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General]
Inconsistency in preview time, tags, timing and kiai (due to timing) between osu! standard diffs and taiko, please fix them. - Preview time should be 49101 or 49070 assuming you will edit via notepad, if not, set the preview point on 00:49:081 (49081)
- You need to add puzzle to the taiko diffs in tags so OVA OAD ikamusume Diomedea Kanemoto Hisako squid girl Diomedea invasion! ending [kirisame-marisa] yia puzzle
- I'll assume that the taiko has the wrong timing, but it's just one offset difference anyways so you should move the timing points in the two taiko diffs forward 1 offset (+1) so that the red timing point is on -00:01:319 (-1319). Double check incase of unsnapped timing lines. Since taiko is guest diff, don't need to have perfectly consistent kiai time, but timing must be consistent.
Also timing point from 00:44:271 - 01:27:471 - in Hard seem to be off by 10 offset (should +10). You don't need to fix them as they are doing their job, but the kiai timing points must be fixed.
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Easy]
00:00:481 (1) - I don't understand why you used 40%, too soft for me and I keep thinking you forgot to put clap here, much better to remove this timing point so that it's 60% (from the volume of red timing point)
00:01:081 (2,3) - Hmm, don't really want to nazi, but I get the feeling you can make these sliders better
00:02:281 (3) - I would put a whistle at begin
00:04:081 (5) - Whistle at repeat
00:07:081 (2) - Whistle at begin and end
00:13:081 (3) - Maybe whistle here, but since you don't have anything on 00:13:981, it may not sound as good. My proposal if you want to change the rhythm is do a short slider for 00:13:681 (4) - so that it end on 00:13:981. Remove (5) and put a hit circle where (5) used to end. Definitely put a whistle at end of (4) and don't forget clap on (5)
http://puu.sh/1ovdM00:15:481 (1,2) - Whistle at begin of (1) and on (2)
00:18:781 (2) - Whistle at begin
00:22:681 (3) - Whistle here
00:25:081 (1,2) - I prefer adding a repeat to (1), remove (2) and add hit circle at 00:26:881. The rhythm is emphasized on the red ticks so it feel weird hitting stuff on the white. Doing this rhythm eliminate this problem.00:29:881 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend that you adjust the placement of (1) & (2) so that you can do this
http://puu.sh/1ovhm or just use this code
(be sure to adjust placement of (5) afterward!)332,248,29881,5,4,0:0:0
272,172,30481,1,8,0:0:0
192,120,31081,2,0,B|152:68|88:72,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
20,136,32281,2,0,B|24:236|140:272|204:196,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:44:281 (1) - I think you lowered the volume of the finish too much, please increase it (55%)
During kiai, you have two choice with whistle, every stanza (1st white tick) and 3rd white tick without finish or, emphasizing the vocal. So if you want to just emphasis the vocal, follow my whistle suggestion, if not I recommend adding the whistle on 1st & 3rd white tick.
00:51:481 (3) - Whistle on begin and end
01:01:081 (1) - ^
01:03:481 (3) - ^
01:05:881 (2) - Whistle on begin
01:07:081 (3) - I would put clap on begin and repeat
01:08:281 (1,1) - Whistle at end
01:14:281 (2) - Consider a whistle at begin
01:17:281 (4) - Finish and keep clap on this? Sound fitting to with how the instrument is in music (drum + cymbal + bell). if you do this, do it for Normal & Hard as well.
01:19:081 (2) - Whistle on begin and repeat
01:20:881 (4) - Whistle at end
01:22:681 (1) - You put a finish at begin before at the beginning part so I guess you should do it here too
01:23:881 (2) - Whistle on begin and end
01:28:681 - I would put at 10% timing point here and do 5% for 01:29:281 and move it back 1/2 red tick so that it's on 01:28:981 or some other ways, but like this, spinner sound too loud at the end.Whistle sound great with bell and guitar sound in this song, not too sure why you don't add them
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Normal]
I would repeat whistle hitsound suggestion, please add whistle on bell and guitar sounds
+1 hp, too big difficulty setting jump from Normal to Hard
00:00:481 (1) - Same thing as Easy about volume of the claps
00:16:381 (2) - Move the red point one grid up looks nicer to me with how you placed (3) [adjust the other slider as well]
00:20:281 (1) - Move the middle point of this slider (or 3rd anchor point ~ 1st anchor point is begin, 5th anchor point is end) to x:360 y:228 looks better to me.
00:40:081 (1,2) - Prefer for you to do two sliders so that when you hit, it's on the drum. I understand why you did this, but it feel off not having to hit anything on the drum
00:44:281 - Same as Easy regarding volume of finish
00:45:181 (2) - I would put a whistle here
01:28:681 -Same as Easy and you have a whistle on the spinner, while in the other diffs you don't. I recommend removing it as there is no sound in music at the end of the spinner.Just add the whistle and this would be perfect
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Hard]
I cannot hit any of the stream properly with ar 6, I suggest doing ar 700:00:481 (1) - Same thing as before
00:03:181 (1) - Whistle at end sound really off to me
00:08:881 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer a pattern where you emphasis only (1) & (3) and not everything equally, so for example
http://puu.sh/1ovzC00:28:831 (4) - Overmapped, I normally don't mind, but this the only hit circle not to have a clap so it mess me up when I try to play this stream00:44:281 - Same as Easy regarding volume of finish
01:18:781 (3,4) - You put whistle on the bell sound before at beginning, I don't understand why not here?
01:28:681 -Same as Easy Hitsound is quite nice actually, I'm really curious now why you don't do the same thing with Easy & Normal. Ar 7 is highly recommended.
Cannot star yet due to hitsound. I bolded some suggestion so please give a good reason if you don't change them. All hitsound suggestion should be considered as bolded as well. Also just to summarize, begin - 00:10:081 - follow the bell sound for whistle (applies to end as well where the same rhythm repeat) 00:10:681 - 00:29:281 - The whistle pattern is on the 1st white tick and 2nd red tick so for example 00:13:081 - and 00:13:981 - is where you should add whistle and this repeat the whole way through for this part. Kiai is simply, put on every 1st and 3rd white tick. Remember that finish = whistle so if there is already finish, don't put whistle.
Remember that this is only if you want a star from me, you aren't force to change it, but telling me why not will definitely help me when modding your map in the future and I really think they will help your beatmap
Good luck!
Edit: Read some first post and I agree that title should be Puzzle, Pazuru should be in tags. Read about English loanword in Japanese here
http://www.japan-guide.com/e/e2051.html. If we really use romaji for katakana then in one of my ranked map, the title should be "Rabu Kon pu (ラブこんぷ) and not "Love Comp" This applies to every single Japanese song that uses katakana to write Love (ラブ = rabu).
This must be fixed
