Philippines wrote:

• General

1. Title should be "I Wanna See You", not "I wanna see you". no change.
   from official site
   
2. Why two "song" in tags? One song is enough. fixed
   
   
3. You're beatmap is missing a background. Please find one and make sure to rename it to BG.jpg. Paste it directly in the beatmap folder. fixed
   
   
4. You're missing an SB Element: bokashi.jpg

• Hard

1. 00:09:109 (2) - New combo bug. Please put a new combo here. fixed
   
   
2. OD +1

• Normal

1. 02:03:964 (3) - The slider has already crossed the corner. Please move it away from it.
   
   
2. AR +1
   
   
3. OD +1

1. I guess this single is called 'Tsutaetai Koto/I Wanna See You', so maybe add Tsutaetai Koto to the tags?

1. 00:28:408 (2) - personally, I don't like how it looks like D: Make it more smoother:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:00:888 (2) - maybe make the same slider as 00:59:946 (1) - ? Looks better D:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Oh, and I'm not fan of too curved sliders, such as the 01:01:829 (1) - . I prefer smooth sliders 00:59:946 (1) - :<
3. 01:03:712 (4) - again, maybe make it more smoother as before?
4. 01:10:773 (3,4) - move it up to stack (4) with 01:09:361 (1) - ? (nazi)
5. 01:26:307 (4) - toooooo curved and looks ugly, maybe make something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:02:081 (1) - you forgot finish
7. 03:13:630 (1) - I don't like this short break before the end. It's irrationally, please, map it ;~;
8. Also, you have almost no whistle-hitsounds and as the result, your map is quite... 'dry'. (You have more whistles on Hard). So, add some whistles:
   
   1. 00:10:050 (2) -
   2. 00:10:992 (4) - to the end
   3. 00:12:875 (1,2,3,4) - to the beginning
   4. 00:17:582 (2) -
   5. 00:20:406 (1,2,3) - to the beginning
   6. 00:40:176 (2) -
   7. 00:41:118 (4) - beginning
   8. 00:43:001 (1) -
   9. 00:44:884 (4) -
   10. 00:46:766 (1) - beginning
       ... and so on.

1. 00:18:053 (4) - this slider is hidden by hitburst of 00:17:347 (2) - . Rearrange it.
2. 01:26:071 (6) - you can make it look better!
3. 01:27:013 (8) - ^
4. 01:36:898 (5,1) - This jump is too sudden as you have no ones before. Move it closer.
5. 02:09:613 (1) - maybe extend to 02:13:378 - ?
6. 02:52:919 (1) - move it some grids left to avoid touching 02:53:860 (2) -
7. 03:13:630 - again, please, map this part
   
   You have better hitsounds here!

1. Nothing really wrong here, I suppose.

1. No errors, but I think that this diff is... boring.

1. 00:18:053 (4) - The end of the slider is hidden by 00:17:347 (2)'s hitburst. It's going to be a bit hard to read this. Sure?
2. 03:12:689 (4) - Since most of this slider's body is covered by 03:11:747 (1,2)'s hitbursts, it's going to be... well, as above, hard to read. Again, sure with this?

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hello!

General

1. I guess this single is called 'Tsutaetai Koto/I Wanna See You', so maybe add Tsutaetai Koto to the tags?

Normal

1. 00:28:408 (2) - personally, I don't like how it looks like D: Make it more smoother:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:00:888 (2) - maybe make the same slider as 00:59:946 (1) - ? Looks better D:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Oh, and I'm not fan of too curved sliders, such as the 01:01:829 (1) - . I prefer smooth sliders 00:59:946 (1) - :<
3. 01:03:712 (4) - again, maybe make it more smoother as before?
4. 01:10:773 (3,4) - move it up to stack (4) with 01:09:361 (1) - ? (nazi)
5. 01:26:307 (4) - toooooo curved and looks ugly, maybe make something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:02:081 (1) - you forgot finish
7. 03:13:630 (1) - I don't like this short break before the end. It's irrationally, please, map it ;~;
8. Also, you have almost no whistle-hitsounds and as the result, your map is quite... 'dry'. (You have more whistles on Hard). So, add some whistles:
   
   1. 00:10:050 (2) -
   2. 00:10:992 (4) - to the end
   3. 00:12:875 (1,2,3,4) - to the beginning
   4. 00:17:582 (2) -
   5. 00:20:406 (1,2,3) - to the beginning
   6. 00:40:176 (2) -
   7. 00:41:118 (4) - beginning
   8. 00:43:001 (1) -
   9. 00:44:884 (4) -
   10. 00:46:766 (1) - beginning
       ... and so on.

Hard

1. 00:18:053 (4) - this slider is hidden by hitburst of 00:17:347 (2) - . Rearrange it.
2. 01:26:071 (6) - you can make it look better!
3. 01:27:013 (8) - ^
4. 01:36:898 (5,1) - This jump is too sudden as you have no ones before. Move it closer.
5. 02:09:613 (1) - maybe extend to 02:13:378 - ?
6. 02:52:919 (1) - move it some grids left to avoid touching 02:53:860 (2) -
7. 03:13:630 - again, please, map this part
   
   You have better hitsounds here!

I love your map and song >w<
Good luck!

Hinsvar wrote:

\:D/

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General

1. Nothing really wrong here, I suppose.

>Normal

1. No errors, but I think that this diff is... boring.

>Hard

1. 00:18:053 (4) - The end of the slider is hidden by 00:17:347 (2)'s hitburst. It's going to be a bit hard to read this. Sure?
2. 03:12:689 (4) - Since most of this slider's body is covered by 03:11:747 (1,2)'s hitbursts, it's going to be... well, as above, hard to read. Again, sure with this?

Seems to be a good mapset.

Good luck on the way

rem1rya wrote:

こんにちは！
もっどありがとう！M4Mー！((((((～　´∀｀)～

[Normal]
Change spin start point 02:09:848 - from 02:10:083 -

[Hard]
素晴らしかった・・・・

コンボカラーの使い方に感激しました( ；∀；)
綺麗な配置でとてもいい譜面でした！
指摘が何もなかったですゴメンナサイ(m´・ω・｀)m

Jayel wrote:

I requested me for modding but I see nothing wrong.

So I'll just shoot a star because I like Abe Mao.

1. とてもきれいなmapだと思います。

1. 00:30:291 (4) - 折り返しを削除してみてはいかがでしょう。

1. 00:23:466 (4) - 00：23：584 で終わってもいいのでは。

h-728 wrote:

Modありがとうございました。

General

1. とてもきれいなmapだと思います。

thanks~

Normal

1. 00:30:291 (4) - 折り返しを削除してみてはいかがでしょう。

歌詞の音を拾いたいのでNo change
Hard

1. 00:23:466 (4) - 00：23：584 で終わってもいいのでは。

青線にノートを置かないようにするためNo change

すべて提案です。気に入らなければ無視してください。ｇｌ

Garven wrote:

Set preview time to 53240 on both difficulties and I'll bubble~

0,12,"BG.jpg"

1. Fixed offset (+12)
2. Removed very short and unnecessary break in Normal
3. OD+1 in Hard

wmfchris wrote:

About the section of 00:08:370 - ~ 00:22:901 - in hard: if you listen to the music carefully, the drum beat in every 2,3,4th beat are the same. Currently yo're clapping on the 2,4th beat but clapping on the 3rd beat as well fit the song even more, though this is not very significant (in standard mode) so it's just up to you. The rest is fine and ready.

wmfchris wrote:

orz sry for being late.