As requested
[Easy]
00:45:731 (3) - this is too curved comapred with (1,2) imo and looks not that great to me
01:00:546 (3) - finish!
01:01:286 - and maybe clap here?
01:02:027 (1) - try to make it curvy.. i dont think the current one looks so good
01:12:398 - finish sounds nice here
01:13:879 (1) - same as previous one
01:43:509 - maybe finish here? sounds nice to me><
01:51:287 (2) - looks better if you use CTRL+J for this
02:11:657 (4) - finish~
02:12:398 (5) - not sure about this but finish is too much imo maybe clap here instead?
if no, i'd suggest to add finish at 01:01:286 - too for consisntency
02:23:509 (3) - curve this slider for better flow? i think it doesnt fit in this pattern
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/40860902:35:361 (2) - finish~
[Normal]
00:04:249 - ここはfinishなくていいんじゃないかな、かなり煩いと思う
00:05:731 - ^ 最低でもこっちは外した方がいい
00:11:657 (1) - 曲の中にあるのでこっちにはfinishつけときましょう
00:12:398 - ^
00:39:805 (4,5,1) - この並べ方はかなり不自然な流れ方になってるかな 後ろの方でoverlapが起きてあんまりいいパターンじゃないんだけどまぁこんな感じで繋げればいいんじゃないかな
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/408617(4)を垂直に立てると自然な流れで後ろに繋ぎやすいはず
00:44:990 (3) - 逆に反らせると(4)への流れがより自然に
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/40861800:47:212 (2) - finishは合わないとおもいます
00:55:361 (5) - 前後の配置を考慮すると1grid下
01:00:175 (3,4) - 変える必要もないんだけど気分的に(1)と(4)が詰まってる感じするからもう少し離したい
01:13:509 - clapが煩くて浮いてるからここは音量下げていいんじゃないかな
01:13:879 (1,2) - このpatternが1st kiaiと比べると簡単なのがちょっとアレかな?、2番目だし前のより盛り上げたいところ
01:43:509 (1) - たぶんfinish
01:49:435 (1) - ^
02:01:657 (2) - ちょっとstackがずれてる・・・
[Hard]
00:11:657 (1) - finish sounds nice here
00:28:879 (6) - i know you tried to stack it with 00:27:583 (7) - but looks awkward to me it's better to correct it
00:31:472 (2) - move this to where (4)'s beginning is?
00:36:842 (1) - finish here?
00:44:990 (2) - copy paste from (1) for better flow/ looking?
00:58:324 (8,9) - spacing is wrong imo.. 1~2grid up would be better
01:09:435 (6,12) - they can be stacked better imo
01:38:879 (5,6,7,8,9) - move these notes to a bit down so that 01:38:324 (4,9) - can be stacked? flows and looks better imo
01:53:879 (5) - i prefer this one
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/40864101:55:361 (1) - finish sounds nice imo
02:11:287 (3) - sorry for nazi but move 2nd point to 1grid right to make the angle same as (2)
02:24:342 (6) - nice hitsound here!
02:34:990 (4) - place this at x28 y244 for consistency
really nice diff
[Insane]
why not [Lunatic]? as you can see many touhou maps are using the name for the highest diff
00:06:472 (4) - shorten by 1/4 and add a note on whitetick
00:07:953 (1,2,3) - awkward rhythm... try this instead
http://puu.sh/X8qCalso i disagree with you about (1)'s shape it doesnt match the song very well
00:12:675 - note here if possible><
00:14:249 - stream!
00:14:620 (2) - start newcombo here instead? x_x
00:33:879 (3) - your all other combos are quite short but this one is kinda long maybe newcombo here? it also can warn jumps too
00:34:249 (5,6) - CTRL+R for better flow?
00:50:175 (1) - finish~
00:58:694 (3) - ctrl+H would be much better
01:37:212 (7,8,9,10) - i'd do something different here ex,1/4 sliders because of the emphasis
02:11:657 (1) - flow is not so good imo maybe stack it with the previous (1) or rotate the slider a bit
02:21:842 (6) - can be stacked better
so streamy&jumpy ;_; but good one