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Topic Starter
MI IMBRATTATE IL TOPIC COSI' :C AHAHAH
Comunque la mappai quando ancora ero nabbo con il timing ed è una delle poche che lo ha costante :V
Comunque la mappai quando ancora ero nabbo con il timing ed è una delle poche che lo ha costante :V
Hi~ sorry for the delay. mod from my queue~
[Easy]
00:41:821 (1,3) - shape
01:18:853 (2) - ^
01:22:603 (2) - ^
[Normal]
Lack claps at many points. Try to add them all to make the map sound better.
(nazi) The later half part of the map is too easy. Try to add some more tricks. XD
00:50:728 (3) - Strange. Change spacing,
02:04:790 (1) - spinner end not audible
[Hard]
A bit beyond Hard level. try to avoid wild jumps like 01:49:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
02:03:853 (1) - spinner end not audible
[Insane]
the last part is a bit mess. try to avoid the overlaps, or use 1/4 note stream instead.
[Easy]
00:41:821 (1,3) - shape
01:18:853 (2) - ^
01:22:603 (2) - ^
[Normal]
Lack claps at many points. Try to add them all to make the map sound better.
(nazi) The later half part of the map is too easy. Try to add some more tricks. XD
00:50:728 (3) - Strange. Change spacing,
02:04:790 (1) - spinner end not audible
[Hard]
A bit beyond Hard level. try to avoid wild jumps like 01:49:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
02:03:853 (1) - spinner end not audible
[Insane]
the last part is a bit mess. try to avoid the overlaps, or use 1/4 note stream instead.
feel free to ignore anything you don't like
Pie's Easy
looks fine to me
Revy's Normal
- 00:46:978 (4) - NC?
- 01:33:384 (6) - NC here and remove the NC on next note
- 02:21:431 - i feel like you should add a note here, or at least make 4 a slider and extend it to this point
- 02:22:134 - add note?
- 01:45:103 (2) - idk if this slider should be so curvy, when all other sliders around it are straight or less curvy
- 01:10:649 (1,2,3) - putting finishes in each of these notes doesn't sound fitting , er..in my opinion xD
- 01:37:603 (1,2,3) - move these out a little to the left to continue the stream? might flow better:
- 01:48:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pattern here seems plain compared to the other combos, try making some cool shape pattern with them? o.o
- 02:01:040 (1) - whistle needs to be at the beginning
Topic Starter
meiikyuu and Iroseka thanks some things fixed 
[General]
[Easy]
- What's your distance spacing used for Insane? Hard? Normal? I see none. All you have are symmetrical objects, and this isn't very attractive, nor can I mod them.
- Because of the bpm, each beat is not an integer number of ms, and when you use long loops, events get more and more mistimed, as seen in this picture:
Consider breaking down your loops into 2, or even 4 smaller loops to achieve the best pulsing effect.
[Easy]
- 00:41:823 (1,3) - These look flat.
- 00:55:886 (5) - Anchor at 00:56:355 - for maximum effect.
- 01:22:605 (2) - What's with the slider nodes, they don't look too great.
thx for mod.those wrote:
[Easy]
- 00:41:823 (1,3) - These look flat. <--- and? f there were simply direct sliders it it would look even more flat :3 I do not think what need to change it
- 00:55:886 (5) - Anchor at 00:56:355 - for maximum effect. <--- nope, but i correct this place
- 01:22:605 (2) - What's with the slider nodes, they don't look too great. <--- oops, fixed
http://puu.sh/MnJi
Topic Starter
those wrote:
[General]
- What's your distance spacing used for Insane? Hard? Normal? I see none. All you have are symmetrical objects, and this isn't very attractive, nor can I mod them.
- Because of the bpm, each beat is not an integer number of ms, and when you use long loops, events get more and more mistimed, as seen in this picture:
Fixed
Consider breaking down your loops into 2, or even 4 smaller loops to achieve the best pulsing effect.
*yawn* so sleepy...
[Pie's Easy]
01:38:542 (1) - Clap the end.
02:35:730 (1) - I think this spinner should be longer like the other difficulties.
Nice, but it feels a little like a Normal with lower settings to me.
[Revy's Normal]
00:47:917 (3,4,1) - Spacing?! 00:48:151 (4,1) - Jump makes no sense.
00:56:823 (1) - New combo
01:07:605 to 01:52:605 - Whistle pattern feels random. Imo it'd be better to remove all whistle from this part and save or make it consistent like 02:07:605 (1) - onwards.
02:21:433 (5) - Stack this with 02:21:198 (4) -
02:21:901 - Note?
02:22:136 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Hard]
00:45:222 (1) - Spinner feels random. It's better to keep mapping here I think.
01:11:355 (2) - This type of slider looks weird here, maybe use one like 01:10:651 (1) - instead
01:12:292 (1,2,3,4) - Can you arrange these in a more interesting pattern? Something like 01:27:292 (1,2,3,4) - would be great
01:18:151 (1) - Move it down, make the return more visible.
01:49:323 (5) - Increase the spacing here. So it's like 01:48:151 (1,2,3) -
02:29:401 (1,2,3) - Spacing? Make it equal.
[Insane]
02:11:355 (2) - Copy paste flip horizontally if you do ^
02:22:605 (1) - to 02:33:737 (8) - Looks and plays really clustered, not really fun. Would be better if you increased the spacing, moved all the patterns from the centre and used the whole screen and reduced the overlapping.
02:26:237 (6) - Kind of hard to see with kiai and hitbursts when playing, overlap also looks very ugly.
02:28:112 (6) - Better if this wasn't stacked under the slider. Like the others
02:29:987 (6) - Covered when playing by the hitbursts. Barely visible, better if you change this I think.
That's my opinions from playing ~
[Pie's Easy]
01:38:542 (1) - Clap the end.
02:35:730 (1) - I think this spinner should be longer like the other difficulties.
Nice, but it feels a little like a Normal with lower settings to me.
[Revy's Normal]
- Hitsounds would probably sound better if they followed the song like Pie's Easy. For example clap following the clap in the music 01:23:542 (1) - clapping end instead of start etc.
- Agree with those, spacing changes due to the style are not really great, just compare things like 01:14:401 (6,7,8) - with 01:19:792 (1,2,3) - with 01:21:901 (6,7,8) - where's the consistency? They are all 1/2 sliders and this is supposed to be a Normal.
00:47:917 (3,4,1) - Spacing?! 00:48:151 (4,1) - Jump makes no sense.
00:56:823 (1) - New combo
01:07:605 to 01:52:605 - Whistle pattern feels random. Imo it'd be better to remove all whistle from this part and save or make it consistent like 02:07:605 (1) - onwards.
02:21:433 (5) - Stack this with 02:21:198 (4) -
02:21:901 - Note?
02:22:136 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Hard]
00:45:222 (1) - Spinner feels random. It's better to keep mapping here I think.
01:11:355 (2) - This type of slider looks weird here, maybe use one like 01:10:651 (1) - instead
01:12:292 (1,2,3,4) - Can you arrange these in a more interesting pattern? Something like 01:27:292 (1,2,3,4) - would be great
01:18:151 (1) - Move it down, make the return more visible.
01:49:323 (5) - Increase the spacing here. So it's like 01:48:151 (1,2,3) -
02:29:401 (1,2,3) - Spacing? Make it equal.
[Insane]
- Why no clap at the end in places like 00:30:573 (4) - and 00:31:511 (3) - and 00:32:214 (1) - etc whistle spam doesn't sound great.
02:11:355 (2) - Copy paste flip horizontally if you do ^
02:22:605 (1) - to 02:33:737 (8) - Looks and plays really clustered, not really fun. Would be better if you increased the spacing, moved all the patterns from the centre and used the whole screen and reduced the overlapping.
02:26:237 (6) - Kind of hard to see with kiai and hitbursts when playing, overlap also looks very ugly.
02:28:112 (6) - Better if this wasn't stacked under the slider. Like the others
02:29:987 (6) - Covered when playing by the hitbursts. Barely visible, better if you change this I think.
That's my opinions from playing ~
Note: I map and mod for quality, not quantity. Keep this in mind!
Mod4Mod Mod:
General
Use this for the SB:
Easy
02:33:386 (1) - New combo needed?
Normal
Distance spacing has 0,6, thats why there is a whole list of distance mistakes in the AiMod... try to fix this
01:07:605 - Spacing changes
01:41:355 (5) - Here should start a new combo
01:44:636 (5) - ^
01:48:386 (2) - ^
02:22:136 (1) - Remove combo
Hard
Its a Hard not Insane, it acts like an Insane diff... imo its too hard
00:32:214 (1) - You wanted this combo row like this?
00:47:448 (1,2,3,4) - Use symmetry for this pattern, it looks better and plays better (as in square)
00:52:605 (1) - Flip this one to the other side (Ctrl + H) 00:54:480 (2) - and this one too
01:14:401 (1,2,3) - Look at the distance
01:29:401 (1) - You wanted this combo row like this?
01:39:245 (2,3,4,5,6) - Better to not use this in a Hard difficutlie, fits better in Insane's
01:42:292 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:49:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:07:605 - Now the slider speed is up to 1,5 which is a sudden change and can confuse player, i would suggest to keep a constant speed.
02:16:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What about this pattern?
02:25:651 (1,2,3) - Too close to the preview slider
02:30:105 - The distance changes suddenly, too sudden
02:37:605 - Mapp the part till here, it looks so interrupted, like the Easy and Normal difficultie
Insane
2,7 Slider Velocity o.O for such a slow and grooving song
01:08:542 (1) - Remove combo
01:18:855 (2) - Please dont overlapp it :s
01:31:980 (3,4) - Move them a bit more down
01:37:019 (4) - From now on there are no sounds for this stream, dont mapp sounds which dont exist
02:00:339 (2) - One Grid left (Nazi)
02:03:855 (4,5,6) - Make symmetry with ^
02:06:198 (4,5) - Change this to one slider ending here 02:06:433 - like you did before, because 02:06:667 - here is no sound
02:09:011 - Maybe make a warning for the sudden slider speed change?
02:20:730 (5,6,7,8,1) - Delete these and place a spinner? Would fit a lot better since you have a stream which follows
02:31:042 (1,2,3) - This pattern is abit hard to play, maybe find another solution?
02:37:605 - And again, mapp till here and start the spinner at the end
Overall *thumps up* i've seen badder
Contact me ingame or write me a PM and we will make out which map you mod
Mod4Mod Mod:
General
Use this for the SB:
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Avicii - Levels.jpg",320,240
L,67605,4
F,1,0,3750,0.5,0
S,1,0,3750,1,1.02
L,82605,16
F,0,0,469,0.5,0
S,1,0,469,1,1.02
L,90105,16
F,0,0,469,0.5,0
S,1,0,469,1,1.02
L,97605,16
F,0,0,469,0.5,0
S,1,0,469,1,1.02
L,105105,17
F,0,0,469,0.5,0
S,1,0,469,1,1.02
L,127605,16
F,0,0,469,0.5,0
S,1,0,469,1,1.02
L,135105,16
F,0,0,469,0.5,0
S,1,0,469,1,1.02
L,142605,17
F,0,0,469,0.5,0
S,1,0,469,1,1.02
Easy
02:33:386 (1) - New combo needed?
Normal
Distance spacing has 0,6, thats why there is a whole list of distance mistakes in the AiMod... try to fix this
01:07:605 - Spacing changes
01:41:355 (5) - Here should start a new combo
01:44:636 (5) - ^
01:48:386 (2) - ^
02:22:136 (1) - Remove combo
Hard
Its a Hard not Insane, it acts like an Insane diff... imo its too hard
00:32:214 (1) - You wanted this combo row like this?
00:47:448 (1,2,3,4) - Use symmetry for this pattern, it looks better and plays better (as in square)
00:52:605 (1) - Flip this one to the other side (Ctrl + H) 00:54:480 (2) - and this one too
01:14:401 (1,2,3) - Look at the distance
01:29:401 (1) - You wanted this combo row like this?
01:39:245 (2,3,4,5,6) - Better to not use this in a Hard difficutlie, fits better in Insane's
01:42:292 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:49:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:07:605 - Now the slider speed is up to 1,5 which is a sudden change and can confuse player, i would suggest to keep a constant speed.
02:16:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What about this pattern?
02:25:651 (1,2,3) - Too close to the preview slider
02:30:105 - The distance changes suddenly, too sudden
02:37:605 - Mapp the part till here, it looks so interrupted, like the Easy and Normal difficultie
Insane
2,7 Slider Velocity o.O for such a slow and grooving song
01:08:542 (1) - Remove combo
01:18:855 (2) - Please dont overlapp it :s
01:31:980 (3,4) - Move them a bit more down
01:37:019 (4) - From now on there are no sounds for this stream, dont mapp sounds which dont exist
02:00:339 (2) - One Grid left (Nazi)
02:03:855 (4,5,6) - Make symmetry with ^
02:06:198 (4,5) - Change this to one slider ending here 02:06:433 - like you did before, because 02:06:667 - here is no sound
02:09:011 - Maybe make a warning for the sudden slider speed change?
02:20:730 (5,6,7,8,1) - Delete these and place a spinner? Would fit a lot better since you have a stream which follows
02:31:042 (1,2,3) - This pattern is abit hard to play, maybe find another solution?
02:37:605 - And again, mapp till here and start the spinner at the end
Overall *thumps up* i've seen badder
Contact me ingame or write me a PM and we will make out which map you mod
Topic Starter
Thanks :3BounceBabe wrote:
Note: I map and mod for quality, not quantity. Keep this in mind!
Mod4Mod Mod:
General
Use this for the SB:Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Avicii - Levels.jpg",320,240
L,67605,4
F,1,0,3750,0.5,0
S,1,0,3750,1,1.02
L,82605,16
F,0,0,469,0.5,0
S,1,0,469,1,1.02
L,90105,16
F,0,0,469,0.5,0
S,1,0,469,1,1.02
L,97605,16
F,0,0,469,0.5,0
S,1,0,469,1,1.02
L,105105,17
F,0,0,469,0.5,0
S,1,0,469,1,1.02
L,127605,16
F,0,0,469,0.5,0
S,1,0,469,1,1.02
L,135105,16
F,0,0,469,0.5,0
S,1,0,469,1,1.02
L,142605,17
F,0,0,469,0.5,0
S,1,0,469,1,1.02
Fixed
Easy
02:33:386 (1) - New combo needed?
Normal
Distance spacing has 0,6, thats why there is a whole list of distance mistakes in the AiMod... try to fix this
01:07:605 - Spacing changes
01:41:355 (5) - Here should start a new combo Fixed
01:44:636 (5) - ^ Fixed
01:48:386 (2) - ^ Fixed
02:22:136 (1) - Remove combo Fixed
Hard
Its a Hard not Insane, it acts like an Insane diff... imo its too hard
00:32:214 (1) - You wanted this combo row like this? Changed
00:47:448 (1,2,3,4) - Use symmetry for this pattern, it looks better and plays better (as in square) Not changed
00:52:605 (1) - Flip this one to the other side (Ctrl + H) 00:54:480 (2) - and this one too Fixed
01:14:401 (1,2,3) - Look at the distance
01:29:401 (1) - You wanted this combo row like this? Changed
01:39:245 (2,3,4,5,6) - Better to not use this in a Hard difficutlie, fits better in Insane's Not changed
01:42:292 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Not changed
01:49:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ Not changed
02:07:605 - Now the slider speed is up to 1,5 which is a sudden change and can confuse player, i would suggest to keep a constant speed. You're right, but the change is not so big.. From 1,3x to 1.5x
02:16:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What about this pattern? Not changed
02:25:651 (1,2,3) - Too close to the preview slider Not changed
02:30:105 - The distance changes suddenly, too sudden
02:37:605 - Mapp the part till here, it looks so interrupted, like the Easy and Normal difficultie I want to end mapping here °3°
Insane
2,7 Slider Velocity o.O for such a slow and grooving song I think its okay °3°
01:08:542 (1) - Remove combo Fixed
01:18:855 (2) - Please dont overlapp it :s Why? °^°
01:31:980 (3,4) - Move them a bit more down Fixed
01:37:019 (4) - From now on there are no sounds for this stream, dont mapp sounds which dont exist There are only 3 circle that in the song doesn't exist sounds, and it's not an error to make parts that doesn't exist o.o
02:00:339 (2) - One Grid left (Nazi) Fixed
02:03:855 (4,5,6) - Make symmetry with ^ Fixed
02:06:198 (4,5) - Change this to one slider ending here 02:06:433 - like you did before, because 02:06:667 - here is no sound Not fixed
02:09:011 - Maybe make a warning for the sudden slider speed change? Not fixed
02:20:730 (5,6,7,8,1) - Delete these and place a spinner? Would fit a lot better since you have a stream which follows Not fixed
02:31:042 (1,2,3) - This pattern is abit hard to play, maybe find another solution? It's insane diff °^°
02:37:605 - And again, mapp till here and start the spinner at the end I want to end mapping here °3°
Overall *thumps up* i've seen badder
Contact me ingame or write me a PM and we will make out which map you mod
thank you mod❤
Nice Map~❤Star
Nice Map~❤Star
Topic Starter
Thanks *o*Dagger-Gazel wrote:
thank you mod❤
Nice Map~❤Star
nice song~
General
Offset better start earlier or start at 30105 , because when use nightcore mod , u will know it , i suggest start at 30105 better
Insane
00:26:355 - add spinner? just like Hard difficult
00:30:105 (1) - give finish hitsound here, very fit to the song
00:46:042 (1) - move 1 grid up, symetric with (7)
00:54:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ctrl + j ??
01:26:355 (2,3) - ctrl + H ? because just like previous flow, a jump
01:33:151 (1) - curve it , look good like this
01:35:730 (4,5) - stacked not good imo, because i really like your jump before im suggest make (5) stack at 01:35:261 (2) - then for the stream stacked at (3) it will look like this
01:50:730 (3,4) - more space?
02:01:980 (3,4) - why not symetric to (1,2) ? , just like previous notes
02:21:901 (1) - move 2 grid left
overall is very nice, very relax for jump i can follow it well
Hard
01:07:605 (1) - make it more neat and blanket (2)
01:51:433 (8) - why stacked , i like 01:49:792 (1,3,5,7) - look, if stacked look bad .(8) should at x88y32
Revy's Normal
00:30:105 - you should start map here ( i know guest diff can start everywhere theywant, but i just give a suggest for better improve)
follow consistent distance snap, because normal and easy must have consistent distance snap... they all said that
01:45:573 (1,2,3,4) - try like this
02:14:167 (5,6) - too close, u better use distance snap
Pie's Easy
00:41:823 (1,3) - more curve, make a perfect blanket
code 1 :
overall look fine to play, but 1/4 notes look hard for newbie maybe
~~
General
Offset better start earlier or start at 30105 , because when use nightcore mod , u will know it , i suggest start at 30105 better
Insane
00:26:355 - add spinner? just like Hard difficult
00:30:105 (1) - give finish hitsound here, very fit to the song
00:46:042 (1) - move 1 grid up, symetric with (7)
00:54:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ctrl + j ??
01:26:355 (2,3) - ctrl + H ? because just like previous flow, a jump
01:33:151 (1) - curve it , look good like this
01:35:730 (4,5) - stacked not good imo, because i really like your jump before im suggest make (5) stack at 01:35:261 (2) - then for the stream stacked at (3) it will look like this
01:50:730 (3,4) - more space?
02:01:980 (3,4) - why not symetric to (1,2) ? , just like previous notes
02:21:901 (1) - move 2 grid left
overall is very nice, very relax for jump i can follow it well
Hard
01:07:605 (1) - make it more neat and blanket (2)
01:51:433 (8) - why stacked , i like 01:49:792 (1,3,5,7) - look, if stacked look bad .(8) should at x88y32
Revy's Normal
00:30:105 - you should start map here ( i know guest diff can start everywhere theywant, but i just give a suggest for better improve)
follow consistent distance snap, because normal and easy must have consistent distance snap... they all said that
01:45:573 (1,2,3,4) - try like this
02:14:167 (5,6) - too close, u better use distance snap
Pie's Easy
00:41:823 (1,3) - more curve, make a perfect blanket
code 1 :
256,308,41823,6,0,B|184:340|128:308|84:264|88:200,1,240,8|8code 2 :
152,92,43698,2,0,B|224:60|280:92|324:136|320:200,1,240,8|801:09:480 (2,3) - 1/4 ? i prefer this
overall look fine to play, but 1/4 notes look hard for newbie maybe
~~
I like this map overall. the central symmetry makes it seem like the map is mostly clustered in the center, though
[Hard]
01:42:292 (1,2,3,4) - fix the symmetry?
(no kds)
[Hard]
01:42:292 (1,2,3,4) - fix the symmetry?
(no kds)
Topic Starter
Thanks for mods :33
Your map is good. I didn't fing anything. Sorry! 
Do, not, make, this, map, graveyard.
Anyways, In Insane 02:37:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) -
I saw in the Wiki that you can't have more than 21 combos. (Something around this) Also, it's prefered to delete it since it's pretty repetitive and the combo is unrankable. The other difficulties ends at 02:37:605 without anything after this spinner. So make it consistent.
Do not kudo this.
Anyways, In Insane 02:37:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) -
I saw in the Wiki that you can't have more than 21 combos. (Something around this) Also, it's prefered to delete it since it's pretty repetitive and the combo is unrankable. The other difficulties ends at 02:37:605 without anything after this spinner. So make it consistent.
Do not kudo this.
Topic Starter
I DON'T WANT THIS MAP GRAVEYARD ;w;Gabe wrote:
Do, not, make, this, map, graveyard.
Anyways, In Insane 02:37:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) -
I saw in the Wiki that you can't have more than 21 combos. (Something around this) Also, it's prefered to delete it since it's pretty repetitive and the combo is unrankable. The other difficulties ends at 02:37:605 without anything after this spinner. So make it consistent.
Do not kudo this.
I'll delete that part :3 And thanks
mod4mod
Easy
01:29:636 (1,2,3,4) - like this? http://puu.sh/1524N
02:15:573 (3) - make blanket http://puu.sh/15265
Normal
01:41:355 (5,1,2,3) - like this http://puu.sh/1529j
Hard
01:08:542 (3) - NC same pattern as 02:07:605 (1) -
02:19:792 (1,2,3,4) - like this blanket ?http://puu.sh/152go
02:27:292 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ http://puu.sh/152ja
Insane
01:22:605 (4) - http://puu.sh/152n5 it' make better flow imo
02:07:605 (4) - ctr + R
02:16:042 (1,2) - CTR+H
That's all
Easy
01:29:636 (1,2,3,4) - like this? http://puu.sh/1524N
02:15:573 (3) - make blanket http://puu.sh/15265
Normal
01:41:355 (5,1,2,3) - like this http://puu.sh/1529j
Hard
01:08:542 (3) - NC same pattern as 02:07:605 (1) -
02:19:792 (1,2,3,4) - like this blanket ?http://puu.sh/152go
02:27:292 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ http://puu.sh/152ja
Insane
01:22:605 (4) - http://puu.sh/152n5 it' make better flow imo
02:07:605 (4) - ctr + R
02:16:042 (1,2) - CTR+H
That's all
Thx for mod ^.^Laurier wrote:
Easy
01:29:636 (1,2,3,4) - like this? http://puu.sh/1524N <--- Not think
02:15:573 (3) - make blanket http://puu.sh/15265 <--- fixed
Topic Starter
Thanks
Got sent to check the Offset, appears to be late to me - 26343 lets me get an SS with 0-1ms off in test, so I suggest that (-12 from your current).
giO-
M4M~
[Generale]
Se noti hai 2 file .osb http://puu.sh/17Zud
Lascia solo quello con il tuo nuovo nick.
[Pie's Easy]
You need to resnap ALL Timing Section (the green lines)
00:36:186 (3,1) - this overlap http://puu.sh/17ZyS
01:29:624 (1) - move this on x:160 y:208 http://puu.sh/17ZIN
01:35:249 (3) - x:244 y:120?
02:08:061 - maybe you can add a beat here
02:23:061 - ^
[Revy's Normal]
Anche qui tutte le Timing Section da resnappare.
00:38:061 - clap a fine slider
00:38:530 - qua ci starebbe un beat
00:39:468 (3) - fallo finire su 00:39:936 - e aggiungi un beat qui 00:40:405 - http://puu.sh/17ZW9 http://puu.sh/17ZWr
00:39:936 - clap a fine slider se hai seguito il suggerimento sopra ^
00:40:874 (5) - new combo eliminandola da 00:41:343 (1) - http://puu.sh/17ZYB
00:48:139 (4) - fai finire questo slider su 00:48:374 - e metti un clap alla fine http://puu.sh/1803g suona molto meglio http://puu.sh/18040
00:48:139 (4) - clap a fine slider
01:24:468 (2) - allora, ti consiglio per seguire bene il ritmo di accorciare questo slider fino a 01:24:702 - dopodichè accorci pure 01:25:405 (3) - spostandolo su 01:25:639 - , e fin qui dovresti avere una cosa simile: http://puu.sh/1809t , fatto questo aggiungi un altro minislider da 01:24:936 - a 01:25:171 - e sentirai che gli slider seguono bene il ritmo di questa parte
per quanto riguarda invece i clap dovrai toglierlo da 01:24:702 - e aggiungerlo al nuovo slider su 01:24:936 - (tick bianco)
In ogni caso ecco il codice che puoi rimpiazzare e dopo sistemi tu la disposizione degli slider come ti piace:
01:39:468 (3) - stesso discorso sul ritmo, accorcia lo slider fino a 01:39:702 - e aggiungi un repeat , accorcia pure lo slider 01:40:405 (4) - e spostalo su 01:40:171 - e aggiungi un beat qua 01:40:874 - risultato: http://puu.sh/180nT
Ecco pure qua il Codice
02:07:593 (1,2) - i don't like overlap :v
02:10:405 (5,1,2) - anzichè 3 sliders uguali potresti fare qualcosa di diverso qui
02:22:124 (1) - rimuovi NC?
[Hard]
Come detto per le precedenti diffs anche qui bisogna fare un Resnap di tutte le Timing Section
01:13:686 (4) - CTRL+R?
01:28:218 (3) - qua il whistle non ci sta, intendo sul tick bianco, lascialo solo nel tick rosso
01:45:561 (3) - spostalo su x:256 y:188
02:20:718 (3) - leva il whistle dal tick bianco pure qui
[Insane]
01:37:007 (4) - prova a sentire come sembra cancellando questo beat, se segui il consiglio metti NC su 01:37:124 (5) - eliminandola su 01:37:593 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/441651
01:39:936 (7) - clap anzichè whistle?
02:03:843 (4,5,6) - migliora il triangolo, sposta 02:04:311 (6) - su x:380 y: 188
02:33:608 (3) - questo slider suona male
Buona fortuna!
[Generale]
Se noti hai 2 file .osb http://puu.sh/17Zud
Lascia solo quello con il tuo nuovo nick.
[Pie's Easy]
You need to resnap ALL Timing Section (the green lines)
00:36:186 (3,1) - this overlap
http://puu.sh/17ZyS01:29:624 (1) - move this on x:160 y:208 http://puu.sh/17ZIN
01:35:249 (3) - x:244 y:120?
02:08:061 - maybe you can add a beat here
02:23:061 - ^
[Revy's Normal]
Anche qui tutte le Timing Section da resnappare.
00:38:061 - clap a fine slider
00:38:530 - qua ci starebbe un beat
00:39:468 (3) - fallo finire su 00:39:936 - e aggiungi un beat qui 00:40:405 - http://puu.sh/17ZW9 http://puu.sh/17ZWr
00:39:936 - clap a fine slider se hai seguito il suggerimento sopra ^
00:40:874 (5) - new combo eliminandola da 00:41:343 (1) - http://puu.sh/17ZYB
00:48:139 (4) - fai finire questo slider su 00:48:374 - e metti un clap alla fine http://puu.sh/1803g suona molto meglio http://puu.sh/18040
00:48:139 (4) - clap a fine slider
01:24:468 (2) - allora, ti consiglio per seguire bene il ritmo di accorciare questo slider fino a 01:24:702 - dopodichè accorci pure 01:25:405 (3) - spostandolo su 01:25:639 - , e fin qui dovresti avere una cosa simile: http://puu.sh/1809t , fatto questo aggiungi un altro minislider da 01:24:936 - a 01:25:171 - e sentirai che gli slider seguono bene il ritmo di questa parte
per quanto riguarda invece i clap dovrai toglierlo da 01:24:702 - e aggiungerlo al nuovo slider su 01:24:936 - (tick bianco)
In ogni caso ecco il codice che puoi rimpiazzare e dopo sistemi tu la disposizione degli slider come ti piace:
64,128,84468,2,0,B|132:92,1,63.7500024318696,0|0
172,64,84936,2,0,B|248:76,1,63.7500024318696,8|0
192,192,85639,2,0,B|272:192,1,63.7500024318696,0|8
01:39:468 (3) - stesso discorso sul ritmo, accorcia lo slider fino a 01:39:702 - e aggiungi un repeat , accorcia pure lo slider 01:40:405 (4) - e spostalo su 01:40:171 - e aggiungi un beat qua 01:40:874 - risultato: http://puu.sh/180nT
Ecco pure qua il Codice
184,88,99468,2,0,B|260:88,2,63.7500024318696,0|0|8
216,176,100171,2,0,B|304:176,1,63.7500024318696,0|0
248,264,100874,1,8
02:07:593 (1,2) - i don't like overlap :v
02:10:405 (5,1,2) - anzichè 3 sliders uguali potresti fare qualcosa di diverso qui
02:22:124 (1) - rimuovi NC?
[Hard]
Come detto per le precedenti diffs anche qui bisogna fare un Resnap di tutte le Timing Section
01:13:686 (4) - CTRL+R?
01:28:218 (3) - qua il whistle non ci sta, intendo sul tick bianco, lascialo solo nel tick rosso
01:45:561 (3) - spostalo su x:256 y:188
02:20:718 (3) - leva il whistle dal tick bianco pure qui
[Insane]
01:37:007 (4) - prova a sentire come sembra cancellando questo beat, se segui il consiglio metti NC su 01:37:124 (5) - eliminandola su 01:37:593 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/441651
01:39:936 (7) - clap anzichè whistle?
02:03:843 (4,5,6) - migliora il triangolo, sposta 02:04:311 (6) - su x:380 y: 188
02:33:608 (3) - questo slider suona male
Buona fortuna!
Hi Roxas, modding random high SP maps.
[General]
Meh, vediamo. La easy è ok, la Normal con tutti i suggerimenti che ho dato migliorerebbe un casino.
Riguardo la Hard e Insane il ritmo è molto buono e segue la musica, ma, nonostante questo, hanno ancora bisogno di molto lavoro sul flow.
Ti suggerisco vivamente di utilizzare più curved slider che rendono la mappa scorrevole da giocare ma specialmente di non utilizzare quei random huge e fastidiosi spacing :\
Boh non so, secondo me prima di ottenere la bolla devi lavorare di più sull'insane e la hard :\
Sarò felice di aiutarti più avanti, per ora cerca di ottenere più mod e di migliorare il flow in entrambe le maps ;3
Buona fortuna Roxas ;3
[General]
- Perchè flo rida come tag? Dovrebbe essere Florida o è proprio così? O:
- Why 1.00x spacing for an easy diff? :\
- 00:30:093 (1) - Add finish to emphasize the cymbals in the song
- 00:41:811 (1,3) - Personally I think that sliders like this break the flow of your map. What about to make this pattern like this? I think it's more flowing and enjoyable to play:SPOILER
224,303,41811,6,0,B|154:329|76:281|63:211|97:150,1,240,8|8
208,184,43218,1,0
184,68,43686,2,0,B|253:42|331:89|344:159|310:220,1,240,8|8 - 00:57:280 (2) - CTRL + R flows much better IMO http://puu.sh/1bToN
- 01:27:280 (3) - ^
- 02:15:093 (2,3) - This pattern looks odd to me. Listening the music I think this one would fit the song much better: http://puu.sh/1bTti
- Attualmente la tua mappa è unrankabile. Affinchè una mappa sia rankabile devi mappare almeno l'80% della song. Detto questo devi iniziare a mappare da dove ha iniziato katty
- Perchè hai mappato l'intera mappa in 0.75x e solo la fine in 1.00x? Nope.. Riduci il DistanceSpacing dal .osu se pensi che lo spacing sia troppo grande con 1.00x per l'intera mappa
- 00:48:139 (4) - Questo slider confonde parecchio visto che stai usando un timing con 0.50x. Siccome dovrebbe esserci un clap sulla tick bianca rimuovi questo slider e aggiungi solamente un circle con clap su 00:48:374 per mantenere il ritmo 1/1
- 01:13:218 (3,4,5) - Non mi piace come hai posizionato questi circle :\ Fai qualcosa così che secondo me flowwa molto meglio:SPOILER
316,204,73218,2,0,B|252:184|184:204,1,127.500004863739,0|8
136,236,73921,1,0
184,92,74389,2,0,B|184:24,1,63.749998100102,0|8 - 01:14:389 (5,6,7) - Usa lo stesso spacing che hai usato per 01:10:639 (5,6,7)
- 01:26:343 (1) - Siccome è una normal invece di usare sempre il solito 1/1 ritmo nel ritornello usa uno slider 1/2 con un repeat invece, che segue la musica molto meglio:SPOILER
428,260,86343,6,0,B|464:324,2,63.7500024318696,0|0|8
448,128,87280,2,0,B|384:128|352:96|320:64,1,127.499996200204,0|8 - 01:28:686 (4,5,1) - Non mi piace come hai posizionato questi 3 circle ed inoltre con questo spacing sono davvero brutti da vedere. Per seguire meglio il ritmo fai qualcosa come questo invece: SPOILER
96,116,88686,2,0,B|92:156|60:172,1,63.7500024318696,8|0
132,280,89389,6,0,B|144:240|184:216,1,63.7500024318696,0|8
288,256,90093,2,0,B|416:256,1,127.499996200204,0|8 - 01:31:968 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Guarda, non mi piacciono proprio il ritmo e i pattern che hai usato qui xD Ti ho fatto un ritmo e un pattern fighissimo, usalo plz (Non ho screenato ogni singola parte perchè mi annoiavo, ma è figherrimo fidati nabbo <3):SPOILER
84,104,92436,2,0,B|124:104|148:72,1,63.7500024318696,8|0
256,24,93139,6,0,B|256:88,1,63.7500024318696,0|8
370,80,93843,2,0,B|388:104|428:104,2,63.7500024318696,0|0|8
320,196,94780,2,0,B|256:224|192:196,1,127.500004863739,0|8
136,84,95718,1,0
256,40,96186,2,0,B|256:104,1,63.749998100102,8|0 - 01:38:061 (3) - Usi 1/2 slider quando non seguono la musica? xD Mh, rimuovi questo slider e usa solo un circle. Oppure uno slider 1/1 che inizia qui e finisce su 01:38:530 rimuovendo (1)
- 01:39:468 (3,4,5,6,1) - Non usare sempre lo stesso ripetitivo ritmo 1/1. Usa questo pattern invece che segue la musica ed è anche scorrevole e piacevole da giocare:SPOILER
184,88,99468,2,0,B|244:112|312:88,1,127.500004863739,0|8
364,52,100171,1,0
416,168,100639,2,0,B|408:204|440:236,1,63.7500024318696,0|8
364,336,101343,2,0,B|300:356|236:336,1,127.500004863739,0|8
300,224,102280,5,0
416,168,102749,1,8 - 01:43:686 (4,5) - Eh, già lo sai.. Usa qualche 1/2 slider (Ti ho sistemato anche i circle successivi) : SPOILER
284,84,103686,2,0,B|268:120|224:124,1,63.7500024318696,8|0
116,84,104389,6,0,B|132:48|176:44,2,63.7500024318696,0|8|0
56,52,105093,1,4
56,180,105561,5,8
120,288,106030,1,0
248,296,106499,1,8
312,172,106968,1,0 - 01:47:436 (1) - Di nuovo ççSPOILER
384,84,107436,6,0,B|400:120|456:128,1,63.7500024318696,8|0
448,248,108139,2,0,B|476:264|480:304,2,63.7500024318696,0|8|0
400,208,108843,1,0
324,312,109311,5,8
256,204,109780,1,0
324,96,110249,1,8
204,60,110718,1,0 - 02:07:593 (1) a 02:32:436 (4) - Segui gli stessi 1/2 ritmi che ti ho detto sopra plz.. Se hai bisogno di una mano chiedi in game.
- Tutta la song mappata in 1.30x? Che bisogno c'è? Apri il file con il notepad ed imposta DistanceSpacing: 1
- 00:30:327 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sinceramente non capisco il motivo per il quale hai mappato tutta questa parte solo con un ritmo 1/4.
- 01:14:389 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing come questo è veramente fastidioso da giocare, credimi :\ Potresti mappare qualcosa tipo così: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/452175
- 01:21:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Meh, che brutto spacing da giocare :\
- 01:49:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Questo pattern confonde visto che non hai usato piu lo stesso spacing per 01:51:186 (7,8) mettendoli vicini.
- 02:25:639 (1,2,3,4) - Questi elements dovrebbero essere più lontani da 02:24:702 (4).
- 00:32:202 (1) - Reverse arrow completamente coperto dall'hitburst 00:30:796 (5,3). Unrankabile\
- 01:27:280 (1,2,3,4) - Why square.
- 01:46:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Non sai quanto possa essere brutto e rompipalle questo pattern da giocare, lol.
Meh, vediamo. La easy è ok, la Normal con tutti i suggerimenti che ho dato migliorerebbe un casino.
Riguardo la Hard e Insane il ritmo è molto buono e segue la musica, ma, nonostante questo, hanno ancora bisogno di molto lavoro sul flow.
Ti suggerisco vivamente di utilizzare più curved slider che rendono la mappa scorrevole da giocare ma specialmente di non utilizzare quei random huge e fastidiosi spacing :\
Boh non so, secondo me prima di ottenere la bolla devi lavorare di più sull'insane e la hard :\
Sarò felice di aiutarti più avanti, per ora cerca di ottenere più mod e di migliorare il flow in entrambe le maps ;3
Buona fortuna Roxas ;3
I was modding that but seems like Chewin was faster and from what I can see he pointed most of stuff I could point aswell. I will wait until you fix all then I will mod it if you want.
Chewin wrote:
[Pie's Easy]<---- sounds the same~
- Why 1.00x spacing for an easy diff? :\ <--- bcz for Easy diffs It's ok~
- 00:30:093 (1) - Add finish to emphasize the cymbals in the song <--- added
- 00:41:811 (1,3) - Personally I think that sliders like this break the flow of your map. What about to make this pattern like this? I think it's more flowing and enjoyable to play:
SPOILER<--- no, I like my slider forms~224,303,41811,6,0,B|154:329|76:281|63:211|97:150,1,240,8|8
208,184,43218,1,0
184,68,43686,2,0,B|253:42|331:89|344:159|310:220,1,240,8|8- 00:57:280 (2) - CTRL + R flows much better IMO http://puu.sh/1bToN <--- fixed
- 01:27:280 (3) - ^ <--- fixed
- 02:15:093 (2,3) - This pattern looks odd to me. Listening the music I think this one would fit the song much better: http://puu.sh/1bTti
Thx for mod~
http://puu.sh/1cU3j
Topic Starter
Fixing Chewin's stuff, updated Katty Pie's diff, when ready I'll contact you Bass :3 and thanks **
[Pie's Easy]
- Pretty well made Easy.
- 00:38:061 (1) - I suggest not having an overlap with 00:36:186 (3). It doesn't look good IMO.
[Revy's Normal]
- Lots of inconsistent combos. I'll list them down separately.
- 00:41:343 (1) - The overlap with the slider looks ugly, but I unless you completely make a new pattern, I don't see how you can fix.
- 00:53:530 (1,1,2,3,4) - I would suggest switching the spinner and the sliders. Having the spinner lead into the break is better.
- 01:09:468 (4) - IMO using a simpler pattern first is better. I suggest you switch this with 01:13:218 (3,4).
- 01:21:889 (6,7,8) - Why did you deviate from your spacing here?
- 02:04:780 (1) - I suggest starting this at 02:03:843. It fits the music better.
- 02:07:593 (1,2) - Make these like this? Looks better IMO. Note: Small spacing changes like these are fine unlike above.
- 02:11:343 (1) - Reverse this (Ctrl+G) for better flow.
- 02:33:374 (1) - Add a note here then start the spinner at 02:33:843. It fits the song better IMO.
[Hard]
- Those long 1/4 streams at the start really fall under an Insane not a Hard. Please remove them.
- Apart from above, I liked how you mapped this diff. The patterns feel fresh and don't seem to be repeated that much.
- 01:20:718 (3,4,5) - I suggest flipping this vertically.
- 01:24:936 (6,7) - Stack these under (5) and (6) respectively? I don't see why you didn't stack them regularly.
- 01:48:843 (4) - Make this slider symmetrical? It would look better.
- 02:27:514 (2,3,4) - These sliders could have been constructed better
[Insane]
- Personally, the speed-up part (1.5x) was unneeded.
- 00:31:264 (1) - Remove new combo. You don't need to NC this to indicate a change in spacing.
- 02:04:780 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMO this pattern could be better made. Maybe something like this?
- Pretty well made Easy.
- 00:38:061 (1) - I suggest not having an overlap with 00:36:186 (3). It doesn't look good IMO.
[Revy's Normal]
- Lots of inconsistent combos. I'll list them down separately.
- 00:41:343 (1) - The overlap with the slider looks ugly, but I unless you completely make a new pattern, I don't see how you can fix.
- 00:53:530 (1,1,2,3,4) - I would suggest switching the spinner and the sliders. Having the spinner lead into the break is better.
- 01:09:468 (4) - IMO using a simpler pattern first is better. I suggest you switch this with 01:13:218 (3,4).
- 01:21:889 (6,7,8) - Why did you deviate from your spacing here?
- 02:04:780 (1) - I suggest starting this at 02:03:843. It fits the music better.
- 02:07:593 (1,2) - Make these like this? Looks better IMO. Note: Small spacing changes like these are fine unlike above.
- 02:11:343 (1) - Reverse this (Ctrl+G) for better flow.
- 02:33:374 (1) - Add a note here then start the spinner at 02:33:843. It fits the song better IMO.
Combo Mod
- 00:46:968 (1) - Remove new combo. To be consistent with your current combo scheme.
- 00:52:593 (5) - New combo. ^
- 01:26:343 (1,2) - Remove new combo (1) and new combo (2). To be consistent with your current combo scheme.
- 01:29:389 (1,2) - Same as above.
- 01:33:139 (1,2,3) - Remove new combo (1) and new combo (3). To be consistent with your current combo scheme.
- 01:37:124 (1) - Remove new combo. To be consistent with your current combo scheme.
- 01:44:389 (1) - Same as above.
- 01:47:436 (1) - Same as above.
- 02:22:124 (1) - I don't see why you need a new combo here.
- 00:52:593 (5) - New combo. ^
- 01:26:343 (1,2) - Remove new combo (1) and new combo (2). To be consistent with your current combo scheme.
- 01:29:389 (1,2) - Same as above.
- 01:33:139 (1,2,3) - Remove new combo (1) and new combo (3). To be consistent with your current combo scheme.
- 01:37:124 (1) - Remove new combo. To be consistent with your current combo scheme.
- 01:44:389 (1) - Same as above.
- 01:47:436 (1) - Same as above.
- 02:22:124 (1) - I don't see why you need a new combo here.
[Hard]
- Those long 1/4 streams at the start really fall under an Insane not a Hard. Please remove them.
- Apart from above, I liked how you mapped this diff. The patterns feel fresh and don't seem to be repeated that much.
- 01:20:718 (3,4,5) - I suggest flipping this vertically.
- 01:24:936 (6,7) - Stack these under (5) and (6) respectively? I don't see why you didn't stack them regularly.
- 01:48:843 (4) - Make this slider symmetrical? It would look better.
- 02:27:514 (2,3,4) - These sliders could have been constructed better
[Insane]
- Personally, the speed-up part (1.5x) was unneeded.
- 00:31:264 (1) - Remove new combo. You don't need to NC this to indicate a change in spacing.
- 02:04:780 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMO this pattern could be better made. Maybe something like this?
Thank you for mod :3NoHitter wrote:
[Pie's Easy]
- Pretty well made Easy. <--- thx ^.^
- 00:38:061 (1) - I suggest not having an overlap with 00:36:186 (3). It doesn't look good IMO. <--- fixed
http://puu.sh/1eO30
Mod from my Queue ~
must fix
should fix
I wanted to mention
Suggestion
[Pie's Easy]
00:30:093 (1,2) - These stacks are really not a good idea. Beginners are likely not to see that there is a note under the one they played ago. They can't know. Also this is 1/1 so you are able to space them on a neat way without this unneccesary stack
00:30:561 (2) - The start should have a finish as it is the same sound as on 1, where you put a finish
01:09:702 (3) - Hard to play for beginners, changing to a circle on 01:09:936 may be better
01:18:374 (1,2) - Same as 00:30:093
01:32:436 (5) - Move one grid back for perfect alligning
01:40:874 (1) - Very ugly shape, make it neater please
01:42:749 (4) - ^
02:01:030 (3,4) - Same as 00:30:093 + this plays even worse for beginners because of the straight allignment
02:19:311 (3,4) - ^
02:27:280 (4) - This is hard to read for beginners, because they are mostly looking to catch notes going on and the hitburst of 3 makes this even more difficult, consider placing 4 another way
* Neatly done, but I can see that there are some strange straight patterns like 01:44:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - which are not unrankable or bad, but I think there are too many of them and you should change up some of them
[Revy's Normal]
00:41:343 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl + H to kill this ugly overlap from 1 and 4
00:52:593 (1) - Ctrl + H looks better and remove NC because having this in a single combo doesnt make much sense
00:56:343 (4) - Remove finish on end. Doesnt sound good with clap at all
00:57:280 (1) - Missed finish on this Spinner
01:09:468 (4,5) - This one looks ugly ._. Try doing something like http://puu.sh/1fHJw
01:14:389 (5) - Should be NC, music is changing and splitting the combo up a bit is good imo
01:18:374 (5) - ^
01:21:889 (6) - ^
01:33:843 (6) - Add NC for your combo consistency
01:34:780 (1) - Remove NC here if you did^ of course
01:45:093 (6) - Start NC here for keeping the consistency
01:48:843 (7) - ^and maybe finish
02:25:874 (6) - Looks a bit random. Something like http://puu.sh/1fHRZ would be more pleasing.
02:32:436 (4) - Should have the same height as 2 http://puu.sh/1fHSW
* Not bad at all. Some patterns could be neater, but I feel that rhythm is pretty good
[Hard]
00:26:343 (1) - Add clap to the Spinner, in the music is a clap
00:34:194 (2,3,4,5,6) - Decrase the Spacing for this stream, it's too large for a Hard, you should remove them anyway, because streams like this are more Insane stuff
00:36:069 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:51:655 (5,6) - I don't like this touching. Either Stack them or space them out so that they don't touch each other
01:10:639 (1) - Whistles and claps on this Slider are much better than finish, sounds too loud
01:14:389 (1,2,3) - Finishes sound noisy ._.
01:19:780 (1,2,3) - Space them out, the touching is a bit annoying to play
01:21:889 (1,2) - Again, noisy finishes
01:43:218 (3) - Ctrl + G o.o letting this go into this circle plays sooo strange
02:11:343 (4) - You shouldnt make this Slider a strange line, plays oddly
02:16:264 (2,3) - Space them out
02:18:843 (4) - This direction also plays really strange
* This also needs some cleaning up and removing from strange straight Sliders
This is all for now :3
Good luck for this ~
must fix
should fix
I wanted to mention
Suggestion
[Pie's Easy]
00:30:093 (1,2) - These stacks are really not a good idea. Beginners are likely not to see that there is a note under the one they played ago. They can't know. Also this is 1/1 so you are able to space them on a neat way without this unneccesary stack
00:30:561 (2) - The start should have a finish as it is the same sound as on 1, where you put a finish
01:09:702 (3) - Hard to play for beginners, changing to a circle on 01:09:936 may be better
01:18:374 (1,2) - Same as 00:30:093
01:32:436 (5) - Move one grid back for perfect alligning
01:40:874 (1) - Very ugly shape, make it neater please
01:42:749 (4) - ^
02:01:030 (3,4) - Same as 00:30:093 + this plays even worse for beginners because of the straight allignment
02:19:311 (3,4) - ^
02:27:280 (4) - This is hard to read for beginners, because they are mostly looking to catch notes going on and the hitburst of 3 makes this even more difficult, consider placing 4 another way
* Neatly done, but I can see that there are some strange straight patterns like 01:44:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - which are not unrankable or bad, but I think there are too many of them and you should change up some of them
[Revy's Normal]
00:41:343 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl + H to kill this ugly overlap from 1 and 4
00:52:593 (1) - Ctrl + H looks better and remove NC because having this in a single combo doesnt make much sense
00:56:343 (4) - Remove finish on end. Doesnt sound good with clap at all
00:57:280 (1) - Missed finish on this Spinner
01:09:468 (4,5) - This one looks ugly ._. Try doing something like http://puu.sh/1fHJw
01:14:389 (5) - Should be NC, music is changing and splitting the combo up a bit is good imo
01:18:374 (5) - ^
01:21:889 (6) - ^
01:33:843 (6) - Add NC for your combo consistency
01:34:780 (1) - Remove NC here if you did^ of course
01:45:093 (6) - Start NC here for keeping the consistency
01:48:843 (7) - ^and maybe finish
02:25:874 (6) - Looks a bit random. Something like http://puu.sh/1fHRZ would be more pleasing.
02:32:436 (4) - Should have the same height as 2 http://puu.sh/1fHSW
* Not bad at all. Some patterns could be neater, but I feel that rhythm is pretty good
[Hard]
00:26:343 (1) - Add clap to the Spinner, in the music is a clap
00:34:194 (2,3,4,5,6) - Decrase the Spacing for this stream, it's too large for a Hard, you should remove them anyway, because streams like this are more Insane stuff
00:36:069 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:51:655 (5,6) - I don't like this touching. Either Stack them or space them out so that they don't touch each other
01:10:639 (1) - Whistles and claps on this Slider are much better than finish, sounds too loud
01:14:389 (1,2,3) - Finishes sound noisy ._.
01:19:780 (1,2,3) - Space them out, the touching is a bit annoying to play
01:21:889 (1,2) - Again, noisy finishes
01:43:218 (3) - Ctrl + G o.o letting this go into this circle plays sooo strange
02:11:343 (4) - You shouldnt make this Slider a strange line, plays oddly
02:16:264 (2,3) - Space them out
02:18:843 (4) - This direction also plays really strange
* This also needs some cleaning up and removing from strange straight Sliders
This is all for now :3
Good luck for this ~
Topic Starter
Konei wrote:
[Hard]
00:26:343 (1) - Add clap to the Spinner, in the music is a clap _Fixed
00:34:194 (2,3,4,5,6) - Decrase the Spacing for this stream, it's too large for a Hard, you should remove them anyway, because streams like this are more Insane stuff Not fixed I think it's ok for a hard
00:36:069 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
00:51:655 (5,6) - I don't like this touching. Either Stack them or space them out so that they don't touch each other _Fixed
01:10:639 (1) - Whistles and claps on this Slider are much better than finish, sounds too loud _Fixed
01:14:389 (1,2,3) - Finishes sound noisy ._. _Fixed
01:19:780 (1,2,3) - Space them out, the touching is a bit annoying to play _Fixed
01:21:889 (1,2) - Again, noisy finishes _Fixed
01:43:218 (3) - Ctrl + G o.o letting this go into this circle plays sooo strange _Fixed
02:11:343 (4) - You shouldnt make this Slider a strange line, plays oddly _Fixed
02:16:264 (2,3) - Space them out _Fixed
02:18:843 (4) - This direction also plays really strange _Fixed
* This also needs some cleaning up and removing from strange straight Sliders
This is all for now :3
Good luck for this ~
Hello! M4M here~~
Lets see.
[General]
Offset 26348 (+5 on current) sounds much better to me.
Remember to resnap all lines and notes after doing this.
[Easy]
00:30:093 (3) - New combo here, kind of a must.
*try to keep your combos under 5-ish in easy diffs. Also I don't really suggest to use NC on pattern shape changes, but in MUSIC changes, for example, using NCs in big white ticks. But now it's already done though, just remember this for the future.
00:41:811 (1,2) - make this blanket better:
00:46:030 (2) - Then stack this slider's end to the previous long slider's end.
00:46:968 (3) - This shape is too sharp and doesn't fit with the previous curved stuff, maybe make it more curved and less sharp (and the next slider too)
01:08:530 (1) - This should be more centered, because in easier diffs, every note after a spinner must be close to the center so the player doesn't screw up (beginners use to screw up if you don't do this)
01:22:129 (1) - Clap here, for consistency with the previous notes.
01:40:874 (1) - Move the middle point a bit up so it isn't so sharp (http://puu.sh/1kfaP)
01:42:749 (4) - ^
01:48:374 (1) - http://puu.sh/1kfch?
02:23:530 (1) - Maybe move a bit closer to the center for the same reason
[Normal]
00:30:093 (x) - - Start the map here as Easy diff for concistency... you waste a lot of the mp3 otherwise.
00:45:561 (2) - Make it not overlap (4)
01:09:936 (5) - This looks ugly, make these 2 sliders touch a little less with each other.
02:07:593 (1) - Same as I said on easy, move this more to the centre of the playfield
02:12:280 (2) - NC here and remove NC from the last slider
[Hard]
00:41:577 (1) - These sliders should start on WHITE ticks. That is where the upbeat is. Move all of them 1 tick backwards so they start at white ticks and remove 00:41:343 (6) -
01:17:202 (4) - Why such a weird shape? Make a simple curve instead
01:18:139 (1) - Make it not touch 01:17:671 (5) -
[Insane]
00:30:327 (2) - I don't understeand why did you put so many random triplets here. Better put nice and catchy streams like hard... this doesn't fit
01:14:389 (1) - Very unnecessary and unfitting jump. Use jumps only when the music sounds like there should be a jump. Also this is too huge, decrease its distance.
01:24:936 (6) - BANANA SLIDERRRRRRR make this better:
02:18:843 (3) - BANANA SLIDERRRRR fix it, make it perfect >:C
That is all, but I didn't like this diff that much. It's too linear and sharp idk.. like so symmetryc and straight and squares and asdifjaisdjfasf xDDD but now it's to late though D: try to make it a bit more curve in your next maps.. more... like with more flow.
Good luck!! :3
Lets see.
[General]
Offset 26348 (+5 on current) sounds much better to me.
Remember to resnap all lines and notes after doing this.
[Easy]
00:30:093 (3) - New combo here, kind of a must.
*try to keep your combos under 5-ish in easy diffs. Also I don't really suggest to use NC on pattern shape changes, but in MUSIC changes, for example, using NCs in big white ticks. But now it's already done though, just remember this for the future.
00:41:811 (1,2) - make this blanket better:
00:46:030 (2) - Then stack this slider's end to the previous long slider's end.
00:46:968 (3) - This shape is too sharp and doesn't fit with the previous curved stuff, maybe make it more curved and less sharp (and the next slider too)
01:08:530 (1) - This should be more centered, because in easier diffs, every note after a spinner must be close to the center so the player doesn't screw up (beginners use to screw up if you don't do this)
01:22:129 (1) - Clap here, for consistency with the previous notes.
01:40:874 (1) - Move the middle point a bit up so it isn't so sharp (http://puu.sh/1kfaP)
01:42:749 (4) - ^
01:48:374 (1) - http://puu.sh/1kfch?
02:23:530 (1) - Maybe move a bit closer to the center for the same reason
[Normal]
00:30:093 (x) - - Start the map here as Easy diff for concistency... you waste a lot of the mp3 otherwise.
00:45:561 (2) - Make it not overlap (4)
01:09:936 (5) - This looks ugly, make these 2 sliders touch a little less with each other.
02:07:593 (1) - Same as I said on easy, move this more to the centre of the playfield
02:12:280 (2) - NC here and remove NC from the last slider
[Hard]
00:41:577 (1) - These sliders should start on WHITE ticks. That is where the upbeat is. Move all of them 1 tick backwards so they start at white ticks and remove 00:41:343 (6) -
01:17:202 (4) - Why such a weird shape? Make a simple curve instead
01:18:139 (1) - Make it not touch 01:17:671 (5) -
[Insane]
00:30:327 (2) - I don't understeand why did you put so many random triplets here. Better put nice and catchy streams like hard... this doesn't fit
01:14:389 (1) - Very unnecessary and unfitting jump. Use jumps only when the music sounds like there should be a jump. Also this is too huge, decrease its distance.
01:24:936 (6) - BANANA SLIDERRRRRRR make this better:
02:18:843 (3) - BANANA SLIDERRRRR fix it, make it perfect >:C
That is all, but I didn't like this diff that much. It's too linear and sharp idk.. like so symmetryc and straight and squares and asdifjaisdjfasf xDDD but now it's to late though D: try to make it a bit more curve in your next maps.. more... like with more flow.
Good luck!! :3
Topic Starter
Snepif wrote:
Hello! M4M here~~
Lets see.
[General]
Offset 26348 (+5 on current) sounds much better to me.
Remember to resnap all lines and notes after doing this.
[Easy]
00:30:093 (3) - New combo here, kind of a must.
*try to keep your combos under 5-ish in easy diffs. Also I don't really suggest to use NC on pattern shape changes, but in MUSIC changes, for example, using NCs in big white ticks. But now it's already done though, just remember this for the future.
00:41:811 (1,2) - make this blanket better:
00:46:030 (2) - Then stack this slider's end to the previous long slider's end.
00:46:968 (3) - This shape is too sharp and doesn't fit with the previous curved stuff, maybe make it more curved and less sharp (and the next slider too)
01:08:530 (1) - This should be more centered, because in easier diffs, every note after a spinner must be close to the center so the player doesn't screw up (beginners use to screw up if you don't do this)
01:22:129 (1) - Clap here, for consistency with the previous notes.
01:40:874 (1) - Move the middle point a bit up so it isn't so sharp (http://puu.sh/1kfaP)
01:42:749 (4) - ^
01:48:374 (1) - http://puu.sh/1kfch?
02:23:530 (1) - Maybe move a bit closer to the center for the same reason
[Normal]
00:30:093 (x) - - Start the map here as Easy diff for concistency... you waste a lot of the mp3 otherwise.
00:45:561 (2) - Make it not overlap (4)
01:09:936 (5) - This looks ugly, make these 2 sliders touch a little less with each other.
02:07:593 (1) - Same as I said on easy, move this more to the centre of the playfield
02:12:280 (2) - NC here and remove NC from the last slider
[Hard]
00:41:577 (1) - These sliders should start on WHITE ticks. That is where the upbeat is. Move all of them 1 tick backwards so they start at white ticks and remove 00:41:343 (6) -
01:17:202 (4) - Why such a weird shape? Make a simple curve instead
01:18:139 (1) - Make it not touch 01:17:671 (5) -
All updated XD
[Insane]
00:30:327 (2) - I don't understeand why did you put so many random triplets here. Better put nice and catchy streams like hard... this doesn't fit Not fixed
01:14:389 (1) - Very unnecessary and unfitting jump. Use jumps only when the music sounds like there should be a jump. Also this is too huge, decrease its distance. Fixed
01:24:936 (6) - BANANA SLIDERRRRRRR make this better: BANANA FIXEEEEED
02:18:843 (3) - BANANA SLIDERRRRR fix it, make it perfect >:C BANANA FIXEEEEED XD
That is all, but I didn't like this diff that much. It's too linear and sharp idk.. like so symmetryc and straight and squares and asdifjaisdjfasf xDDD but now it's to late though D: try to make it a bit more curve in your next maps.. more... like with more flow. Thanks :3 It's only my "first" map I have done much better works XD
Good luck!! :3
Hi there~~ mod from queue~~
red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions
[General]
Generally the quality is okay, so i'd like to give you a chance in spite of those issues. Give me a call when you're ready :>
red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions
[General]
- Inconsistent TitleUnicode & ArtistUnicode, you must make them same as Title/Artist if your title/artist is English or other alphabetical language.
- Tags: Capitalize first letter
- About slider tick rate: 2 in Easy but 1 in Normal is ... weird.. you know, and then also 2 in Hard but 1 in Insane.... i'd like to suggest a better spread like STR1 to E/N and 2 to N/I, or all 1 or all 2 .. etc.
- About Kiai Time: from 01:37:598 - to 01:52:598 - is much better than 01:22:598 - imo, i'd like to choose only a fountain at 01:22:598 - , and move first kiai to 01:37:598 -
- 01:10:639 (6) - suggest a NC here to avoid long combo.
- 01:14:389 (5) - ^
- 01:18:374 (5) - ^
- 01:21:889 (6) - ^. Generally, it is better to make the combo length of E/N no more than 6 :>
- 02:11:343 (6) - Move next NC to here
- 02:30:561 (2,3,4) - the right angles are looks odd... try to make it more smooth? e.g. add an extra node like this:
- 00:34:199 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I suppose this kinda stream is too hard for a hard diff. Also 00:36:074 (2,3,4,5,6) - etc. Perhaps, kick slider is a good choice to instead?
- 00:51:660 (5) - clap at end is unnecessary imo
- 01:19:316 (4) - add a whistle here?
- 01:34:316 (6) - ^ at head?
- Stack Leniency: I can understand why you choose such a low value, but it require a leniency if the interval of two note at same position no more than 1/1 beat. So i think you must choose 7.
- 00:30:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ugly shapes... to be honest it's a bad placement, i think you have lots of better choices. Compare with the other patterns following, it's looked worse...
- 00:32:676 (2) - here's a hidden reverse arrow due to the scoreburst. Anyway, it could be resolved easily if you choose to remake prev pattern :>
- 01:36:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe you can make an increasing volumn here
- 02:13:691 (5,6) - ctrl+g for better flow?
- 02:16:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i'd like to make a Star shape here
Generally the quality is okay, so i'd like to give you a chance in spite of those issues. Give me a call when you're ready :>
Topic Starter
Really thanks Scorpiour *^*Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~ mod from queue~~
red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions
[General]
- Inconsistent TitleUnicode & ArtistUnicode, you must make them same as Title/Artist if your title/artist is English or other alphabetical language. Fixed
- Tags: Capitalize first letter Fixed
- About slider tick rate: 2 in Easy but 1 in Normal is ... weird.. you know, and then also 2 in Hard but 1 in Insane.... i'd like to suggest a better spread like STR1 to E/N and 2 to N/I, or all 1 or all 2 .. etc. Fixed
- About Kiai Time: from 01:37:598 - to 01:52:598 - is much better than 01:22:598 - imo, i'd like to choose only a fountain at 01:22:598 - , and move first kiai to 01:37:598 - Fixed
[Revy's Normal][Hard]
- 01:10:639 (6) - suggest a NC here to avoid long combo. Fixed
- 01:14:389 (5) - ^ Fixed
- 01:18:374 (5) - ^ Fixed
- 01:21:889 (6) - ^. Generally, it is better to make the combo length of E/N no more than 6 :> Fixed
- 02:11:343 (6) - Move next NC to here Fixed
- 02:30:561 (2,3,4) - the right angles are looks odd... try to make it more smooth? e.g. add an extra node like this: Fixed
[Insane]
- 00:34:199 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I suppose this kinda stream is too hard for a hard diff. Also 00:36:074 (2,3,4,5,6) - etc. Perhaps, kick slider is a good choice to instead? Fixed
- 00:51:660 (5) - clap at end is unnecessary imo Fixed
- 01:19:316 (4) - add a whistle here? Not fixed sorry
- 01:34:316 (6) - ^ at head? Not fixed sorry
That's all.
- Stack Leniency: I can understand why you choose such a low value, but it require a leniency if the interval of two note at same position no more than 1/1 beat. So i think you must choose 7. Fixed
- 00:30:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ugly shapes... to be honest it's a bad placement, i think you have lots of better choices. Compare with the other patterns following, it's looked worse... Fixed
- 00:32:676 (2) - here's a hidden reverse arrow due to the scoreburst. Anyway, it could be resolved easily if you choose to remake prev pattern :> Fixed
- 01:36:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe you can make an increasing volumn here Fixed
- 02:13:691 (5,6) - ctrl+g for better flow? Fixed
- 02:16:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i'd like to make a Star shape here Fixed
Generally the quality is okay, so i'd like to give you a chance in spite of those issues. Give me a call when you're ready :>
AMAZING, RANK THIS SONG NAO 
But seriously, great job.
But seriously, great job.
Topic Starter
Ahaha thanksKiosk14 wrote:
AMAZING, RANK THIS SONG NAO
But seriously, great job.
PFF CHE MERDA, MEGLIO LA MIA LEVELS.
[Pie's Easy]
Ar-1
02:02:436 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/488720
[Revy's Normal]
02:07:124 - Add a beat
[Hard]
01:17:202 (4) - Metti un reverse e togli il beat che c'è dopo
01:24:936 (6,7) - Sono difficili da leggere, secondo me meglio mettere tipo uno slider con reverse al posto del 5 oppure semplicemente spostare i beat
01:30:093 (4) - Metti un reverse e togli il beat che c'è dopo
02:08:061 (2) - Non è stackato con la fine dello slider, stackalo.
[Insane]
02:03:144 (1,2,3) - Più distanziati
[Pie's Easy]
Ar-1
02:02:436 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/488720
[Revy's Normal]
02:07:124 - Add a beat
[Hard]
01:17:202 (4) - Metti un reverse e togli il beat che c'è dopo
01:24:936 (6,7) - Sono difficili da leggere, secondo me meglio mettere tipo uno slider con reverse al posto del 5 oppure semplicemente spostare i beat
01:30:093 (4) - Metti un reverse e togli il beat che c'è dopo
02:08:061 (2) - Non è stackato con la fine dello slider, stackalo.
[Insane]
02:03:144 (1,2,3) - Più distanziati
Topic Starter
SPARAMI LA STELLA <3Kiyro wrote:
PFF CHE MERDA, MEGLIO LA MIA LEVELS. Sucamelo pls.
[Revy's Normal]
02:07:124 - Add a beat No
[Hard]
01:17:202 (4) - Metti un reverse e togli il beat che c'è dopo No
01:24:936 (6,7) - Sono difficili da leggere, secondo me meglio mettere tipo uno slider con reverse al posto del 5 oppure semplicemente spostare i beat Taci vanno bene così <3
01:30:093 (4) - Metti un reverse e togli il beat che c'è dopo Fixato
02:08:061 (2) - Non è stackato con la fine dello slider, stackalo. Diopor-- nooberror thanks
[Insane]
02:03:144 (1,2,3) - Più distanziati Mai sentito parlare di antijumps? <3
General
01:21:894- New preview point ? this is the part of the song that's supposed to be the most memorable.
Pie's Easy
01:16:973- this slider weird its should same with 6.
Revy's Normal
01:08:769- If you add note here, rhytm is gonna fit
02:30:098- finish
Hard
01:06:660- Why put break drag here ?
01:21:894- oh no way. remove finish. put whistle
01:22:129- ^ and remove finish at the end
01:22:598- finish should be here
01:37:598- finish
02:02:910- same question
Insane
01:37:598- finish
02:30:098- ^
Nice song and diffs
Goodluck.
01:21:894- New preview point ? this is the part of the song that's supposed to be the most memorable.
Pie's Easy
01:16:973- this slider weird
its should same with 6.Revy's Normal
01:08:769- If you add note here, rhytm is gonna fit
02:30:098- finish
Hard
01:06:660- Why put break drag here ?
01:21:894- oh no way. remove finish. put whistle
01:22:129- ^ and remove finish at the end
01:22:598- finish should be here
01:37:598- finish
02:02:910- same question
Insane
01:37:598- finish
02:30:098- ^
Nice song and diffs
Goodluck.
Topic Starter
Thanks :3HellDawn wrote:
General
01:21:894- New preview point ? this is the part of the song that's supposed to be the most memorable. Not fixed
Revy's Normal
01:08:769- If you add note here, rhytm is gonna fit Fixed
02:30:098- finish Fixed
Hard
01:06:660- Why put break drag here ? Fixed
01:21:894- oh no way. remove finish. put whistle Fixed
01:22:129- ^ and remove finish at the end Fixed
01:22:598- finish should be here Not fixed
01:37:598- finish Not fixed
02:02:910- same question
Insane
01:37:598- finish Fixed
02:30:098- ^ Fixed
Nice song and diffs
Goodluck.
Hello~
[Insane]
00:26:348 (1) - clap
00:41:465 (1) - ^
01:07:598 (1) - finish on start
01:10:644 (1,2,3) - I think finish hitsound like this are kinda unnecessary. I don't hear any resemblance in the actual music really. Well, it's just my opinion though
02:31:738 (3) - I'd prefer this being a hitcircle instead
[Hard]
00:30:098 (1) - finish
01:07:598 (1) - finish on start
01:40:176 (6,1) - I actually don't like this anti-jump even if it's a quite obvious pattern
02:07:598 (1) - finish on start
02:13:457 (4,1) - same with this spacing
02:22:598 (2,1) - I'd use 0,6x spacing instead here
[Revy]
00:26:348 (1) - finish
00:39:473 (3,1) - this looks quite awkward imo
00:44:160 (4,2) - avoid overlapping?
00:57:285 (1) - finish
01:46:504 (3,4,5) - why this spacing? it's really weird
02:10:410 (5,1) - bid space change, but readable imo and doesn't look too bad either
02:22:129 (6,1,2) - I actually don't like that you mix different spacings so often
[Pie]
00:30:098 (1) - the first thing you do is stacking? place in in the center please
00:41:816 (1,3) - can you make them look prettier?
That's all~
Good luck
[Insane]
00:26:348 (1) - clap
00:41:465 (1) - ^
01:07:598 (1) - finish on start
01:10:644 (1,2,3) - I think finish hitsound like this are kinda unnecessary. I don't hear any resemblance in the actual music really. Well, it's just my opinion though
02:31:738 (3) - I'd prefer this being a hitcircle instead
[Hard]
00:30:098 (1) - finish
01:07:598 (1) - finish on start
01:40:176 (6,1) - I actually don't like this anti-jump even if it's a quite obvious pattern
02:07:598 (1) - finish on start
02:13:457 (4,1) - same with this spacing
02:22:598 (2,1) - I'd use 0,6x spacing instead here
[Revy]
00:26:348 (1) - finish
00:39:473 (3,1) - this looks quite awkward imo
00:44:160 (4,2) - avoid overlapping?
00:57:285 (1) - finish
01:46:504 (3,4,5) - why this spacing? it's really weird
02:10:410 (5,1) - bid space change, but readable imo and doesn't look too bad either
02:22:129 (6,1,2) - I actually don't like that you mix different spacings so often
[Pie]
00:30:098 (1) - the first thing you do is stacking? place in in the center please
00:41:816 (1,3) - can you make them look prettier?
That's all~
Good luck
Topic Starter
Really thanks :3 I like gif in your signature lol xDSaten wrote:
Hello~
[Insane]
00:26:348 (1) - clap Fixed
00:41:465 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:07:598 (1) - finish on start Fixed
01:10:644 (1,2,3) - I think finish hitsound like this are kinda unnecessary. I don't hear any resemblance in the actual music really. Well, it's just my opinion though I think finish reinforces the notes
02:31:738 (3) - I'd prefer this being a hitcircle instead Not fixed
[Hard]
00:30:098 (1) - finish Fixed
01:07:598 (1) - finish on start Fixed
01:40:176 (6,1) - I actually don't like this anti-jump even if it's a quite obvious pattern Fixed
02:07:598 (1) - finish on start Fixed
02:13:457 (4,1) - same with this spacing Fixed
02:22:598 (2,1) - I'd use 0,6x spacing instead here Fixed
[Revy]
00:26:348 (1) - finish Fixed
00:39:473 (3,1) - this looks quite awkward imo Not fixed
00:44:160 (4,2) - avoid overlapping? Fixed
00:57:285 (1) - finish Fixed
01:46:504 (3,4,5) - why this spacing? it's really weird Fixed
02:10:410 (5,1) - bid space change, but readable imo and doesn't look too bad either
02:22:129 (6,1,2) - I actually don't like that you mix different spacings so often Not fixed
That's all~
Good luck
Topic Starter
Updated :3Katty Pie wrote:
Thanks for mod guys
http://puu.sh/1poIG
Okay, let me recheck it:
red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions
[Pie's Easy]
[Insane]
red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions
[Pie's Easy]
- 00:33:848 (5) - Move next NC to here for consistent?
- 00:37:598 (4) - ^
- 00:41:348 (4) - ^
- the Sliders before first break are looked weird due to SliderTickRate 2, since it's unnecessary imo, i'd like to suggest 1 but not 2
- 01:33:848 (6) - Move next NC to here?
- 01:37:598 (5) - also NC suggest for kiai
- 01:41:348 (6) - Move next NC to here
- 01:45:098 (6) - ^
- 01:48:848 (7) - ^
[Insane]
- 00:31:269 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - how about rotate the by 180 for better flow?
- 00:32:207 (1,2,3,4) - if you apply above one, it is better to change the order of these four:
(1): bottom-right => (2) bottom-left => (3) top-left => (4) top-right - 01:24:473 (5) - ctrl+g for better flow?
- 01:30:098 (2) - ^
- 01:38:301 - i'd like to make a triplet here to 01:38:535 (1) - for transition
- 01:51:191 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow?
Thx fixed NC on my diff ^.^
Topic Starter
Scorpiour wrote:
[Revy's Normal]Generally, it suggests to place NC at downbeat (long-white tick) for better gradation. All fixed
- the Sliders before first break are looked weird due to SliderTickRate 2, since it's unnecessary imo, i'd like to suggest 1 but not 2
- 01:33:848 (6) - Move next NC to here?
- 01:37:598 (5) - also NC suggest for kiai
- 01:41:348 (6) - Move next NC to here
- 01:45:098 (6) - ^
- 01:48:848 (7) - ^
[Insane]
- 00:31:269 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - how about rotate the by 180 for better flow?
- 00:32:207 (1,2,3,4) - if you apply above one, it is better to change the order of these four:
(1): bottom-right => (2) bottom-left => (3) top-left => (4) top-right- 01:24:473 (5) - ctrl+g for better flow?
- 01:30:098 (2) - ^
- 01:38:301 - i'd like to make a triplet here to 01:38:535 (1) - for transition All fixed except this, I don't like :C
- 01:51:191 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow?
Thanks updated all ><
make an irc check with mapper, fix inconsistent epilepsy warning.
i think the map is ready~~~enjoy your first bubble here and good luck with the rank :>
i think the map is ready~~~enjoy your first bubble here and good luck with the rank :>
Topic Starter
Really thanks *^*Scorpiour wrote:
make an irc check with mapper, fix inconsistent epilepsy warning.
i think the map is ready~~~enjoy your first bubble here and good luck with the rank :>
Topic Starter
YAY \o/General
Set offset 98. It's for menu strobes and flashes.No affect for notes
Skin
Your skin Digits are too "wide". Look :
It shouldn't overlap, fix please.
Hard
00:34:785 (4,5,6) - 1/4 instead of 1/2 suddenly. but same spacing. eh?
I stumbled there 3 or 4 times, unreadable
00:36:660 (4,5,6) - same
00:38:535 (5,6,7) - same
00:40:410 (5,6,7) - same
01:52:832 - Inis break? unsnapped? why? remove this blue zone~
Revy's Normal
01:18:144 - add note, keep use this 1/2 pattern.
01:36:894 - add note for same reason, 3/2 free place sounds strange when you use 1/1. Make it more rhythmical!
02:21:894 - same
Pie's Easy
01:00:332 - same problem with Inis break as in Hard
01:40:879 (1,4) - just no. after new 3point slider system these sliders sucks as hell.
01:52:832 - same problem with Inis break as in Hard
what a boring diff =.= claps claps, finishes sometimes on spinners. do you know we have whistles in game? :V
Topic Starter
Aleks719 wrote:
General
Set offset 98. It's for menu strobes and flashes.No affect for notes
Skin
Your skin Digits are too "wide". Look :
It shouldn't overlap, fix please.
Hard
00:34:785 (4,5,6) - 1/4 instead of 1/2 suddenly. but same spacing. eh?
I stumbled there 3 or 4 times, unreadable
00:36:660 (4,5,6) - same
00:38:535 (5,6,7) - same
00:40:410 (5,6,7) - same
01:52:832 - Inis break? unsnapped? why? remove this blue zone~
Revy's Normal
01:18:144 - add note, keep use this 1/2 pattern.
01:36:894 - add note for same reason, 3/2 free place sounds strange when you use 1/1. Make it more rhythmical!
02:21:894 - same
Ok fixed all :3
Easy
01:52:832 - remove inis break
Normal
01:36:894 (5,6) -Add nc to (5)
01:37:598 (1) - remove this nc
small recheck, do not reply, do not kd. fix, poke me in game
Ranked!~
01:52:832 - remove inis break
Normal
01:36:894 (5,6) -Add nc to (5)
01:37:598 (1) - remove this nc
Ranked!~
Congratz!
/me runs
/me runs
Topic Starter
Thanks *°* ♥Aleks719 wrote:
Easy
01:52:832 - remove inis break
Normal
01:36:894 (5,6) -Add nc to (5)
01:37:598 (1) - remove this ncsmall recheck, do not reply, do not kd. fix, poke me in game
Ranked!~
First 10 stars gave from me !!
Anywany Congratz
Anywany Congratz
lol finally, congratz roxas!
Topic Starter
Thanks everyone *^*
Congratz! :3
Topic Starter
Thanks everyone
great map, gratz <3
Congrats man (:
Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.
Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.
Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.
Congrats ^^
Good♂Job man!
Good♂Job man!
Topic Starter
Thanks ^_^
Go to hell, honestly.Ayu wrote:
Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.
Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.
Congrats on your first ranked beatmap! ^^
If by this sentence you mean this map isn't creative and other things like this,then please go away from here.Ayu wrote:
Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.
Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.
congrats man~~
i expect what you can create.
it is always easy to commend others' work
Ayu wrote:
Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.
Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.
i expect what you can create.
it is always easy to commend others' work
Topic Starter
Moway wrote:
Go to hell, honestly.
Congrats on your first ranked beatmap! ^^
-kevincela- wrote:
If by this sentence you mean this map isn't creative and other things like this,then please go away from here.
Just ignore, there's creativity. Please tell me what's not creative in this map, cause even I'm a newbie mapper I'm aware of my works and I don't wanna make shitty maps. :3Scorpiour wrote:
i expect what you can create.
it is always easy to commend others' work
Love it<3
You get it ranked? weee!!!
grats
grats
Oh.. man!! This song is incredible, really thanks for map it!!
And Congratulations on get your first Ranked Map
And Congratulations on get your first Ranked Map
GOOD JOB! >~<
RANKED LIKE 7 HOURS AGO? AND SEEN NOTHING? ;--;
Congratulation, I am very happy to see this in the ranked list!~
Congratulation, I am very happy to see this in the ranked list!~
Topic Starter
Mancusojuanmattos: really thanks I'm glad you like it
Baby Strawberry: thanks *-* <3
Gabe: Finally rankeeed \o/
Baby Strawberry: thanks *-* <3
Gabe: Finally rankeeed \o/
i kinda wanna map this version now https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pInAqcXirHw
map is pretty fun though. i was a bit unsure about the 1/4 streams in the insane, but after looking again, its pretty fun. good job :3
map is pretty fun though. i was a bit unsure about the 1/4 streams in the insane, but after looking again, its pretty fun. good job :3
;__; And me?Roxas wrote:
Mancusojuanmattos: really thanks I'm glad you like it
Baby Strawberry: thanks *-* <3
Gabe: Finally rankeeed \o/
Topic Starter
Sorry Sey, I am connected with the phone and I didn't see your post ;-; thank you too *-*
congratulations
Topic Starter
Thanks
yes let's not make shitty maps and show how much creativity I have by copy and pasting the same fucking patterns everytime over and over again.
let's not forget that the patterns should be just easy and so fucking simple that a 2 year old could do the laundry.
I seriously don't get why people even like this. It just shows that you have no feeling for the song and that you can't come up with anything better than using your ctrl+c and ctrl+v. Seems that I'm one of these few people that actually do care about the quality of maps.
/edit: Don't get me wrong, I'm not hating on you.
let's not forget that the patterns should be just easy and so fucking simple that a 2 year old could do the laundry.
I seriously don't get why people even like this. It just shows that you have no feeling for the song and that you can't come up with anything better than using your ctrl+c and ctrl+v. Seems that I'm one of these few people that actually do care about the quality of maps.
/edit: Don't get me wrong, I'm not hating on you.
Everyone has a proper mapping style,copy-pasted or not. Deal with it,using copy/paste to do symmetric patterns does not mean having a lack of creativity. If that would be so,like 3/4 of maps here in osu would have been totally dull,just saying. Map is actually fun to play and THERE's creativity (I'm saying it as a mapper,so...)Ayu wrote:
yes let's not make shitty maps and show how much creativity I have by copy and pasting the same fucking patterns everytime over and over again.
let's not forget that the patterns should be just easy and so fucking simple that a 2 year old could do the laundry.
I seriously don't get why people even like this. It just shows that you have no feeling for the song and that you can't come up with anything better than using your ctrl+c and ctrl+v. Seems that I'm one of these few people that actually do care about the quality of maps.
/edit: Don't get me wrong, I'm not hating on you.
Topic Starter
Tell me where I copy-pasted same patterns pls. I have only made simmetrical patterns, but I haven't copied patterns. A thing is "I don't like simmetry" but you can't say that this is a shitty map with shitty pattern. I don't care about the quality of my map? I have remapped my diff 4 times pls. Don't say stupid things.Ayu wrote:
yes let's not make shitty maps and show how much creativity I have by copy and pasting the same fucking patterns everytime over and over again.
let's not forget that the patterns should be just easy and so fucking simple that a 2 year old could do the laundry.
I seriously don't get why people even like this. It just shows that you have no feeling for the song and that you can't come up with anything better than using your ctrl+c and ctrl+v. Seems that I'm one of these few people that actually do care about the quality of maps.
/edit: Don't get me wrong, I'm not hating on you.
Symmetry is just a lame excuse. Imo, it just says nothing more than ''omg I only can map half of the song because i lack creativity so lets just do half of it the same so bla bla bla''.
@-kevincela-, absolutely right, 3/4 of the maps on osu! are totally dull.
@-kevincela-, absolutely right, 3/4 of the maps on osu! are totally dull.
Topic Starter
You can say that you don't like symmetry and this is ok, everyone has their own preferences, but you can't say that symmetry is shit or it not creative.
Then let me rephrase it as "symmetry maps like these are the cancer of osu" ?
I've seen several symmetric maps, which were good. I didn't dislike them, because they showed creativity, nice patterns and nice sliders. This one, does not. Therefor, I find this map not worth of a rank.
Instead of ranking maps like these, please rank better maps that are still out there.
I've seen several symmetric maps, which were good. I didn't dislike them, because they showed creativity, nice patterns and nice sliders. This one, does not. Therefor, I find this map not worth of a rank.
Instead of ranking maps like these, please rank better maps that are still out there.
Symmetry can be really awesome when done right.
when done right.
when done right.
Topic Starter
In my opinion and in other people's opinion here symmetry is done right, but everyome has different preferences and differends minds I continue to think that this map has creativity, I can be wrong but I'm not the only one who said this...
I continue to think that this map has creativity, I can be wrong but I'm not the only one who said this...Just checked the Hard Diff. (I was too lazy to check the Insane)
There's nothing wrong here. Except of 00:37:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) which totally fits perfect here I see nothing about copy and paste, Ayu.
Also, the Song has at the most time the same rhythm which makes it harder to create various pattern, and Roxas did a well job here. Anyway, congrats.
There's nothing wrong here. Except of 00:37:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) which totally fits perfect here I see nothing about copy and paste, Ayu.
Also, the Song has at the most time the same rhythm which makes it harder to create various pattern, and Roxas did a well job here. Anyway, congrats.
The map is good enough, stop complaining already guys, thanks.