Jebok wrote:

Hi there, mod as requested...

[Pie's Easy]
02:04:790 (4) - Make y same as (2) so y:164

[Revy's Normal]
00:39:009 (2) - Clap here and then do claps every 4 white bars so the next one will be at 00:40:884, then at 00:42:759, 00:44:634 and so on...
01:10:649 (5,6,7) - Distance Snap x1.00
01:13:931 (6,7,8) - ^
01:18:384 (5,6,7) - ^
Check AiMod for spacing fixes. If you e.g. have x1.50 whole combo thats' OK but not thing like x1.68, x2.11 and the x1.83 or something. And there is a point alike that soon after 01:18:384.

[Hard]
02:27:524 (2,3) - Do two same shapes and then (4) different.

[Insane]
00:30:571 (4) - Clap instead of whistle
00:31:509 (3) - ^
00:32:446 (1) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:33:384 (3) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:34:087 (1,2,3) - ^ at the end of them sliders.
00:35:962 (1,2,3) - ^ at the end of them sliders.
00:38:071 (1) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:39:009 (3) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:39:946 (1) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:40:649 (3) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:45:103 (1) - Clap instead of whistle
00:46:040 (1) - ^ at the beginning of this slider.
00:46:978 (1) - ^ at the beginning of this slider.
00:47:915 (7) - New combo + ^ at the beginning of this slider.
00:48:853 (1) - ^ at the beginning of this slider.
00:49:790 (3) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:50:728 (1) - ^ beginning.
00:51:665 (3) - ^ end.
00:53:071 (3) - Clap
00:54:946 (3) - Clap
02:01:978 (3) - y:80 like (1)
02:02:446 (4) - y:264 like (2)
02:05:728 (3) - y:104 like (1)
02:06:196 (4) - y:264 like (2)
02:09:009 (2) - When selection reversed, y should be the same as for (1).

• • Apri tutti i file .osu e cambia... (6 colori per le combo sono troppi imo, usa questi 3 che si abbinano meglio con lo sfondo)
  

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 142,169,133
  Combo2 : 255,218,91
  Combo3 : 159,97,173
  SliderBorder : 255,255,255

  • 01:07:603/01:22:603 (kiai) - Rimuovi questa sezione Kiai (o al limite falla partire a 01:22:603 e falla finire a 01:37:485. Se fai così, aggiungi un'altra sezione Kiai che inizia a 02:22:603 e che finisce a 02:30:103)

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Slider Tick Rate: 1

• • Approach Rate: 5
  • Overall Difficulty: 4
  • Slider Tick Rate: 1
  • Why didn't you start mapping at 00:30:103 like the other did? You should start mapping there.
  • 02:33:853 (1) - Start this spinner at 02:33:384

• • HP Drain Rate: 6
  • Overall Difficulty: 6
  • 01:22:603 (4,5) - Rendi lo spacing costante, qua è leggermente diminuito rispetto a quello dei cerchi precedenti.

• • HP Drain Rate: 8

Jordan wrote:

Non ti vergogni a mappare roba plagiata?



>:|

1. 00:46:978 (4) - NC?
2. 01:33:384 (6) - NC here and remove the NC on next note
3. 02:21:431 - i feel like you should add a note here, or at least make 4 a slider and extend it to this point
4. 02:22:134 - add note?

1. 01:45:103 (2) - idk if this slider should be so curvy, when all other sliders around it are straight or less curvy

1. 01:10:649 (1,2,3) - putting finishes in each of these notes doesn't sound fitting , er..in my opinion xD
2. 01:37:603 (1,2,3) - move these out a little to the left to continue the stream? might flow better:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:48:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pattern here seems plain compared to the other combos, try making some cool shape pattern with them? o.o
4. 02:01:040 (1) - whistle needs to be at the beginning

sry thats all i found for now xd, good luck

1. What's your distance spacing used for Insane? Hard? Normal? I see none. All you have are symmetrical objects, and this isn't very attractive, nor can I mod them.
2. Because of the bpm, each beat is not an integer number of ms, and when you use long loops, events get more and more mistimed, as seen in this picture:
   
   Consider breaking down your loops into 2, or even 4 smaller loops to achieve the best pulsing effect.

1. 00:41:823 (1,3) - These look flat.
2. 00:55:886 (5) - Anchor at 00:56:355 - for maximum effect.
3. 01:22:605 (2) - What's with the slider nodes, they don't look too great.
   

those wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:41:823 (1,3) - These look flat. <--- and? f there were simply direct sliders it it would look even more flat :3 I do not think what need to change it
2. 00:55:886 (5) - Anchor at 00:56:355 - for maximum effect. <--- nope, but i correct this place
3. 01:22:605 (2) - What's with the slider nodes, they don't look too great. <--- oops, fixed
   

those wrote:

[General]

1. What's your distance spacing used for Insane? Hard? Normal? I see none. All you have are symmetrical objects, and this isn't very attractive, nor can I mod them.
2. Because of the bpm, each beat is not an integer number of ms, and when you use long loops, events get more and more mistimed, as seen in this picture:
   Fixed
   Consider breaking down your loops into 2, or even 4 smaller loops to achieve the best pulsing effect.

1. Hitsounds would probably sound better if they followed the song like Pie's Easy. For example clap following the clap in the music 01:23:542 (1) - clapping end instead of start etc.
2. Agree with those, spacing changes due to the style are not really great, just compare things like 01:14:401 (6,7,8) - with 01:19:792 (1,2,3) - with 01:21:901 (6,7,8) - where's the consistency? They are all 1/2 sliders and this is supposed to be a Normal.

1. Why no clap at the end in places like 00:30:573 (4) - and 00:31:511 (3) - and 00:32:214 (1) - etc whistle spam doesn't sound great.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Avicii - Levels.jpg",320,240
 L,67605,4
  F,1,0,3750,0.5,0
  S,1,0,3750,1,1.02
 L,82605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,90105,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,97605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,105105,17
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,127605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,135105,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,142605,17
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02

BounceBabe wrote:

Note: I map and mod for quality, not quantity. Keep this in mind!

Mod4Mod Mod:

General

Use this for the SB:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Avicii - Levels.jpg",320,240
 L,67605,4
  F,1,0,3750,0.5,0
  S,1,0,3750,1,1.02
 L,82605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,90105,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,97605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,105105,17
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,127605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,135105,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,142605,17
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02

Fixed
Easy

02:33:386 (1) - New combo needed?


Normal

Distance spacing has 0,6, thats why there is a whole list of distance mistakes in the AiMod... try to fix this

01:07:605 - Spacing changes
01:41:355 (5) - Here should start a new combo Fixed
01:44:636 (5) - ^ Fixed
01:48:386 (2) - ^ Fixed
02:22:136 (1) - Remove combo Fixed


Hard


Its a Hard not Insane, it acts like an Insane diff... imo its too hard

00:32:214 (1) - You wanted this combo row like this? Changed

00:47:448 (1,2,3,4) - Use symmetry for this pattern, it looks better and plays better (as in square) Not changed
00:52:605 (1) - Flip this one to the other side (Ctrl + H) 00:54:480 (2) - and this one too Fixed
01:14:401 (1,2,3) - Look at the distance
01:29:401 (1) - You wanted this combo row like this? Changed
01:39:245 (2,3,4,5,6) - Better to not use this in a Hard difficutlie, fits better in Insane's Not changed
01:42:292 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Not changed
01:49:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ Not changed
02:07:605 - Now the slider speed is up to 1,5 which is a sudden change and can confuse player, i would suggest to keep a constant speed. You're right, but the change is not so big.. From 1,3x to 1.5x
02:16:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What about this pattern? Not changed

02:25:651 (1,2,3) - Too close to the preview slider Not changed
02:30:105 - The distance changes suddenly, too sudden
02:37:605 - Mapp the part till here, it looks so interrupted, like the Easy and Normal difficultie I want to end mapping here °3°


Insane

2,7 Slider Velocity o.O for such a slow and grooving song I think its okay °3°

01:08:542 (1) - Remove combo Fixed
01:18:855 (2) - Please dont overlapp it :s Why? °^°
01:31:980 (3,4) - Move them a bit more down Fixed
01:37:019 (4) - From now on there are no sounds for this stream, dont mapp sounds which dont exist There are only 3 circle that in the song doesn't exist sounds, and it's not an error to make parts that doesn't exist o.o
02:00:339 (2) - One Grid left (Nazi) Fixed
02:03:855 (4,5,6) - Make symmetry with ^ Fixed
02:06:198 (4,5) - Change this to one slider ending here 02:06:433 - like you did before, because 02:06:667 - here is no sound Not fixed
02:09:011 - Maybe make a warning for the sudden slider speed change? Not fixed
02:20:730 (5,6,7,8,1) - Delete these and place a spinner? Would fit a lot better since you have a stream which follows Not fixed
02:31:042 (1,2,3) - This pattern is abit hard to play, maybe find another solution? It's insane diff °^°
02:37:605 - And again, mapp till here and start the spinner at the end I want to end mapping here °3°

Overall *thumps up* i've seen badder

Contact me ingame or write me a PM and we will make out which map you mod

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

thank you mod❤
Nice Map~❤Star

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256,308,41823,6,0,B|184:340|128:308|84:264|88:200,1,240,8|8

152,92,43698,2,0,B|224:60|280:92|324:136|320:200,1,240,8|8

Gabe wrote:

Do, not, make, this, map, graveyard.

Anyways, In Insane 02:37:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) -
I saw in the Wiki that you can't have more than 21 combos. (Something around this) Also, it's prefered to delete it since it's pretty repetitive and the combo is unrankable. The other difficulties ends at 02:37:605 without anything after this spinner. So make it consistent.

Do not kudo this.

Laurier wrote:

Easy
01:29:636 (1,2,3,4) - like this? http://puu.sh/1524N <--- Not think
02:15:573 (3) - make blanket http://puu.sh/15265 <--- fixed

64,128,84468,2,0,B|132:92,1,63.7500024318696,0|0
172,64,84936,2,0,B|248:76,1,63.7500024318696,8|0
192,192,85639,2,0,B|272:192,1,63.7500024318696,0|8

184,88,99468,2,0,B|260:88,2,63.7500024318696,0|0|8
216,176,100171,2,0,B|304:176,1,63.7500024318696,0|0
248,264,100874,1,8

Buona fortuna!

1. Perchè flo rida come tag? Dovrebbe essere Florida o è proprio così? O:

1. Why 1.00x spacing for an easy diff? :\
2. 00:30:093 (1) - Add finish to emphasize the cymbals in the song
3. 00:41:811 (1,3) - Personally I think that sliders like this break the flow of your map. What about to make this pattern like this? I think it's more flowing and enjoyable to play:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   224,303,41811,6,0,B|154:329|76:281|63:211|97:150,1,240,8|8
   208,184,43218,1,0
   184,68,43686,2,0,B|253:42|331:89|344:159|310:220,1,240,8|8

4. 00:57:280 (2) - CTRL + R flows much better IMO http://puu.sh/1bToN
5. 01:27:280 (3) - ^
6. 02:15:093 (2,3) - This pattern looks odd to me. Listening the music I think this one would fit the song much better: http://puu.sh/1bTti

1. Attualmente la tua mappa è unrankabile. Affinchè una mappa sia rankabile devi mappare almeno l'80% della song. Detto questo devi iniziare a mappare da dove ha iniziato katty
2. Perchè hai mappato l'intera mappa in 0.75x e solo la fine in 1.00x? Nope.. Riduci il DistanceSpacing dal .osu se pensi che lo spacing sia troppo grande con 1.00x per l'intera mappa
3. 00:48:139 (4) - Questo slider confonde parecchio visto che stai usando un timing con 0.50x. Siccome dovrebbe esserci un clap sulla tick bianca rimuovi questo slider e aggiungi solamente un circle con clap su 00:48:374 per mantenere il ritmo 1/1
4. 01:13:218 (3,4,5) - Non mi piace come hai posizionato questi circle :\ Fai qualcosa così che secondo me flowwa molto meglio:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   316,204,73218,2,0,B|252:184|184:204,1,127.500004863739,0|8
   136,236,73921,1,0
   184,92,74389,2,0,B|184:24,1,63.749998100102,0|8

5. 01:14:389 (5,6,7) - Usa lo stesso spacing che hai usato per 01:10:639 (5,6,7)
6. 01:26:343 (1) - Siccome è una normal invece di usare sempre il solito 1/1 ritmo nel ritornello usa uno slider 1/2 con un repeat invece, che segue la musica molto meglio:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   428,260,86343,6,0,B|464:324,2,63.7500024318696,0|0|8
   448,128,87280,2,0,B|384:128|352:96|320:64,1,127.499996200204,0|8

7. 01:28:686 (4,5,1) - Non mi piace come hai posizionato questi 3 circle ed inoltre con questo spacing sono davvero brutti da vedere. Per seguire meglio il ritmo fai qualcosa come questo invece:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   96,116,88686,2,0,B|92:156|60:172,1,63.7500024318696,8|0
   132,280,89389,6,0,B|144:240|184:216,1,63.7500024318696,0|8
   288,256,90093,2,0,B|416:256,1,127.499996200204,0|8

8. 01:31:968 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Guarda, non mi piacciono proprio il ritmo e i pattern che hai usato qui xD Ti ho fatto un ritmo e un pattern fighissimo, usalo plz (Non ho screenato ogni singola parte perchè mi annoiavo, ma è figherrimo fidati nabbo <3):
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   84,104,92436,2,0,B|124:104|148:72,1,63.7500024318696,8|0
   256,24,93139,6,0,B|256:88,1,63.7500024318696,0|8
   370,80,93843,2,0,B|388:104|428:104,2,63.7500024318696,0|0|8
   320,196,94780,2,0,B|256:224|192:196,1,127.500004863739,0|8
   136,84,95718,1,0
   256,40,96186,2,0,B|256:104,1,63.749998100102,8|0

9. 01:38:061 (3) - Usi 1/2 slider quando non seguono la musica? xD Mh, rimuovi questo slider e usa solo un circle. Oppure uno slider 1/1 che inizia qui e finisce su 01:38:530 rimuovendo (1)
10. 01:39:468 (3,4,5,6,1) - Non usare sempre lo stesso ripetitivo ritmo 1/1. Usa questo pattern invece che segue la musica ed è anche scorrevole e piacevole da giocare:
    
    SPOILER

    
    
    
    
    

    184,88,99468,2,0,B|244:112|312:88,1,127.500004863739,0|8
    364,52,100171,1,0
    416,168,100639,2,0,B|408:204|440:236,1,63.7500024318696,0|8
    364,336,101343,2,0,B|300:356|236:336,1,127.500004863739,0|8
    300,224,102280,5,0
    416,168,102749,1,8

11. 01:43:686 (4,5) - Eh, già lo sai.. Usa qualche 1/2 slider (Ti ho sistemato anche i circle successivi) :
    
    SPOILER

    
    
    

    284,84,103686,2,0,B|268:120|224:124,1,63.7500024318696,8|0
    116,84,104389,6,0,B|132:48|176:44,2,63.7500024318696,0|8|0
    56,52,105093,1,4
    56,180,105561,5,8
    120,288,106030,1,0
    248,296,106499,1,8
    312,172,106968,1,0

12. 01:47:436 (1) - Di nuovo çç
    
    SPOILER

    
    
    

    384,84,107436,6,0,B|400:120|456:128,1,63.7500024318696,8|0
    448,248,108139,2,0,B|476:264|480:304,2,63.7500024318696,0|8|0
    400,208,108843,1,0
    324,312,109311,5,8
    256,204,109780,1,0
    324,96,110249,1,8
    204,60,110718,1,0

13. 02:07:593 (1) a 02:32:436 (4) - Segui gli stessi 1/2 ritmi che ti ho detto sopra plz.. Se hai bisogno di una mano chiedi in game.

1. Tutta la song mappata in 1.30x? Che bisogno c'è? Apri il file con il notepad ed imposta DistanceSpacing: 1
2. 00:30:327 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sinceramente non capisco il motivo per il quale hai mappato tutta questa parte solo con un ritmo 1/4.
3. 01:14:389 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing come questo è veramente fastidioso da giocare, credimi :\ Potresti mappare qualcosa tipo così: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/452175
4. 01:21:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Meh, che brutto spacing da giocare :\
5. 01:49:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Questo pattern confonde visto che non hai usato piu lo stesso spacing per 01:51:186 (7,8) mettendoli vicini.
6. 02:25:639 (1,2,3,4) - Questi elements dovrebbero essere più lontani da 02:24:702 (4).

1. 00:32:202 (1) - Reverse arrow completamente coperto dall'hitburst 00:30:796 (5,3). Unrankabile\
2. 01:27:280 (1,2,3,4) - Why square.
3. 01:46:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Non sai quanto possa essere brutto e rompipalle questo pattern da giocare, lol.

Chewin wrote:

[Pie's Easy]

1. Why 1.00x spacing for an easy diff? :\ <--- bcz for Easy diffs It's ok~
2. 00:30:093 (1) - Add finish to emphasize the cymbals in the song <--- added
3. 00:41:811 (1,3) - Personally I think that sliders like this break the flow of your map. What about to make this pattern like this? I think it's more flowing and enjoyable to play:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   224,303,41811,6,0,B|154:329|76:281|63:211|97:150,1,240,8|8
   208,184,43218,1,0
   184,68,43686,2,0,B|253:42|331:89|344:159|310:220,1,240,8|8

   <--- no, I like my slider forms~
4. 00:57:280 (2) - CTRL + R flows much better IMO http://puu.sh/1bToN <--- fixed
5. 01:27:280 (3) - ^ <--- fixed
6. 02:15:093 (2,3) - This pattern looks odd to me. Listening the music I think this one would fit the song much better: http://puu.sh/1bTti

<---- sounds the same~

NoHitter wrote:

[Pie's Easy]
- Pretty well made Easy. <--- thx ^.^
- 00:38:061 (1) - I suggest not having an overlap with 00:36:186 (3). It doesn't look good IMO. <--- fixed

Konei wrote:

[Hard]

00:26:343 (1) - Add clap to the Spinner, in the music is a clap _Fixed
00:34:194 (2,3,4,5,6) - Decrase the Spacing for this stream, it's too large for a Hard, you should remove them anyway, because streams like this are more Insane stuff Not fixed I think it's ok for a hard
00:36:069 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
00:51:655 (5,6) - I don't like this touching. Either Stack them or space them out so that they don't touch each other _Fixed
01:10:639 (1) - Whistles and claps on this Slider are much better than finish, sounds too loud _Fixed
01:14:389 (1,2,3) - Finishes sound noisy ._. _Fixed
01:19:780 (1,2,3) - Space them out, the touching is a bit annoying to play _Fixed
01:21:889 (1,2) - Again, noisy finishes _Fixed
01:43:218 (3) - Ctrl + G o.o letting this go into this circle plays sooo strange _Fixed
02:11:343 (4) - You shouldnt make this Slider a strange line, plays oddly _Fixed
02:16:264 (2,3) - Space them out _Fixed
02:18:843 (4) - This direction also plays really strange _Fixed
* This also needs some cleaning up and removing from strange straight Sliders




This is all for now :3

Good luck for this ~

Snepif wrote:

Hello! M4M here~~

Lets see.

[General]

Offset 26348 (+5 on current) sounds much better to me.
Remember to resnap all lines and notes after doing this.

[Easy]

00:30:093 (3) - New combo here, kind of a must.

*try to keep your combos under 5-ish in easy diffs. Also I don't really suggest to use NC on pattern shape changes, but in MUSIC changes, for example, using NCs in big white ticks. But now it's already done though, just remember this for the future.

00:41:811 (1,2) - make this blanket better:

SPOILER

00:46:030 (2) - Then stack this slider's end to the previous long slider's end.
00:46:968 (3) - This shape is too sharp and doesn't fit with the previous curved stuff, maybe make it more curved and less sharp (and the next slider too)
01:08:530 (1) - This should be more centered, because in easier diffs, every note after a spinner must be close to the center so the player doesn't screw up (beginners use to screw up if you don't do this)
01:22:129 (1) - Clap here, for consistency with the previous notes.
01:40:874 (1) - Move the middle point a bit up so it isn't so sharp (http://puu.sh/1kfaP)
01:42:749 (4) - ^
01:48:374 (1) - http://puu.sh/1kfch?
02:23:530 (1) - Maybe move a bit closer to the center for the same reason

[Normal]

00:30:093 (x) - - Start the map here as Easy diff for concistency... you waste a lot of the mp3 otherwise.
00:45:561 (2) - Make it not overlap (4)
01:09:936 (5) - This looks ugly, make these 2 sliders touch a little less with each other.
02:07:593 (1) - Same as I said on easy, move this more to the centre of the playfield
02:12:280 (2) - NC here and remove NC from the last slider

[Hard]

00:41:577 (1) - These sliders should start on WHITE ticks. That is where the upbeat is. Move all of them 1 tick backwards so they start at white ticks and remove 00:41:343 (6) -
01:17:202 (4) - Why such a weird shape? Make a simple curve instead
01:18:139 (1) - Make it not touch 01:17:671 (5) -
All updated XD

[Insane]

00:30:327 (2) - I don't understeand why did you put so many random triplets here. Better put nice and catchy streams like hard... this doesn't fit Not fixed
01:14:389 (1) - Very unnecessary and unfitting jump. Use jumps only when the music sounds like there should be a jump. Also this is too huge, decrease its distance. Fixed
01:24:936 (6) - BANANA SLIDERRRRRRR make this better: BANANA FIXEEEEED

SPOILER

02:18:843 (3) - BANANA SLIDERRRRR fix it, make it perfect >:C BANANA FIXEEEEED XD

That is all, but I didn't like this diff that much. It's too linear and sharp idk.. like so symmetryc and straight and squares and asdifjaisdjfasf xDDD but now it's to late though D: try to make it a bit more curve in your next maps.. more... like with more flow. Thanks :3 It's only my "first" map I have done much better works XD

Good luck!! :3

1. Inconsistent TitleUnicode & ArtistUnicode, you must make them same as Title/Artist if your title/artist is English or other alphabetical language.
2. Tags: Capitalize first letter
3. About slider tick rate: 2 in Easy but 1 in Normal is ... weird.. you know, and then also 2 in Hard but 1 in Insane.... i'd like to suggest a better spread like STR1 to E/N and 2 to N/I, or all 1 or all 2 .. etc.
4. About Kiai Time: from 01:37:598 - to 01:52:598 - is much better than 01:22:598 - imo, i'd like to choose only a fountain at 01:22:598 - , and move first kiai to 01:37:598 -

1. 01:10:639 (6) - suggest a NC here to avoid long combo.
2. 01:14:389 (5) - ^
3. 01:18:374 (5) - ^
4. 01:21:889 (6) - ^. Generally, it is better to make the combo length of E/N no more than 6 :>
5. 02:11:343 (6) - Move next NC to here
6. 02:30:561 (2,3,4) - the right angles are looks odd... try to make it more smooth? e.g. add an extra node like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:34:199 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I suppose this kinda stream is too hard for a hard diff. Also 00:36:074 (2,3,4,5,6) - etc. Perhaps, kick slider is a good choice to instead?
2. 00:51:660 (5) - clap at end is unnecessary imo
3. 01:19:316 (4) - add a whistle here?
4. 01:34:316 (6) - ^ at head?

1. Stack Leniency: I can understand why you choose such a low value, but it require a leniency if the interval of two note at same position no more than 1/1 beat. So i think you must choose 7.
2. 00:30:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ugly shapes... to be honest it's a bad placement, i think you have lots of better choices. Compare with the other patterns following, it's looked worse...
3. 00:32:676 (2) - here's a hidden reverse arrow due to the scoreburst. Anyway, it could be resolved easily if you choose to remake prev pattern :>
4. 01:36:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe you can make an increasing volumn here
5. 02:13:691 (5,6) - ctrl+g for better flow?
6. 02:16:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i'd like to make a Star shape here

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from queue~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Inconsistent TitleUnicode & ArtistUnicode, you must make them same as Title/Artist if your title/artist is English or other alphabetical language. Fixed
2. Tags: Capitalize first letter Fixed
3. About slider tick rate: 2 in Easy but 1 in Normal is ... weird.. you know, and then also 2 in Hard but 1 in Insane.... i'd like to suggest a better spread like STR1 to E/N and 2 to N/I, or all 1 or all 2 .. etc. Fixed
4. About Kiai Time: from 01:37:598 - to 01:52:598 - is much better than 01:22:598 - imo, i'd like to choose only a fountain at 01:22:598 - , and move first kiai to 01:37:598 - Fixed

[Revy's Normal]

1. 01:10:639 (6) - suggest a NC here to avoid long combo. Fixed
2. 01:14:389 (5) - ^ Fixed
3. 01:18:374 (5) - ^ Fixed
4. 01:21:889 (6) - ^. Generally, it is better to make the combo length of E/N no more than 6 :> Fixed
5. 02:11:343 (6) - Move next NC to here Fixed
6. 02:30:561 (2,3,4) - the right angles are looks odd... try to make it more smooth? e.g. add an extra node like this: Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:34:199 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I suppose this kinda stream is too hard for a hard diff. Also 00:36:074 (2,3,4,5,6) - etc. Perhaps, kick slider is a good choice to instead? Fixed
2. 00:51:660 (5) - clap at end is unnecessary imo Fixed
3. 01:19:316 (4) - add a whistle here? Not fixed sorry
4. 01:34:316 (6) - ^ at head? Not fixed sorry

[Insane]

1. Stack Leniency: I can understand why you choose such a low value, but it require a leniency if the interval of two note at same position no more than 1/1 beat. So i think you must choose 7. Fixed
2. 00:30:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ugly shapes... to be honest it's a bad placement, i think you have lots of better choices. Compare with the other patterns following, it's looked worse... Fixed
3. 00:32:676 (2) - here's a hidden reverse arrow due to the scoreburst. Anyway, it could be resolved easily if you choose to remake prev pattern :> Fixed
4. 01:36:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe you can make an increasing volumn here Fixed
5. 02:13:691 (5,6) - ctrl+g for better flow? Fixed
6. 02:16:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i'd like to make a Star shape here Fixed

That's all.

Generally the quality is okay, so i'd like to give you a chance in spite of those issues. Give me a call when you're ready :>

Kiosk14 wrote:

AMAZING, RANK THIS SONG NAO

But seriously, great job.

Kiyro wrote:

PFF CHE MERDA, MEGLIO LA MIA LEVELS. Sucamelo pls.

[Revy's Normal]
02:07:124 - Add a beat No

[Hard]
01:17:202 (4) - Metti un reverse e togli il beat che c'è dopo No
01:24:936 (6,7) - Sono difficili da leggere, secondo me meglio mettere tipo uno slider con reverse al posto del 5 oppure semplicemente spostare i beat Taci vanno bene così <3
01:30:093 (4) - Metti un reverse e togli il beat che c'è dopo Fixato
02:08:061 (2) - Non è stackato con la fine dello slider, stackalo. Diopor-- nooberror thanks

[Insane]
02:03:144 (1,2,3) - Più distanziati Mai sentito parlare di antijumps? <3

HellDawn wrote:

General

01:21:894- New preview point ? this is the part of the song that's supposed to be the most memorable. Not fixed


Revy's Normal

01:08:769- If you add note here, rhytm is gonna fit Fixed
02:30:098- finish Fixed

Hard

01:06:660- Why put break drag here ? Fixed
01:21:894- oh no way. remove finish. put whistle Fixed
01:22:129- ^ and remove finish at the end Fixed
01:22:598- finish should be here Not fixed
01:37:598- finish Not fixed
02:02:910- same question Fixed

Insane

01:37:598- finish Fixed
02:30:098- ^ Fixed

Nice song and diffs
Goodluck.

Saten wrote:

Hello~

[Insane]
00:26:348 (1) - clap Fixed
00:41:465 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:07:598 (1) - finish on start Fixed
01:10:644 (1,2,3) - I think finish hitsound like this are kinda unnecessary. I don't hear any resemblance in the actual music really. Well, it's just my opinion though I think finish reinforces the notes
02:31:738 (3) - I'd prefer this being a hitcircle instead Not fixed

[Hard]
00:30:098 (1) - finish Fixed
01:07:598 (1) - finish on start Fixed
01:40:176 (6,1) - I actually don't like this anti-jump even if it's a quite obvious pattern Fixed
02:07:598 (1) - finish on start Fixed
02:13:457 (4,1) - same with this spacing Fixed
02:22:598 (2,1) - I'd use 0,6x spacing instead here Fixed

[Revy]
00:26:348 (1) - finish Fixed
00:39:473 (3,1) - this looks quite awkward imo Not fixed
00:44:160 (4,2) - avoid overlapping? Fixed
00:57:285 (1) - finish Fixed
01:46:504 (3,4,5) - why this spacing? it's really weird Fixed
02:10:410 (5,1) - bid space change, but readable imo and doesn't look too bad either
02:22:129 (6,1,2) - I actually don't like that you mix different spacings so often Not fixed

That's all~
Good luck

Katty Pie wrote:

Thanks for mod guys some fixed~

http://puu.sh/1poIG

1. 00:33:848 (5) - Move next NC to here for consistent?
2. 00:37:598 (4) - ^
3. 00:41:348 (4) - ^

1. the Sliders before first break are looked weird due to SliderTickRate 2, since it's unnecessary imo, i'd like to suggest 1 but not 2
2. 01:33:848 (6) - Move next NC to here?
3. 01:37:598 (5) - also NC suggest for kiai
4. 01:41:348 (6) - Move next NC to here
5. 01:45:098 (6) - ^
6. 01:48:848 (7) - ^

1. 00:31:269 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - how about rotate the by 180 for better flow?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:32:207 (1,2,3,4) - if you apply above one, it is better to change the order of these four:
   (1): bottom-right => (2) bottom-left => (3) top-left => (4) top-right
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:24:473 (5) - ctrl+g for better flow?
4. 01:30:098 (2) - ^
5. 01:38:301 - i'd like to make a triplet here to 01:38:535 (1) - for transition
   
6. 01:51:191 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow?

Scorpiour wrote:

[Revy's Normal]

1. the Sliders before first break are looked weird due to SliderTickRate 2, since it's unnecessary imo, i'd like to suggest 1 but not 2
2. 01:33:848 (6) - Move next NC to here?
3. 01:37:598 (5) - also NC suggest for kiai
4. 01:41:348 (6) - Move next NC to here
5. 01:45:098 (6) - ^
6. 01:48:848 (7) - ^

Generally, it suggests to place NC at downbeat (long-white tick) for better gradation. All fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:31:269 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - how about rotate the by 180 for better flow?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:32:207 (1,2,3,4) - if you apply above one, it is better to change the order of these four:
   (1): bottom-right => (2) bottom-left => (3) top-left => (4) top-right
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:24:473 (5) - ctrl+g for better flow?
4. 01:30:098 (2) - ^
5. 01:38:301 - i'd like to make a triplet here to 01:38:535 (1) - for transition All fixed except this, I don't like :C
   
6. 01:51:191 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow?

Scorpiour wrote:

make an irc check with mapper, fix inconsistent epilepsy warning.

i think the map is ready~~~enjoy your first bubble here and good luck with the rank :>

RikiH_ wrote:

VAI ROCSAS WOOOOOH

Dammi fuoco.

Aleks719 wrote:

General
Set offset 98. It's for menu strobes and flashes.No affect for notes

Skin
Your skin Digits are too "wide". Look :

It shouldn't overlap, fix please.

Hard
00:34:785 (4,5,6) - 1/4 instead of 1/2 suddenly. but same spacing. eh?
I stumbled there 3 or 4 times, unreadable
00:36:660 (4,5,6) - same
00:38:535 (5,6,7) - same
00:40:410 (5,6,7) - same
01:52:832 - Inis break? unsnapped? why? remove this blue zone~

Revy's Normal
01:18:144 - add note, keep use this 1/2 pattern.
01:36:894 - add note for same reason, 3/2 free place sounds strange when you use 1/1. Make it more rhythmical!
02:21:894 - same

Aleks719 wrote:

Easy
01:52:832 - remove inis break

Normal
01:36:894 (5,6) -Add nc to (5)
01:37:598 (1) - remove this nc

small recheck, do not reply, do not kd. fix, poke me in game

Ranked!~

Ayu wrote:

Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.

Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.

Ayu wrote:

Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.

Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.

Ayu wrote:

Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.

Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.

Moway wrote:

Go to hell, honestly.

Congrats on your first ranked beatmap! ^^

-kevincela- wrote:

If by this sentence you mean this map isn't creative and other things like this,then please go away from here.

Scorpiour wrote:

i expect what you can create.

it is always easy to commend others' work

Roxas wrote:

Mancusojuanmattos: really thanks I'm glad you like it

Baby Strawberry: thanks *-* <3

Gabe: Finally rankeeed \o/

Ayu wrote:

yes let's not make shitty maps and show how much creativity I have by copy and pasting the same fucking patterns everytime over and over again.
let's not forget that the patterns should be just easy and so fucking simple that a 2 year old could do the laundry.

I seriously don't get why people even like this. It just shows that you have no feeling for the song and that you can't come up with anything better than using your ctrl+c and ctrl+v. Seems that I'm one of these few people that actually do care about the quality of maps.

/edit: Don't get me wrong, I'm not hating on you.

Ayu wrote:

yes let's not make shitty maps and show how much creativity I have by copy and pasting the same fucking patterns everytime over and over again.
let's not forget that the patterns should be just easy and so fucking simple that a 2 year old could do the laundry.

I seriously don't get why people even like this. It just shows that you have no feeling for the song and that you can't come up with anything better than using your ctrl+c and ctrl+v. Seems that I'm one of these few people that actually do care about the quality of maps.

/edit: Don't get me wrong, I'm not hating on you.