Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun.
[General]
The bitrate is at 216. it shouldn't be that high because of the filesize. reduce to between 128-192 kbps to make it rankable.
remove "Dia" in the tags since Dia is on the artist.
[Easy]
I think a slider tick rate of 1 fits with the song. a slider tick rate of 2 gets in the way as you hear so many ticks in this song, and i find it unfitting.
00:19:577 (1) - maybe Ctrl+J to make this path easier for beginners?
00:23:901 (1,2) - maybe do something like this for a smoother flow to the next slider?
00:39:036 (2,3) - same as above but like this. if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to this.
00:47:685 (5) - make this a NC because of new lyrics.
00:48:225 (1) - if you follow the suggestion above, remove the NC because the lyrics are still going. these two notes follow "earnin' for"
01:01:198 (3) - make this a NC. the lyrics repeat itself to "good boy".
01:02:820 (1) - maybe add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals?
01:09:847 (3) - same as 01:01:198.
01:53:090 (3) - ^
02:00:658 (2,3) - keep the spacing consistent. as it stands it's at 0.99 and the default DS is at 1.10...well for me that is.
02:14:171 (3) - i suggest not doing 2 repeats because i think beginners would let go of the 2nd repeat which leads to breaking their combo. try to remove the repeat and add a circle to replace for the second to make it easier?
02:28:766 (3) - same as 01:01:198.
02:37:415 (3) - ^
02:44:442 (2) - *nazi* make this slider look like the previous slider for a better flow from the previous note.
02:46:063 (3) - same as 01:01:198.
this map can be better with claps and several finishes. listen carefully to the song, and find where you think it's good to add claps and finishes, because i saw some opportunities on where you can add claps and finishes. other than that this is a good diff. not the greatest but pretty good for beginners to play.
[Normal]
same as easy about the slider tick rate.
00:21:198 - add a circle to follow vocals, and it'll flow a lot smoother IMO.
00:26:063 (4) - make this a NC because of new lyrics, and personally i don't like this slider because yes it follows vocals, but i find the repeat unfitting to the song. try a 1/2 repeat and a circle. i think it flows the the song a lot better IMO.
00:54:171 (1) - put this between the 2 sliders. i think it'd make a nice blanket IMO.
01:01:198 (5) - same as easy.
01:08:766 (4,5) - same as 02:00:658 on easy and same as above.
01:13:631 (4) - same as 00:26:063.
01:17:955 (3) - ^
01:23:901 (6) - align this to (4) so that it'd look like a diamond.
01:41:739 (3) - a NC here because of new lyrics?
01:53:090 (5) - same as 01:01:198.
02:01:739 (5) - ^
02:28:766 (5) - ^
02:37:415 (5) - ^
02:46:063 (5) - ^
same comment about the claps and finishes.
[Hard]
00:30:928 (2,5) - space these out a bit. the overlap looks bad IMO.
01:01:198 (6) - same as easy.
01:09:847 (6) - ^
01:57:415 (4) - a NC here because of new lyrics.
01:59:036 (1) - space this out a bit. the repeat arrow is being slightly covered by the hitburst and i think that can be unrankable.
02:24:982 (8) - i think that this slider can look a lot smoother. you'd make a blanket around the previous slider.
02:37:144 (5) - same as 01:57:415. the end follows the new lyrics.
same comment about the claps and finishes, and the NCs need work. there's parts where you add a combo mainly because of new lyrics, and there's others where you just keep going. try to keep your combos consistent so that it'd be a fun diff IMO.
I guess that's it. GL
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun.
[General]
The bitrate is at 216. it shouldn't be that high because of the filesize. reduce to between 128-192 kbps to make it rankable.
remove "Dia" in the tags since Dia is on the artist.
[Easy]
I think a slider tick rate of 1 fits with the song. a slider tick rate of 2 gets in the way as you hear so many ticks in this song, and i find it unfitting.
00:19:577 (1) - maybe Ctrl+J to make this path easier for beginners?
00:23:901 (1,2) - maybe do something like this for a smoother flow to the next slider?
00:39:036 (2,3) - same as above but like this. if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to this.
00:47:685 (5) - make this a NC because of new lyrics.
00:48:225 (1) - if you follow the suggestion above, remove the NC because the lyrics are still going. these two notes follow "earnin' for"
01:01:198 (3) - make this a NC. the lyrics repeat itself to "good boy".
01:02:820 (1) - maybe add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals?
01:09:847 (3) - same as 01:01:198.
01:53:090 (3) - ^
02:00:658 (2,3) - keep the spacing consistent. as it stands it's at 0.99 and the default DS is at 1.10...well for me that is.
02:14:171 (3) - i suggest not doing 2 repeats because i think beginners would let go of the 2nd repeat which leads to breaking their combo. try to remove the repeat and add a circle to replace for the second to make it easier?
02:28:766 (3) - same as 01:01:198.
02:37:415 (3) - ^
02:44:442 (2) - *nazi* make this slider look like the previous slider for a better flow from the previous note.
02:46:063 (3) - same as 01:01:198.
this map can be better with claps and several finishes. listen carefully to the song, and find where you think it's good to add claps and finishes, because i saw some opportunities on where you can add claps and finishes. other than that this is a good diff. not the greatest but pretty good for beginners to play.
[Normal]
same as easy about the slider tick rate.
00:21:198 - add a circle to follow vocals, and it'll flow a lot smoother IMO.
00:26:063 (4) - make this a NC because of new lyrics, and personally i don't like this slider because yes it follows vocals, but i find the repeat unfitting to the song. try a 1/2 repeat and a circle. i think it flows the the song a lot better IMO.
00:54:171 (1) - put this between the 2 sliders. i think it'd make a nice blanket IMO.
01:01:198 (5) - same as easy.
01:08:766 (4,5) - same as 02:00:658 on easy and same as above.
01:13:631 (4) - same as 00:26:063.
01:17:955 (3) - ^
01:23:901 (6) - align this to (4) so that it'd look like a diamond.
01:41:739 (3) - a NC here because of new lyrics?
01:53:090 (5) - same as 01:01:198.
02:01:739 (5) - ^
02:28:766 (5) - ^
02:37:415 (5) - ^
02:46:063 (5) - ^
same comment about the claps and finishes.
[Hard]
00:30:928 (2,5) - space these out a bit. the overlap looks bad IMO.
01:01:198 (6) - same as easy.
01:09:847 (6) - ^
01:57:415 (4) - a NC here because of new lyrics.
01:59:036 (1) - space this out a bit. the repeat arrow is being slightly covered by the hitburst and i think that can be unrankable.
02:24:982 (8) - i think that this slider can look a lot smoother. you'd make a blanket around the previous slider.
02:37:144 (5) - same as 01:57:415. the end follows the new lyrics.
same comment about the claps and finishes, and the NCs need work. there's parts where you add a combo mainly because of new lyrics, and there's others where you just keep going. try to keep your combos consistent so that it'd be a fun diff IMO.
I guess that's it. GL