Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa‬ · forum‬

B2IN

B2IN 2012-06-30T16:50:54+00:00

Hi ~ xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx

m4m

[General]
fine :3
[Normal]
consider. The front part in diff is generally too stiff.
01:29:125 (2) - Consider moving.01:26:532 (1) - this stack touches it
02:40:977 (1,2,3) - try this :3

SPOILER

[Hard]
01:29:125 (1) - This part does not fit the spinner..
02:10:236 (2,3) - right 1grid
02:19:495 (6) - Neatly stack to the slider
02:20:977 (3,4,5,6) - try this

02:23:570 (7) - remove ?
02:27:273 (1) - same.This part does not fit the spinner
02:45:144 (2) - remove
02:52:366 (4) - ^
[Rainbow x Regou]
00:18:569 (9) - um.. this overlappning is not good . consider stacking or respacing :3
01:17:273 ~ 01:18:940 - try this

01:25:236 (1) - end the spinner at 01:26:347. and add the note to 01:26:532
03:05:792 (1) - try this
Length: 03:05:236 ~ 03:06:903

good luck for rank !

My map : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/49720

ty !

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-06-30T17:11:07+00:00

Thank you ~ >w<
I'll mod your map soon ~

KRZY

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

4,850 posts

Joined May 2009

KRZY 2012-07-02T19:09:16+00:00

[Easy]
[quote="Ranking criteria: Guidelines":040ca]Your difficulties should all end at the same spot. Having a fully-mapped Normal/Hard and a half-mapped Easy just looks sloppy/lazy. A full Easy may look boring to you, but not to a player that can't handle the harder difficulties.I suggest you map this difficulty 'till where the other difficulties are mapped to if there is no special reason not to.

01:09:495 (1) - Divide this into two sliders, one covering 01:09:495 ~ 01:10:236 and the other covering 01:10:977 ~ 01:11:718.
01:16:903 (5) - NC
01:18:755 (1) - Remove NC
01:20:607 (4) - NC
01:22:088 (1) - Remove NC
01:22:088 (2) - Divide this into two sliders, one covering 01:21:903 ~ 01:22:644 and the other covering 01:23:014 ~ 01:23:940.

[Normal]
00:06:532 (1) - Stack this under 00:05:792 (4), and move the following three notes (00:07:273 (2,3,4)) to where 00:06:532 (1,2,3) are located currently. Place notes after this period accordingly.

SPOILER

00:16:162 (1) - Remove one repeat
00:19:125 (2,1) - Move these to 00:18:384, and remove one repeat from 00:19:866 (1)
00:21:347 - If you take the two mods above, you'll have to fill in this spot. Same goes for 00:22:088.
00:23:569 (3) - Try to place this note so that it does not overlap with the following slider.
00:26:347 (4) - Move the repeat somewhere else so it does not overlap with the previous slider. An example would be:

SPOILER

00:36:162 (1) - Make this a slider without a repeat, as there is no reason for a repeat to be there.
00:42:644 (1,2,3) - Try the below to avoid putting a note right after a slider and to better fit the music:

SPOILER

01:29:495 (1) - Remove finish at the end of the slider.
01:31:718 (4) - Remove NC.
01:33:570 (3) - End this slider at 01:33:940 and add a note at 01:34:310 to avoid putting a note right after a slider and to better fit the music.
02:08:755 (1,2,3) - Remove these notes.
02:10:051 - Add a note.
02:18:755 (2) - Remove.
02:20:977 - Add a note.
02:31:718 (1) - Divide this into two sections, one being 02:31:718 ~ 02:32:273 and the other being 02:32:644 ~ 02:34:125.
02:35:051 - Either add a note here, or remove 02:34:866 (2).
02:52:273 - Add something here. Personally I would recommend something like this:

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:47:273 (2,1) - Make these two parallel for better aesthetics.
02:27:273 (1) - Unfitting place for a spinner. Map it out.
02:39:125 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - I would map this part 4/4 instead of 3/5.
03:03:199 (4,5) - Not a good idea, very difficult to read where the slider ends.
03:05:236 (1) - This spinner ends in a place that is different with Normal. Make them match.

[Rainbow x Regou]
00:18:199 (8,9) - Replace with a single note at 00:18:199, as the rest is not mapped to anything.
00:26:347 - Add a note, since you've been following the vocals in previous sections.
00:32:458 ~ 00:38:384 - Currently, this part does not fit the music at all. Try something like the following. Place them accordingly (watch the timeline):

SPOILER

00:44:310 (4) - Start this slider at 00:44:495 instead. End at 00:44:866.
00:45:607 (2,3) - Switch these two to better fit the music. Place them accordingly.
00:46:347 (1) - Make this a repeating slider with the repeat on 00:46:718 to better fit the music.
00:48:014 (1,2,1,2,3) - Try the following to better fit the music. Place them accordingly (watch the timeline):

SPOILER

00:51:532 ~ 00:53:940 - Try the following to better fit the music. Place them accordingly (watch the timeline):

SPOILER

00:54:495 ~ 00:56:718 - Try the following to better fit the music. Place them accordingly (watch the timeline):

SPOILER

00:58:755 ~ 01:00:977 - Try the following to better fit the music. Place them accordingly (watch the timeline):

SPOILER

01:20:236 (7) - Break down into a slider and a note.
01:23:569 (1,2,3) - This slowdown is unexpected, and unnecessary.
01:24:310 (3) - Remove repeat .
01:25:236 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:25:051, and end it at 01:26:162.
01:26:532 - Add a note.
01:27:458 (1) - Remove.
01:35:607 - Is this timing section necessary?
01:35:792 - ^
02:16:903 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/3 is uncalled for. Nowhere in the music does it suggest a rhythm of 1/3.
03:05:236 - Add a note.
03:05:421 - ^
03:05:607 - ^
Why did you decide to map until the end of the song in only this difficulty? Refer to the ranking guideline I quoted on [Easy] mod.

Needs much, much more work before it can be considered for a bubble imo. Pay special attention to [Normal] and [Rainbow x Regou], as big chunks of these difficulties are mapped with disregard to the music. Try hard, and good luck!

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-07-02T22:08:01+00:00

QAQ
Thank you for modding!
I'll fix them soon. ><

Regou

1,936 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2012-07-03T03:55:18+00:00

KRZY wrote:
[Rainbow x Regou]
02:16:903 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/3 is uncalled for. Nowhere in the music does it suggest a rhythm of 1/3.(Oops,unsnapped, and fixed)03:05:236 - Add a note. Fixed
03:05:421 - ^ Fixed
03:05:607 - ^ Fixed
Why did you decide to map until the end of the song in only this difficulty? Refer to the ranking guideline I quoted on [Easy] mod.

Needs much, much more work before it can be considered for a bubble imo. Pay special attention to [Normal] and [Rainbow x Regou], as big chunks of these difficulties are mapped with disregard to the music. Try hard, and good luck!

SPOILER

osu file format v9

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Artist:Nico Nico Chorus
Creator:xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
Version:Rainbow x Regou
Source:Toku-P
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216,196,92366,1,0
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Atema

193 posts

Joined March 2011

Atema 2012-07-03T13:16:39+00:00

Hi ! From my modding queue

Easy

- I don't really understand why you did not use the distance snap in the beginning. Ok, the notes got the same spacing between them but I don't see why would you put a distance changement in an Easy. Well, I dunno if i'm clear but I advice you to respect it even in the beginning. Plus there are some (few) others distance mistakes, please recheck your map and follow the distance snap each time (not for the stacks ofc)

- Please, finish to map this diff, you can't have a difference where the play lenght is twice inferior as the others, that's not "fair" ^^

Normal

- Make this diff ends at the same time as the Hard diff ? Just just have to make the last spinner a little bit longer ^^

00:26:347 (4) - Please unstack this :it look weird when you just had every note and a stack on white ticks to have here a 1/2 and quite long stack.
00:30:977 (2) - Spacing
02:43:940 (2) - Make it end here 02:44:310 - ?

Hard

01:34:866 (1) - Put them like this 01:30:977 (1,2,3) - but going up and not down so it makes a parallel ?
02:10:607 (4) - Unstack this one please
02:36:162 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Loved this part XD
02:45:144 (2) - Remove this note ?
02:52:366 (4) - ^
03:03:384 (5) - "Unstack" this please ^^

Rainbow x Regou

01:57:644 - Map this break ? =O
02:24:495 - ^

Well good job, good luck !

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-07-03T14:05:25+00:00

Thanks ~
;-;
I guess i'll finish mapping easy then.

Verlaren

Verlaren 2012-07-14T21:44:34+00:00

Hai~

Hard:
01:15:977 - maybe NC?
01:16:162 - slider must end in 01:16:347
01:16:532 - add circle.
02:45:144 - remove circle.
02:47:088 - maybe add note?

Rainbow x Regou:
00:18:569 - remove note.
00:18:199 - unsnapped note. slider must be end in 00:18:569
01:30:051 - ^
02:39:495 - slider must be end in 02:39:681
02:39:866 - add note. (hitsound --> clap)
03:00:977 - remove note
03:00:607 - slider must be end in 03:00:977
03:11:347 - remove note
03:10:977 - slider must be end in 03:11:347
03:24:125 - slider should be completely on the screen. He's must be fully visible

Don't forget to place hitsounds.
If you would need my help, contact me at any time.

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-07-15T03:50:46+00:00

Thannkyhuu ~

Regou

1,936 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2012-07-20T11:41:17+00:00

Verlaren wrote:
Hai~

Rainbow x Regou:
02:39:495 - slider must be end in 02:39:681
02:39:866 - add note. (hitsound --> clap)
This doesn't sound really bad, and this properly give a better game flow
03:00:977 - remove note
03:00:607 - slider must be end in 03:00:977
You know, end every slider on White/Red line is very, very boring, and doing these changes won't really make a different
03:11:347 - remove note
03:10:977 - slider must be end in 03:11:347 No, the piano sound make the pitch isn't that correct so this would be better to hid that sound
03:24:125 - slider should be completely on the screen. He's must be fully visible It work fine in my computer

Don't forget to place hitsounds.
If you would need my help, contact me at any time.

Last edited by Regou 2012-07-21T02:19:50+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2012-07-20T15:18:27+00:00

from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]

[Easy]
00:46:347 (1,2,3) - difficult rhythm For Easy.
01:21:903 (1,2,3) - ^
01:56:718 (1,2,3) - ^
02:48:384 (2,3,4) - difficult for Easy
You should have long break.
You catch mass oof vocal but it is not easy...

[Normal]
00:15:051 (4) - NC
00:42:644 (1) - completely separate with before slider
01:30:607 (2) - completely separate with before circle or stack with No.2 circle.
02:20:977 (4,1) - add and delete NC

[Hard]
02:45:051 (1,2,3,4,5) - distorted

[Insane]
01:02:829 - KIAI TIME!?remove KIAI TIME.
02:12:458 - ^
nice map!

Good luck!!

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-07-20T16:33:16+00:00

Thanks ~

Dino99

1,830 posts

Joined May 2011

Dino99 2012-08-03T17:16:04+00:00

Hi~

<Easy>

AR+1?
00:15:051 (1) - Remove whistle is better IMO, because I don't hear bell here :<
00:15:421 - whistle to follow the bell~
00:39:125 (2) - finish here have a good effect :3
00:42:088 (3) - Remove finish
00:47:088 (3,1) - Stack a little>_>.. It looks not really good.. try to make them don't stack?
00:48:755 (2,3) - Blanketing it better~~ http://puu.sh/OhrN
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348,160,49125,2,0,B|360:208|352:264|294:294|236:277,2,200
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00:56:903 (2) - A little ugly QAQ.. Too twist..
01:09:495 (1,2) - Make them a bit curve? I think it's better~ http://puu.sh/Ohxc
01:21:903 (1) - Strange!!.. I strongly suggest change The slider's start at 01:22:088 - , (and add finish here :>)
01:22:644 - finish
01:23:384 - ^
01:33:940 - ^
01:34:495 - ^
01:43:199 (1) - This spinner should start at 01:44:310 - , I think it's better~~
02:04:310 (1) - Too twist >.<
02:07:088 (1) - Remove this slider? it sounds a bit strange..
02:36:069 - a bit louder :< How about 35% volume? I think it more fit the music
02:52:458 (1) - finish
03:04:310 (2) - ^
03:04:310 (2) - Change the slider's end at 03:04:866 - is better~ (Don't forget add finish at 03:04:866 - it really fit the music :>)
03:05:421 (1) - I highly suggest that change the slider's start at 03:05:792 -

<Noraml>

00:03:570 (1,2,3,4) - If you want make them to be straight... http://puu.sh/OhNl Here is the code
```
52,52,3570,1,2
180,148,4310,1,0
308,244,5051,1,2
436,340,5792,1,0
```
01:14:681 (1) - Ugly.. QAQ Try to fix the shape better~
01:17:644 (3) - ^
01:22:088 (1) - finish
01:33:940 - ^
01:34:495 (5) - ^
01:43:199 (1) - Same as Easy
01:50:236 (2) - How about 4 grid up? :>
02:10:051 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm... stack with 4 circle is not good in a Normal diff.. Use a slider with 2 arrows to replace them?
02:52:458 - finish
02:53:014 - ^
02:53:755 - ^
03:04:310 - ^
03:04:866 - ^

<Hard>

00:51:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - Strange ryhthm :< This is better IMO~

01:05:792 (1,2,3) - Blanketing it better!!~~~ http://puu.sh/OhZ1

412,92,65792,6,0,B|412:140|488:136|464:196|484:236|420:264,1,200,4|0
332,256,66903,1,2
396,196,67273,1,6

01:22:088 - How about this ryhthm? I think it's better~
01:31:718 (1) - This spinner is really strange here... I super suggest remove it and add some circle to replace!! ><
01:43:199 (1) - Same as Easy Orz..
02:13:199 (4) - Bad shape :< fix it plz!! ><
02:43:940 (5) - Add some green to Turn the volume gradually up?
02:52:458 (4) - finish
02:53:014 - ^
02:53:755 - ^
03:04:310 (2) - ^

<Rainbow x Regou>

00:17:458 (5,6) - 疊到了不是很好看..
00:18:199 (7,8) - 怪怪的節奏._. 這樣吧~ :>
00:35:051 (4,5,6) - 疊到一點>_> (4)再往上一些吧
01:02:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - 星星歪掉了OJZ.. 幫你重做了個.. http://puu.sh/OibJ 給個密碼吧~ @w@
```
276,80,62088,5,0
222,145,62273,1,0
268,216,62458,1,0
350,194,62644,1,0
354,109,62829,1,0
```
01:43:199 (1) - 這轉盤位置好怪.. 01:44:310 - 改這邊開始吧!!
02:44:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 音量漸增吧~ 挺好的

Okay~ That's all~
Good luck!!~~~~~

Kanari

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Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-08-03T17:30:52+00:00

Thankyou! >w<

Aunxfb

205 posts

Joined September 2011

Aunxfb 2012-08-05T03:03:44+00:00

From:Fishball's NEWBIE modding queue

Here goes~
[Easy]
00:03:570 - change slider velocity to 0.75x
00:03:570 (1) - change this into a slider, end it 2 beats away(00:04:310 - )
00:05:051 (2) - ^
00:07:273 - add circle
00:08:755 - ^
00:09:495 (1) - change this into a slider, end it 2 beats away
00:10:977 (2) - ^
00:13:199 - add circle
00:15:421 - move this timing section to 00:15:051
00:15:051 (1) - remove reverse(shorten it on timeline)
00:16:162 - add circle, NC(new combo)
00:16:903 (1) - remove NC
00:16:903 (2) - change this into a slider, end it 2 beats away
00:19:125 - add circle
00:19:866 (1) - change this into a slider, end it 2 beats away
00:22:088 - add circle
00:23:569 - add circle
00:32:458 (3) - add NC
00:33:199 (1) - remove NC
00:41:718 (2) - snap to 00:41:532
00:42:088 (3) - snap to 00:41:903
00:49:125 (3) - slider start at 00:49:310,shorten slider so it ends at 00:50:607
00:53:940 (2) - add whistle(although I dind it hardly noticeable...)
01:02:829 (1) - remove circle
01:01:347 (3) - extend slider so the last circle ends at 01:02:829 ,add finish to last circle
01:03:569 - add circle
01:03:940 (5) - remove slider
01:04:310 - start a slider here, end it at 01:04:681,NC
01:13:199 (4),01:14:681 (1) - remove circle(s)
01:13:199 - start a spinner here, ends it at 01:14:681
01:44:310 (1) - delete spinner?(seems like an extra to me)
01:50:607 (1) - delete circle
01:50:977 (2) - start slider at 01:50:792 ,end at 01:51:532
01:51:718 (7) - delete circle
01:52:088 (7) - start slider at 01:51:903,end at 01:52:273
02:52:458 (1) - add finish to last circle too?

[Normal]
00:26:347 (4) - add 2 reverse
00:28:384 (4) - snap this to 00:28:569
00:51:718 (1) - shorten slider so it ends at 00:53:014
00:53:569 (2) - snap this to 00:53:384
00:53:755 - add circle
00:54:681 (1) - end slider at 00:55:977
00:56:347 - add circle
00:56:532 (3) - snap to 00:56:718
01:14:681 (4) - add NC
01:20:607 (1) - remove NC ,add finish to last circle
01:22:088 (1) - remove NC and finish
01:22:829 (3) - snap to 01:22:644
01:23:014 - start spinner here, end it at same position
01:34:125 - add circle?
01:47:644 (1) - let slider start at 01:47:829
01:50:607 (1) - let slider start at 01:50:792
02:35:236 (4) - add reverse(extend on timeline)
02:48:014 (1) - delete circle
02:47:273 (5) - add finish
02:47:644 - start a slider here,end it at 02:48:014 ,NC
02:48:570 (3) - remove finish on first circle
02:55:421 (1) - add 1 reverse
02:56:162 (2) - snap to 02:56:347
02:56:718 - add circle

[Hard]
00:13:199 (2) - delete circle
00:12:458 (1) - add reverse
00:19:495 (2) - delete circle
00:18:940 (1) - extend slider so the second circle is at 00:19:218(Whole thing ends at 00:19:495 )(You may need some other fix for this(or just ignore this))
00:19:681 (2) - remove reverse,extend it so it ends at where it should
00:26:903 - add circle
00:27:088 - ^
00:42:088 (8) - add finish
00:45:421 (2) - snap to 00:45:607
00:46:162 (4) - delete circle
00:48:755 (3) - change this into a circle
00:51:347 (1) - snap this to 00:51:532
00:51:718 (2) - extend slider so it ends at 00:52:644
00:52:829 (3) - delete circle
00:53:199 (4) - let this start at 00:53:384 and ends at 00:53:940
01:17:644 (2) - let this start at 01:17:458, end at 01:18:384
01:21:718 (3) - snap this to 01:21:903 ,add NC
01:22:088 (1) - shorten slider, add 1 reverse(whole thing ends at 01:22:644).remove NC'
02:21:532 (4) - remove circle
02:22:273 (5) - remove slider
02:21:718 (4) - move to 02:22:088
02:23:570 (5) - remove circle
02:22:829 - start a slider here, end it at 02:23:940,add whistle/finish on second circle
02:26:347 - add circle
03:03:199 (4) - delete circle

[RainbowxRegou]
I'm not skillful enough to mod this,but I do see that it needs some modding, go get some experienced modder

Kanari

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Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-08-05T16:46:59+00:00

I didnt change anything for the beginning of the easy diff but the rest I changed ~
Thankyou for modding ~ ;D

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2012-08-07T02:18:24+00:00

general

remove your osb file and full submit

normal

00:39:866 (2) - add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:48:014 (1) - this note is a bit overlapped by the previous hitbursts, not good in normal imo
01:30:607 (2) - overlapped by hitbursts, i gess this one is not so serious but consider avoiding it too
01:47:551 (1,2,1) - i dont like how "skinny" this sliders are. you could try "S" sliders. i know s liders are too obvious but yeah, this is just my own opinion
02:55:421 (1,2,3) - this combo sounds really strange, i would sugest you add 1 repeat to (1) and move (2,3) to the next red ticks, but it will be difficult for normal because (3) will be too close to the next combo, consider changing the style of these two combos

hard

00:46:347 (1,2,3) - align then a bit more simmetrycally
02:22:273 (6) - overlapped by the previous hitbursts, still visible but looks bad imo
02:56:903 (2) - add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
03:03:199 (4,5) - i gess this placing does not works in small sliders, and looks confusing/ugly (imo)
03:05:236 - maybe a note here and in the next white tick? you are using it in normal i gess hard should use too
03:05:792 - i dont know much about this, but i think you should not end the kiai here. move this inherit to the previous note or to spiner end?

rainbow x regou

00:18:199 (7) make the slider end in the white tick?
00:18:569 (8) remove note?

i'm going to finish this mod later

edit
sorry for keep you waiting i was really busy ;_;

rainbow x regou

you are using 1x slider speed in the slow part of the song and 0.50x in the normal part, thats a bit strange imo
btw i think 0.50x is too slow for this sliderspeed

the rithym is so strange, in the 1st minute you are just filling the white/red tick as much as possible
try to follow the vocal and make it harder when it "calls for it" just like you did at 00:41:162 (4,5,6,7,1)
and dont force yourself to fill everrything

00:32:829 (4,1,2,3) - this pattern does not fits here imo, try to follow the vocal?
00:35:421 (6) - this long slider sounds really bad imo, ans using 0.50x slider speed its not "insane",
you should try to make it end at 00:36:162 in the long white tick

00:36:718 (1) - this reverse slider sounds bad, try to make it end in the long white tick
00:42:088 (1) - you should consider shortening this slider, it looks like a normal/easy long slider imo
try shortening it to 00:42:644 in the red tick, and make a 1/1 beat slider in the white tick
00:50:607 (3) - make this slider end at 00:51:532
00:51:532 - you made a slider speed change here while the slider still moving at 0.50x if you dont follow my sugestion above, move this inherit to the next white tick

01:57:644 - map this part too

01:17:273 (1,2,3) - this notes looked like a sudden slow down, this is my own opinion
try to keep the fast rithym of the previous notes and keep using the clap pattern?
01:33:940 (1,2) - align them better

thats all

good luck

Last edited by pimp 2012-08-09T02:30:49+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Nathien

44 posts

Joined January 2012

Nathien 2012-08-07T18:29:23+00:00

Well, ill give it a try, but dont expect to much =)
if its not helpfull just ignore it ^^

modding attempt

Easy:
01:50:607 (1) - 2 problems with this, first: to go with the vocals it would be on the blue line (but probably u knew that already ^^) 2nd and more important: while playing this part i was in another flow, so that i tried to hit the circle to early. Especially for beginners this might be difficult, so maybe move it somewhere else?
01:50:977 (2) - delete that slider, set a hitcircle there
01:51:347 (3) - set a slider to the next red line here
01:52:088 (4) - delete that slider
01:51:903 (4) - hitcircle here
01:52:273 (5) - hitcircle here

Normal:
00:26:347 (4) - this one is a bit difficult to read since its a compltely different beat
01:35:421 (1) - spinner giving 15k bonus ... mb a bit to long? the highes i've seen on ranked maps gave me 13k

02:55:977 (2) - i'd add a note here somehow, either give that slider more reversearrows or just put a hitcircle. Everytime i play i desperately search that note ^^

Hard:
01:22:088 (2) - make this one one tick shorter and add a reverse, sounds better to me
01:47:644 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is a strange mix of vocal- and beat-based notes, maybe its just me but it sounds a bit weird ^^
02:10:607 (4) - this was my first real "wtf"-moment while playing ^^ without watching the editor i would probably still search for that note >_< mb set it to x256, y48 ??
02:12:829 (3) - set this note to 02:13:014 (3)

rainbow x regou:
00:30:236 (1) - at this point i'd increase the sliderspeed again, it feels very very strange to have that insanely slow sliders there >_< + the music wants more notes! dont steal them ^^
00:30:607 (4) - missing note
00:31:347 (4) - missing note
00:35:421 (6) - this slider starts and ends in the middle of nowhere

00:36:718 (1) - same here, no real start no real end. It would be better if it would either fit the vocals OR the music (like drumbeat or sth)
00:39:866 (3) - maybe it would fit if there was no hitsound on the reverse, but i would rather make one more reverse and set them on the white lines like the beat wants them ^^
00:42:088 (1) - ok, here is a usefull start and endpoint, but im still missing notes, maybe add sounds to the sliderticks? would probably help. That goes for a lot of sliders, just try to give them slidertick-hitsounds.

well, thats what i found so far. Maybe (or probably) you did most of them on purpose, but since im a quite unexperienced modder i just showed you what caught my eye =)

its a great map anyway and somehow i began to like the song while listening it over and over again xD so good luck with it!

Last edited by Nathien 2012-08-08T12:29:51+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kanari

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Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-08-07T22:22:31+00:00

Thannkyhuu ~ >w<
I'll get to modding your map soon.
I'll update when PimpG continues with his mod ~

terametis

1,140 posts

Joined April 2009

terametis 2012-08-08T19:45:50+00:00

Hi

from your queue.

These are all suggestion.

[Easy]
00:49:125 (3)　　　　　　　　　I feel this pattern is difficult. It is not on vocal, so beginners must look at the approach circle. How about this?

SPOILER

01:12:755 (2)　　　　　　　　　Why different Distance snap? It has the potential to confuse the beginner.
01:50:607 (1)~(5)　　　　　　These are symmetric, but it is not an easy rhythm. I propose to make the same rhythm as part of one before.　

SPOILER

[Normal]
00:28:755 (1)　　　　　　　　　Different Distance snap.
02:55:977 (2)　　　　　　　　　How about this?　

SPOILER

02:59:125 (4)　　　　　　　　　Add finish.
02:59:495 (1)　　　　　　　　　Remove finish.
03:00:607 (2)　　　　　　　　　Add finish at the end of slider.
03:01:718 (6)　　　　　　　　　Remove finish.

[Hard]
00:28:014 (4)　　　　　　　　　I feel, Finish sound is a little noisy. If you want anything hitsound, I recommend change to whistle.
01:50:792 (1)　　　　　　　　　This jump is really confusing.
02:45:051 ~ 02:51:718　　Please add some finish. This song really fit finish.
02:56:903 ~ 03:01:718　　^

[Rainbow x Regou]
I feel noisy sliderslide sound. If possible, I propose remove it.
00:18:199 (1),(2)　　　　　　I don't like this pattern.
00:27:273 ~ 01:02:829　 This song really fit finish and whistle. I wish add some hisounds.
02:55:421 (2)　　　　　　　　 <3

That's all.

I wish your map is Ranked.
bye~

Kanari

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Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-08-08T20:38:22+00:00

Thannkkyhuu ~

Ohrami

685 posts

Joined March 2010

Ohrami 2012-08-09T05:09:10+00:00

fffffuuuuuuuckkckckck

sCam told me to try it

it's pretty cool

Last edited by Ohrami 2012-08-09T05:26:27+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Regou

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Joined July 2010

Regou 2012-08-09T05:17:35+00:00

What the-
double time!!!

@Crystal: I have no way to fix those 0.5x in rainbow's part...;__; so...

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-08-09T13:46:43+00:00

Maybe.... Sun Rainbow will have to remap again... ><
Anyway, please update soon, 5 mods already since last update on your diff ;w;

blehhh, let me see what I can do ~

andandd, Kyou-kun so pro ~ owo

CTB Fia

CTB Fia 2012-08-10T02:26:50+00:00

Easy
00:03:570 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - Try to use distance snap
01:44:310 (1) - remove this one (noob need a rest for a while you know)
01:03:199 - 01:03:569 - put a slider
02:13:940 (1,2,3,1) - please use distance snap
02:45:607 - you should start your notes here

and at song setup,decrease approach rate to 2 and hp drain to 2

Normal
01:23:199 - 01:24:773 - decrease spinner length
01:25:236 - try putting a slider here
02:10:051 (1) - copy this kind slider to 02:11:616

as you see from my modding queue
i'm just mod 2 diff for song >2 minutes
so i must take my leave anyway don't give up and i'm sure your map will be ranked for sure

Kanari

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Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-08-10T16:13:46+00:00

Sorry, no change. ;w;

Nichiyouki

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Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2012-08-11T17:22:33+00:00

Hi, xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

Fine

Easy

01:03:569 - Add a note here.

Normal

00:23:940 (1,2) - Remove NC in (1), but add it in (2) instead?
00:36:162 (1) - Slider end at 00:36:903 - be better.
01:14:681 (4) - Add NC
02:34:681 (1,2,3) - Move to up 1 grid
01:47:644 (2) - Adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

Hard

02:31:532 (6) - Add NC

Rainbow x Regou

01:57:458 - 01:59:125 Why you use the break? Because period of time to waiting is short.
00:27:273 (1) - Makes shape similar to (2).
02:05:792 (1,2,3) - I noticed that the position is a little strange. Moving them to left 4 grids and down 1 grid be better.
02:45:051 (1) - Move right and up to 1 grid. Spacing between (8) to (1) is farther than spacing in 02:44:301 (1) to (8).
02:55:421 (1,2) - Spacing is quite far. May move it closer than this.

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~

Kanari

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Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-08-11T18:15:15+00:00

Thannkyhuu ~
I did everything except the note in easy, I think its fine as it is ~

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2012-08-12T05:01:28+00:00

Hi~
Request from in-game ~ maybe this is recheck ?~

"re" is means "remove"
Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue

[general]

osb. should be removed >w<!

[Easy]

00:16:903 (1,2) - swap NC ?~ if you do this 00:19:866 (1,2) - too
00:30:977 (1) - re NC ?~
00:49:125 (3) - 4th point on x:292 y:300 ~ last point on x:236 y:288
00:59:495 (1,2) - swap NC ?~
01:29:495 (1) - last point on x:476 y:68 ?
02:41:718 (4) - x:104 y:116 ?~

[Normal]

00:22:088 (3) - NC ?~
01:17:644 (3) - ^
01:50:607 (3) - ^
02:45:051 (1) - remove whistle, clap and add finish at start?

[Hard]

00:55:977 (1) - re NC if you do this 00:56:718 (3) - NC
01:26:532 (1) - 3rd point on x:160 y:248
02:26:903 (8) - NC

[Rainbow x Regou]

嗯 ~ 咱想可以做些名字放在SB裡,這樣可以知道哪部分是誰做的;w;
00:15:421 (3,1) - 交換NC
00:57:458 (3,4) - ctrl+R吧? 感覺flow 會比較好 (被打
02:08:014 (6) - NC

good luck ~!

Kanari

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Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-08-12T14:19:36+00:00

Thankyou L18 ~ >w<

sCam

215 posts

Joined December 2011

sCam 2012-08-13T18:44:56+00:00

Star! Cause Crystal encouraged me to start modding maps, and cause Regou is a awesome mapper. Love your discharger map man, gotta give me that cursor trail D:

Snowy Dream

2,195 posts

Joined September 2009

Snowy Dream 2012-08-19T02:59:29+00:00

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
Try Offset: 3564 and then snap all notes and timing sections.

[Easy]
01:18:749 (2) - spacing?
01:50:601 (1) - remove this note since it's a bit hard for beginners to click it accurately
01:50:971 (6) - then newcombo here
01:59:119 (1) - finish at start
02:02:082 (1) - ^
02:32:823 (1) - try end at 02:35:230 .

[Normal]
00:36:162 (1) - finish at start
00:42:644 (1,2) - try to move to x:152 y:272 ,looks better.
02:35:236 (4) - move to x:244 y:244 then (1,2,3,4) form a line.

[Hard]
01:25:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try this..it sounds better

02:04:681 (4) - remove finish
02:27:273 (1) - :< dont be lazy ,map here without spinner
02:39:125 (1,3) - ctrl+R

[Rainbow x Regou]
00:14:866 (7) - 存在的意义不明放在这里不仅不好听而且还搞了个没意义的大跳节奏过于紧密没有层次感
00:18:940 (1) - 00:19:125 从这里起吧> >
01:23:570 (1,2,3) - 求教这里减速的意义？
03:07:273 (1) - 开头finish
--------------------------------------------------
总体来说还好=-=
Nice Mapset
Good Luck

Kanari

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Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-08-20T14:28:44+00:00

Thank you ~

I'll leave the offset as it is though.

Stefan

Global Moderator

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Joined January 2011

Stefan 2012-08-24T18:27:51+00:00

Yo.

[General]
Add "Sun Rainbow" as Tag. I just checked out and I got way more results by searching this Tags.

[Easy]
The Begin (until 00:25:792) looks boring with using almost only Hit Circles. Let me give some Ideas.
00:09:495 (1,2) - Instead of Hit Circles you could also use a Slider.
00:12:458 (1,2) - ^
00:21:347 (1,2) - ^
00:25:792 (2,1) - The transistion of the Sliders looks strange and feels not really good to play. Try another placement.
00:39:866 (1) - Add Whistle at the Start.
00:45:051 (3) - ^
00:46:347 (1) - ^
00:47:088 (3,1) - This could be too fast for a beginner, especially because (3) starts as 1/2 Beat and (1) as 1/1.
00:47:644 (1) - Add Whistle at the Middle Point.
00:51:718 (1,2) - You should Ctrl+J (1) and add Whislte at the Start. Move (2) that it is snapped. This would look much better: http://puu.sh/YoYu
00:54:681 (1) - Remove NC.
00:56:903 (2) - NC
00:58:384 (1) - Remove NC.
01:01:347 (2) - You should move the Middle Point a bit away from the Corner.
01:03:569 - I would really like a Circle here.
01:03:940 (3) - (Only if you accept 01:03:569) Move it to 01:04:310.
01:05:051 (4) - (Only if you accept 01:03:569) Delete it and set a Circle at 01:05:421. (It would look like this: http://puu.sh/Yp3M)
01:16:162 (3,4) - It should be not too close in the edge.
01:22:088 (1) - NC is not neccessary.
01:44:310 (1) - This Spinner makes no sense here imo. I would recommend to remove it.
01:47:273 - (Only if you follow 01:44:310) Set a Circle with Finish.
01:50:051 (5) - Change the Circle into a 1/2 Slider. It fits better with the Music.
02:07:088 (1) - Move it to 02:07:273, and please change this Slider like here: http://puu.sh/Yphd
02:13:940 (1) - Remove NC.
02:32:829 (1) - I would move it to 02:33:199, because Miku's Voice hold it at this time. And it should end at 02:36:162.
02:36:162 (1) - (Only if you accept the suggestion above) Delete this Slider and set a Circle at 02:36:903.
The whole Kiai Time (from 02:45:051) should have a Volume of 75%. The current Volume is really low.

The Diff is much better as last time when I modded it. But it needs still work at it. I personally say, that the Rhythm is sometimes not there and could be done better.

[Normal]
00:27:829 (2,3) - I would perfer a 1/2 Slider.
00:34:310 (2,3) - Move (3) a bit away, to avoid touching.
00:36:162 (1) - NC is not really neccessary.
00:41:718 (2,1,2) - The flow is awkward.. Try this: http://puu.sh/YpLi
00:42:644 (1,2,3) - It feels very fast.. You should change something.
00:44:866 (1,2) - Move them to x:220,y:184.
00:46:347 (1) - Spacing Error.
00:48:014 (1) - Move it at x:364,y:72. The current position is confusing.
00:50:051 (3,4,5) - You should avoid this in Normal Diffs.
00:59:495 (2,1,2,3,1) - Change the placement, it looks ugly at the moment.
01:17:273 (2,1) - Shouldn't the Finish of (2) be at the Start of (1)?
01:26:532 (1) - Remake this Slider. Like this?: http://puu.sh/YpPK
01:44:310 (1) - Same as in Easy.
02:05:421 - Set a Circle.
02:06:162 - ^
02:08:384 - ^
02:09:125 - ^
02:13:755 (1) - Set at the End Finish.
02:22:273 (1) - Please silence at least the End of the Spinner.
02:29:866 (2) - Remove Whistles.
02:31:718 (1) - Add Whistle at the Start.
02:34:681 (1,2,3,4) - Feels really fast to click..
02:52:273 (1,2,3) - I would not recommened to set this pattern for a Normal Diff.

The Diff has no real Hitsound building, the Hitsounds sounds sometimes not really senseful and at other places they are Hitsounds like Whistle missing. However, I also would say that this Diff need some more work. But it goes a good way, so keep it up!

[Hard]
00:19:681 (3) - Ctrl + J it, looks cooler.
00:46:347 (1) - Whistle on the Slider sounds bad, remove it.
00:59:495 (3,4,5) - The Start of (5) looks very hidden due the End of (3).
Please check the Hitsounds from 01:14:681 - 01:35:421, you should add more there.
01:44:310 (1) - Same as the Diffs before.
01:47:644 (1) - Remove NC.
02:10:051 (1,2,3,4) - What the.. Such a Jump totally don't fit in a Hard Diff.
02:20:977 (3,4,5,6,7) - You should change the placements of the Hitobjects.
02:55:421 (1) - I don't like the Spinner so much..
03:03:199 (4,5) - (5) makes it confusing.

The Diff need way more work. The placement of some Circles are terrible and the Rhythm should made much better.. To be honest, I would except of the first 1/4 remake the Diff.

Conclusion:
The Mapset is much much much better then some months ago, but you need in all still work. About the Sliders: This thread should help you to create your Slider better. The Hitsounds at Normal/Hard should made better. I gave you a Star, since I thought I gave you one in the past, so orz.

Flask

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Flask 2012-08-24T19:20:50+00:00

Hey Crystal :3 sorry for a huge delay x_x

Mod Request via In-Game PM

[General]

anyway, you should put some claps like this http://puu.sh/q20x in kiai time or anywhere .-., rhythm always need you~
Remove .osb if you want
Maybe add "Sun Rainbow" in tags? (no _)
Other's are fine~~~

[Easy]

AR-1 please
00:03:570 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I hate this part ;w; it's weird and a litttttle bit hard imo. Try to do that long slider to instead? Such like this.
SPOILER
00:27:273 (1) - Try this~
SPOILER
```
344,192,27273,6,0,B|384:124|328:64|252:-32|168:68|124:128|164:196,2,400
```
(If you use this please do some change o.o)
00:49:125 (3) - Spacing
01:07:273 (3) - finish?
01:10:236 - ^
01:34:310 (3) - I'd like to change to a note and put it at 01:34:310 -
01:44:310 (1) - This should be remove imo
02:04:310 (1) - Add a reserve and put finish on 02:05:051 -
02:13:940 (1) - Remove nc
02:13:940 (1,2,3,1) - Boring here orz. try to make a square?
02:21:347 (3) - ~~I got confuse here~~spacing and this would be confuse imo ._.
02:50:977 (2) - finish

[Normal]

00:03:570 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - You know it. If I were you I'll change all to 1/4 slider xD
00:44:495 (3) - remove it?
01:17:273 (2) - why finish o.o
01:20:236 (2) - ^
01:21:718 - ^
01:23:199 (1) - Maybe stop at 01:25:792 - to keep some distance with (1)?
01:34:866 (1,2,3) - Change to a slider that has 1 reserve
01:44:310 (1) - Same as Easy
02:24:310 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - You put them just on a line Try to do in other ways
02:36:162 (1,2,1,1,2,3) - What all clap?! sounds weird ._.
02:53:940 (1) - Use a slider to instead please, this's to short

I'll give you the full mod tomorrow :3 I mean "today" xD now is... 03:19 am o.o I should go sleep and I'm going to sleep
*don't give me kd please please*

*27/8
[Hard]

00:03:570 (1,2,3,4) - If you want, I suggest you to change these note to a slider that reserve 2 times
00:28:014 (4) - why finish?
01:05:792 (1) - If you want to make a blanket with (3), put the third tick on x:448,y:152 , forth tick put on x:432,y:224, fifth tick put on x:436, y:256. (more blanket imo lol)
01:15:977 (1) - My brain told me you should make a jump
01:19:495 (8) - why finish?
01:20:970 - add a note
02:13:755 (1,2) - You should add finish at (2) not (1)
02:14:310 (3) - remove finish
02:29:403 (1) - delete this ._. it's hard to read imo
03:03:199 (4,5) - What is thissssssssss
03:05:607 - note here plz.
03:05:607 (1) - move to long white tick (don't forget do it shorter!)

[彩虹x熱狗(?)]

00:15:421 (3) - finish吧
01:03:014 - 為什麼不map
kiai那邊是什麼怪clap下法 orz
02:06:532 (1,2,3) - 這三顆spacing改0.8 我覺得比較對的上O~O (因為這裏有3個不同的spacing, 1.2>1.0>0.6 最後應該是0.8)
02:10:607 (5) - 好吵去clap
02:38:940 (5) - 做成這個還能跟(7)作個包 o.o http://puu.sh/ZfJY

我比較喜歡熱狗的part -w-

Goooood luck~~~

Last edited by Flask 2012-08-27T07:46:12+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kanari

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Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-08-24T19:42:52+00:00

pwq
I'll fix all of it soon, thanks for your mods~

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2012-09-06T01:26:20+00:00

Map looks fine to me. Nothing to mod here!

those

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Joined November 2010

those 2012-09-06T01:45:16+00:00

Quick run through of collab diff.

[Rainbow x Regou]

Slider tick rate 2, based on the amount of 1/2 rhythms you have in the entire map. You can also emphasize your hitsounds more clearly with fixed slider ticks - important in the Kiai.
01:25:144 (1) - Hitsound(s) missing from spinner end.
01:26:718 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Not one bit readable. Pattern can be improved to represent song better.
01:30:977 (2) - Not too sure what you're trying to emphasize with S:C2 clap here, but I don't think it fits very well.
01:54:495 (3,1) - Best if unstacked. If used correctly, it works great, but in this position it just creates a stalling, hanging feeling.

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2012-09-13T13:07:12+00:00

Hi from #modreq
General
almost suggestions
Easy
Placement
00:49:125(3) DS error? if you aim something, sorry this.
Rythem
01:50:607(1) I think this stacking note is difficult for newbie because music rythem changed. so I suggest rythem and placement like this

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
01:23:014(2) add whistle? it's strong voice heard for me.

Normal
Placement
Rythem
01:22:458(2,3) this rythem doesn't fit well with this song, so try to use this rythem?

SPOILER

01:34:310(4,5) delete those and add 1/4 slider? it's a bit hard for Normal in using notes many times imo.
Hit Sonud
01:26:532(1) add finish at reverse? you already did that 01:14:681
02:50:977(5) remove finish at reverse and add finish at head?
02:57:644(2) what strong pushes with all adding hitsounds? i don't know how this mean but, removing finish better cause this vocal doesn't strong.

Hard
Placement
Rythem
01:25:051(1,2,3,4,5,6) it doesn't fit this rythem with vocal, so try this rythem?

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
01:47:243~02:03:384 without hitsounds? other diffs seem to be added hitsounds, so I think you can put hitsounds, if you aim something, not to be.
02:52:644(5) add finish at end?

Rainbow×Regou
nice diff =3
Hit Sonud
01:34:681(3) I think without hitsounds seems more good because of weak vocal.
02:10:607(5) delete finish, clap and add whistle?

it's fun for me, good luck and star!

Kanari

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Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-09-13T21:20:48+00:00

Thankyouu for your mod ~

Laurier

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Joined February 2011

Laurier 2012-09-14T11:22:35+00:00

mod4mod time

Easy
00:09:495 (1) - make a little curve ? It's fit the song http://puu.sh/14Xqk
00:21:347 (1) - ^
00:36:162 (1) - ^
00:53:940 (2) - add finish
01:25:051 (1) - like this http://puu.sh/14XrG
01:28:014 (2,3,4) - (3) bit down . It's make good flow imo
01:34:866 (4) - http://puu.sh/14XsZ
02:59:125 (3) - nazi fix spaxing(1 grid left)

Normal
00:16:162 (1,1) - same opinion as easy make a curve?
00:24:310 (1) - ^
00:37:273 (1) - move 00:37:644 - and 00:37:273 - add note
00:42:829 (2,3,4) - like this http://puu.sh/14XxM
02:21:347 (6) - like thishttp://puu.sh/14Xz2
02:53:940 (1) - this spinner is broke flow

Hard
00:34:681 (3) - move this is better http://puu.sh/14XAp
00:58:384 (1) - delete 2nd way point
01:05:792 (1) - like this http://puu.sh/14XB6
02:55:421 (1) - ~ try this http://puu.sh/14XCa

Rainbow x Regou
00:30:236 (1) - wyh not Symmetrical ?
00:48:014 (1,2,3) - like this ? http://puu.sh/14XEo
02:55:421 (1) - this jump is too far..

That's all

Regou

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Regou 2012-09-15T03:23:06+00:00

Fixed something~
I didn't fix 02:55:421 (1) ... mind that it's the speed-up part and this is an Insane diff...
http://puu.sh/15cd1

alacat

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alacat 2012-09-15T04:29:54+00:00

Hi:3

[General]
●fine

[Easy]
●00:15:051 (1) - Aim for here ? 00:16:903 (2) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/432534
●00:47:644 (1,2,3,4) - Make the spacing equal here
●00:58:384 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head ? follow the piano sound :3
●01:47:644 (1) - Too soon after spinner.try to close the center?
●02:05:051 - Why put a Break time ? you should put a note ><
●03:04:310 (2) - remove clap on slider head . it doesn't follow the music well.

[Normal]
●00:37:273 (5) - add whistle
●00:45:051 (4) - changed to curved one slider?
●00:59:866 (1) - remove finish.or use lower volume?
●01:20:607 (1) - some-repeats-sliders are confusing for beginners .
●01:23:014 (3) - add finish on the slider's end
●01:31:718 (4) - remove whistle .
●01:56:718 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm here is hard to take a little.make some slider ?
●02:04:125 (1,2,3) - try this ?

●02:07:088 (1,2,3) - same , here
●02:17:644 (1) - add finish on the slider's end instead of whistle? it needs stronger sound imo o.o
●02:21:347 (6) - same here ~ but Case here slider's head ><
●02:24:310 - use lower volume? since the melody is calmer than previous part.around 40% ~ 50%
●03:00:977 (3) - remove finish ><

[Hard]
●00:12:458 (1) - add whistle on the slider's head ?
●01:30:607 (1,2,3) - try align the vertical x:40 or 44
●01:50:051 (2) - add finish on the slider's end
●02:00:421 - add note ? follow the Lyrics
●02:24:310 - same Normal diff ~
●02:36:162 - ～ 02:36:162 - gradually add volume? for last kiai time ></

[Rainbow x Regou]
●00:18:940 (1) - Hmm, it doesn't follow the music well. I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.

●00:25:792 (1) - remove New combo
●01:01:162 (1) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/432551
●01:20:236 (2) - add finish on the slider's end
●01:22:088 - it needs stronger sound imo o.o make notes or slider and add finish sound :3
●01:34:310 (2) - same ,here 01:01:162 (1) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/432553
●02:36:162 - same Hard diff ~

(ﾉ･ˇ∀ˇ･)ﾉ spica ~ ♪

good luck ^^

Last edited by alacat 2012-09-15T04:58:03+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Aurele

Global Moderator

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Joined January 2011

Aurele 2012-09-15T04:32:29+00:00

Going to look at this map anytime soon.
Be ready for an huge mod c:

Himesaka Noa

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Himesaka Noa 2012-10-01T11:04:17+00:00

Hi, xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx.

I try to mod this beatmap by your request, but i can't mod this beatmap.
I'm so sorry, i'll shoot a star when i have more than one kudosu T^T

P.S. Video offset is 273 (± 5).

Edit: Shoot a Star =☆

Last edited by Himesaka Noa 2012-10-03T07:07:41+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kanari

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Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-10-01T12:08:08+00:00

Oh okayy, its fine ~

Kuroneko-sHerald

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Joined August 2008

Kuroneko-sHerald 2012-10-07T16:32:16+00:00

[General]
I suggest to swap the combo colour order, because these colours are too similar.
So instead of

Combo1 : 44,243,184
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 196,136,255
Combo4 : 255,179,255

I think is better

Combo1 : 44,243,184
Combo2 : 196,136,255
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 255,179,255

or something similar

[Easy]
00:15:051 (1) - I suggest to spacing properly this. It's confusing (especially for newbie) since it's close to the previous beat.
00:49:125 (3) - New Combo to be consistent with 00:46:347 (1) -
00:49:125 (3,4) - I think that would be nice to move (3) to 00:49:310 - (with same end) and fix slider and spacing. That way it follow the previous placement (00:46:347 (1) - ) and, for me, sounds better.

Example

01:50:977 (2) - Spacing. This is my suggestion:

Example

Find another way if you don't like, but fix spacing.

[Normal]
02:20:977 (4) - New combo because it suddenly has a triplet.
02:52:273 (1,2,3) - Move all up (see image) so (2) doesn't overlap with 02:50:978 (5) - and it's more readable.

SPOILER

[Hard]
02:08:755 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Overlap and then jump?

If you want to keep it, I suggest to change like the image, so it should be more simple to understand.

SPOILER

02:29:403 (1,2) - Please unstack (1). It's on a blue tick and is a jump. I suggest to move it 6 grid up (grid size 4).
02:29:866 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Do you really like to overlap, uh?

[Rainbow x Regou]
00:49:495 (2) - Overmapping for me. I suggest to remove it. It sounds unnatural.
01:26:718 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Overlapping everywhere lol (no need to change btw)
01:55:051 (2) - Overmapping for me. If you want to keep it i suggest to space correctly this beat and 01:54:866 (1) -

Example

Sorry for the problem

Kaburagi Kotetsu

903 posts

Joined September 2012

Kaburagi Kotetsu 2012-10-20T12:42:04+00:00

Hi!
thank you for mod my map last time.

and.. I can't speak English

[Easy]
　
00:09:495 (1) - last point : (136, 108)
01:23:384 (3) - http://puu.sh/1gJQE How about arrange like this?
　
[Normal]
　
00:19:125 (3) - Remove NC
00:21:347 (1) - NC
00:22:088 (2) - ^
00:36:162 (4) - ^
00:59:866 (3) - Remove NC
00:23:569 (3,4,1) - (344, 208)
00:33:199 (3) - (328, 112)
01:29:125 (2) - (372, 272)
01:29:495 (1) - (304, 312)
　
[Hard]
　
00:18:384 (4) - (128, 80)
00:41:162 (6) - (156, 236)
You can fix it 02:22:273 (6) - 1st point : (392, 88) 2nd point : (264, 40) 3rd point : (248, 196) last point (116, 164) http://puu.sh/1gKaY

jesse7419

405 posts

Joined March 2011

jesse7419 2012-10-21T18:30:54+00:00

Hi XCrystal :3

mod from m4m , sor for my late.

[General]

fine~

[Easy]
00:03:570 (1,2) - maybe move right 1 grid are more symmetry with 00:06:532 (1,2) - and 00:12:458 (1,2) -
00:30:977 (2) - NC?
00:33:940 (2) - move to x:176 y:160 and 00:34:681 (3) - move to x:96 y:300 will be symmetry.
00:58:384 (2) - distance fix to 0.8x.
01:22:088 (1) - ^
01:44:310 (1,1) - a little far for newbie.
01:50:607 (1,2) - the change distance I think newbie can't read it >< (Except 02:19:125 (2,3) - is fine because not have continuous notes for this part,so you can do this.)

[Normal]
01:53:199 (2) - whistle?
02:36:162 - to 02:42:829 - clap is a little loud , same with Easy is more better!
02:43:940 (2) - add finish in slider end?
02:57:644 (2) - distance can fix more better to let 02:56:903 (1,2,3) - look more good.

[Hard]
00:12:458 (1) - I can't hear whistle in this slider.
00:45:051 (1) - change to slider?

SPOILER

00:54:495 (6) - NC
00:54:681 (1) - remove NC
01:49:495 (1) - change a circle in 01:49:681 - will more flow the music and your rhythm.
02:00:977 - I think this can put notes in Hard diff. How about this?

SPOILER

02:03:755 - add a circle?
02:15:421 (5) - add finish in slider head.
02:20:977 (3) - change finish in slider end?
02:21:718 (5,6) - rhythm is not good for me. How about 02:21:718 (5) - change a circle and 02:22:273 (6) - move to 02:22:088 - ?

SPOILER

02:36:162 - to 02:42:829 - clap same with Normal.

[Rainbow x Regou]
This diff I can use Chinese -.-?
好吧我用中文好了...

00:05:792 (5,6) - slider 開頭都上whistle? 或5上就好
00:07:644 - 這之後的whistle換位置了我個人比較喜歡把whistle都上在長白線跟第三根白線上 (鋼琴變調都在這上面)
00:17:458 (5,6,7) - 不太好看 6跟7的距離也跑了
00:38:384 (5) - whistle?
00:52:273 (4,6) - slider 開頭都上whistle?
00:56:162 (6) - 尾巴上finish
00:57:644 (4) - 總覺得這邊才是slider的地方...跟Vocal 這樣如何?

SPOILER

00:57:829 (5) - 這尾巴上whistle?
00:58:569 (1) - 感覺尾巴才是上whistle的地方
02:50:977 (1,2) - 好跳 QAQ 而且我覺得 02:51:718 (3) - 更適合跳
02:55:421 (1,2,3,4) - 這不科學跳的距離都不一樣我只這邊miss了 0.0
02:58:199 (5) - 放在 x:168 y:214 如何?
03:28:014 (1) - 在 03:32:829 - 這邊結束?

It's good enough for your fist map

I see you already get enough mod
Good Luck with rank!!
Star~☆

Lami

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Joined June 2011

Lami 2012-10-27T16:19:53+00:00

[Hard]

00:35:977 (1,2,3) - 1/4 repeat slider?
00:45:051 (1,2,3) - looks so bad.... 00:45:607 (2,3) - stack each other

[Insane]

00:11:162 (1,2,3) -

00:18:940 (1,2) -

00:18:199 (7,8) - remove jump?
00:23:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - keep distance snap x1.00 ?
00:41:532 (5,6,7) - decreasing spacing? some player might think 1/2 rhythm.
00:49:866 (1,2) - avoid overlapped
00:50:607 (3,1) - not stacking is better for me..
01:15:144 (3) - remove note?
01:57:273 (4,5) - .... stacking?
02:09:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - decreasing space
02:50:977 (1,2) - too huge spacing
02:55:421 (1,2) - ^
02:57:644 (4,5) - ^

sorry for my short mod..... =w=

Kanari

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Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-10-28T01:37:11+00:00

Thankyou ~

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-11-03T12:37:53+00:00

Hi ~ xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx ~

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Inconsistent Artist/TitleUnicode,pls check osu file and fix.
Add 'Collab' in tags.

[Rainbow x Regou]

00:38:755 - Add a circle to here,follow with piano.
00:41:532 (5,6,7) - I guess change a slider is better,1/4 stream is no fitting.
01:14:681 - Remove clap and Add finish.
01:26:718 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too close and confused parttern,try unstack is better.
01:31:069 ~ 01:35:051 - Why you change SC:2 hitsound to here?
02:16:162 (3) - Should change 1/1 slider,follow with lyrics.
02:55:421 (1,2) - This jump really huge and suddenly,reduce spacing pls.
02:57:273 (2,4) - ^
03:01:718 (2,3) - ^

[Hard]

OD+1 is better.
00:51:718 (2) - This slider should end to 00:52:458.
01:44:310 (4) - Add finish.
02:29:866 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hidden by 02:31:532 (1) slider repeat.
02:53:755 - Missing Add finish to here.

[Easy]

AR,HP-1 is better.

OK ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~

Sun Rainbow

1,383 posts

Joined January 2011

Sun Rainbow 2012-11-04T00:56:54+00:00

01:31:069 ~ 01:35:051 - Why you change SC:2 hitsound to here?
Rika Sama只是因为这样比较好听点（？
你觉得不是很好听吗?如果是这样我一定会改正的~
求回复

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448,312,199866,2,0,B|492:284|504:252,1,80
504,232,200144,1,0,0:0:0
496,208,200236,1,8,0:0:0
444,120,200421,1,2,0:0:0
408,216,200607,6,0,B|236:256,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,324,201162,2,0,B|128:340|84:336,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
8,216,201532,2,0,B|52:200|96:208,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
4,316,201903,1,0,0:0:0
8,216,202088,6,0,B|48:144|20:56,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,24,202644,1,0,0:0:0
212,68,202829,2,0,B|284:36|368:76,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
440,152,203384,1,0,0:0:0
336,172,203569,6,0,B|340:256,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
428,308,203940,1,8,0:0:0
328,348,204125,2,0,B|308:384,2,40,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,216,204495,2,0,B|456:172,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,312,205051,6,0,B|120:344|32:332|-20:272|8:168,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
104,228,205792,2,0,B|120:188|120:140,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
24,104,206162,1,8,0:0:0
119,149,206347,1,0,0:0:0
228,164,206532,5,4,0:0:0
448,100,206718,1,0,0:0:0
320,268,206903,1,8,0:0:0
316,48,207088,1,2,0:0:0
112,324,207644,5,2,0:0:0
104,328,207736,1,2,0:0:0
96,332,207829,1,6,0:0:0
256,192,208014,12,0,213940,0:0:0

Last edited by Sun Rainbow 2012-11-04T01:44:09+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Regou

1,936 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2012-11-04T01:08:40+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx ~

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~

[Rainbow x Regou]
02:16:162 (3) - Should change 1/1 slider,follow with lyrics. ok
02:55:421 (1,2) - This jump really huge and suddenly,reduce spacing pls. ok
02:57:273 (2,4) - ^
03:01:718 (2,3) - ^
↑I don't really agree with this...This is the speed up part and the spacing is still playable...
OK ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~

Thanks Rika >w<

Sun Rainbow

1,383 posts

Joined January 2011

Sun Rainbow 2012-11-04T01:41:28+00:00

Regou wrote:
Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx ~

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~

[Rainbow x Regou]
02:16:162 (3) - Should change 1/1 slider,follow with lyrics. ok
02:55:421 (1,2) - This jump really huge and suddenly,reduce spacing pls. ok
02:57:273 (2,4) - ^
03:01:718 (2,3) - ^
↑I don't really agree with this...This is the speed up part and the spacing is still playable...
OK ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~
Thanks Rika >w<

热狗不厚道=3=害我得要重新来（？

Regou

1,936 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2012-11-04T02:31:34+00:00

=口=...

Birdy

5,757 posts

Joined April 2011

Birdy 2012-11-07T15:31:23+00:00

Hi!
this map seems already great, so just have few little suggestions~

[All diffs]
01:35:421 (1) - uh oh, why is this spinner so long?!

[Easy]
00:34:681 (4) - move on x:92 y:300
01:05:051 (4) - move on x:152 y:384
01:22:088 (1) - move first point after start on x:360 y:180
01:23:384 (3) - copy 01:22:088 (1) and flip it here
02:24:310 (1) - move second point after start on x:116 y:60
02:49:125 (1) - move first point after start a bit downwards (3 or 4 squares, which ever you prefer yourself)

[Normal]
00:28:755 (1) - move the point before end a bit more left
00:45:051 (4) - messy points, remake slider with 2 points
01:26:532 (1) - not really too bad, BUT maybe a bit too compact
03:02:088 (1) - same as 00:28:755 (1) but flip it

[Hard]
02:13:199 (4) - too compact

and everything else looks just fine~
good luck!

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2012-12-15T00:36:54+00:00

M4M request~

SPOILER

Easy
Nothing to say :p

Normal
01:20:607 (1) - add finish on start
01:22:458 (2) - ^ on end
02:00:607 (2) - move to ( 132,348 )
02:01:718 (1) - ^ ( 304,180 )
02:19:125 (2) - add finish on end
02:21:347 (3) - ^
02:34:866 (2) - remove note

Hard
00:46:347 (1) - remove slider's whistle
01:23:384 (5) - add finish on start
01:35:236 (3) - remove finish
01:57:458 (4) - finish
02:19:866 (1) - more round to cover 02:20:607 (2) - this?
02:31:532 (1) - remove slider's whistle
02:33:199 ~ 02:36:162 - i think break time is not good choice add some notes or sliders
02:52:644 (5) - add finish on end

Rainbow x Regou
00:09:866 (2) - add whistle on start
00:34:681 (2) - add finish on start
00:43:755 (3) - make this slider more round to cover 00:42:829 (2) - this slider's end?
01:02:088 (1) - remove NC?
01:14:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this timing pattern is better imo http://puu.sh/1AYxE
01:17:273 (5,1) - why 1/1 slider? how about some notes and short slider?
01:21:903 (1,2,3) - ^
01:23:569 (1) - remove finsh and 01:23:384 - add finish here
01:27:458 (5) - not good location how about making star pattern?
01:32:458 (3) - add finish on start
01:53:569 (1) - use custom clap
01:55:051 (2) - ^
02:36:903 (3) - removes slider's whistle
03:01:347 (1) - add finish on start

Thank you for your mod and hope you like my mod too xD

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2012-12-20T13:13:02+00:00

Poor mod. Just suggestions :3

[General]
Maybe move Nico from tags? there's a nico in the artist already.

[Rainbow x Regou]
00:12:458 (1,2) - stack better
00:38:384 (5,6) - maybe a little difficult in reading?
00:49:310 (1) - stack better?
01:17:273 (5) - make the shape more beautiful?
01:57:273 (4,5) - maybe difficult for reading. I think move 01:57:458 (5) - to another place is better, or add NC? it will also cause a problem in reading 03:27:644 (1,2,3)
02:03:384 (1) - move it a little left to stack with 02:01:903 (6) - ? if u change this, don't forget 02:04:310 (3) -
02:05:236 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - makes me confused. If follow piano, the rhythm should be like this

SPOILER

02:08:014 (1,1,1) - I think if these follow the piano sounds better.
02:19:495 (2) - stack better
02:40:236 (1) - stack better
02:46:532 (1,3) - also i think u can move this to stack with 02:45:421 (2) -
02:53:569 (4) - move this a grid left to overlap with 02:52:644 (2) -
02:53:755 (1) - remove NC, and add nc at 02:54:310 (2) -
03:00:977 (6) - stack better
03:04:495 (1,1,1) - change clap to whistle?
03:05:421 (2) - move clap and finish? i think it's a little loud
03:19:866 (3,4,5) - how about changing to this, sounds better imo.

SPOILER

03:26:347 (4) - stack better

[Hard]
00:34:495,00:34:588 - something should be here. But if u ignore it, it's ok
01:28:755 (5) - x232 y144
01:47:273 (1) - remove nc
03:04:866 (5) - x444 y180

[Normal]
00:27:829 (2,3) - someone told me this part could be a little difficult in normal, but i think it's ok
00:32:458 (1,2,3) - you can make this triangle looks better
01:56:718 (1,2,3,4) - change these to sliders? (notes on red lines could be a little hard for new players)
02:04:125 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:07:088 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:34:681 (1,2,3) - ^

[Easy]
00:39:125 (2) - nc, 00:39:866 (1) - remove nc
00:47:644 (1,2,1) - different spacing?
01:50:607 (1,2) - ^
02:19:125 (2,3) - ^

[Overall]
Very good map :3 GL with ranking and a star ☆

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Athena Tennos 2012-12-22T21:26:37+00:00

gogogo！
why not rank yet!~

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Kanari 2012-12-22T21:54:32+00:00

xD
Thankyou A-tan ~ >w<

Lucyii

588 posts

Joined March 2012

Lucyii 2012-12-23T11:39:17+00:00

From my queue ~

[General]
00:27:273 (1) - Start mapping here, the starting of the map is too slow to be mapped D:
Don't follow only the vocals, try to follow the instruments!

[Easy]
00:39:125 (1) - Remove nc
01:07:273 (3,1,2,3) - Hard to read, change it D:
01:09:495 (1) - Remove nc
01:14:681 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538095
01:22:088 (1) - Remove nc
01:50:607 (1,2) - More nearer
01:57:829 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538103
02:02:088 (1) - Remove nc
02:04:310 (1) - Remove nc
02:24:310 (1) - Make this symmetrical
02:33:199 (1) - The spinner should end at 02:34:125
02:47:644 (1) - Remove nc
02:50:236 (1) - Remove nc
02:54:125 (1) - The spinner should end at 02:55:421
03:00:977 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538111

[Normal]
Drain -1
00:30:607 - Add a note
00:33:940 (1) - Remove nc
00:34:310 (2) - Add nc
00:41:718 (2,1) - More spaced
00:45:051 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538120
00:48:014 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Remap following the instruments D:
01:23:569 (1) - The spinner should end at 01:25:051
01:50:607 (1) - Remove nc
02:10:051 (1) - Remove it.

[Hard]
Od -1
00:45:792 (3) - x:432 y:36
00:50:977 (7) - Add nc
00:51:718 (2) - Remove nc
01:05:792 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538143
01:07:273 (3) - x:212 y:268
01:10:236 (3,1) - Moooore spaced D:
01:31:347 (4) - Add nc
01:31:718 (1) - Remove nc
Break time from 01:40:977 to 01:47:273
02:36:162 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - dafuq D:

[Rainbow x Regou]
Drain-1 Ar+1
Btw, perfect, congratulations :3

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

4,245 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2012-12-26T02:23:08+00:00

Good Map. i'm starring this!

Loooctav

1,070 posts

Joined January 2012

Loooctav 2012-12-28T04:58:44+00:00

Hi!!
This mod you asked for PM

[Easy]

00:33:199 A novice will not notice that there is another low note: 3
00:39:866 (2,3,4) It is an easy level, this will change with the pace the player: (
00:47:347 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) WTF! You changed the rhythm of easy to difficult level at a minimum .. must keep pace with the song, is a level for beginners, what you did leave it here for the difficult: P
01:08:755 (3) On set: P
01:16:532 And begins the insane partner!
01:18:284 (2,3) On set :3
01:22:088 (1,2,3) Insane begins again! FUUCKK YEAHH!! Jejejeje lol

[Normal]

00:23:569 (4,5,1) 3 put on. _.
to a normal level only for 2 on positions .. max ..
00:50:792 (5) Replace with a circle :3
02:04:125 (1,2,3,4) Replace with a single slider, so that it is well

02:07:088 (1,2,3,4) Replace with a single slider, so that it is well

[Hard]

00:50:977 (1) Delete New Combo
00:51:532 (2) New Combo
[*] Good Diff.

[Rainbow x Regou]

Fine~

Good map, I feel that you need a taiko or CTB (CTB Talk to me if you want) is that at this point in map but will not do it for your next maps, it is always better if you have a unique Taiko .. and horn maybe a CTB (CTB mapper me: P)
I hope it is ranked, hopefully the have served my post .. Bye

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2012-12-29T00:29:28+00:00

Yay. Put your map last since I want to spend more time on this, since you said this was your first map (Your name sounds oddly familiar in a mapping sense, though o-o)

Overall:
01:35:607 - 01:47:273 - Seems like a good place for a break

Collab:
Jumps are meant to fit music. That's my main concern.
Which parts are for which person?
00:15:421 (3) - Make the slider more like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546504
00:18:014 (6) - Move this so it isn't overlapping (5)
00:18:755 (8) - This spacing is off for no reason
00:33:847 - If you're gonna make the previous section 0.5x, keep it 0.5x for this section
00:37:829 (2,3,4,5,6) - Looks and plays awkward
00:50:236 (2) - Overlaps with (1) and looks bad
00:58:940 (2) - Also overlaps
01:23:569 (1,2,3) - This slowdown is really awkward
01:29:866 (5) - Doesn't fit the music
01:31:162 - Random tick hitsound?
01:31:162 - Keep the hitsounds consistent.
01:35:607 - 01:47:273 - Seems like a good place for a break
01:55:051 (2) - Levels of not ok
02:02:644 (2) - ^
02:07:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - Incredibly awkward as there's no signification of a spacing change in the music
02:09:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - If the slider is going to slow down, don't make such large jumps afterwards
This last kiai section has so many weird jumps
02:55:607 (2) - Even this out
03:04:495 (1,1,1) - no NC
03:07:273 - Make it consistent weather you wanna use the snare hitsample or the clap hitsounds on your accent counts.

Hard:
00:18:940 (1,2,3) - This beginning is so calm but then this comes in and ruins the mood
00:45:792 (3) - Incredibly awkward
00:51:718 (2) - Remake this slider with 3 points.
00:53:199 (6) - ^
01:00:607 (5) - Make it more like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546514
01:05:792 (1) - Awkward looking slider
02:13:199 (4) - ^
02:57:644 (3) - Weird placement of this note

Normal:
00:42:644 (1,2) - Adjust this so it doesn't overlap with the previous slider
01:02:829 (1) - Make this more creative
01:20:607 (1) - ^
02:39:125 (1) - The top part looks like its tipping over

Easy:
It's fine just really boring

Collab diff is way too hard and jumpy.

Nanika133

192 posts

Joined August 2012

Nanika133 2013-01-05T19:01:49+00:00

A mod from my queue!

Easy:
Awesomly made, find nothing to mod... Only a Nazi tip:
01:30:607 (2) - Symmetry

Normal:
Same as Easy.
02:14:681 (3) - Why not Ctrl+C/Ctrl+V this 02:15:421 (1)

Hard:
I find the AR too high regarding the SV
02:41:347 (4,5) - Exchange their places, it'll be a little bit harder...

Excuse me, but that's all what I can do ;___; It has been already modded so many times that I can't do anything...
No kudo please (but take a star!)

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Kanari 2013-01-05T23:37:19+00:00

Fixed everything ~
Thankyou for your mod ~

Autumn

501 posts

Joined October 2011

Autumn 2013-01-06T04:12:00+00:00

Hi~ CrystalMoonAnime!

Mod from PM

I'm still so busy but managed to mod two diff for you!

The EZ & NM seems fine~Sorry I just tested them

[Hard]
Generally speaking, your arrangement on the rhythm is fine,but the flows are of too much overlap, and the arrangement makes the circles too close to each other, the sliders are too short & slow.
But that's ok since every mapper will face these problems when they made their first map
Come on and get more mods to improve it!

Suggestion:Get some nice maps of your map's BPM and diff, learn form their arrangements!
Like http://osu.ppy.sh/b/58323&m=0 or http://osu.ppy.sh/b/134511 or http://osu.ppy.sh/b/176514, and more!

00:39:125 (1) - Place it near the spinner center would be better.For example,X:180,Y:160. Or it would be hard for the players who draw big circles to pass the spinners.
00:45:792 (3) - Confusing overlap.Cancel it might be better.
Remember:its very confusing to hide a circle under a slider's end, especially for Hidden players.
01:35:421 (1) - The spinner is too loooong orz. Suggestion: Let it end at 01:37:644 add a circle at 01:38:014 Add another spinner at 01:38:384
01:50:792 (1,2) - The jump between 01:50:607 (3) and 01:50:792 (1) is confusing, hide 01:50:792 (1,2) under 01:50:607 (3) is ok.And don't forget the NC.
01:52:644 (6) - Cancel the overlap might be better. Place like this:

SPOILER

02:10:051 (1,2,3,4) - The overlap is enough from 02:07:088 to 02:09:866. Place them like this to cancel the last overlap:

SPOILER

02:57:644 (3,4) - Uhhh..confusing overlap orz

[Rainbow X Regou]
Nice diff~

00:46:347 (1) - Unnecessary jump. Arrange like this:

SPOILER

01:26:718 (1) - The circle is too close to the spinner,which is almost unrankable.
2 suggestions:
1)Let the spinner end at 01:26:162 and add a circle at 01:26:532
2)Or Remove 01:26:718 (1)
01:28:755 (10) - The overlap and the timing will make it confusing. Cancel the overlap (For example,place it around X:396 Y:176 to make a jump, since it's a downbeat)
01:23:569 (1,2,3) - SV is a little slow..maybe you could change them into circles.
02:55:607 (2) - The jump is a little hard, especially there is a stream before it. Place it on X:40 Y:192 might be better
03:04:310 (1,1,1,1) - Same colour would be better

From 01:31:718 to 01:35:421 ,Too much claps... you might place the claps on the red line and remove the claps on white line.

Thats all.Good luck!(My first map ends in the graveyard

)
A star for you~

Sun Rainbow

1,383 posts

Joined January 2011

Sun Rainbow 2013-01-07T12:57:46+00:00

http://up.ppy.sh/files/niconicochorus-s ... oonanimexx)[rainbowxregou].osu

Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2013-01-09T09:14:34+00:00

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• Remove the audio from video to reduce file size. Also, the quality of the video could be better in my opinion.
• Try to use these combo colors, 6 are way too much imo.
SPOILER
```
[Colours]
Combo1 : 70,186,255
Combo2 : 44,243,184
Combo3 : 196,136,255
```
• Remove "Nico Nico" from tags.

Easy

• HP Drain Rate: 3
• 00:12:458 (1,2) - Delete these circles and add a slider like the one before.
SPOILER
• 00:23:569 (2) - Delete this circle.
• 00:27:273 (1) - Make this slider a bit more fluid and circular.
• 01:35:421 (1) - Delete this spinner, it doesn't follow anything.
• 00:39:866 (2,3,4) - Delete (3) and (4). End (2) at 00:41:347 then add a circle at 00:41:718 and another one at 00:42:088.
• 02:05:000 (break) - Is this break really necessary? Delete it and map this part.

Normal

• Overall Difficulty:4
• Approach Rate: 5
• 01:35:421 (1) - Delete this spinner.
• 02:05:000 (x) - Uhh why there's so much empty space here? Try to use 1/1 sliders here.
SPOILER
• 02:08:000 (x) - ^
• 02:11:000 (x) - ^

Just some small thoughts on the easier diffs.

spboxer3

Global Moderator

3,616 posts

Joined November 2009

spboxer3 2013-01-14T09:58:26+00:00

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general

Settings
(For the setting/general issue.)

you must make video offset identical
I guess you forget change it to SC1 lol (for all)

Easy

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

00:27:273 (3) - for this pattern, you can make it layout better imo. that's why I give you a code:
code&photo
```
346,168,27273,6,0,P|256:27|165:168,2,400
```
00:47:644 (1,2,1) - spacing issue, why do you make x0.8 before but x1.0 here? it's intentional?
01:04:310 (3,4,1) - actually, this pattern is fine, but not really good. you can make it more interrelated, x276,y304 is possible solution imo.(notice: if you accept this pattern, it will affect 01:06:532 (2,3,1,2,3) - pattern)
01:34:310 (3,4) - spacing issue, I just find this: x0.81->x0.72. it's intentional?

02:24:310 (1) - regulate slider shape:

code & photo

411,192,144310,6,0,B|330:216|148:192|107:59|256:-46|404:59|363:192|181:216|100:192,2,600,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

02:29:495 (1,2) - switch newcombo, 02:30:236 (2) - NC add at paragraph(downbeat) is more suitable.

Normal

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)

00:34:310 (2,3) -

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

00:26:532 - used additions: Drum?

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

Umm... general is fine, but your slider shape is too awkward. for example: 00:28:755 (1) - ,00:34:681 (3) - ,00:45:051 (4) - ,01:26:532 (1) - ...etc. you should check mapset by yourself again.

00:45:051 (4,1) - exchange new combo.
00:56:903 (3,1) - ^
01:01:903 (2,1) - it's a rigid pattern, you should notice it when you mapping next map.

02:12:273 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - not sure but I guess you want make it straight.

40,48,132273,5,2,0:0:0
40,48,132458,1,6,0:0:0
116,140,133014,1,2,0:0:0
116,140,133199,1,2,0:0:0
200,224,133755,6,2,B|236:260,1,49.9999952316285,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,316,134310,1,0,0:0:0
352,368,134681,2,2,B|428:292,1,99.999990463257
364,244,135421,6,2,B|288:320,1,99.999990463257,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,264,136162,1,2,0:0:0
164,308,136532,1,2,0:0:0
100,264,136903,1,4,0:0:0

02:55:977 (2) - move to x292,y176 make interrelated shape.

The pattern is lack relation. you should pay attention next time.

Hard

Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)

02:05:051 - remove this break.

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

00:19:866 - sound is overmapping rhythm.
00:51:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rhythm issue. in fact, I can't follow your sense which one do you followed. drum or vocal? anyway. I suggest you can make rhythm like this:
00:56:718 (1,2,3,4) - ^
start at: 00:55:977 (4) -
01:48:384 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - ^
02:38:384 (3,4) - too large spacing in Hard... it's too hard :<
02:49:125 (1,2,1) - awkward slider shape (about overlaps, object stack, slider arc...etc ) :<

for this diff. you should notice rhythm set, it's major issue for the map.

Rainbow x Regou

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

fine

this map still need some work, good luck

Deni

Deni 2013-01-25T20:10:11+00:00

General

normal : should fix
italic : suggestion
red: unrankable, have to fix

From ★ ~ Deni 's Modding Queue ~ ★ ! (＾∇＾)
Nico Nico Chorus!! (＾∇＾)

Folder seems to be fine!

Overall you can fix some overlaps and make sliders a bit more symmetrical..

Easy

00:39:125 (1,2) - I would try to avoid using stacks in Easy since they are often too confusing for beginners..
00:44:681 (2,3) - Same here ! ^
00:46:718 (2) - and head of 00:47:088 (3) - -> I would use a whistle on these because the voice is the same ("na na na") and the whistles would fit good on them too!
01:09:495 (1) - Remove the whistle from the sliderbody and just and them to the head and the bottom of the slider, sounds better imo.
01:10:977 (2) - Same here, but of course keep that finish on the bottom of the slider...
02:04:310 (1) - I don't like the shape of this slider... Better use a normal symmetrical one, like that:

Example

02:58:014 (2) - Move the last point of the slider a bit to the right so that the blanketing looks better like this:

Example

03:05:792 (1) - I think the finish is too loud here! Inherited Point with 40% volume is fine imo.

Normal

01:22:458 (2) - What about adding a whistle to the head of this slider? Sounds better imo!
01:53:755 (1) - Consider adding a curve to this slider, it looks a bit too simple..
02:45:051 (1) - Same as above!
02:46:903 (4,1) - They are overlapping, consider moving (1) a bit to the left!
03:02:088 (1) - Try to improve this slider a bit, so that the curve at the head of the slider and the curve at the end of the slider look alike!
03:05:792 (1) - same as in Easy!

Hard

00:12:458 (1) - This slider is too loud imo, Inherited point with 40% fits better!
00:56:162 (5,1,2,3) - (5) is overlapping with everything! ;_; Try to use a different pattern and avoid overlaps! They don't look and don't play well!
00:59:495 (3) - Again this slider looks very plain / boring, add a curve to fix that!
01:04:310 (6) - ^ same as above!
01:05:792 (1) - This slider looks very strange, you should use a symmetrical one...
02:15:421 (5) - The reverse arrow on this slider doesn't fit to the rhythm/voice of the music imo, maybe just make a normal slider like this:

Example

03:05:792 (1) - Same as in Easy / Normal!

Rainbow x Regou

00:30:236 (1) - Why did you use this shape? A normal-symmetrical slider looks better imo.
02:18:384 (1) - I think you wanted to make this slider symmetrical, create a new slider with the new symmetrical-slider-system, it will look better!
03:02:829 (1) - same as above! ( You can make a lot of sliders a bit more symmetrical if you use the new slider system, but I only mentioned the sliders that don't look so good)

I liked this difficulty most!

That's it! If you have any questions ask them via PM or ingame!

Dark Fang

1,981 posts

Joined February 2011

Dark Fang 2013-01-29T19:35:10+00:00

Hai OwO

[General]

offset -2 or -3 from current (3568)
too big SV jump between 'Hard' and 'Rainbow x Regou' and don't recommend same SV in 3 diffs.
remove 'Vocaloid' in Tags. you already have 'Vocaloid2' in Tags. and if you use 'Collaboration' in Tags, remove 'Collab'

[Easy]

00:15:051 (1) - try use 1/1 slider instead current. this slider is suddenly fast than whilom beat flow. so Easy players can be confused by this slider's beat. IMO
00:39:866 ~ maybe i think suddenly increase difficult from this section. 00:41:718 (3) - like this. players will be confuse
01:35:421 (1) - this spinner too long for Easy players. they can be tired by this spinner.
nothing special. good map. but I think ... some part of this map's beat looks like Normal.

[Normal]

01:35:421 (1) - same reason as Easy. remove or reduce

[Hard]

00:18:940 (1,2,3) - well.. i think you try make hard as use this pattern. but it breaks quiet flow.
00:36:069 (2) - remove this circle and respacing
01:17:458 (2) - why don't you end this slider at 01:17:829 - here? that's so weird feel when playing. if you change that, put 3 hit repeat 1/2 slider. IMO
01:21:903 (1,2,3) - this notes too. weird feel. if you remove 01:21:995 (2) - this circle. and respacing - I recommend stack each note -
02:10:051 (1,2,3,4) - it's not good for play. try use two 1/2 sliders. that flow more good for pla. IMO
02:29:403 (1) - i really recommend remove this circle. because players may not see that when playing. you can ignore this. it's just suggestion.

[Rainbow x Regou]

00:41:532 (5,6,7) - awkward and weird feel for play. 00:41:625 (6) - remove this circle and respacing. if you keep this, players can think 00:45:607 (2,3) - 'this is stream too'.
00:49:495 (2) - remove this note? i think that more appropriate for music than current
01:24:310 (3) - maybe .. this beat is useless. use 1/2 like others.
01:41:718 - try insert Break Time. players may failed at this section when playing while watching screen.
good map. but end of KIAI TIME too harder than before.

mintong89

3,699 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-02-02T14:04:52+00:00

yo~ Mod as your req. sorry for delay~

[Easy]

00:56:903 (1,1) - (head) maybe this can stack it?
00:58:384 (2,2) - (head) ^
01:33:570 (2,3,4) - try this?

SPOILER

02:04:310 (1) - i think this slider it seem little ugly...

[Normal]

fine~

[Hard]

01:04:125 (1) - NC?

[Rainbow x Regou]

不愧是神麻婆

Poor Mod sorry. well great job~
Good luck~

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Kanari 2013-02-02T18:07:47+00:00

All fixed.
Thank you for your mods ~ >w<

Aoko

1,053 posts

Joined June 2011

Aoko 2013-02-03T04:13:05+00:00

Rank this already D: A year has passed for this map. QwQ

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Kanari 2013-02-03T04:19:19+00:00

;_________________;
I wish it could get ranked soooooonnn, but I guess it's just not ready yet D;

Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2013-02-03T15:32:33+00:00

Hi

Easy:

00:09:495 (1) - Delete Whistle at the end for consistency?
00:21:347 (1) - ^
00:31:718 (3) - Whistle+Finish didn't sound well for me. Try only Finish instead,,
00:41:718 (3) - 1 Grid left
00:49:310 (1) - I didn't like this rhythm of the slider. Replace by following the vocals "La la la~~" as what you did at 00:46:347 (1,2,3)
01:09:495 (1) - Finish instead Whistle? (at the end)
02:52:458 (1) - Decrease 1/2, to follow the vocal. Also, in this case, replace this slider.
02:54:125 (1) - If you fixed above, you'll have space at 02:53:940. Start at this point, and end at 02:55:977. This way sounds better with the vocal.

Normal:

00:22:088 (2,3,4) - According your pattern, Whistle should be at only (3)
00:34:681 (3) - Delete Whistle at the end?
00:37:273 (2) - ^?
01:05:421 (2) - ^
01:30:977 (3) - Whistle at start
01:34:866 (1) - Imo, Whistle sounds better at the end, rather than in the reverse
02:35:236 (4) - 1 Grid left for distance of (1,2,3,4)
03:03:940 (2) - Distance..?

Hard:

-- This diff feels quite an old style..

00:06:532 (1) - Delete Whistle at the reverse
00:12:458 (1) - Whistle at the end?
00:35:977 (1,2,3) - Though this fits the song, prediction for 1/4 was quite hard, imo. So I suggest to place just a 1/2 beat
00:45:607 (2,3) - Distance?
00:50:792 (6) - 1 Grid down
01:02:736 (2) - Delete please. 1/4 doesn't fit here
02:52:458 (4) - 1 Grid up

Rainbow X Regou:

00:18:755 (8) - Delete Whistle?
00:38:755 (6) - NC
00:42:458 - Here feels empty
03:04:310 (1,2,3,4) - Imo, this wasn't the perfect place for an anti-jump
03:28:014 (1) - Start at 03:27:921?

Improve your S-shaped sliders. They didn't looked perfectly to me.

Sun Rainbow

1,383 posts

Joined January 2011

Sun Rainbow 2013-02-04T02:45:23+00:00

I think This Map is already to rank,Find MAT to bubble it.

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2013-02-17T17:21:41+00:00

Hi, xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx

Sorry for the long wait
Re-modding time as your request

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

Clear

Easy

00:44:681 (3) - Try don't stack with (2), and make to curve slider will be better.
01:16:162 (3) - Try don't stack with (1). It may cause the confusion, since it is hidden in (1).
01:33:569 (2,3,4) - On (3,4), these may too hard for this diff imo. I suggest you may make to this be better.
01:56:718 (1) - Move it at 01:56:532. Then repeat this slider one more time to follow the rhythm.
02:04:310 (1) - Remove NC?
02:12:458 (1) - Change repeat slider to normal slider 1/1 beat. It will be better.
02:19:125 (2,3) - Slider tail which have reverse picture is overlap. You must avoid overlapping of both slider tail.
02:33:199 (1,1,2) - Spinner is too short for this diff. I suggest remove slider of 02:36:162 (1). Then move spinner end to replace, and don't forget add NC on 02:37:273 (2).
02:38:775 (3) - Same as 01:16:162 (3).
02:49:125 (1) - Remove NC here because it is not necessary.
02:52:485 (3) - Slider end at 02:53:569 to follow the rhythm.
03:02:829 (2,3) - I suggest that change these to a slider 1/1 beat, and add finish in slider begin and end. It will be easier for playing.

Normal

00:37:644 (1) - Change whistle to finish be better?
00:47:088 (4) - Change this slider is a circle on here and a slider 1/2 beat on 00:47:273. It will be better.
00:48:569 (2,3) - I suggest that stack it be better.
00:50:421 (4,5) - It may too hard for this diff imo. I suggest you start the slider 1/4 on 00:50:607 then repeat slider 1 time.
01:07:273 (5) - Move to right and down 1 grid to reduce a little spacing.
01:23:569 (1,1) - Slider (1) is appear too fast after spinner end. I suggest spinner end at 01:25:607.
01:34:310 (4,5) - You can change 2 circles to a slider 1/4 beat. It will be better.
01:34:866 (1) - Remove NC here because it is not necessary.
02:04:125 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:50:421 (4,5) on these by change 3 circles to a slider.
02:07:088 (1,2,3,4) - ^, and try to make (4) to same as 02:04:681.
02:20:927 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:48:569 (2,3).
02:53:940 (1,1,2) - Spinner is too short for this diff. You should remove slider (1), but spinner end on here instead. After fix it, add NC on slider after this spinner.

Hard

00:12:458 (1) - I really do not like that here. So you try to make it more smooth. If you have no idea, you can use slider 1/2 which repeat it 1 time by this picture.
SPOILER
00:13:490 (2) - Move to stack with 00:11:718 (2) to increase spacing, but isn't necessary to move 00:15:051 (3) because you have added NC on this note.
00:16:162 (1,2,3,4) - If you have observed the rhythm on next combo color, you should fix these rhythm by I suggest make to this, and if you fixed to same this picture, add whistle on (2) and slider end of (4), too.
SPOILER
00:30:236 (3) - This slider tail which have reverse picture is obscured by another slider. I suggest move slider tail to down.
00:36:225 (1,1) - I think you should end slider at 00:39:125 (1) which have to remove this circle, and change whistie on 00:39:125 (1) to finish instead.
00:39:681 (2) - Add NC here to follow the rhythm.
00:51:718 (2,3,4,5,6) - This map is weird sound for me. Maybe make to this will be better.
SPOILER
00:55:977 (4,5) - Switch both notes will be follow the rhythm more than.
00:59:495 (3) - I suggest you should change here and 00:59:681 to circles. Then use slider 1/2 beat on 00:59:866 to follow the rhythm.
01:04:310 (2) - I think that use curve slider be better imo.
01:53:199 - Add a circle and finish here, but you have to remove finish on note previous.
01:54:886 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't like these. Trying to fix it to make it more beautiful.
02:57:644 (3) - Stack with (2) be better.

Insane

00:33:940 (1) - Ctrl+G will be better.
00:57:273 (2,3,4,5) - The rhythm is weird for me. I suggest remove (2), then move (3,4,5) to 00:57:273 (instead of (2)), and maybe add circle on 00:58:384, too.
01:25:144 (1) - Spinner start at 01:25:051. It doesn't follow the rhythm.
01:27:829 (7) - I don't sure add NC or not? but it will be able to reduce the confusion.
01:52:644 (6) - Add NC here to easy to playing imo.
01:55:607 (5) - ^
01:58:904 (1,2) - Remove NC on (1), but add it on (2) instead, but if you don't change those, please reduce spacing be better.

Comment: I feel Normal, and Hard diff should want more mod. However, Easy diff isn't problem more than this. For Rainbow X Regou diff, I really prefer it.

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~

Note: You can give kudo to me, if this mod is useful to give it.

Niko-nyan

1,990 posts

Joined June 2011

Niko-nyan 2013-02-18T05:10:09+00:00

hi there
omg another spica on my pc

General
02:56:810 - delete the kiai end

just that i can see ;w; very lazy mod today

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Zweib 2013-02-19T08:34:05+00:00

Hi~ From qkenan's queue

only 2 diffs? XD

[General]

I think this map is almost ready for rank

But still some notes are not in exact place.
Some are negligible, while some do matter.
I suggest you use low Grid level (2 or 3), or use "Ctrl + Shift + D" to create polygon when you want to make specific patterns.

[Easy]

It's fine

02:05:051 - Break time is not starting from 02:04:681. This is on purpose?

[Normal]

01:10:236 (3) - move to (252, 276)
02:47:273 (5) - move to (60, 356)
02:52:273 (1,2,3) - This looks better? (1) end at(480, 160), (3) end at(480, 12)

SPOILER

[Hard]

00:53:014 (5) - (64, 256)
01:03:569 (3) - (52, 288)
01:48:384 (3,4) - x = 348

[Rainbow x Regou]

01:02:273 (4) - (312, 228)
01:02:458 (5) - (312, 82)
01:02:644 (6) - (226, 110)
01:02:829 (7) - (226, 200)
03:05:236 (1) - (256, 40)

Good luck for rank

Bass

1,846 posts

Joined January 2009

Bass 2013-03-05T21:38:48+00:00

oh hey

[General]

First off, artist should be NicoNico Chorus.
Toku-P should go off from source and go to tags.
"Headphone-Tokyo" should be added to tags since it's the author of original "SPiCa"

BGs in Normal and Hard aren't related to that song, it's just my opinion but I think it would be nice put some BG related to that song.
Offset: 3581

[Easy]

00:05:062 (2) - for nicer look, would make it symmetrical with (1)
00:06:543 (1,2) - same should go here then, basically it will create square
00:15:062 (1) - It's not good idea to do slider with repeat on easy diff, change it into simple 1/1 slider
00:36:173 (1) - Rhythm of that slider sounds really odd there. I'd suggest trying something different like this:
00:46:358 (1,2,3) - Would suggest better rhythm for that . I strongly suggest to avoid 1/2 sliders in easy diff that's why(also depends from BPM, in that case, it's too high for doing these)
00:47:655 (1,2,1) - spacing there is inconsistent. I understand that you wanted to make blanket with (1). That can be done with same spacing and resulting with better neatness, look:
SPOILER
01:03:580 (2) - Make symmetrical with (1)
01:08:766 (3,4) - To fit more with vocal, you should try this
01:19:877 (4,1) - on chorus you started more complicated rhythm, which is nice, there it calms down but it shouldn't. Feels really empty. That plays much better
01:29:506 (1) - Move 3rd point of slider 1 tick left
01:34:321 (3,4) - Sudden usage of 1/2 sliders there and as I've mentioned before, strongly not suggested. Change into this
01:48:395 (2,3) - Now just for each 1/2 happening I will show you image how it should look:
01:50:618 (1,2,3,4) - Try similar rhythm like before:
01:53:581 (1,2,3,4) - you have many possibilities to arrange this pattern nicely, like
SPOILER
01:56:729 (1,2) -
02:03:951 (x) - add note?
02:12:469 (1) - single 1/1 slider will sound better here
02:30:247 (1) - again chang into 1/1 slider, fits better with vocal
03:02:840 (2,3,1) - change to:

[Normal]

00:25:792 (2,3) - Try this? sounds better
00:28:755 (5) - you can improve this slider shape, here is code(delete current slider before):
```
120,204,28755,2,0,B|223:268|289:177|356:85|491:145,1,400
```
00:31:718 (8) - slider would look much better if you used tree points formula
00:34:310 (2) - Move it away from slider a bit to avoid overlap
01:02:829 (1) - You can remake this slider with new formula to make it look like:
SPOILER
01:26:532 (1) - next slider to improve, just remove current, and paste this code into .osu file
```
376,188,86532,6,0,B|275:206|248:120|224:30|130:53,2,300
```
01:53:940 (1) - Move this slider 1/2 forward and add circle at 01:53:755, sound much better
01:55:607 (2,3) - then after delete these and change into
02:04:495 (3) - would prefer to remove that note, it might be too much
02:07:458 (3) - same
02:24:310 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Be more creative there, notes in placed at one line going right left aren't nice to play and feels a bit boring
02:38:014 (2) - Move last point of slider a bit down, that overlap doesn't look nice
02:57:644 (2) - spacing error

03:02:088 (6) - next slider to improve:

400,188,182088,2,0,B|304:268|232:188|160:112|16:188,1,400

03:04:495 (8,1,2,3) - try this rhythm, sounds much better:

This is just beggining, will continue tomorrow

E: I'm so slow ;_; but don't worry, more to come

Aurele

Global Moderator

7,605 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2013-03-08T00:19:56+00:00

Finish your mod, Bass.

Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 2013-03-12T20:47:37+00:00

Red - Unrankable
Blue - I highly recommend you to fix this
Black - Suggestion

[General]

Use this sliderslide sound, because it feels bad when there is such weird sound on every slider. Mute is even better for this song. http://puu.sh/2gyLE

[Rainbow x Regou]

Slider Tick Rate: 1 (To be consistent with other diffs and it's not needed here though)
AR -1. Currently it's really high for this BPM.
00:12:458 - What about adding whistle on every place like is this, maybe you hear that bell in the music, I think it could be always followed with whistle. I mean some of these: 00:11:718 , 00:13:199 and more..
00:14:125 (5) - Move it somewhere, but not under this slider, because it has repeat and it feels bad to play when it's on repeat's place, maybe move it on 398;199 or something like this.
00:18:199 (7) - You know... this pattern simply doesn't look well because this slider is just random, unnecessary shape change and weird rotation. Maybe try this suggestion.

SPOILER

00:25:792 (6) - 1/2 slider follows vocals better, this feels a bit poor.
00:24:866 (3) - This circle breaks flow, but you can still make an awesome pattern from this by moving it on 7;68 so 00:24:866 (3) will follow 00:24:310 (2)'s shape and the flow will be just better and clean.

SPOILER

00:35:977 (3,4,5) - This pattern has totaly bad blanket, just look on 00:35:977 (3) - It touches with 00:36:162 (5) and overally stream looks weird with this overlap, also spacing between tham is maybe too high. Consider stacking these notes with 00:36:162 (5)
00:45:051 - 00:51:347 - You just broke flow by changing snap so unnecessary. I recommend you to use normal snap, not lower, not higher than usual.
01:02:829 - The break is imo unnecessary.
01:17:088 (4,5,1,2) - I don't understand this time-placement, it totally doesn't fit music. Consider something like moving 01:17:273 (5) on 01:17:458, then adding note on 01:17:273, removing 01:17:829 (1) and adding 1/2 slider on 01:18:014.

SPOILER

01:21:903 (1,2,3) - ^ Bad, really bad overmapping.
01:51:532 (3) - Move its center point on 457;225 to make it symmetrical.
02:39:495 (3) - Move its end on 33;190 because it blankets and fits really more with 02:38:940 (1)
02:42:088 (1) - It's unsymmetrical, make new slider with one point, since slider style was a bit changed and makes automaticly symmetrical shapes.
02:53:014 (3) - Center point on 101;33 for symmetry.
02:55:977 (4) - Same as 02:42:088 (1) but now it's not so visible.
03:25:051 (1) - ^ but it's even more visible.

[Hard]

00:28:755 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Use some non-linear shapes? This is really poor.
00:41:532 (6) - Copy 00:39:866 (2), then CTRL+H, CTRL+J and move it there instead of this slider. These unnecessary inconsistent shapes are really annoying.

SPOILER

02:12:458 (2) - Move on 257;304 for perfect stack
02:15:421 (5) - The same as 00:41:532 (6)
02:59:681 (2) - THIS! Well... I really hate it. Slider under slider is the worst thing you can make in a map. You totaly break flow by doing it and it's also really weird to play and doesn't look well. Move it down or totally change this pattern. - I would say this could be, or maybe is unrankable.

[Normal]

00:51:718 (1) - Just my opinion, but I'd change the shape. Just don't like it, nothing more, not important.
01:20:607 (1) - I think better way is making 2 sliders instead of ton of repeats. It's really hard to understand by new players if it's such short slider.
01:59:125 (1,2) - ^ Well... this part is calm so it's easier to react on these repeats, but I'd still make 2 sliders from it to be sure.
02:31:718 (1) - Make it symmetrical, I suggest you to make new 1 point slider because of new slider system which makes sliders symmetrical.
02:42:088 (3,2) - Use the same rotation just to make it more aesthetic and symmetrical

[Easy]

00:54:681 (3) - Use this slider, without any rotation, just with CTRL+G. But I still think it will confuse new players, because slider under slider is just hard to react.
01:23:014 (2) - Probably will be hard to hit for newbies.
01:59:125 (1) - Make it symmetrical.
02:02:088 (1) - Move its end on the same line as its start for symmetry.

It's not bad map. It's good, but I miss there some consistency, quality hitsounds, patterns and there is just a ton of linear sliders which would fit even more if it had any shape. Good luck with a map~

Regou

1,936 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2013-03-23T03:41:55+00:00

Fixed some, Thanks!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: SPiCa-NicoNicoChorus.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74681
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:SPiCa
TitleUnicode:SPiCa
Artist:NicoNico Chorus
ArtistUnicode:NicoNico Chorus
Creator:xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
Version:Rainbow x Regou
Source:
Tags:Vocaloid2 Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Sun_Rainbow Sun Rainbow Douga Regou collab collaboration Toku-P Headphone-Tokyo
BeatmapID:163842
BeatmapSetID:41000

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Sun Rainbow

1,383 posts

Joined January 2011

Sun Rainbow 2013-03-23T15:05:30+00:00

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Artist:Nico Nico Chorus
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Creator:xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
Version:Rainbow x Regou
Source:Toku-P
Tags:Vocaloid2 Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Sun_Rainbow Sun Rainbow Douga Regou collab collaboration
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84,296,170977,6,0,B|0:216|44:92,1,207.99999628067,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,224,171532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,296,171718,2,0,B|480:244|472:188,1,103.999998140335,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,172088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,164,172273,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,224,172458,5,4,0:0:0:0:
224,280,172644,2,0,B|180:324|108:312,1,103.999998140335,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,132,173014,2,0,B|92:36|232:84,1,207.99999628067,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,280,173569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,324,173755,2,0,B|500:232|464:120,1,207.99999628067,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,108,174310,5,8,0:0:0:0:
312,100,174403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,96,174495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,96,174588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,104,174681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,120,174773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,140,174866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,164,174958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,188,175051,2,0,B|240:244|224:304,1,103.999998140335,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,352,175421,5,4,0:0:0:0:
36,72,175607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,68,175792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,168,175977,2,0,B|288:220|328:264|400:288|456:240,1,207.99999628067,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,96,176532,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,24,176718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,124,176903,6,0,B|148:180|176:248,1,103.999998140335,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,288,177273,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,356,177458,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,280,177644,2,0,B|24:176|48:52,1,207.99999628067,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,288,178199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,224,178384,6,0,B|432:168|420:96,1,103.999998140335,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,236,178755,2,0,B|192:296|204:348,1,103.999998140335,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,88,179125,2,0,B|228:44|164:44|104:72|96:132,1,207.99999628067,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,264,179681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,236,179866,5,4,0:0:0:0:
352,256,180051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,352,180236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,180421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,116,180607,2,0,B|384:68|452:52|508:72,1,155.999997210503,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,68,180977,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,200,181162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,256,181347,6,0,B|300:232|244:240,1,103.999998140335,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,284,181718,2,0,B|64:296|12:264|-8:204|32:136,1,207.99999628067,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,28,182273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,216,182458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,168,182644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,28,182829,6,0,B|412:12|472:24|512:64|520:120,1,207.99999628067,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,183384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,183477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,183569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,368,183940,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,304,184125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,240,184310,5,4,0:0:0:0:
124,220,184495,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,200,184681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,180,184866,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,40,185236,5,0,0:0:0:0:
204,128,185421,2,0,B|256:148|316:128,1,103.999991941452,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,185792,12,2,186903,0:0:0:0:
72,88,187273,6,0,B|112:104|156:96,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,176,187644,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,136,187829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,156,188014,2,0,B|448:224|424:328,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,188569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,256,188755,6,0,B|28:300|44:344,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,189125,2,8,B|156:228|144:188,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,172,189403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,189495,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,124,189681,2,0,B|300:156|292:208,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,190051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,24,190236,6,0,B|372:56|388:172,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,220,190792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,248,190977,2,0,B|332:304|352:368,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,365,191347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,316,191532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,316,191718,6,0,B|472:240|448:132,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,100,192273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,148,192458,2,0,B|232:172|184:164,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,168,192736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,192829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,92,193014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,192,193199,6,0,B|112:256|96:356,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,92,194125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,72,194218,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,64,194310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,68,194403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,80,194495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,168,194681,6,0,B|328:252|440:256,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,144,195236,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,144,195607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,312,195792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,200,195977,6,0,B|60:120|108:44,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,312,196532,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,352,196718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,352,196810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,352,196903,2,0,B|368:300|356:260,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,136,197273,2,0,B|256:180|264:216,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,176,197644,5,2,0:0:0:0:
164,160,197829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,180,198014,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,160,198199,2,0,B|104:184|44:176|8:156|4:108,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,64,198755,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,344,199125,6,0,B|228:264|328:280,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,216,199681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,312,199866,2,0,B|492:284|504:252,1,80
504,232,200144,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,208,200236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,120,200421,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,216,200607,6,0,B|236:256,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,324,201162,2,0,B|128:340|84:336,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,216,201532,2,0,B|52:200|96:208,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,316,201903,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,216,202088,6,0,B|48:144|20:56,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,24,202644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,68,202829,2,0,B|284:36|368:76,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,152,203384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,172,203569,6,0,B|340:256,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,308,203940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,348,204125,2,0,B|308:384,2,40,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,216,204495,2,0,B|456:172,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,312,205051,6,0,B|120:344|32:332|-20:272|8:168,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,228,205792,2,0,B|120:188|120:140,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,104,206162,1,8,0:0:0:0:
119,149,206347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,164,206532,5,4,0:0:0:0:
448,100,206718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,268,206903,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,48,207088,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,324,207644,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,328,207736,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,332,207829,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,207921,12,0,213940,0:0:0:0:

Xgor

Elite Mapper

2,534 posts

Joined April 2009

Xgor 2013-04-26T12:13:56+00:00

Let's test out this new ranking system

[General]
Just a suggestion but I would love to see slider speeds used more in this map. The starting speed is pretty good but when the song starts to become more intense the slider speed still drags on in the same way as it would if it was slow.
Making it faster from 00:39:866 would be the best way to achieve this and having it that fast during the rest of the song except for the slowdown.

[Easy]
01:53:569 (5) - New combo
02:19:125 (2,3) - For how neat this might look I think it would be better if the end point on this didn't overlap completely with each other, it can be quite confusing for new players.

Normal and Hard is fine

[Rainbow x Regou]
00:13:014 (2) - Slider end point on this slider is hidden, Sure it's pretty obvious that there is no repeat slider here but it's better if you move the slider end somewhere else.
02:04:310 (3) - Same^
01:35:607 (1) - Boy is this spinner long for an Insane, It's even more annoying because there is two circles just after it, can't you map something else here, the song doesn't even lend itself that well towards a spinner at that part anyways.

P A N

2,357 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-05-10T14:57:02+00:00

well. m4m from your queue

[Rainbow X Regou]

01:31:810 (2) / 01:32:366 (2) - delete note? I think its don't fit the song
01:50:144 (6,7) - 56|348 , 40|352? more smooth to play
02:15:421 (1) - down 1 grid
02:44:403 (2) - up 1 grid
02:48:384 (2) - more curve for blanket (3)

[Hard]

00:18:940 - the current one don't fit the song. maybe try http://puu.sh/2QznP.jpg
00:34:681 (3) - right 2 grid? or maybe http://puu.sh/2Qzs9.jpg
00:41:162 (5) - left 2 grid
01:05:792 (1) - this shape a bit weird D: try this http://puu.sh/2QzEL.jpg it can be triangle and blanket too
01:09:866 (2) - right 1 grid up 1 grid
02:38:384 (3,4) - make 3 stack with 1, make 4 stack with 2 because the spacing is kind of far for hard and match with 02:40:977 (3,4)
03:04:310 (2,3,4,5) - I think its a bit weird shape. try square like http://puu.sh/2QA4O.jpg or something

[Normal]

02:00:607 - put the slider and end at 02:01:347 instead?
02:07:644 - reomve repeat and end it at 02:08:014?
02:10:051 (1) - remove 1 repeat and add note at 02:10:607 instead? I think many repeat make player confuse
03:02:088 (6) - NC?

[Easy]

00:37:644 (2) - move the head's POINT to the left 1 grid
00:56:532 - add note
01:22:088 - try this http://puu.sh/2QABL.jpg the current one is distance error too. if and u use this shape u still can do this http://puu.sh/2QAFw.jpg

432,212,82088,6,0,P|396:136|328:92,1,150
256,52,83014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
167,98,83384,2,0,P|116:136|80:212,1,150

01:31:718 - try this http://puu.sh/2QASf.jpg

288,168,91718,6,0,P|396:196|448:264,2,200

01:54:310 (2) - left 1 grid

Good Luck!

Fushimi Rio

Fushimi Rio 2013-05-10T15:03:45+00:00

m4m
[General]
Insane seems much more difficult than hard...

[Easy]
00:36:162 (1,2) - try this

332,44,37644,2,0,P|320:144|352:248,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:39:125 (1) - move nc to thr next slider
01:05:051 (4,1) - please keep the ds on 0.8
01:22:088 (1) - ^
01:50:607 (1) - ^

[Normal]
01:23:569 (1) - spinner is too close to 3. try

01:31:718 (4) - fix the blanket plz
02:01:718 (1) - ds should be 0.8 not 1.0 here

[Hard]
02:30:792 (4,5) - I suggest not to stack to 3
02:56:903 (1,2,3) - feels bad

[Insane]
00:38:755 (1) - stack to another circle plz
00:41:532 (5,6,7) - confused move is further or decrease the distanse between them
01:34:310 (2,3,4,1) -

only suggestion
01:41:440 - I think it's fine to add a spinner here
02:05:236 (1) - move nc to the previous slider
02:07:088 (1) - move nc to the next circle
02:40:236 (1) - ？

Last edited by Fushimi Rio 2013-05-11T04:05:43+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Xivaxi

133 posts

Joined November 2011

Xivaxi 2013-05-10T17:03:37+00:00

Hi, from your m4m queue~

This are mostly rhythm changes so the notes fit with the music and vocals\ better- hopefully they are helpful! (sorry if they are long/hard to read

)

Rainbow X Regou

00:06:532 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern I suggest the following changes:
00:06:532 (7) - Unrepeat this slider
00:07:088 (8) - Add circle
00:07:273 (2) - Add a 1/2 slider
00:07:644 (3) - Remove slider, add circle here instead
00:08:014 (4) - Remove slider
00:07:829 (4) - Add a 1/2 slider
00:08:384 (5) - Remove note
00:08:199 (5) - Add a 1/2 slider
00:08:569 (6) - This slider is OK, at the very least I would unrepeat this and put a circle 1/2 after it (see next note). I changed it in the picture to 2 1/2 sliders but you don't have to.
00:09:125 (7) - Add circle (only if you unrepeated the last slider)
00:09:310 (8) - Add circle
00:09:403 (9) - ^ This triple puts more emphasis on the next down beat, I would stack them on top of it.
Picture (your original on top): http://puu.sh/2QBwH.png
00:07:458 (1) - Picture centered on this note
---
00:11:162 (1,2,3,1) - This pattern I suggest the following changes: no picture because these are straight forward
00:11:162 (1) - Make this 2 circles instead
00:11:903 (3) - Remove this
00:11:532 (2) - Extend this slider 1/2
00:12:088 (3,4) - Put two circles here
---
00:13:014 (2,3) - Swap these two on the timeline, so the circle comes before the slider
---
00:16:718 (3,4) - Change these into 2 1/2 sliders (These notes didn't sync with the vocals like all the others, making it very confusing)
---
00:18:940 (1) - Remove this slider, instead:
00:18:940 (9) - Add circle
00:19:125 (10) - Add 1/2 slider
---
00:19:495 (3,4,5,6,7) - Remove these, instead:
00:19:495 (3) - Add circle
00:19:681 (4) - Add 1/2 slider
00:20:051 (5) - ^
00:20:421 (6) - ^
00:20:792 (7) - ^
---
00:21:347 (1,2) - Remove these, instead:
00:21:347 (9) - Add full beat slider
---
00:25:792 (6) - Remove this, instead:
00:25:792 (6) - Add circle
00:25:977 (7) - Add 1/2 beat slider
---
00:39:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - For this pattern:
00:39:495 (2) - Remove slider
00:39:125 (1) - Repeat this slider
00:39:681 (2) - Add circle
00:39:866 (3) - Unrepeat this
00:40:421 (4) - Add circle
~~00:40:607 (5) - ^(This one is optional)~~ Don't do this, it is weird

00:41:532 (6,7,8) - Remove these
00:40:792 (6) - Add a full beat slider here that repeats once
00:41:718 (6) - Add circle
00:41:903 (7) - ^
00:41:995 (8) - ^
Picture for what the timeline should look like when done: http://puu.sh/2QCpj.png
---
00:42:829 (2) - Make this slider shorter and repeat it (it should still last the same duration)
---
00:43:755 (3,4) - Make these 2 1/2 sliders instead (again because the player wasn't clicking down along with the vocals, making it confusing)
---
00:46:347 (1,2) - Make these 2 1/2 sliders as well (same reason ^)
---
00:49:310 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I would suggest using the same rhythm patter as the previous na-na-na-na section, to vocals are mirrored, so it feels better if the map is mirrored as well
00:49:310 (1,2,3,1) - Make these 2 1/2 sliders
00:50:051 (6) - Add circle
00:50:607 (8) - Remove this
00:50:607 (8) - Add 1/2 slider
00:50:977 (9) - Add circle, keep the rest before the next combo
---
00:51:532 (1,2) - Swap these two on the timeline, so the circle comes before the slider
---
00:54:681 (2,3) - This feels better as a 1/2 slider
---
00:56:162 (5) - Remove this slider, instead:
00:56:347 (5) - Add full beat slider
00:56:903 (7) - Add circle
00:56:810 (6) - OPTIONALLY, add another circle here to create a triple, it puts more emphasis on the finish here.
---
00:59:310 (3,1,2) - Remove these, instead:
00:59:310 (3) - Add circle
00:59:495 (4) - Add 1/2 slider
00:59:866 (5) - Add full beat slider
01:00:607 (7) - Add 1/2 slider (or a full beat slider and remove the note after it)
---
01:29:866 (5) - This is a little awkward, why not just make it a 1/2 slider?
---
01:54:866 (1) - The jump after this is too big
01:55:051 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - This pattern is weird. It doesn't include the note before it (which it should), and the emphasis doesnt' fit the pattern. Triangles are good at emphasizing the first note of the triangle, but the vocals here emphasize every other note, I'd suggest back and forth or ladder instead of triangle. Something like this : http://puu.sh/2QDpA.png
---
Rest of the map is quite nice~ maybe some of the triples don't fit so well as others... but they're fine for the most part I think.

Hard

00:18:940 (1,2,3) - This section seems too fast for the rest of the pattern it's in
00:28:569 (5) - Add note
00:55:792 (4) - Add note here maybe?
---
00:56:718 (1) - Remove this, instead:
00:56:718 (7) - Add circle
00:56:903 (8) - Add 1/2 slider (so they player clicks down on the big finish here)
---
00:59:495 (3) - This is awkward, I would suggest putting circles in here to fit with vocals better, but it might increase difficulty too much~ your choice.
00:59:495 (3) - Circle here
00:59:681 (4) - ^
00:59:866 (5) - Make slider start here instead
---
02:22:088 (4) - Make this slider end at the big white tick, and:
02:23:199 (5) - Add circle
---
02:29:403 (1,2) - This little double might be too hard to read/play for hard diff ~
---

These next are all optional, they may increase difficulty too much - but the long sliders feel too slow/empty for this chorus section. You can use whatever you want as beats, circles/sliders/whatever, just so that there's a beat on the vocals
02:49:125 (1) - Replace this with 5 circles on the vocal beats, or make it a 1/2 slider that repeats for all the beats. It feels empty as just a long slider.
02:50:236 (13) - Same here, put circles/repeat sliders here in place of this long slider
02:50:792 (14) - Add circle
02:53:384 (6) - Same here, put beats instead of a long slider
02:58:384 (5) - Here too
02:59:681 (2) - And here

Normal

I am not very good at mapping normal/easy difficulties, all of these suggestions might be terrible, but here they are anyway!

00:51:718 (1) - Maybe put some notes in here instead of a very long slider? It feels too empty, maybe something like:
00:52:458 (2) - End slider here
00:52:829 (3) - Add circle
00:53:199 (4) - ^
00:54:681 (1) - Here too, same pattern as above works
01:14:681 (1) - These long sliders in the chorus also feel empty, especially because it is the chorus, maybe put some notes in like above sliders, something like:
01:16:162 (2) - Make the repeat slider end here
01:16:532 (3) - Add circle
01:16:903 (4) - ^
01:17:644 (1) - Same as above
01:17:644 (1) - ^
---
01:47:644 (1) - This slider and
01:50:607 (1) - This slider also feel slow, maybe make them more like
01:53:755 (1,2,3) - This pattern. This pattern feels nice~
---
02:39:125 (1) - Repeat this slider like you did with
02:36:162 (1) - This one
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03:02:088 (6) - Another empty feeling slider, shorten/repeat it, or shorten/add some circles.

Easy

I can't map easy this well orz

have a star

I really liked the song, and mapsets were nice

GL with ranking!

Kanari

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Kanari 2013-05-10T17:06:20+00:00

Thank you for your mods ~
I'll check them and mod your maps soon! >w<

P A N

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Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-05-11T03:11:29+00:00

hi. come to recheck :3
no kds please, thanks.

[Easy]

00:54:681 (3) - it does'nt stack with slider (1) - enough. so copy 00:51:718 (1) and paste. then ctrl+G and remove newcombo.
00:56:903 (1) - this shape look weird. try this http://puu.sh/2QZdd.jpg it can blanket (4) as well too.
00:58:384 (2) - move tail right 1 grid

GL

Chloe

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Joined April 2011

Chloe 2013-05-13T14:37:58+00:00

Hello~
Recheck for mod this : http://osu.ppy.sh/b/246598

no kds this post

just mod as suggestions, not necessary. : )

[General]

。 EZ&NM‘'s using in finish is bad o/ \o and maybe same as hard diff.-

[Easy]

00:42:088 (3) - 00:45:051 (3) - 00:47:644 (1) - 00:53:940 (2) - I think the using of finish is bad
01:31:718 (1) - sounds awkward
01:48:384 (2) - 01:49:310 (3) - 01:52:088 (3,4) - follow the red line maybe awkward

I suggested to remap this diff D:

[Normal]

00:50:051 (3,4,5) - rythem not good, change to - mod1
02:52:273 (1) - ^ - mod2
00:54:046 (2) - ctrl g?
01:14:888 (3) - add

[Hard]

00:19:681 (3) - change to 1/1 slider instead if using 1/2 repeating-slider
00:52:829 (4,5) - here's so many notes.. it's boring to hard diff, i suggested change somes to slider, also like 02:48:199 (4,5,6,7) - I've not pointed out all of them
01:35:236 (3) - delete finish 01:33:940 (2) - and add a finish in the beginning

[Rainbow x Regou]

01:17:273 (5,1,2) - （类似这种没有全部举出）由于kiai部分这音效建议放个slidertick.wav?
01:24:681 (4) - 我感觉这DS不妥既然
01:34:681 (3,4) - 改成 - MOD3 然后spinner从01:35:421 (6) - 到 01:40:421 (1) - （也就是往前拉1/2)
02:10:051 (2,3,4,5) - 最好DS小一点然后345重合
02:17:088 (2) - add

hmmm.... I felt it's worse than half a year??? It seems two guest mappers cordinated not so good in that highest diff, and I think the rainbow's insane in previous time is better than it.
Of course, you can talk with me if you think I'm wrong Fin.

Last edited by Chloe 2013-05-14T11:03:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Athena Tennos

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Athena Tennos 2013-05-14T07:23:56+00:00

rainbow GJ

Megurine Luka

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Joined November 2010

Megurine Luka 2013-05-21T01:16:37+00:00

Hi M4M

[G]

Nope

[E]

00:15:051 (1) - move to x=348 y=248 and make it shorter. Stop at 00:15:236
00:21:347 (1) - try

00:27:273 (1) - try

00:54:681 (3) - I suggest you NC cuz new Babies would not recognize this is a brand new slider
01:07:273 (3) - Move left about three grids (Level 4 grid)

[N]

00:15:051 (1) - same as easy, stop at 00:15:236
00:28:755 (5) - NC
00:48:569 (2,3) - I suggest you change to a slider. Start from a red line and only two circles are two difficult for new players
00:58:384 (2) - add whistle on both beginning and end of the slider
01:05:792 (3) -

seems have a better flow
01:34:310 (4,5) - same as before
01:56:718 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:10:051 (1) - I suggest you put somewhere far from the previous slider. Cuz new players would not recognize there is a pause btw these two sliders
02:12:273 (1,2,3,4) - same as before
02:21:347 (3) -

looks better

I strongly suggest you not change slider velocity in Normal diff. Cuz SV would cause spacing change which is unrecognizable for new babies.

[H]

01:25:607 (4) -

looks better
02:00:236 (4,5,6) - make a straight line?

[RG]

都是华人我就用中文了？

00:18:199 (7) - 这里最好用00:17:458 (5) - 一样的形状
00:23:940 (1) - 开口向上似乎好点
01:28:940 (1,2,3) - 用和前面一样的spacing比较好
01:34:681 (3,4) - 正好把应该重点突出的su pi ca 三个音节给slider掉了...有种应该狠狠重音的地方突然被憋住了的感觉-。-

Sun Rainbow

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Sun Rainbow 2013-05-25T02:05:12+00:00

Athena Tennos wrote:
rainbow GJ

No Rainbow is Regou GL

And Fixed Some Mod THX>W<

No_Gu

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Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2013-05-25T22:20:27+00:00

[I]
00:03:570 - 00:14:681 I don't think it's a good idea that you put so many objects here.Neither the music or the vocal is strong here
00:40:792 (4,5) - make them father?
00:45:051 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - why reduce distance here?
00:59:310 (3) - ^
01:14:681 - 24clap is enough imo
02:39:495 (3,1) - mistake?
one of you must improve your mapping skill...I mean the first part

[Hard]
00:17:644 (3) - whistle
00:17:644 (3) - you destoryed the parttern here...
00:28:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - straight sliders seem not fit here
00:34:681 (3) - ctrl+g
01:28:755 (5) - distance
01:41:625 delete the break is ok
hmm still need some work?

Sun Rainbow

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Joined January 2011

Sun Rainbow 2013-06-01T13:44:50+00:00

No_Gu wrote:
[I]
00:03:570 - 00:14:681 I don't think it's a good idea that you put so many objects here.Neither the music or the vocal is strong here
00:40:792 (4,5) - make them father?
00:45:051 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - why reduce distance here?
00:59:310 (3) - ^
01:14:681 - 24clap is enough imo
02:39:495 (3,1) - mistake?
one of you must improve your mapping skill...I mean the first part

[Hard]
00:17:644 (3) - whistle
00:17:644 (3) - you destoryed the parttern here...
00:28:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - straight sliders seem not fit here
00:34:681 (3) - ctrl+g
01:28:755 (5) - distance
01:41:625 delete the break is ok
hmm still need some work?

能求个中文吗/.\

Xinely

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Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-06-13T10:01:25+00:00

sorry for delay u,u
as requested ~

[General]
add "スピカ" in tittle and SPiCa in Romanised tittle

[Easy]
HP-1 to same spread with Normal diff? actually HP 3 too much big in easy
00:16:903 (2) - nazi, 1 grid left?
00:27:273 (1) - 332,152. avoid spacing 0,87x in 00:30:977 (2) -
00:45:051 (3) - 188,316. for diagonal in 00:42:829 (1,2,3) -
00:53:940 (2) - remove finish?
00:56:532 (2,1) - why spacing increase in here? i prefer use normal spacing actually
01:05:792 (1,2) - try this rhythm?
01:18:384 (2) - 296,84? better branket imo
01:29:495 - finish?
01:52:088 (3) - spacing issue (1,06x)
02:33:199 (1) - whistle?
02:42:088 (5) - just minor, NC for consistency?
03:02:829 (2,3) - spacing? why increase in here?

[Normal]
00:31:718 (4) - whistle in head?
00:41:718 (2) - spacing issue 0,86x , my solution : 132,192
01:05:792 (3) - remove whistle in body? it's better imo
01:55:792 (3) - 220,148?
02:20:607 (3) - 336,212? better branket with 02:21:347 (3) -
02:41:718 (2) - 1 grid down, straight with 02:40:977 (2) -
02:41:347 (1) - spacing issue (0,86x)
02:45:051 (1) - remove whistle body?

~~kinda tired, will edit soon ~~~

[Hard]
AR+1?
hmm, actually you need higher SV in Hard. Normal 1,00 SV, Hard 1,00 SV, Insane 1,6 SV. not balance, better Hard 1,30 SV for balance spread ~_~
00:18:940 (1) - spacing?
00:47:644 (1) - actually i don't really like overlap =w=
00:50:607 (5) - 252,328?
00:59:125 (2) - intentional spacing?
01:06:903 (2) - 296,292 to avoid spacing issue?

[Insane]
you need Collab mapper's name so we can know part of collab
01:02:829 (7) - just minor, NC for consistency
01:03:014 - 01:14:495 - you must map this part, easy normal hard mapped in this part, why insane not? kinda odd to me
Insane seems fine

GL :3

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Verlaren wrote:

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