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yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (Short Ver.)

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Niko-nyan
here we go from my queue!

Easy
01:25:821 add kiai in here

Normal
same with easy

Moonlight's hard
same with easy
CS+1

Taiko mode by Nyquill same with easy
insane too + CS+1
ririco
the right title is:

Artist: yanaginagi

Title: Vidro Moyou (TV Size)

it's not Short Ver. >.<
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

frans_niko wrote:

here we go from my queue!

Easy
01:25:821 add kiai in here aite

Normal
same with easy ^

Moonlight's hard
same with easy ^
CS+1 i prefer bigger circle

Taiko mode by Nyquill same with easy kk
insane too + CS+1 kiai time followed, circle size same as hard
thank you for mod~

-Sekai- wrote:

the right title is:

Artist: yanaginagi

Title: Vidro Moyou (TV Size)

it's not Short Ver. >.<
well the audio is 1:44...i just pulled the ed video from the anime so yeah...
i will ask around to see what others think.
TTTTTTTTTTTT
From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

[Easy]

整体很好,尤其拉的slider很用心,很美观的

00:58:798 (1) - 这个结尾处用一个soft的finish吧

关于NC的建议

00:40:936 (4) - 加个NC
00:41:852 (1) - 去掉NC
00:43:684 (3) - 加个NC

[Normal]

00:58:798 (2) - soft finish?

[Moonlight's Hard]

00:10:936 - add a NC here
00:14:600 - ^
00:45:287 - add a circle? stack with next (1)
00:17:133 - useless green timing
01:25:249 - ^
01:25:821 - ^
01:29:485 - ^

[Insane]

00:51:012 (4) - 左移一格 下移一格
00:51:699 (7) - ^
01:13:913 - 多余的绿线

很好的insane~

[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]

00:29:330 (2) - Unsnapped circle
00:29:406 (3) - ^
00:30:017 (2) - ^
00:30:093 (3) - ^
00:30:246 (5) - ^
00:30:322 (6) - ^

Good luck!
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

[Easy]

整体很好,尤其拉的slider很用心,很美观的

00:58:798 (1) - 这个结尾处用一个soft的finish吧 用了normal finish

关于NC的建议

00:40:936 (4) - 加个NC ok
00:41:852 (1) - 去掉NC ^
00:43:684 (3) - 加个NC ^

[Normal]

00:58:798 (2) - soft finish? normal finish

[Moonlight's Hard]

00:10:936 - add a NC here
00:14:600 - ^ ^
00:45:287 - add a circle? stack with next (1) ok
00:17:133 - useless green timing 删了
01:25:249 - ^ 这个和下面的重新排了一下
01:25:821 - ^
01:29:485 - ^

[Insane]

00:51:012 (4) - 左移一格 下移一格 下移了一格
00:51:699 (7) - ^ ^
01:13:913 - 多余的绿线 修复了volume transition

很好的insane~

[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]

00:29:330 (2) - Unsnapped circle 我相信这些是1/6拍
00:29:406 (3) - ^
00:30:017 (2) - ^
00:30:093 (3) - ^
00:30:246 (5) - ^
00:30:322 (6) - ^

Good luck!
谢谢mod~~
Leorda
Hello there

[Easy]
00:57:424 (2) - Add 1 repeating slider?


[Normal]
* AR +1?

01:24:447 (2) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at head and tail slider), it's annoying
01:24:905 (3) - ^
01:25:363 (4) - ^
01:26:508 (2) - Add clap at tail slider
01:28:569 (7) - Add clap at head slider


[Insane]
* AR -1?

01:07:157 (11) - New combo for 0,5x slider
01:13:913 (9) - Remove 1 repeating slider so players can click the next notes with perfect timed
01:34:524 (6) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar


[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]
* This diff has 6 unsnapped notes. You better snap it


Once you done, forum PM me
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

[Easy]
00:57:424 (2) - Add 1 repeating slider? alrite, though im not sure if two repeats is suitable for easy


[Normal]
* AR +1? kk

01:24:447 (2) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at head and tail slider), it's annoying didnt even catch that lol, fixed
01:24:905 (3) - ^ ^
01:25:363 (4) - ^ ^
01:26:508 (2) - Add clap at tail slider done
01:28:569 (7) - Add clap at head slider done


[Insane]
* AR -1? I think ar8 is good for this map

01:07:157 (11) - New combo for 0,5x slider hmm i dont have a 0.5x slider here...and the combo is trying to match with video color so im keeping this unchanged
01:13:913 (9) - Remove 1 repeating slider so players can click the next notes with perfect timed fixed (yeah i never got a 300 here while testing)
01:34:524 (6) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar moved down a bit


[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]
* This diff has 6 unsnapped notes. You better snap it wow now i understand why so many people pointed out this issue...its not snapped on the 1/6 ticks orz...k fixed


Once you done, forum PM me
thanks for mod~~ will pm u now ^_^
Yume_old_old
:oops:

-Sekai- wrote:

the right title is:

Artist: yanaginagi

Title: Vidro Moyou (TV Size)

it's not Short Ver. >.<
plz do what Sekai Said > < Short Ver is not allowed now, because of new rule~
Moonlight

ztrot wrote:

To all MAT and BAT start popping bubbles that use any variant of Short Full Cut Ver unless it is in the title of the song. Amended

There is no need to use any of these types unless they are part of the real song's title
you know what:
http://www.geneonuniversal.jp/rondorobe ... 00000.html
http://www.discas.net/netdvd/cd/goodsDe ... 1673855739

it explicit stated short Ver. if you have a music player that recognize the mp3 id3 tags, you will see the original title(not the file title).


if you need the download to verify, pm me ;) .
Yu-Izanagi-12
Hi from my queue
this is going to be short and sweet because i didn't find much wrong with the map

Moonlight's Hard
HP+1
OD+1

Insane
CS+1
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

Yu-Izanagi-12 wrote:

Hi from my queue
this is going to be short and sweet because i didn't find much wrong with the map

Moonlight's Hard
HP+1 alrite
OD+1 that makes it same with insane, which is a bit hard

Insane
CS+1 i personally dont like small circles, plus the map has enough jumps so keeping it the same
thanks for the mod~~
Amyrina_old
Hello.
[Easy]
00:01:547 (1) - nice idea!
00:05:211 (2) - XD
00:57:424 (2) - Turn have much ?
01:28:569 (4) - Beginning spot is late?
->01:28:340 (4) - and turn ramp up it.
AR+1?

[Normal]
AR+1?
01:34:753 (5) -
->01:34:524 (5) - and turn ramp up it?

I think the difficulty of good balance and the other.
Have fun playing in a unique map.
good luck XD
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

Amyrina wrote:

Hello.
[Easy]
00:01:547 (1) - nice idea! ty
00:05:211 (2) - XD ~~
00:57:424 (2) - Turn have much ? reduced by 1
01:28:569 (4) - Beginning spot is late? made two sliders instead to cover the beat ahead
->01:28:340 (4) - and turn ramp up it. what is ramp?
AR+1? aite

[Normal]
AR+1? i think the ar is ok on this one
01:34:753 (5) -
->01:34:524 (5) - and turn ramp up it? i dunno what ramp is orz

I think the difficulty of good balance and the other.
Have fun playing in a unique map.
good luck XD
thanks for the mod and comments~~
Leorda
Did discuss with jonathanlfj about the title and it's fine

Bubbled
Garven
[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best
Considering all of your slider art, I kind of wish you used a more space-centric background image.

[Easy]
00:43:684 (1) - The normal sliderslide sounds awful here.
00:59:256 (4,5) - Please not in an Easy
01:12:997 (1) - Why so quiet?
01:28:340 (4,5) - Please not in an Easy
01:31:317 (3,4) - Going from this to 01:33:150 (1,2) - can be pretty confusing. I really recommend you change 01:33:150 (1,2) - to something more simplistic.

[Normal]
00:43:684 (1) - The normal sliderslide sounds awful here.

[Hard]
00:36:585 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not really understanding these decrescendos.
00:40:020 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:44:142 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:12:997 (1,2,3) - ^
etc. I appreciate the effort, but in a modern song like this, there are no dynamic changes. having your hitsounds using such a technique doesn't make much sense when run in parallel with the song.

[Oni]
01:12:997 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Using a drumroll here makes more sense. Have it extend to 01:13:913 - , start the spinner at 01:14:027 - and end at 01:14:714 - then add a D at 01:14:829 - to start the next phrase
01:43:798 (1) - delete
01:43:913 (1) - D or K
01:44:142 (2) - delete

[Insane]
00:43:684 (1,2) - The normal sliderslide sounds awful here.

Nice set!
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

Garven wrote:

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best alrite changed to 2...but the sliders look scary now -_-
Considering all of your slider art, I kind of wish you used a more space-centric background image. tried finding a more "space-centric" bg (more characters lol), if its not good then i will try to find another one

[Easy]
00:43:684 (1) - The normal sliderslide sounds awful here. fixed with a new normal-slidertick.wav
00:59:256 (4,5) - Please not in an Easy changed to one repeat slider
01:12:997 (1) - Why so quiet? its for the feel (the sudden disappearance of heavy drums), but yeah increased to 40% volume
01:28:340 (4,5) - Please not in an Easy changed to one repeat slider
01:31:317 (3,4) - Going from this to 01:33:150 (1,2) - can be pretty confusing. I really recommend you change 01:33:150 (1,2) - to something more simplistic. remapped this part (with some change in positioning later), please see if it is appropriate

[Normal]
00:43:684 (1) - The normal sliderslide sounds awful here. fixed with new wav

[Hard]
will let moonlight fix this
00:36:585 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not really understanding these decrescendos.
00:40:020 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:44:142 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:12:997 (1,2,3) - ^
etc. I appreciate the effort, but in a modern song like this, there are no dynamic changes. having your hitsounds using such a technique doesn't make much sense when run in parallel with the song.

[Oni]
will let nyquill fix this
01:12:997 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Using a drumroll here makes more sense. Have it extend to 01:13:913 - , start the spinner at 01:14:027 - and end at 01:14:714 - then add a D at 01:14:829 - to start the next phrase
01:43:798 (1) - delete
01:43:913 (1) - D or K
01:44:142 (2) - delete

[Insane]
00:43:684 (1,2) - The normal sliderslide sounds awful here. fixed with new wav

Nice set!
Thank you for the mod! Will update as soon as all difficulties are fixed ^_^
Moonlight

Garven wrote:

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best
Considering all of your slider art, I kind of wish you used a more space-centric background image.


[Hard]
00:36:585 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not really understanding these decrescendos.
00:40:020 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:44:142 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:12:997 (1,2,3) - ^
etc. I appreciate the effort, but in a modern song like this, there are no dynamic changes. having your hitsounds using such a technique doesn't make much sense when run in parallel with the song.
The decrescendos used to emulate the echo effect. You are right, there is no dynamic changes, but I find that echo effect fits well as it feels like you are singing the song, where your breath releases and inhales(slowly gets quieter and louder). Also, since this is such a relaxing song, I thought a little up and down in the sound effect loudness is interesting. I really cannot understand what do you mean by "doesn't make much sense when run in parallel with the song", since the mood of the music feels lonely and quiet, and the background video seems like the heroine is thinking, or was recalling her memories. This also simulate that memory have up moments and down moments and gently comes and goes from heroine's mind. Well, I found it fit really well in the song. maybe it would be nice you could elaborate why it doesn't. I'm not mapping because it is a technique, in fact I didn't even know this is a technique. For me, it feels that it is the right thing to do. :(

as of 01:12:997, I feel like the guitar sound overtakes the sound effect is a good thing to do. I don't play guitar myself, but when I play this part in game, it gives me the sensation I'm playing that note on the guitar(like in some concert videos), not just clicking that slider. ;)

I imagine stuff too much. If these are not valid reasons, I give permission to Jonathan to change my diff in order to get it ranked.

will change the tick rate.
http://puu.sh/RRlA
Nyquill

Garven wrote:

[Oni]
01:44:142 (2) - delete there is a cymbal that starts here, not at a half beat before.
did everything else

http://puu.sh/RnzQ
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
All done and updated~~~
Garven
[General]
Hm, for the space-centric theme, you might get a better idea of what I'm talking about by taking a look at the other two ranked versions of this song.
>>The normal sliderslide sounds awful here. fixed with a new normal-slidertick.wav
I guess you meant sliderslide. q:

[Taiko]
Actually, when I said to "use a drumroll" I had meant in a slider, sorry. It just has a better feeling as a slider roll than the individual notes to me. It's fine if you don't change it, but I wanted to clarify this.
And actually at 01:44:142 - if you listen, that's just the cymbal from 01:43:913 - lingering. That's why I suggested to delete it.

Moonlight: That's fine. It's just that some people do things like this and don't really have any reasoning behind it, hehe.
Nyquill
http://puu.sh/UWlK

hurrrrr did that
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
All updated ^_^
Garven
[Taiko]
01:12:997 (2) - This slider end isn't snapped right.
Nyquill
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
Sorry i was out for the day...
all updated again
Garven
Open up the taiko .osu

Go to this line:

364,352,72997,2,0,B|276:364|256:292|256:292|236:364|136:348,1,280

Change the 280 at the end to 281

Save.

Slider should look like this. Test this first, please.



Upload.

Let me know.

(why did you change the mp3?)
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

Garven wrote:

Open up the taiko .osu

Go to this line:

364,352,72997,2,0,B|276:364|256:292|256:292|236:364|136:348,1,280

Change the 280 at the end to 281

Save.

Slider should look like this. Test this first, please. sorry i didnt really notice it because it looked fine in the editor...im guessing its for that extra tick before the spinner? dont know how taiko maps work lol



Upload.

Let me know.

(why did you change the mp3?) i changed the name of it cause the old name didnt make sense (which is why many people told me to use TV Size when its not) sorry for the confusion ;)
Updated...i will let you know if i can catch you online ^_^
Garven
Alright: let's do this!

Note to next modder: Yes, there's a slider with an unsnapped end in the taiko. It's meant to be there to fix the tick.
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
Thank you for the rebubble~~
Yuukari-Banteki
First off, we aren't labeling versions anymore, so remove (Short Ver.) from the song title please.

[Easy]
00:57:424 (2) - it might be better to put the clap on the last hit of this to match the drum in the music

[Normal]
00:01:547 (1) - tbh I think this would look better without the last turn at the end, something more like this: http://puu.sh/14rH1
00:08:875 (1) - ^
00:18:493 - feels like there should be a note here
00:22:157 - ^
00:40:936 - ^

[Moonlight]
looks good

[Taiko]
00:06:356 (1,1,2,1) - this rhythm doesn't really fit the music very well at this point in the music
00:29:256 (1,2,3,4) - this 1/6 rhythm is unnecessary and out of place
00:29:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:00:859 - add a note?

[Insane]
I love how you have the combo colors synced to the background :3
01:42:310 (1,2) - this is...not as effective at demonstrating the star shape. Maybe if you broke it into 3 sliders instead of 2 somehow.

Have a nice day and good luck!
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

First off, we aren't labeling versions anymore, so remove (Short Ver.) from the song title please. im guessing this is the new rule...the original name did say short size though. I will remove it (trying not to get duplicate orz)

[Easy]
00:57:424 (2) - it might be better to put the clap on the last hit of this to match the drum in the music acctually i believe the drum is hit at 00:57:653 which is where i put the clap...there seems to be a few places where the drum appears on a red tick

[Normal]
00:01:547 (1) - tbh I think this would look better without the last turn at the end, something more like this: http://puu.sh/14rH1 done
00:08:875 (1) - ^ done
00:18:493 - feels like there should be a note here im trying to follow the piano here, which does not appear in this section, a note would sound awkward imo
00:22:157 - ^ same as above
00:40:936 - ^ done

[Insane]
I love how you have the combo colors synced to the background :3 thanks~~
01:42:310 (1,2) - this is...not as effective at demonstrating the star shape. Maybe if you broke it into 3 sliders instead of 2 somehow. i tweaked it around a bit...3 sliders do not seem to work properly so i added a note at 01:43:226 and pumped up the slider velocity so the 2 slider heads/tails act like notes. If you select all you will see a complete star~~

Have a nice day and good luck!
Thank you for the mod~~ will update when nyquill is done his taiko
Breeze
[General]

  1. Shouldn't the title be "yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (TV size)"? Why you use "Short Ver."?
[Timing]

  1. I've got a offset : 1541 (-6), if you agree with this, please change to this and resnap all notes, timing sections, do this after check my mod since my mod is based on your timing
[All difficulties]

  1. 01:47:692 - idk why you end all spinners here, ends it at 01:47:806 or other white tick sounds better imo :/
[Easy]

  1. 01:27:424 (3) - Remove clap on the slider head, add clap to 01:27:195 (2) slider end seems better, you can try use normal hitsound for 01:27:424 (3) slider head
[Insane]

  1. 01:03:608 (8) - Remove clap and use normal hitsound for this note, add clap to 01:03:379 (7), that sounds nice
[Taiko]

  1. 01:12:997 (2) - This slider end isn't snapped right
Stefan
The begin sounds a bit different to the already ranked ones.
Garven

Garven wrote:

Alright: let's do this!

Note to next modder: Yes, there's a slider with an unsnapped end in the taiko. It's meant to be there to fix the tick.
@Breeze q:
Breeze
idk taiko much, don't blame me ><
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
omg so many posts @_@ i will update when i get home from school tonight

Breeze wrote:

[General]

  1. Shouldn't the title be "yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (TV size)"? Why you use "Short Ver."?
about the title, the original title of this version can be found here http://www.geneonuniversal.jp/rondorobe ... 00000.html
since saturos-fangirl told me to remove the (Short Ver.) due to the recent change in naming criteria, i will wait for some further feedback on that



[Timing]

  1. I've got a offset : 1541 (-6), if you agree with this, please change to this and resnap all notes, timing sections, do this after check my mod since my mod is based on your timing
after talking to a few ppl, your timing seems better so changed ^_^

[All difficulties]

  1. 01:47:692 - idk why you end all spinners here, ends it at 01:47:806 or other white tick sounds better imo :/
fixed all

[Easy]

  1. 01:27:424 (3) - Remove clap on the slider head, add clap to 01:27:195 (2) slider end seems better, you can try use normal hitsound for 01:27:424 (3) slider head
done

[Insane]

  1. 01:03:608 (8) - Remove clap and use normal hitsound for this note, add clap to 01:03:379 (7), that sounds nice
done...though i feel that the first clap sound awkward, the normal hitsound seems cool

[Taiko]

  1. 01:12:997 (2) - This slider end isn't snapped right
as Garven said lol
Will update as soon as i get hold of the taiko~
Nyquill

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Taiko]
00:06:356 (1,1,2,1) - this rhythm doesn't really fit the music very well at this point in the music I'd have to agree, but the circumstances pretty much decree that some form of deviation is required from the previous measures so that it doesn't become d kkd k d kkd k d all the way through the song...
00:29:256 (1,2,3,4) - this 1/6 rhythm is unnecessary and out of place How does everyone feel about me changing these to 1/8s? I mean, the music actually do suggest 1/8s pretty solidly here. I do feel 1/4s are really out of place.
00:29:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:00:859 - add a note? yesssssss totally messed up on this one.
!
http://puu.sh/14SW8

Can I get some opinions about the second and third points SFG stated? I gave my thought on it in my reply.
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
all updated~~bubble popped o_O

P.S. 100th post ftw
Breeze
This title wouldn't hurt though
Rebubbled
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
yayy thanks breeze~~

EDIT: self pop to fix spinner issue on hard and timing correction on taiko based on Garven's reminder ^_^
EDIT2: can you do a redownload to check if all the files are uploaded correctly? my BSS seems to have glitched when i was doing a full submit...
Breeze
okay, then. The unsnapped slider end in taiko still looked weird :/ Well, idk taiko much, really
let's rebubble it
Garven
Yar
ririco
gratz~
Darksonic
Gratz on first ranked!
Flask
gratz~
Kawayi Rika
Finally Ranked Gratz ><
YTYuyu
Well~ congratz on your 1st ranked map ;). you must've worked really hard for this rank.
Kanari
Congrats ~ >w<
Buccakazu
:)
vizzy
Congrats! Amazing song.
Makar
grats :3
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
omg just got home from a school conference and sees this ranked

great thanks to all who modded and helped with this map, i really appreciate it ^_^

/runs to submit more maps lol

EDIT: and thank those who appreciate this map too :)
Avner
omg dat slider <3
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