dkun wrote:

Rolled
This is so sexy.
Kiai time doesn't end at the end of the diff, though. Might want to fix that.

Hard
00:58:370 - Perhaps change it to something like this?

SPOILER

01:00:512 - Change it to something like this as well? <<< Distance snap issue that I don't agree with, so I'm going to leave it as it is

SPOILER

01:29:157 (6,7,8) - Move 7,8 to be right under 6.
01:39:865 (4) - one left, two up (grid); to have symmetry for the combo
01:44:417 (4) - move down one grid, symmetry
01:54:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/76550 ^
02:03:157 (3) - one grid down
02:52:416 (1,2,3) - snap to x/y grid?
03:16:108 (2,3) - one grid left for symmetry
03:16:778 (1) - one grid down for ^

Normal
This is very generic and easy. But I guess there's nothing much to note.

MM's Easy
dem sliders

Overall
BUT I WANT.
YOU.
BACK.

Shiirn wrote:

General
-00:00:262 ~ 00:25:438 - This isn't really a bpm change, so wouldn't it be prudent to leave the negative offset at 112.06 bpm, with a 0.5 inherited before the first note? <--- it really doesnt matter, but I believe i tried that once and ended up breaking everything. It's fine as it is in my opinion
00:59:705 (6) - the kiai section is unsnapped, starting at :708
01:55:389 (6) - kiai is at :393
02:51:074 (6) - this one is at :077, and on Normal doesn't start a kiai. Intended? <-- oops i think i missed something there.
Other than slightly-awkward sliders (in an actually rather song-suiting style), there's really nothing i can think of.
I gave up on note placement modding since the entire thing is impeccably perfect, screw you. <3

Normal
02:51:074 - Unless you're going to put kiai on this section, remove the two extra timing sections? You have kiai here for the other diffs, was there a misclick involved? <--- yarp, i knew i missed something

Hard
00:57:563 - This timing section is at :567, leading the spinner to end with a soft-finish. Is this intended, or is the section unsnapped on purpose? <--- intended

Rolled
00:42:572 - timing section is at 575.
01:36:114 (1) - spinner ends with a timing section 4ms late, leading to the wrong hitsound
03:14:633 (1,2,3) - this mass of timing sections can be boiled down to making 03:14:635 a Soft. The kiai doesn't really fit, but if you really want you can put it in there by making sure that there are snapped timing sections on the beats (since right now, the kiai is turned off with a normal timing section, but since they're unsnapped you end up with a normal note instead orerewgrbhr you get me.) <--- i really dont but ill just resnap everything



I'm firin' mah star

Shiirn wrote:

AR+2 at the least

Shiirn wrote:

01:16:839 - Extraneous timing section spotted, sir!

Zelos wrote:

00:28:115 (5) - move this up one tick so the center of the slider is even with note 4? its more symmetrical looking and fits inis.
basically kind of like this:

Zelos wrote:

01:10:414 (1,2,3) - move up 1 and to the left 1 to make symmetrical.

Zelos wrote:

01:23:800 (5) - move this up one tick so the center of the slider is even with note 4? its more symmetrical looking and fits inis.
01:40:933 (5) - ^^ im noticing a trend here so maybe he did it on purpose? im not sure.
02:06:098 (1,2,3) - move up 1 and to the left 1 to make symmetrical.
02:47:326 (1,2) - turn off distance snap, and grid snap this into the center to make symmetrical.
03:01:783 (1,2,3) - move up 1 and left 1 to make symmetrical.

Zelos wrote:

I honestly didn't think I would fine this many symmetrical issues for iNiS style.

dkun wrote:

gogogogorank

cheesiest wrote:

[General]
You need a difficulty that's 2 stars or under. I just suggest making the Normal a bit easier since you don't need an easier difficulty. I'M MAKIN AN EASY MODE GUYS.

The BPM in the song is consistent, so there's no need for the halving (or doubling, whichever way you look at it). Judging by the genre and drums in the music, 112.06 seems to be the correct BPM. Remember to change the SV accordingly. Fixed, thanks for that

Many sliders throughout the difficulties would greatly benefit from using the new circular slider thing. If you need help w/ that, you could just call me.

[Normal]
01:37:185 (1,1) - Perhaps if you made the jumps smaller, the difficulty rating would decrease. Need that goal of 2 stars or under. Fix'd, but didnt work

02:38:223 (1) - Maybe the spacing would be confusing for newer players Whoops, my bad

02:49:735 (1) - The overlap looks a bit eh with (6). Fixed

In general, some of the circles in the 1/4 "streams" (with the current BPM) overlapped each other. It'd be cool if you would make them not do that! i dont notice this?

And yeah, that's it for this diff!

[Hard]
OD -1 and HP -1? Done

00:41:500 (1) - I'm not so sure about this jump, and the other one like it at 01:37:185 (1) - . Make it smaller, perhaps? The other jumps seem fine. Meh, I kinda like it.

Actually, the rest of the map seems fine.
[Rolled]


Using difficulty names that solely refer to a mapper is not allowed anymore under the Ranking Criteria.
You can use Rolled's Insane instead.

02:35:279 (4) - Perhaps make this slider two circles, since there's two distinct strong sounds heard while 02:34:744 (3) - makes sense the way it is since there's only a strong sound at the start.

02:39:026 (2,5) - Perhaps have 1/2 sliders starting here? It would emphasize the sustained "you're" and "one" vocals. The rest of the circles seem fine though.

Kind of following the above: 02:43:043 (3) - This slider feels out of place with the vocals considering that the vocals start and are strong at the slider's end. It'd be cooler if you shifted the sliders in this section (not just that 3 that is linked) 1/2 ahead. Of course, you'd have to do some pattern reworking, but it'll feel better, I believe. Also, if you could make this section similar with the hitobjects to the section I mentioned before (02:39:026 (2,5) - ), that'd be cool maybe.

Umm, the ending (last 3 objects) feels a bit... lacking. Maybe just doing a symmetry jump would work nicely?:

like so

I'm actually okay with Rolled's diff as it is. If he really wants to change it ill let him, but I don't see the need to.

1. the countdown on the insane of this song conflicts with the easy and the normal and the hard frownyface
2. check your bpm it's really weird I'm not sure how to feel about it

1. 00:21:213 (1,2,3) - there's one heeeeeeeeeeeeeere
2. 00:24:693 (5,6) - this blanket's messed uppppppppppppppppppppppppp
3. 00:29:780 (1) - why isn't this just a 3 point slider so it blankets better with 2
4. 00:31:921 (5) - and here too frown
5. 00:49:055 (5) - touching the hp bar frown fix it's unrankable
6. 00:55:213 (1) - I don't really agree with this spinner here and I think it would bem ore fun if you just map the notes under it instead of putting a spinner here, and save the spinner for later on towards the kiai maybe? like here 00:55:213 (1) - instead of this note and then map the stuff before it
7. 01:22:252 (3,4) - these 2 sliders could be super groovy if they were the same and just kinda next to each other, so like 3 would be 4 instead of the way it is now if that makes sense
8. 01:23:322 (5,6) - intense overlap here I don't like it pull it out towards the end more maybe? and then curve the 3 notes the other way instead of the way they are curved now and that will be good
9. 01:36:173 (1) - I dislike this spinner too for the same reason as the last one
10. 01:44:740 (9,10) - touch hp bar again frown unrankable
11. 01:50:897 (1) - this spinner is bad like the other ones in my opinion
12. 01:56:653 (10) - this note right here is overmapping and I think you could probably just remove it entirely
13. 02:39:085 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I think there's too many single taps here and that there should be either more sliders or you should put a few triplets into here to spice things up
14. 02:43:637 (4,5) - spacing is messy here, because the before and after notes of these 2 are 1x but inbetween it's like .6 and that's just no GOOD
15. 02:47:652 (2) - this slider is freaky :O
16. 03:05:589 (4,5,6) - blanket isn't perfect here
17. 03:12:550 (5) - this one is weird too, just make it a 3 point slider

1. your hitsounds are way too damn loud my ears are being shattered by the velocity of the sounds coming through my headset please fix and save my ears they are bleeding and very angry and upset like 50%
2. 00:01:938 (6) - your next 6 is not the same as this 6 so the consistency is all messed up frown
3. 00:10:504 (6) - make it 3 point
4. 00:28:709 (1,4) - OVERLAP
5. 00:37:008 (6) - 3 POINT SLIDERRRR
6. 00:44:772 (6) - make it more blankety so you'll probably have to remake the slider itself
7. 00:51:197 - there needs to be notes here
8. 01:08:331 (6,7) - OVERRRRRRRALPPPPPPPPPPPPP
9. 01:23:055 (4,5) - overlap that can be fixed with new 3 point slider
10. 01:29:748 - notes here too pls
11. 02:43:369 (1,2) - these 2 sliders are not the same and it messes withthe consistency
12. 03:16:833 (1) - put in center for ending kinda thing yea

1. 00:38:079 (8,1) - the endings of these 2 slioders are dumb please fix thank you
2. 00:46:913 - there should be something here like a 1/1 slider or something please thank you because right now it feels super empty and thats like really dumb and stuff so please fix or I'll be upset and that's not good
3. 00:57:621 - the green line that's before this one should be right here instead of where it is ty
4. 00:59:764 (6) - you shouldn't have more than like 2 repeats on a slider ever cause it makes it super hard to read and stuff and yea
5. 00:59:764 (6,1) - PLS BLANKET PLS THANK YOU
6. 01:03:779 (5) - offscreen no pls
7. 01:09:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - make triangle and then stack 4 and 5 on top of 3 so it is in middle thank you
8. 01:32:692 (6,1) - SMALL OVERLAP PLS FIX
9. 01:46:346 (4,5) - make triangle pls
10. 01:50:629 - this space to the spinner makes me upset put notes in here between this and spinner cuase I know you really like that spinner and won't take it out no matter what happens
11. 01:51:165 (1) - your preview point is not snapped here like it should frown please snap your preview point
12. 02:32:660 (5,1) - OVERLAP UGH
13. 02:42:565 - this seems really empty without anything in it maybe put a single here
14. 02:58:361 (1,2,3) - feex overlap pls

1. http://puu.sh/aYAR1/ac3273d7f1.png YOUR OBJECTS ARE UNSNAPPED FOOL FIX
2. 00:06:221 (2) - this slider looks offscreen to me
3. 00:29:244 - PLEASE PUT NOTES PLS IT FEELS EMPTY okay there's a lot of these sections in this map so I'm nto gonna mention them so its your choice whether or not to put notes in there but I think there shouldn't b e that much space in this map thats not unmapped etc idrc uh yea
4. 02:59:699 (3,1) - NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OVERLAP SENPAI PLEASE STOP ARRETE

Maeglwn wrote:

b0ss

[General]

1. the countdown on the insane of this song conflicts with the easy and the normal and the hard frownyface
2. check your bpm it's really weird I'm not sure how to feel about it

[Rolled's Insane] I'm leaving these to Rolled mostly
ight
IT's TIME TO NOTE ALL OVER THE OVERLAPS IN TNHIS DIFFICULTY

1. 00:21:213 (1,2,3) - there's one heeeeeeeeeeeeeere
2. 00:24:693 (5,6) - this blanket's messed uppppppppppppppppppppppppp
3. 00:29:780 (1) - why isn't this just a 3 point slider so it blankets better with 2
4. 00:31:921 (5) - and here too frown
5. 00:49:055 (5) - touching the hp bar frown fix it's unrankable
6. 00:55:213 (1) - I don't really agree with this spinner here and I think it would bem ore fun if you just map the notes under it instead of putting a spinner here, and save the spinner for later on towards the kiai maybe? like here 00:55:213 (1) - instead of this note and then map the stuff before it
7. 01:22:252 (3,4) - these 2 sliders could be super groovy if they were the same and just kinda next to each other, so like 3 would be 4 instead of the way it is now if that makes sense
8. 01:23:322 (5,6) - intense overlap here I don't like it pull it out towards the end more maybe? and then curve the 3 notes the other way instead of the way they are curved now and that will be good
9. 01:36:173 (1) - I dislike this spinner too for the same reason as the last one
10. 01:44:740 (9,10) - touch hp bar again frown unrankable
11. 01:50:897 (1) - this spinner is bad like the other ones in my opinion
12. 01:56:653 (10) - this note right here is overmapping and I think you could probably just remove it entirely
13. 02:39:085 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I think there's too many single taps here and that there should be either more sliders or you should put a few triplets into here to spice things up
14. 02:43:637 (4,5) - spacing is messy here, because the before and after notes of these 2 are 1x but inbetween it's like .6 and that's just no GOOD
15. 02:47:652 (2) - this slider is freaky :O
16. 03:05:589 (4,5,6) - blanket isn't perfect here
17. 03:12:550 (5) - this one is weird too, just make it a 3 point slider

[Hard]

1. your hitsounds are way too damn loud my ears are being shattered by the velocity of the sounds coming through my headset please fix and save my ears they are bleeding and very angry and upset like 50%
2. 00:01:938 (6) - your next 6 is not the same as this 6 so the consistency is all messed up frown
3. 00:10:504 (6) - make it 3 point
4. 00:28:709 (1,4) - OVERLAP
5. 00:37:008 (6) - 3 POINT SLIDERRRR
6. 00:44:772 (6) - make it more blankety so you'll probably have to remake the slider itself
7. 00:51:197 - there needs to be notes here
8. 01:08:331 (6,7) - OVERRRRRRRALPPPPPPPPPPPPP
9. 01:23:055 (4,5) - overlap that can be fixed with new 3 point slider
10. 01:29:748 - notes here too pls
11. 02:43:369 (1,2) - these 2 sliders are not the same and it messes withthe consistency
12. 03:16:833 (1) - put in center for ending kinda thing yea

tl;dr, fixed the sliders. the spinners i like.

[Normal]

1. 00:38:079 (8,1) - the endings of these 2 slioders are dumb please fix thank you sort of fixed?
2. 00:46:913 - there should be something here like a 1/1 slider or something please thank you because right now it feels super empty and thats like really dumb and stuff so please fix or I'll be upset and that's not good
3. 00:57:621 - the green line that's before this one should be right here instead of where it is ty fixed
4. 00:59:764 (6) - you shouldn't have more than like 2 repeats on a slider ever cause it makes it super hard to read and stuff and yea its not really hard to read?
5. 00:59:764 (6,1) - PLS BLANKET PLS THANK YOU i lost the reciept for the blanket
6. 01:03:779 (5) - offscreen no pls fixed
7. 01:09:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - make triangle and then stack 4 and 5 on top of 3 so it is in middle thank you done
   
8. 01:32:692 (6,1) - SMALL OVERLAP PLS FIX this is distance snapped correctly.
9. 01:46:346 (4,5) - make triangle pls how do you make a triangle with two points?
10. 01:50:629 - this space to the spinner makes me upset put notes in here between this and spinner cuase I know you really like that spinner and won't take it out no matter what happens
11. 01:51:165 (1) - your preview point is not snapped here like it should frown please snap your preview point uugghhh fixed on all diffs
12. 02:32:660 (5,1) - OVERLAP UGH blame distance snap, not me
13. 02:42:565 - this seems really empty without anything in it maybe put a single here
14. 02:58:361 (1,2,3) - feex overlap pls

[Easy]

1. http://puu.sh/aYAR1/ac3273d7f1.png YOUR OBJECTS ARE UNSNAPPED FOOL FIX already discussed, but fixed anyways
2. 00:06:221 (2) - this slider looks offscreen to me .... how?
3. 00:29:244 - PLEASE PUT NOTES PLS IT FEELS EMPTY okay there's a lot of these sections in this map so I'm nto gonna mention them so its your choice whether or not to put notes in there but I think there shouldn't b e that much space in this map thats not unmapped etc idrc uh yea this is an easy map.
4. 02:59:699 (3,1) - NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OVERLAP SENPAI PLEASE STOP ARRETE grumble grumble fixed

uh yea this is all I can say for now have fun and stuff

1. Consider using backgound Ringating gave to you; at least it will not be stretched
2. The first offset should be -204 to get your timing signature right
3. All difficulties: please, end kiai times on white ticks, because this is way more logical. 01:12:614 and 02:08:298

1. 00:21:748 (3,4) - is this manual stack intended?
2. 00:46:378 (8) - you likely missed a clap on the head
3. 00:50:661 (8) - ^
4. 01:07:795 (5) - move whistle from the head to the tail and add a clap on the head to keep the rhythm
5. 01:23:322 (5) - mind giving it a better shape? http://puu.sh/bcort/d338fd5c3e.jpg remove the central anchor and add it again to use new slider generation algorithm
6. 02:50:597 (2) - (copied) "move whistle from the head to the tail and add a clap on the head to keep the rhythm"
7. 02:54:747 (3) - ^
8. 02:59:164 (6) - ^
9. 02:59:699 (1) - use new sliders please (same as 01:23:322)
10. 03:06:125 (6) - same! It'll be a nice and clean blanket
11. 03:12:550 (5) - ^

1. Reduce the overall volume to 70% at most (or 60 with a burst to 70 on kiai times); 100 is just way too loud
2. 00:25:496 - even if you map to vocals, you can't ignore the beat. It is too strong to be ignored; please add a note with finish at least
3. 01:21:180 - and again, tthis beat needs to be mapped, not skipped
4. 01:10:471 - you want to use finishes when the singer says "WANT", "YOU", "BACK", and nowhere else around. Please, fix this
5. 02:06:156 ^
6. 03:01:840 ^
7. 03:14:691 ^
8. 02:33:998 - please consider using normal sampleset (with soft additions, if you want to keep them) to follow the music better, like Rolled did
9. Consider adding kiai fountains on the last three words (check the very end of Insane). They give such a good effect!

1. 00:41:291 (2,1) - I am afraid this is too jumpy for a Hard. Reduce the spacing, please
2. 01:04:046 (1) - move finish to the head
3. 01:08:330 (6,7) - new combo should be either on 6 or 7, but not on 01:09:936 (1) -
4. 01:23:322 (5) - missing a clap on repeat
5. 01:36:975 (2,1) - (copied) I am afraid this is too jumpy for a Hard. Reduce the spacing, please
6. 01:41:794 (1,2,3) - why the spacing? Consider decreasing it, like, really
7. 01:47:818 (1,2) - ^ (not sure about this one, though)
8. 01:53:841 (2,2) - you probably don't need finishes here
9. 01:55:447 (6) - you forgot to mark kiai with a new combo ("NC" for short)
10. 01:59:463 (5) - mind moving it a little closer to the next slider?
11. 02:00:534 (2,3) - remove finish and add a single finish to 01:59:731 (1) -
12. 02:04:014 (1) - at this point, I notice that you tend to skip the finish on downbeat, however it exists in the music itself. Please run through your difficulties and fix this by adding a finish where appropriate. I won't mention this anymore
13. 02:06:156 (6) - should have NC to emphasize the vocals and fix comboing mistake(s?)
14. 02:41:494 (4,6) - finish is unnecessary and noisy
15. 02:45:778 (4,6) - ^ (oops I said I don't tell about this anymore)
16. 02:51:132 (6) - needs NC

1. 00:35:669 (4) - this needs a clap
2. 00:37:811 (7) - ^
3. 00:40:488 (1,1,1) - no! There should be no jumps, please remap. Also, the first two don't need NC
4. 00:50:125 (7,8) - the spacing need to be 1x
5. 00:59:764 (6) - NC
6. 01:10:472 (3,4,5) - please no. Make the spacing equal. You may want to make a triangle here, or something
7. 01:22:252 (1,2,3,4,5) - uhhhh I have a strong feeling that I've seen this less than a minute ago already..
8. 01:23:322 (5,1) - the gap is too big; add a note on 01:25:463
9. 01:33:763 (1,2) - fix the stack
10. 01:36:173 (1,1,1) - remove the jumps again, please
11. 01:39:653 (2,3) - fix the spacing (should be 1x) to avoid that tiny overlap
12. 01:40:456 (5,1) - the gap is too big; add a note at 01:42:597
13. 01:47:952 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/bcwPn/786132a899.jpg looks better
14. 01:55:448 (6) - I see no point in having this many repeats; could you please remove them, leaving 1 or 2 at most, and map something after this slider to fill empty space?

1. 00:27:638 (3) - make a better curve by using new slider generation algorithm; remove all anchors except first and last and add a single one
2. 00:27:638 (3,1) - the gap is too big; add a note at 00:29:779
3. 00:50:929 (5) - add finish?
4. 00:58:693 (1) - missing a finish
5. 01:05:653 (2,1) - this is uncomfortable to play, because the slider sends a player in a completely opposite direction; consider this: http://puu.sh/bcupO/78f02935bc.jpg
6. 01:08:331 (3) - needs a NC
7. 01:23:323 (3) - make a better curve (now you know how)
   
   okay, this is the point where I see you copied this from the first section. To avoid increasing my mod's length (it's unnecessary), just wipe this part and replace it w/ the first one rotated when you fix the above things, or fix only the same patterns
   
   
8. 02:38:282 (1) - move closer to the slider to avoid confusion with 02:35:337 (2) - (the spacings between 1/1 in slow section and usual 1/2 are very similar)
9. 02:39:085 (1) - this doesn't need a clap on the end
10. 02:42:566 (2,1) - move NC to (2)
11. 02:43:368 (1) - this doesn't need a clap on the end
12. 02:51:133 (3) - add NC
13. 02:55:416 (3) - ^
14. 02:59:699 (3) - ^
15. 03:01:306 (4,1) - quite a jump for Easy. Reduce it by any means; could be easily fixed by mirroring all the next patterns horizontally at once and tweaking trhe spacing
16. 03:08:266 - I'd like to see a note here
17. 03:11:479 (1) - please don't end it on a downbeat where the singer almost shouts out the phrase; allow player to hit the note or something at the same time. In other words, halve this slider's length and add a note after
18. 03:14:691 (1) - for the sake of rhythm, replace it with three