'ello~
I INVADE YOUR MAPS DEGESO :V
Key: Bold - for all diffs and/or important stuff.
[General]
Great! ♥
I INVADE YOUR MAPS DEGESO :V
Key: Bold - for all diffs and/or important stuff.
[General]
- Puzzle in the tags? got this idea while reading the post above
- 00:10:689 (1,2) - sounds kinda confusing because it's off vocals. you should try adding reverseto (1) and putting circle at 00:12:489 - thi way
- 00:14:289 (5) - plays awkward because vocals starts at 00:13:989 - and since your BPM is quite low you are able to do some 1/2s - and that's why rhythm goes like this
- 00:29:889 (1,2) - vocals here are too strong! You can't ignore them and that's why I suggest you to use reversed 1/2 slider instead of 00:29:889 (1,2)
- 00:41:889 (3,4,1) - nazi - I have some cute sliders for you. You should try them! >.</code/img
316,288,41889,2,0,B|320:360|408:400|476:368|492:312,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
408,276,43689,1,8,0:0:0
380,183,44289,6,0,B|407:117|346:43|271:41|228:80,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
288,156,46089,2,0,B|236:200,1,60,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 00:46:989 (3,4,5) - didn't like this pattern at all. Because start of "arigatou~" (and start of kiai is end of (50 and it plays awkward, imo.
two ways to fix it
1)Try using spinner instead of 00:46:989 (3,4,5) < bad idea, but may work
2)You shoul try following vocals - because vocals are stongest at this part of song. guess what? example.jpg - 01:05:289 (4) - erm.. did you forget new combo? this combo-chain is too long and may confuse beginners
- 01:08:289 (1,2,1) - you may copypasta some circles from my previous suggestion. (00:41:889 )
- 01:15:789 - You should think about beginners. What they will do if there's no any notes and break doesn't starts? Alt+F4, I think. So.. yeah - empty screen without break or obkects is evil for [Easy]. fix it somehow, please.
- 01:27:489 (1) - unfitting whistle - just reduce volume to 5% and remove whistle - i think this is best solution here. - same for all diffs?
- Your approach rate isn't balanced. It's too fast on Easy and too slow on Normal. Highly suggested AR+1 here to keep balance between diffs and to keep balance between AR/Slider Velocity
- 00:04:389 (3) - you do realize that this slider is kinda awkward because this red point dollows nothing and gives awkward flow. I don't like it and it may confuse players :<
- 00:08:889 (4) - it feels like pattern-break-pattern. Try new combo here to follow music?
- 00:57:489 (7) - whoa?! this reverse appears so suddenly. It's off your regular pattern and players probably won't notice 2nd reverse. :<
- 01:06:489 (5) - how about changing your pattern? a bit.. this way (convering two 1/2 sliders with reverses into one 1/1 with reverse and single beat at 01:07:989 - to follow vocals. Why this pattern? It fits with vocals and also follows background music. So we're following vocals and BGM at the same time :3/
- 01:10:689 (3) - new combo for different line of vocals? It fits here, i think
Didn't like long combo chains - but since it fits with your pattern - I don't mind it.
- 00:26:289 (3,4,5,6) - how about good old triangle jumps? I think it will fit here quite good.
- 00:29:139 (6) - doesn't fits good because there's no beat or it's too hard to hear it. Anyway - if you remove this beat - you'll get more playable triplet.
- 00:58:539 - same as above. I'd call it overmap :< Of course it doesn't looks bad - but following rhythm is much more important than good-looking pattern.
- 01:08:889 (2,3,4) - If you reduce spacing here instead of 01:07:089 (1,2,3) - it will follow music much better.
Great! ♥