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Topic Starter
Star! Cause Crystal encouraged me to start modding maps, and cause Regou is a awesome mapper. Love your discharger map man, gotta give me that cursor trail D:
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
Try Offset: 3564 and then snap all notes and timing sections.
[Easy]
01:18:749 (2) - spacing?
01:50:601 (1) - remove this note since it's a bit hard for beginners to click it accurately
01:50:971 (6) - then newcombo here
01:59:119 (1) - finish at start
02:02:082 (1) - ^
02:32:823 (1) - try end at 02:35:230 .
[Normal]
00:36:162 (1) - finish at start
00:42:644 (1,2) - try to move to x:152 y:272 ,looks better.
02:35:236 (4) - move to x:244 y:244 then (1,2,3,4) form a line.
[Hard]
01:25:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try this..it sounds better
02:04:681 (4) - remove finish
02:27:273 (1) - :< dont be lazy ,map here without spinner
02:39:125 (1,3) - ctrl+R
[Rainbow x Regou]
00:14:866 (7) - 存在的意义不明 放在这里不仅不好听而且还搞了个没意义的大跳 节奏过于紧密 没有层次感
00:18:940 (1) - 00:19:125 从这里起吧> >
01:23:570 (1,2,3) - 求教这里减速的意义？
03:07:273 (1) - 开头finish
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总体来说还好=-=
Nice Mapset
Good Luck
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[General]
Try Offset: 3564 and then snap all notes and timing sections.
[Easy]
01:18:749 (2) - spacing?
01:50:601 (1) - remove this note since it's a bit hard for beginners to click it accurately
01:50:971 (6) - then newcombo here
01:59:119 (1) - finish at start
02:02:082 (1) - ^
02:32:823 (1) - try end at 02:35:230 .
[Normal]
00:36:162 (1) - finish at start
00:42:644 (1,2) - try to move to x:152 y:272 ,looks better.
02:35:236 (4) - move to x:244 y:244 then (1,2,3,4) form a line.
[Hard]
01:25:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try this..it sounds better
02:04:681 (4) - remove finish
02:27:273 (1) - :< dont be lazy ,map here without spinner
02:39:125 (1,3) - ctrl+R
[Rainbow x Regou]
00:14:866 (7) - 存在的意义不明 放在这里不仅不好听而且还搞了个没意义的大跳 节奏过于紧密 没有层次感
00:18:940 (1) - 00:19:125 从这里起吧> >
01:23:570 (1,2,3) - 求教这里减速的意义？
03:07:273 (1) - 开头finish
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总体来说还好=-=
Nice Mapset
Good Luck
Topic Starter
Thank you ~
I'll leave the offset as it is though.
I'll leave the offset as it is though.
Yo.
[General]
Add "Sun Rainbow" as Tag. I just checked out and I got way more results by searching this Tags.
[Easy]
The Begin (until 00:25:792) looks boring with using almost only Hit Circles. Let me give some Ideas.
00:09:495 (1,2) - Instead of Hit Circles you could also use a Slider.
00:12:458 (1,2) - ^
00:21:347 (1,2) - ^
00:25:792 (2,1) - The transistion of the Sliders looks strange and feels not really good to play. Try another placement.
00:39:866 (1) - Add Whistle at the Start.
00:45:051 (3) - ^
00:46:347 (1) - ^
00:47:088 (3,1) - This could be too fast for a beginner, especially because (3) starts as 1/2 Beat and (1) as 1/1.
00:47:644 (1) - Add Whistle at the Middle Point.
00:51:718 (1,2) - You should Ctrl+J (1) and add Whislte at the Start. Move (2) that it is snapped. This would look much better: http://puu.sh/YoYu
00:54:681 (1) - Remove NC.
00:56:903 (2) - NC
00:58:384 (1) - Remove NC.
01:01:347 (2) - You should move the Middle Point a bit away from the Corner.
01:03:569 - I would really like a Circle here.
01:03:940 (3) - (Only if you accept 01:03:569) Move it to 01:04:310.
01:05:051 (4) - (Only if you accept 01:03:569) Delete it and set a Circle at 01:05:421. (It would look like this: http://puu.sh/Yp3M)
01:16:162 (3,4) - It should be not too close in the edge.
01:22:088 (1) - NC is not neccessary.
01:44:310 (1) - This Spinner makes no sense here imo. I would recommend to remove it.
01:47:273 - (Only if you follow 01:44:310) Set a Circle with Finish.
01:50:051 (5) - Change the Circle into a 1/2 Slider. It fits better with the Music.
02:07:088 (1) - Move it to 02:07:273, and please change this Slider like here: http://puu.sh/Yphd
02:13:940 (1) - Remove NC.
02:32:829 (1) - I would move it to 02:33:199, because Miku's Voice hold it at this time. And it should end at 02:36:162.
02:36:162 (1) - (Only if you accept the suggestion above) Delete this Slider and set a Circle at 02:36:903.
The whole Kiai Time (from 02:45:051) should have a Volume of 75%. The current Volume is really low.
The Diff is much better as last time when I modded it. But it needs still work at it. I personally say, that the Rhythm is sometimes not there and could be done better.
[Normal]
00:27:829 (2,3) - I would perfer a 1/2 Slider.
00:34:310 (2,3) - Move (3) a bit away, to avoid touching.
00:36:162 (1) - NC is not really neccessary.
00:41:718 (2,1,2) - The flow is awkward.. Try this: http://puu.sh/YpLi
00:42:644 (1,2,3) - It feels very fast.. You should change something.
00:44:866 (1,2) - Move them to x:220,y:184.
00:46:347 (1) - Spacing Error.
00:48:014 (1) - Move it at x:364,y:72. The current position is confusing.
00:50:051 (3,4,5) - You should avoid this in Normal Diffs.
00:59:495 (2,1,2,3,1) - Change the placement, it looks ugly at the moment.
01:17:273 (2,1) - Shouldn't the Finish of (2) be at the Start of (1)?
01:26:532 (1) - Remake this Slider. Like this?: http://puu.sh/YpPK
01:44:310 (1) - Same as in Easy.
02:05:421 - Set a Circle.
02:06:162 - ^
02:08:384 - ^
02:09:125 - ^
02:13:755 (1) - Set at the End Finish.
02:22:273 (1) - Please silence at least the End of the Spinner.
02:29:866 (2) - Remove Whistles.
02:31:718 (1) - Add Whistle at the Start.
02:34:681 (1,2,3,4) - Feels really fast to click..
02:52:273 (1,2,3) - I would not recommened to set this pattern for a Normal Diff.
The Diff has no real Hitsound building, the Hitsounds sounds sometimes not really senseful and at other places they are Hitsounds like Whistle missing. However, I also would say that this Diff need some more work. But it goes a good way, so keep it up!
[Hard]
00:19:681 (3) - Ctrl + J it, looks cooler.
00:46:347 (1) - Whistle on the Slider sounds bad, remove it.
00:59:495 (3,4,5) - The Start of (5) looks very hidden due the End of (3).
Please check the Hitsounds from 01:14:681 - 01:35:421, you should add more there.
01:44:310 (1) - Same as the Diffs before.
01:47:644 (1) - Remove NC.
02:10:051 (1,2,3,4) - What the.. Such a Jump totally don't fit in a Hard Diff.
02:20:977 (3,4,5,6,7) - You should change the placements of the Hitobjects.
02:55:421 (1) - I don't like the Spinner so much..
03:03:199 (4,5) - (5) makes it confusing.
The Diff need way more work. The placement of some Circles are terrible and the Rhythm should made much better.. To be honest, I would except of the first 1/4 remake the Diff.
Conclusion:
The Mapset is much much much better then some months ago, but you need in all still work. About the Sliders: This thread should help you to create your Slider better. The Hitsounds at Normal/Hard should made better. I gave you a Star, since I thought I gave you one in the past, so orz.
[General]
Add "Sun Rainbow" as Tag. I just checked out and I got way more results by searching this Tags.
[Easy]
The Begin (until 00:25:792) looks boring with using almost only Hit Circles. Let me give some Ideas.
00:09:495 (1,2) - Instead of Hit Circles you could also use a Slider.
00:12:458 (1,2) - ^
00:21:347 (1,2) - ^
00:25:792 (2,1) - The transistion of the Sliders looks strange and feels not really good to play. Try another placement.
00:39:866 (1) - Add Whistle at the Start.
00:45:051 (3) - ^
00:46:347 (1) - ^
00:47:088 (3,1) - This could be too fast for a beginner, especially because (3) starts as 1/2 Beat and (1) as 1/1.
00:47:644 (1) - Add Whistle at the Middle Point.
00:51:718 (1,2) - You should Ctrl+J (1) and add Whislte at the Start. Move (2) that it is snapped. This would look much better: http://puu.sh/YoYu
00:54:681 (1) - Remove NC.
00:56:903 (2) - NC
00:58:384 (1) - Remove NC.
01:01:347 (2) - You should move the Middle Point a bit away from the Corner.
01:03:569 - I would really like a Circle here.
01:03:940 (3) - (Only if you accept 01:03:569) Move it to 01:04:310.
01:05:051 (4) - (Only if you accept 01:03:569) Delete it and set a Circle at 01:05:421. (It would look like this: http://puu.sh/Yp3M)
01:16:162 (3,4) - It should be not too close in the edge.
01:22:088 (1) - NC is not neccessary.
01:44:310 (1) - This Spinner makes no sense here imo. I would recommend to remove it.
01:47:273 - (Only if you follow 01:44:310) Set a Circle with Finish.
01:50:051 (5) - Change the Circle into a 1/2 Slider. It fits better with the Music.
02:07:088 (1) - Move it to 02:07:273, and please change this Slider like here: http://puu.sh/Yphd
02:13:940 (1) - Remove NC.
02:32:829 (1) - I would move it to 02:33:199, because Miku's Voice hold it at this time. And it should end at 02:36:162.
02:36:162 (1) - (Only if you accept the suggestion above) Delete this Slider and set a Circle at 02:36:903.
The whole Kiai Time (from 02:45:051) should have a Volume of 75%. The current Volume is really low.
The Diff is much better as last time when I modded it. But it needs still work at it. I personally say, that the Rhythm is sometimes not there and could be done better.
[Normal]
00:27:829 (2,3) - I would perfer a 1/2 Slider.
00:34:310 (2,3) - Move (3) a bit away, to avoid touching.
00:36:162 (1) - NC is not really neccessary.
00:41:718 (2,1,2) - The flow is awkward.. Try this: http://puu.sh/YpLi
00:42:644 (1,2,3) - It feels very fast.. You should change something.
00:44:866 (1,2) - Move them to x:220,y:184.
00:46:347 (1) - Spacing Error.
00:48:014 (1) - Move it at x:364,y:72. The current position is confusing.
00:50:051 (3,4,5) - You should avoid this in Normal Diffs.
00:59:495 (2,1,2,3,1) - Change the placement, it looks ugly at the moment.
01:17:273 (2,1) - Shouldn't the Finish of (2) be at the Start of (1)?
01:26:532 (1) - Remake this Slider. Like this?: http://puu.sh/YpPK
01:44:310 (1) - Same as in Easy.
02:05:421 - Set a Circle.
02:06:162 - ^
02:08:384 - ^
02:09:125 - ^
02:13:755 (1) - Set at the End Finish.
02:22:273 (1) - Please silence at least the End of the Spinner.
02:29:866 (2) - Remove Whistles.
02:31:718 (1) - Add Whistle at the Start.
02:34:681 (1,2,3,4) - Feels really fast to click..
02:52:273 (1,2,3) - I would not recommened to set this pattern for a Normal Diff.
The Diff has no real Hitsound building, the Hitsounds sounds sometimes not really senseful and at other places they are Hitsounds like Whistle missing. However, I also would say that this Diff need some more work. But it goes a good way, so keep it up!
[Hard]
00:19:681 (3) - Ctrl + J it, looks cooler.
00:46:347 (1) - Whistle on the Slider sounds bad, remove it.
00:59:495 (3,4,5) - The Start of (5) looks very hidden due the End of (3).
Please check the Hitsounds from 01:14:681 - 01:35:421, you should add more there.
01:44:310 (1) - Same as the Diffs before.
01:47:644 (1) - Remove NC.
02:10:051 (1,2,3,4) - What the.. Such a Jump totally don't fit in a Hard Diff.
02:20:977 (3,4,5,6,7) - You should change the placements of the Hitobjects.
02:55:421 (1) - I don't like the Spinner so much..
03:03:199 (4,5) - (5) makes it confusing.
The Diff need way more work. The placement of some Circles are terrible and the Rhythm should made much better.. To be honest, I would except of the first 1/4 remake the Diff.
Conclusion:
The Mapset is much much much better then some months ago, but you need in all still work. About the Sliders: This thread should help you to create your Slider better. The Hitsounds at Normal/Hard should made better. I gave you a Star, since I thought I gave you one in the past, so orz.
Hey Crystal :3 sorry for a huge delay x_x
Mod Request via In-Game PM
[General]
I'll give you the full mod tomorrow :3 I mean "today" xD now is... 03:19 am o.o I should go sleep and I'm going to sleep 
*don't give me kd please please*
*27/8
[Hard]
Mod Request via In-Game PM
[General]
- anyway, you should put some claps like this http://puu.sh/q20x in kiai time or anywhere .-., rhythm always need you~
- Remove .osb if you want
- Maybe add "Sun Rainbow" in tags? (no _)
Other's are fine~~~
- AR-1 please
- 00:03:570 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I hate this part ;w; it's weird and a litttttle bit hard imo. Try to do that long slider to instead? Such like this.
- 00:27:273 (1) - Try this~SPOILER
344,192,27273,6,0,B|384:124|328:64|252:-32|168:68|124:128|164:196,2,400
(If you use this please do some change o.o) - 00:49:125 (3) - Spacing
- 01:07:273 (3) - finish?
- 01:10:236 - ^
- 01:34:310 (3) - I'd like to change to a note and put it at 01:34:310 -
- 01:44:310 (1) - This should be remove imo
- 02:04:310 (1) - Add a reserve and put finish on 02:05:051 -
- 02:13:940 (1) - Remove nc
- 02:13:940 (1,2,3,1) - Boring here orz. try to make a square?
- 02:21:347 (3) -
I got confuse herespacing and this would be confuse imo ._. - 02:50:977 (2) - finish
- 00:03:570 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - You know it. If I were you I'll change all to 1/4 slider xD
- 00:44:495 (3) - remove it?
- 01:17:273 (2) - why finish o.o
- 01:20:236 (2) - ^
- 01:21:718 - ^
- 01:23:199 (1) - Maybe stop at 01:25:792 - to keep some distance with (1)?
- 01:34:866 (1,2,3) - Change to a slider that has 1 reserve
- 01:44:310 (1) - Same as Easy
- 02:24:310 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - You put them just on a line
Try to do in other ways - 02:36:162 (1,2,1,1,2,3) - What all clap?! sounds weird ._.
- 02:53:940 (1) - Use a slider to instead please, this's to short
*don't give me kd please please*
*27/8
[Hard]
- 00:03:570 (1,2,3,4) - If you want, I suggest you to change these note to a slider that reserve 2 times
- 00:28:014 (4) - why finish?
- 01:05:792 (1) - If you want to make a blanket with (3), put the third tick on x:448,y:152 , forth tick put on x:432,y:224, fifth tick put on x:436, y:256. (more blanket imo lol)
- 01:15:977 (1) - My brain told me you should make a jump
- 01:19:495 (8) - why finish?
- 01:20:970 - add a note
- 02:13:755 (1,2) - You should add finish at (2) not (1)
- 02:14:310 (3) - remove finish
- 02:29:403 (1) - delete this ._. it's hard to read imo
- 03:03:199 (4,5) - What is thissssssssss
- 03:05:607 - note here plz.
- 03:05:607 (1) - move to long white tick (don't forget do it shorter!)
- 00:15:421 (3) - finish吧
- 01:03:014 - 為什麼不map
- kiai那邊是什麼怪clap下法 orz
- 02:06:532 (1,2,3) - 這三顆spacing改0.8 我覺得比較對的上O~O (因為這裏有3個不同的spacing, 1.2>1.0>0.6 最後應該是0.8)
- 02:10:607 (5) - 好吵 去clap
- 02:38:940 (5) - 做成這個 還能跟(7)作個包 o.o http://puu.sh/ZfJY
我比較喜歡熱狗的part -w-
Topic Starter
pwq
I'll fix all of it soon, thanks for your mods~
I'll fix all of it soon, thanks for your mods~
Map looks fine to me. Nothing to mod here!
Quick run through of collab diff.
[Rainbow x Regou]
[Rainbow x Regou]
- Slider tick rate 2, based on the amount of 1/2 rhythms you have in the entire map. You can also emphasize your hitsounds more clearly with fixed slider ticks - important in the Kiai.
- 01:25:144 (1) - Hitsound(s) missing from spinner end.
- 01:26:718 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Not one bit readable. Pattern can be improved to represent song better.
- 01:30:977 (2) - Not too sure what you're trying to emphasize with S:C2 clap here, but I don't think it fits very well.
- 01:54:495 (3,1) - Best if unstacked. If used correctly, it works great, but in this position it just creates a stalling, hanging feeling.
Hi from #modreq
General
almost suggestions
Easy
Placement
00:49:125(3) DS error? if you aim something, sorry this.
Rythem
01:50:607(1) I think this stacking note is difficult for newbie because music rythem changed. so I suggest rythem and placement like this
Hit Sonud
01:23:014(2) add whistle? it's strong voice heard for me.
Normal
Placement
Rythem
01:22:458(2,3) this rythem doesn't fit well with this song, so try to use this rythem?
01:34:310(4,5) delete those and add 1/4 slider? it's a bit hard for Normal in using notes many times imo.
Hit Sonud
01:26:532(1) add finish at reverse? you already did that 01:14:681
02:50:977(5) remove finish at reverse and add finish at head?
02:57:644(2) what strong pushes with all adding hitsounds? i don't know how this mean but, removing finish better cause this vocal doesn't strong.
Hard
Placement
Rythem
01:25:051(1,2,3,4,5,6) it doesn't fit this rythem with vocal, so try this rythem?
Hit Sonud
01:47:243~02:03:384 without hitsounds? other diffs seem to be added hitsounds, so I think you can put hitsounds, if you aim something, not to be.
02:52:644(5) add finish at end?
Rainbow×Regou
nice diff =3
Hit Sonud
01:34:681(3) I think without hitsounds seems more good because of weak vocal.
02:10:607(5) delete finish, clap and add whistle?
it's fun for me, good luck and star!
General
almost suggestions
Easy
Placement
00:49:125(3) DS error? if you aim something, sorry this.
Rythem
01:50:607(1) I think this stacking note is difficult for newbie because music rythem changed. so I suggest rythem and placement like this
Hit Sonud
01:23:014(2) add whistle? it's strong voice heard for me.
Normal
Placement
Rythem
01:22:458(2,3) this rythem doesn't fit well with this song, so try to use this rythem?
01:34:310(4,5) delete those and add 1/4 slider? it's a bit hard for Normal in using notes many times imo.
Hit Sonud
01:26:532(1) add finish at reverse? you already did that 01:14:681
02:50:977(5) remove finish at reverse and add finish at head?
02:57:644(2) what strong pushes with all adding hitsounds? i don't know how this mean but, removing finish better cause this vocal doesn't strong.
Hard
Placement
Rythem
01:25:051(1,2,3,4,5,6) it doesn't fit this rythem with vocal, so try this rythem?
Hit Sonud
01:47:243~02:03:384 without hitsounds? other diffs seem to be added hitsounds, so I think you can put hitsounds, if you aim something, not to be.
02:52:644(5) add finish at end?
Rainbow×Regou
nice diff =3
Hit Sonud
01:34:681(3) I think without hitsounds seems more good because of weak vocal.
02:10:607(5) delete finish, clap and add whistle?
it's fun for me, good luck and star!
Topic Starter
Thankyouu for your mod ~
mod4mod time
Easy
00:09:495 (1) - make a little curve ? It's fit the song http://puu.sh/14Xqk
00:21:347 (1) - ^
00:36:162 (1) - ^
00:53:940 (2) - add finish
01:25:051 (1) - like this http://puu.sh/14XrG
01:28:014 (2,3,4) - (3) bit down . It's make good flow imo
01:34:866 (4) - http://puu.sh/14XsZ
02:59:125 (3) - nazi fix spaxing(1 grid left)
Normal
00:16:162 (1,1) - same opinion as easy make a curve?
00:24:310 (1) - ^
00:37:273 (1) - move 00:37:644 - and 00:37:273 - add note
00:42:829 (2,3,4) - like this http://puu.sh/14XxM
02:21:347 (6) - like thishttp://puu.sh/14Xz2
02:53:940 (1) - this spinner is broke flow
Hard
00:34:681 (3) - move this is better http://puu.sh/14XAp
00:58:384 (1) - delete 2nd way point
01:05:792 (1) - like this http://puu.sh/14XB6
02:55:421 (1) - ~ try this http://puu.sh/14XCa
Rainbow x Regou
00:30:236 (1) - wyh not Symmetrical ?
00:48:014 (1,2,3) - like this ? http://puu.sh/14XEo
02:55:421 (1) - this jump is too far..
That's all
Easy
00:09:495 (1) - make a little curve ? It's fit the song http://puu.sh/14Xqk
00:21:347 (1) - ^
00:36:162 (1) - ^
00:53:940 (2) - add finish
01:25:051 (1) - like this http://puu.sh/14XrG
01:28:014 (2,3,4) - (3) bit down . It's make good flow imo
01:34:866 (4) - http://puu.sh/14XsZ
02:59:125 (3) - nazi fix spaxing(1 grid left)
Normal
00:16:162 (1,1) - same opinion as easy make a curve?
00:24:310 (1) - ^
00:37:273 (1) - move 00:37:644 - and 00:37:273 - add note
00:42:829 (2,3,4) - like this http://puu.sh/14XxM
02:21:347 (6) - like thishttp://puu.sh/14Xz2
02:53:940 (1) - this spinner is broke flow
Hard
00:34:681 (3) - move this is better http://puu.sh/14XAp
00:58:384 (1) - delete 2nd way point
01:05:792 (1) - like this http://puu.sh/14XB6
02:55:421 (1) - ~ try this http://puu.sh/14XCa
Rainbow x Regou
00:30:236 (1) - wyh not Symmetrical ?
00:48:014 (1,2,3) - like this ? http://puu.sh/14XEo
02:55:421 (1) - this jump is too far..
That's all
Fixed something~
I didn't fix 02:55:421 (1) ... mind that it's the speed-up part and this is an Insane diff...
http://puu.sh/15cd1
I didn't fix 02:55:421 (1) ... mind that it's the speed-up part and this is an Insane diff...
http://puu.sh/15cd1
Hi:3
[General]
●fine
[Easy]
●00:15:051 (1) - Aim for here ? 00:16:903 (2) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/432534
●00:47:644 (1,2,3,4) - Make the spacing equal here
●00:58:384 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head ? follow the piano sound :3
●01:47:644 (1) - Too soon after spinner.try to close the center?
●02:05:051 - Why put a Break time ? you should put a note ><
●03:04:310 (2) - remove clap on slider head . it doesn't follow the music well.
[Normal]
●00:37:273 (5) - add whistle
●00:45:051 (4) - changed to curved one slider?
●00:59:866 (1) - remove finish.or use lower volume?
●01:20:607 (1) - some-repeats-sliders are confusing for beginners .
●01:23:014 (3) - add finish on the slider's end
●01:31:718 (4) - remove whistle .
●01:56:718 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm here is hard to take a little.make some slider ?
●02:04:125 (1,2,3) - try this ?
●02:07:088 (1,2,3) - same , here
●02:17:644 (1) - add finish on the slider's end instead of whistle? it needs stronger sound imo o.o
●02:21:347 (6) - same here ~ but Case here slider's head ><
●02:24:310 - use lower volume? since the melody is calmer than previous part.around 40% ~ 50%
●03:00:977 (3) - remove finish ><
[Hard]
●00:12:458 (1) - add whistle on the slider's head ?
●01:30:607 (1,2,3) - try align the vertical x:40 or 44
●01:50:051 (2) - add finish on the slider's end
●02:00:421 - add note ? follow the Lyrics
●02:24:310 - same Normal diff ~
●02:36:162 - ～ 02:36:162 - gradually add volume? for last kiai time ></
[Rainbow x Regou]
●00:18:940 (1) - Hmm, it doesn't follow the music well. I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
●00:25:792 (1) - remove New combo
●01:01:162 (1) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/432551
●01:20:236 (2) - add finish on the slider's end
●01:22:088 - it needs stronger sound imo o.o make notes or slider and add finish sound :3
●01:34:310 (2) - same ,here 01:01:162 (1) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/432553
●02:36:162 - same Hard diff ~
(ﾉ･ˇ∀ˇ･)ﾉ spica ~ ♪
good luck ^^
[General]
●fine
[Easy]
●00:15:051 (1) - Aim for here ? 00:16:903 (2) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/432534
●00:47:644 (1,2,3,4) - Make the spacing equal here
●00:58:384 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head ? follow the piano sound :3
●01:47:644 (1) - Too soon after spinner.try to close the center?
●02:05:051 - Why put a Break time ? you should put a note ><
●03:04:310 (2) - remove clap on slider head . it doesn't follow the music well.
[Normal]
●00:37:273 (5) - add whistle
●00:45:051 (4) - changed to curved one slider?
●00:59:866 (1) - remove finish.or use lower volume?
●01:20:607 (1) - some-repeats-sliders are confusing for beginners .
●01:23:014 (3) - add finish on the slider's end
●01:31:718 (4) - remove whistle .
●01:56:718 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm here is hard to take a little.make some slider ?
●02:04:125 (1,2,3) - try this ?
●02:07:088 (1,2,3) - same , here
●02:17:644 (1) - add finish on the slider's end instead of whistle? it needs stronger sound imo o.o
●02:21:347 (6) - same here ~ but Case here slider's head ><
●02:24:310 - use lower volume? since the melody is calmer than previous part.around 40% ~ 50%
●03:00:977 (3) - remove finish ><
[Hard]
●00:12:458 (1) - add whistle on the slider's head ?
●01:30:607 (1,2,3) - try align the vertical x:40 or 44
●01:50:051 (2) - add finish on the slider's end
●02:00:421 - add note ? follow the Lyrics
●02:24:310 - same Normal diff ~
●02:36:162 - ～ 02:36:162 - gradually add volume? for last kiai time ></
[Rainbow x Regou]
●00:18:940 (1) - Hmm, it doesn't follow the music well. I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
●00:25:792 (1) - remove New combo
●01:01:162 (1) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/432551
●01:20:236 (2) - add finish on the slider's end
●01:22:088 - it needs stronger sound imo o.o make notes or slider and add finish sound :3
●01:34:310 (2) - same ,here 01:01:162 (1) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/432553
●02:36:162 - same Hard diff ~
(ﾉ･ˇ∀ˇ･)ﾉ spica ~ ♪
good luck ^^
Going to look at this map anytime soon.
Be ready for an huge mod c:
Be ready for an huge mod c:
Hi, xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx.
I try to mod this beatmap by your request, but i can't mod this beatmap.
I'm so sorry, i'll shoot a star when i have more than one kudosu T^T
P.S. Video offset is 273 (± 5).
Edit: Shoot a Star =☆
I try to mod this beatmap by your request, but i can't mod this beatmap.
I'm so sorry, i'll shoot a star when i have more than one kudosu T^T
P.S. Video offset is 273 (± 5).
Edit: Shoot a Star =☆
Topic Starter
Oh okayy, its fine ~
[General]
I suggest to swap the combo colour order, because these colours are too similar.
So instead of
[Easy]
00:15:051 (1) - I suggest to spacing properly this. It's confusing (especially for newbie) since it's close to the previous beat.
00:49:125 (3) - New Combo to be consistent with 00:46:347 (1) -
00:49:125 (3,4) - I think that would be nice to move (3) to 00:49:310 - (with same end) and fix slider and spacing. That way it follow the previous placement (00:46:347 (1) - ) and, for me, sounds better.
01:50:977 (2) - Spacing. This is my suggestion:
Find another way if you don't like, but fix spacing.
[Normal]
02:20:977 (4) - New combo because it suddenly has a triplet.
02:52:273 (1,2,3) - Move all up (see image) so (2) doesn't overlap with 02:50:978 (5) - and it's more readable.
[Hard]
02:08:755 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Overlap and then jump?
If you want to keep it, I suggest to change like the image, so it should be more simple to understand.
02:29:403 (1,2) - Please unstack (1). It's on a blue tick and is a jump. I suggest to move it 6 grid up (grid size 4).
02:29:866 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Do you really like to overlap, uh?
[Rainbow x Regou]
00:49:495 (2) - Overmapping for me. I suggest to remove it. It sounds unnatural.
01:26:718 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Overlapping everywhere lol (no need to change btw)
01:55:051 (2) - Overmapping for me. If you want to keep it i suggest to space correctly this beat and 01:54:866 (1) -
Sorry for the problem
I suggest to swap the combo colour order, because these colours are too similar.
So instead of
Combo1 : 44,243,184I think is better
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 196,136,255
Combo4 : 255,179,255
Combo1 : 44,243,184or something similar
Combo2 : 196,136,255
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 255,179,255
[Easy]
00:15:051 (1) - I suggest to spacing properly this. It's confusing (especially for newbie) since it's close to the previous beat.
00:49:125 (3) - New Combo to be consistent with 00:46:347 (1) -
00:49:125 (3,4) - I think that would be nice to move (3) to 00:49:310 - (with same end) and fix slider and spacing. That way it follow the previous placement (00:46:347 (1) - ) and, for me, sounds better.
01:50:977 (2) - Spacing. This is my suggestion:
Find another way if you don't like, but fix spacing.
[Normal]
02:20:977 (4) - New combo because it suddenly has a triplet.
02:52:273 (1,2,3) - Move all up (see image) so (2) doesn't overlap with 02:50:978 (5) - and it's more readable.
[Hard]
02:08:755 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Overlap and then jump?
If you want to keep it, I suggest to change like the image, so it should be more simple to understand.02:29:403 (1,2) - Please unstack (1). It's on a blue tick and is a jump. I suggest to move it 6 grid up (grid size 4).
02:29:866 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Do you really like to overlap, uh?
[Rainbow x Regou]
00:49:495 (2) - Overmapping for me. I suggest to remove it. It sounds unnatural.
01:26:718 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Overlapping everywhere lol (no need to change btw)
01:55:051 (2) - Overmapping for me. If you want to keep it i suggest to space correctly this beat and 01:54:866 (1) -
Sorry for the problem
Hi!
thank you for mod my map last time.
and.. I can't speak English
[Easy]
00:09:495 (1) - last point : (136, 108)
01:23:384 (3) - http://puu.sh/1gJQE How about arrange like this?
[Normal]
00:19:125 (3) - Remove NC
00:21:347 (1) - NC
00:22:088 (2) - ^
00:36:162 (4) - ^
00:59:866 (3) - Remove NC
00:23:569 (3,4,1) - (344, 208)
00:33:199 (3) - (328, 112)
01:29:125 (2) - (372, 272)
01:29:495 (1) - (304, 312)
[Hard]
00:18:384 (4) - (128, 80)
00:41:162 (6) - (156, 236)
You can fix it 02:22:273 (6) - 1st point : (392, 88) 2nd point : (264, 40) 3rd point : (248, 196) last point (116, 164) http://puu.sh/1gKaY
thank you for mod my map last time.
and.. I can't speak English
[Easy]
00:09:495 (1) - last point : (136, 108)
01:23:384 (3) - http://puu.sh/1gJQE How about arrange like this?
[Normal]
00:19:125 (3) - Remove NC
00:21:347 (1) - NC
00:22:088 (2) - ^
00:36:162 (4) - ^
00:59:866 (3) - Remove NC
00:23:569 (3,4,1) - (344, 208)
00:33:199 (3) - (328, 112)
01:29:125 (2) - (372, 272)
01:29:495 (1) - (304, 312)
[Hard]
00:18:384 (4) - (128, 80)
00:41:162 (6) - (156, 236)
You can fix it 02:22:273 (6) - 1st point : (392, 88) 2nd point : (264, 40) 3rd point : (248, 196) last point (116, 164) http://puu.sh/1gKaY
Hi XCrystal :3
mod from m4m , sor for my late.
[General]
fine~
[Easy]
00:03:570 (1,2) - maybe move right 1 grid are more symmetry with 00:06:532 (1,2) - and 00:12:458 (1,2) -
00:30:977 (2) - NC?
00:33:940 (2) - move to x:176 y:160 and 00:34:681 (3) - move to x:96 y:300 will be symmetry.
00:58:384 (2) - distance fix to 0.8x.
01:22:088 (1) - ^
01:44:310 (1,1) - a little far for newbie.
01:50:607 (1,2) - the change distance I think newbie can't read it >< (Except 02:19:125 (2,3) - is fine because not have continuous notes for this part,so you can do this.)
[Normal]
01:53:199 (2) - whistle?
02:36:162 - to 02:42:829 - clap is a little loud , same with Easy is more better!
02:43:940 (2) - add finish in slider end?
02:57:644 (2) - distance can fix more better to let 02:56:903 (1,2,3) - look more good.
[Hard]
00:12:458 (1) - I can't hear whistle in this slider.
00:45:051 (1) - change to slider? 00:54:495 (6) - NC
00:54:681 (1) - remove NC
01:49:495 (1) - change a circle in 01:49:681 - will more flow the music and your rhythm.
02:00:977 - I think this can put notes in Hard diff. How about this? 02:03:755 - add a circle?
02:15:421 (5) - add finish in slider head.
02:20:977 (3) - change finish in slider end?
02:21:718 (5,6) - rhythm is not good for me. How about 02:21:718 (5) - change a circle and 02:22:273 (6) - move to 02:22:088 - ? 02:36:162 - to 02:42:829 - clap same with Normal.
[Rainbow x Regou]
This diff I can use Chinese -.-?
好吧我用中文好了...
00:05:792 (5,6) - slider 開頭都上whistle? 或5上就好
00:07:644 - 這之後的whistle換位置了 我個人比較喜歡把whistle都上在長白線跟第三根白線上 (鋼琴變調都在這上面)
00:17:458 (5,6,7) - 不太好看 6跟7的距離也跑了
00:38:384 (5) - whistle?
00:52:273 (4,6) - slider 開頭都上whistle?
00:56:162 (6) - 尾巴上finish
00:57:644 (4) - 總覺得這邊才是slider的地方...跟Vocal 這樣如何? 00:57:829 (5) - 這尾巴上whistle?
00:58:569 (1) - 感覺尾巴才是上whistle的地方
02:50:977 (1,2) - 好跳 QAQ 而且我覺得 02:51:718 (3) - 更適合跳
02:55:421 (1,2,3,4) - 這不科學 跳的距離都不一樣 我只這邊miss了 0.0
02:58:199 (5) - 放在 x:168 y:214 如何?
03:28:014 (1) - 在 03:32:829 - 這邊結束?
It's good enough for your fist map
I see you already get enough mod
Good Luck with rank!!
Star~☆
mod from m4m , sor for my late.
[General]
fine~
[Easy]
00:03:570 (1,2) - maybe move right 1 grid are more symmetry with 00:06:532 (1,2) - and 00:12:458 (1,2) -
00:30:977 (2) - NC?
00:33:940 (2) - move to x:176 y:160 and 00:34:681 (3) - move to x:96 y:300 will be symmetry.
00:58:384 (2) - distance fix to 0.8x.
01:22:088 (1) - ^
01:44:310 (1,1) - a little far for newbie.
01:50:607 (1,2) - the change distance I think newbie can't read it >< (Except 02:19:125 (2,3) - is fine because not have continuous notes for this part,so you can do this.)
[Normal]
01:53:199 (2) - whistle?
02:36:162 - to 02:42:829 - clap is a little loud , same with Easy is more better!
02:43:940 (2) - add finish in slider end?
02:57:644 (2) - distance can fix more better to let 02:56:903 (1,2,3) - look more good.
[Hard]
00:12:458 (1) - I can't hear whistle in this slider.
00:45:051 (1) - change to slider? 00:54:495 (6) - NC
00:54:681 (1) - remove NC
01:49:495 (1) - change a circle in 01:49:681 - will more flow the music and your rhythm.
02:00:977 - I think this can put notes in Hard diff. How about this? 02:03:755 - add a circle?
02:15:421 (5) - add finish in slider head.
02:20:977 (3) - change finish in slider end?
02:21:718 (5,6) - rhythm is not good for me. How about 02:21:718 (5) - change a circle and 02:22:273 (6) - move to 02:22:088 - ? 02:36:162 - to 02:42:829 - clap same with Normal.
[Rainbow x Regou]
This diff I can use Chinese -.-?
好吧我用中文好了...
00:05:792 (5,6) - slider 開頭都上whistle? 或5上就好
00:07:644 - 這之後的whistle換位置了 我個人比較喜歡把whistle都上在長白線跟第三根白線上 (鋼琴變調都在這上面)
00:17:458 (5,6,7) - 不太好看 6跟7的距離也跑了
00:38:384 (5) - whistle?
00:52:273 (4,6) - slider 開頭都上whistle?
00:56:162 (6) - 尾巴上finish
00:57:644 (4) - 總覺得這邊才是slider的地方...跟Vocal 這樣如何? 00:57:829 (5) - 這尾巴上whistle?
00:58:569 (1) - 感覺尾巴才是上whistle的地方
02:50:977 (1,2) - 好跳 QAQ 而且我覺得 02:51:718 (3) - 更適合跳
02:55:421 (1,2,3,4) - 這不科學 跳的距離都不一樣 我只這邊miss了 0.0
02:58:199 (5) - 放在 x:168 y:214 如何?
03:28:014 (1) - 在 03:32:829 - 這邊結束?
It's good enough for your fist map
I see you already get enough mod
Good Luck with rank!!
Star~☆
[Hard]
00:35:977 (1,2,3) - 1/4 repeat slider?
00:45:051 (1,2,3) - looks so bad.... 00:45:607 (2,3) - stack each other
[Insane]
00:11:162 (1,2,3) -
00:18:940 (1,2) -
00:18:199 (7,8) - remove jump?
00:23:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - keep distance snap x1.00 ?
00:41:532 (5,6,7) - decreasing spacing? some player might think 1/2 rhythm.
00:49:866 (1,2) - avoid overlapped
00:50:607 (3,1) - not stacking is better for me..
01:15:144 (3) - remove note?
01:57:273 (4,5) - .... stacking?
02:09:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - decreasing space
02:50:977 (1,2) - too huge spacing
02:55:421 (1,2) - ^
02:57:644 (4,5) - ^
sorry for my short mod..... =w=
00:35:977 (1,2,3) - 1/4 repeat slider?
00:45:051 (1,2,3) - looks so bad.... 00:45:607 (2,3) - stack each other
[Insane]
00:11:162 (1,2,3) -
00:18:940 (1,2) -
00:18:199 (7,8) - remove jump?
00:23:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - keep distance snap x1.00 ?
00:41:532 (5,6,7) - decreasing spacing? some player might think 1/2 rhythm.
00:49:866 (1,2) - avoid overlapped
00:50:607 (3,1) - not stacking is better for me..
01:15:144 (3) - remove note?
01:57:273 (4,5) - .... stacking?
02:09:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - decreasing space
02:50:977 (1,2) - too huge spacing
02:55:421 (1,2) - ^
02:57:644 (4,5) - ^
sorry for my short mod..... =w=
Topic Starter
Thankyou ~
Hi ~ xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx ~
Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
OK ~ Hope this can help you ~
Good luck with rank ~
Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
[General]
- Inconsistent Artist/TitleUnicode,pls check osu file and fix.
- Add 'Collab' in tags.
[Rainbow x Regou]
- 00:38:755 - Add a circle to here,follow with piano.
- 00:41:532 (5,6,7) - I guess change a slider is better,1/4 stream is no fitting.
- 01:14:681 - Remove clap and Add finish.
- 01:26:718 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too close and confused parttern,try unstack is better.
- 01:31:069 ~ 01:35:051 - Why you change SC:2 hitsound to here?
- 02:16:162 (3) - Should change 1/1 slider,follow with lyrics.
- 02:55:421 (1,2) - This jump really huge and suddenly,reduce spacing pls.
- 02:57:273 (2,4) - ^
- 03:01:718 (2,3) - ^
[Hard]
- OD+1 is better.
- 00:51:718 (2) - This slider should end to 00:52:458.
- 01:44:310 (4) - Add finish.
- 02:29:866 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hidden by 02:31:532 (1) slider repeat.
- 02:53:755 - Missing Add finish to here.
[Easy]
- AR,HP-1 is better.
OK ~ Hope this can help you ~
Good luck with rank ~
01:31:069 ~ 01:35:051 - Why you change SC:2 hitsound to here?
Rika Sama只是因为这样比较好听点（？
你觉得不是很好听吗?如果是这样我一定会改正的~
求回复
Rika Sama只是因为这样比较好听点（？
你觉得不是很好听吗?如果是这样我一定会改正的~
求回复
osu file format v10
[General]
AudioFilename: SPiCa-NicoNicoChorus.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74681
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
[Metadata]
Title:SPiCa
TitleUnicode:SPiCa
Artist:Nico Nico Chorus
ArtistUnicode:Nico Nico Chorus
Creator:xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
Version:Rainbow x Regou
Source:Toku-P
Tags:Vocaloid2 Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Sun_Rainbow Sun Rainbow Nico Nico Douga Regou collab collaboration
BeatmapID:163842
BeatmapSetID:41000
[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2
[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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2,101547,103560
2,144510,155412
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255
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240,228,115607,1,0,0:0:0
352,180,115792,1,8,0:0:0
256,100,115977,1,2,0:0:0
204,312,116162,6,0,B|268:380|380:344,1,159.999990463257,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,232,116718,1,0,0:0:0
156,232,116903,2,0,B|108:236|60:276,1,79.9999952316285,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
72,348,117273,1,8,0:0:0
64,344,117458,1,4,0:0:0
260,216,118940,5,2,0:0:0
88,108,119125,2,0,B|128:32|236:48,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,136,119681,2,0,B|252:184|264:232,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,136,120051,2,0,B|372:96|368:56,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,244,120421,6,0,B|192:300|232:312|280:308|316:292,1,160
348,212,120977,1,8,0:0:0
400,292,121162,2,0,B|428:328|432:372,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
248,208,121532,1,0,0:0:0
220,116,121718,1,8,0:0:0
304,64,121903,1,2,0:0:0
388,116,122088,6,0,B|428:140|452:176|452:220|436:260,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
136,212,122644,1,0,0:0:0
44,240,122829,2,0,B|24:292|40:352,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,272,123199,1,8,0:0:0
300,224,123384,6,0,B|324:144|308:60,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,92,123940,2,0,B|204:132|216:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
302,303,124310,2,0,B|304:304|312:264|300:224,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,272,124681,2,0,B|52:292,1,160,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
12,208,125236,5,0,0:0:0
24,112,125421,1,8,0:0:0
232,188,125792,5,2,0:0:0
252,108,125977,1,0,0:0:0
304,44,126162,1,8,0:0:0
360,256,126532,5,2,0:0:0
400,224,126718,1,0,0:0:0
452,212,126903,1,8,0:0:0
444,304,127088,5,0,0:0:0
360,256,127273,1,2,0:0:0
264,256,127458,1,0,0:0:0
176,292,127644,1,8,0:0:0
84,284,127829,1,0,0:0:0
64,192,128014,6,0,B|52:112,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,128,128755,6,0,B|236:64,2,59.9999982118607,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
416,156,129495,6,0,B|436:112,2,40,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,336,130051,1,0,0:0:0
288,120,130236,1,2,0:0:0
428,288,130421,1,0,0:0:0
216,232,130607,1,2,0:0:0
64,100,132273,5,2,0:0:0
148,48,132458,2,0,B|168:96|164:140|132:180|92:196,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
107,188,133755,5,0,0:0:0
140,272,133940,2,0,B|184:256|232:264,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
396,280,134681,2,0,B|348:288|304:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
276,196,135236,1,0,0:0:0
240,108,135421,6,0,B|220:72,1,40,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,120,135792,2,0,B|364:88,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,220,136162,2,0,B|384:256|368:312,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
372,298,136903,5,2,0:0:0
127,325,137273,2,0,B|103:245,2,80,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,104,138384,6,0,B|148:140|208:152|260:124|268:76|268:76,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
263,87,139495,1,8,0:0:0
356,72,139681,1,0,0:0:0
448,104,139866,6,0,B|464:156,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,204,140236,2,0,B|368:248,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,324,140607,2,0,B|384:356|332:348,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,304,141162,1,0,0:0:0
164,320,141347,6,0,B|8:348,2,160,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,142921,12,0,143940,0:0:0
256,192,144310,5,4,0:0:0
128,84,156162,6,0,B|144:216,1,119.999996423721,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,276,156718,1,0,0:0:0
180,320,156903,2,2,B|228:368|296:364,1,119.999996423721,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,304,157458,6,0,B|352:284|388:284,1,59.9999982118607,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
492,212,157829,2,0,B|460:228|432:220,1,59.9999982118607,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,180,158199,1,0,0:0:0
288,180,158384,2,0,B|164:168,1,119.999996423721,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
104,220,158940,6,0,B|88:252|112:284,1,60.0000022888184,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,248,159310,1,0,0:0:0
36,304,159495,2,0,B|4:248|28:180,1,120.000004577637,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
25,189,160236,5,8,0:0:0
80,128,160421,1,0,0:0:0
160,104,160607,2,0,B|212:96|248:104,1,59.9999982118607,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
296,112,160977,2,0,B|360:132|436:120,1,119.999996423721,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
456,60,161532,1,0,0:0:0
376,200,161718,1,8,0:0:0
488,304,161903,1,2,0:0:0
488,304,162088,6,0,B|444:264|356:264|288:312|288:384,1,239.999992847443,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
84,364,163199,5,8,0:0:0
120,296,163384,1,0,0:0:0
60,248,163569,2,0,B|40:176,1,59.9999982118607,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,156,163940,2,0,B|124:88,1,59.9999982118607,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,48,164310,5,8,0:0:0
320,56,164403,1,0,0:0:0
368,68,164495,1,8,0:0:0
408,96,164588,1,0,0:0:0
436,136,164681,1,8,0:0:0
452,180,164773,1,0,0:0:0
456,228,164866,1,8,0:0:0
448,276,164958,1,0,0:0:0
420,316,165051,6,0,B|388:356|328:356,1,103.999998140335,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,236,165421,2,0,B|248:204|304:204,1,103.999998140335,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,340,165792,2,0,B|80:368|32:328|0:280|32:208,1,207.99999628067,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,128,166347,1,0,0:0:0
208,216,166532,6,0,B|252:172|248:116,1,103.999998140335,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,128,166903,1,8,0:0:0
208,216,167088,1,0,0:0:0
352,220,167273,2,0,B|392:180|456:176|512:204|532:260,1,207.99999628067,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,288,167829,6,0,B|220:248|216:184|244:128|300:108,1,207.99999628067,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,220,168384,2,0,B|380:268|372:336,1,103.999998140335,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,288,168755,2,0,B|144:344|64:228,1,207.99999628067,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,96,169310,1,0,0:0:0
368,140,169495,6,0,B|424:156|480:148,1,103.999998140335,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,96,169866,2,0,B|192:64|124:64|76:112,1,155.999997210503,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
64,140,170236,1,0,0:0:0
176,212,170421,1,0,0:0:0
208,248,170514,1,0,0:0:0
224,292,170607,1,8,0:0:0
220,340,170699,1,0,0:0:0
188,376,170792,1,0,0:0:0
84,296,170977,6,0,B|0:216|44:92,1,207.99999628067,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,224,171532,1,0,0:0:0
456,296,171718,2,0,B|480:244|472:188,1,103.999998140335,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,108,172088,1,8,0:0:0
224,164,172273,1,2,0:0:0
348,224,172458,5,4,0:0:0
224,280,172644,2,0,B|180:324|108:312,1,103.999998140335,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
32,132,173014,2,0,B|92:36|232:84,1,207.99999628067,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,280,173569,1,8,0:0:0
440,324,173755,6,0,B|500:232|464:120,1,207.99999628067,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
332,108,174310,1,8,0:0:0
312,100,174403,1,0,0:0:0
292,96,174495,1,0,0:0:0
268,96,174588,1,0,0:0:0
244,104,174681,1,2,0:0:0
224,120,174773,1,0,0:0:0
212,140,174866,1,0,0:0:0
208,164,174958,1,0,0:0:0
216,188,175051,2,0,B|240:244|224:304,1,103.999998140335,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,352,175421,5,4,0:0:0
36,72,175607,1,0,0:0:0
176,68,175792,1,8,0:0:0
300,168,175977,2,0,B|288:220|328:264|400:288|456:240,1,207.99999628067,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,96,176532,1,8,0:0:0
284,24,176718,1,0,0:0:0
168,124,176903,6,0,B|148:180|176:248,1,103.999998140335,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,288,177273,1,8,0:0:0
172,356,177458,1,0,0:0:0
52,280,177644,2,0,B|24:176|48:52,1,207.99999628067,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,288,178199,1,0,0:0:0
416,224,178384,6,0,B|432:168|420:96,1,103.999998140335,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,236,178755,2,0,B|192:296|204:348,1,103.999998140335,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,88,179125,2,0,B|228:44|164:44|104:72|96:132,1,207.99999628067,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
64,264,179681,1,0,0:0:0
204,236,179866,5,4,0:0:0
352,256,180051,1,0,0:0:0
452,352,180236,1,8,0:0:0
352,256,180421,1,0,0:0:0
360,116,180607,2,0,B|384:68|452:52|508:72,1,155.999997210503,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
496,68,180977,1,8,0:0:0
468,200,181162,1,0,0:0:0
352,256,181347,6,0,B|300:232|244:240,1,103.999998140335,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
120,284,181718,2,0,B|64:296|12:264|-8:204|32:136,1,207.99999628067,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
356,28,182273,1,0,0:0:0
408,216,182458,1,8,0:0:0
220,168,182644,1,0,0:0:0
356,28,182829,6,0,B|412:12|472:24|512:64|520:120,1,207.99999628067,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,160,183384,1,0,0:0:0
384,160,183477,1,0,0:0:0
384,160,183569,1,8,0:0:0
136,368,183940,5,2,0:0:0
256,304,184125,1,0,0:0:0
140,240,184310,5,4,0:0:0
124,220,184495,5,8,0:0:0
104,200,184681,5,8,0:0:0
88,180,184866,5,8,0:0:0
252,40,185236,5,0,0:0:0
204,128,185421,2,0,B|256:148|316:128,1,103.999991941452,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,185792,12,2,186903,0:0:0
72,88,187273,6,0,B|112:104|156:96,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
212,176,187644,1,8,0:0:0
308,136,187829,1,0,0:0:0
412,156,188014,2,0,B|448:224|424:328,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,272,188569,1,0,0:0:0
40,256,188755,6,0,B|28:300|44:344,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,272,189125,2,8,B|156:228|144:188,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,172,189403,1,0,0:0:0
176,160,189495,1,2,0:0:0
276,124,189681,2,0,B|300:156|292:208,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,64,190051,1,0,0:0:0
288,24,190236,6,0,B|372:56|388:172,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
456,220,190792,1,0,0:0:0
356,248,190977,2,0,B|332:304|352:368,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
351,365,191347,1,8,0:0:0
448,316,191532,1,0,0:0:0
448,316,191718,6,0,B|472:240|448:132,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,100,192273,1,0,0:0:0
276,148,192458,2,0,B|232:172|184:164,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,168,192736,1,0,0:0:0
160,168,192829,1,8,0:0:0
88,92,193014,1,0,0:0:0
60,192,193199,6,0,B|112:256|96:356,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
88,92,194125,1,0,0:0:0
120,72,194218,1,0,0:0:0
156,64,194310,1,8,0:0:0
192,68,194403,1,0,0:0:0
228,80,194495,1,0,0:0:0
288,168,194681,6,0,B|328:252|440:256,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
396,144,195236,1,2,0:0:0
396,144,195607,1,0,0:0:0
260,312,195792,1,8,0:0:0
104,200,195977,6,0,B|60:120|108:44,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,312,196532,1,8,0:0:0
352,352,196718,1,0,0:0:0
352,352,196810,1,0,0:0:0
352,352,196903,2,0,B|368:300|356:260,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
264,136,197273,2,0,B|256:180|264:216,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,176,197644,5,2,0:0:0
164,160,197829,1,0,0:0:0
384,180,198014,1,8,0:0:0
136,160,198199,2,0,B|104:184|44:176|8:156|4:108,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
92,64,198755,1,2,0:0:0
192,344,199125,6,0,B|228:264|328:280,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
408,216,199681,1,0,0:0:0
448,312,199866,2,0,B|492:284|504:252,1,80
504,232,200144,1,0,0:0:0
496,208,200236,1,8,0:0:0
444,120,200421,1,2,0:0:0
408,216,200607,6,0,B|236:256,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,324,201162,2,0,B|128:340|84:336,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
8,216,201532,2,0,B|52:200|96:208,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
4,316,201903,1,0,0:0:0
8,216,202088,6,0,B|48:144|20:56,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,24,202644,1,0,0:0:0
212,68,202829,2,0,B|284:36|368:76,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
440,152,203384,1,0,0:0:0
336,172,203569,6,0,B|340:256,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
428,308,203940,1,8,0:0:0
328,348,204125,2,0,B|308:384,2,40,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,216,204495,2,0,B|456:172,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,312,205051,6,0,B|120:344|32:332|-20:272|8:168,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
104,228,205792,2,0,B|120:188|120:140,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
24,104,206162,1,8,0:0:0
119,149,206347,1,0,0:0:0
228,164,206532,5,4,0:0:0
448,100,206718,1,0,0:0:0
320,268,206903,1,8,0:0:0
316,48,207088,1,2,0:0:0
112,324,207644,5,2,0:0:0
104,328,207736,1,2,0:0:0
96,332,207829,1,6,0:0:0
256,192,208014,12,0,213940,0:0:0
Thanks Rika >w<Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx ~
Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~OK ~ Hope this can help you ~
[Rainbow x Regou]
- 02:16:162 (3) - Should change 1/1 slider,follow with lyrics. ok
- 02:55:421 (1,2) - This jump really huge and suddenly,reduce spacing pls. ok
- 02:57:273 (2,4) - ^
- 03:01:718 (2,3) - ^
↑I don't really agree with this...This is the speed up part and the spacing is still playable...
Good luck with rank ~
热狗不厚道=3=害我得要重新来（？Regou wrote:
Thanks Rika >w<Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx ~
Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~OK ~ Hope this can help you ~
[Rainbow x Regou]
- 02:16:162 (3) - Should change 1/1 slider,follow with lyrics. ok
- 02:55:421 (1,2) - This jump really huge and suddenly,reduce spacing pls. ok
- 02:57:273 (2,4) - ^
- 03:01:718 (2,3) - ^
↑I don't really agree with this...This is the speed up part and the spacing is still playable...
Good luck with rank ~
=口=...
Hi!
this map seems already great, so just have few little suggestions~
[All diffs]
01:35:421 (1) - uh oh, why is this spinner so long?!
[Easy]
00:34:681 (4) - move on x:92 y:300
01:05:051 (4) - move on x:152 y:384
01:22:088 (1) - move first point after start on x:360 y:180
01:23:384 (3) - copy 01:22:088 (1) and flip it here
02:24:310 (1) - move second point after start on x:116 y:60
02:49:125 (1) - move first point after start a bit downwards (3 or 4 squares, which ever you prefer yourself)
[Normal]
00:28:755 (1) - move the point before end a bit more left
00:45:051 (4) - messy points, remake slider with 2 points
01:26:532 (1) - not really too bad, BUT maybe a bit too compact
03:02:088 (1) - same as 00:28:755 (1) but flip it
[Hard]
02:13:199 (4) - too compact
and everything else looks just fine~
good luck!
this map seems already great, so just have few little suggestions~
[All diffs]
01:35:421 (1) - uh oh, why is this spinner so long?!
[Easy]
00:34:681 (4) - move on x:92 y:300
01:05:051 (4) - move on x:152 y:384
01:22:088 (1) - move first point after start on x:360 y:180
01:23:384 (3) - copy 01:22:088 (1) and flip it here
02:24:310 (1) - move second point after start on x:116 y:60
02:49:125 (1) - move first point after start a bit downwards (3 or 4 squares, which ever you prefer yourself)
[Normal]
00:28:755 (1) - move the point before end a bit more left
00:45:051 (4) - messy points, remake slider with 2 points
01:26:532 (1) - not really too bad, BUT maybe a bit too compact
03:02:088 (1) - same as 00:28:755 (1) but flip it
[Hard]
02:13:199 (4) - too compact
and everything else looks just fine~
good luck!
M4M request~
Thank you for your mod and hope you like my mod too xD
SPOILER
Easy
Nothing to say :p
Normal
01:20:607 (1) - add finish on start
01:22:458 (2) - ^ on end
02:00:607 (2) - move to ( 132,348 )
02:01:718 (1) - ^ ( 304,180 )
02:19:125 (2) - add finish on end
02:21:347 (3) - ^
02:34:866 (2) - remove note
Hard
00:46:347 (1) - remove slider's whistle
01:23:384 (5) - add finish on start
01:35:236 (3) - remove finish
01:57:458 (4) - finish
02:19:866 (1) - more round to cover 02:20:607 (2) - this?
02:31:532 (1) - remove slider's whistle
02:33:199 ~ 02:36:162 - i think break time is not good choice add some notes or sliders
02:52:644 (5) - add finish on end
Rainbow x Regou
00:09:866 (2) - add whistle on start
00:34:681 (2) - add finish on start
00:43:755 (3) - make this slider more round to cover 00:42:829 (2) - this slider's end?
01:02:088 (1) - remove NC?
01:14:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this timing pattern is better imo http://puu.sh/1AYxE
01:17:273 (5,1) - why 1/1 slider? how about some notes and short slider?
01:21:903 (1,2,3) - ^
01:23:569 (1) - remove finsh and 01:23:384 - add finish here
01:27:458 (5) - not good location how about making star pattern?
01:32:458 (3) - add finish on start
01:53:569 (1) - use custom clap
01:55:051 (2) - ^
02:36:903 (3) - removes slider's whistle
03:01:347 (1) - add finish on start
Nothing to say :p
Normal
01:20:607 (1) - add finish on start
01:22:458 (2) - ^ on end
02:00:607 (2) - move to ( 132,348 )
02:01:718 (1) - ^ ( 304,180 )
02:19:125 (2) - add finish on end
02:21:347 (3) - ^
02:34:866 (2) - remove note
Hard
00:46:347 (1) - remove slider's whistle
01:23:384 (5) - add finish on start
01:35:236 (3) - remove finish
01:57:458 (4) - finish
02:19:866 (1) - more round to cover 02:20:607 (2) - this?
02:31:532 (1) - remove slider's whistle
02:33:199 ~ 02:36:162 - i think break time is not good choice add some notes or sliders
02:52:644 (5) - add finish on end
Rainbow x Regou
00:09:866 (2) - add whistle on start
00:34:681 (2) - add finish on start
00:43:755 (3) - make this slider more round to cover 00:42:829 (2) - this slider's end?
01:02:088 (1) - remove NC?
01:14:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this timing pattern is better imo http://puu.sh/1AYxE
01:17:273 (5,1) - why 1/1 slider? how about some notes and short slider?
01:21:903 (1,2,3) - ^
01:23:569 (1) - remove finsh and 01:23:384 - add finish here
01:27:458 (5) - not good location how about making star pattern?
01:32:458 (3) - add finish on start
01:53:569 (1) - use custom clap
01:55:051 (2) - ^
02:36:903 (3) - removes slider's whistle
03:01:347 (1) - add finish on start
Thank you for your mod and hope you like my mod too xD
Poor mod. Just suggestions :3
[General]
Maybe move Nico from tags? there's a nico in the artist already.
[Rainbow x Regou]
00:12:458 (1,2) - stack better
00:38:384 (5,6) - maybe a little difficult in reading?
00:49:310 (1) - stack better?
01:17:273 (5) - make the shape more beautiful?
01:57:273 (4,5) - maybe difficult for reading. I think move 01:57:458 (5) - to another place is better, or add NC? it will also cause a problem in reading 03:27:644 (1,2,3)
02:03:384 (1) - move it a little left to stack with 02:01:903 (6) - ? if u change this, don't forget 02:04:310 (3) -
02:05:236 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - makes me confused. If follow piano, the rhythm should be like this
02:08:014 (1,1,1) - I think if these follow the piano sounds better.
02:19:495 (2) - stack better
02:40:236 (1) - stack better
02:46:532 (1,3) - also i think u can move this to stack with 02:45:421 (2) -
02:53:569 (4) - move this a grid left to overlap with 02:52:644 (2) -
02:53:755 (1) - remove NC, and add nc at 02:54:310 (2) -
03:00:977 (6) - stack better
03:04:495 (1,1,1) - change clap to whistle?
03:05:421 (2) - move clap and finish? i think it's a little loud
03:19:866 (3,4,5) - how about changing to this, sounds better imo.
03:26:347 (4) - stack better
[Hard]
00:34:495,00:34:588 - something should be here. But if u ignore it, it's ok
01:28:755 (5) - x232 y144
01:47:273 (1) - remove nc
03:04:866 (5) - x444 y180
[Normal]
00:27:829 (2,3) - someone told me this part could be a little difficult in normal, but i think it's ok
00:32:458 (1,2,3) - you can make this triangle looks better
01:56:718 (1,2,3,4) - change these to sliders? (notes on red lines could be a little hard for new players)
02:04:125 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:07:088 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:34:681 (1,2,3) - ^
[Easy]
00:39:125 (2) - nc, 00:39:866 (1) - remove nc
00:47:644 (1,2,1) - different spacing?
01:50:607 (1,2) - ^
02:19:125 (2,3) - ^
[Overall]
Very good map :3 GL with ranking and a star ☆
[General]
Maybe move Nico from tags? there's a nico in the artist already.
[Rainbow x Regou]
00:12:458 (1,2) - stack better
00:38:384 (5,6) - maybe a little difficult in reading?
00:49:310 (1) - stack better?
01:17:273 (5) - make the shape more beautiful?
01:57:273 (4,5) - maybe difficult for reading. I think move 01:57:458 (5) - to another place is better, or add NC? it will also cause a problem in reading 03:27:644 (1,2,3)
02:03:384 (1) - move it a little left to stack with 02:01:903 (6) - ? if u change this, don't forget 02:04:310 (3) -
02:05:236 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - makes me confused. If follow piano, the rhythm should be like this
02:08:014 (1,1,1) - I think if these follow the piano sounds better.
02:19:495 (2) - stack better
02:40:236 (1) - stack better
02:46:532 (1,3) - also i think u can move this to stack with 02:45:421 (2) -
02:53:569 (4) - move this a grid left to overlap with 02:52:644 (2) -
02:53:755 (1) - remove NC, and add nc at 02:54:310 (2) -
03:00:977 (6) - stack better
03:04:495 (1,1,1) - change clap to whistle?
03:05:421 (2) - move clap and finish? i think it's a little loud
03:19:866 (3,4,5) - how about changing to this, sounds better imo.
03:26:347 (4) - stack better
[Hard]
00:34:495,00:34:588 - something should be here. But if u ignore it, it's ok
01:28:755 (5) - x232 y144
01:47:273 (1) - remove nc
03:04:866 (5) - x444 y180
[Normal]
00:27:829 (2,3) - someone told me this part could be a little difficult in normal, but i think it's ok
00:32:458 (1,2,3) - you can make this triangle looks better
01:56:718 (1,2,3,4) - change these to sliders? (notes on red lines could be a little hard for new players)
02:04:125 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:07:088 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:34:681 (1,2,3) - ^
[Easy]
00:39:125 (2) - nc, 00:39:866 (1) - remove nc
00:47:644 (1,2,1) - different spacing?
01:50:607 (1,2) - ^
02:19:125 (2,3) - ^
[Overall]
Very good map :3 GL with ranking and a star ☆
gogogo！
why not rank yet!~
why not rank yet!~
Topic Starter
xD
Thankyou A-tan ~ >w<
Thankyou A-tan ~ >w<
From my queue ~
[General]
00:27:273 (1) - Start mapping here, the starting of the map is too slow to be mapped D:
Don't follow only the vocals, try to follow the instruments!
[Easy]
00:39:125 (1) - Remove nc
01:07:273 (3,1,2,3) - Hard to read, change it D:
01:09:495 (1) - Remove nc
01:14:681 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538095
01:22:088 (1) - Remove nc
01:50:607 (1,2) - More nearer
01:57:829 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538103
02:02:088 (1) - Remove nc
02:04:310 (1) - Remove nc
02:24:310 (1) - Make this symmetrical
02:33:199 (1) - The spinner should end at 02:34:125
02:47:644 (1) - Remove nc
02:50:236 (1) - Remove nc
02:54:125 (1) - The spinner should end at 02:55:421
03:00:977 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538111
[Normal]
Drain -1
00:30:607 - Add a note
00:33:940 (1) - Remove nc
00:34:310 (2) - Add nc
00:41:718 (2,1) - More spaced
00:45:051 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538120
00:48:014 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Remap following the instruments D:
01:23:569 (1) - The spinner should end at 01:25:051
01:50:607 (1) - Remove nc
02:10:051 (1) - Remove it.
[Hard]
Od -1
00:45:792 (3) - x:432 y:36
00:50:977 (7) - Add nc
00:51:718 (2) - Remove nc
01:05:792 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538143
01:07:273 (3) - x:212 y:268
01:10:236 (3,1) - Moooore spaced D:
01:31:347 (4) - Add nc
01:31:718 (1) - Remove nc
Break time from 01:40:977 to 01:47:273
02:36:162 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - dafuq D:
[Rainbow x Regou]
Drain-1 Ar+1
Btw, perfect, congratulations :3
00:27:273 (1) - Start mapping here, the starting of the map is too slow to be mapped D:
Don't follow only the vocals, try to follow the instruments!
[Easy]
00:39:125 (1) - Remove nc
01:07:273 (3,1,2,3) - Hard to read, change it D:
01:09:495 (1) - Remove nc
01:14:681 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538095
01:22:088 (1) - Remove nc
01:50:607 (1,2) - More nearer
01:57:829 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538103
02:02:088 (1) - Remove nc
02:04:310 (1) - Remove nc
02:24:310 (1) - Make this symmetrical
02:33:199 (1) - The spinner should end at 02:34:125
02:47:644 (1) - Remove nc
02:50:236 (1) - Remove nc
02:54:125 (1) - The spinner should end at 02:55:421
03:00:977 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538111
[Normal]
Drain -1
00:30:607 - Add a note
00:33:940 (1) - Remove nc
00:34:310 (2) - Add nc
00:41:718 (2,1) - More spaced
00:45:051 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538120
00:48:014 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Remap following the instruments D:
01:23:569 (1) - The spinner should end at 01:25:051
01:50:607 (1) - Remove nc
02:10:051 (1) - Remove it.
[Hard]
Od -1
00:45:792 (3) - x:432 y:36
00:50:977 (7) - Add nc
00:51:718 (2) - Remove nc
01:05:792 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538143
01:07:273 (3) - x:212 y:268
01:10:236 (3,1) - Moooore spaced D:
01:31:347 (4) - Add nc
01:31:718 (1) - Remove nc
Break time from 01:40:977 to 01:47:273
02:36:162 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - dafuq D:
[Rainbow x Regou]
Drain-1 Ar+1
Btw, perfect, congratulations :3
Good Map. i'm starring this!
Hi!!
This mod you asked for PM
[Easy]
[Normal]
[Hard]
[Rainbow x Regou]
Good map, I feel that you need a taiko or CTB (CTB Talk to me if you want) is that at this point in map but will not do it for your next maps, it is always better if you have a unique Taiko .. and horn maybe a CTB (CTB mapper me: P)
I hope it is ranked, hopefully the have served my post .. Bye
This mod you asked for PM
[Easy]
00:33:199 A novice will not notice that there is another low note: 3
00:39:866 (2,3,4) It is an easy level, this will change with the pace the player: (
00:47:347 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) WTF! You changed the rhythm of easy to difficult level at a minimum .. must keep pace with the song, is a level for beginners, what you did leave it here for the difficult: P
01:08:755 (3) On set: P
01:16:532 And begins the insane partner!
01:18:284 (2,3) On set :3
01:22:088 (1,2,3) Insane begins again! FUUCKK YEAHH!! Jejejeje lol
00:39:866 (2,3,4) It is an easy level, this will change with the pace the player: (
00:47:347 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) WTF! You changed the rhythm of easy to difficult level at a minimum .. must keep pace with the song, is a level for beginners, what you did leave it here for the difficult: P
01:08:755 (3) On set: P
01:16:532 And begins the insane partner!
01:18:284 (2,3) On set :3
01:22:088 (1,2,3) Insane begins again! FUUCKK YEAHH!! Jejejeje lol
[Normal]
00:23:569 (4,5,1) 3 put on. _.
to a normal level only for 2 on positions .. max ..
00:50:792 (5) Replace with a circle :3
02:04:125 (1,2,3,4) Replace with a single slider, so that it is well
02:07:088 (1,2,3,4) Replace with a single slider, so that it is well
to a normal level only for 2 on positions .. max ..
00:50:792 (5) Replace with a circle :3
02:04:125 (1,2,3,4) Replace with a single slider, so that it is well
02:07:088 (1,2,3,4) Replace with a single slider, so that it is well
[Hard]
00:50:977 (1) Delete New Combo
00:51:532 (2) New Combo
[*] Good Diff.
00:51:532 (2) New Combo
[*] Good Diff.
[Rainbow x Regou]
Fine~
Good map, I feel that you need a taiko or CTB (CTB Talk to me if you want) is that at this point in map but will not do it for your next maps, it is always better if you have a unique Taiko .. and horn maybe a CTB (CTB mapper me: P)
I hope it is ranked, hopefully the have served my post .. Bye
Shohei Ohtani
Yay. Put your map last since I want to spend more time on this, since you said this was your first map (Your name sounds oddly familiar in a mapping sense, though o-o)
Overall:
01:35:607 - 01:47:273 - Seems like a good place for a break
Collab:
Jumps are meant to fit music. That's my main concern.
Which parts are for which person?
00:15:421 (3) - Make the slider more like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546504
00:18:014 (6) - Move this so it isn't overlapping (5)
00:18:755 (8) - This spacing is off for no reason
00:33:847 - If you're gonna make the previous section 0.5x, keep it 0.5x for this section
00:37:829 (2,3,4,5,6) - Looks and plays awkward
00:50:236 (2) - Overlaps with (1) and looks bad
00:58:940 (2) - Also overlaps
01:23:569 (1,2,3) - This slowdown is really awkward
01:29:866 (5) - Doesn't fit the music
01:31:162 - Random tick hitsound?
01:31:162 - Keep the hitsounds consistent.
01:35:607 - 01:47:273 - Seems like a good place for a break
01:55:051 (2) - Levels of not ok
02:02:644 (2) - ^
02:07:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - Incredibly awkward as there's no signification of a spacing change in the music
02:09:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - If the slider is going to slow down, don't make such large jumps afterwards
This last kiai section has so many weird jumps
02:55:607 (2) - Even this out
03:04:495 (1,1,1) - no NC
03:07:273 - Make it consistent weather you wanna use the snare hitsample or the clap hitsounds on your accent counts.
Hard:
00:18:940 (1,2,3) - This beginning is so calm but then this comes in and ruins the mood
00:45:792 (3) - Incredibly awkward
00:51:718 (2) - Remake this slider with 3 points.
00:53:199 (6) - ^
01:00:607 (5) - Make it more like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546514
01:05:792 (1) - Awkward looking slider
02:13:199 (4) - ^
02:57:644 (3) - Weird placement of this note
Normal:
00:42:644 (1,2) - Adjust this so it doesn't overlap with the previous slider
01:02:829 (1) - Make this more creative
01:20:607 (1) - ^
02:39:125 (1) - The top part looks like its tipping over
Easy:
It's fine just really boring
Collab diff is way too hard and jumpy.
Overall:
01:35:607 - 01:47:273 - Seems like a good place for a break
Collab:
Jumps are meant to fit music. That's my main concern.
Which parts are for which person?
00:15:421 (3) - Make the slider more like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546504
00:18:014 (6) - Move this so it isn't overlapping (5)
00:18:755 (8) - This spacing is off for no reason
00:33:847 - If you're gonna make the previous section 0.5x, keep it 0.5x for this section
00:37:829 (2,3,4,5,6) - Looks and plays awkward
00:50:236 (2) - Overlaps with (1) and looks bad
00:58:940 (2) - Also overlaps
01:23:569 (1,2,3) - This slowdown is really awkward
01:29:866 (5) - Doesn't fit the music
01:31:162 - Random tick hitsound?
01:31:162 - Keep the hitsounds consistent.
01:35:607 - 01:47:273 - Seems like a good place for a break
01:55:051 (2) - Levels of not ok
02:02:644 (2) - ^
02:07:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - Incredibly awkward as there's no signification of a spacing change in the music
02:09:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - If the slider is going to slow down, don't make such large jumps afterwards
This last kiai section has so many weird jumps
02:55:607 (2) - Even this out
03:04:495 (1,1,1) - no NC
03:07:273 - Make it consistent weather you wanna use the snare hitsample or the clap hitsounds on your accent counts.
Hard:
00:18:940 (1,2,3) - This beginning is so calm but then this comes in and ruins the mood
00:45:792 (3) - Incredibly awkward
00:51:718 (2) - Remake this slider with 3 points.
00:53:199 (6) - ^
01:00:607 (5) - Make it more like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546514
01:05:792 (1) - Awkward looking slider
02:13:199 (4) - ^
02:57:644 (3) - Weird placement of this note
Normal:
00:42:644 (1,2) - Adjust this so it doesn't overlap with the previous slider
01:02:829 (1) - Make this more creative
01:20:607 (1) - ^
02:39:125 (1) - The top part looks like its tipping over
Easy:
It's fine just really boring
Collab diff is way too hard and jumpy.
A mod from my queue!
Easy:
Awesomly made, find nothing to mod... Only a Nazi tip:
01:30:607 (2) - Symmetry
Normal:
Same as Easy.
02:14:681 (3) - Why not Ctrl+C/Ctrl+V this 02:15:421 (1)
Hard:
I find the AR too high regarding the SV
02:41:347 (4,5) - Exchange their places, it'll be a little bit harder...
Excuse me, but that's all what I can do ;___; It has been already modded so many times that I can't do anything...
No kudo please (but take a star!)
Easy:
Awesomly made, find nothing to mod... Only a Nazi tip:
01:30:607 (2) - Symmetry
Normal:
Same as Easy.
02:14:681 (3) - Why not Ctrl+C/Ctrl+V this 02:15:421 (1)
Hard:
I find the AR too high regarding the SV
02:41:347 (4,5) - Exchange their places, it'll be a little bit harder...
Excuse me, but that's all what I can do ;___; It has been already modded so many times that I can't do anything...
No kudo please (but take a star!)
Topic Starter
Fixed everything ~
Thankyou for your mod ~
Thankyou for your mod ~
Hi~ CrystalMoonAnime!
Mod from PM
I'm still so busy but managed to mod two diff for you!
The EZ & NM seems fine~Sorry I just tested them
[Hard]
Generally speaking, your arrangement on the rhythm is fine,but the flows are of too much overlap, and the arrangement makes the circles too close to each other, the sliders are too short & slow.
But that's ok since every mapper will face these problems when they made their first map
Come on and get more mods to improve it!
Suggestion:Get some nice maps of your map's BPM and diff, learn form their arrangements!
Like http://osu.ppy.sh/b/58323&m=0 or http://osu.ppy.sh/b/134511 or http://osu.ppy.sh/b/176514, and more!
00:39:125 (1) - Place it near the spinner center would be better.For example,X:180,Y:160. Or it would be hard for the players who draw big circles to pass the spinners.
00:45:792 (3) - Confusing overlap.Cancel it might be better.
Remember:its very confusing to hide a circle under a slider's end, especially for Hidden players.
01:35:421 (1) - The spinner is too loooong orz. Suggestion: Let it end at 01:37:644 add a circle at 01:38:014 Add another spinner at 01:38:384
01:50:792 (1,2) - The jump between 01:50:607 (3) and 01:50:792 (1) is confusing, hide 01:50:792 (1,2) under 01:50:607 (3) is ok.And don't forget the NC.
01:52:644 (6) - Cancel the overlap might be better. Place like this:
02:10:051 (1,2,3,4) - The overlap is enough from 02:07:088 to 02:09:866. Place them like this to cancel the last overlap:
02:57:644 (3,4) - Uhhh..confusing overlap orz
[Rainbow X Regou]
Nice diff~
00:46:347 (1) - Unnecessary jump. Arrange like this:
01:26:718 (1) - The circle is too close to the spinner,which is almost unrankable.
2 suggestions:
1)Let the spinner end at 01:26:162 and add a circle at 01:26:532
2)Or Remove 01:26:718 (1)
01:28:755 (10) - The overlap and the timing will make it confusing. Cancel the overlap (For example,place it around X:396 Y:176 to make a jump, since it's a downbeat)
01:23:569 (1,2,3) - SV is a little slow..maybe you could change them into circles.
02:55:607 (2) - The jump is a little hard, especially there is a stream before it. Place it on X:40 Y:192 might be better
03:04:310 (1,1,1,1) - Same colour would be better
From 01:31:718 to 01:35:421 ,Too much claps... you might place the claps on the red line and remove the claps on white line.
Thats all.Good luck!(My first map ends in the graveyard
)
A star for you~
Mod from PM
I'm still so busy but managed to mod two diff for you!
The EZ & NM seems fine~Sorry I just tested them
[Hard]
Generally speaking, your arrangement on the rhythm is fine,but the flows are of too much overlap, and the arrangement makes the circles too close to each other, the sliders are too short & slow.
But that's ok since every mapper will face these problems when they made their first map
Come on and get more mods to improve it!
Suggestion:Get some nice maps of your map's BPM and diff, learn form their arrangements!
Like http://osu.ppy.sh/b/58323&m=0 or http://osu.ppy.sh/b/134511 or http://osu.ppy.sh/b/176514, and more!
00:39:125 (1) - Place it near the spinner center would be better.For example,X:180,Y:160. Or it would be hard for the players who draw big circles to pass the spinners.
00:45:792 (3) - Confusing overlap.Cancel it might be better.
Remember:its very confusing to hide a circle under a slider's end, especially for Hidden players.
01:35:421 (1) - The spinner is too loooong orz. Suggestion: Let it end at 01:37:644 add a circle at 01:38:014 Add another spinner at 01:38:384
01:50:792 (1,2) - The jump between 01:50:607 (3) and 01:50:792 (1) is confusing, hide 01:50:792 (1,2) under 01:50:607 (3) is ok.And don't forget the NC.
01:52:644 (6) - Cancel the overlap might be better. Place like this:
02:10:051 (1,2,3,4) - The overlap is enough from 02:07:088 to 02:09:866. Place them like this to cancel the last overlap:
02:57:644 (3,4) - Uhhh..confusing overlap orz
[Rainbow X Regou]
Nice diff~
00:46:347 (1) - Unnecessary jump. Arrange like this:
01:26:718 (1) - The circle is too close to the spinner,which is almost unrankable.
2 suggestions:
1)Let the spinner end at 01:26:162 and add a circle at 01:26:532
2)Or Remove 01:26:718 (1)
01:28:755 (10) - The overlap and the timing will make it confusing. Cancel the overlap (For example,place it around X:396 Y:176 to make a jump, since it's a downbeat)
01:23:569 (1,2,3) - SV is a little slow..maybe you could change them into circles.
02:55:607 (2) - The jump is a little hard, especially there is a stream before it. Place it on X:40 Y:192 might be better
03:04:310 (1,1,1,1) - Same colour would be better
From 01:31:718 to 01:35:421 ,Too much claps... you might place the claps on the red line and remove the claps on white line.
Thats all.Good luck!(My first map ends in the graveyard
)A star for you~
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