Envi wrote:

coming here from my mod queue
k let see

General
no major error stuff, everything is fine i guess :3

Easy
01:18:783 (3) - i think it was better if you make this slider started at 01:18:783 (3) - and then make it end at 01:18:670 (3) - , the current timing seems a bit complicated for the totally newbie to follow, make it same as the slider position on 02:29:579 (1,2,3) - part (i know you're trying to make it match with the vocal/song here, just make it a consideration anyways ><)
01:16:624 (1) - and if you like, i would prefer to place it from 01:16:851 (1) - instead of the original, since this is easy diff, i guess make it match with the beats instead of the vocal here would be better.

Normal
Circle Size 3 here?
seems fine here and there, just one notes that i think it seems not place properly
03:44:124 (4) - i think you're make this a bit right so it can form a triangle pattern between 03:43:215 (3,4,1) - , but if you really intended for it, i think the (4) notes doean't seems on the right enough, it rather seems like it ws not straight to up from the 03:43:215 (3) - slider, i suggest to move that notes more right or just make it linear to up with the previous notes like these:

SPOILER

Hard
00:08:215 (3,4,5) - it seems that the triangle spacing/position between this 3 notes are a bit too near each other, why not make it same as 00:07:761 (1,2,3) - position? I think it was nicer that way
00:12:079 (4,5) - same here, i think make the backjump from (4) to (5) after smooth tapping on 00:11:397 (1,2,3,4) doesn't really fit/enjoyable while playing, why not move the (5) left a bit? At least to make it flow from (3) into (5)
00:13:442 (2,3,4,5) - make the pattern here into square rather than diamond shape? it would be look like this:

SPOILER

01:18:897 - add note here, i think feels like there was something missing while i try it first time orz
01:25:715 (6) - remove notes here? since there isn't any notes on the same beats like 01:22:079 - and 01:23:897 -

Insane - Oh, I made only Kiai-time stream DS1,3!
Seems fine too, just
01:21:397 (3,4,5,6,7) - why you suddenly make the stream spacing here with DS 1,2? I think it was considerable since it was on the chorus/kiai part, but then, i'm not see that you make the same stream spacing on the last chorus here 03:28:669 (1,2,3,4,5), if you intend to make the spaced stream on the kiai part, at least make it the same for all part.
To make it consistent, i think just use the same distance spacing and the lower one like 0,8 or 0,9 for all stream pattern spacing will be good, since people tend to hate the spaced/jumping streams (including me, i think this is just my though too orz)

well, i think that's all i can got for now, hope it can help
good luck

• 
  オフセット+4。
  
  Letterboxを有効にしてください。

• 
  1番のメロディにはfinishがたくさんあるのに2番の方にはないのは少し不自然です。

1. 00:21:624 (3) - 終端にfinish。
2. 01:05:033 (3) - finishをつけるなら始端ではなく終端。
3. 02:03:215 (4) - ^
4. 03:37:760 (1) - このfinishは合わないです。

• 
  InsaneとHardがサークルサイズ4でNormalが5ですか？こちらも4にしましょう。

1. 00:21:851 (6) - 終端にfinish。
2. 01:18:897 (1) - clap削除。
3. 01:34:579 (2) - 終端にfinish。
4. 01:51:397 (3) - ここにfinishを使うなら他の難易度でも同様に使いましょう。もしくはこちらを削除で。
5. 01:54:124 (2,3) - できたら重ねない方が良いです。
6. 02:09:579 (3,4) - スペーシングが狭すぎます。0.5xではなく1.0xで置いてください。
7. 02:49:124 (5) - 終端にfinish。
8. 03:26:396 (3) - ^
9. 03:34:124 (1) - whistleではなくfinish。
10. 03:40:942 (4) - 終端にfinish。

1. 00:21:851 (3) - 終端にfinish。
2. 01:16:397 (7) - 音楽に合っていません。
   
3. 01:34:579 (6) - 終端にfinish。
4. 01:49:579 (1) - Insaneと同様にfinishではなくwhistleを。
5. 02:49:124 (5) - ^
6. 03:40:942 (6) - ^

1. 00:49:579 (1,2,3) - 確かに音楽には沿っているのですが、少しこのパターンに違和感があります。この音に沿うなら00:49:920にもノートが欲しいです。そうなるとパターンを変える必要も出てきますが・・・。個人的には下のような感じの方が好みです。
   
2. 01:34:579 (7) - 終端にfinish。
3. 02:03:215 (1,2,3,4) - (1,2,3)にはclapをつけて(4)にはwhistleの代わりにfinishを使うのはどうでしょう。
4. 02:10:488 (1,2,3,4) - ここは4連打じゃないと思います。別に違和感があるわけではないのでこのままでも構いません。
   
5. 02:46:851 (5) - ここには音楽がないので削除してしまって良いと思います。
6. 02:49:124 (3) - 終端にfinish。
7. 03:25:487 (3) - 静かなパートなのでclap音が少し浮いています。消しちゃいましょう。
8. 03:34:124 (1) - ここの始端はwhistleではなくfinish。
9. 03:40:942 (6) - 終端にfinish。

Suzully wrote:

From my modding queue.

[General]

• - All fixed
  オフセット+4。
  
  Letterboxを有効にしてください。

[Easy]

• - All fixed
  1番のメロディにはfinishがたくさんあるのに2番の方にはないのは少し不自然です。

1. 00:21:624 (3) - 終端にfinish。
2. 01:05:033 (3) - finishをつけるなら始端ではなく終端。
3. 02:03:215 (4) - ^
4. 03:37:760 (1) - このfinishは合わないです。

[Normal]

• - All fixed
  InsaneとHardがサークルサイズ4でNormalが5ですか？こちらも4にしましょう。

1. 00:21:851 (6) - 終端にfinish。
2. 01:18:897 (1) - clap削除。
3. 01:34:579 (2) - 終端にfinish。
4. 01:51:397 (3) - ここにfinishを使うなら他の難易度でも同様に使いましょう。もしくはこちらを削除で。
5. 01:54:124 (2,3) - できたら重ねない方が良いです。
6. 02:09:579 (3,4) - スペーシングが狭すぎます。0.5xではなく1.0xで置いてください。
7. 02:49:124 (5) - 終端にfinish。
8. 03:26:396 (3) - ^
9. 03:34:124 (1) - whistleではなくfinish。
10. 03:40:942 (4) - 終端にfinish。

[Hard]

• - All fixed

1. 00:21:851 (3) - 終端にfinish。
2. 01:16:397 (7) - 音楽に合っていません。
   
3. 01:34:579 (6) - 終端にfinish。
4. 01:49:579 (1) - Insaneと同様にfinishではなくwhistleを。
5. 02:49:124 (5) - ^
6. 03:40:942 (6) - ^

[Insane]

• - All fixed

1. 00:49:579 (1,2,3) - 確かに音楽には沿っているのですが、少しこのパターンに違和感があります。この音に沿うなら00:49:920にもノートが欲しいです。そうなるとパターンを変える必要も出てきますが・・・。個人的には下のような感じの方が好みです。
   
2. 01:34:579 (7) - 終端にfinish。
3. 02:03:215 (1,2,3,4) - (1,2,3)にはclapをつけて(4)にはwhistleの代わりにfinishを使うのはどうでしょう。
4. 02:10:488 (1,2,3,4) - ここは4連打じゃないと思います。別に違和感があるわけではないのでこのままでも構いません。
   
5. 02:46:851 (5) - ここには音楽がないので削除してしまって良いと思います。
6. 02:49:124 (3) - 終端にfinish。
7. 03:25:487 (3) - 静かなパートなのでclap音が少し浮いています。消しちゃいましょう。
8. 03:34:124 (1) - ここの始端はwhistleではなくfinish。
9. 03:40:942 (6) - 終端にfinish。

難易度間でfinishの位置が統一されていないのですが、全て指摘するのはさすがに手間なので、もしできたら修正してください。
- 改めて見てみたらfinish音の付け方ばらばらでしたね・・・　ほぼ統一できる場所は統一しました。
修正が終わったら呼んでください。

Suzully wrote:

おっと、オフセットを変えてから緑線がスナップされていません。
二つ目の赤線もそうですね。
全部オフセットに揃えてスナップしなおしてください。

Suzully wrote:

Bubbled!

ikari_kyon wrote:

when you make the last submit for ranking please add "Nexus" tag (the single where this song is included) and "kz livetune" the producer of this cute girls >w<

Suzully wrote:

Rebubbled.

1. 00:57:764 (4) - Use default soft clap to reverse point and the end of this slider sounds nice imo (use both default clap to all this slider is nice too), and volume 40% would be better
2. 01:12:310 (5) - I'm thinking of whether you are miss put whistle here, it suppose to be a clap?
3. 01:26:855 (5) - Wee, seems it's not a miss, I'll suggest you use clap instead of whistle since it sounds better
4. 01:34:128 (2) - Slider end, clap here sounds bad, because music here is quiet, so I'd suggest you use no hitsound for this point and reduce volume to 30%, back to 60% when 01:34:583, and you can add a clap to 01:34:583 (3), both default or custom one sounds fine
5. 01:51:401 (3) - Add finish, remove whistle or not is depends on you
6. 01:55:946 (3,4,1) - It's not consistence to 00:57:764 (4) :/ Well, it's not asked though
7. 02:45:946 (3,4) - Same case as to 01:34:128 (2)

1. 00:50:492 (4) - All point, default clap
2. 00:57:764 (5) - ^
3. 01:05:037 (4) - ^
4. 01:13:219 (1,2,5) - Add finish sounds nice, and maybe add a note at 01:14:810 with finish sound, yay
5. 01:16:855 (1) - Start at 01:16:628 with finish, remove whistle or not are both fine, and end at 01:17:310
6. 01:33:219 (5) - Add clap all point of this slider would be nice
7. 01:51:401 (3) - Finish
8. 01:55:946 (5) - Same to 00:50:492 (4)
9. 02:03:219 (4) - ^
10. 02:31:855 (1) - No clap sounds better imo
11. 02:45:946 (3) - All clap

1. Nothing much to say, still, just some hitsound suggestions, like add clap to those 3/4 beat notes or so, add them if you like

1. 00:49:924 (2,3) - This looked weird, I think here should be 1/2 beat, so I mean put (2) on 00:49:810 red tick
2. yay, and those 3/4 beat notes add clap suggestions

Breeze wrote:

Hi sorry for delay

[Easy]

1. 00:57:764 (4) - Use default soft clap to reverse point and the end of this slider sounds nice imo (use both default clap to all this slider is nice too), and volume 40% would be better - OK, add clap all point, and volume 40%
2. 01:12:310 (5) - I'm thinking of whether you are miss put whistle here, it suppose to be a clap? - fixed
3. 01:26:855 (5) - Wee, seems it's not a miss, I'll suggest you use clap instead of whistle since it sounds better - fixed
4. 01:34:128 (2) - Slider end, clap here sounds bad, because music here is quiet, so I'd suggest you use no hitsound for this point and reduce volume to 30%, back to 60% when 01:34:583, and you can add a clap to 01:34:583 (3), both default or custom one sounds fine - OK, 01:34:583 (3) add clap and,slider end clap is delete.
5. 01:51:401 (3) - Add finish, remove whistle or not is depends on you - fixed
6. 01:55:946 (3,4,1) - It's not consistence to 00:57:764 (4) :/ Well, it's not asked though - same 00:57:764 (4), fixed
7. 02:45:946 (3,4) - Same case as to 01:34:128 (2) - fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:50:492 (4) - All point, default clap - OK, fixed
2. 00:57:764 (5) - ^ - ^
3. 01:05:037 (4) - ^ - ^
4. 01:13:219 (1,2,5) - Add finish sounds nice, and maybe add a note at 01:14:810 with finish sound, yay - OK, fixed
5. 01:16:855 (1) - Start at 01:16:628 with finish, remove whistle or not are both fine, and end at 01:17:310 - fixed
6. 01:33:219 (5) - Add clap all point of this slider would be nice - fixed
7. 01:51:401 (3) - Finish - fixed
8. 01:55:946 (5) - Same to 00:50:492 (4) - fixed
9. 02:03:219 (4) - ^ - ^
10. 02:31:855 (1) - No clap sounds better imo - fixed
11. 02:45:946 (3) - All clap - fixed

[Hard]

1. Nothing much to say, still, just some hitsound suggestions, like add clap to those 3/4 beat notes or so, add them if you like - I added clap to a part.

[Insane]

1. 00:49:924 (2,3) - This looked weird, I think here should be 1/2 beat, so I mean put (2) on 00:49:810 red tick
2. yay, and those 3/4 beat notes add clap suggestions - OK, fixed

Breeze wrote:

OK, rebubbled

1. 01:18:219 (2) - Just nazi though, move it below by some grids. It will look more beautiful.

1. 00:20:492 (4) - Refer to 01:33:219 (5). It's better to add claps.
2. 00:50:492 (4) - Too loud...as Breeze said, you should turn the volume down to 40% here.
3. 00:57:764 (5) - ^
4. 01:05:037 (4) - ^
5. 01:14:810 (4) - Add finish too.
6. 01:55:946 (5) - Same as 00:50:492 (4).
7. 02:03:219 (4) - ^
8. 02:10:492 (4) - Why no clap here?
9. 02:25:946 (1,2,3,4) - Make these notes consistent with ones before first KIAI. This means, adding finishes.
10. 02:47:310 (2) - Add a finish to the end.
11. 03:04:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 02:25:946 (1,2,3,4).
12. 03:24:582 (4) - Clap.
13. 03:48:219 (1) - Add a finish to the end.

1. 01:05:946 (1) - Seems you forgot to add a clap.
2. 01:09:128 (8) - ^
3. 01:26:855 (5) - ^
4. 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4) - Consider to add claps to all of these notes to follow the strong sound in the back.
5. 02:09:583 (1) - Using 0.50xSV gets the player confused a bit. 0.75x is enough and making good effect on playing in my opinion.
6. 02:45:946 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4).
7. 02:49:128 (5) - Finiiiiiish \:D/
8. 03:10:946 (5) - ^
9. 03:39:582 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4).
10. 03:40:946 (6) - Add a finish to the end.
11. 03:48:673 (1) - ^ to the top.

1. 00:20:492 (1,2,3,4) - Consider to add claps to all of these notes to follow the strong sound in the back.
2. 01:13:901 (3) - Add a finish to the top of slider to follow a cymbal?
3. 01:14:810 (5) - ^ if you fixed above, add to this too.
4. 01:15:719 (7) - ^
5. 01:16:628 (10) - As different point from above, add a finish. It fits the music.
   ** if you fixed stuff above, please fix same stuff after them too. **
   ** 02:25:946 to 02:29:355, and, 03:04:128 to 03:07:537 **
   ** And please fix ones on other diffs as well. **
6. 01:16:855 (1,2,3,4,5) - To add more whistles should be better because of piano sound. Hum, add to (4)?
7. 01:18:446 (8,9) - Since there is no sound in the back at 01:18:674, a whistle should be added to (8), not (9).
8. 01:20:037 (9) - Clap? Or finish? Be consistent with 02:32:764 (5).
9. 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4) - Same reason as 00:20:492 (1,2,3,4), add claps.
10. 02:17:765 (1,2,3) - Not fit the music. Try to change a pattern like below.
    
11. 02:45:946 (1,2,3,4) - As you know.
12. 02:47:310 (3) - Add finish to the end.
13. 03:12:310 (1) - Replace whistle with finish.
14. 03:39:582 (1,2,3,4) - Yes.
15. 03:48:673 (1) - Replace whistle with finish.
16. 03:54:128 (1,2) - Since there is a cymbal sound in the back, add finish to the top of both slider?

Suzully wrote:

前回は日本語で書きましたが、僕らは英語で書かないといけないとのことなので今回は英語で書きます。
もしわからない部分がありましたら聞いてください。

[Easy]

1. 01:18:219 (2) - Just nazi though, move it below by some grids. It will look more beautiful.

[Normal]

1. 00:20:492 (4) - Refer to 01:33:219 (5). It's better to add claps.
2. 00:50:492 (4) - Too loud...as Breeze said, you should turn the volume down to 40% here.
3. 00:57:764 (5) - ^
4. 01:05:037 (4) - ^
5. 01:14:810 (4) - Add finish too.
6. 01:55:946 (5) - Same as 00:50:492 (4).
7. 02:03:219 (4) - ^
8. 02:10:492 (4) - Why no clap here?
9. 02:25:946 (1,2,3,4) - Make these notes consistent with ones before first KIAI. This means, adding finishes.
10. 02:47:310 (2) - Add a finish to the end.
11. 03:04:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 02:25:946 (1,2,3,4).
12. 03:24:582 (4) - Clap.
13. 03:48:219 (1) - Add a finish to the end.

[Hard]

1. 01:05:946 (1) - Seems you forgot to add a clap.
2. 01:09:128 (8) - ^
3. 01:26:855 (5) - ^
4. 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4) - Consider to add claps to all of these notes to follow the strong sound in the back.
5. 02:09:583 (1) - Using 0.50xSV gets the player confused a bit. 0.75x is enough and making good effect on playing in my opinion.
6. 02:45:946 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4).
7. 02:49:128 (5) - Finiiiiiish \:D/
8. 03:10:946 (5) - ^
9. 03:39:582 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4).
10. 03:40:946 (6) - Add a finish to the end.
11. 03:48:673 (1) - ^ to the top.

[Insane]

1. 00:20:492 (1,2,3,4) - Consider to add claps to all of these notes to follow the strong sound in the back.
2. 01:13:901 (3) - Add a finish to the top of slider to follow a cymbal?
3. 01:14:810 (5) - ^ if you fixed above, add to this too.
4. 01:15:719 (7) - ^
5. 01:16:628 (10) - As different point from above, add a finish. It fits the music.
   ** if you fixed stuff above, please fix same stuff after them too. **
   ** 02:25:946 to 02:29:355, and, 03:04:128 to 03:07:537 **
   ** And please fix ones on other diffs as well. **
6. 01:16:855 (1,2,3,4,5) - To add more whistles should be better because of piano sound. Hum, add to (4)?
7. 01:18:446 (8,9) - Since there is no sound in the back at 01:18:674, a whistle should be added to (8), not (9).
8. 01:20:037 (9) - Clap? Or finish? Be consistent with 02:32:764 (5).
9. 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4) - Same reason as 00:20:492 (1,2,3,4), add claps.
10. 02:17:765 (1,2,3) - Not fit the music. Try to change a pattern like below.
    
11. 02:45:946 (1,2,3,4) - As you know.
12. 02:47:310 (3) - Add finish to the end.
13. 03:12:310 (1) - Replace whistle with finish.
14. 03:39:582 (1,2,3,4) - Yes.
15. 03:48:673 (1) - Replace whistle with finish.
16. 03:54:128 (1,2) - Since there is a cymbal sound in the back, add finish to the top of both slider?

修正が終わったら呼んでください。

Suzully wrote:

合ってます。

あといくつか修正し忘れている点と勘違いされている点があるので
[Insane]
01:16:628 (10) - finish
02:25:946 - ここからのfinish。1サビ前のパートと同様に。
03:04:128 - 同じく。

[Hard]
01:05:946 (1) - clapは終端です。

[Normal]
02:03:219 (4) - 40%
02:24:583 (4) - 終端にclap
02:26:628 (2,6) - finish
03:04:810 (2,6) - ^

Suzully wrote:

Made many fixes but almost were related with the hitsound so no big effect on the map. It's fine for me to rank this directly.
Ranked!

Quilt wrote:

congratulations

Sonez wrote:

Grats

Akemi_Homura wrote:

Congratz~~! :3

alacat wrote:

1st ranked　おめでとうございます！

LunarSakuya wrote:

Quilt wrote:

congratulations