kioukiou wrote:

[Normal]
00:09:286 (1) - maybe move it left 1 grid. (Nazi) // Fixed. You have hawk eyes xD

[Cilvery's Hard]
01:01:193 - There has two green lines set at same point, delete one of them. // Fixed

Could not find any really problem, star.

1. 00:48:562 - Maybe reduce volume to 40% or less? , the music become quite here
2. 01:12:838 - I think this kiai time should end at 01:12:246 -

1. Why no N:2 hitsounds on this diff? on purpose ?
2. 00:29:220 (1,2) - Maybe you want Swap New Combo to make the same pattern like Normal diff? , or you can swap New Combo on Normal diff
3. 00:41:851 (1,2) - Same as above
4. 01:00:799 (2) - Maybe you can add a clap here , drum is start here
5. 01:12:641 (3,4) - Change to a short slider to make it easier?
6. 01:43:825 (2,2) - Add New Combo on these objects? Make the New Combo at the same place like other diffs

1. 00:20:141 (1,2) - Spacing is not correct?
2. 01:00:799 (2) - Same as Easy
3. Nothing more to say~

1. I think you miss some important clap , I try to point out all of them , add them will be better and follow the music
   
   1. 00:12:443 (2) -
   2. 00:13:036 (4) -
   3. 00:13:430 (5) -
   4. 01:44:022 (2) -
   5. 01:44:614 (4) -
   6. 01:45:009 (5) -
2. 00:25:470 (6) - I think this slider is a bit ugly for me try this?
   
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   288,176,25470,2,0,B|240:184|228:224|228:224|208:252|164:240|160:208,1,170

3. 00:47:772 (2) - Remove whistle may follow the vocal more
4. 00:58:628 (5,6,7) - Different spacing , I think you can make it the same :3
5. 01:45:404 (1) - Remove finish , there is nothing in the music , and it sounds very loud here
6. 01:51:029 (6) - Add a note here with clap sounds better

1. 01:51:522 (9) - Remove whistle like other diffs?

Ya , awesome song and mapest~
Sorry for my poor mod , I hope they can help you
Have my Star~ Good Luck :3

bossandy wrote:

Hi yk! Sorry for huge late ~ Request from my queue~
　

1. Red : I think you must to fix.
2. Blue : Need to discuss.
3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.

　
[ General]
　

1. 00:48:562 - Maybe reduce volume to 40% or less? , the music become quite here // 40% sounds too quiet for me, so fixed to 50%
2. 01:12:838 - I think this kiai time should end at 01:12:246 - // Yes, you're right.

　
[ Easy]
　

1. Why no N:2 hitsounds on this diff? on purpose ? // Because I didn't use N:C2 clap.
2. 00:29:220 (1,2) - Maybe you want Swap New Combo to make the same pattern like Normal diff? , or you can swap New Combo on Normal diff // Fixed Easy
3. 00:41:851 (1,2) - Same as above // ^
4. 01:00:799 (2) - Maybe you can add a clap here , drum is start here // It's bass drum. I didn't add bass drum in this section intentionally.
5. 01:12:641 (3,4) - Change to a short slider to make it easier? // I wanna keep circles.
6. 01:43:825 (2,2) - Add New Combo on these objects? Make the New Combo at the same place like other diffs // NCing pattern of Easy is different to others.

　
[ Normal]
　

1. 00:20:141 (1,2) - Spacing is not correct? // On purpose. 1/1 spacing is too close.
2. 01:00:799 (2) - Same as Easy
3. Nothing more to say~

　
[ Insane]
　

1. 01:51:522 (9) - Remove whistle like other diffs? // No, I used whistles at this part only for Insane.

　
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Ya , awesome song and mapest~
Sorry for my poor mod , I hope they can help you // It was helpful. ^^
Have my Star~ Good Luck :3

1. Everything look clear!

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 01:12:641 (3,4) - This is only 1/2 click in this diff, so I would remove it if I were you or change it to 1/2 for consistency.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:13:825 (1) - How about adding a finish sound at the beginning of the slider to be consistent with 00:10:667 (1) - ?

1. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:03:364 (2) - I would remove the whistle at the end of the slider so that 00:03:957 (3) - the whisle on this note can be prominent.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:02:575 (1) - It would be nice if you could add a new combo here because the combo length of this combo is longer than others, so a nc here can make it more consistent.
   2. 01:50:141 (4,5,6,7) - A suggestion here, probably make a small jump here because this is the end of the slider (also the map) so I am expecting a jump here and a jump fits the music quite well.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:20:536 (x) - I think the 30% volume should be started from here because the drum sound is stoped at 00:20:338 - .
   2. 00:29:614 ~ 00:32:772 - I have a thought here, how about adding a whistle on the red tick in this period? It sounds great to me after adding.
   3. 00:57:049 (1) - I feel strange here because of volume change. Probably remove it or decrease the volume here?

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 01:16:983 (2,3) - It probably me only, I feel like a jump here.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 01:06:720 (3) - A whistle here?

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi!

[General]

1. Everything look clear!

[Easy]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 01:12:641 (3,4) - This is only 1/2 click in this diff, so I would remove it if I were you or change it to 1/2 for consistency. // I want to keep it as it is, because they are accentual beats.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:13:825 (1) - How about adding a finish sound at the beginning of the slider to be consistent with 00:10:667 (1) - ? // No, there is no cymbal.

[Normal]

1. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:03:364 (2) - I would remove the whistle at the end of the slider so that 00:03:957 (3) - the whisle on this note can be prominent. // I prefer following every synth.

[Insane]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 01:16:983 (2,3) - It probably me only, I feel like a jump here. // Fixed. I confirmed that small jumps was used at previous part.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 01:06:720 (3) - A whistle here? // OK

Fabulous!

1. Please remove (Short Ver.) from the title because of this unless the (Short Ver.) is given by official.

kanpakyin wrote:

[General]

1. Please remove (Short Ver.) from the title because of this unless the (Short Ver.) is given by official.