muito curto e isso meio que desorienta xD Então deixei como está.

TheVileOne wrote:

I would bubble it. Good job.

Digo o mesmo, parabéns por ter feito uma ótima map. Yay! Obrigada de novo!

Boa sorte com o Ranking e ganbatte!

1. ...Wow. The file size of the BG is... 1.2 MB? This is really space-wasting, you know... Use this instead; it's .jpg, and the size has been reduced by almost ten times.

1. 00:36:464 - Use Normal sampleset here?
2. 00:37:564 - ^
3. 00:38:114 (3) - ^
4. 00:40:315 (1) - ^
5. 00:51:043 (2) - ^
6. 00:51:593 (4) - ^ (If you apply these suggestions, do them on Hard too.)
7. 01:11:124 (3,4) - Nah, I don't really like to see objects touching each other like this. I've played with 01:11:399 (4,5,1)'s position to avoid this. See here.
   

   8,212,71399,2,0,P|0:248|8:280,1,70,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
   68,312,71949,1,0,0:0:0
   116,260,72224,6,0,P|164:268,1,35,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0

1. 01:00:533 (2) - Use Normal sampleset?
2. 01:11:674 - ^
3. 01:16:075 (6) - ^
4. 01:17:176 - Use whistle from the Soft sampleset?

Harez wrote:

[General]
If you have scorebar skin, you should have scorebar-bg & scorebar-colour too. Ok! I'll get those later!
remove (TV size) from Title, (TV size) must be only in Romanised title Ok, Done!
D: TV size w/o Video? Yep, the video wasn't a good one. It just showed the main characters (because it's like an OVA ending). And it wouldn't match the skin, sorry!

[Easy]
HP-1 Wow, seems a little too Easy, but Ok. Done
00:41:965 (3) - remove NC Done!
00:44:166 (4) - NC here Done!
00:48:567 (4) - NC Done!
00:59:571 (3) - NC here This one looks weird, in my opinion. I'll leave it that way.
01:00:121 (1) - remove NC ^

[Normal]
OD+1 Done!
00:20:509 (1) - how about this Weird Slider format, in my opinion. I'll just leave it like that.

SPOILER

00:32:338 (2,3,4,1) - how about this Oh, here I'm following the Vocal

SPOILER

00:55:169 (2) - NC Done!
00:59:020 (1) - remove NC Done!
00:59:571 (2) - NC here Done!
01:00:946 (1) - remove NC Done!
01:01:771 (3) - NC here Done!
01:05:622 (1) - remove NC Done!
01:06:172 (3) - NC here Changed NC of place, but in a different place
01:07:548 (1,2,3,1) - how about this I tried, but the spacing didn't look good, though. I changed 01:07:823 (2) of place instead.

SPOILER

01:12:224 (1) - remove NC Done!
01:12:774 (2) - NC here Done!
01:14:425 (1) - remove NC Following the Vocal.
01:14:975 (2) - NC here ^
01:15:800 (1) - remove NC ^
01:17:176 (3) - NC here This one looks weird here o.o
01:17:451 (1) - remove NC Done!
01:18:551 (1) - remove NC Done!
01:19:376 (3) - NC here Done!
01:21:577 (4) - NC here Done!

[Hard]
AR OD +1
00:32:338 (3,1) - how about this Following the Vocal here

SPOILER

00:55:169 (3) - NC Done!
00:56:820 (1) - remove NC Done!
00:57:370 (3) - NC here Done!
00:58:333 (1) - remove NC Done!
00:59:571 (5) - NC here Done!
01:00:396 (1) - remove NC Done!
01:01:771 (5) - NC here Done!
01:03:147 (1) - remove NC Done!
01:03:972 (4) - NC here Maybe not here, but on the previous note? 01:03:697 (1)
01:05:347 (1) - remove NC Done!
01:05:897 (3) - NC here Done!
01:07:548 (1) - remove NC Done!
01:08:373 (3) - NC here Maybe on 01:08:786 (8) instead?
01:09:198 (1) - remove NC Following the Vocal
01:09:473 (2) - NC here ^
01:12:224 (1) - remove NC Done!
01:12:774 (3) - NC here Done!
01:14:425 (1) - remove NC Done!
01:14:975 (3) - NC here Done!
01:16:350 (1) - remove NC Done!
01:17:451 (4) - NC here Done!
01:18:001 (1) - remove NC Done!

sorry for Nazi mod
Good Luck (: Thank you for modding!

Xinely wrote:

Hi :3 for m4m in your queque

[Easy]
00:39:215 (5) - remove finish Here I'm following the Hitsound of the other difficulties.
00:24:911 (3,4) - many circle in easy is hard for newbie imo.. change to slider Done!
00:28:762 (4) - this slider should be end in 00:29:037 - if follow the vocal If I did so, it would be weird to have this 1/2 beat slider alone here, since Shiroi was using mostly whole beat or 2 beat sliders. She Added the Reverse Arrow to fill out the space and follow the hitsound pattern.
00:29:587 - can add note in here I think this one applies if I changed the previous item. So the same ^
00:42:516 (1,2) - same as 00:24:911 but x: 284 y: 168 Done!
00:41:965 (3) - NC Done!
00:42:516 (1) - remove NC Done!
00:44:166 (4) - NC Done!
00:48:567 (4) - NC Done!
00:53:519 - volume 5% Done!
00:54:619 - if follow above, volume 40 Done!
00:55:169 - 80% so loud and make surprised >,< . 70% more better Done!
00:56:270 - kiai time is epic time. make volume 60 or 65% Done!
01:10:574 (1) - spin maybe end in 01:11:674 - , give a little break before enter to note again This spinner comes and goes so fast! But ok, done!
01:27:629 - volume 10% Done!
01:28:179 - volume 5% Done!

[Normal]
00:25:186 (1,2) - remove Huh... I think this would sound weird without them...
00:29:312 (5) - remove Done! This one I agree
00:51:593 (4) - remove and make spin start from here end in 00:53:794 - Done!
01:00:396 - make 4/4 slider and remove circle in 01:00:946 - Done!
01:03:147 (8,9) - plz remove, give a break for who playing Done!
01:10:574 (1,2,3) - when vocal is high, use circle is weird imo. change them become slider please I'm actually following the guitar on the background.

[Hard]
00:24:085 (4,5) - how about 00:24:085 - circle. 00:24:360 - 4/4 slider (without reverse ofc) Nice! Done!
00:29:312 - remove slider. empty part more better imo and 00:29:587 - give circle in here Done!
00:51:593 (4) - same as normal Done!
Nice diff Yay! Thank you! \o/

Good Luck ~ Thanks for Modding!

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there. Going for M4M.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General

1. ...Wow. The file size of the BG is... 1.2 MB? This is really space-wasting, you know... Use this instead; it's .jpg, and the size has been reduced by almost ten times. Ok, that's right, noticed only now. The file size was indeed large, but the one you passed me had lost it's quality and is kind of pixelated, in my opinion. I reduced the file size and tried to keep the quality, though.

>Normal

1. 00:36:464 - Use Normal sampleset here?
2. 00:37:564 - ^
3. 00:38:114 (3) - ^
4. 00:40:315 (1) - ^
5. 00:51:043 (2) - ^
6. 00:51:593 (4) - ^ (If you apply these suggestions, do them on Hard too.) I know what you meant here, but I'm just going to leave it like that.
7. 01:11:124 (3,4) - Nah, I don't really like to see objects touching each other like this. I've played with 01:11:399 (4,5,1)'s position to avoid this. See here. Ok! But I moved 01:11:153 (3) instead.
   

   8,212,71399,2,0,P|0:248|8:280,1,70,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
   68,312,71949,1,0,0:0:0
   116,260,72224,6,0,P|164:268,1,35,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0

>Hard

1. 01:00:533 (2) - Use Normal sampleset? Done!
2. 01:11:674 - ^ Done!
3. 01:16:075 (6) - ^ Looks weird here
4. 01:17:176 - Use whistle from the Soft sampleset? Done!

Well dang it, could only get some stuff about hitsound and one pattern thingy. Easy was fine, btw... in my eyes, at least.

Good luck on the way Thank you!~

CDFA wrote:

The swag has been turned on.

Timing:

Not sure why nobody's mentioned this yet. BPM is straight 109.
Offset: 144 Fixed BPM, but kept the Offset. I don't think it needs to come from the very beginning of the song.

Overall:
00:35:373 - 00:44:180 - Put whistles on the white ticks that don't already have hitsounds on them. Right now, it sounds a bit empty. Whistles on every white tick should help out. Ok, I put it, but not on every white tick.
00:51:887 (1) - End this with a normal hitsound Done!
01:25:465 (1) - Add whistle, or make this fade out to 5% volume Done!

Hurd:
01:00:556 (2) - Add normal hitsound Done!
01:03:997 (4) - Add whistle on beginning of slider Done!
01:08:813 (4) - Add whistle? Ok, Done!
01:09:914 (3) - ^ Done!
01:18:171 (2) - Add normal hitsound Done!

Normal:
00:54:619 (1) - Add normal hitsound on beginning of slider Done!
01:11:399 (4) - Awkward overlap Fixed!
01:21:577 (4) - Add finish on beginning of slider Done!

Easy:
00:54:619 (1) - Add normal hitsound here Done!
01:10:574 (1) - Add normal hitsound Oh, I changed the spinner extension, so I can't put normal here.

yay

jonathanlfj wrote:

modding as requested~ Yay, thank you!~
very nice song

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
Close letter box in breaks on Hard diff, also missing unicode metadata on Hard as well (song name and artist unicode)
Nice skin! Thank you!

[ShiroiYume's Easy]
00:26:011 (1) - put NC on 00:26:561 (2) instead Done!
00:54:619 (1) - forgot the normal sample set "clap" here? I can hear it in the music Lol, yes. And Done!
01:08:923 (2) - if you can overlap this perfectly with 01:05:622 (2) that will be great Done!
01:10:574 (1) - add normal sample set "clap", but this one maybe ur trying to get rid of the loud spinner sound on normal sample set, so its up to u Yes, that's exactly what I wanted

[Normal]
OD+1 to better differentiate with the Easy, if u wish Done!
00:29:312 (5,1) - move 1 grid left to perfectly center them (and make a straight line with tail of 00:28:487 (4)) Done, I think. I don't know if I did it right.
00:54:619 (1) - add normal sample set to slider head (like 01:12:224 (1)) Done!
01:11:124 (3,4) - the overlap doesn't look very good, try this I removed the overlap, but in a different way.

SPOILER

[Hard]
same slider velocity as Normal? I would say its a bit slow for Hard...1.6x would be just right for me, again up to you I think I'll leave it like that for now.
00:29:724 - add note Done!
00:30:962 (5) - NC here instead of 00:31:512 (1) Done!
00:51:868 (1) - this is a hard diff, using some circles and sliders instead of spinner to build up for kiai seems like a better option imo; here is a sample rhythm: I liked this! Done!

SPOILER

01:11:674 (4) - add normal sample set to slider head Done!
01:22:127 (7) - NC here instead of 01:22:402 (1) Done!

Very nice mapset, good luck on ranking ^_^ Thank you very much for modding!~