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nana(Sevencolors) - Chameleon

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Topic Starter
L_P
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年10月6日 at 16:47:45

Artist: nana(Sevencolors)
Title: Chameleon
Tags: ertyukjh010 vocaloid sweet kano aco arisaka technobrekerz hatsune miku
BPM: 178
Filesize: 16555kb
Play Time: 03:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chameleon (5 stars, 500 notes)
  2. ERT's Easy (2.83 stars, 170 notes)
  3. Hard (4.78 stars, 325 notes)
  4. Normal (3.65 stars, 178 notes)
Download: nana(Sevencolors) - Chameleon
Download: nana(Sevencolors) - Chameleon (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Miku Sweet~ ~ ~

yoyoyoyoyo
thx NTR
thx SG
thx everybody who supported this map~!

miku forever
Soror
Really fun map > < like this

SPOILER
Don't have any star left T T
Topic Starter
L_P
never mind, any reply is very appreciated! thank you!
ertyukjh010
明天交EZ給您 :)

[edit]

http://puu.sh/EKWP
變色龍這個主題,EZ裡我只能做到連續NC~~
希望您喜歡
有甚麼不滿意就找我改,或者退掉也可以

[吐糟]

00:23:182 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 這種建議順著一個方向比較好,不然很難讀
01:05:317 - 多餘的綠線
Topic Starter
L_P

ertyukjh010 wrote:

明天交EZ給您 :)

[edit]

http://puu.sh/EKWP
變色龍這個主題,EZ裡我只能做到連續NC~~
希望您喜歡
有甚麼不滿意就找我改,或者退掉也可以

非常满意

[吐糟]

00:23:182 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 這種建議順著一個方向比較好,不然很難讀
想尝试这pattern, 被黑没办法呵呵
01:05:317 - 多餘的綠線 fixed
非常非常感谢!!!!
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
There are no tags, consider adding some.
Tag:ertyukjh010
No preview point,set the preview time in every diff,it must be at the same time point
(Timing→最后个)


[ERT's Easy]
00:46:440 (4) - 建议分开 所以移动到x:232 y:244 这个位置最好 后面的slider再调整下
02:20:822 (5) - 可以试着和 02:22:508 (1) 的尾巴重叠
02:35:317 (1) - 建议不叠着 所以放到x:280 y:240 效果最好 后面note调整下


[Insane]
02:51:159 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:24:699 (1) - 这个应该在下面那叠里面
00:30:092 (1) - ^
00:43:406 (9) - newcombo
00:46:777 (1) - 求对称
01:16:440 (5) - 不在这里加一发note么
01:45:934 (2) - 你这样排列的话最多放这01:45:766
--------------------------------------------------
EASY diff做的很好来着
INSANE再多要些mod
Wonderful Mapset
Good Luck
Topic Starter
L_P

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
There are no tags, consider adding some.
Tag:ertyukjh010 fixed
No preview point,set the preview time in every diff,it must be at the same time point
(Timing→最后个)


[ERT's Easy]
00:46:440 (4) - 建议分开 所以移动到x:232 y:244 这个位置最好 后面的slider再调整下
02:20:822 (5) - 可以试着和 02:22:508 (1) 的尾巴重叠
02:35:317 (1) - 建议不叠着 所以放到x:280 y:240 效果最好 后面note调整下


[Insane]
02:51:159 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). fixed
00:24:699 (1) - 这个应该在下面那叠里面 这里可以问一下原因吗?我这里是想说vocal低到高音所以note走向上
00:30:092 (1) - ^
00:43:406 (9) - newcombo
00:46:777 (1) - 求对称 = = 欧克
01:16:440 (5) - 不在这里加一发note么 本来是想善用break的。。你这么说让我不乱来了
01:45:934 (2) - 你这样排列的话最多放这01:45:766 不明,求解
--------------------------------------------------
EASY diff做的很好来着
INSANE再多要些mod
Wonderful Mapset
Good Luck

感谢!


ERT:我放了tag跟preview time
ertyukjh010
10nya
yo M4M request from PM in game~
Black means suggestion

[General]
- Source: Nana(sevencolors) you can see at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qAw7qYgi6uM
- tags: append vocaloid ertyukjh010

- well I suggest to make hard diff? o v o

[ERT's Easy]
I can't found anything :)

[Insane]
- 00:42:732 : make it a train? o v o
- 01:40:373 : add note?

whatta awesome map :cry:
that's all i can find, sorry about my bad mod, rank good luck :)
Scorpiour
Hi there~~~mod for request~~

[General]
  1. 呃……这个皮肤……如果你真的要用的话,得加一个approach circle
  2. 然后因为你添加了自定义的hitcircleoverlay,所以必须在osu文件的[Colours]项目内添加SliderBorder的颜色
  3. Stack Leniency 1是不允许的……最高你只能放到0.9,我记得老板说过这个是为了防止出现bug?
  4. 另外…………如果能找到制作者的话可以把制作者名字放在source?我是不玩V家啦你知道的…………
[Insane]
  1. 00:33:968 - 感觉上这里应该有个note放在00:34:305 (4) - 附近的样子?
  2. 00:51:833 (1) - 这里则是感觉上可以删掉的?
  3. 01:05:317 (6) - 建议缩短成1/2,然后在01:05:654 - 补个note?
  4. 01:33:884 (7,8) - 这里的三连不是很舒服……感觉可以去掉(7)
  5. 02:07:676 (1,2) - 依然是节奏的建议:
  6. 02:41:552 (2,3) - 这里我更建议用note来做……或者是一个蓝线折返~
    [img]puu.sh/GxR9[/img]
  7. 03:03:631 (1) - 听着不是很舒服………………但是说不太清楚问题所在。。试试看换成spinner收尾?
真心好图~~给星支持:>
Topic Starter
L_P

- t e n n y a - wrote:

yo M4M request from PM in game~
Black means suggestion

[General]
- Source: Nana(sevencolors) you can see at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qAw7qYgi6uM
- tags: append vocaloid ertyukjh010 [/color] ok
- well I suggest to make hard diff? o v o ok

[ERT's Easy]
I can't found anything :)

[Insane]
- 00:42:732 : make it a train? o v o no...i think current is fine
- 01:40:373 : add note? nope, here i just wanna follow vocal (the slow and emo vocal XD)

whatta awesome map :cry:
that's all i can find, sorry about my bad mod, rank good luck :)

thank you for the source, I was not sure about it :D



Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~~mod for request~~

[General]
  1. 呃……这个皮肤……如果你真的要用的话,得加一个approach circle
  2. 然后因为你添加了自定义的hitcircleoverlay,所以必须在osu文件的[Colours]项目内添加SliderBorder的颜色 完全no idea怎样做,干脆删了所有hitcircle 什么的 (其实不知道为何在我的文件里面。。。忘记了)
  3. Stack Leniency 1是不允许的……最高你只能放到0.9,我记得老板说过这个是为了防止出现bug?
  4. 另外…………如果能找到制作者的话可以把制作者名字放在source?我是不玩V家啦你知道的………… 上个mod给了
[Insane]
  1. 00:33:968 - 感觉上这里应该有个note放在00:34:305 (4) - 附近的样子? 这里我想跟drum&bass 的方向(也换了hit sound) 当然这样做是挺纠结的,如果收到太多投诉的话会改成slider(像后面那样)
  2. 00:51:833 (1) - 这里则是感觉上可以删掉的? 嗯删了不错
  3. 01:05:317 (6) - 建议缩短成1/2,然后在01:05:654 - 补个note?
  4. 01:33:884 (7,8) - 这里的三连不是很舒服……感觉可以去掉(7) 可以
  5. 02:07:676 (1,2) - 依然是节奏的建议:

    其实这里跟的话比较像我的风格,也很match但不知怎的就是很喜欢这样子放
  6. 02:41:552 (2,3) - 这里我更建议用note来做……或者是一个蓝线折返~
    [img]puu.sh/GxR9[/img]
    不过放慢听似乎是下在红线那里?嗯 反正我放个inherit 静掉尾巴就可以吧
  7. 03:03:631 (1) - 听着不是很舒服………………但是说不太清楚问题所在。。试试看换成spinner收尾? 不喜spinner,依然静音解决。。。
真心好图~~给星支持:>

感恩
Wreath
from h-728 and Wreath' queue

hi, L_P and ERT :oops:

[Insane]
  1. 00:31:272 (3,4,5,6,1) - i think this placement is not so good. i hope you try another placement
  2. 01:12:564 (1,2) - i think this sliders are same shape is better 01:11:047 (1,1,1)
  3. 02:06:159 (1) - i think this placement is not so good. i hope you try another placement
  4. 02:07:676 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  5. 02:24:867 (4) - i think this sliders are same shape is better 02:23:856 (1,2,3)
[ERT's Easy]
  1. rename "ERT's Normal"
    i think difficulty name "Normal/Hard/Insane" is better than "Easy/Hard/Insane"
  2. 00:28:912 (2,3) - move to down a little
  3. 00:56:215 (1) - remove NC, i think this NC is unnecessary
  4. 00:58:912 (1) - ^
  5. 01:07:002 (1) - ^
  6. 01:09:699 (1) - ^
  7. 01:14:418 (1) - ^
  8. 01:16:103 (1,1) - ^
  9. 02:22:508 (1) - ^
  10. 02:24:530 (1) - ^
  11. 02:25:541 (1,1,1) - ^
  12. 02:33:294 (1) - ^
  13. 02:35:317 (1) - ^
  14. 02:36:328 (1,1,1) - ^
  15. 02:44:081 (1) - ^
  16. 02:46:777 (1,1) - ^
  17. 02:54:530 (1,1) - ^
  18. 02:57:227 (1,1) - ^
  19. 03:02:283 (1,1) - ^
  20. 03:04:305 (1) -
good map ^ㅅ^
good luck :oops:
ertyukjh010
No change for me :)
Topic Starter
L_P

Wreath wrote:

from h-728 and Wreath' queue

hi, L_P and ERT :oops:

[Insane]
  1. 00:31:272 (3,4,5,6,1) - i think this placement is not so good. i hope youI hope you try another placement deleted a note
  2. 01:12:564 (1,2) - i think this sliders are same shape is better 01:11:047 (1,1,1) adjust some
  3. 02:06:159 (1) - i think this placement is not so good. i hope youI hope you try another placement made ctrl + R
  4. 02:07:676 (1,2,3,4) - ^ no change..
  5. 02:24:867 (4) - i think this sliders are same shape is better 02:23:856 (1,2,3) no change

good map ^ㅅ^
good luck :oops:

thanks~
Axey
:)


ERT's Easy

01:14:418(1)-取消NC
01:16:103(1)-^ 为什么这段颜色那么丰富-.-
看到后面还有几段颜色很丰富的part..我觉得不是很有必要-.-

Hard

01:15:092(1,2)-我觉得时间轴上位置对调下比较好..
01:27:901(2)-还是加个note比较舒服
01:30:597(2)-^
01:33:294(2)-打到这里我已经习惯了-.-随意加不加吧.
02:30:597(1,2)-时间轴上位置对换下
02:52:676(1,2)-也是换下位置 (还有类似的地方不说了..想改就改吧lol


Insane

打起来很舒服 没什么问题

03:02:283(1,2,3,4)-打起来没什么问题..就是觉得排版不太好看..能换下吗=_=
Leorda
Hi there


[General]
* You need an hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png and reversearrow.png for completing set of hitcircle (since approachcircle.png is on this folder)


[ERT's Easy]
* AR +1?

01:14:418 (1,1,1,1) - These combo seems useless for me, remove them?
02:24:530 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
02:35:317 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
02:47:451 (1) - ^
02:53:519 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^


[Hard]
* AR +1?

00:59:418 (4) - Spacing error


Good luck.....
ertyukjh010

Leorda wrote:

[ERT's Easy]01:14:418 (1,1,1,1) - These combo seems useless for me, remove them?
02:24:530 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
02:35:317 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
02:47:451 (1) - ^
02:53:519 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
Just make them like a Chameleon
I want to keep if it's rankable
yeahyeahyeahhh
General:
You need a normal to make this mapset complete I think. Too big a gap between Hard and Easy.

Insane:
00:23:687 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This has extreme readability issue. The main problem with it is the skin. The skin covers up the notes and the approach circling making it REALLY hard to see. I'd use a diff skin if you want to us this pattern, but I would high suggest a different pattern.
00:26:384 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
00:29:081 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
00:31:777 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This is a bit better.
00:36:665 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Getting back to readability issues.
01:34:305 - Add a note?
02:00:260 (5) - Remove clap on beginning?
02:14:923 (3,1) - Put the beginning on the ends of previous sliders? Looks better

Hard:
00:33:463 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is really weird. Doesn't follow the song very well. I suggest changing it to something like this:

00:36:159 (1,2,3) - ^
00:38:856 (1,2,3) - ^
01:00:260 (1,2,3,4) - Wayyyyyyyy to much overlap. Looks clumpy/messy/etc. Come up with a new pattern (look http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/374225)
01:11:047 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:40:710 - Map this break? seems completely random.

Easy:
AR+1?
ertyukjh010
To: L_P

幫我Ar+1 :P
Topic Starter
L_P

BakaHuang wrote:

:)


Hard

01:15:092(1,2)-我觉得时间轴上位置对调下比较好.. 这里跟bass走haa
01:27:901(2)-还是加个note比较舒服
01:30:597(2)-^
01:33:294(2)-打到这里我已经习惯了-.-随意加不加吧.
02:30:597(1,2)-时间轴上位置对换下
02:52:676(1,2)-也是换下位置 (还有类似的地方不说了..想改就改吧lol

no change

Insane

打起来很舒服 没什么问题

03:02:283(1,2,3,4)-打起来没什么问题..就是觉得排版不太好看..能换下吗=_= 用了slider

Leorda wrote:

Hi there


[General]
* You need an hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png and reversearrow.png for completing set of hitcircle (since approachcircle.png is on this folder) i removed the approach circle orz


yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

General:
You need a normal to make this mapset complete I think. Too big a gap between Hard and Easy.

Insane:
00:23:687 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This has extreme readability issue. The main problem with it is the skin. The skin covers up the notes and the approach circling making it REALLY hard to see. I'd use a diff skin if you want to us this pattern, but I would high suggest a different pattern.
00:26:384 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
00:29:081 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^ will make the skin transparent
00:31:777 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This is a bit better.
00:36:665 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Getting back to readability issues.
01:34:305 - Add a note? ok
02:00:260 (5) - Remove clap on beginning? ok
02:14:923 (3,1) - Put the beginning on the ends of previous sliders? Looks better for now i think the placement suits the vocal

Hard:
00:33:463 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is really weird. Doesn't follow the song very well. I suggest changing it to something like this:

00:36:159 (1,2,3) - ^
00:38:856 (1,2,3) - ^ ok ↑
01:00:260 (1,2,3,4) - Wayyyyyyyy to much overlap. Looks clumpy/messy/etc. Come up with a new pattern (look http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/374225) would like to try it, no change for now
01:11:047 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:40:710 - Map this break? seems completely random. no..

Easy:
AR+1?
Loneight
M4M~:3


  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[general]

  1. osb.似乎在呢?~ (被打

[ERT's Easy]

  1. 01:31:272 (3) - 不知道為甚麼咱感覺在x:112 y:212 好像比較順 ?! (被打
  2. 01:55:541 (3) - 不知道怎麼說明得奇怪感覺 應該是形狀?!
  3. 太perfect了! OTZ

[Normal]

  1. 00:28:238 (2) - 咱想吐潮這overlap (被打
  2. 00:45:429 (2) - ^
  3. 01:09:699 (3) - 似乎有點碰到了01:11:047 (1) - 應該沒問題 但還是提出了 OTZ
  4. 01:13:743 (3) - NC?~

[Hard]

  1. 00:33:968 (2) - overlap!?
  2. 01:00:260 (1,2,3,4) - 這邊會坑死一堆人!! 看要不要(2) (3) (4) 都NC?!
  3. 01:11:047 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  4. 02:08:350 (2) - 改成來回1次的slider+1個circle? 因為咱總覺得這邊會讓一堆人斷combo

[Insane]

  1. 00:24:193 (3) - NC 感覺這樣比較不會confuse?
  2. 00:26:890 (3) - ^
  3. 00:29:586 (3) - ^
  4. 00:32:283 (3) - ^
  5. 00:37:676 (3) - ^
  6. 00:43:069 (5) - ^
  7. 00:52:170 (2,3) - 總覺得這邊...不太好?!
  8. 01:55:878 (3) - NC 理由跟上面一串的^一樣XDD
  9. 01:59:081 (3) - ^ 這個的話 咱只是為了對稱所以才打上來的
  10. 02:19:137 (1) - 這個!!第2次迴轉會被02:18:800 (1) - 的分數擋到一些
good song & good map & good luck~ star
梗用的真好!!!
sorry for 咱的渣mod
總覺得在hard理看到阿三醬的影子
Topic Starter
L_P

l1106188 wrote:

M4M~:3


  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[general]

  1. osb.似乎在呢?~ (被打

[ERT's Easy]

  1. 01:31:272 (3) - 不知道為甚麼咱感覺在x:112 y:212 好像比較順 ?! (被打
  2. 01:55:541 (3) - 不知道怎麼說明得奇怪感覺 應該是形狀?!
  3. 太perfect了! OTZ

[Normal]

  1. 00:28:238 (2) - 咱想吐潮這overlap (被打 daijoubu
  2. 00:45:429 (2) - ^ ^
  3. 01:09:699 (3) - 似乎有點碰到了01:11:047 (1) - 應該沒問題 但還是提出了 OTZ ^
  4. 01:13:743 (3) - NC?~


[Hard]

  1. 00:33:968 (2) - overlap!? no change
  2. 01:00:260 (1,2,3,4) - 這邊會坑死一堆人!! 看要不要(2) (3) (4) 都NC?! 换形状了orz
  3. 01:11:047 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  4. 02:08:350 (2) - 改成來回1次的slider+1個circle? 因為咱總覺得這邊會讓一堆人斷combo

[Insane]

  1. 00:24:193 (3) - NC 感覺這樣比較不會confuse? 这里跟音调,00:23:687 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个是一起的,所以不变。。话说NC太多反而更容易误导?
  2. 00:26:890 (3) - ^
  3. 00:29:586 (3) - ^
  4. 00:32:283 (3) - ^
  5. 00:37:676 (3) - ^
  6. 00:43:069 (5) - ^
  7. 00:52:170 (2,3) - 總覺得這邊...不太好?! 做了改变。。
  8. 01:55:878 (3) - NC 理由跟上面一串的^一樣XDD
  9. 01:59:081 (3) - ^ 這個的話 咱只是為了對稱所以才打上來的
  10. 02:19:137 (1) - 這個!!第2次迴轉會被02:18:800 (1) - 的分數擋到一些 嗯的确
good song & good map & good luck~ star
梗用的真好!!!
sorry for 咱的渣mod
總覺得在hard理看到阿三醬的影子
上次忘了easy AR+1这次补回去
skin 换了
Neptunus
差点用了英文,差点忘了你说中文~~一看这skin我就知道肯定没啥问题,但是还是努力mod吧~
General: 皮肤太棒了,完全不用担心hitburst遮挡啥的

ERT‘s easy:
00:53:013 (2) - 这个可以有?
01:01:777 (2) - 为啥不在这里开始01:01:609 -


01:12:564 (2) - 同样的。噢!我知道为啥了,你是觉得前面还有个vocal音吧。木有关系啊,slider起点好找,但是一旦脱离了最强音的vocal就不好找了
02:28:069 (2) - 还有这个也是
02:38:856 (2) -^^
另外这个diff里面高潮部分由slider交错的情况,不知道在easy里面是否可以,咨询下吧

Normal:
01:46:103 - 加个note再加上finish,试一下~

02:00:260 (2) - 这里换成这样如何

02:02:957 - 还有这里
02:05:654 - same here

Hard:
01:00:260 (1,2,3,4,5) - 绝了!
01:28:069 (2) - 这个尝试一下从这里开始 01:27:901 -
01:30:766 (2) - 这个也是
01:31:609 - 这里为啥子木有note了?

Insane:
这个diff太棒了
00:42:732 (1,2,3,4) - 和00:43:069 (5,6,7,8) - 再离得近一点吧
00:51:328 (1,2) - 建议space out一些
木啦~

坐等这图rank~加油!
Topic Starter
L_P

Neptunus wrote:

差点用了英文,差点忘了你说中文~~一看这skin我就知道肯定没啥问题,但是还是努力mod吧~
General: 皮肤太棒了,完全不用担心hitburst遮挡啥的 还不错吧~


Normal:
01:46:103 - 加个note再加上finish,试一下~ 拉长slider了,用了finish效果不错

02:00:260 (2) - 这里换成这样如何 这里有写偏执...
^
02:02:957 - 还有这里 ^
02:05:654 - same here ^

Hard:
01:00:260 (1,2,3,4,5) - 绝了! 不好吗。。玩过DT似乎没啥感觉..?
01:28:069 (2) - 这个尝试一下从这里开始 01:27:901 - 之前节奏太猎奇已更改
01:30:766 (2) - 这个也是 这里反而还好吧
01:31:609 - 这里为啥子木有note了? 暂不放

Insane:
这个diff太棒了
00:42:732 (1,2,3,4) - 和00:43:069 (5,6,7,8) - 再离得近一点吧
00:51:328 (1,2) - 建议space out一些
木啦~

坐等这图rank~加油!
谢谢!
riffy
yo~! as requested via queue~

[General]
mizu? no. Miku! :3

[Easy]
00:29:923 (3) - put whistle or clap at te end of slider :3
00:30:597 (1) - clap
00:53:013 (2) - oh.. this slider can confuse some beginners.
01:13:743 (1,1,1,1,1) - yo have reasons to multiply combo here. but beginners probably will be a bit confused!SO MANY NEW COMBOS! D: OMG WHAT TO DO
02:09:699 (5,1) - NC swwap to avoid +6 on circle and also to make it a bit better to follow vocals.
02:31:946 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - i'll eat you ~_~
02:42:732 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - oh.. at least remove them for short sliders, please! i beg you do not spam new combo for EASIEST diff

[Normal]
00:26:552 (3,2) - nazi: overlap.
00:44:586 (1,2) - ^
00:52:339 (1) - clap?
01:48:123 - spinner here. this mini break kinda trolled me while testing. oh break. i can relax. in next 5 seconds i failed D:

[Hard]
00:33:968 (2) - nazi: x384 y240. oh.. i just hate this overlap. so.. here's way how to fix it
00:35:654 (7) - place hitsound at the end. any hitsound you like. i prefer finish. sounds much better
01:39:024 - 1/2 slider here
02:06:833 (5) - nazi: 1 grid up to put end of (5) right in the center of (4) http://puu.sh/LPV4
02:23:687 - circle here for vocals

[Insane]
00:47:283 (2) - make 1/2 slider instead. it sounds better and also will make your flow a bit easier to read

~~~~~~~~~~~

cute map. really cute.
Topic Starter
L_P

-Bakari- wrote:

yo~! as requested via queue~

[General]
mizu? no. Miku! :3
YO

[Normal]
00:26:552 (3,2) - nazi: overlap. kinda fixed
00:44:586 (1,2) - ^ lazy to fix
00:52:339 (1) - clap? no
01:48:123 - spinner here. this mini break kinda trolled me while testing. oh break. i can relax. in next 5 seconds i failed D: hahaha ok

[Hard]
00:33:968 (2) - nazi: x384 y240. oh.. i just hate this overlap. so.. here's way how to fix it changed the way it looks
00:35:654 (7) - place hitsound at the end. any hitsound you like. i prefer finish. sounds much better ok
01:39:024 - 1/2 slider here
02:06:833 (5) - nazi: 1 grid up to put end of (5) right in the center of (4) http://puu.sh/LPV4 fixed
02:23:687 - circle here for vocals changed to slider

[Insane]
00:47:283 (2) - make 1/2 slider instead. it sounds better and also will make your flow a bit easier to read ok....

~~~~~~~~~~~

cute map. really cute.

L_P wrote:

I make cute maps
thanks for the help~
Frostmourne
Hi , from my mod queue 8-)

yeah , NTR is my favorite mapper. you and DarknessAngel have gotten the correct answer. so feel free to send your other map once again to get my mod.

ERT's Easy
increase HP +1 since you use too many new combo
01:12:395 (2) - I don't want to nazi but , you should add not here. I think it sounds very obviously :> , starting at red line won't be nice I think
also I think it doesn't make it harder even you added note here.
01:34:642 (3) - whistle at the tail of this slider :O????
01:36:665 (4) - in contrast, this whistle at the tail doesn't sound good :(, remove it might be better I think
02:00:260 (2) - where is clap at the tail ?
02:27:901 (2) - same,, add note hereeeeee . doesn't make it harder also ;_;!!
too many new combo ,so colorful. I like it! because it's kawaii :)

Normal
pretty fast ;o , AR-1 ?
00:41:384 (1) - might be clap at the end of this slider 8-)
01:02:957 (3) - I feel like this should be added new combo. vocal doesn't sound same previous , like if I added note at 01:02:788 , I will absolutely add new combo at 01:02:957 it.
oh , just found ;D, 01:13:743 (1) - you add new combo here ^ so , make it consistent ! huehue :>
01:27:227 (1,2,3) - I think it doesn't follow the music. I think my rhythm is not too bad or something like that >_>
shorten this slider 1 beat 01:27:901 (3) - and move forward 1/2 beat then create slider end at 01:27:901 instead of single note
It's not harder /o/
hope you enjoy it \:D/
02:19:811 (3) - nazi \o.o/ , move left 1 grid. this is not completely stacked
02:31:946 (1) - finish at the start !_!
02:42:732 (1) - ^ , it's not too loud ! you should d d d d d
I see what you did there :D.. but okay, it's fit with the music 8-)

Hard
00:52:845 (3) - remove 1 repeat , I hate 2 repeat slider because it's not intuitive o..o! and this is short slider. it's hard to notice that it has more than 1 repeat.
my suggestion it to remove 1 repeat and add note at 00:53:350 (4) - to create a little lovely jump ww
01:02:957 (2,3) - ...I think it's ok -_-'' just saying' :D
hmm, middle part , I feel it's a bit empty. so strange ;_;
02:25:373 (1) - nazi \O_O/ , move to x:172 y:82 because it's overlapped a bit with 02:24:867 (4) - but not overlap next note so. it's not balance. just that ;o

Insane
unconventional insane diff. I honestly like it :D.
01:45:597 (1,2) - people hit something like 01:45:092 (1,2) - < 1/2 beat many times and will recognize as this rhythm but.. when they face something weird like this ! they will get missed by hitting (2) too fast (they may assume it as 1/2 beat like before also I missed at this first and it's very strange distance obviously)
My suggestion is to move (1) or (2) more far from each other. so people won't get confused from this.
more far in my opinion is something like this (huge distance will be the best)

star for your renovation of your beatmap \:D/

Good luck for ranking ~
Topic Starter
L_P

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi , from my mod queue 8-)

yeah , NTR is my favorite mapper. you and DarknessAngel have gotten the correct answer. so feel free to send your other map once again to get my mod.
THANKS


Normal
pretty fast ;o , AR-1 ? too much complains on this... changed as all body suggested this T.T
00:41:384 (1) - might be clap at the end of this slider 8-) fixed
01:02:957 (3) - I feel like this should be added new combo. vocal doesn't sound same previous , like if I added note at 01:02:788 , I will absolutely add new combo at 01:02:957 it. fixed
oh , just found ;D, 01:13:743 (1) - you add new combo here ^ so , make it consistent ! huehue :>
01:27:227 (1,2,3) - I think it doesn't follow the music. I think my rhythm is not too bad or something like that >_> nice suggestion
shorten this slider 1 beat 01:27:901 (3) - and move forward 1/2 beat then create slider end at 01:27:901 instead of single note
It's not harder /o/
hope you enjoy it \:D/
02:19:811 (3) - nazi \o.o/ , move left 1 grid. this is not completely stacked orz
02:31:946 (1) - finish at the start !_! k
02:42:732 (1) - ^ , it's not too loud ! you should d d d d d k
I see what you did there :D.. but okay, it's fit with the music 8-)

Hard
00:52:845 (3) - remove 1 repeat , I hate 2 repeat slider because it's not intuitive o..o! and this is short slider. it's hard to notice that it has more than 1 repeat.
my suggestion it to remove 1 repeat and add note at 00:53:350 (4) - to create a little lovely jump ww not the way you suggested however changed something
01:02:957 (2,3) - ...I think it's ok -_-'' just saying' :D
hmm, middle part , I feel it's a bit empty. so strange ;_; here..ok, but no change on last kiai...
02:25:373 (1) - nazi \O_O/ , move to x:172 y:82 because it's overlapped a bit with 02:24:867 (4) - but not overlap next note so. it's not balance. just that ;o orz

Insane
unconventional insane diff. I honestly like it :D.
01:45:597 (1,2) - people hit something like 01:45:092 (1,2) - < 1/2 beat many times and will recognize as this rhythm but.. when they face something weird like this ! they will get missed by hitting (2) too fast (they may assume it as 1/2 beat like before also I missed at this first and it's very strange distance obviously)
My suggestion is to move (1) or (2) more far from each other. so people won't get confused from this.

kinda changed into something,...

more far in my opinion is something like this (huge distance will be the best)

star for your renovation of your beatmap \:D/

Good luck for ranking ~ rank gogogo

thanks for the help and the star was pretty much appreciated~
Beige
Hello from my queue

Normal


00:44:586 (1,2) - : I think this overlap is not good

01:28:069 (3) - : How about like 01:33:800 (3,4) - ?

Hard


01:13:069 (5) - : how about stuck?

Insane


00:53:013 (1) - : How about like this?
00:53:856 (3) - : How abour like this?

that's all, funny map, it's your mapping style, lol..

thank you~

good luck :D
Topic Starter
L_P

W h i t e wrote:

Hello from my queue

Normal


00:44:586 (1,2) - : I think this overlap is not good ok....

01:28:069 (3) - : How about like 01:33:800 (3,4) - ? nice

Hard


01:13:069 (5) - : how about stuck? ...

Insane


00:53:013 (1) - : How about like this? ok

00:53:856 (3) - : How abour like this?
sure

that's all, funny map, it's your mapping style, lol..

thank you~

good luck :D


thank you for the help!
Dino99
是sweet 不是append ww
Topic Starter
L_P

12BARRY21 wrote:

是sweet 不是append ww
下一次submit时 一次过改了
Cygnus
Hi, here's a mod for your Miku map ~

General
  1. Your background needs a bit of a fix. It seems like you missed the part behind Miku. The color is still there.
Easy
  1. 00:27:901 (1,2) - Using kick sliders here are not good imo. Try 1/1 normal sliders instead.

  2. 00:54:867 (1,1,1,1) - This is a new combo abuse. I highly suggest you use (1,2,1,2).

  3. 01:05:654 (1,1,1,1) - The same as what I stated above.

  4. 01:13:743 (1,1,1,1,1) - And again..

  5. 01:45:934 (5) - This curve is poorly done. Please fix it.

  6. 01:55:541 (3) - This is not poorly done, but can still be improved. I highly suggest you make the curve in the center rather than in both ends of the line.

  7. And the rest new combo abuse.. Please follow my suggestion on those parts.
Normal
  1. 02:00:934 (3) - The slider's end has a high potential to become a blanket of the previous circle. Why not try to make it one?

  2. 02:49:137 (3) - This slider is too long that there are some parts that should be mapped. Please shorten this one and map the remaining spaces.
Hard
  1. 00:25:541 (2) - stacking this one manually looks bad. Try to stack it normally or use distance snap instead.

  2. 00:28:238 (2) - same as above. Not really a good time to stack manually.

  3. 01:30:597 - You are missing a note here. Please add one here.

  4. 01:40:541 - What has gotten into your brain and you added a break? D: Please map this one. This note also includes the break after this one.

  5. Oh and btw, bump up one tick on your AR.
Insane
  1. 00:24:193 (3) - There is no way players can read this. Put a new combo instead.

  2. 00:26:890 (3) - This one too.

  3. 00:29:586 (3) - This too and all the rest that look like this.

  4. 00:50:822 (4) - The slider's end doesn't look good and it's poorly done. Please fix it.

  5. 01:34:474 (3) - Fix the spacing so players can read it properly.

  6. 02:15:429 (1) - Hiding this from the previous note is a bad idea. Please make it more visible.
Topic Starter
L_P

Philippines wrote:

Hi, here's a mod for your Miku map ~ thanks~


Normal
  1. 02:00:934 (3) - The slider's end has a high potential to become a blanket of the previous circle. Why not try to make it one? ok

  2. 02:49:137 (3) - This slider is too long that there are some parts that should be mapped. Please shorten this one and map the remaining spaces. im working on rhythm this part, 2 1/1 slider follow by a long one or a return slider...
Hard
  1. 00:25:541 (2) - stacking this one manually looks bad. Try to stack it normally or use distance snap instead. when playing, the system itself will automatic unstack it a bit, so what i do is just deciding its direction

  2. 00:28:238 (2) - same as above. Not really a good time to stack manually. like i mentioned.. even i stack it perfectly it will become unstack when playing

  3. 01:30:597 - You are missing a note here. Please add one here. will find some more mods, if still a big problem on this..will change

  4. 01:40:541 - What has gotten into your brain and you added a break? D: Please map this one. This note also includes the break after this one. ok

  5. Oh and btw, bump up one tick on your AR.
Insane
  1. 00:24:193 (3) - There is no way players can read this. Put a new combo instead. what i work on here is 1 combo with 1 direction, like pinks goes down, yellow changed direction, and red goes up

  2. 00:26:890 (3) - This one too.

  3. 00:29:586 (3) - This too and all the rest that look like this.

  4. 00:50:822 (4) - The slider's end doesn't look good and it's poorly done. Please fix it. fixed

  5. 01:34:474 (3) - Fix the spacing so players can read it properly. ok

  6. 02:15:429 (1) - Hiding this from the previous note is a bad idea. Please make it more visible. at this moment i would like to do this, and also, it is so easy to read// (this is a mapping style from i-dont-remember-who but i really like it...not so popular though, because last time too many new modder popped up and mod this kind of stuff..in the end most people does not use it anymore..orz)
[/notice]
Strawberry
hey~ m4m

[Normal]

00:47:788 - 感觉这里+个note打(听?)起来更顺..
00:52:339 (1) - 听起来像是应该结束在00:54:024 - ?
01:15:092 (3) - 02:15:260 (3) - 拿掉比较好
02:19:811 (3) - (nazi)左一格


[Hard]

00:31:609 (5) - (nazi)尾巴的锚点往下一格..这样和(4)角度一样
00:34:137 (3) - 这个也像其他部分一样和(2)错开一点点?
01:15:260 (2) - 感觉应该是开始在3/4的样子(亦或是2/3) 02:08:856 - 去掉这里原先的circle再以02:09:024 (3) - 代之?
02:41:552 (2) - 和01:15:260一样
03:03:126 (2) - ^
02:52:170 (1) - 这里用3/4(亦或是2/3)repeat slider代替?

[Insane]

00:53:519 (2) - nc在这里而不是00:53:013 (1) - ?
01:16:272 - 感觉这里+个note更爽点:3
01:29:839 - add a note. 弄成个3连 因为你这段stack的都是三连,所以只有这里stack是1/2可能有点。。
*好喜欢这个diff 感觉有点和NTR的风格相似? 总之很好玩:3

star.~ :)
Topic Starter
L_P

Strawberry wrote:

hey~ m4m

[Normal]

00:47:788 - 感觉这里+个note打(听?)起来更顺.. 是没错但是考虑到这diff整体难度我还是放弃了
00:52:339 (1) - 听起来像是应该结束在00:54:024 - ?
01:15:092 (3) -
02:15:260 (3) - 拿掉比较好 没错个人也认为如此。。不知道曾几何时一mod删了
02:19:811 (3) - (nazi)左一格 好..


[Hard]

00:31:609 (5) - (nazi)尾巴的锚点往下一格..这样和(4)角度一样
00:34:137 (3) - 这个也像其他部分一样和(2)错开一点点? 其实这里还好啦
01:15:260 (2) - 感觉应该是开始在3/4的样子(亦或是2/3)
02:08:856 - 去掉这里原先的circle再以02:09:024 (3) - 代之?
02:41:552 (2) - 和01:15:260一样 最后kiai打算跟鼓点比较多(其实都可以啦,但感觉后kiai比较喜欢跟鼓)
03:03:126 (2) - ^
02:52:170 (1) - 这里用3/4(亦或是2/3)repeat slider代替? 不了

[Insane]

00:53:519 (2) - nc在这里而不是00:53:013 (1) - ?
01:16:272 - 感觉这里+个note更爽点:3 做了一点点改变,DT挺坑爹的..
01:29:839 - add a note. 弄成个3连 因为你这段stack的都是三连,所以只有这里stack是1/2可能有点。。
*好喜欢这个diff 感觉有点和NTR的风格相似? 总之很好玩:3
似乎没看过NTR这样子map过(pokerface 的话跟这不太一样啊= =ll) 不过精神上是NTR的(我在说啥)

star.~ :)
很奇怪每次看到KD少的都很会mod,开始惭愧+内疚了。。。
Ulysses
..是ert的easy...

可惜沒有機會再找他做easy了
Topic Starter
L_P

nold_1702 wrote:

..是ert的easy...

可惜沒有機會再找他做easy了
淡淡的忧伤
永在怀念中
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