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[Sakuya's Easy]
Good luck :3
[Sakuya's Easy]
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[alacat's Normal]- 00:22:027 (3) - head whistle ?
- 00:23:509 (4) - NC i guess for consistency
- 00:26:101 - i would add note with whistle here to emphasize BG music
- 00:29:064 - also wanted to see note here .w.
- 00:44:990 (2) - prefer to remove whistle from tail
- 01:00:546 (3) - try this instead ? http://puu.sh/QjOz (also add whistle to slider head/body/tail)
- 01:12:027 - sounds better if you add note for *touch my fire* same like here 02:23:138 (2) -
- 01:24:249 (2) - finish head, same with insane ?
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[Nyquill's Hard]- 00:01:287 (1,2,3,1) - i would replace this pattern with 1 spinner o.o
- 00:14:620 - either add note with finish here, or start break from here http://puu.sh/QkeC
- not a bit deal but i suggest you to reduce break till big white tick here 00:24:990 http://puu.sh/QkiW
- 01:12:398 (3,4) - add head whistles for *fire* o.o?
- 01:36:101 - same break issue here, reduce it to big white tick
- 01:49:435 (1) - whistle, same with insane diff ?
- 01:57:953 (5) - replace this note with kickslider ? http://puu.sh/QknU
- 02:11:657 (4) - arrow whistle ?
- 02:32:398 (4,1) - hmm, maybe this ? http://puu.sh/Qkpf
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[Insane]- reduce break till 00:24:990
- 00:27:953 (8) - NC .w.
- 00:52:398 (7) - whistle for *OOOOUUUU* o.o?
- 00:55:361 (7,8) - can be *whistled* .w.
- 00:56:101 (1) - finish i guess, cause i hear some cymbal
- 01:00:546 (4,5) - can be *whistled*
- 01:07:953 (1) - finish
- 01:12:398 (5,6) - whistles for *FIRE* .x.
- reduce break till 01:36:101
- 02:03:509 (6) - OOOUUUUUU
- 02:06:472 (8,9) - same as before
- 02:11:657 (4,5) - same as before
- 02:13:138 (1) - finish ?
- 02:13:694 (2,3,4) - would be nice if you change placement here, to prevent bad looking overlaps, smth like this maybe http://puu.sh/Qkz5
- 02:23:509 (3,5) - FIRE
- 02:35:361 (5) - whistle ?
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- 00:13:879 (9) - maybe whistle here and slider whistle for this 00:14:064 (1) -
- 00:24:342 - this should be removed i guess o.o http://puu.sh/QkGf
- 00:49:435 (4,5,1) - 4 sliders sounds better for me :> (random placement orz http://puu.sh/QkLr)
- 00:59:064 (1,2) - hmm, wanted to see white tick triple here o.o
- 01:00:546 (1,2) - you used higher SV for kiai, but i suggesting you to encrease it from here to emphasize music(maybe even 1.2 orz), also some halfscreen jump can be here ww
- 01:12:398 (1,3) - whistles for *FIREEEEEEE* o.o?
- 01:28:694 (1) - hmm maybe whistle tail and remove whistle from 01:29:064 (2) -
- 01:31:657 (1,2) - same here, remove from tail and add on #2
- 01:35:731 (8) - whistle tail !
- 02:01:287 (1,2,3,4) - change placement a bit ? http://puu.sh/Ql5D
- 01:59:620 (7,8,1) - move this a bit x:476 y:92, to place it between #4,5 also rotate it for few degree to make better blanket with 01:59:249 (5) -
- 02:11:657 (1,2) - both whistles, and same suggestion about increasing SV .w.
- 02:23:509 (1,3) - FIREEEEEE ( also spacing a bit small here comparing to previous FIREEEEE 01:12:953 (2,3) - and i think this music fits some big jump http://puu.sh/QkWx)
Good luck :3