NewRulerNA wrote:
[wring's Hard]
- AR+1?
HardですがBPMは比較的高めでサークルの使用率も高いのでAR7が私には低く感じる譜面でした 保留で- 00:39:694 (1) - このnoteは曲に確かに合っていますが、00:38:211 (3,1)の配置を叩いた後に置く音取りとしては違和感を感じました
このnoteを削除することでその違和感が解消し、分かりやすい音取りとなるように思えます ないと逆に自分で違和感を感じるので、noteを移動しました。- 00:44:310 (2,3) - これらのnoteが00:37:716 ~ 00:42:991 の1/1スライダーの音取りで慣れている時に出ると、それが音取りとして違和感を生じさせているように感じました
この部分を1/1スライダーに変更するべきです no- 01:19:254 (4,1,2) - これらのnoteはプレイ時のスタックの影響まで考慮した配置でしょうか?
個人的に 01:19:913 (2) を x:176 y:148に移動させ安定したDistanceとさせるほうが好きです ok- 01:58:979 (1) - リバースアロー側の節の位置を1 grid left
01:58:979 (1,2,3)で一直線に並んでいないのが少し見た目が悪く見えました ok- 02:12:908 (1) - Easyと同じ ok
Niva wrote:
[wring's Hard]
- 00:12:494 (5) - Removing whistle on slider's start will make this part more dramatic imo, but it's up to you (: ok
- 00:13:900 (1) - I highly recommend to silence the entire spinner - again, it'll be MUCH more dramatic :3 ok
- 00:20:619 (1,2,3) - Uhm, this... I'd use the space available on the left/upper side of the playfield to avoid clustering though >_< ok
- 00:36:233 (2,3) - (optional) CTRL+R to get an unique jump maybe? umm....ok
- 00:38:211 (3) - Stacking this above your next (1) will build up a dramatic feel via the stop imo xD no, I think it's too hard.
- 00:40:354 (3) - The whistle on slider's end, is it intentional? (the whistle on slider's body fits though) opps, fail to add to the start's hehe
- 00:44:310 (2) - ...contrary to the above, missing whistle here? umm.....ok
- 00:46:123 (3,4,5) - Due to stacking's nature, please move these three to ~x:309 y:136 so overlap won't happen in play mode ok
- 00:47:442 (4,5,6) - (optional) I prefer a jump with circular movement here, plays fancier imo~ ok
- 00:54:694 (1) - The whistle on (2) sounds quite weird for me, HOWEVER it can be compensated by adding whistle on (1)'s start, together with clap (: ok added
- 01:06:232 (1,2,3) -[ i](optional)[/i] For this jump here, I prefer a sudden small jump like this though: umm....sorry I keep this time
- 01:11:836 (5) - I suggest to put a whistle on slider's start here to compliment the previous whistles (: ok
- 01:19:254 (4,1,2) - Uhm, about this manual stack... Isn't (2) should be further more to the bottom-left? Or you can just do an anti-jump here with new combo on (4) though: no
- 01:26:342 (3) - Finish (together with clap) on slider's end? It's obvious enough imo... ok
- 01:45:463 (1) - Put in ~x:243 y:267 instead, so it'll be manual-stacked to the bottom-right of (2) instead of to the right? Looks much better imo~ ok
- 01:50:408 (6) - Hmm, I'd change the whistle here to finish (because of the cymbal sound) ok
- 02:04:913 (1) - Use clap on spinner's end here? (to be honest I can't get what the whistle is following, clap fits much better though ._.) ok
- 02:09:529 (1,2,3) - For the ending, try this rhythm/symmetrical formation here? (yep, if you do this don't forget to move the spinner 1/4 or 1/2 after... Then add whistle on (5)'s end xD) ummmmmmmmmmm..........I want not to put triplet...sorry
Thanks mod
NewRulerNA & Niva