Wreath wrote:

from h-728 and Wreath' queue

hi, L_P and ERT

[Insane]

1. 00:31:272 (3,4,5,6,1) - i think this placement is not so good. i hope youI hope you try another placement deleted a note
2. 01:12:564 (1,2) - i think this sliders are same shape is better 01:11:047 (1,1,1) adjust some
3. 02:06:159 (1) - i think this placement is not so good. i hope youI hope you try another placement made ctrl + R
4. 02:07:676 (1,2,3,4) - ^ no change..
5. 02:24:867 (4) - i think this sliders are same shape is better 02:23:856 (1,2,3) no change

good map ^ㅅ^
good luck

Leorda wrote:

[ERT's Easy]01:14:418 (1,1,1,1) - These combo seems useless for me, remove them?
02:24:530 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
02:35:317 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
02:47:451 (1) - ^
02:53:519 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^

BakaHuang wrote:

:)


Hard

01:15:092(1,2)-我觉得时间轴上位置对调下比较好.. 这里跟bass走haa
01:27:901(2)-还是加个note比较舒服
01:30:597(2)-^
01:33:294(2)-打到这里我已经习惯了-.-随意加不加吧.
02:30:597(1,2)-时间轴上位置对换下
02:52:676(1,2)-也是换下位置 （还有类似的地方不说了..想改就改吧lol

no change

Insane

打起来很舒服 没什么问题

03:02:283(1,2,3,4)-打起来没什么问题..就是觉得排版不太好看..能换下吗=_= 用了slider

Leorda wrote:

Hi there


[General]
* You need an hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png and reversearrow.png for completing set of hitcircle (since approachcircle.png is on this folder) i removed the approach circle orz

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

General:
You need a normal to make this mapset complete I think. Too big a gap between Hard and Easy.

Insane:
00:23:687 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This has extreme readability issue. The main problem with it is the skin. The skin covers up the notes and the approach circling making it REALLY hard to see. I'd use a diff skin if you want to us this pattern, but I would high suggest a different pattern.
00:26:384 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
00:29:081 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^ will make the skin transparent
00:31:777 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This is a bit better.
00:36:665 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Getting back to readability issues.
01:34:305 - Add a note? ok
02:00:260 (5) - Remove clap on beginning? ok
02:14:923 (3,1) - Put the beginning on the ends of previous sliders? Looks better for now i think the placement suits the vocal

Hard:
00:33:463 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is really weird. Doesn't follow the song very well. I suggest changing it to something like this:

00:36:159 (1,2,3) - ^
00:38:856 (1,2,3) - ^ ok ↑
01:00:260 (1,2,3,4) - Wayyyyyyyy to much overlap. Looks clumpy/messy/etc. Come up with a new pattern (look http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/374225) would like to try it, no change for now
01:11:047 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:40:710 - Map this break? seems completely random. no..

Easy:
AR+1?

• 
  "re" 意思是 "remove"
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是要討論的問題
  紅色 是unrankable

[general]

1. osb.似乎在呢?~ (被打

[ERT's Easy]

1. 01:31:272 (3) - 不知道為甚麼咱感覺在x:112 y:212 好像比較順 ?! (被打
2. 01:55:541 (3) - 不知道怎麼說明得奇怪感覺 應該是形狀?!
   
3. 太perfect了! OTZ

[Normal]

1. 00:28:238 (2) - 咱想吐潮這overlap (被打
2. 00:45:429 (2) - ^
3. 01:09:699 (3) - 似乎有點碰到了01:11:047 (1) - 應該沒問題 但還是提出了 OTZ
4. 01:13:743 (3) - NC?~

[Hard]

1. 00:33:968 (2) - overlap!?
2. 01:00:260 (1,2,3,4) - 這邊會坑死一堆人!! 看要不要(2) (3) (4) 都NC?!
3. 01:11:047 (1,2,3,4) - ^
4. 02:08:350 (2) - 改成來回1次的slider+1個circle? 因為咱總覺得這邊會讓一堆人斷combo

[Insane]

1. 00:24:193 (3) - NC 感覺這樣比較不會confuse?
2. 00:26:890 (3) - ^
3. 00:29:586 (3) - ^
4. 00:32:283 (3) - ^
5. 00:37:676 (3) - ^
6. 00:43:069 (5) - ^
7. 00:52:170 (2,3) - 總覺得這邊...不太好?!
8. 01:55:878 (3) - NC 理由跟上面一串的^一樣XDD
9. 01:59:081 (3) - ^ 這個的話 咱只是為了對稱所以才打上來的
10. 02:19:137 (1) - 這個!!第2次迴轉會被02:18:800 (1) - 的分數擋到一些

l1106188 wrote:

M4M~:3

• 
  "re" 意思是 "remove"
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是要討論的問題
  紅色 是unrankable

[general]

1. osb.似乎在呢?~ (被打

[ERT's Easy]

1. 01:31:272 (3) - 不知道為甚麼咱感覺在x:112 y:212 好像比較順 ?! (被打
2. 01:55:541 (3) - 不知道怎麼說明得奇怪感覺 應該是形狀?!
   
3. 太perfect了! OTZ

[Normal]

1. 00:28:238 (2) - 咱想吐潮這overlap (被打 daijoubu
2. 00:45:429 (2) - ^ ^
3. 01:09:699 (3) - 似乎有點碰到了01:11:047 (1) - 應該沒問題 但還是提出了 OTZ ^
4. 01:13:743 (3) - NC?~ 嗯

[Hard]

1. 00:33:968 (2) - overlap!? no change
2. 01:00:260 (1,2,3,4) - 這邊會坑死一堆人!! 看要不要(2) (3) (4) 都NC?! 换形状了orz
3. 01:11:047 (1,2,3,4) - ^
4. 02:08:350 (2) - 改成來回1次的slider+1個circle? 因為咱總覺得這邊會讓一堆人斷combo

[Insane]

1. 00:24:193 (3) - NC 感覺這樣比較不會confuse? 这里跟音调，00:23:687 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个是一起的，所以不变。。话说NC太多反而更容易误导？
2. 00:26:890 (3) - ^
3. 00:29:586 (3) - ^
4. 00:32:283 (3) - ^
5. 00:37:676 (3) - ^
6. 00:43:069 (5) - ^
7. 00:52:170 (2,3) - 總覺得這邊...不太好?! 做了改变。。
8. 01:55:878 (3) - NC 理由跟上面一串的^一樣XDD
9. 01:59:081 (3) - ^ 這個的話 咱只是為了對稱所以才打上來的
10. 02:19:137 (1) - 這個!!第2次迴轉會被02:18:800 (1) - 的分數擋到一些 嗯的确

good song & good map & good luck~ star
梗用的真好!!!
sorry for 咱的渣mod
總覺得在hard理看到阿三醬的影子

Neptunus wrote:

差点用了英文，差点忘了你说中文~~一看这skin我就知道肯定没啥问题，但是还是努力mod吧~
General： 皮肤太棒了，完全不用担心hitburst遮挡啥的 还不错吧~


Normal：
01:46:103 - 加个note再加上finish，试一下~ 拉长slider了，用了finish效果不错

02:00:260 (2) - 这里换成这样如何 这里有写偏执...
^
02:02:957 - 还有这里 ^
02:05:654 - same here ^

Hard：
01:00:260 (1,2,3,4,5) - 绝了！ 不好吗。。玩过DT似乎没啥感觉..?
01:28:069 (2) - 这个尝试一下从这里开始 01:27:901 - 之前节奏太猎奇已更改
01:30:766 (2) - 这个也是 这里反而还好吧
01:31:609 - 这里为啥子木有note了？ 暂不放

Insane：
这个diff太棒了
00:42:732 (1,2,3,4) - 和00:43:069 (5,6,7,8) - 再离得近一点吧 嗯
00:51:328 (1,2) - 建议space out一些 嗯
木啦~

坐等这图rank~加油！

-Bakari- wrote:

yo~! as requested via queue~

[General]
mizu? no. Miku! :3
YO

[Normal]
00:26:552 (3,2) - nazi: overlap. kinda fixed
00:44:586 (1,2) - ^ lazy to fix
00:52:339 (1) - clap? no
01:48:123 - spinner here. this mini break kinda trolled me while testing. oh break. i can relax. in next 5 seconds i failed D: hahaha ok

[Hard]
00:33:968 (2) - nazi: x384 y240. oh.. i just hate this overlap. so.. here's way how to fix it changed the way it looks
00:35:654 (7) - place hitsound at the end. any hitsound you like. i prefer finish. sounds much better ok
01:39:024 - 1/2 slider here
02:06:833 (5) - nazi: 1 grid up to put end of (5) right in the center of (4) http://puu.sh/LPV4 fixed
02:23:687 - circle here for vocals changed to slider

[Insane]
00:47:283 (2) - make 1/2 slider instead. it sounds better and also will make your flow a bit easier to read ok....

~~~~~~~~~~~

cute map. really cute.

L_P wrote:

I make cute maps

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi , from my mod queue

yeah , NTR is my favorite mapper. you and DarknessAngel have gotten the correct answer. so feel free to send your other map once again to get my mod.
THANKS


Normal
pretty fast ;o , AR-1 ? too much complains on this... changed as all body suggested this T.T
00:41:384 (1) - might be clap at the end of this slider fixed
01:02:957 (3) - I feel like this should be added new combo. vocal doesn't sound same previous , like if I added note at 01:02:788 , I will absolutely add new combo at 01:02:957 it. fixed
oh , just found ;D, 01:13:743 (1) - you add new combo here ^ so , make it consistent ! huehue :>
01:27:227 (1,2,3) - I think it doesn't follow the music. I think my rhythm is not too bad or something like that >_> nice suggestion
shorten this slider 1 beat 01:27:901 (3) - and move forward 1/2 beat then create slider end at 01:27:901 instead of single note
It's not harder /o/
hope you enjoy it \:D/

SPOILER

02:19:811 (3) - nazi \o.o/ , move left 1 grid. this is not completely stacked orz
02:31:946 (1) - finish at the start !_! k
02:42:732 (1) - ^ , it's not too loud ! you should d d d d d k
I see what you did there .. but okay, it's fit with the music

Hard
00:52:845 (3) - remove 1 repeat , I hate 2 repeat slider because it's not intuitive o..o! and this is short slider. it's hard to notice that it has more than 1 repeat.
my suggestion it to remove 1 repeat and add note at 00:53:350 (4) - to create a little lovely jump ww not the way you suggested however changed something

SPOILER

01:02:957 (2,3) - ...I think it's ok -_-'' just saying'
hmm, middle part , I feel it's a bit empty. so strange ;_; here..ok, but no change on last kiai...
02:25:373 (1) - nazi \O_O/ , move to x:172 y:82 because it's overlapped a bit with 02:24:867 (4) - but not overlap next note so. it's not balance. just that ;o orz

Insane
unconventional insane diff. I honestly like it .
01:45:597 (1,2) - people hit something like 01:45:092 (1,2) - < 1/2 beat many times and will recognize as this rhythm but.. when they face something weird like this ! they will get missed by hitting (2) too fast (they may assume it as 1/2 beat like before also I missed at this first and it's very strange distance obviously)
My suggestion is to move (1) or (2) more far from each other. so people won't get confused from this.

kinda changed into something,...

more far in my opinion is something like this (huge distance will be the best)

SPOILER

star for your renovation of your beatmap \:D/

Good luck for ranking ~ rank gogogo

W h i t e wrote:

Hello from my queue

Normal

00:44:586 (1,2) - : I think this overlap is not good ok....

01:28:069 (3) - : How about like 01:33:800 (3,4) - ? nice

Hard

01:13:069 (5) - : how about stuck? ...

Insane

00:53:013 (1) - : How about like this?

SPOILER

ok

00:53:856 (3) - : How abour like this?

SPOILER

sure

that's all, funny map, it's your mapping style, lol..

thank you~

good luck

12BARRY21 wrote:

是sweet 不是append ww

Philippines wrote:

Hi, here's a mod for your Miku map ~ thanks~


Normal

1. 02:00:934 (3) - The slider's end has a high potential to become a blanket of the previous circle. Why not try to make it one? ok
   
   
2. 02:49:137 (3) - This slider is too long that there are some parts that should be mapped. Please shorten this one and map the remaining spaces. im working on rhythm this part, 2 1/1 slider follow by a long one or a return slider...

Hard

1. 00:25:541 (2) - stacking this one manually looks bad. Try to stack it normally or use distance snap instead. when playing, the system itself will automatic unstack it a bit, so what i do is just deciding its direction
   
   
2. 00:28:238 (2) - same as above. Not really a good time to stack manually. like i mentioned.. even i stack it perfectly it will become unstack when playing
   
   
3. 01:30:597 - You are missing a note here. Please add one here. will find some more mods, if still a big problem on this..will change
   
   
4. 01:40:541 - What has gotten into your brain and you added a break? D: Please map this one. This note also includes the break after this one. ok
   
   
5. Oh and btw, bump up one tick on your AR.

Insane

1. 00:24:193 (3) - There is no way players can read this. Put a new combo instead. what i work on here is 1 combo with 1 direction, like pinks goes down, yellow changed direction, and red goes up
   
   
2. 00:26:890 (3) - This one too.
   
   
3. 00:29:586 (3) - This too and all the rest that look like this.
   
   
4. 00:50:822 (4) - The slider's end doesn't look good and it's poorly done. Please fix it. fixed
   
   
5. 01:34:474 (3) - Fix the spacing so players can read it properly. ok
   
   
6. 02:15:429 (1) - Hiding this from the previous note is a bad idea. Please make it more visible. at this moment i would like to do this, and also, it is so easy to read// (this is a mapping style from i-dont-remember-who but i really like it...not so popular though, because last time too many new modder popped up and mod this kind of stuff..in the end most people does not use it anymore..orz)

[/notice]

Strawberry wrote:

hey~ m4m

[Normal]

00:47:788 - 感觉这里+个note打(听?)起来更顺.. 是没错但是考虑到这diff整体难度我还是放弃了
00:52:339 (1) - 听起来像是应该结束在00:54:024 - ？ 嗯
01:15:092 (3) -

SPOILER

好
02:15:260 (3) - 拿掉比较好 没错个人也认为如此。。不知道曾几何时一mod删了
02:19:811 (3) - (nazi)左一格 好..


[Hard]

00:31:609 (5) - (nazi)尾巴的锚点往下一格..这样和(4)角度一样 好
00:34:137 (3) - 这个也像其他部分一样和(2)错开一点点? 其实这里还好啦
01:15:260 (2) - 感觉应该是开始在3/4的样子(亦或是2/3)

SPOILER

行
02:08:856 - 去掉这里原先的circle再以02:09:024 (3) - 代之? 好
02:41:552 (2) - 和01:15:260一样 最后kiai打算跟鼓点比较多（其实都可以啦，但感觉后kiai比较喜欢跟鼓）
03:03:126 (2) - ^
02:52:170 (1) - 这里用3/4(亦或是2/3)repeat slider代替? 不了

SPOILER

[Insane]

00:53:519 (2) - nc在这里而不是00:53:013 (1) - ? 嗯
01:16:272 - 感觉这里+个note更爽点:3 做了一点点改变，DT挺坑爹的..
01:29:839 - add a note. 弄成个3连 因为你这段stack的都是三连，所以只有这里stack是1/2可能有点。。 好
*好喜欢这个diff 感觉有点和NTR的风格相似? 总之很好玩:3
似乎没看过NTR这样子map过(pokerface 的话跟这不太一样啊= =ll) 不过精神上是NTR的（我在说啥）

star.~

nold_1702 wrote:

..是ert的easy...

可惜沒有機會再找他做easy了

1. 00:53:013 (2) - I hope it won't cause troubles, because people can expect it to be 1/2 earlier. I'd unstuck it (and remake)
2. 01:14:418 (1,1,1) - too many NCs, remove these three
3. 02:24:530 (1) - ^
4. 02:25:541 (1,1,1) - ^
5. 02:35:317 (1) - and 02:36:328 (1,1,1) - the same as above (not mentioning this anymore)

1. 01:05:654 (1) - don't forget to add finish! (the one from soft sampleset, for example)
2. 01:11:047 (1) - move down its end with repeating arrow, so it won't be overlapped by previous slider

1. 01:13:069 (5) - stack better with 01:12:058 (3) - using zero spacing
2. 01:45:934 (5) - mind adding a spinner after it? 01:46:103 ~ 01:48:463
3. 01:59:586 (1) - add finish
4. 02:13:912 (1) - eh, okay, let it live
5. 02:26:552 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is the only overlapping pattern I like, the others before it look messy
6. 02:29:081 (1,2) - I'd swap them: note first, slider second

1. 00:23:687 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - (personal opinion) this pattern is freaking hard to read for me, we're not in "Sticks and Stones". Yeah, I know that skillful players blah blah blah, but this thing irks me a lot, mostly because I can't see right direction under hitbursts. Even after 5 or 7 tries. I recommend you to reverse 00:23:687 (1,2) - and 00:24:193 (3,4) - to improve readability
2. 00:42:985 (4,5) -they are too far apart, better use distance spacing 0.7 here and here: 00:43:322 (8,1) -
3. 01:45:934 (2) - the same as on Hard, spinner fits great
4. 01:48:800 (1) - add finish please
5. 02:09:361 ~ 02:10:036 - why don't you add a nice stream here? It exists in music, and it plays fine on Insane
6. 02:14:418 (2,3,1) - looks bad, better avoid this kind of overlap when note or slider's beginning is under another slider's body
7. 02:41:552 (2) - make it 1/4 shorter, move 1/4 forward and add a note at 02:41:552 -
8. 03:03:631 (1) - better remove repeat and add a note instead. Players would like to hit the very last note instead of just sliding over it.

TicClick wrote:

ERT's Easy

Normal

1. 01:05:654 (1) - don't forget to add finish! (the one from soft sampleset, for example) fixed
2. 01:11:047 (1) - move down its end with repeating arrow, so it won't be overlapped by previous slider fixed

These two diffs are perfect.

Hard

1. 01:13:069 (5) - stack better with 01:12:058 (3) - using zero spacing fixed
2. 01:45:934 (5) - mind adding a spinner after it? 01:46:103 ~ 01:48:463 no.. i think rest is better than spinning
3. 01:59:586 (1) - add finish fixed
4. 02:13:912 (1) - eh, okay, let it live
5. 02:26:552 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is the only overlapping pattern I like, the others before it look messy i agree with you, but this time at the start i wanted to try some new pattern and shape, the next time i map would be in better shape i promise..
6. 02:29:081 (1,2) - I'd swap them: note first, slider second fixed

Insane

1. 00:23:687 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - (personal opinion) this pattern is freaking hard to read for me, we're not in "Sticks and Stones". Yeah, I know that skillful players blah blah blah, but this thing irks me a lot, mostly because I can't see right direction under hitbursts. Even after 5 or 7 tries. I recommend you to reverse 00:23:687 (1,2) - and 00:24:193 (3,4) - to improve readability this is just the pattern i chose to map this song, i foresee players will think like wtf first PC, however if they feel fun after overcoming this patter...hm, some love it
2. 00:42:985 (4,5) -they are too far apart, better use distance spacing 0.7 here and here: 00:43:322 (8,1) - fixed
3. 01:45:934 (2) - the same as on Hard, spinner fits great no
4. 01:48:800 (1) - add finish please fixed
5. 02:09:361 ~ 02:10:036 - why don't you add a nice stream here? It exists in music, and it plays fine on Insane fixed
6. 02:14:418 (2,3,1) - looks bad, better avoid this kind of overlap when note or slider's beginning is under another slider's body i think it just suits(with default skin..?
7. 02:41:552 (2) - make it 1/4 shorter, move 1/4 forward and add a note at 02:41:552 - oh...it plays fine but i chose to stay on mine
8. 03:03:631 (1) - better remove repeat and add a note instead. Players would like to hit the very last note instead of just sliding over it. fixed

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
Artist: nana(Sevencolors) (N没有大写但S有)
以下这一串加进tags:
kano aco arisaka technobrekerz
说实话我觉得没人会用这一串的东西来搜不过鹿乃的话也说不定……
这个歌是有PV的: http://bilibili.kankanews.com/video/av98681/ 应该考虑加一下。各种人名也都拿PV里的为准就好
或许把sliderslide音消了比较好。。我还是觉得挺大声的……不过万一听起来更糟不能怪我。

fixed

[ERT's Easy]
01:00:260 (1) - http://puu.sh/1bhAl i'd prefer to use notes like this. would fit the rhythm better. fixed
01:11:047 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
01:35:991 (2,3) - switch the whistle? add a whistle
01:48:463 - add a note? no..
02:23:856 (1,1,1) - emm i could understand the new combo spam for long sliders, but for this one seems a bit too much...just use on 02:23:856 (1) & 02:25:204 (1) ?

[Normal]
00:31:440 (2) - use a circle at 00:31:272, and start the slider from 00:31:946? 很難橋啊
00:44:586 (1) - also use a curved slider would be better for me, this part seems soft. 好
01:01:609 (2) - start 1/2 later? good
01:12:395 (2) - ^ ^
01:29:586 - add a note? 不想..
01:32:283 - ^ 反而覺得不錯

[Hard]
00:52:170 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1bhGT maybe? now it feels a bit tight for me. ok
01:47:114 - add a spinner here (end at 01:48:463), then you don't need this break... fixed / \
02:13:912 (1) - make it more obvious or better just don't use such kind of sliders... used 0.5x
02:30:597 (1,2) - should use 3/4 here~? nope,這裡還是跟著鼓點下比較有感覺吧我認為

[Insane]
00:47:283 (2,3,4,5) - manually stack here. 好
01:29:923 (7,1) - make them farther. (then next 1&2 will look better too) ok
01:44:249 (1,2,3) - if you're following the pitch shouldn't be like http://puu.sh/1bhLF (also flows better) nice
01:47:114 - add a spinner here (end at 01:48:463), then you don't need this break... ok
02:13:912 (1) - ...same thing, it's a bit unrankable you know. orz改