all fixed ~ Thanks modding <3Melophobia wrote:
[Normal]
01:00:175 (3,4) - 変える必要もないんだけど気分的に(1)と(4)が詰まってる感じするからもう少し離したい
このくらいあけました! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/408662
http://puu.sh/XaJ2
all fixed ~ Thanks modding <3Melophobia wrote:
[Normal]
01:00:175 (3,4) - 変える必要もないんだけど気分的に(1)と(4)が詰まってる感じするからもう少し離したい
このくらいあけました! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/408662
Melophobia wrote:
[Easy]
00:45:731 (3) - this is too curved comapred with (1,2) imo and looks not that great to me
01:00:546 (3) - finish! Fixed
01:01:286 - and maybe clap here? I'll keep consistency for now
01:02:027 (1) - try to make it curvy.. i dont think the current one looks so good Fixed
01:12:398 - finish sounds nice here Fixed
01:13:879 (1) - same as previous one Fixed
01:43:509 - maybe finish here? sounds nice to me>< Fixed
01:51:287 (2) - looks better if you use CTRL+J for this Fixed
02:11:657 (4) - finish~ Fixed
02:12:398 (5) - not sure about this but finish is too much imo maybe clap here instead? Fixed
if no, i'd suggest to add finish at 01:01:286 - too for consisntency
02:23:509 (3) - curve this slider for better flow? i think it doesnt fit in this pattern Fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/408609
02:35:361 (2) - finish~ Fixed
thx melo :33Melophobia wrote:
As requested
[Insane]
why not [Lunatic]? as you can see many touhou maps are using the name for the highest diff okay ;_;
00:06:472 (4) - shorten by 1/4 and add a note on whitetick fixed
00:07:953 (1,2,3) - awkward rhythm... try this instead fixed
http://puu.sh/X8qC
also i disagree with you about (1)'s shape it doesnt match the song very well i think it fits perfectly :<
00:12:675 - note here if possible>< not possible!
00:14:249 - stream! no! keep intro simple~
00:14:620 (2) - start newcombo here instead? x_x used combo to show huge spacing change x.x
00:33:879 (3) - your all other combos are quite short but this one is kinda long maybe newcombo here? it also can warn jumps too others are long too! → 00:29:342 (10)
00:34:249 (5,6) - CTRL+R for better flow? i like current positioning, jumps are at the right places in the song imo o.o
00:50:175 (1) - finish~ im baka D:
00:58:694 (3) - ctrl+H would be much better agree~
01:37:212 (7,8,9,10) - i'd do something different here ex,1/4 sliders because of the emphasis agree.. but current is also fine too :>
02:11:657 (1) - flow is not so good imo maybe stack it with the previous (1) or rotate the slider a bit flow break on purpose for emphasis on her voice ^^
02:21:842 (6) - can be stacked better fixed
so streamy&jumpy ;_; but good one
134,127,54990,2,2,B|92:116|60:142,2,80,2|10|2
209,155,56101,6,0,B|285:195|365:155,2,160,4|0|0
160,218,57953,2,0,B|159:267|113:288,2,80,8|0|8
80,216,59064,5,0
211,302,50916,6,0,B|177:300|146:312,2,60,2|0|8
136,152,142027,6,0,B|180:140|216:108|217:68|217:68|205:28,1,165.000005035401,0|8
376,152,142768,2,0,B|332:140|296:108|295:68|295:68|305:28,1,165.000005035401,0|8
ty~~<3333333Niva wrote:
Hi Mythol~ Randomly checking bubbled map... i love you!! ♥.♥
Just posting some minor suggestion/things that caught my most attention here, it's a great mapset yeah~
[General]
-> You can try to add light blue/purple/gold combocolor for this set, but it's not a must (: I'm bad with combo colors.. orz no change since current ones work and I dont wanna ruin it ;_;
[Lunatic]Hmm, it's a really solid and very ready mapset overall (:
- 00:05:361 (5,6,7,8,1) - Please put it around ~x:126 y:380, it'll look better in play mode... (yes, this is due to stacking's nature) agree~
- 00:24:990 (1) - Whistle+finish fits for this spinner's end I believe (: yes !
- 02:01:101 (4,1,2) - Just a suggestion here, it's good to make these three parallel I think :3 beautiful :3
- 02:35:361 (1) - Whistle + Finish on spinner's end, as used in Sakuya's Easy? sorry prefer just finish here ><
Call me back after the fixes~
Ty NivaNiva wrote:
[Sakuya's Easy]
- 00:53:138 (3,4,1,2) - Hmm, I don't really liked how (3,4) flows here, I'd play with encircles instead to make it look less forced: Fixed, thanks
134,127,54990,2,2,B|92:116|60:142,2,80,2|10|2
209,155,56101,6,0,B|285:195|365:155,2,160,4|0|0
160,218,57953,2,0,B|159:267|113:288,2,80,8|0|8
80,216,59064,5,0- 01:46:472 (4,5) - Why don't you add finish on (4)'s start and end as well, to fit the cymbals? (previously you have finishes also on 00:36:842 (2,1) xD) Fixed
Thanks modding ~ NivaNiva wrote:
[alacat's Normal]
- 00:13:879 (5) - Add whistle as well? (same synth as in (4))
fixed ~!- 00:50:916 (1) - Try something like this? Flows better with (2) imo:
211,302,50916,6,0,B|177:300|146:312,2,60,2|0|8fixed ~!- 01:39:435 (x) - Add note here? (uhm, I don't really mind the rhythm gap like this usually... But the lyric on (5) is too strong to be skipped, really >_<)
hmm , I put in a steady rhythm >.< 01:37:583 (1,2,3) -- 02:35:361 (1) - Whistle + Finish on spinner's end, as used in Sakuya's Easy?
fixed ~!
-Gamu- wrote:
(o'д')ノ☆゚*。Congratu★lations。*゚☆ヽ('д'o)
Melophobia wrote:
yes \^^/
because it was unrelated to the songAqo wrote:
Grats on rank I love this map :3
why did you change BG from yoomoo though?
allas wrote:
congrats
Snowy Dream wrote:
Late congratz! > <