W h i t e wrote:

Hello from my queue

Normal

00:44:586 (1,2) - : I think this overlap is not good ok....

01:28:069 (3) - : How about like 01:33:800 (3,4) - ? nice

Hard

01:13:069 (5) - : how about stuck? ...

Insane

00:53:013 (1) - : How about like this?

SPOILER

ok

00:53:856 (3) - : How abour like this?

SPOILER

sure

that's all, funny map, it's your mapping style, lol..

thank you~

good luck

12BARRY21 wrote:

是sweet 不是append ww

Philippines wrote:

Hi, here's a mod for your Miku map ~ thanks~


Normal

1. 02:00:934 (3) - The slider's end has a high potential to become a blanket of the previous circle. Why not try to make it one? ok
   
   
2. 02:49:137 (3) - This slider is too long that there are some parts that should be mapped. Please shorten this one and map the remaining spaces. im working on rhythm this part, 2 1/1 slider follow by a long one or a return slider...

Hard

1. 00:25:541 (2) - stacking this one manually looks bad. Try to stack it normally or use distance snap instead. when playing, the system itself will automatic unstack it a bit, so what i do is just deciding its direction
   
   
2. 00:28:238 (2) - same as above. Not really a good time to stack manually. like i mentioned.. even i stack it perfectly it will become unstack when playing
   
   
3. 01:30:597 - You are missing a note here. Please add one here. will find some more mods, if still a big problem on this..will change
   
   
4. 01:40:541 - What has gotten into your brain and you added a break? D: Please map this one. This note also includes the break after this one. ok
   
   
5. Oh and btw, bump up one tick on your AR.

Insane

1. 00:24:193 (3) - There is no way players can read this. Put a new combo instead. what i work on here is 1 combo with 1 direction, like pinks goes down, yellow changed direction, and red goes up
   
   
2. 00:26:890 (3) - This one too.
   
   
3. 00:29:586 (3) - This too and all the rest that look like this.
   
   
4. 00:50:822 (4) - The slider's end doesn't look good and it's poorly done. Please fix it. fixed
   
   
5. 01:34:474 (3) - Fix the spacing so players can read it properly. ok
   
   
6. 02:15:429 (1) - Hiding this from the previous note is a bad idea. Please make it more visible. at this moment i would like to do this, and also, it is so easy to read// (this is a mapping style from i-dont-remember-who but i really like it...not so popular though, because last time too many new modder popped up and mod this kind of stuff..in the end most people does not use it anymore..orz)

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Strawberry wrote:

hey~ m4m

[Normal]

00:47:788 - 感觉这里+个note打(听?)起来更顺.. 是没错但是考虑到这diff整体难度我还是放弃了
00:52:339 (1) - 听起来像是应该结束在00:54:024 - ？ 嗯
01:15:092 (3) -

SPOILER

好
02:15:260 (3) - 拿掉比较好 没错个人也认为如此。。不知道曾几何时一mod删了
02:19:811 (3) - (nazi)左一格 好..


[Hard]

00:31:609 (5) - (nazi)尾巴的锚点往下一格..这样和(4)角度一样 好
00:34:137 (3) - 这个也像其他部分一样和(2)错开一点点? 其实这里还好啦
01:15:260 (2) - 感觉应该是开始在3/4的样子(亦或是2/3)

SPOILER

行
02:08:856 - 去掉这里原先的circle再以02:09:024 (3) - 代之? 好
02:41:552 (2) - 和01:15:260一样 最后kiai打算跟鼓点比较多（其实都可以啦，但感觉后kiai比较喜欢跟鼓）
03:03:126 (2) - ^
02:52:170 (1) - 这里用3/4(亦或是2/3)repeat slider代替? 不了

SPOILER

[Insane]

00:53:519 (2) - nc在这里而不是00:53:013 (1) - ? 嗯
01:16:272 - 感觉这里+个note更爽点:3 做了一点点改变，DT挺坑爹的..
01:29:839 - add a note. 弄成个3连 因为你这段stack的都是三连，所以只有这里stack是1/2可能有点。。 好
*好喜欢这个diff 感觉有点和NTR的风格相似? 总之很好玩:3
似乎没看过NTR这样子map过(pokerface 的话跟这不太一样啊= =ll) 不过精神上是NTR的（我在说啥）

star.~

nold_1702 wrote:

..是ert的easy...

可惜沒有機會再找他做easy了

1. 00:53:013 (2) - I hope it won't cause troubles, because people can expect it to be 1/2 earlier. I'd unstuck it (and remake)
2. 01:14:418 (1,1,1) - too many NCs, remove these three
3. 02:24:530 (1) - ^
4. 02:25:541 (1,1,1) - ^
5. 02:35:317 (1) - and 02:36:328 (1,1,1) - the same as above (not mentioning this anymore)

1. 01:05:654 (1) - don't forget to add finish! (the one from soft sampleset, for example)
2. 01:11:047 (1) - move down its end with repeating arrow, so it won't be overlapped by previous slider

1. 01:13:069 (5) - stack better with 01:12:058 (3) - using zero spacing
2. 01:45:934 (5) - mind adding a spinner after it? 01:46:103 ~ 01:48:463
3. 01:59:586 (1) - add finish
4. 02:13:912 (1) - eh, okay, let it live
5. 02:26:552 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is the only overlapping pattern I like, the others before it look messy
6. 02:29:081 (1,2) - I'd swap them: note first, slider second

1. 00:23:687 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - (personal opinion) this pattern is freaking hard to read for me, we're not in "Sticks and Stones". Yeah, I know that skillful players blah blah blah, but this thing irks me a lot, mostly because I can't see right direction under hitbursts. Even after 5 or 7 tries. I recommend you to reverse 00:23:687 (1,2) - and 00:24:193 (3,4) - to improve readability
2. 00:42:985 (4,5) -they are too far apart, better use distance spacing 0.7 here and here: 00:43:322 (8,1) -
3. 01:45:934 (2) - the same as on Hard, spinner fits great
4. 01:48:800 (1) - add finish please
5. 02:09:361 ~ 02:10:036 - why don't you add a nice stream here? It exists in music, and it plays fine on Insane
6. 02:14:418 (2,3,1) - looks bad, better avoid this kind of overlap when note or slider's beginning is under another slider's body
7. 02:41:552 (2) - make it 1/4 shorter, move 1/4 forward and add a note at 02:41:552 -
8. 03:03:631 (1) - better remove repeat and add a note instead. Players would like to hit the very last note instead of just sliding over it.

TicClick wrote:

ERT's Easy

Normal

1. 01:05:654 (1) - don't forget to add finish! (the one from soft sampleset, for example) fixed
2. 01:11:047 (1) - move down its end with repeating arrow, so it won't be overlapped by previous slider fixed

These two diffs are perfect.

Hard

1. 01:13:069 (5) - stack better with 01:12:058 (3) - using zero spacing fixed
2. 01:45:934 (5) - mind adding a spinner after it? 01:46:103 ~ 01:48:463 no.. i think rest is better than spinning
3. 01:59:586 (1) - add finish fixed
4. 02:13:912 (1) - eh, okay, let it live
5. 02:26:552 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is the only overlapping pattern I like, the others before it look messy i agree with you, but this time at the start i wanted to try some new pattern and shape, the next time i map would be in better shape i promise..
6. 02:29:081 (1,2) - I'd swap them: note first, slider second fixed

Insane

1. 00:23:687 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - (personal opinion) this pattern is freaking hard to read for me, we're not in "Sticks and Stones". Yeah, I know that skillful players blah blah blah, but this thing irks me a lot, mostly because I can't see right direction under hitbursts. Even after 5 or 7 tries. I recommend you to reverse 00:23:687 (1,2) - and 00:24:193 (3,4) - to improve readability this is just the pattern i chose to map this song, i foresee players will think like wtf first PC, however if they feel fun after overcoming this patter...hm, some love it
2. 00:42:985 (4,5) -they are too far apart, better use distance spacing 0.7 here and here: 00:43:322 (8,1) - fixed
3. 01:45:934 (2) - the same as on Hard, spinner fits great no
4. 01:48:800 (1) - add finish please fixed
5. 02:09:361 ~ 02:10:036 - why don't you add a nice stream here? It exists in music, and it plays fine on Insane fixed
6. 02:14:418 (2,3,1) - looks bad, better avoid this kind of overlap when note or slider's beginning is under another slider's body i think it just suits(with default skin..?
7. 02:41:552 (2) - make it 1/4 shorter, move 1/4 forward and add a note at 02:41:552 - oh...it plays fine but i chose to stay on mine
8. 03:03:631 (1) - better remove repeat and add a note instead. Players would like to hit the very last note instead of just sliding over it. fixed

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
Artist: nana(Sevencolors) (N没有大写但S有)
以下这一串加进tags:
kano aco arisaka technobrekerz
说实话我觉得没人会用这一串的东西来搜不过鹿乃的话也说不定……
这个歌是有PV的: http://bilibili.kankanews.com/video/av98681/ 应该考虑加一下。各种人名也都拿PV里的为准就好
或许把sliderslide音消了比较好。。我还是觉得挺大声的……不过万一听起来更糟不能怪我。

fixed

[ERT's Easy]
01:00:260 (1) - http://puu.sh/1bhAl i'd prefer to use notes like this. would fit the rhythm better. fixed
01:11:047 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
01:35:991 (2,3) - switch the whistle? add a whistle
01:48:463 - add a note? no..
02:23:856 (1,1,1) - emm i could understand the new combo spam for long sliders, but for this one seems a bit too much...just use on 02:23:856 (1) & 02:25:204 (1) ?

[Normal]
00:31:440 (2) - use a circle at 00:31:272, and start the slider from 00:31:946? 很難橋啊
00:44:586 (1) - also use a curved slider would be better for me, this part seems soft. 好
01:01:609 (2) - start 1/2 later? good
01:12:395 (2) - ^ ^
01:29:586 - add a note? 不想..
01:32:283 - ^ 反而覺得不錯

[Hard]
00:52:170 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1bhGT maybe? now it feels a bit tight for me. ok
01:47:114 - add a spinner here (end at 01:48:463), then you don't need this break... fixed / \
02:13:912 (1) - make it more obvious or better just don't use such kind of sliders... used 0.5x
02:30:597 (1,2) - should use 3/4 here~? nope,這裡還是跟著鼓點下比較有感覺吧我認為

[Insane]
00:47:283 (2,3,4,5) - manually stack here. 好
01:29:923 (7,1) - make them farther. (then next 1&2 will look better too) ok
01:44:249 (1,2,3) - if you're following the pitch shouldn't be like http://puu.sh/1bhLF (also flows better) nice
01:47:114 - add a spinner here (end at 01:48:463), then you don't need this break... ok
02:13:912 (1) - ...same thing, it's a bit unrankable you know. orz改

Andrea wrote:

Awesome map, congratulations.