Thank you
Thanks for mod-Gamu- wrote:
hi >w<
Requests from my queue~
purple software
[General]
●Tags: Add "opening" "eroge" "hentai" "game"? // I don't see necessity to add them. Specially "hentai" D:
●turn off the "letterbox during breaks"? // It is needed for Easy and Normal diff.
[Easy]
●00:33:562 (2) - Move (x:324 y:160). Overlap with the previous (3). Looks pretty. // It isn't overlapped with anything
●00:51:720 (1) - Add a whistle? // Nope
●01:01:193 (3) - Add a new combo? Because it is at the start of the kiai time. // Since previous notes are short to divide combo group, I wanna keep them as it is.
●01:32:871 (1) - Add a whistle? // OK
[Normal]
●CS-1? For beginners. // CS3 is too big for normal imo, at least I have never used it in my maps.
●00:21:128 (2) - 1.2x spacing, why? Think should be 1.0x. Move (x:384 y:192) // Because it seems very close to previous note
●00:21:325 (3) - Move (x:404 y:148) // I don't see any big difference
●00:51:720 (1) - Same as Easy diff
●01:01:193 (3) - Same as Easy diff
●01:32:871 (1) - Same as Easy diff // Added
[Insane]
●01:00:009 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - It is recommended that you change the rhythm. Don't fit the music // Are you sure? Delete them and listen to music carefully. They fit perfectly.
●01:01:193 (5) - Same as Easy diff
●01:13:825 (5) - Add a new combo? // I explained above
That's all
good luck~
-Gamu- wrote:
hi >w<
Requests from my queue~
purple software
[General]
●Tags: Add "opening" "eroge" "hentai" "game"?
●turn off the "letterbox during breaks"?
[Easy]
●00:33:562 (2) - Move (x:324 y:160). Overlap with the previous (3). Looks pretty.
●00:51:720 (1) - Add a whistle?
●01:01:193 (3) - Add a new combo? Because it is at the start of the kiai time.
●01:32:871 (1) - Add a whistle?
[Normal]
●CS-1? For beginners.
●00:21:128 (2) - 1.2x spacing, why? Think should be 1.0x. Move (x:384 y:192)
●00:21:325 (3) - Move (x:404 y:148)
●00:51:720 (1) - Same as Easy diff
●01:01:193 (3) - Same as Easy diff
●01:32:871 (1) - Same as Easy diff
[Cilvery's Hard]
●01:01:193 (3) - Same as Easy diff
●01:03:759 (1) - Move (x:404 y:180)そして、01:04:351 (2) - Move (x:308 y:168). こうすると(2)が前の(6)のスライダーの始点に重なる。
●うーん、にゅーこんぼをもう少し細かく切ったほうがいいと思いました(個人的に)。Insaneみたいな感じの分け方。少し細かくしてみました!!
私としたら、Insaneのにゅーこんぼの分け方は良いと思う。
[Insane]
●01:00:009 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - It is recommended that you change the rhythm. Don't fit the music
●01:01:193 (5) - Same as Easy diff
●01:13:825 (5) - Add a new combo?
That's all
good luck~
Thanks for moddingHinsvar wrote:
Yo.
Let's mod this.
*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.
>General>Easy
- The BG is... uh, you know... (Hint: Look at the lower left corner of the BG.) Maybe change it into something less revealing? // I will try to fix :3
- I think a 1500 ms lead-in should be enough; 2000 feels a bit too long. // Let's go middle ground 1750ms
>Normal
- AR+1? I played with AR2 (the current AR) and AR3 (my suggestion) and I think AR3 goes better. AR2 makes things look a little crowded, IMO. // The song isn't so fast, it's fine for me.
- 01:12:641 (3,4) - Uh... won't new players (well, they're the 'supposed customers' [the people supposed to play this] of this diff after all) get tripped by a 1/2 stack? Maybe you should change it to a 1/2 slider. // fixed
>Insane
- CS -1? With the current CS, the objects look too small and has a pretty wide spacing for a Normal diff. // I don't know what screen resolution you're using, CS4 is already big enough when over 1280*960
k, this mapset is great. I would love to make an Extra/Extreme/'whatever-you-call-it' diff but this is already pending and Insane is hard enough anyway
- 01:00:009 (1) - Eh... Maybe make it louder as time passes? You know, gradual volume increase with inherited timing points? I think this slider will work better with that. But then again, this slider's appearance is pretty unexpected for me. // Fixed volume
- 01:39:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Uh... not sure with this. A 1/2 stream after hitting the 01:38:693 (4,5,6) triplet is... I don't know what to say, actually. // Uh... look at the pattern?
Good luck on the way
Also, this is the 100th mapset I have modded by request on my queue.
\:D/ // GJ :3
으잌ㅋRa-s wrote:
Everything is suggestion
[Easy]
01:50:141 (2) - 밑으로 한칸? // OK
[Normal]
ㅁㄴㅇㄹ
[Insane]
허허커헠
01:18:364 (4) - NC? // No
01:28:036 (2) - 흐름같은건 모르겠고 모양은 이런걸 선호함 (개인취향...ㅠㅠ) http://puu.sh/EwoO // 별 다른 차이가 없네요.
정말 쓸때없는 모딩 봐주셔서 감사합니다 (_ _)
반삭하러가기 전의 마지막 모딩 3>
Rika chan arigatoooo!!Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hello ~ ykcarrot ~
Random check beatmap ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions[Cilvery's Hard]
- 01:07:509 (1) - Move 1 grid left looks better. Fixed
- 01:29:417 (9) - Stack on 01:29:614 (1) - start point,flow much better.
- 00:00:799 (1) - Remove simple new combo,looks confused. Fixed
- 01:30:207 (1,1) - ^ Fixed
- 00:47:772 (1,1) - ^ Fixed
That's all ~ awesome mapset ~
Call me back recheck ~ if you think ready for go ~
Thanks for modding and star, kiou oneesama!kioukiou wrote:
[Normal]
00:09:286 (1) - maybe move it left 1 grid. (Nazi) // Fixed. You have hawk eyes xD
[Cilvery's Hard]
01:01:193 - There has two green lines set at same point, delete one of them. // Fixed
Could not find any really problem, star.
288,176,25470,2,0,B|240:184|228:224|228:224|208:252|164:240|160:208,1,170
Thanks for mod and stars!bossandy wrote:
Hi yk! Sorry for huge late ~ Request from my queue~
- Red : I think you must to fix.
- Blue : Need to discuss.
- Black : Just suggest or nazi.
[ General]
- 00:48:562 - Maybe reduce volume to 40% or less? , the music become quite here // 40% sounds too quiet for me, so fixed to 50%
- 01:12:838 - I think this kiai time should end at 01:12:246 - // Yes, you're right.
[ Easy]
- Why no N:2 hitsounds on this diff? on purpose ? // Because I didn't use N:C2 clap.
- 00:29:220 (1,2) - Maybe you want Swap New Combo to make the same pattern like Normal diff? , or you can swap New Combo on Normal diff // Fixed Easy
- 00:41:851 (1,2) - Same as above // ^
- 01:00:799 (2) - Maybe you can add a clap here , drum is start here // It's bass drum. I didn't add bass drum in this section intentionally.
- 01:12:641 (3,4) - Change to a short slider to make it easier? // I wanna keep circles.
- 01:43:825 (2,2) - Add New Combo on these objects? Make the New Combo at the same place like other diffs // NCing pattern of Easy is different to others.
[ Normal]
- 00:20:141 (1,2) - Spacing is not correct? // On purpose. 1/1 spacing is too close.
- 01:00:799 (2) - Same as Easy
- Nothing more to say~
[ Insane]
- 01:51:522 (9) - Remove whistle like other diffs? // No, I used whistles at this part only for Insane.
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Ya , awesome song and mapest~
Sorry for my poor mod , I hope they can help you // It was helpful. ^^
Have my Star~ Good Luck :3
Thanks for mod and star!kanpakyin wrote:
Hi!
[General][Easy]
- Everything look clear!
[Normal]
- Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
- 01:12:641 (3,4) - This is only 1/2 click in this diff, so I would remove it if I were you or change it to 1/2 for consistency. // I want to keep it as it is, because they are accentual beats.
- Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
- 00:13:825 (1) - How about adding a finish sound at the beginning of the slider to be consistent with 00:10:667 (1) - ? // No, there is no cymbal.
[Insane]
- Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
- 00:03:364 (2) - I would remove the whistle at the end of the slider so that 00:03:957 (3) - the whisle on this note can be prominent. // I prefer following every synth.
Fabulous!
- Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
- 01:16:983 (2,3) - It probably me only, I feel like a jump here. // Fixed. I confirmed that small jumps was used at previous part.
- Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
- 01:06:720 (3) - A whistle here? // OK
I explained about this above. viewtopic.php?p=1639798#p1639798kanpakyin wrote:
[General]
- Please remove (Short Ver.) from the title because of this unless the (Short Ver.) is given by official.