you don't need to have "dia" in the tags and title.
Thanks for modKei wrote:
Hey.
- [Easy]
- 00:30:388 (3) - I dislike this slider because it has 2 repeats when at the start of the song, there's a slider with only 1 repeat. Beginners might think that this one has only 1 repeat like the first one. I suggest you to try something else here to avoid this.
- 00:34:712 (3) - This is kinda.. nazi. This would look better if you copy 00:32:550 (1) - and replace this slider with the copy of (1) to make a better symmetry.
- 00:50:928 (3) - ^ just the same thing. Perhaps replace this slider with a copy of the previous one 00:49:847 (2) - for better symmetry?
- 02:14:171 (3) - Just, the same as I told you about 2 repeat sliders.
- 02:41:198 (3) - Again, for better symmetry, replace this slider with a copy of the slider 02:39:036 (1).
- 02:52:009 (1) - I personally dislike this long spinner. It sounds weird and it looks like you didn't wanted to map this part.
Uhmm some sliders have some shapes that can be improved a lot. You should try to make some pretty patterns to give the map some "variety".
- [Normal]
- 00:20:117 (2,3,4,5) - This sounds really weird. I suggest you to try this instead. I added that (2) of the start at the red tick so it fits with the rest of the map (you placed some notes at red ticks):
- 00:35:252 (3,4,5,6) - Sounds weird too because you placed 4, 5 and 6 at red ticks. Try something more simple instead. Remember that this is a normal difficulty. I know that you have a easier one, but at least I, don't agree about rhythm with red ticks in normal diffs.
- [Hard]
That's all. Good luck!
- 00:21:739 (4,5,6) - To follow better the vocals, I suggest you to replace this 3 notes with a slider, with 1 repeat.
- 00:24:982 (4,5) - ^ Replace with a slider?
- 00:26:063 (7,8,9) - ^ Perhaps replace with a slider with 1 repeat?
- 00:43:090 - The space between 3 and 4 feels empty. How about adding a note here?
- 01:38:496 (3,4) - Replace this notes with a slider, so it sounds and fits better with the vocals?
- 01:50:117 - Feels unnecesarily empty. Add a note here to keep following the music?
- 01:54:442 - ^
- 02:18:766 (1) - This spinner feels really off. It feels like you skipped this part with a spinner. In other words, looks.. lazy lol. Please try this instead. If you don't like that empty space because the HP bar keeps decreasing since there isn't a break, a break works pretty good too:
- 02:30:117 - Add a note to avoid emptyness?
- 02:52:009 (1) - I still dislike this spinner ;-;
Thanks for mod ByakuganByakugan249 wrote:
Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun.
[General]
The bitrate is at 216. it shouldn't be that high because of the filesize. reduce to between 128-192 kbps to make it rankable.
remove "Dia" in the tags since Dia is on the artist.
[Easy]
I think a slider tick rate of 1 fits with the song. a slider tick rate of 2 gets in the way as you hear so many ticks in this song, and i find it unfitting.
00:19:577 (1) - maybe Ctrl+J to make this path easier for beginners?
00:23:901 (1,2) - maybe do something like this for a smoother flow to the next slider?
00:39:036 (2,3) - same as above but like this. if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to this.
00:47:685 (5) - make this a NC because of new lyrics.
00:48:225 (1) - if you follow the suggestion above, remove the NC because the lyrics are still going. these two notes follow "earnin' for"
01:01:198 (3) - make this a NC. the lyrics repeat itself to "good boy".
01:02:820 (1) - maybe add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals?
01:09:847 (3) - same as 01:01:198.
01:53:090 (3) - ^
02:00:658 (2,3) - keep the spacing consistent. as it stands it's at 0.99 and the default DS is at 1.10...well for me that is.
02:14:171 (3) - i suggest not doing 2 repeats because i think beginners would let go of the 2nd repeat which leads to breaking their combo. try to remove the repeat and add a circle to replace for the second to make it easier?
02:28:766 (3) - same as 01:01:198.
02:37:415 (3) - ^
02:44:442 (2) - *nazi* make this slider look like the previous slider for a better flow from the previous note.
02:46:063 (3) - same as 01:01:198.
this map can be better with claps and several finishes. listen carefully to the song, and find where you think it's good to add claps and finishes, because i saw some opportunities on where you can add claps and finishes. other than that this is a good diff. not the greatest but pretty good for beginners to play.
[Normal]
same as easy about the slider tick rate.
00:21:198 - add a circle to follow vocals, and it'll flow a lot smoother IMO.
00:26:063 (4) - make this a NC because of new lyrics, and personally i don't like this slider because yes it follows vocals, but i find the repeat unfitting to the song. try a 1/2 repeat and a circle. i think it flows the the song a lot better IMO.
00:54:171 (1) - put this between the 2 sliders. i think it'd make a nice blanket IMO.
01:01:198 (5) - same as easy.
01:08:766 (4,5) - same as 02:00:658 on easy and same as above.
01:13:631 (4) - same as 00:26:063.
01:17:955 (3) - ^
01:23:901 (6) - align this to (4) so that it'd look like a diamond.
01:41:739 (3) - a NC here because of new lyrics?
01:53:090 (5) - same as 01:01:198.
02:01:739 (5) - ^
02:28:766 (5) - ^
02:37:415 (5) - ^
02:46:063 (5) - ^
same comment about the claps and finishes.
[Hard]
00:30:928 (2,5) - space these out a bit. the overlap looks bad IMO.
01:01:198 (6) - same as easy.
01:09:847 (6) - ^
01:57:415 (4) - a NC here because of new lyrics.
01:59:036 (1) - space this out a bit. the repeat arrow is being slightly covered by the hitburst and i think that can be unrankable.
02:24:982 (8) - i think that this slider can look a lot smoother. you'd make a blanket around the previous slider.
02:37:144 (5) - same as 01:57:415. the end follows the new lyrics.
same comment about the claps and finishes, and the NCs need work. there's parts where you add a combo mainly because of new lyrics, and there's others where you just keep going. try to keep your combos consistent so that it'd be a fun diff IMO.
I guess that's it. GL
The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps.About hitsounds, I suggest you to use claps where you used whistles in the refrain. It sounds much better.
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Thanks Ekaru :3Ekaru wrote:
Just some suggestions:
Hard:
01:00:388 - At a hit circle here and stack it on 5. See how it feels; to me it flows better and feels less awkward, 'cuz right now this part is kinda empty.
01:02:009 - ^ Similar idea here. Either that or don't stack and just have it be a jumpy group of 3 instead. I would do similar things for any repeating instances of this situation.
01:21:198 (7,8) - Imperfect blanket due to (8) not being symmetrical. You don't need to be perfect, but do try to bring (8)'s slider end down a bit more.
01:44:171 (5) - Try a reverse selection here and see if that flows better for you.
01:51:469 (4) - Make either this jump bigger or the next jump bigger, please, for readability purposes. Either one would do.
01:57:415 (1,2,3) - Due to the emphasis in the music here, I would turn this into 4 hit circles, all a good distance away from each other.
02:27:144 (3) - Try doing a Reverse Selection on this, and then move the following (1) to the right a bit to create some nice circular flow.
02:28:766 (4) - BEGIN NAZI MODE - messy spacing - END NAZI MODE
Nice map.
Normal:
02:34:442 (1) - This could curve more /nazi mode
Easy:
02:15:252 (4) - This could curve more /troll mode
Nice mapset overall. Have a star
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Gracias por el mp3 <3, pero cuando lo cambie el BPM suena mal asi que lo consultareKenezz wrote:
Aqui dejo el mp3 de 192kbps, despues edito este post y agrego el mod, testee las diffs y no vi nada remarcable, supongo que solo seran algunas sugerencias.
Dia Framton- Good Boy.mp3
Si tienes algun problema con el link me dices, no pude subirlo a puush y lo subi a MF.
Thanks Kenezz <3Kenezz wrote:
[General]nah, I think is fine with no claps
- 02:03:401 - Check this rythmical break, please snap this properly in all diffs. oh true fixed
- 02:55:292 - Really I prefer if you finish here the third kiai time because the part of the chorus still. fixed
- No claps!!!?? Oh why!!!?
[Easy]
Settings[Normal]
- Slider tick rate 1 please. Nop, is fine
- I don't want be nazi here, the diff looks nice and clean, good!
- Beatmap Suggestions
fixed
- 00:21:779 (1) - According with your combo pattern here the nc not is needless, if you agree then also remove this 00:26:103 (1). fixed
- 02:22:320 - Compared with easy in the normal you can put some beats 1/1 after the spinner, really I wanna see a 1/2 repeat slider here.
[Hard]
- Beatmap Suggestions
All fixed
- 00:36:509 - Missing cool triplet here, add a circleee.
- 02:46:644 (8) - This antijump is too weird, I suggest move to the place of (6) at the center and after fix the spacing between this and the next repeat slider.
Very clean mapset, I hope to heps you.
Good Luck and oh gaaw Dia ♥
Yup :3, thanks Kenezz <3Kenezz wrote:
Bubbies
Hmm nop, I keep my rhythm and I see suggestion from you mod but no changesJenny wrote:
Is that a joke or what? <_<
What a nice attitude you have here. You could also be honest and say you disregarded most of the mod without even considering it, you would at least not sound like a liar.MoodyRPG wrote:
Hmm nop, I keep my rhythm and I see suggestion from you mod but no changesJenny wrote:
Is that a joke or what? <_<