Thank you for a high-quality mod!Niva wrote:
[General]
-> Set preview point to PreviewTime: 82468 for more accurate preview point? fixed
-> The background... Uhm, why not (at least) 640x480 instead? If you want to keep your current image size I recommend to use 560x420 (instead of 560x424) to make the ratio 4:3 xD i can't find any background images that have high resolution, so i'm waiting for the game to come out atm
-> This song *might* need another red section around your kiai's start for metronome reset (not really sure though)
[Easy]All fixed
- 00:21:244 (x) - Uhm, I'd add another circle here with whistle and start the spinner 1/2 after (to continue the piano melody)
- 00:39:859 (1) - Finish on slider's start? The cymbal's sound is obvious enough imo...
- 00:39:859 (1,2,3) - (optional) Making them parallel isn't bad, but a fan flows fancier imo~
- 00:49:749 (1) - Finish on slider's start for the cymbals?
- 00:58:979 (2) - For better rhythm, start this 1/2 earlier and make this as a 5/2 slider? An arrangement like this flows good imo (:
- 01:06:232 (3) - Minor stuff, move to ~x:258 y:72 for a better triangle?
- 01:06:891 (1,2) - (optional) I suggest to add a slight bezier curve to these two (for example, add a bezier waypoint on ~x:183 y:196 for (1)) to let players adapt with 01:09:529 (1)'s bezier flow~
- 01:14:803 (1,2,3) - The idea is actually good, but I prefer to CTRL+H (3) and make a triangle arrangement like this - plays better before the spinner imo xD
- 01:18:759 (1,1) - orz, the spinner recovery time is definitely not enough for Easy >_< (you can just end the spinner on previous downbeat and silence the end though)
- 01:26:012 (2) - (optional) Move to ~x:245 y:87 to form an arc? Flows better imo (especially considering 01:24:034 (2,1) isn't arranged in a straight line)
- 01:47:111 (3,1) - orz, you can just easily make these two parallel~ (just put (3)'s endpoint in ~x:344 y:366)
- 01:54:364 (1) - Again with parallelity - really, I think elbow slider looks wonderful here:
458,254,114364,6,0,B|422:300|422:300|391:335|351:332,1,140,2|8- 02:03:595 (1) - No need to new combo this I think (:
[Insane]Mostly fixed except for couple of stuff
- 00:09:994 (5) - I suggest to put it a bit more to the left (around ~x:102 y:68) to avoid overlap with (4)
- 00:20:931 (2) - Arrange (2) like this, so they'll form a closed formation instead?
- 00:28:321 (6,7) - (optional) Swap their position to form a circular movement? no change
- 00:33:266 (5) - Minor stuff actually, but for me it's better to put it more upward (~x:512 y:77) because (6) looks more charming if it's placed lower than (5) imo~
- 00:41:178 (1) - Finish on slider's start to accompany the cymbals?
- 00:48:266 (1,2,3) - (optional) Rather than back-and-forth I prefer a triangle jump here, plays more natural imo (:
- 00:55:518 (3) - To make it tidier, why don't you just stack this to the previous (6)? It won't hurt though~ I want to keep the symmetry with (4) so no
- 01:06:232 (4,5,6,7,8) - (optional) Considering the previous (2,3)'s placement, it's better to arrange the stream like this imo:
- 01:12:166 (1) - Finish on slider's start? Again, the cymbals are somewhat obvious here...
- 01:14:474 (4) - Uhm, you can just put this in ~x:70 y:150 to make (3,4) even :3
- 01:16:781 (4,5,6) - Not a must, but a jump works well here, really~
- 01:25:683 (2,3,4,5,6) - What's wrong with this pentagon orz... Why (3,4) is so close to each other ._.
205,204,85683,1,8
146,294,85847,1,0
43,269,86012,1,0
36,165,86177,1,0
134,117,86342,1,8- 01:41:507 (3,4) - Move 1/4 earlier - yes, the triple should happen after 01:41:342 (2) instead (:
- 01:57:661 (8) - (optional) Here, I'd rather remove the repeat and add another circle on 01:57:990 stacked below (7)'s start for a circular movement xD
- 02:00:792 (5) - Uhm, why don't you just create a triangle with your previous (3,4) o.o...
- 02:12:496 (10) - Put whistle as well together with finish on slider's end, to accompany the synth?
Overall it's a good map~ (I'm quite worried about the timing and some rhythms on Easy though, plus overall Easy and Insane could use more finish hitsound)
Good luck Takos :3
>Melophobiaさん, wringさん
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