- t e n n y a - wrote:

M4M from my queue

[General]

1. I think remove short ver on the tags and add it to the title?

[Easy]
Slider shape, circle placement

1. 00:10:444: how about move this to x324 y232
2. 00:53:360: how about move this to x292 y220
3. 01:07:527: move this to x212 y124 because its too close from hit 2 on 01:05:860

[Hard]
Rhythms

1. 00:25:444: remove nc?
2. 01:14:819: ^
3. 01:16:277: ^

[Insane]

its on wip right? I can't see any beat from 00:07:110 to 01:57:110 or my download have a problem D":
tell me if the Insane is fixed T w T

Thats all I can find, rank goodluck /o/

168,104,444,2,0,B|128:152|128:232|176:296,1,200,2|0
256,248,1694,1,8
340,290,2110,2,0,B|384:232|384:152|344:104,1,200,2|0
256,136,3360,1,8

344,72,61277,6,0,B|416:104|416:208|328:248,1,200,0|0
312,152,62527,2,0,B|88:152,2,200

184,88,75444,6,0,B|136:56|80:92,1,100,0|8
136,164,76277,1,0

Chewin wrote:

Hi Konei, mod request from my modding queue.

[General]
Clear.

[Easy]
00:00:444 (1,2,3,4) - Since you can't create a blanket between 00:00:444 (1,2,3) for the distance snapping you chould make something like this, that flows much better in my opinion. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386369

168,104,444,2,0,B|128:152|128:232|176:296,1,200,2|0
256,248,1694,1,8
340,290,2110,2,0,B|384:232|384:152|344:104,1,200,2|0
256,136,3360,1,8

00:03:777 (1,2) - If you followed my suggestion above don't forget to use distance snap on these elements >w<
00:42:527 (2) - Move the 3rd waypoint 1 grid up to improve the blanket
01:01:277 (1,2) - Ugly blanket, fix it in this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386375

344,72,61277,6,0,B|416:104|416:208|328:248,1,200,0|0
312,152,62527,2,0,B|88:152,2,200

01:13:777 (1,2) - You could to create a blanket here for consistency with 01:15:444 (1,2) : http://puu.sh/MOeQ
01:15:444 (1,2) - Improve this blanket. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386379

184,88,75444,6,0,B|136:56|80:92,1,100,0|8
136,164,76277,1,0

[Hard]
00:37:944 (1) - Remove 1 repeat?
01:36:277 (4,5) - Place them using the same spacing than 01:35:860 (3,4)
I can just see a 1/2 rhythm here. You really could improve the map's flowing

[Insane]
00:04:298 Listening the music you should add a circle here making a triple (maybe overlapped) with 00:04:402 (3) too
00:20:860 (2) - Unsnapped slider's end.
01:00:444 (4,1) - Exchange NCs here
01:28:360 (7) - New combo?
01:33:777 (5) - ^
01:37:319 (7) - ^
01:46:694 (9) - New combo to avoid this long combo.
01:57:944 (9) - ^

That's all, your maps need more work in my opinion >w<
Good luck with it!

nanda2009 wrote:

can I make a Taiko Oni diff for this o.o ??


Aobaaaaaaa~

Kiiwa wrote:

BL

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1. Drama BG 4.png has black bars on the top and the bottom of the image. This really looks bad imo, especially since these are not present in the other BGs. Might as well crop them out or something (and while you're at it, save as .jpg so you save some space, hah. )
2. If you want me to help you fix that BG, poke me in-game.

1. HP +1?
2. 00:13:777 (1,2) - The looks ;_; Blanket?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:32:110 (1) - Clap on repeat? (I know you're following claps on 2nd and 4th beat, but breaking it like this isn't always bad either~)
4. 00:42:527 (2) - Well, blanket? They make stuff look neater imo.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:57:944 (2) - Well, center it between (1)? It would break distance snap, so I don't know how well other people will like it, but personally I think it's not that much of a change that beginners will become confused. Up to you.
6. 00:58:777 (1) - Clap on end?
7. 01:01:277 (1) - Blanketting again.
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:02:527 (2) - Try adding a clap-sound (not your current normal-hitclap.wav) on sliderstart, repeat and end, and continue on every 2nd and 4th beat until 01:09:194.
9. 01:14:610 (2) - Clap?
10. 01:15:444 (1) - Whistle on sliderstart.
11. 01:17:110 (1) - Clap on end.
12. 01:18:777 (2) - Whistle on sliderstart.
    (And continue like this until 01:27:110)
13. 01:18:777 (2) - Another repeat might be a bit hard to read. You can remove 1 repeat and then re-arrange it to something like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:27:944 (2) - Finish on start and repeat?
15. 01:47:110 (1) - While this is indeed a copy of 01:45:444 (1), I think it looks really meh right now. Try making both these sliders smoother?
16. 01:50:027 (2,1,2,1,2) - I would ctrl+j this. If you take a look, you're using the upper part of the screen a lot more in the chorus than you use the lower half. If you flip this, it evens out more, as well as removing the problem where 01:53:360 (2) would be underneath the player's score.
17. 01:55:444 (1,2) - If you did the above, remember to rearrange this.
18. 01:55:444 (1) - Finish?
19. 01:56:694 (1) - Begin this spinner at 01:56:902 or 01:57:110.

1. Generally speaking, the hitsounds in this difficulty feels a bit random to me.
2. 00:00:444 - 00:05:027 - Imo, adding claps only on the 2nd and 4th beat is fine here.
3. 00:05:444 - Add an inherited section here for regular soft hitsounds, and add whistles at 00:05:444 (1,2) - sliderstarts.
4. 00:06:277 (2) - Remove the whistle from the slidertrack.
5. 00:08:360 (3,4) - I am not a fan of these, because you end up hitting the slider on a red tick, and imo just swapping the order make it feel much better. Imho, you should change every instance of Note->Short-Slider to Short-Slider->Note in this difficulty: 00:10:027 (3,4) | 00:11:694 (3,4) etc.
6. 00:11:277 (2) - Move this to x:352 y:344? Just looks kinda neater to me.
7. 00:34:194 (1,2,3) - These could be a bit hard to read for beginners, as it could very well look like the order of the notes is (1,3,2). Consider changing the pattern.
8. 00:35:860 (5) - This slider ;_; Move the middle anchorpoint to x:152 y:152. Also add clap on sliderstart, remove from -end.
9. 00:37:110 (1,2) - Put the claps on 2nd and 4th tick instead.
10. 00:40:860 (4) - Claps on start and end.
11. 00:42:110 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:34:194 (1,2,3). Also, put the claps on 2nd and 4th instead.
12. 00:45:860 (5) - Claps on start and end.
13. 00:51:485 (4) - Clap on end?
14. 00:52:527 (1) - Ugly overlap with 00:54:194 (1). Vertical flip it by ctrl+j, and position it back.
15. 00:57:944 (1) - End the spinner at 00:59:610.
16. 01:00:860 - 01:09:194 - This section's hitsounds are messy. Try keeping the claps on the 2nd and 4th beat (following the claps in the song).
17. 01:02:527 (2,3,1) - Move this 2 gridlvl3 to the left (remember to fix the distance to later patterns too).
18. 01:02:944 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
19. 01:07:110 (3) - New combo.
20. 01:10:444 (1) - Finish
21. 01:10:444 (1,2,3) - Same as earlier.
22. 01:11:277 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
23. 01:12:110 (2) - Finish on start?
24. 01:14:819 (4) - Add a clap on end, and remove clap from 01:15:444 (5) start.
25. 01:18:360 (5,6) - ^
26. 01:21:485 (4,5) - ^ Also move these 1 gridlvl3 up and 1 to the left.
27. 01:25:027 (5,6) - ^
28. 01:25:444 (6) - This is one weird slider Can you change the shape somehow? It doesn't look good atm imho.
29. 01:27:527 (2,4) - Claps?
30. 01:29:194 (1) - Clap on stat.
31. 01:30:444 (1) - Finish.
32. 01:32:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - Claps should be on 2nd and 4th beat.
33. 01:44:610 (1) - Finish on end.
34. 01:44:610 (1,2,3) - Claps on 2nd and 4th beat.
35. 01:51:694 (3) - Move to x:328 y:264 for a neat square?
36. 01:55:860 (5) - New combo.

1. If there was any hitsound suggestion from [Easy] that you liked, feel free to use them here too (I don't remember all of them xD)
2. 00:07:527 (1) - Well, blanket (2)?
3. 00:13:777 (1) - Unless you actually wanted this shape, maybe move the non-red anchor point a bit to the left?
4. 00:20:860 - 00:23:360 - Add clap on every white tick?
5. 00:22:944 (5) - Finish on end.
6. 00:23:985 (1,2,3,4,5) - Compose->Create Polygon Circles?
7. 00:25:444 (7) - Clap on start. Also, maybe move the non-red anchor point up a bit?
8. 00:27:110 (1,2,3) - Sliderend and (2,3) should have a clap sound imo.
9. 00:29:610 (3) - Copy (1).
10. 00:28:777 (1,2) - Sliderend and (2) should have a clapsound.
11. 00:36:902 (1) - Finish on end.
12. 00:43:777 (1) - Finish on start?
13. 00:59:923 (2,3) - Well, I did manage to read this, but it just felt a bit unexpected. Maybe change this to a slider?
14. 01:08:777 (3,4) - Move 1gridlvl3 to the left, 1 down.
15. 01:14:610 (2) - Missed a finish here.
16. 01:14:923 (4,5) - Move 1 gridlvl3 to the left?
17. 01:27:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - Place this pattern in the middle so it's symmetrical and stuff. Right now it just looks off.
18. 01:30:027 (1) - Start spinner at 01:30:444.
19. 01:35:860 (3,4,5) - Tidy this up a bit?
20. 01:50:235 (4) - Move 1 gridlvl3 to the right.

1. As with [Hard], if I've suggested some hitsound that you like in a previous diff, don't hesitate to use it here.
2. 00:01:069 (4,5,6,7) - Imo, the triple feels much better as (4,5,6) rather than (5,6,7).
3. 00:02:631 - Add a note here, delete 00:02:735 (4), and add a note at 00:02:839.
4. 00:14:402 (4) - Let's try to avoid having a hitobject covered by the HP-bar. Move it down a little.
5. 00:15:235 (3) - This slider feels off (as it's on red ticks). Change the rhythm to something like this?
   
6. 00:17:110 (2) - Finish on start.
7. 00:20:339 (6,1) - Spacing. Looks weird right now.
8. 00:23:569 (1) - Finish on end.
9. 00:39:923 (7) - You usually don't expect a 1/4 repeat slider like this to start on the blue tick. You should change this a bit.
10. 00:40:652 (1) - Delete this, then copy 00:40:235 (8) and hit ctrl+h.
11. 00:41:069 (2,4) - Not too fond of these slidershapes.
12. 00:49:194 (2) - Move 1 gridlvl3 to the left.
13. 01:01:902 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
14. 01:10:860 (4) - Whistle feels random, as you don't use it anywhere else
15. 01:13:777 - Imo, this section feels a bit "undermapped" for Insane. 01:13:777 | 01:14:194 | 01:14:610 are perfect spots for 1/2 sliderjumps. If you feel up for it, shorten the spinner at 01:11:277 (1) to end at 01:13:569, and change the other similar parts of the map. Right now, the triple makes your cursor stay still, and it doesn't feel right imho . Also, add the triple-finish as you did in [Hard]?
16. 01:19:194 (2,3,4) - ctrl+r on each one individually?
17. 01:27:735 (4) - Finish?
18. 01:28:360 (1) - ^
19. 01:35:444 (4) - Finish on start.
20. 01:44:610 (2) - Copy from (1)
21. 01:48:360 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
22. 01:57:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Can you make this stream look smoother?

nanda2009 wrote:

finished..

will add BG later..

Taiko Oni *9 | Taiko Kantan *1

2diffs because of this rule : t/92508


PM me if there's any mod to this taiko diffs

You should quote my post and give a reason if you ignore a point in my mod post. Thanks~ Ofc
If you have any problems understanding what the hell I'm talking about, feel free to poke me in-game!

I will

1. Red text means that the issue is unrankable.
2. Blue text is a strongly recommended suggestion.
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1. Drama BG 4.png has black bars on the top and the bottom of the image. This really looks bad imo, especially since these are not present in the other BGs. Might as well crop them out or something (and while you're at it, save as .jpg so you save some space, hah. ) Ok, fixed~
2. If you want me to help you fix that BG, poke me in-game.

1. HP +1? In generall I think it might be better keeping it the same as OD, I will see if someone else mentions it
2. 00:13:777 (1,2) - The looks ;_; Blanket? Made it neater
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:32:110 (1) - Clap on repeat? (I know you're following claps on 2nd and 4th beat, but breaking it like this isn't always bad either~) added
4. 00:42:527 (2) - Well, blanket? They make stuff look neater imo. done
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:57:944 (2) - Well, center it between (1)? It would break distance snap, so I don't know how well other people will like it, but personally I think it's not that much of a change that beginners will become confused. Up to you. I asked a beginner to play this and he got confused, so I will leave it for first.
6. 00:58:777 (1) - Clap on end? sounds nice, added
7. 01:01:277 (1) - Blanketting again. made it neater
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:02:527 (2) - Try adding a clap-sound (not your current normal-hitclap.wav) on sliderstart, repeat and end, and continue on every 2nd and 4th beat until 01:09:194. tried some
9. 01:14:610 (2) - Clap? add
10. 01:15:444 (1) - Whistle on sliderstart. add
11. 01:17:110 (1) - Clap on end.
12. 01:18:777 (2) - Whistle on sliderstart.
    (And continue like this until 01:27:110) done
13. 01:18:777 (2) - Another repeat might be a bit hard to read. You can remove 1 repeat and then re-arrange it to something like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
    I don't want to change because of my 1,2 1,2 combo pattern
14. 01:27:944 (2) - Finish on start and repeat?
15. 01:47:110 (1) - While this is indeed a copy of 01:45:444 (1), I think it looks really meh right now. Try making both these sliders smoother? addjust a bit
16. 01:50:027 (2,1,2,1,2) - I would ctrl+j this. If you take a look, you're using the upper part of the screen a lot more in the chorus than you use the lower half. If you flip this, it evens out more, as well as removing the problem where 01:53:360 (2) would be underneath the player's score. done, is nice
17. 01:55:444 (1,2) - If you did the above, remember to rearrange this. done
18. 01:55:444 (1) - Finish? don't like it because I dont want to emphaze this note
19. 01:56:694 (1) - Begin this spinner at 01:56:902 or 01:57:110.

nanda2009 wrote:

...add "nanda2009" at tags

nanda2009 wrote:

here it is,, the bg..


just put it in your map folder, rename the picture to "taikobg.png"

remember to full upload it

http://puu.sh/OJ2s

1. If there was any hitsound suggestion from [Easy] that you liked, feel free to use them here too (I don't remember all of them xD)
2. 00:07:527 (1) - Well, blanket (2)? done
3. 00:13:777 (1) - Unless you actually wanted this shape, maybe move the non-red anchor point a bit to the left? Left it
4. 00:20:860 - 00:23:360 - Add clap on every white tick? done
5. 00:22:944 (5) - Finish on end. add
6. 00:23:985 (1,2,3,4,5) - Compose->Create Polygon Circles? done
7. 00:25:444 (7) - Clap on start. Also, maybe move the non-red anchor point up a bit? done
8. 00:27:110 (1,2,3) - Sliderend and (2,3) should have a clap sound imo. done
9. 00:29:610 (3) - Copy (1). done
10. 00:28:777 (1,2) - Sliderend and (2) should have a clapsound. done
11. 00:36:902 (1) - Finish on end. done
12. 00:43:777 (1) - Finish on start? done
13. 00:59:923 (2,3) - Well, I did manage to read this, but it just felt a bit unexpected. Maybe change this to a slider? changed
14. 01:08:777 (3,4) - Move 1gridlvl3 to the left, 1 down. ok
15. 01:14:610 (2) - Missed a finish here. yep
16. 01:14:923 (4,5) - Move 1 gridlvl3 to the left? done
17. 01:27:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - Place this pattern in the middle so it's symmetrical and stuff. Right now it just looks off.changed it
18. 01:30:027 (1) - Start spinner at 01:30:444. ok
19. 01:35:860 (3,4,5) - Tidy this up a bit? rearranged them a bit
20. 01:50:235 (4) - Move 1 gridlvl3 to the right.

1. As with [Hard], if I've suggested some hitsound that you like in a previous diff, don't hesitate to use it here.
2. 00:01:069 (4,5,6,7) - Imo, the triple feels much better as (4,5,6) rather than (5,6,7). Ok
3. 00:02:631 - Add a note here, delete 00:02:735 (4), and add a note at 00:02:839. ok
4. 00:14:402 (4) - Let's try to avoid having a hitobject covered by the HP-bar. Move it down a little. ok
5. 00:15:235 (3) - This slider feels off (as it's on red ticks). Change the rhythm to something like this? Sounds very nice, changed
   
6. 00:17:110 (2) - Finish on start. No, don't want it to be so loud here
7. 00:20:339 (6,1) - Spacing. Looks weird right now. changed it a bit
8. 00:23:569 (1) - Finish on end. add
9. 00:39:923 (7) - You usually don't expect a 1/4 repeat slider like this to start on the blue tick. You should change this a bit. changed
10. 00:40:652 (1) - Delete this, then copy 00:40:235 (8) and hit ctrl+h. done
11. 00:41:069 (2,4) - Not too fond of these slidershapes. changed
12. 00:49:194 (2) - Move 1 gridlvl3 to the left. done
13. 01:01:902 (1,2) - Swap new combo. done
14. 01:10:860 (4) - Whistle feels random, as you don't use it anywhere else removd
15. 01:13:777 - Imo, this section feels a bit "undermapped" for Insane. 01:13:777 | 01:14:194 | 01:14:610 are perfect spots for 1/2 sliderjumps. If you feel up for it, shorten the spinner at 01:11:277 (1) to end at 01:13:569, and change the other similar parts of the map. Right now, the triple makes your cursor stay still, and it doesn't feel right imho . Also, add the triple-finish as you did in [Hard]? changed some things and add some jumps
16. 01:19:194 (2,3,4) - ctrl+r on each one individually? changed
17. 01:27:735 (4) - Finish?
18. 01:28:360 (1) - ^
19. 01:35:444 (4) - Finish on start. add all
20. 01:44:610 (2) - Copy from (1)
21. 01:48:360 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
22. 01:57:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Can you make this stream look smoother?

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi from my queue o/ Sorry for my bad english

Easy

00:45:027 (2) - Make this slider symmetric changed a bit
01:18:777 (2) - Please avoid slider with more than one repetition in easy diffs D: I think it's allright >.< There is much time to react


Hard

00:29:610 (3) - CTRL + R? yup
01:09:610 (4) - Stack the end of this slider with the end of the previous slider naah, dont like it this way
01:27:735 (2) - CTRL + R No, I will leave this pattern this way
01:28:985 (4) - CTRL + R ^

Insane

00:29:194 (3) - Stack the end of this slider with the end of the previous one I dont want to stack them, beacause of this way it's easier to play IMO
00:30:027 (5) - The same ^ ^
01:55:444 (1,2,3,4) - Stack the ends of this 4 sliders ^


Good luck with your map :3

nanda2009 wrote:

I'll fix taiko diff as fast as I can.

I'll upload it on... Saturday, maybe?

Wait.