Thanks :3HellDawn wrote:
General
01:21:894- New preview point ? this is the part of the song that's supposed to be the most memorable. Not fixed
Revy's Normal
01:08:769- If you add note here, rhytm is gonna fit Fixed
02:30:098- finish Fixed
Hard
01:06:660- Why put break drag here ? Fixed
01:21:894- oh no way. remove finish. put whistle Fixed
01:22:129- ^ and remove finish at the end Fixed
01:22:598- finish should be here Not fixed
01:37:598- finish Not fixed
02:02:910- same questionFixed
Insane
01:37:598- finish Fixed
02:30:098- ^ Fixed
Nice song and diffs
Goodluck.
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Thanks updated all ><
YAY \o/
General
Set offset 98. It's for menu strobes and flashes.No affect for notes
Skin
Your skin Digits are too "wide". Look :
It shouldn't overlap, fix please.
Hard
00:34:785 (4,5,6) - 1/4 instead of 1/2 suddenly. but same spacing. eh?
I stumbled there 3 or 4 times, unreadable
00:36:660 (4,5,6) - same
00:38:535 (5,6,7) - same
00:40:410 (5,6,7) - same
01:52:832 - Inis break? unsnapped? why? remove this blue zone~
Revy's Normal
01:18:144 - add note, keep use this 1/2 pattern.
01:36:894 - add note for same reason, 3/2 free place sounds strange when you use 1/1. Make it more rhythmical!
02:21:894 - same
Pie's Easy
01:00:332 - same problem with Inis break as in Hard
01:40:879 (1,4) - just no. after new 3point slider system these sliders sucks as hell.
01:52:832 - same problem with Inis break as in Hard
what a boring diff =.= claps claps, finishes sometimes on spinners. do you know we have whistles in game? :V
Ok fixed all :3
Congrats on your first ranked beatmap! ^^
Besides, you are not one to talk about matters like these
you get your maps unranked every second for lack of quality because you speedrank 'm.
Anyway I know that is not a perfect map and this map could be done better, but is only my first really map :I
slowpoke
Topic Starter
Hello~
[Insane]
00:26:348 (1) - clap
00:41:465 (1) - ^
01:07:598 (1) - finish on start
01:10:644 (1,2,3) - I think finish hitsound like this are kinda unnecessary. I don't hear any resemblance in the actual music really. Well, it's just my opinion though
02:31:738 (3) - I'd prefer this being a hitcircle instead
[Hard]
00:30:098 (1) - finish
01:07:598 (1) - finish on start
01:40:176 (6,1) - I actually don't like this anti-jump even if it's a quite obvious pattern
02:07:598 (1) - finish on start
02:13:457 (4,1) - same with this spacing
02:22:598 (2,1) - I'd use 0,6x spacing instead here
[Revy]
00:26:348 (1) - finish
00:39:473 (3,1) - this looks quite awkward imo
00:44:160 (4,2) - avoid overlapping?
00:57:285 (1) - finish
01:46:504 (3,4,5) - why this spacing? it's really weird
02:10:410 (5,1) - bid space change, but readable imo and doesn't look too bad either
02:22:129 (6,1,2) - I actually don't like that you mix different spacings so often
[Pie]
00:30:098 (1) - the first thing you do is stacking? place in in the center please
00:41:816 (1,3) - can you make them look prettier?
That's all~
Good luck
[Insane]
00:26:348 (1) - clap
00:41:465 (1) - ^
01:07:598 (1) - finish on start
01:10:644 (1,2,3) - I think finish hitsound like this are kinda unnecessary. I don't hear any resemblance in the actual music really. Well, it's just my opinion though
02:31:738 (3) - I'd prefer this being a hitcircle instead
[Hard]
00:30:098 (1) - finish
01:07:598 (1) - finish on start
01:40:176 (6,1) - I actually don't like this anti-jump even if it's a quite obvious pattern
02:07:598 (1) - finish on start
02:13:457 (4,1) - same with this spacing
02:22:598 (2,1) - I'd use 0,6x spacing instead here
[Revy]
00:26:348 (1) - finish
00:39:473 (3,1) - this looks quite awkward imo
00:44:160 (4,2) - avoid overlapping?
00:57:285 (1) - finish
01:46:504 (3,4,5) - why this spacing? it's really weird
02:10:410 (5,1) - bid space change, but readable imo and doesn't look too bad either
02:22:129 (6,1,2) - I actually don't like that you mix different spacings so often
[Pie]
00:30:098 (1) - the first thing you do is stacking? place in in the center please
00:41:816 (1,3) - can you make them look prettier?
That's all~
Good luck
Topic Starter
Really thanks :3 I like gif in your signature lol xDSaten wrote:
Hello~
[Insane]
00:26:348 (1) - clap Fixed
00:41:465 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:07:598 (1) - finish on start Fixed
01:10:644 (1,2,3) - I think finish hitsound like this are kinda unnecessary. I don't hear any resemblance in the actual music really. Well, it's just my opinion though I think finish reinforces the notes
02:31:738 (3) - I'd prefer this being a hitcircle instead Not fixed
[Hard]
00:30:098 (1) - finish Fixed
01:07:598 (1) - finish on start Fixed
01:40:176 (6,1) - I actually don't like this anti-jump even if it's a quite obvious pattern Fixed
02:07:598 (1) - finish on start Fixed
02:13:457 (4,1) - same with this spacing Fixed
02:22:598 (2,1) - I'd use 0,6x spacing instead here Fixed
[Revy]
00:26:348 (1) - finish Fixed
00:39:473 (3,1) - this looks quite awkward imo Not fixed
00:44:160 (4,2) - avoid overlapping? Fixed
00:57:285 (1) - finish Fixed
01:46:504 (3,4,5) - why this spacing? it's really weird Fixed
02:10:410 (5,1) - bid space change, but readable imo and doesn't look too bad either
02:22:129 (6,1,2) - I actually don't like that you mix different spacings so often Not fixed
That's all~
Good luck
Topic Starter
Updated :3Katty Pie wrote:
Thanks for mod guys
http://puu.sh/1poIG
Okay, let me recheck it:
red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions
[Pie's Easy]
[Insane]
red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions
[Pie's Easy]
- 00:33:848 (5) - Move next NC to here for consistent?
- 00:37:598 (4) - ^
- 00:41:348 (4) - ^
- the Sliders before first break are looked weird due to SliderTickRate 2, since it's unnecessary imo, i'd like to suggest 1 but not 2
- 01:33:848 (6) - Move next NC to here?
- 01:37:598 (5) - also NC suggest for kiai
- 01:41:348 (6) - Move next NC to here
- 01:45:098 (6) - ^
- 01:48:848 (7) - ^
[Insane]
- 00:31:269 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - how about rotate the by 180 for better flow?
- 00:32:207 (1,2,3,4) - if you apply above one, it is better to change the order of these four:
(1): bottom-right => (2) bottom-left => (3) top-left => (4) top-right - 01:24:473 (5) - ctrl+g for better flow?
- 01:30:098 (2) - ^
- 01:38:301 - i'd like to make a triplet here to 01:38:535 (1) - for transition
- 01:51:191 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow?
Thx fixed NC on my diff ^.^
Topic Starter
Scorpiour wrote:
[Revy's Normal]Generally, it suggests to place NC at downbeat (long-white tick) for better gradation. All fixed
- the Sliders before first break are looked weird due to SliderTickRate 2, since it's unnecessary imo, i'd like to suggest 1 but not 2
- 01:33:848 (6) - Move next NC to here?
- 01:37:598 (5) - also NC suggest for kiai
- 01:41:348 (6) - Move next NC to here
- 01:45:098 (6) - ^
- 01:48:848 (7) - ^
[Insane]
- 00:31:269 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - how about rotate the by 180 for better flow?
- 00:32:207 (1,2,3,4) - if you apply above one, it is better to change the order of these four:
(1): bottom-right => (2) bottom-left => (3) top-left => (4) top-right- 01:24:473 (5) - ctrl+g for better flow?
- 01:30:098 (2) - ^
- 01:38:301 - i'd like to make a triplet here to 01:38:535 (1) - for transition All fixed except this, I don't like :C
- 01:51:191 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow?
Thanks updated all ><
make an irc check with mapper, fix inconsistent epilepsy warning.
i think the map is ready~~~enjoy your first bubble here and good luck with the rank :>
i think the map is ready~~~enjoy your first bubble here and good luck with the rank :>
Topic Starter
Really thanks *^*Scorpiour wrote:
make an irc check with mapper, fix inconsistent epilepsy warning.
i think the map is ready~~~enjoy your first bubble here and good luck with the rank :>
Topic Starter
YAY \o/General
Set offset 98. It's for menu strobes and flashes.No affect for notes
Skin
Your skin Digits are too "wide". Look :
It shouldn't overlap, fix please.
Hard
00:34:785 (4,5,6) - 1/4 instead of 1/2 suddenly. but same spacing. eh?
I stumbled there 3 or 4 times, unreadable
00:36:660 (4,5,6) - same
00:38:535 (5,6,7) - same
00:40:410 (5,6,7) - same
01:52:832 - Inis break? unsnapped? why? remove this blue zone~
Revy's Normal
01:18:144 - add note, keep use this 1/2 pattern.
01:36:894 - add note for same reason, 3/2 free place sounds strange when you use 1/1. Make it more rhythmical!
02:21:894 - same
Pie's Easy
01:00:332 - same problem with Inis break as in Hard
01:40:879 (1,4) - just no. after new 3point slider system these sliders sucks as hell.
01:52:832 - same problem with Inis break as in Hard
what a boring diff =.= claps claps, finishes sometimes on spinners. do you know we have whistles in game? :V
Topic Starter
Aleks719 wrote:
General
Set offset 98. It's for menu strobes and flashes.No affect for notes
Skin
Your skin Digits are too "wide". Look :
It shouldn't overlap, fix please.
Hard
00:34:785 (4,5,6) - 1/4 instead of 1/2 suddenly. but same spacing. eh?
I stumbled there 3 or 4 times, unreadable
00:36:660 (4,5,6) - same
00:38:535 (5,6,7) - same
00:40:410 (5,6,7) - same
01:52:832 - Inis break? unsnapped? why? remove this blue zone~
Revy's Normal
01:18:144 - add note, keep use this 1/2 pattern.
01:36:894 - add note for same reason, 3/2 free place sounds strange when you use 1/1. Make it more rhythmical!
02:21:894 - same
Ok fixed all :3
Easy
01:52:832 - remove inis break
Normal
01:36:894 (5,6) -Add nc to (5)
01:37:598 (1) - remove this nc
small recheck, do not reply, do not kd. fix, poke me in game
Ranked!~
01:52:832 - remove inis break
Normal
01:36:894 (5,6) -Add nc to (5)
01:37:598 (1) - remove this nc
Ranked!~
Congratz!
/me runs
/me runs
Topic Starter
Thanks *°* ♥Aleks719 wrote:
Easy
01:52:832 - remove inis break
Normal
01:36:894 (5,6) -Add nc to (5)
01:37:598 (1) - remove this ncsmall recheck, do not reply, do not kd. fix, poke me in game
Ranked!~
First 10 stars gave from me !! 
Anywany Congratz
Anywany Congratz
lol finally, congratz roxas!
Topic Starter
Thanks everyone *^*
Congratz! :3
Topic Starter
Thanks everyone
great map, gratz <3
Congrats man (:
Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.
Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.
Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.
Congrats ^^
Good♂Job man!
Good♂Job man!
Topic Starter
Thanks ^_^
Go to hell, honestly.Ayu wrote:
Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.
Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.
Congrats on your first ranked beatmap! ^^
If by this sentence you mean this map isn't creative and other things like this,then please go away from here.Ayu wrote:
Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.
Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.
congrats man~~
i expect what you can create.
it is always easy to commend others' work
Ayu wrote:
Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.
Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.
i expect what you can create.
it is always easy to commend others' work
Topic Starter
Moway wrote:
Go to hell, honestly.
Congrats on your first ranked beatmap! ^^
-kevincela- wrote:
If by this sentence you mean this map isn't creative and other things like this,then please go away from here.
Just ignore, there's creativity. Please tell me what's not creative in this map, cause even I'm a newbie mapper I'm aware of my works and I don't wanna make shitty maps. :3Scorpiour wrote:
i expect what you can create.
it is always easy to commend others' work
Love it<3
You get it ranked? weee!!!
grats
grats
Oh.. man!! This song is incredible, really thanks for map it!!
And Congratulations on get your first Ranked Map
And Congratulations on get your first Ranked Map
GOOD JOB! >~<
RANKED LIKE 7 HOURS AGO? AND SEEN NOTHING? ;--;
Congratulation, I am very happy to see this in the ranked list!~
Congratulation, I am very happy to see this in the ranked list!~
Topic Starter
Mancusojuanmattos: really thanks I'm glad you like it
Baby Strawberry: thanks *-* <3
Gabe: Finally rankeeed \o/
Baby Strawberry: thanks *-* <3
Gabe: Finally rankeeed \o/
i kinda wanna map this version now https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pInAqcXirHw
map is pretty fun though. i was a bit unsure about the 1/4 streams in the insane, but after looking again, its pretty fun. good job :3
map is pretty fun though. i was a bit unsure about the 1/4 streams in the insane, but after looking again, its pretty fun. good job :3
;__; And me?Roxas wrote:
Mancusojuanmattos: really thanks I'm glad you like it
Baby Strawberry: thanks *-* <3
Gabe: Finally rankeeed \o/
Topic Starter
Sorry Sey, I am connected with the phone and I didn't see your post ;-; thank you too *-*
congratulations
Topic Starter
Thanks
yes let's not make shitty maps and show how much creativity I have by copy and pasting the same fucking patterns everytime over and over again.
let's not forget that the patterns should be just easy and so fucking simple that a 2 year old could do the laundry.
I seriously don't get why people even like this. It just shows that you have no feeling for the song and that you can't come up with anything better than using your ctrl+c and ctrl+v. Seems that I'm one of these few people that actually do care about the quality of maps.
/edit: Don't get me wrong, I'm not hating on you.
let's not forget that the patterns should be just easy and so fucking simple that a 2 year old could do the laundry.
I seriously don't get why people even like this. It just shows that you have no feeling for the song and that you can't come up with anything better than using your ctrl+c and ctrl+v. Seems that I'm one of these few people that actually do care about the quality of maps.
/edit: Don't get me wrong, I'm not hating on you.
Everyone has a proper mapping style,copy-pasted or not. Deal with it,using copy/paste to do symmetric patterns does not mean having a lack of creativity. If that would be so,like 3/4 of maps here in osu would have been totally dull,just saying. Map is actually fun to play and THERE's creativity (I'm saying it as a mapper,so...)Ayu wrote:
yes let's not make shitty maps and show how much creativity I have by copy and pasting the same fucking patterns everytime over and over again.
let's not forget that the patterns should be just easy and so fucking simple that a 2 year old could do the laundry.
I seriously don't get why people even like this. It just shows that you have no feeling for the song and that you can't come up with anything better than using your ctrl+c and ctrl+v. Seems that I'm one of these few people that actually do care about the quality of maps.
/edit: Don't get me wrong, I'm not hating on you.
Topic Starter
Tell me where I copy-pasted same patterns pls. I have only made simmetrical patterns, but I haven't copied patterns. A thing is "I don't like simmetry" but you can't say that this is a shitty map with shitty pattern. I don't care about the quality of my map? I have remapped my diff 4 times pls. Don't say stupid things.Ayu wrote:
yes let's not make shitty maps and show how much creativity I have by copy and pasting the same fucking patterns everytime over and over again.
let's not forget that the patterns should be just easy and so fucking simple that a 2 year old could do the laundry.
I seriously don't get why people even like this. It just shows that you have no feeling for the song and that you can't come up with anything better than using your ctrl+c and ctrl+v. Seems that I'm one of these few people that actually do care about the quality of maps.
/edit: Don't get me wrong, I'm not hating on you.
Symmetry is just a lame excuse. Imo, it just says nothing more than ''omg I only can map half of the song because i lack creativity so lets just do half of it the same so bla bla bla''.
@-kevincela-, absolutely right, 3/4 of the maps on osu! are totally dull.
@-kevincela-, absolutely right, 3/4 of the maps on osu! are totally dull.
Topic Starter
You can say that you don't like symmetry and this is ok, everyone has their own preferences, but you can't say that symmetry is shit or it not creative.
Then let me rephrase it as "symmetry maps like these are the cancer of osu" ?
I've seen several symmetric maps, which were good. I didn't dislike them, because they showed creativity, nice patterns and nice sliders. This one, does not. Therefor, I find this map not worth of a rank.
Instead of ranking maps like these, please rank better maps that are still out there.
I've seen several symmetric maps, which were good. I didn't dislike them, because they showed creativity, nice patterns and nice sliders. This one, does not. Therefor, I find this map not worth of a rank.
Instead of ranking maps like these, please rank better maps that are still out there.
Symmetry can be really awesome when done right.
when done right.
when done right.
Topic Starter
In my opinion and in other people's opinion here symmetry is done right, but everyome has different preferences and differends minds I continue to think that this map has creativity, I can be wrong but I'm not the only one who said this...
I continue to think that this map has creativity, I can be wrong but I'm not the only one who said this...Just checked the Hard Diff. (I was too lazy to check the Insane)
There's nothing wrong here. Except of 00:37:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) which totally fits perfect here I see nothing about copy and paste, Ayu.
Also, the Song has at the most time the same rhythm which makes it harder to create various pattern, and Roxas did a well job here. Anyway, congrats.
There's nothing wrong here. Except of 00:37:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) which totally fits perfect here I see nothing about copy and paste, Ayu.
Also, the Song has at the most time the same rhythm which makes it harder to create various pattern, and Roxas did a well job here. Anyway, congrats.
The map is good enough, stop complaining already guys, thanks.
Love it,
Congratulations *_* xD
Congratulations *_* xD
complaining =/= criticizing.Andrea wrote:
The map is good enough, stop complaining already guys, thanks.
Besides, you are not one to talk about matters like these
you get your maps unranked every second for lack of quality because you speedrank 'm.
Topic Starter
GladiOol wrote:
complaining =/= criticizing.
For me this is a complainAyu wrote:
Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.
Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.
I was defending myself, not Ayu.Roxas wrote:
GladiOol wrote:
complaining =/= criticizing.For me this is a complainAyu wrote:
Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.
Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.
Topic Starter
Sorry you're right.GladiOol wrote:
I was defending myself, not Ayu.
Anyway I know that is not a perfect map and this map could be done better, but is only my first really map :I
your are crazy lml 
Topic Starter
Why? o3o-zer0- wrote:
your are crazy lml
great song lml
Topic Starter
Thanks
Congratz for you first rank :3
ThoomyyxD wrote:
Congratz for you first rank :3
slowpoke
Topic Starter
Very slow lol anyway thanks :3
Hi mom im on osu!
Great map!! I luv the professor profile pic btw - 3 - lol