h-728 wrote:

thank you for your request

[General]

1. How about add Kiai Time? Added
2. there are few hit sounds through all diffs. consider add more hit sounds. make other pattern in this pattern.
   I suggest one of clap patterns. please use it when you like. red circle means clap.
   SPOILER

   

Sound realy good so I've used it all the times

[Normal]

• 00:02:015 (2) - I don't recommend you to use kick slider in these for-newbie diff. A person speaks me about polarity problems so what to do, changes them back to notes with polarity problem or keep it like this ?
  00:20:765 (2) - short break time will cause confusing, so you should remove it and put notes.There is no break time here , and it you want to say there is too many time beetwin the two sliders I think not and don't know how to add a note here
  00:53:435 (3) - ^ No break time again here but many time beetwin the two sliders, I've added notes.

[Hard]

• SV2.0 is too high for Hard. recommend to use 1.8 or less.Used 1.8
  00:40:935 (1) ~ finish sounds are attached whole of this slider. remove it and add finish on start/end point of the slider.Done
  00:46:617 - this break time seems unnecessary.Removed and added notes
  01:45:708 - ^^

[Insane]

• 00:40:935 (1) ~ finish sounds are attached whole of this slider. remove it and add finish on start/end point of the slider. I've deleted this slider and puted notes so...
  00:40:935 ~ it looks almost same as Hard. consider to add more notes to adjust difficulty. Slider deleted and notes added, I've also changed some sliders for notes after this one.
  00:46:617 - this break time seems unnecessary. Removed and added notes
  01:26:106 (12) - this whistle sound strange, because you hadn't use whistle at all in other place.
  if you like whistle hit sounds, consider add more whistle in other place, and it will become sounds natural. I've added more before & after
  01:45:708 - same as 00:46:617 Removed and added notes

that's all.
good luck

Arnold0 wrote:

I've set the snap dividor to 1/8 just for the sliders at (2)00:45:055, (2)0054:145, (2)01:44:145, (2)0153:236 Can someone says me if this is okey ?

Arnold0 wrote:

For the easy can someone say me if it's better to have this littles sliders and good polarity or just simple notes but with the polarity problem ?

h-728 wrote:

Arnold0 wrote:

I've set the snap dividor to 1/8 just for the sliders at (2)00:45:055, (2)0054:145, (2)01:44:145, (2)0153:236 Can someone says me if this is okey ?

you can combine some kinds of snap divisor.
so no problem with your using 1/8 snap divisor.
but it should be easy to read rhythm.
for example, using 1/4, 1/3, 1/8 and 1/6 snap divisor in one section will just confusing.

btw, I think 00:45:055 (2): this slider should be snapped at 00:45:197. to do so, it will follow the music well and we can easily to pass this section.
00:54:145 (2) - same as above.
01:44:145 (2) - ^
01:53:236 (2) - ^
Tryed but it sound desynched, the sound come after the music

Arnold0 wrote:

For the easy can someone say me if it's better to have this littles sliders and good polarity or just simple notes but with the polarity problem ?

too short slider(we call kick slider, like 00:02:015 (2) in Normal) maybe confuse newbie players because it is hard to follow the sliderball.
and connecting another note after kick slider, they will be more confused so that it is difficult to find when they should hit the next note.
in these reasons, I don't recommend you to use kick slider in these diffs, but absolutely you want to use, you should use it by itself and not to connect to another note.
Changed back to notes (Also it sound better like this)

sorry for my lazy explanation.
no kudosu for this plz.

EvilElvis wrote:

Hello from E.E's modding queue!
[Hard]
look perfect for me
[Insane]
Suggestion
00:02:867 (10) - try something like this

SPOILER

00:05:140 (10) - ^
00:16:503 (11) - ^
00:18:776 (10) - ^
00:25:310 (5) -

SPOILER

00:27:867 (3) -

SPOILER

Good luck!

hibarirailwayz wrote:

from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]
none

[Normal]
00:27:583 (1,2) - remove and add NC Done
00:29:856 (1,2) - ^ Done
00:46:617 - I don't like break time in kiai time. I suggest adding spinner. Done
01:45:708 - ^ Done

[Hard]
00:40:935 (1) - finish=00:41:361 and add circle in next timing Done
00:56:276 (1) - start=00:55:992 Done
01:40:026 (1) - finish=01:40:452 and add circle in next timing Done

[Insane]
whistle is not match this song... Removed


Good luck!! Thanks

ZLOdeuka wrote:

Hello Arnold0. Sorry, I was doing other maps

[Normal]

00:46:049 (3) - delete. add Circle 00:46:049 and add spiner 00:46:617 (start spiner 46.617 and 48.890 end) Done
01:45:140 (6,1) - ^^
01:04:799 (4) - new combo. Done
01:05:651 (1) - delete new combo Done

[Hard]

00:01:163 (1,2,3) - hmm... maybe so...? http://puu.sh/JBgs Looks realy good thanks
00:03:435 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/JBhg ^
00:55:992 (1) - start here 00:56:276. end here 00:57:981 Done

[Insane]

00:02:867 (10) - delete.move here slider 00:03:009. Changed, sound better thanks
00:05:140 (10,11) - ^^
00:16:503 (11,12) - ^^
00:50:026 (1,2) - disturbed interval! on Distance Snap. Epic fail, fixed

Good luck Thanks

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi, I'm here for 4m4. Sorry for late D:

Normal

00:10:253 (1,2,3) - Make this pattern symmetric! Done (I think)
00:32:412 - Remove NC Done
00:32:981 (2) - Add NC Done

Hard

00:17:072 (1,2,3) - Try to make these symmetric Done (I think)
01:16:162 (1,2,3) - ^^
01:30:651 - Add a note? Done

Insane

00:25:452 (6) - NC? Done
01:04:089 (9) - Weird overlap with the slider (10), move it away I moved the slider

Uhm. Insane is nice but for the other diffs I suggest you to make some patterns with circles/slider because in some parts they're really random... Good luck!

Akashi_S wrote:

Hello~
I'm not great at modding but here's some suggestion that I can think of..

[General]
Cut the music at the end. There's some silence. It's not silence, it's a fadeout because before the music cutted drectly
Maybe try to get a better music? 192kbps? I think this is a waste of filespace for this song


[Normal]
Approach Rate -1 Don't know if it's better but done
In my personal opinion, all the beats sounds okay.

[Hard]
Approach Rate -1 Don't know if it's better but done
Nothing wrong with the beats
Why this map has such low star rating? It should be around 4.0~4.2 Ask osu!, not me ^^"
00:12:526 and 00:14:515 are pretty much in the same spot so overlap them With The changes I made before I can't do it now
01:12:469 - up 2 grid to make it on the center x-axis. Now it's 3 down than the X axis, put it on the X axis will do a wired spacing so no sorry

The song is pretty dynamic imo, but the pattern of the beatmap is repetitive
This song already had a lot of mods so I don't think I was any help XP..

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

[Mod Request]
From my Modding Queue - p/1675802#p1675802
[General]
Maybe find a better background? :C This BG is from the game, and I can't find a image from the game which is better cuz GBA games have a low resolution

[Easy]
Is perfect :3

[Hard]
00:50:026 (1,2) - Fix Slider Shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376466 Tryed but not like yours, because with yours the 1st slider become 1 tick too long

[Insane]
AR -1 I guess.
01:13:890 (2,3,4,5) - Move 3, 4 and 5 a bit way from 2 cause it's confusing :c Switched 2/3 but pattern not changed not sure if it's better?
01:20:140 (6) - Move this to X:376 Y:296 Ok
01:24:969 (7,8,9,10,11) - Turn off the Grid snap and stack precisely - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376458 I have changed this part
01:35:623 (7,8,9,10) - Maybe like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376464 Done
01:48:265 (3) - Fix the spacing. Move it to X:156 Y:276 Done

[Commets]
Nice for 2nd map :3 Good luck! Thanks

Yoru-SAN wrote:

Hi! from my mod queue~

General:

Your BG size is 800x600, when recommended is 1024x768. Use Grid Level 4.For this kind of image I think 1024X768 is useless and a waste of filsespace because the image is already pixelated

Insane:

SPOILER

00:25:878 (2,3,4,5,6) - is sink needed change, for exaple , http://puu.sh/K8nt. Changed
01:24:969 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^ create some confuses 'cause start after slider. CHanged but not with the patter you saw because it was too near the border of the screen

00:46:049 (3) - m... try make it more steady or change. Not changed because I don't realy know what you wanted to say and don't know how to change them
01:45:140 (3) - ^^

00:50:310 (2,3) - try this http://puu.sh/K8oR. Done
01:40:310 (2,3) - ^^
01:49:401 (2,3) - ^ etc.^

01:47:981 (1,2,3) - need to do smoother. Don't understand what you meen and this looks good for me so not changed

Hard:

SPOILER

Approach Rate 7. Okey

Would be better if you remake all diff on Distance Snap.

Change some moments with sliders to:
before - http://puu.sh/K8tK
after - http://puu.sh/K8v0
I've done this with "2 reverse arrow" sliders but not with the ones like at the start of the song.
It's make your "Hard" more harder , lol.

Normal:

SPOILER

Fine.

Good Luck! Thanks

1. 00:19:344 (1) - Correct this slider shape, like this: http://puu.sh/Kb5M

1. Nothing here.

1. 00:45:055 - How about adding one more reverse arrow? If not, you can also set beatsnap divisor to 1/6 and correct slider to that - it looks nice.
2. 00:54:145 - ^
3. 01:44:145 - ^
4. 01:53:236 - ^
5. 01:27:526 - Incorrect spacing.
6. 01:34:344 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing between these notes look ugly in my opinion. Try move them in nicer way, but it is only my little suggestion.

Alduric wrote:

Even if you fail mod mine map, I'll mod yours ;p Thanks

[Normal]

1. 00:19:344 (1) - Correct this slider shape, like this: http://puu.sh/Kb5M Done

[Hard]

1. Nothing here.

[Insane]

1. 00:45:055 - How about adding one more reverse arrow? If not, you can also set beatsnap divisor to 1/6 and correct slider to that - it looks nice. 1 more reverse arrow added
2. 00:54:145 - ^^
3. 01:44:145 - ^^
4. 01:53:236 - ^^
5. 01:27:526 - Incorrect spacing. Changed
6. 01:34:344 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing between these notes look ugly in my opinion. Try move them in nicer way, but it is only my little suggestion. I made them like this due to the previous mod and I think they are good so no change for now sorry

Good luck! Thanks

Genshin wrote:

Star Thanks

-Bakari- wrote:

ok. as you requested

[General]
100% volume sounds too loud. reduce it, please! Set to 70%
all difs has a lot of overlaps. doesn't looks really good Most of them are caused by distance snapping so...

[Normal]
AR + 1. it fits with your slider velocity much better Changed
00:50:026 (1) - too far from spinner. it's easiest diff on this mapset. so.. put this closer to the screen center Changed
01:05:651 (2) - http://puu.sh/KIH5 I think it sond bad so not changed sry
01:49:117 (1) - same as 00:50:026 (1) Okey

[Hard]
OD + 1 this is Hard! Changed
00:10:822 - circle here Changed
00:25:594 - ^ I don't hear thing in the music here which need a circle.

[Insane]
UNSNAPPED OBJECTS AIMod say "unsnapped (0)"
00:14:515 (1,7) - stack them Okey
00:45:055 (2) - doesn't really fits here. Why? I think it follow the music

more looks like unfinished diff. i expected to see much more sliders. kinda unbalanced now Why does it need more sliders? This is an insane after all an putting slider will just make it easyer no?

short mod. i just pointed out some things. looks like some parts are copy-pasted. so.. check them too for same mistakes I never copy/pasted >.<
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

gl~

1. better find a better quality bg ...

1. 00:40:935 (3) - make shape better i think.. move 2 points in middle o.o? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/379485

1. 00:25:878 (6,7) - seems one slider 3 reverse fits better...
2. 00:44:344 (1) - make symmetry
3. 01:04:799 (1) - put slider point (32,176) looks better..?
4. 01:54:231 (2) - last point (432,152)

1. 00:39:799 (1,2,3) - bigger spacing so don't overlap?
2. 00:46:049 (3) - you can make a better slider like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/379389
3. 00:50:452 (3) - spacing
4. 01:13:890 (2,3,4,5,6) - make better shape..?
5. 01:40:310 (2,3) - spacing bigger

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue


General

1. better find a better quality bg ... Maybe I'll search one, but I can't find an image from the game which is better if it change it'll not from the game and that's not what I want

Normal

1. 00:40:935 (3) - make shape better i think.. move 2 points in middle o.o? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/379485 Done

Hard

1. 00:25:878 (6,7) - seems one slider 3 reverse fits better... Changed
2. 00:44:344 (1) - make symmetry Tryed (But not sure about success ^^')
3. 01:04:799 (1) - put slider point (32,176) looks better..? Done
4. 01:54:231 (2) - last point (432,152) Done

Insane

1. 00:39:799 (1,2,3) - bigger spacing so don't overlap? Changed a little, I think it's good now
2. 00:46:049 (3) - you can make a better slider like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/379389 Can't succesfully made the same as yours but changed hope it's okey
3. 00:50:452 (3) - spacing Changes just a little (The overlap just a little because this was an idea from another mod
4. 01:13:890 (2,3,4,5,6) - make better shape..? Changed but not sure it's better
5. 01:40:310 (2,3) - spacing bigger Same as 00:50:452

weird music ..orz don't know how to mod this sorry ;_;

Good luck~ Thanks

Kurokami wrote:

Yo.

[Normal]
00:40:935 (3) - haha, yeah, same as above mentioned Already done in the mod before ^^
01:40:026 (1,2) - weird overlap Changed

[Hard]
00:08:265 (3) - what are you mapped here? I know its sounds good, but... What is the problem here ? it folows the music fine
01:17:157 (3,4) - unrankable issue, 4's repeat arrow partially covered by 3's hirburst Grrr default 300 are realy bigger than the ones in my skin... Changed
01:17:157 (3,4) - ^ O_O You give me the same time as before, fail ?
01:33:066 (4,5) - unrankable issue, 5's repeat arrow partially covered by 4's hirburst Changed

[Insane]
00:16:219 (9,11) - 1 grid down
00:17:072 (1,3,5) - 1 grid right
00:40:083 (3) - 1 grid down
00:46:901 (1,2,3) - 2 one grid down? this way 3 will be centered in the middle of 1 and 2
00:48:037 (4,5) - 1 grid down
01:06:219 (5) - 1 grid left?
01:07:072 (1,2,3) - looks ugly, move 1,3 1 grid right
01:09:344 (1,2,3) - ugly, 3 is 1 grid up, 1 is 1 left and up
01:11:759 (2,3) - 1 right
01:39:174 (9) - 1 down
All done
I wanted to say, its okay, but then I saw your triplets. o.o What triplets mean? I've used a translator and I did not know the french word it gives to me o_O

[]
That's all, what I able to say about this map. Sorry for the too much nazy things. o.o Good luck with this. :3 Thanks

Arnold0 wrote:

Kurokami wrote:

Yo.

[Hard]
00:08:265 (3) - what are you mapped here? I know its sounds good, but... What is the problem here ? it folows the music fine nope, you mapped 3 note, but the last note isn't represent in the music.
01:17:157 (3,4) - unrankable issue, 4's repeat arrow partially covered by 3's hirburst Grrr default 300 are realy bigger than the ones in my skin... Changed I'm also not using the default skin, but this is unrankable anyways.
01:17:157 (3,4) - ^ O_O You give me the same time as before, fail ? oops. My mistake. o.o 00:27:015 (1,3) - here

and here too: 00:15:793 (4,5) -

I wanted to say, its okay, but then I saw your triplets. o.o What triplets mean? I've used a translator and I did not know the french word it gives to me o_O Triplet means 3 note following each other with no space between them. The selected ones are the triplets: http://puu.sh/L2tP

Flask wrote:

Hi there ~ Request From CLANNAD Mod queue~
Regou does not choose your map to mod , so i take a look :3!

[General]
Background.png >> should be jpg (less file size)

I'll respond to this with an image :

And i think kiai time should be here
#1 00:42:072 - (open) Okey
#2 01:41:162 - (open) Okey
I'd like to set preview time on Offset 40935 but it's up to you :3 Okey


[Normal]
00:02:441 (3) - should start at 00:02:583 - and end at 00:02:867 - This is easyer and not sound bad so okey
00:04:714 (3) - ^ (start at red tick and end at white tick) ^
00:16:077 (4) - ^^
00:18:350 (3) - ^^
00:21:617 (3) - spacing Changed
00:34:259 (3) - same as above ^
00:36:532 (3) - ^^
00:37:526 (4) - nc Yep
01:01:532 (4,3) - ^^
01:15:168 (3) - ^^
01:33:350 (4,3) - ^^

not bad .-.

[Hard]
00:12:810 (3) - why here's a clap? removeThere is all the time a clap on this sond on the music so no.

[Insane]
I find some unsnapped slider ,please snap them ↓

00:45:055 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:45:055 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
00:54:145 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:54:145 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
01:44:145 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
01:44:145 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
01:53:236 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
01:53:236 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)

I think it's okey now
00:45:055 (2) - Why here has finish T_T too loudly Removed
00:54:145 (2) - ^^


umm... this is your first map and still needs more mod :3 good luck! More mods? I've got already many ones but sure I think my map can still be improved, but getting realy many mods is not realy easy :s

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

Hi~

[Normal]

00:01:163 - consider add a finish? Added
00:32:981 - There lacks a finish. Added
00:40:935 - I don't think this finish is fit the music.. Removed
00:41:787 - ^ Removed
00:53:435 - add a NC and consider add a finish at the head of slider? Done
01:00:253 - emm.I think there lacks a finish.ww Added
01:32:072 - ^ Added

[Hard]

00:41:361 - remove finish Done
00:48:322 - I think it would be better to add a clap. Huh! How I missed that :O
01:00:253 - Add a finish. Done
01:40:452 - remove finish Done

[Insane]

00:10:395 - move 1 grid up Okey
00:10:537 - move 2 grids up ^
00:41:361 - remove finish Removed
00:45:102 - try another method,because it's too loudly. idk what to do so I just lowered the volume a little
00:54:193 - ^^
01:40:062 - add a finish Done
01:44:193 - the same as 00:45:102 the same as 00:45:102 ^^
01:53:284 - ^^

Good luck!!! Thanks

Kinzo wrote:

From Mod queue

général :

Il te faudrait au moins un break time Quand j'en avais on ma dit de les enlever et la musique n'ai pas trop longue donc je pense que sa va comme ça.

Normal :

ce spoiler est seulement si tu veux des slider parfaitement parallèle a un certain point :

SPOILER

00:01:163 (1) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwL7
00:07:981 (3) - changer ce slider pour celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwML
00:16:219 (4) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwOU
00:28:435 (1) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwRK
00:30:424 (1) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwTC
00:38:947 (3) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwUW
01:18:435 (1) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwWY
01:19:856 (3) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwXp

Tout fait ^^

Hard

00:08:265 (3) - si tu map les sons électriques je pense pas que cette note soit utile, tu pourrais la delete J'ai toujours mis des notes sur se sont et sans je trouve que sa ne vas pas donc je laisse comme ça
00:10:537 (3) - Pareil que l'autre Idem
00:21:901 (3) - pareil que les 2 autres Idem
00:24:174 (3) - pareil que les 3 autres Idem
00:25:310 (5) - je pense qu'un petit slider serrais mieux : http://puu.sh/MzqC Oui
00:40:083 (3) - pareil que les 4 d'en haut (sauf celui qui parle du slider) Idem (Sauf celui qui parle du slider) ^^
01:07:356 (3) - pareil que les 5 d'en haut (sauf celui qui parle du slider) Idem
01:09:628 (3) - pareil que les 6 d'en haut (sauf celui qui parle du slider) Idem
01:20:992 (3) - pareil que les 7 d'en haut (sauf celui qui parle du slider) Idem
01:23:265 (3) - pareil que les 8 d'en haut (sauf celui qui parle du slider) Idem
01:24:401 (5) - un petit slider serrais peut etre mieux : http://puu.sh/Mzv5 Oui
01:27:810 (4) - pareil que les 9 d'en haut (sauf ceux qui parlent du slider) Idem que ceux d'avent ^^
01:42:015 (4) - un slider içi serrait pas mieux ? Peut être mais je ne sait pas ou je pourrais mettre la fin donc pas changé pour l'instant.

Bon par contre ne suis pas mon mod à la lettre y a surement des erreurs vue que je suis qu'un débutant modder, et j'ai pas encore assez d’expérience pour modder les insanes Ho bah t’inquiète pas des débutant modder j'en connais (moi ^^)

Good luck ~ Thanks (Some english in your message only here ? )

Aunxfb wrote:

From:Fishball's NEWBIE modding queue

[Normal]
00:40:935 (3) - start at 00:41:361 Tryed, sound special so no change
00:50:026 (1) - start at 00:50:473 Huh the time you gives me is not snapped on a tick o_O
01:40:026 (1) - start at 01:40:452 Tryed, sound special no change
01:49:117 (1) - start at 01:49:543 ^

[Hard]
00:10:537 (3,4,5) - change this into a slider(with one reverse) Ive just make the 3,4 into a slider.
00:12:810 (3,4) - change this into a slider(no reverse,long slider ) Done
00:41:503 (2) - remove circle Done
00:40:935 (1) - extend slider til 00:41:503 Done
01:13:038 (5) - extend this in timeline into a 3-hit slider Done
01:13:606 (1) - remove circle Done
01:13:890 (6) - NC(new combo) Done
01:40:594 (2) - remove circle Done
01:40:026 (1) - extend slider til 01:40:594 Done

[Insane]
00:14:515 (1) - remove NC Done
00:14:799 (2) - add NC Done
00:25:310 (5) - delete circle, and let the slider starts here Done (I've put start here and end same as before)
00:25:452 (1) - remove NC Done
00:25:878 (2) - add NC Done
00:45:055 (2) - delete slider Done
00:45:197 - add circle Done
00:54:193 (2) - delete slider Done
00:54:287 - add circle Done
01:24:401 (5) - delete circle, let slider starts here Done
01:24:969 (7) - add NC Done
01:44:193 (2) - let slider start at 01:44:145 I've do like the 1st part of the song, del slider and add note.
01:53:284 (2) - let slider start at 01:53:236 ^
P.S:I'm not skillful enough to play this map

Conclusion:
-----------------
It's following the music, but the patterns doesn't look good.Try rearranging the beats. If I realy have to chage this I'll maybe make it but for now if it can be okey like this it'll be better
Hope my mod was useful,Good Luck Thanks and yes it was usfull

cool cool wrote:

01:34:628 (3) - unstack with 01:34:344 (1) - this ( little bit stack ) Maybe you want to say they overlap? Okey changed.
01:49:543 (3) - use 1.0x Distace Changed.

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From my Queue
My Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER

Normal
00:21:617 (3) - NC Done
00:25:878 (4) - ^^
01:32:072 (2) - add finish start of slider Okey
01:42:583 (3,4) - change to slider? Done

Hard
00:48:890 (4) - NC Done
01:47:981 (4) - ^^
01:55:367 (1) - finish Okey

Insane
312 circles and only 17 sliders?? how about using more slider? I don't know what to do with sliders and think like this can be okey, if someone sugest me some things to replace with slider which dont make the diff to easier I'll see.
00:25:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - try pentagon Tryed but not sure about the result *.*
01:24:969 (6) - NC Okey
01:55:367 (1) - finish Okey

Good luck Thanks

Reisen Udongein wrote:

Bonjour x3 from my queue!

[General]

umm.. did you use Distance Spacing :3?? I think you better use it there are so many irregular spacing notes.. Yes I used it, but it looks like I did not used it all the time :O I've fixed spacing in Normal & Hard.

[Insane]

SliderMultiplier:2.79999990463257 -> 2.8

00:01:163 (1) - add finish?
00:05:708 (1) - ^
00:14:799 (1) - ^
00:19:344 (1) - ^
00:32:981 (1) - ^
00:41:787 (4) - delete finish
01:00:253 (1) - add finish
01:04:799 (1) - ^
01:13:606 (1) - Delete NC
01:13:890 (2) - NC , add finish
01:18:435 (1) - add finish
01:25:822 (6) - delete finish
01:26:958 (2) - add finish
01:30:367 (6) - delete finish
01:31:503 (2) - add finish
01:31:219 (1) - delete NC
01:32:072 (3) - NC
01:32:072 (3) - add finish
01:36:617 (1) - ^
01:40:878 (4) - delete finish on the head

[Hard]

same finish problems :3 please set the finishes based on cymbals sound and set those when music starts x_x not abusing on weird part

00:25:878 (6) - NC
00:27:015 (1) - delete NC
00:28:435 (3) - NC
00:29:288 (1) - delete NC
00:30:424 (3) - NC
00:31:560 (1) - delete NC
00:59:685 (1,1) - this will be better?
01:24:969 (6) - NC
01:26:674 (1) - delete NC
01:27:526 (2) - NC
01:31:219 (1) - delete NC
01:32:072 (2) - NC
01:38:890 (3) - ^

[Normal]

Same as Insane finishes

00:07:981 (3) - NC
00:12:526 (4) - ^
00:14:515 (1) - delete NC
00:14:799 (2) - NC
00:32:128 (3,4) - change those into 1 slider so that this can be much easier
01:07:072 (4) - NC
01:11:617 (4) - ^
01:24:969 (4) - ^
01:29:515 (4) - ^
01:31:219 (1) - delete NC
01:32:072 (2) - NC
01:38:890 (3) - ^
01:43:435 (4) - ^

Sorry don't want to write like 50 times done so all done

hope you become much more experienced about mapping :3

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
Keep the Kiai same in all your diffs.
I've changed it in normal and forget to change it in Hard & insane.
[Normal]
00:42:072 - start Kiai here mine was unsnapped Fixed Also used the same on hard & insane for having the same in the 3 diffs
01:40:026 (1) - remove NCOkey
01:41:163 (2) - NC^

[Hard]
00:14:799 (2) - delete previous NC and add NC hereOkey
00:41:788 (2) - curve it to fit the end of 00:40:935 (1)? http://puu.sh/NmqC I tried but I'm not sure I've got the exact same (The level 4 grid is so small it's hard to see )
01:41:162 - start Kiai here to keep consistence Fixed
01:49:117 (1,2) - they are close to each other and looks not good, so make more space between them? Changed but broke spacing, it'll be okey?

[Insane]
AR-1 because you doesn't have any complex pattern. Okey.
00:25:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a better polygon? I changed it a little but not sure about the result (I won't broke distance snap for this so I think it's just a little chage hope it's okey now)
01:41:162 - start Kiai here to keep consistence Fixed

GL~

Chewin wrote:

Hi Arnold0 :3 Well, you are the one with the highest SP of who have joined the special round of my modding queue xD
Then here is my mod, let's start.

[General]
Remove letterbox during breaks from all diffs because there aren't breaks in your map (Just go in song setup > storyboarding > remove letterbox) Don't know why since they are no breaks so unable or not will change nothing but okey if you want ^^
Remove GBA from the title adding it ONLY in the tags. Okey (Lol makes me duplicate the map thanks to jericho2442 for deleting the bad one)
We have some tags to add here: Game Boy Advance, Nintendo, Videogames, DB, Goku.Added
Are you sure that the title name is correct? I don't know because it's from a GBA game so I think there is not real title ?

[Normal]
00:05:708 (1) - Move the 2nd point at x:144 y:108, in this way the slider would become more curved on the center and so also more flowing to play Okey
00:10:253 (1,2,3) - Select these 3 elements and mvoe to x:48 y:224 so the 00:11:106 (2) is completely overlapped with 00:09:401 (3)'s end Moved at X:44 Y:228, I think it overlapps better.
00:28:435 (1) - Use finish on this slider head? Okey
00:34:401 (3) - You should improve your sliders' shape to make it more flowing while the play. Move the 2nd waypoint at x:388 y:24 Okey
00:36:674 (3) - 3 grid right 2nd waypoint for the same reason ^ Okey
00:40:935 (3) - I would move this slider 1/2 late reducing it by 1/1 and adding a clap on its end, I mean:
Yep
00:42:072 (1) - You have forgotten clap on the head I don't reealy like how a clap sound here
01:15:310 (3) - This slider is pretty ugly, I guess you wanted to make something like this: http://puu.sh/NLGM How yey it's better
01:26:106 (2) - I can hear a finish here from the music. What about to add finish on the circle then? Why not, added
01:40:026 (3) - What ugly slider here :\ Move the 2nd point at x:416 y:80 Okey
01:41:163 (1) - ^ 2nd waypoint at x:360 y:332 Okey
01:42:583 (2) - Clap at the end Yes, sure
01:51:958 (4) - ^^

[Hard]
00:20:765 (2,3) - Select them and move to x:212 y:248 so they are symetric Done
01:02:526 (1,2,3,4) - Select them and move to x:164 y:320 always for symmetry Done
You have to improve the shape of the sliders. I tryed to change some, hope it's better now

[Insane]
00:42:072 (5) - New combo Yes
00:51:162 (5) - ^^
01:40:310 (2) - Remove this circle keeping the 01:40:452 (3) instead that follows the music Nope I think this circle follow the music too
01:40:878 (4) - If you followed above use NC here Did not followed the one above but an NC here fit so added
01:50:253 (5) - ^^
I hate the spacing of these streams.. Whats the problem with them? They are 1.0x distance snapped

That's all, good luck ^^

00:42:072 (1) - You have forgotten clap on the head I don't reealy like how a clap sound here

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod Q ^.^

Insane

00:46:049(3) - make more symmetry http://puu.sh/OdWV Tryed I think it's okey.
00:50:594 - add note here Yes
01:40:878 - this slider make double and put on white tick Sound good so done
01:49:685 - add note Yes

Hard

not bad~~

Normal

not bad~

Good luck~ Thanks

R e v i v e wrote:

Hi Arnold :-)

From my modding queue,,,

NOTE : follow Normal then fixed other difficulties like this pattern sounds.

Normal

00:02:583 (3) - Add whistle at tail slider. Added
00:04:856 (3) - ^^
00:16:219 (3) - ^^
00:18:492 (3) - ^^
00:34:401 (3) - ^^
00:36:674 (3) - ^
00:42:072 (1,2) - Add whistle all slider.Don't like how it sound so no change
00:51:163 (2) - ^^
00:53:435 (1,2) - ^^
01:01:674 (4) - Add whistle at tail slider. Added
01:03:947 (3) - ^^
01:15:310 (3) - ^^
01:17:583 (3) - ^^
01:33:492 (3) - ^^
01:35:765 (3) - ^^
01:41:163 (1) - Add whistle all slider.Don't like how it sound so no change
01:43:435 (1) - ^^
01:50:253 (2) - ^^
01:52:526 (1,2) - ^^

I don't like this song, but your clap sound is great >3

Sry for my short mod (Need to read my book for exam again ._.)

Kei wrote:

Interesting beatmap and song. Thanks

You should check a lot the modding queues subforum to find some MAT. I check it all days but no MAT modding queues open here. (Yes Leorda one is open but I already posted in it and she skipped because she don't like the song... & I have posted in Kawayi Rika one but it's random mod and I'm unlucky I belive so yea )

It's very hard for new mappers but I'm sure that you'll have chance to find a good MAT to help you out. You think? I start myself to think this will never be ranked, ranking porcess is too hard (And seeing some maps bubbled after 4 days with less mod and less SP broke alot more my motivation...)

Oh btw, I have a question: why did you wrote "DragonBall" in the song title without a space between Dragon and Ball, but in the source you wrote it with space? It looks odd, that's why I'm asking. Fail, added space in title. Also added dragonball as tag because I prefer search "dragonball" than "dragon ball" XD

Edit: oh lol new page

Sakura wrote:

Edit: Confirming this, full submits end up in "beatmap not uploaded correctly" as well as new submissions.
Standard submissions end up in needing update after download.

Kert wrote:

Yo
Epic music here

[General]
The mapset is fine, though it suffers from lack of beats/"pauses"/"gaps" most of the time

[Normal]
I suggest you a small remap here, everything with 1,2x spacing (I believe the map looks generally more accurate when there are no overlaps) I used only 1x on hard I belive 1.2x it too much for an normal diff. So no change I don't think overlaps is hard but high spacing can be.

Certain sliders bugged me a lot here
00:02:583 (3) - I think it should start at 00:02:441 and end where it ended before
Same for all other sliders

SPOILER

00:04:856 (3) - 00:16:219 (3) - 00:18:492 (3) - 00:34:401 (3) - e.t.c.

I think the rhythm is more natural this way + it won't be hard for newbies because sliders and not circles (impossible to 100) I don't know, some say to do like actual; some say like you (I make them like actual due to a previous mod) so if someone else say me this I'll see but for now not changed

[Hard]
And here starts stuff about what I mentioned in [General]
00:03:151 - Add circle Okey
00:05:424 - ^ optional ^
00:08:549 - ^ Added a slider which start where was the previous note and end here, sond better to me.
00:09:969 - ^ Okey
00:12:242 - ^ optional ^
00:16:787 - ^^
00:19:060 - ^ optional^
00:22:185 - ^^
00:27:583 (3) - Instead of this slider you can make a circle on this place and then a slider from 00:27:867 - to 00:28:151 - I don't like how it sond sorry no change here
00:29:856 (3) - A short slider here instead maybe? to 00:30:140 - Yep
00:32:697 - Add circle ^
00:34:969 - ^^
Now about larger gaps
00:41:788 (2,3,1) - It's very lonely here with this amount of notes
Sounds a lot better like this Okey done whitout the (6)
You can refrain from adding (6) for example though, if you wish to make a short break
Again fill the pause with a slider or a circle/two here 00:45:481 -
I added a note at 00:45:765 - too for make the next two ones feels less empty too
00:51:163 (2,1) - Use you imagination! Do something similar here Do the same
00:53:435 (1,2) - Yeah I have do like this here
01:00:253 (1,2) - Overlaps badly, move reverse arrow up or something Done
Basically the same suggestions for the remaining part of the map Okey

[Insane]
Too many "short breaks between notes here"
You can use more sliders here to fill them
If you wish, I can make quickly my version of your Insane fixing these things and sending it to you
But better try to do this by yourself I've tryed, maybe you can say what do you think about it?

Hey, don't be scared by my long post. There is always room for improvement Haaa your mod is the one which takes me the longer time to apply *.*(More than 2hours for apply it wow)
Good luck!

Kert wrote:

Yeah it's cooler now \:D/

selova wrote:

hi Arnold0, req via mod queue

note: all just suggestion, sorry for poor english

[Normal]
00:50:026 (1,2) - remove finish from slider body? Done & added finish only at the start of the sliders
00:59:685 (1) - add finish? done
01:30:651 - maybe you add a note? same like previous Done

[Hard]
{maybe you adjust the 1/4 slider repeat arrow pointer position to next and previous note to make a beautiful way, just like you do from the first 5 second}
00:59:685 (1) - add finish on slider head? Done

[Insane]
{maybe about position make it +-0,02 spacing between circle note} forget it hhe
maybe make slider curve more beauty XD Tryed

~
good song, and it hitsounded well,
good luck getting ranked XD Thanks

Beren wrote:

Hi/


[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
01:40:026 (1) - start at 01:40:310 end at 01:40:594 No there is two sond here and I want to folow the other one here.

[Insane]
00:45:197 (2) - http://puu.sh/QChm beyond the screen... I saw it while playing but i forgot to check if it's realy off sreen or just realy neer the botom... Fixed.
01:28:947 (8) - change to slider end at 01:29:231 Changed to slider but end at 01:29:373 is better to me.
01:40:452 (3) - x:248 y:236 Done

good luck~

Pereira006 wrote:

finally now work downlaod lmao i gonna mod this map because i like videogames anyway

imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if witouht " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission

[General]

the tag " Dragonball " is not need this because aldready on sourçe that can easy search imo also add " Pan " and " Trunk " ? because they are playable on GBA too that can easy search if somoene use this Tag dragonball not removed because I want searching dragonball without space works. Pan and Trunk added

[Normal]

Hitsound: i gonna put here only fit and some missing

00:02:583 (3) - Clap with whistle is so annoying just remove only clap that will be most better imo not only this have many more example 00:04:856 (3), 00:16:219 (3),00:18:492 (3) and many more pleasse remove clap only and whistle staying that most better imo Yes done
00:03:435 (1) - add finish on begin slider is fit more Done
00:17:072 (1) - ^ too Done
00:27:583 (3) - this need add clap on end slider because the drums still repetive I don't like how a clap sond here so nope
00:32:128 (3) - ^ too ^
00:35:253 (1) - again add finish on begin slider that fit more Yep
00:46:049 (3) - add clap ? this fit add clap imo Done
00:55:140 (2) - add clap on begin slider ? also add finish on end slider ? the above is fit more imo Done
01:02:526 (1) - add finish on begin slider same explain before Done
01:16:163 (1) - ^ Done
01:26:106 (2) - Why finish ? that don't sense, remove finish Removed
01:26:674 (3) - add clap on end sllider I don't like how a clap sond here so nope
01:31:219 (3) - ^ same ^
01:40:026 (3) - imo this finish don't sense, remove finish ? Okey
01:45:140 (2) - add clap? same explain on 00:46:049 (3) Yep
00:55:140 (2) - add clap on begin slider ? also add finish on end slider ? same explain on 00:55:140 (2) Lol time fail but I find the slider and fixed

good use hitsound my problem is that i explain on 00:02:583 (3) just remove clap and whistle staying that most better if you fix that fix another notes and slider too, because is same and consistency

Gameplay:

Look great for me

[hard]

00:02:441 (4) - again i did explain on Normal Yes
00:03:435 (1) - add finish on begin slider is fit more Yes
00:17:072 (1) - ^ too ^
00:27:583 (3) - add clap on end slider is same explain before Same as before no change
00:30:424 (1) - the end slider remove finish and add clap It's already a clap here o_O
00:32:128 (3) - same explain on 00:27:583 (3) Same as before
00:35:253 (1) - again add finish on begin slider that fit more Yes
00:40:935 (1) - imo again this finish don't sense, remove finish ? Yes
00:46:049 (3) - add clap on begin slider and remove finish only begin slider ? this fit more Done
00:55:140 (2) - ^ same Yes
01:02:526 (1) - add finish on begin slider Done
01:16:163 (1) - ^^
01:26:674 (3) - add clap on end sllider Nope like before
01:31:219 (3) - ^ same^
01:40:026 (3) - imo this finish don't sense, remove finish ? if you did add clap on end slider Yes
01:45:140 (2) - add clap? same explain on 00:46:049 (3) Yes
00:55:140 (2) - ^ same Yes

Same explain on Normal

Gameplay:

00:40:935 (1) - remove new combo because is don't sense new combo and at 00:42:072 (3) - put new combo the guitar is change that sense imo Yes
01:40:026 (1) - remove new combo and at 01:41:162 (3) - put new combo same explain before Done

[Insane]

00:02:441 (4) - again i did explain on Normal Yes
00:03:435 (1) - add finish is fit more Yes
00:17:072 (1) - ^ too Yes
00:27:867 (3) - add clap on end slider is same explain before Nope same as before
00:32:412 (3) - add clap on begin slider ^
00:35:253 (1) - again add finish Yes
00:40:935 (1,2) - this finish don't sense imo remove finish Removed
00:46:049 (3) - add clap on begin slider and remove finish only begin slider ? this fit more Yes
00:55:140 (2) - ^ same Yes
01:02:526 (1) - add finish on begin slider Not a slider ^^ but yes
01:16:163 (1) - ^^
01:26:958 (2) - remove finish and add clap Finish removed but no clap.
01:31:503 (9) - ^ same Finish removed but no add clap/color]
01:40:026 (1) - remove finish ? don't sense
01:40:594 (1) - ^ same if you did add clap on begin slider Yes
01:45:140 (2) - add clap? same explain on 00:46:049 (3) Yes
00:55:140 (2) - ^ same Yes

Again same explain on normal

Gameplay:

00:20:197 (4) - this slider really need more arc because this don't like really arc Fixed
00:40:935 (1) - this need remove new combo imo Yep
01:40:026 (1) - remove new combo Yes
01:40:594 (1) - remove new combo and at 01:41:162 (2) - put new combo that sense Yes

01:38:890 (6) - I've added a NC here.

[]
good job keep it work
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
or if need help go ahead question me
good luck and bye bye

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hello ~ Arnold0 ~

M4M here ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

1. 00:26:020 (2) - Remove this circle sound better to me. I think it sood worse and borke the pattern so no sorry
2. 01:00:111 (4) - ^ The sond I'm folowing whit (1,2,3) is the same and it sound like something is missing if removed so nope sorry
3. 00:40:367 - Add a circle,because have drum to here. Yes
4. 00:40:935 (5) - This circle should move to 00:41:077 following for vocal. Vocals ? And after change it sound like the note is late for me so no change
5. 01:40:026 (5) - Same as above.^

[Hard]

1. 00:56:276 (1) - You are forgot add finish here. Yes

[Normal]

1. 00:56:276 (1) - You are forgot add finish here. Yes

That's all ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck wirh rank ~ Thanks

Will have to fond another MAT mod... It'll take time, or maybe it'll never append. Will this die in graveyaed or can I succesfully get it ranked? I've a so low confidence into me... Let's se what append now.

Currently it's on "Not bad" status but your map needs to be "Good" to be ranked.
maybe try adding some enjoyable jumps that makes sense according to the music?

But honestly, this music isn't kind of music that everyone might enjoy, so actually I would like to say "look for another music", because It's gonna be kinda hard to rank it(especially, when it's your first map) if your music isn't attractive enough..

haha5957 wrote:

from haha's random modding queue >~<

[Insane]

00:06:560 (4) - try to improve shape of "This kind of slider(which i wouldnt point out all of them) by
1. maybe try to use 2 curving slideers if they are long enough.
2. try to place "endpoint of slider" at the middle or endpoint circle. it makes better shape
example : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/404212
currently every long slider in the map needs improvement and it won't take that long. btw you can add curving point by doing
ctrl+clicks Fixed
00:25:310 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - this part looks pretty bad.. maybe this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/404215 this? Tryed but not realy sure about the result...
01:01:532 (7,8,9,10) - if you see this, it looks like too many patterns are squeezed in a very tight space, overlapped by previous (1,2,3,4,5,6)s, and etc..
and I personally suggest not to use 00:59:685 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern, but I don't know how should i explain. Fixed pattern overlap but you don't say me what is the problem with 00:59:685 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) so I'll change if you say me what to do with it.
01:02:952 (4,5) - see this too, and see how it's overlapped to previous (10) or so.. Since other patern a little change no more problem here
if you are planning to place your patterns on where your pattern just came from - (my English sucks. maybe, in easy world - you are planning to do some overlaps to previous pattern)
make sure the overlap looks pretty nice and understandable.

01:35:623 (7,8,9,10) - move them few grids left so they can overlap nicely with previous patterns? Yes

REMOVED part which speak about ranking system and my song etc since it's not a part of the mod itself and don't need to be quoted.

It was just personal opinion because I think it would be hard to make rank maps with this kind of music. If you like this music very much, sure go ahead continue!

About the music thing, if you have played osu! for a while, you must have realized that most of osu! songs are kinda moemoeish song, or anime/eroge OP/ED, rarely rhythm game.

I didnt wanted to discourage you, I just wanted to see your map being ranking because I know you are very active these days. don't be depressed beecause of this please, and sorry again if I hurt your feelings.

zeroclover wrote:

mod mod mod ~~

General

Offset +15 Nope with offset +15 I get like avg early 10~20 ms ^^" (With actual like late 5 / early 5 because I'm not pro D:)

Insane

00:25:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about this look?
Done
00:39:231 (5) - move down a bit, when playing it s too close to score Fixed
00:49:174 (3) - move 1 grid to left You meen right I belive because 1 left looks bad and 1 right looks better
00:57:981 - drain a lot, give some notes or little break Little break added

Hard

00:57:981 - insert break time Done
01:47:981 (1) - flip Looks better okey


Normal

Fine~

overall is look fine, no problem

~~

SephWalker wrote:

Hi.

Normal

No problems whatsoever. Excellent beatmap. Thanks

Hard

Again, no problems. It's not a great beatmap. I dislike it because of the repetitiveness of the song, not because the actual beatmap is bad. If you want to improve it, you can try to mix up the pattern a bit. For instance, instead of 01:02:526 (1) you could do something like
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405188 -- hopefully this makes sense, if not, I can help you more. Keep in mind, this is just a suggestion and is not necessary, it would just make the beatmap more interesting to not have the exact same pattern everywhere. I'm sorry, I tried but I fear of making things worse and lose previous mods about some symetry etc (Making like this makes overlaps and I may do many bad ones and I prefer not sorry)

Insane

00:25:310 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Okay, I like the way this looks but I would like to make one recommendation. Extend the green slider (5) further to replace the blue (1). http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405192 Obviously, make it look prettier, but this is the way I'd do it. I feel like the position that you ended the green slider at doesn't correspond properly with the beat and it's more intuitive as a player when done the way I've done it in that screenshot. Also, follow suit at the other parts of the song that do that type of slider. Again, just a suggestion, you don't HAVE to do it but I feel it would significantly improve the beatmap. You also may want to go through and look for other instances where the slider ends sooner than it should like that. Yes sound better, changed.

Storyboard

To be perfectly honest with you, the storyboard at the end where you say "Thanks for playing" is horrible. I personally would not play this beatmap again if this remained. If you want to put your name in a corner during the game, out of the way but visible, that's perfectly fine, but announcing it at the end like that seems really cocky. This was more a test of the SB feature but it's not usfull so deleted and full submit done.

Other

Offset is fine. All in all, these are great beatmaps. Insane is right around the difficulty level that I enjoy playing, so if my complaints with it were resolved I'd definitely play it. Also, I'd suggest that you stop complaining about the beatmap not having been ranked yet. It looks to me like you're pretty close to being ranked, and that it will likely be ranked very soon. I wish you the best.

P.S. To the player who was saying this song doesn't fit with osu, I disagree wholeheartedly. It's songs like this that we don't have enough of, because we're flooded with anime fanboy music that I, frankly, couldn't care for one bit. This is an awesome song.

Armin wrote:

[General]
*Tags like "videogames" or duplicates like "Dragonball" (when it's already in source) in tags are kinda useless in my opinion. feel free to remove them if you agree Removed
*am I or the mp3 isn't so-good? where did you download it? If it's taken from a GBA game there are a lot of ways to get a perfect audio mp3. It's a rip from the game using an emulator but i was reencoded two times. Re ripped from the emulator and encoded one time at 192kbps.
*I feel you could add some custom hitsounds, it would be awesome as hell. If you are wondering where you could take them... well take a look at : I don't realy know what to take, I've taked a normal-hitclap and the link for Cymbal Pack is dead. But I like the osu! original hitsoud too so not a big problem ^^
Clap Packs:

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(Link 1) (Link 2)
(Link 3)

Snare Packs:

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(Link 1) (Link 2)
(Link 3)

Cymbal Pack:

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(Link)

Percussion Pack:

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(Link)

[Hard]

00:58:123 (x) - This break just makes no sense Removed

[Insane]

01:28:947 (8) - ending a slider on a blue tick is not so good when it doesn't fit any instrumenta hit. I suggest you to make it end on the next red tick Sound better, changed.
01:33:350 (7,8,9) - feels a bit weird to hit... if i were you I'd reverse the position of 8 and 9 Done

Weez wrote:

General
- The mp3 file is waay too loud making the hitsounds really hard to catch, was able to lower it soo here : http://puu.sh/WvVD I don't hear a differance and you file is 128kbps when mine is 192 so no change but I may record the music agin with lower volme.

Insane
00:05:179 (3) - Remove this because the way you have the other combos set up you have a pause on the white tick. Might as well keep it consistent. Nope I think it follow the music better with this note and I aslo done thing like this later in the song.
00:48:929 (1,3) - Remove the finishes here, sounds better without it. Yes
01:48:020 (1,3) - Same as above. Yes

Hard
00:39:838 (5,6) - These you can blanket them better

Like so

Yes
01:38:645 (2,3) - Same this as above

Like so

Yes

Normal
looks ok

Good luck with getting this ranked ^_^ Thanks & thanks for mod

Jebok wrote:

[Normal]

00:40:122 (3) - Move it a bit down so that it does not overlap with the previous (1) slider. Done
01:01:429 (1) - Move it a bit down (like 2 grids) so its further from the prev. combo's (2). Done
01:08:247 (1) - x:288 and y:176 I can't do that, this broke completly the spacing, I have moved it so now it overlaps better with the previous (2)
01:09:100 (2) - x:180 and y:32 Nope this broke spacing.
01:38:929 (3) - Make it a nicer curl at the end, so that the shape is more of a curled corner. I don't realy understand what you want so I changed the slider but I don't know about the result.

[Hard]

00:11:429 (1,2,3) - Make (3) a straight shape going up then move all x:392 and y:256. So now you use whole grid instead of crowding the green and the fallowing blue combo in the middle. Also, fix the spacing of (4) and (5) by moving (4) to x:212 and y:76 and (5) to x:208 and y:168. Done Place (2) and (3) at 00:14:554 x:212 and y:76 also and move (4) x:120 and y:144. Now they don't overlap as well. Try out the whole thing to see how it looks~ Make the end part not like this because the spacing don't work
00:21:372 (4) - I think you shouldn't be putting (4) here because previous combo's (2) and (3) were here. Use the whole available place please. To fix this maybe turn the (3) at 00:20:804 vertically then move it x:188 and y:108 and then remove (4) and repeat the slider instead? Done
There are many spaces such as this I could point out. The rythm is fine but the spacing is like you crowd it sooo much. An incredibly good example is at 00:37:850. Those two notes are below the slider... why?? Before the curled slider you had notes in the same space so why don't use the space ABOVE the slider?? Putted thes notes above the slider.

[Insane]

00:22:225 (6) - x:140 and y:304 Yes
00:37:281 (4) - That's out of the grid. And? Having slider like this is okey since they are not off screen.
00:44:100 (2) - ^^
01:42:338 (1,2) - ^^
01:51:429 (1) - ^ The grid is there for a reason...^

Please link me to the SCOREBOARD next time, not the thread. Overall can be ranked, but the out grids need to be fixed and I would specially highlight the spacing. It should be more spread, don't wander somewhere with your combo and then wonder back like you doing a bunch of times. Wonder once and then choose another space to wonder, don't make the combo go back to where it came from!

1. 00:11:429 (1) - Pour ce slider, essaye de ne pas faire trop de forme avec les sliders de 1/2. C'est trop petit pour faire certaines formes. Tu pourrais au moins le courbé, ou le mettre bien droit.
2. 00:40:975 (1,2) - C'est vachement vide ici... Met un reverse arrow au slider 1. Pour ne pas avoir un gros spacing, déplace aussi le slider (2) plus près du (1).
   
   Comme cela

   
3. 01:51:429 (1) - La forme de ce slider me semble bizarre, on dirrais un "L" q.q' Bref, courbe-le comme ceci, ca fait plus symple;
   
   

1. 00:31:031 (3) - Ce slider me semble bizarre. Peux-tu essayé de reproduire ceci?; Regarde tes sliders , essaye de faire quelleque chose plus détendu.
   
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2. 00:50:065 (1) - Ajoute un nouveau combo ici puisque le son de la musique reprend.
3. 01:49:156 (1) - ^

1. 00:19:100 (4) - Je pourrais te dire que pour faire un "blancket" avec le cercle précédent, tu pourrais déplacé le slider une ou deux casse(s) vers la gauche.
2. 00:40:406 - Ajoute un clap ici puisque dans la musique il y a un genre de drum/basse aussi, tu en as ajouté dans la première partie.
3. 00:42:679 (3) - Same as above.
4. 00:49:213 (2,3,4) - C'est rien de grave, mais pour qu'ils soient parfaitement alignés avec 00:48:929 (1) -, bougent-les de une casse vers la gauche. Et ajoute un clap sur le cercle (4) pour la raison au 00:40:406
5. 00:07:736 (4) - Ça peut sembler bizarre parce que j'ai pointé un truc dans les 49 secondes et la je suis dans les 7 secondes, donc, comme dit plus haut, pour qu'il sois parfaitement aligné, déplace-le une case vers la droite (Si tu utilises le Size Grid 4, biensûr)
6. 00:51:770 (3) - Pareil pour 00:40:406
7. 01:14:071 (7) - Stack-le avec le (3) et bouge ceci 01:14:497 (10) - à x:496 y:132. La raison ai, le (7) va être aligné avec le slider (10) et je trouvais que le cercle (7) étais éloigné..
8. 01:25:861 - Tu pourrais ajouté un clap ici comme les raisons mentionnés plus haut.
9. 01:48:304 (2,3,4) - Comme dit un peu plus haut, déplace ces cercles deux cases vers la droite, ils vont êtes plus centré du (1)
10. 01:50:861 (3) - Ajoute un clap comme j'ai dit pour 00:40:406.

Gabe wrote:

Je vais t'aidé un peu...

[Overall]
•J'ai remarqué que le volume dans chaque difficultés est à 100%. Puisque le son de la musique est très forte, il est préférable de mettre le volume de chaque timings à environ 80%.
•En même temps, d'autre personne vont te demandé de supprimé le .osb dans le fichier de la beatmap. Fait-le maintenant et full-submit.

[Normal]

1. 00:11:429 (1) - Pour ce slider, essaye de ne pas faire trop de forme avec les sliders de 1/2. C'est trop petit pour faire certaines formes. Tu pourrais au moins le courbé, ou le mettre bien droit.
2. 00:40:975 (1,2) - C'est vachement vide ici... Met un reverse arrow au slider 1. Pour ne pas avoir un gros spacing, déplace aussi le slider (2) plus près du (1).
   
   Comme cela

   
3. 01:51:429 (1) - La forme de ce slider me semble bizarre, on dirrais un "L" q.q' Bref, courbe-le comme ceci, ca fait plus symple;
   
   

[Hard]

1. 00:31:031 (3) - Ce slider me semble bizarre. Peux-tu essayé de reproduire ceci?; Regarde tes sliders , essaye de faire quelleque chose plus détendu.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:50:065 (1) - Ajoute un nouveau combo ici puisque le son de la musique reprend.
3. 01:49:156 (1) - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:19:100 (4) - Je pourrais te dire que pour faire un "blancket" avec le cercle précédent, tu pourrais déplacé le slider une ou deux casse(s) vers la gauche.
2. 00:40:406 - Ajoute un clap ici puisque dans la musique il y a un genre de drum/basse aussi, tu en as ajouté dans la première partie.
3. 00:42:679 (3) - Same as above.
4. 00:49:213 (2,3,4) - C'est rien de grave, mais pour qu'ils soient parfaitement alignés avec 00:48:929 (1) -, bougent-les de une casse vers la gauche. Et ajoute un clap sur le cercle (4) pour la raison au 00:40:406
5. 00:07:736 (4) - Ça peut sembler bizarre parce que j'ai pointé un truc dans les 49 secondes et la je suis dans les 7 secondes, donc, comme dit plus haut, pour qu'il sois parfaitement aligné, déplace-le une case vers la droite (Si tu utilises le Size Grid 4, biensûr)
6. 00:51:770 (3) - Pareil pour 00:40:406
7. 01:14:071 (7) - Stack-le avec le (3) et bouge ceci 01:14:497 (10) - à x:496 y:132. La raison ai, le (7) va être aligné avec le slider (10) et je trouvais que le cercle (7) étais éloigné..
8. 01:25:861 - Tu pourrais ajouté un clap ici comme les raisons mentionnés plus haut.
9. 01:48:304 (2,3,4) - Comme dit un peu plus haut, déplace ces cercles deux cases vers la droite, ils vont êtes plus centré du (1)
10. 01:50:861 (3) - Ajoute un clap comme j'ai dit pour 00:40:406.

Voici une petite étoile pour toi~

Tout fait, merci pour le mod et l'étoile (For eng guys : All done, thanks for mod & star)

Stefan wrote:

'sup. You didn't wrote me at last friday, baka. :< Yey I know I'm baka D:

[General]
- About the Title.. does the Dragon Ball GT have to stand there, because for the correct title of the OST? Or did you set it in your own purpose? IDK if this is the real title I set it by myself and IDK if
- About the Volume: I would increase it to 85%.

[Normal]
I perfer x0.9 as Distance, the current one let look the Hitobjects really crumbled. I'm sorry but changing this is like a remap and I don't want to lose all other mods applyed by changing all the map sorry.
00:00:066 (1,2) - Spacing Error. Fix
00:02:338 (1) - The Slider is fine, but in future, try to use this sliderpoints: http://puu.sh/12lfM
00:03:759 (3,1) - Spacing Error. Fix
00:06:031 (2) - Use default Clap at the End. Done
00:12:850 (3,4) - Spacing Error. Fix
00:15:122 (3,1,2) - ^ Fix
00:18:247 (1) - Because of 00:16:827 (2) this looks really ugly and overlapped. It's my opinion, so it is up to you. Okey changed hope it's better
00:19:668 (2) - Use default Clap at the End. Done
00:27:054 - Add a Circle, it fits good. Okey
00:29:327 (1,2) - Spacing Error. Fix
00:31:600 - ^ Fix
00:36:429 (1) - Finish at the Start. Done
00:36:429 (1,2,3) - The flow feels awkward.. Place (2) at 440;212 and (3) at 352;140. Okey
00:43:247 (2) - Remove Finish from the End. Done
00:48:929 (1) - Remove Finish from the Start.Done
00:48:929 (1,2) - Please let it look similar to this: http://puu.sh/12lGV Done
00:58:588 (1) - Remove Finish. Done
01:05:122 (3) - Use default Clap at the End. Done
01:30:690 - Add a Circle. Done
01:40:065 (1) - Rotate it for -29°. +29 right?
01:42:338 (1) - Remove Finish at the End. Done
01:48:020 (1) - ^ Done

It looks okay, but there is a lot of work to do. About the Slider, I won't complain, since it is your first Map and some other people also made this kind of Sliders. The Flow is sometimes strange, but playable.

[Hard]
00:24:781 (1) - This fits absolutley not with the Music. Try this: http://puu.sh/12Tfy Done
00:29:327 (1) - ^ Done
00:36:429 (1) - Finish at the Start. Done
00:48:929 (1) - Please remove Finish at the End, it sounds awful. Done
00:54:043 (3) - Finish at the End. Done
00:58:588 (1) - It sounds much better when it ends at the red tick before. I prefer like now sorry no change
00:59:156 (1) - Remove NC, it is definitly not neccessary. Done
01:23:872 (1) - Same as 00:24:781 (1). Done
01:28:418 (1) - ^ Done
01:48:020 (1) - Remove Finish at the End. Done
01:53:134 (3) - Finish at the End. Done

The Diff is very monotonous, the Triple Streams aren't really special and let make the Diff boring. You can do something like this (I took 00:06:884 (1,2,3) as example). Also, you should not overuse many 1/4 Slider in a Diff, (00:00:066 (1) or 00:01:344 (4)) and that). Same reason as the triple Streams. I'm sorry but changing this is like a compleate remap and after so many mods and time used on the map I prefer not but I'll try to do better with my other maps.

[Insane]
00:25:350 (4,1) - I don't get it why does (1) goes at left. The flow is awkward. Changed
00:36:429 (1) - Set Finish. Changed
01:08:247 (1,2) - Reverse the Position. It plays much better then. This broke distance and it plays okey like so no change sorry
01:30:690 - I really would set a Circle here.Done

Diff is actually good, I expected some more Jumps, but Insane Diffs don't need always Jumps.

Arnold0 wrote:

Hum... I'll probaly change when I'll get another mod.