Suzully wrote:

Rebubbled.

1. 00:57:764 (4) - Use default soft clap to reverse point and the end of this slider sounds nice imo (use both default clap to all this slider is nice too), and volume 40% would be better
2. 01:12:310 (5) - I'm thinking of whether you are miss put whistle here, it suppose to be a clap?
3. 01:26:855 (5) - Wee, seems it's not a miss, I'll suggest you use clap instead of whistle since it sounds better
4. 01:34:128 (2) - Slider end, clap here sounds bad, because music here is quiet, so I'd suggest you use no hitsound for this point and reduce volume to 30%, back to 60% when 01:34:583, and you can add a clap to 01:34:583 (3), both default or custom one sounds fine
5. 01:51:401 (3) - Add finish, remove whistle or not is depends on you
6. 01:55:946 (3,4,1) - It's not consistence to 00:57:764 (4) :/ Well, it's not asked though
7. 02:45:946 (3,4) - Same case as to 01:34:128 (2)

1. 00:50:492 (4) - All point, default clap
2. 00:57:764 (5) - ^
3. 01:05:037 (4) - ^
4. 01:13:219 (1,2,5) - Add finish sounds nice, and maybe add a note at 01:14:810 with finish sound, yay
5. 01:16:855 (1) - Start at 01:16:628 with finish, remove whistle or not are both fine, and end at 01:17:310
6. 01:33:219 (5) - Add clap all point of this slider would be nice
7. 01:51:401 (3) - Finish
8. 01:55:946 (5) - Same to 00:50:492 (4)
9. 02:03:219 (4) - ^
10. 02:31:855 (1) - No clap sounds better imo
11. 02:45:946 (3) - All clap

1. Nothing much to say, still, just some hitsound suggestions, like add clap to those 3/4 beat notes or so, add them if you like

1. 00:49:924 (2,3) - This looked weird, I think here should be 1/2 beat, so I mean put (2) on 00:49:810 red tick
2. yay, and those 3/4 beat notes add clap suggestions

Breeze wrote:

Hi sorry for delay

[Easy]

1. 00:57:764 (4) - Use default soft clap to reverse point and the end of this slider sounds nice imo (use both default clap to all this slider is nice too), and volume 40% would be better - OK, add clap all point, and volume 40%
2. 01:12:310 (5) - I'm thinking of whether you are miss put whistle here, it suppose to be a clap? - fixed
3. 01:26:855 (5) - Wee, seems it's not a miss, I'll suggest you use clap instead of whistle since it sounds better - fixed
4. 01:34:128 (2) - Slider end, clap here sounds bad, because music here is quiet, so I'd suggest you use no hitsound for this point and reduce volume to 30%, back to 60% when 01:34:583, and you can add a clap to 01:34:583 (3), both default or custom one sounds fine - OK, 01:34:583 (3) add clap and,slider end clap is delete.
5. 01:51:401 (3) - Add finish, remove whistle or not is depends on you - fixed
6. 01:55:946 (3,4,1) - It's not consistence to 00:57:764 (4) :/ Well, it's not asked though - same 00:57:764 (4), fixed
7. 02:45:946 (3,4) - Same case as to 01:34:128 (2) - fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:50:492 (4) - All point, default clap - OK, fixed
2. 00:57:764 (5) - ^ - ^
3. 01:05:037 (4) - ^ - ^
4. 01:13:219 (1,2,5) - Add finish sounds nice, and maybe add a note at 01:14:810 with finish sound, yay - OK, fixed
5. 01:16:855 (1) - Start at 01:16:628 with finish, remove whistle or not are both fine, and end at 01:17:310 - fixed
6. 01:33:219 (5) - Add clap all point of this slider would be nice - fixed
7. 01:51:401 (3) - Finish - fixed
8. 01:55:946 (5) - Same to 00:50:492 (4) - fixed
9. 02:03:219 (4) - ^ - ^
10. 02:31:855 (1) - No clap sounds better imo - fixed
11. 02:45:946 (3) - All clap - fixed

[Hard]

1. Nothing much to say, still, just some hitsound suggestions, like add clap to those 3/4 beat notes or so, add them if you like - I added clap to a part.

[Insane]

1. 00:49:924 (2,3) - This looked weird, I think here should be 1/2 beat, so I mean put (2) on 00:49:810 red tick
2. yay, and those 3/4 beat notes add clap suggestions - OK, fixed

Breeze wrote:

OK, rebubbled

1. 01:18:219 (2) - Just nazi though, move it below by some grids. It will look more beautiful.

1. 00:20:492 (4) - Refer to 01:33:219 (5). It's better to add claps.
2. 00:50:492 (4) - Too loud...as Breeze said, you should turn the volume down to 40% here.
3. 00:57:764 (5) - ^
4. 01:05:037 (4) - ^
5. 01:14:810 (4) - Add finish too.
6. 01:55:946 (5) - Same as 00:50:492 (4).
7. 02:03:219 (4) - ^
8. 02:10:492 (4) - Why no clap here?
9. 02:25:946 (1,2,3,4) - Make these notes consistent with ones before first KIAI. This means, adding finishes.
10. 02:47:310 (2) - Add a finish to the end.
11. 03:04:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 02:25:946 (1,2,3,4).
12. 03:24:582 (4) - Clap.
13. 03:48:219 (1) - Add a finish to the end.

1. 01:05:946 (1) - Seems you forgot to add a clap.
2. 01:09:128 (8) - ^
3. 01:26:855 (5) - ^
4. 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4) - Consider to add claps to all of these notes to follow the strong sound in the back.
5. 02:09:583 (1) - Using 0.50xSV gets the player confused a bit. 0.75x is enough and making good effect on playing in my opinion.
6. 02:45:946 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4).
7. 02:49:128 (5) - Finiiiiiish \:D/
8. 03:10:946 (5) - ^
9. 03:39:582 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4).
10. 03:40:946 (6) - Add a finish to the end.
11. 03:48:673 (1) - ^ to the top.

1. 00:20:492 (1,2,3,4) - Consider to add claps to all of these notes to follow the strong sound in the back.
2. 01:13:901 (3) - Add a finish to the top of slider to follow a cymbal?
3. 01:14:810 (5) - ^ if you fixed above, add to this too.
4. 01:15:719 (7) - ^
5. 01:16:628 (10) - As different point from above, add a finish. It fits the music.
   ** if you fixed stuff above, please fix same stuff after them too. **
   ** 02:25:946 to 02:29:355, and, 03:04:128 to 03:07:537 **
   ** And please fix ones on other diffs as well. **
6. 01:16:855 (1,2,3,4,5) - To add more whistles should be better because of piano sound. Hum, add to (4)?
7. 01:18:446 (8,9) - Since there is no sound in the back at 01:18:674, a whistle should be added to (8), not (9).
8. 01:20:037 (9) - Clap? Or finish? Be consistent with 02:32:764 (5).
9. 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4) - Same reason as 00:20:492 (1,2,3,4), add claps.
10. 02:17:765 (1,2,3) - Not fit the music. Try to change a pattern like below.
    
11. 02:45:946 (1,2,3,4) - As you know.
12. 02:47:310 (3) - Add finish to the end.
13. 03:12:310 (1) - Replace whistle with finish.
14. 03:39:582 (1,2,3,4) - Yes.
15. 03:48:673 (1) - Replace whistle with finish.
16. 03:54:128 (1,2) - Since there is a cymbal sound in the back, add finish to the top of both slider?

Suzully wrote:

前回は日本語で書きましたが、僕らは英語で書かないといけないとのことなので今回は英語で書きます。
もしわからない部分がありましたら聞いてください。

[Easy]

1. 01:18:219 (2) - Just nazi though, move it below by some grids. It will look more beautiful.

[Normal]

1. 00:20:492 (4) - Refer to 01:33:219 (5). It's better to add claps.
2. 00:50:492 (4) - Too loud...as Breeze said, you should turn the volume down to 40% here.
3. 00:57:764 (5) - ^
4. 01:05:037 (4) - ^
5. 01:14:810 (4) - Add finish too.
6. 01:55:946 (5) - Same as 00:50:492 (4).
7. 02:03:219 (4) - ^
8. 02:10:492 (4) - Why no clap here?
9. 02:25:946 (1,2,3,4) - Make these notes consistent with ones before first KIAI. This means, adding finishes.
10. 02:47:310 (2) - Add a finish to the end.
11. 03:04:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 02:25:946 (1,2,3,4).
12. 03:24:582 (4) - Clap.
13. 03:48:219 (1) - Add a finish to the end.

[Hard]

1. 01:05:946 (1) - Seems you forgot to add a clap.
2. 01:09:128 (8) - ^
3. 01:26:855 (5) - ^
4. 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4) - Consider to add claps to all of these notes to follow the strong sound in the back.
5. 02:09:583 (1) - Using 0.50xSV gets the player confused a bit. 0.75x is enough and making good effect on playing in my opinion.
6. 02:45:946 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4).
7. 02:49:128 (5) - Finiiiiiish \:D/
8. 03:10:946 (5) - ^
9. 03:39:582 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4).
10. 03:40:946 (6) - Add a finish to the end.
11. 03:48:673 (1) - ^ to the top.

[Insane]

1. 00:20:492 (1,2,3,4) - Consider to add claps to all of these notes to follow the strong sound in the back.
2. 01:13:901 (3) - Add a finish to the top of slider to follow a cymbal?
3. 01:14:810 (5) - ^ if you fixed above, add to this too.
4. 01:15:719 (7) - ^
5. 01:16:628 (10) - As different point from above, add a finish. It fits the music.
   ** if you fixed stuff above, please fix same stuff after them too. **
   ** 02:25:946 to 02:29:355, and, 03:04:128 to 03:07:537 **
   ** And please fix ones on other diffs as well. **
6. 01:16:855 (1,2,3,4,5) - To add more whistles should be better because of piano sound. Hum, add to (4)?
7. 01:18:446 (8,9) - Since there is no sound in the back at 01:18:674, a whistle should be added to (8), not (9).
8. 01:20:037 (9) - Clap? Or finish? Be consistent with 02:32:764 (5).
9. 01:33:219 (1,2,3,4) - Same reason as 00:20:492 (1,2,3,4), add claps.
10. 02:17:765 (1,2,3) - Not fit the music. Try to change a pattern like below.
    
11. 02:45:946 (1,2,3,4) - As you know.
12. 02:47:310 (3) - Add finish to the end.
13. 03:12:310 (1) - Replace whistle with finish.
14. 03:39:582 (1,2,3,4) - Yes.
15. 03:48:673 (1) - Replace whistle with finish.
16. 03:54:128 (1,2) - Since there is a cymbal sound in the back, add finish to the top of both slider?

修正が終わったら呼んでください。

Suzully wrote:

合ってます。

あといくつか修正し忘れている点と勘違いされている点があるので
[Insane]
01:16:628 (10) - finish
02:25:946 - ここからのfinish。1サビ前のパートと同様に。
03:04:128 - 同じく。

[Hard]
01:05:946 (1) - clapは終端です。

[Normal]
02:03:219 (4) - 40%
02:24:583 (4) - 終端にclap
02:26:628 (2,6) - finish
03:04:810 (2,6) - ^

Suzully wrote:

Made many fixes but almost were related with the hitsound so no big effect on the map. It's fine for me to rank this directly.
Ranked!

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congratulations

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Grats

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Congratz~~! :3

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1st ranked　おめでとうございます！

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nice job for first rank :>

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Congrats! Great map.

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Congrats ~ >w<

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Congrats \:D/